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(10-02-2024, 05:02 PM)krsrajakrs Wrote: super update brother
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(10-02-2024, 05:42 PM)twinciteeguy Wrote: nice narration and build-up of story plot.
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(10-02-2024, 08:21 PM)utkrusta Wrote: EXECELLENT UPDATE
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(10-02-2024, 09:01 PM)kasi_babu Wrote: Excellent Update Ravi garu
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(10-02-2024, 10:05 PM)unluckykrish Wrote: excellent love story
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(10-02-2024, 10:14 PM)Ganesh kumar 009 Wrote: Excellent super bro
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(10-02-2024, 10:45 PM)K.R.kishore Wrote: Nice super update
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(11-02-2024, 01:27 AM)saleem8026 Wrote:  Nice fantastic update 
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(11-02-2024, 06:10 AM)Madhu Wrote: Nice update
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(11-02-2024, 06:11 AM)y.rama1980 Wrote: Wow..... super
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(11-02-2024, 06:22 AM)Sachin@10 Wrote: Superb update
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(11-02-2024, 07:24 PM)9652138080 Wrote: Nice update writer garu
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(11-02-2024, 07:38 PM)kamal kishan Wrote: మీ కథల్లో ఈ కథ కొంచెం different.
నాకు తెలియకుండా నచ్చిన పాయింట్ ఏంటంటే కొడుకు పెళ్ళి కోసం తండ్రి ప్లాట్ కొనడం.
ప్రతి పెళ్ళి కూతురూ తన మొగుడు తనని బుజ్జగించాలని, తన కోసం భర్త వేంపర్లాడాలని కోరుకుంటుంది. సవతిని భరించలేదు. భరించినా తనకే ప్రాధాన్యత ఇవ్వాలి అని కోరుకుంటుంది.
మొగాడు మాత్రం బాపూ గారి మిస్టర్ పెళ్ళాం మూవీలో రాజేంద్రప్రసాద్ ఫస్ట్ నైట్ ఎంజాయ్ చేసి పనైపోయింది అన్నట్లు వెళ్ళిపోతాడే అలానే ఉంటారు.
అమ్మాయిని ఎంజాయ్ చేస్తే 100 ఏళ్ళు గుర్తుండి పోవాలి.
ఆ విరుపులు, ఆ వళ్ళు విరుచుకున్నప్పుడు పొంగిన గోపురాలూ, తృప్తిగా చేయించుకుని ఆహ్ అంటూ నీటుర్పు తో ఊపిరి కాల్చేస్తుంటే ఈ ప్రపంచంలో ఉన్నది మేమిద్దరమే అన్నట్లు.
కానీ నిజం ఏమిటంటే ఇవ్వన్నీ మీ కథ చదివేప్పుడు నా మనస్సులో మెదులుతూ ఉంటాయి.
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(11-02-2024, 09:27 PM)Terminator619 Wrote: Super update. Chala బాగుంది. పెళ్లి aypoyindi... Inka shobaname
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(11-02-2024, 09:43 PM)unluckykrish Wrote: bagundi
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(11-02-2024, 11:15 PM)Vizzus009 Wrote: Nice update
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(12-02-2024, 06:46 AM)Raju1987 Wrote: స్టోరీ చాలా చాలా బాగుంది
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(12-02-2024, 10:11 AM)murali1978 Wrote: Nice update
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(12-02-2024, 11:36 AM)Chandra228 Wrote: First night Ela untundho mari good update
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(12-02-2024, 05:34 PM)GK0308 Wrote: Ravi garu me story writing super ga unadi
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Kudirithe divya garini Inka me vadhina garini kuda line lo pettandi just my suggestion antey
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