16-02-2024, 03:18 PM
Price kosam waiting....
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17-02-2024, 01:20 AM
22-07-2024, 03:52 AM
(This post was last modified: 22-07-2024, 03:58 AM by Rishabh1. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Dear writer regrettably I couldn't connect with the story and apologies if that offends you! such huge and prolonged episodes purely on moral and ethical dilemmas in justifying sexual needs/acts without a fitting story and circumstances seemed artificial also there is philosophy oozing out from every other line which seemed bit much. I believe emotions, dilemmas and instincts are lot simpler in real life and they happen very quickly too! Albeit, this was a great attempt to portray your thoughts, I must say exceptional telugu writing and expression skills. keep up the good work and thank you for this.
22-07-2024, 08:33 AM
Update plz sir
21-08-2024, 02:03 PM
Update plz
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