18-06-2019, 08:04 PM
super hot.
(18-06-2019, 08:04 PM)itonya Wrote: super hot.Thanks yaara saath bane rahiyega
(18-06-2019, 08:20 PM)naani Wrote: Ajay Bhai bahut bahut danyavaad hai apke liye ye kahani likhne ke liye aur har roj update dene ke liye. Aap ka kahani aur screenplay bahut ache se hai. Isi tarah kahani Ko aur aage le jao.
(19-06-2019, 03:04 PM)Ajgupta Wrote: Awsm update
But ek guzarish h bhai aage apki marji
Agar kavya aur ram ka love angle dikhare ho to plzz kavya ko aise slut maat bnao.
Theme bht acha he apka But agr kavya sach m ram se pyaar karti he to usko raghu ke seduction se ladta hua dikhao aise slut mt dikhao aur ram ka character aur strong kriye kavya ke love se
(19-06-2019, 07:11 PM)Sam Fisher Wrote: Agreed with u brother k writer jo chae vo kre unki story h
Y sirf mera opinion h as a reader no hard feelings ??
Agreed. But aapne agar thik se padha hoga kavya past mein kuch kar chuki he jis se woh bhagna chati he. Wo pata lagne ke baad hi pata lagega kavya ka character +ve he ya -ve. Waise bhi 1st ya 2nd update mein uska mother-in-law usko tana maarti he. Jaroor kuch na kuch hua hoga woh kavya ke bare mein jaanti he ya phir shak he. Writter sir ke upar he woh kavya ko +ve banayenge ya phir -ve