[Projectmp]

Plz provide update

[Dinesh Raveendran]

Superb narration friend

Lot of questions comes to mind

1. Why srinu did not ask anything to Ganga
2. Did the mechanic javed do anything to the bike. it was not starting then and it was starting now.
3. He does not know the names of two, but how did he ask the inspector by their names
4. What time he was hospitalized. Who brought him. How the accident case was taken without cop interference
5. The cheating wife ? means he is going to doubt the wife that she has committed infedility and keep spying her?
6. Where is ganga relatives
7. Why ganga switched back seat and the men stopped talking thereafter.
8. Chacha is elder to javed and why is he calling him with respect.
9. Normally after commiting some r*pe, these men will kill the victims because they will expose them. Here nothing happend. Ganga is not having even any marks in her body.
10. If someone hit srinu and javed and chacha not there, it means another person involved in the incident.

[Samadhanam]

Is this adultery or thriller? Super interesting.

[Yesudoss]

Woowwww. the best part of the story is you have made the home, hospital, security officer station, theatre and the under construction building as one of the character of the story and etched them well. Highly appreciated.

[Thangaraasu]

Srinu is going to turn sherlock holmes only to find out how meticulously his wife had cheated him. Excellent writing.

[Younus1999]

Very interesting waiting for next update

[Nesamanikumar]

Very interesting moves.
Has ganga committed infedility already or she is gonna do hereafter.

[Projectmp]

Dear author , plz provide update. Readers are excited to know what happened with sinu. The plot is so amazing

[tweeny_fory]

wow what a thriller ride.. even we are eager to understand what has happened
my questions are
1) why did she change the seat? what happened in the 30mins during interval
2) after movie was over what took so long for ganga?
3) what hapened for 1hr when he woke from injury?
4) how did he end up at hospital and who helped him?

[dumil_id]

Stop asking stupid questions. Just go with the flow. Else write your own story... ???

[Sandbox]

good story.. keep it going.. different from the ones i have ready so far anywhere..

[fuckandforget]

When srinu is earning well, why would he take his wife to a cheap theatre rather than a multiplex.

The theatre does not have any CCTV for the cops to check??.

Ganga does not want to disclose that she lost her chastity because her husband would feel bad. She is going to face the worst part of her life when her husband starts doubting her and that would anger her to go back to the rapists.

[kk007007]

Superb narration friend

Lot of questions comes to mind

1. Why srinu did not ask anything to Ganga
2. Did the mechanic javed do anything to the bike. it was not starting then and it was starting now.
3. He does not know the names of two, but how did he ask the inspector by their names
4. What time he was hospitalized. Who brought him. How the accident case was taken without cop interference
5. The cheating wife ? means he is going to doubt the wife that she has committed infedility and keep spying her?
6. Where is ganga relatives
7. Why ganga switched back seat and the men stopped talking thereafter.
8. Chacha is elder to javed and why is he calling him with respect.
9. Normally after commiting some r*pe, these men will kill the victims because they will expose them. Here nothing happend. Ganga is not having even any marks in her body.
10. If someone hit srinu and javed and chacha not there, it means another person involved in the incident.

Is this adultery or thriller? Super interesting.

wow what a thriller ride.. even we are eager to understand what has happened
my questions are
1) why did she change the seat? what happened in the 30mins during interval
2) after movie was over what took so long for ganga?
3) what hapened for 1hr when he woke from injury?
4) how did he end up at hospital and who helped him?

When srinu is earning well, why would he take his wife to a cheap theatre rather than a multiplex.

The theatre does not have any CCTV for the cops to check??.  

Ganga does not want to disclose that she lost her chastity because her husband would feel bad. She is going to face the worst part of her life when her husband starts doubting her and that would anger her to go back to the rapists.

So many questions .. Be patient.. You will get your answers

[Rangabaashyam]

Waiting to let cat out of bag

[Gajakidost]

Eagerly waiting to read what made her switch her seat post interval and how Ganga enjoyed with those two men that night.

[3sivaram]

So many questions .. Be patient.. You will get your answers

when?

[a2011]

Post update soon

[Projectmp]

Update??

[opheliyaa]

Cant predict the story so far.

[kk007007]

Back in the Nightmare

With a furrowed brow, Srinu scrutinized the FIR document, his eyes tracing over the lines of text meticulously. As he read, a nagging sense of unease gnawed at him, like a puzzle piece out of place. Then, like a bolt of lightning, he spotted it—the flaw in the timeline of events.


His heart raced as he double-checked the details, unable to shake the feeling that something was amiss. The timestamp on the FIR didn't align with his memory of the events that night. It was a small discrepancy, easily overlooked, but to Srinu, it held significant weight.

Frowning, he pondered the implications. Why had the timeline been recorded incorrectly? Was it an honest mistake or something more sinister? Questions swirled in his mind, each one more urgent than the last.

With a sense of determination, Srinu decided to investigate further. He needed to understand why the flaw had occurred, to unravel the truth hidden within the pages of the FIR. Taking a deep breath, he steeled himself for the task ahead, knowing that uncovering the answers would not be easy.

