22-07-2023, 06:29 PM
Bhai sahi kaha aapne
Adultery Wardi wali ki dastan-haivaniyat
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22-07-2023, 06:29 PM
Bhai sahi kaha aapne
22-07-2023, 06:30 PM
Lagbhag 20 din ho gaye aur koi update nahi aaya abhi tak
24-07-2023, 12:31 AM
(02-07-2023, 09:37 AM)Rajveer345 Wrote: Jaldi Jaldi update lao, sirf views ko bevkuf bna rhe ho ye mahino pe chota update de kar. Nhi ho raha to bolo mai iske aage karta hu continue, nhi to jaldi jaldi update do. Sare logo ke comments padha h 3 saal se story ko atka ke rakhe ho. Kitna mahina update nhi dete upar v bahana bnate ho.... Bhai tumhi update do isse kuch hone wala nahi hai. Ye sirf atka ke rakhta hai
08-10-2023, 04:25 AM
Dear writer, did u get idea for moving further from current situation of story.
23-11-2023, 01:17 AM
Update 47
Sonagachi ki gandi chakachound ke bich ek honhar officer ke jism ki boliya lagayi ja rahi thi aisi boliya sirf randi khano me hi lagayi jati randiyon ki or aaj hamari heroine mahak ki bebasi use randi ke saman hi bayan kar rahi thi mahak ke jism ki boli 1.50 caror antim boli thi jo ek Mumbai ke hi ek '. ne lagayi thi jo ek vyapari gunda tha jisko log sultan shabab ke naam se jante the Jalim -kya re sultan bhai itni badi rakam iske liye aapki umar dekhi hai 55 ke ho gaye ho Sultan- kya jalim tumko rokda mil raha hai na to kyo tang khich Raha hai Jalim -nahi bhai aisi koi baat nahi aapse akele me loundiyan ke bare mein kuch baat batani hai isliye aao mere sath Sultan-chal Sultan ko jalim side le jakar Jalim -bhai aap ye kya kar rahe ho ye security officer wali apni Mumbai ki hi inspector hai Sultan -kya re sale tu mujhe aab bata Raha hai pahle batana tha na tujhe es rand ko yaha se le jana padega mai isko vahi kharid leta Jalim - kya baat kar rahe ho sultan bhai Sultan -ha sale en security officer walo se mera kai salo purana rishta hai sale mere name se hi darte hai harami Jalim -per sultan bhai es ladki ko enka dipartment kutto ki tarah khoj raha hai aap ise le jaoge kaise Sultan kuch sochkar -tum kah rahe the ye tumhari gulam hai Jalim -ha bhai Sultan -to ise kaho ye mere se nikaah kare Jalim - per sultan bhai nikaah kaise???? Sultan -isko maine isliye nahi kharida ki chudai kari or kisi kothe per bech Diya isse nikaah karna hai or apni begum banana hai Jalim -bhai ye sab hoga kaise agar aise hi kahi aapka nikaah kara diya to kanun or iske pille us shadi ko nahi manenge or aapke pahle se hi do begum hai Sultan -to kya hua mai or nikaah nahi kar sakta or rahi baat shadi kii to ve court ki to manenge na Jalim-per court jayenge kaise Sultan -isko burka pahnao or ise ise samjhao baki mai sambhal lunga yahi local court mere pass vakeel or judge ki fouj hai shadi karane ke liye isliye tum isko ready karo Jalim -ji bhai Jalim mahak ko shadi ke liye ready karne chala jata hai Waiting ??
23-11-2023, 08:47 AM
(23-11-2023, 01:17 AM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Update 47 Bhai band kar do yeh story. Baith gaya hai humara.
23-11-2023, 08:53 AM
(23-11-2023, 08:47 AM)mike_kite56 Wrote: Bhai band kar do yeh story. Baith gaya hai humara. Are yar mai khud es story ko puri karna chahta hu per time nahi milta per aage koshish karunga es story weekly update dene ka abhi ek update or dunga Aaj ya kal subah tak Story ko adultery se erotics bana dunga aage maja aayega dekhna bas sabar karo
23-11-2023, 12:55 PM
Story mein shuru se sirf zabardasti ho raha hai. Mehek ka character change karo. Woh khud ab bhikhari, mazdoor, choro se .... samajh gaye na ;-) (Wink)
24-11-2023, 09:28 AM
nice story please continue ..
