Adultery Bhabi, Beggar and Blunder
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waiting
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#63
Sorry for the delay, I will drop the update on Wednesday, stuck due to some work related issues
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Eagerly Waiting bro
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(18-03-2024, 10:47 PM)lattu_pattu Wrote: Sorry for the delay, I will drop the update on Wednesday, stuck due to some work related issues

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Waiting.
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#69
Wednesday gone, friday came, no updates yet.
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#70
Dear author - hope everything is well at your end.
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#71
superb...
eagerly waiting for continuation..
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#73
Going Great !
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#74
Awsome story... Rani and Chandu rocking. Looking more hot naughty sessions between chandu and Rani
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#75
Bro please update..
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#76
Continue bro
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#77
Plz continue dear author
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#78
loving the way the sotory unfomds bhai...
you are rocking..
so now chandu is going to have shreya too...
how it is going to unfold

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#79
This is actually a really wonderful concept. Very very erotic!! Rani is a wonderful character created. Tall, beautiful and well equipped and also very traditional. Such a selfless character willing to anything to help others. Any human being will be lucky enough to lay with her but chandu is the most luckiest one!

Honestly I loved the intro of Kavya character, tight body yet voluptuous, unpredictability in story is very crucial, you have to keep readers confused otherwise they will very easily see a pattern and story may become predictable.

You can see Rani originally agreed for one time but ended having multiple times... she finally got succumbed to her desires but yet she's not enjoying it fully. Probably because of moral things. Shreya i think also observed it, she can carefully plan and take her to next level. She understood that Rani is very kind hearted person and actually feels for the suffering of others. If Shreya can capitalize this and persuade she can be successful in manipulating her next round.

I think what Shreya can do is capitalize on the Kavya situation where inspite of being experienced as Shreya, she suffered when it comes to Anal sex. So Shreya can express her fear to Rani that "See I told you all of this is bad and it is good that I saw what happend with Kavya how painfull it was even with experience and now I shall not marry!"

To that Rani can convince that Anal sex is not bad and Kavya suffered because of in-experience. To which Kavya can also join and express her pain, and manipulate her that "Thank for saving me from that monster, but If you know how to do anal sex safe way than show us how to do Anal. It will save us from our marriages and Shreya can also change her mind"

Rani can finally reluctantly agree as "Ok fine but only one condition that this will be last time!"

Shreya can further manipulate to help her lose inhibition and enjoy sex free with open mind by saying. "It's ok didi, you don't have to... You have already done too much for me and you seem depressed, I understood now sex is all depressed and sad. Thanks to you I'm no longer interested in this."

Rani may reply something like - "No sex is not sad and depressing but it is actually very enjoyable experience."

Shreya - "But di, you don't seem to be enjoying. I'm feeling bad for you. No forget it, I understood by seeing yours how sad is this all"

Rani - "No It is not, don't judge just from yesterday night. You can see the third video from the cam recorder How much I enjoyed."

Shreya - "Then why are you hesitant, is it because of me?"

Rani - "No it's actually I feel like I'm cheating your brother that guilt is bothering me."

Shreya - "But didi, you said you're doing this because you felt bad for the poor beggar, because he was dying and he has no hopes that he can ever have such a beautiful apsara as you! Initially i thought i don't understand but now I understand di, you're such a selfless person, you're not doing it for you but for them. You're heart is filled with kindness, how can it be cheating when all you did was save a person life by fulfilling his last wishes. In the end you're love for bhaiya never changes, then how is this cheating?"

Now Rani can continue and give a Master-class on anal sex without any inhibition and show the girls how enjoyable experience it is.

lattu_pattu don't give up on this story! Please do continue, waiting for you update.
Dont mind my writing bit of story, just a suggestion.
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(09-04-2024, 11:12 PM)xossissippi Wrote: This is actually a really wonderful concept. Very very erotic!! Rani is a wonderful character created. Tall, beautiful and well equipped and also very traditional. Such a selfless character willing to anything to help others. Any human being will be lucky enough to lay with her but chandu is the most luckiest one!

Honestly I loved the intro of Kavya character, tight body yet voluptuous, unpredictability in story is very crucial, you have to keep readers confused otherwise they will very easily see a pattern and story may become predictable.

You can see Rani originally agreed for one time but ended having multiple times... she finally got succumbed to her desires but yet she's not enjoying it fully. Probably because of moral things. Shreya i think also observed it, she can carefully plan and take her to next level. She understood that Rani is very kind hearted person and actually feels for the suffering of others. If Shreya can capitalize this and persuade she can be successful in manipulating her next round.

I think what Shreya can do is capitalize on the Kavya situation where inspite of being experienced as Shreya, she suffered when it comes to Anal sex. So Shreya can express her fear to Rani that "See I told you all of this is bad and it is good that I saw what happend with Kavya how painfull it was even with experience and now I shall not marry!"

To that Rani can convince that Anal sex is not bad and Kavya suffered because of in-experience. To which Kavya can also join and express her pain, and manipulate her that "Thank for saving me from that monster, but If you know how to do anal sex safe way than show us how to do Anal. It will save us from our marriages and Shreya can also change her mind"

Rani can finally reluctantly agree as "Ok fine but only one condition that this will be last time!"

Shreya can further manipulate to help her lose inhibition and enjoy sex free with open mind by saying. "It's ok didi, you don't have to... You have already done too much for me and you seem depressed, I understood now sex is all depressed and sad. Thanks to you I'm no longer interested in this."

Rani may reply something like - "No sex is not sad and depressing but it is actually very enjoyable experience."

Shreya - "But di, you don't seem to be enjoying. I'm feeling bad for you. No forget it, I understood by seeing yours how sad is this all"

Rani - "No It is not, don't judge just from yesterday night. You can see the third video from the cam recorder How much I enjoyed."

Shreya - "Then why are you hesitant, is it because of me?"

Rani - "No it's actually I feel like I'm cheating your brother that guilt is bothering me."

Shreya - "But didi, you said you're doing this because you felt bad for the poor beggar, because he was dying and he has no hopes that he can ever have such a beautiful apsara as you! Initially i thought i don't understand but now I understand di, you're such a selfless person, you're not doing it for you but for them. You're heart is filled with kindness, how can it be cheating when all you did was save a person life by fulfilling his last wishes. In the end you're love for bhaiya never changes, then how is this cheating?"

Now Rani can continue and give a Master-class on anal sex without any inhibition and show the girls how enjoyable experience it is.

lattu_pattu don't give up on this story! Please do continue, waiting for you update.
Dont mind my writing bit of story, just a suggestion.
Thanks for the idea brother. And sorry everyone it seemed like I gave up on the story. I had things going on in life and couldn't focus on this. I have almost finished writing the next update and hopefully will drop it on Monday
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