With a determined stride, Srinu left the theater and made his way towards the building where he and Ganga had been taken that dreadful night. As he walked, his mind buzzed with a sense of urgency. He needed to recreate the scene, to understand the timing of events accurately.

Reaching the building, he stood before it, feeling a shiver run down his spine. Memories of that terrifying night flooded back, but he pushed them aside, focusing on the task at hand. With a deep breath, he stepped inside the building, his senses on high alert.

Navigating through the dimly lit corridors, Srinu retraced the path he and Ganga had taken. Every corner, every turn, he committed to memory, determined to understand the sequence of events. Finally, he reached the spot where they had been attacked.

Closing his eyes, Srinu tried to visualize the scene as it had unfolded. He imagined the darkness, the fear, the sounds of struggle echoing through the empty halls. Slowly, he pieced together the events in his mind, aligning them with the flaw he had discovered in the FIR.

As he opened his eyes, a sense of clarity washed over him. He now knew what had gone wrong, why the timeline in the FIR didn't add up. With a newfound determination, Srinu resolved to set things right, to uncover the truth behind that fateful night. He started rereading the FIR.

Page 4 of FIR reads :

Heading: Timeline of the incident

Subject:  Chain of events with timeline[ According to Ganga ]:

- 8:00 PM: Movie starts.
- 11:00 PM: Movie ends.
- 11:15 PM: Srinu and Ganga are attacked by Javed and ChaCha.
- 11:25 PM: Srinu and Ganga are taken to the building under construction.
- 11:40-11:45 PM: Javed and ChaCha steal Srinu's wallet, rings, watch, and Ganga's jewelry and phone.
- Around 11:50-12:00 PM: Javed and ChaCha leave them in the building and escape.
- 12:05-12:10 AM: Ganga finds Srinu still unconscious.
- 12:15 AM: Ganga runs out for help (Srinu's phone was broken).
- 12:20-12:30 AM: Ganga finds some locals and asks for help; they call for an ambulance and the security officer.
- 12:50 AM: The security officer reach the crime scene.

As Srinu sat in the dimly lit building, the FIR document rested in his hands, its pages illuminated by the faint glow filtering through the broken windows. With furrowed brows, he pored over the details of that dreadful night, each word etching itself into his memory.

His heart raced as he reached the section detailing the theft of his belongings. There it was, plain as day—the time stamped next to the disappearance of his watch: 11:40-11:45 PM. But Srinu knew this couldn't be right.

Closing his eyes, he retraced the events of that fateful night. He remembered the darkness of the building's interior, the rough hands dragging him across the floor, and the overwhelming sense of fear that had gripped him.

Then, as he reached the moment of awakening, a sudden realization dawned upon him. He recalled the sensation of his hand instinctively reaching for his wrist, the familiar weight of his watch greeting his touch. With a surge of determination, he glanced down at the timepiece, his breath catching in his throat.

The hands of the watch pointed decisively past 12:00 AM midnight, a clear contradiction to the time listed in the FIR. In that moment, a wave of relief washed over him, mingled with a newfound resolve. Armed with this revelation, Srinu knew he was one step closer to uncovering the truth behind that harrowing night. And with that knowledge fueling his determination, he set out to confront the shadows of the past, ready to face whatever lay ahead.

With the revelation of the flaw in the FIR, Srinu's mind buzzed with questions. Why had this mistake occurred? How could such a critical detail be overlooked? His desperation for answers spurred him to action, and as he glanced around the dimly lit building, his gaze landed on the surveillance cameras mounted in the corners.

A spark of realization ignited within him. The CCTV cameras! They could hold the key to unraveling the mystery of that fateful night. 

As Srinu's eyes fell upon the CCTV camera installed in the building where he and Ganga were attacked, a surge of conflicting emotions washed over him. At first, there was a glimmer of hope—a flicker of optimism that perhaps this surveillance device held the key to unraveling the mystery surrounding that fateful night.

However, this hope was quickly overshadowed by a deep sense of frustration and anger. The sight of the CCTV camera served as a stark reminder of the glaring oversight in the security officer investigation—the failure to obtain crucial footage that could shed light on the events that transpired after the attack.

But why did the security officer access CCTV footage of the building? if they had accessed the footage, this mistake never would have happened ? he asked himself.

Srinu's mind whirled with questions as he pondered the oversight in the FIR and the lack of surveillance footage from the building. If the security officer had accessed the CCTV footage during their investigation, perhaps this mistake could have been avoided. 

Frustration and confusion gnawed at him as he grappled with the implications of this realization. Why hadn't the security officer thoroughly examined all available evidence? Was there a lapse in their investigation, or were there other factors at play?

As he mulled over these troubling thoughts, a sense of urgency seized him. If the security officer had neglected to review the CCTV footage, what other crucial details might they have missed? And more importantly, how would he uncover the truth behind that night's events without access to this vital piece of evidence?

