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13-02-2024, 12:33 PM
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కథా కథనం బాగుంది, పాఠకుడిగా చిన్న సలహాలు
1. కొంచెం పెద్ద అప్డేట్ లు ఇవ్వండి,
2. అలాగే కాస్త కథనం ముందుకి వెళ్తే బాగుంటుంది. ఏదో ఉంటుంది ఈసారి అనుకున్నప్పుడల్లా ఏమి లేకుండా నీరు కారుస్తున్నారు...
3. శృంగారం పాలు కాస్త ఉంటే బాగుండు, ఈ శృంగారానికి కావలిసిన సపోర్ట్ బాగా రాస్తున్నారు, మేటర్ ముందుకి వెళ్తుంది అన్నప్పుడు మాటల్లో పదును తగ్గుతుంది అనిపిస్తోంది.
మరీ తెలుగు సీరియల్స్లా ఉంటున్నాయి అప్డేట్లు...
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(13-02-2024, 12:33 PM)piepepie Wrote: కొంచెం పెద్ద అప్డేట్ లు ఇవ్వండి, అలాగే కాస్త కథనం ముందుకి వెళ్తే బాగుంటుంది. ఏదో ఉంటుంది ఈసారి అనుకున్నప్పుడల్లా ఏమి లేకుండా నీరు కారుస్తున్నారు... మరీ తెలుగు సీరియల్స్లా ఉంటున్నాయి అప్డేట్లు...
ఒక ఆడ ఒక మగ కి కొన్ని రోజులు పాటు privacy dorikina situation bro...mamuluga ayite atta alludu already temptation lo unnaru kabatti sex pettesi pani kanichesi kadha mugincheyochu...routine ga raaste em baguntadi cheppu edo okati different ga undali kada... chuddam kottaga nenu em rayagalugutano...naku kuda telidu story next enti ani....so slow avtu untadi konni areas lo don't get disappoint...
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Baga rasthunnaru sir
Konchem pedda updates ivvandi
Attha chetullo kurradiki manchi sex education
And experience ippinchandi
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(13-02-2024, 12:33 PM)piepepie Wrote: 3. మాటల్లో పదును తగ్గుతుంది అనిపిస్తోంది.
Avnu mood lenappudu edo rayalani raaste alage vastundi...i know that bro...
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Very very nice and sexy update
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Super Update Bro... Continue....
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Githa దాటే వరకు ఎదురు చూస్తా.... 
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(12-02-2024, 07:56 AM)veerannachowdhary8 Wrote: Story ni apaledu bro exams unnai anduke gap vachindi....madhyalo okka update iddam anukuntunna kani focus kudaratledu story meeda try chesta
All the best for exams .bro
Put focus on ur exams and studies ..we will wait
Whenever you free give update for us
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All the best for your exams
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Pic deleted., pic was posted unintenitionally....regret for hurting author sentimemts...author is doing a wonderful job, do continue the story bro
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Veeranna garu mi exams eppati varako cheppandi. rojuki padhi sarlu ila open chesi chusukovadam maa valla kaavatledhu
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(16-02-2024, 11:49 AM)hornyhubbi Wrote: alludu bommalu choosthoo madda pissukuthuntey chandrakala atha bed meeda vaadi pakka koorchoni inkaa kasi leputhundi emo
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Pic delete cheyyandi..lekapothe author veeranna garu updates ivvaru..
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Next update eppudu istharo cheppagalaraa konchem, chaalaa waiting andi
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Na characters ilage untayi ani oka pic roopam lo evarina depict chesaka naku a story meeda intrest potadi......idi kawalani jarigina tappu ani anukovatledu...evaro okaru telika chestaru adi casual... but e chinna vishyam lo nenu chala sensitive...enduku ante nenu na brain lo unna original characters tho story rayali...vallu ila untaru ani mee andaru vere roopam lo chusaru ani telisaka..i can't ...na badha ni sarigga cheppalekapotunna...enduku ante antha vichitramina badha..but nenu malla intrest regain cheytaniki tym padtundi...
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Indulo na tappu kuda undi nenu eppudu pics pettakandi ani ekkada chinna note points kuda pettaledu...so that u may understand...naku story lo story tappa inkem raase alavatu ledu em chestam... 
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