24-11-2023, 09:29 AM
Update 48
Mahak apni bebasi par aansu bahaye ja rahi thi or iski sabse badi vajah thi jalim singh ki blackmailing koi bhi ladki koi officers or koi bhi rahishjadi kyo na sabko apni ijjat ki parwah hoti hai or yahi karan tha ki aaj mahak ki ijjat ko En sonagachi ki galiyon me nilam ki gayi or mahak bebasi se sab sahti rahi Mahak ke pass kisi ke aane ki Aahat hoti hai or mahak darwaze ki taraf dekhti hai to chanda or salma ke sath jalim singh aaye hue the Mahak -kyo kar rahe ho aisa kyo meri jindagi barbad kar rahe tumhe paise chahiye mai dungi tumhe paise bolo kitne chahiye Jalim (haste huye) -tu kya samjhti hai kutiya tujhe yaha paise ke liye nilam kiya hai tujhe paise ke liye nahi tujhe hum jaiso ke raste se hatane ke liye nilam kiya hai Mahak - tumko mai chhodungi nahi tum jo kar rahe ho uska natija bahut bura hoga samjhe Jalim -abhi to tere sath hoga bura teri shadi hai aaj Mahak chouktey huye sadme me chali jati hai Jalim -aaj teri shadi hai suna tune Mahak -kisse Jalim -,tera asli hakdar tera malik jisne tere ko kharida hai Mahak -mai aisa kabhi nahi karungi or aisa nahi kar sakte Jalim - aisa hi hoga or khud taiyar hogi samjhi kutiya Mahak-nahi aisa kabhi nahi hoga Jalim -apne phone me kahi call lagata hai jo video call tha Phir video call karne ke baad phone ko mahak ki taraf ghumata hai or mahak ko uska Ghar dikhayi deta hai bahar se or iske baad kuch aadami jo shayad jalim Singh ke aadmi the Jalim -ab to tu samjh gayi hogi na mai kya kahna chahta hu ab bol ab bhi nahi karegi tu shadi karegi na bol kutiya bol karegi na Mahak-kyo kar rahe ho aisa kyo meri jindagi barbad karne per tule huye ho please chhod do mujhe mai tere raste kabhi nahi aaungi please Jalim mahak ke upar burkha fekta hai Jalim -jyada noutanki mat kar or ye burkha pahan tujhe aaj shadi karni court me agar tune jyada hosiyari dikhai udhar rajistard office me to sali tu janti hai anjam kya hoga isliye ye burkha pahan or fatafat bahar aa Mahak ki aankhon se aansu bahe ja rahe aaj mahak itni bebas thi ki kuch kar nahi sakti thi es shadi ke alawa itni bebas thi mahak Mahak us burke ko dekhti hai or pahan leti hai Aaj mahak ki jindagi badalne wali thi mahak shrivastav se mahak mahak sultan banne wali hai Mahak shadi shuda jindagi kaise rumanch se bhari hogi kaisi jindagi hogi aage Waiting
05-01-2024, 03:08 PM
Ise aage to badao yaar koi
12-04-2024, 09:16 AM
iss story kab aayega..........????
14-04-2024, 02:22 PM
Update please
25-04-2024, 10:21 PM
Hello Omprakash ji
Story complete karna ki try karo. it is a very good story Waiting for New updates in it
22-06-2024, 07:07 PM
Chalo Mahak story ke aage naa badhne se humiliation se bach gayi!
22-06-2024, 07:58 PM
Still waiting for next update...
24-06-2024, 07:08 PM
kya koi or writer is story ko continue karuga ?
11-08-2024, 12:00 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-08-2024, 12:31 PM by Omprakash meena. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Yesterday, 06:50 AM
Awwesome..... Waiting for next update plz
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