As Srinu delved deeper into the FIR document, Srinu's heart sank as he read the damning revelation in the last paragraph of page 7. The construction company, responsible for the building where he and Ganga had been attacked, had refused to share the CCTV footage with the security officer. Instead, they had taken the matter to court, presumably to protect their company's reputation.

Anger flared within him as he absorbed the implications of this discovery. The construction company's selfish actions had hindered the security officer investigation, potentially jeopardizing any chance of justice for him and Ganga. How could they prioritize their reputation over the safety and well-being of innocent victims? The construction company's fear of damaging their reputation stemmed from several factors, each contributing to their apprehension about releasing the CCTV footage of the crime that occurred in their building.

Firstly, the company was concerned about the potential negative publicity that could arise from the incident. News of a crime taking place on their premises could tarnish their image as a reputable and safe establishment. In an industry where trust and reliability are paramount, any association with criminal activity could severely undermine the company's credibility and trustworthiness in the eyes of the public, potential clients, and stakeholders.

Additionally, the company likely feared the repercussions of the incident on their business operations. A high-profile crime could deter potential clients from engaging with the company, leading to a decline in business opportunities and revenue. Existing clients may also express concerns about the safety and security of the company's facilities, potentially leading to contract cancellations or hesitancy to continue working with the company.

Moreover, the construction company may have been worried about legal liabilities and lawsuits resulting from the incident. If it was perceived that the company had failed to provide adequate security measures or ensure the safety of individuals on their premises, they could face legal action from victims seeking compensation for damages, injuries, or trauma suffered as a result of the crime.

In essence, the construction company's fear of damaging their reputation was driven by the potential consequences of negative publicity, loss of business opportunities, and legal liabilities arising from the incident. As a result, they may have opted to prioritize protecting their image and mitigating potential fallout over transparency and accountability, leading them to resist sharing the CCTV footage with authorities and the public.

Onto the next he found, his eyes scanned the details on page 8, where it was stated that the security officer had obtained CCTV footage only from the theater. A sinking feeling settled in his chest as he realized the gravity of the situation. The crucial evidence from the building where he and Ganga were attacked was missing.

The timestamp on the theater's CCTV footage confirmed that the attack occurred around 11:15 PM when Javed and Chacha had accosted them. This information aligned with his recollection of the events. However, without footage from the building, there was a significant gap in the investigation. The truth of what transpired in those crucial moments after the attack remained shrouded in mystery.

Frustration and helplessness welled up within Srinu as he grappled with the realization that vital evidence had been overlooked. If only the security officer had accessed the CCTV footage from the building, perhaps they could have uncovered more clues about Javed and Chacha's movements and their subsequent escape.

Determined not to let this setback deter him, Srinu resolved to take matters into his own hands. He knew that he needed to find a way to obtain the missing CCTV footage, even if it meant confronting the construction company and navigating the legal complexities. With newfound determination, he set his sights on uncovering the truth and seeking justice for himself and Ganga.

As Srinu mulled over the implications of the CCTV footage being the key to unlocking the truth behind the night's events, a sense of frustration and helplessness washed over him. The realization that accessing the footage through legal channels could be a lengthy and arduous process, fraught with challenges and potential roadblocks, only added to his sense of despair.

He understood that taking on a legal battle against a powerful construction company would be a daunting task, one that he might not have the resources or stamina to pursue. The thought of facing off against a well-funded and influential entity in the courts filled him with apprehension and doubt about the feasibility of achieving justice through conventional means.

Despite his desire for answers and closure, Srinu grappled with the harsh reality that the legal system might not offer a swift or satisfactory resolution to his predicament. The prospect of waiting years for a resolution, all while grappling with uncertainty and anxiety, weighed heavily on his mind.

In that moment of contemplation, Srinu found himself at a crossroads, torn between his thirst for truth and justice and the daunting challenges that lay ahead. With a heavy heart and a sense of resignation, he knew that he would need to find alternative ways to uncover the truth and seek justice for himself and his wife.

With the flaw in the FIR finally uncovered, Srinu's focus shifted to unraveling the truth behind the events of that harrowing night. Armed with the knowledge that the official account provided by the security officer was flawed, Srinu's determination to uncover the reality of what transpired only intensified.

But Srinu knew that to truly uncover the truth, he needed more than just his own recollection and observations. He realized that accessing the CCTV footage from the building where they were attacked was crucial to unraveling the mystery. However, he also understood that obtaining this evidence through legal channels would be challenging, if not impossible.

Undeterred by the obstacles ahead, Srinu began to explore alternative means of accessing the CCTV footage, contemplating risky but necessary actions to obtain the evidence he needed. With each step forward, his determination grew stronger, fueled by the need to uncover the truth and seek justice for himself and Ganga.

As Srinu wrestled with the dilemma of accessing the crucial CCTV footage, a glimmer of hope began to take shape in his mind. An idea, albeit risky, began to form—a plan that could potentially circumvent the legal obstacles standing in his way.

With newfound determination, Srinu mulled over the details of his plan, carefully considering each step and weighing the risks against the potential rewards. He knew that he needed to act swiftly and decisively if he hoped to succeed.