[Rumana]

Ekdum kamaal ka update

[Rumana]

BlackHorseFantastic, fascinating and fabulous start. Please add another female character and it's Ranbir sinde's loving younger sister who will be extremely beautiful and sexy woman of
Very nice idea

[Kasif]

Absolutely wonderful and stunning start. The story has a great potential to be a blockbuster one in this forum. Please post regular updates.

[Vik88]

Absolutely mind blowing and marvelous writings!

[Intruder]

Absolutely wonderful and stunning update! Fantastic build up

[Rana007]

Ashadaran update

[SSM18]

Absolutely blockbuster start

[SMJ20]

Boss,you have really started a super fantastic story. Absolutely wonderful and stunning theme. Hope the hero will be only one and there will be slow and steady seduction. Wish best luck of you. Hats off.

[SMJ20]

Fantastic, fascinating and fabulous start. Please add another female character and it's Ranbir sinde's loving younger sister who will be extremely beautiful and sexy woman of 53 .

And she will be extremely conservative and strictly faithful to her loving husband who will be later seduced and fucked by the low class man and she will also begin to cheat on her loving husband secretly. 

[Jamsbond]

Lovely and beautiful story ❤️

[Jamsbond]

And she will be extremely conservative and strictly faithful to her loving husband who will be later seduced and fucked by the low class man and she will also begin to cheat on her loving husband secretly. 

Terrific idea

[Shin54]

Lovely story! Beautiful writing ✍️

[Gadrayi Maal]

Superb! ekdom zabardast update!

[Sumaiya Shimu]

Lovely story,very much interesting plot and fantastic development. clp);

[Nishi.]

fataka,faddu,damaka aur damadar kahaani

[Rituparna.]

bahut badhiya update! bahut bahut mast writings!

[Nahida Parveen]

ekdom awesome update,vah! kia likhte hai aapne yaar,bahut maza agaya

[Black and White]

bahut bahut garam,kamuk,exciting aur super sexy story!

[Ammi jaan ka pyara beta]

Ashadaran update

[Pinkboy]

Lovely update. Very nice going forward