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27-04-2024, 09:30 AM
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(25-04-2024, 10:49 PM)MohiniMadhu Wrote: There is definitely some change in the way Padma was treating me after the incident. She likes to tease me and scold me as if I am kid. She talks to me with full control and sometimes commands me if I don’t listen to whatever she says.
Raj messaged again: If you don’t call, I am going to come to your home and talk to you directly or may be with Padma too. CALL ME RIGHT NOW!
Ahh, 2 different sudden events happening at either ends......Both events are going towards the goal Hubby wanted
All 3 are going to win here and no losers.
Beautiful writing.
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Good story but you lost the plot , the seduction of padma should have happened without the confession of the husband
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27-04-2024, 05:40 PM
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(26-04-2024, 09:35 PM)Billacancan Wrote: Kudos to your writing bro, your update made me rock hard. I have only one request bro don't make Padma a cheap slut, I just request you to main her dignity and her character and she should be handled roughly.
Wowww. Thanks for the feedback.. :)
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27-04-2024, 05:46 PM
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(27-04-2024, 09:30 AM)Givemeextra Wrote: Ahh, 2 different sudden events happening at either ends......Both events are going towards the goal Hubby wanted
All 3 are going to win here and no losers.
Beautiful writing.
clp); Thanks. There is a far more surprising event about to happen which no one can guess. It will be in the next update. But it cannot be a short update. I have to share it in one go. Will try my best to get the update as soon as possible.
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27-04-2024, 06:00 PM
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(27-04-2024, 05:39 PM)abhinay67 Wrote: Good story but you lost the plot , the seduction of padma should have happened without the confession of the husband That would become too routine isnt it? More like a cheating wife story. And if seduction happens before the confession, it would be a negative mark on her character and innocence. Which I didn't want to do. Also she still think very high of her husband. Because she did not have much exposure to the modern culture or porn, she thinks that her husband did it due to the inferiority complex.
She will continue to be pure by heart and mind until the actual encounter. Seduction part has not even got initiated yet.
Seduction and the sex will happen during the same occasion
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28-04-2024, 05:52 PM
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(26-04-2024, 09:55 PM)Samadhanam Wrote: Super update. Dominating the cuck. Padma will join Raj and humiliate Mohan soon.
Ha ha.. eventually.. still a long way to go for humiliation..
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Awaiting the next update eagerly
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Nice story ...pls update continuously...good narration ...looking like this is real incidents ...am i wright or only fantacy
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(29-04-2024, 09:19 AM)couples2k9 Wrote: Nice story ...pls update continuously...good narration ...looking like this is real incidents ...am i wright or only fantacy
Some scenes were based on the real incidents. Fantasy is mixed up too. So I can say inspired by few real incidents. Thanks for the feedback.
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great writing skills , 5/5
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one of the best after a long time just go onnnnn
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Pls to give regular updates ...really waiting for u next one
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when will the next update be, are you working on it, writer?
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her author why no update for many days? i daily come to see your update but u keep on making me wait,
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Awaiting to read the continuation of this intriguing story
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wow lovely story.. but was stopped in mid expecially when a big turn happenned
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