[val.coutinho]

Looks like the end of the story ...Lagta hain Anita ki Tel maalish ke liye Tel lene Hariya Iraq chala gaya ...

Hahahahahaha
Waise joke achcha maara hai... lekin story mein tel garam karke laane Ramu gaya tha na ki Hariya. 
Anyways have patience. Sean bro must be busy. He will start the story within this year with a big bang...... Hoping so.

[creamydelight]

Eagerly waiting

[neerathemall]

Are you a teenager?

[neerathemall]

Bhut bhut khushi hua bhai aapko wapas yaaha dekhkar or dobara se  is masterpiece ko restart karta dekh ke...... bhut accha update diya hai .....bas ek guzarish hai ki budhe ko tease wala update ko long rakhna or ek baat or pls Anita  ko itna easily frankly mat karana hariya se....

[srider69]

Sean, eagerly awaiting an update. Kindly go for it. And please advance the plot

[Brownboy7171]

Kab ayege 5-6 update ...waiting Hariya and Anita Bazar masti

[Hellybelly]

It's been nearly a month....sean bro must be busy but, it's time to update, otherwise consistency will be disturbed and story will take months to make little progress.

[Brownboy7171]

Anita ko itne aasane se hariya se mat sex karwana teasing bohot hard karo ...because anita besharam hai randi nahi

[mraj1]

Dear Sean,
Please update......
Ab aur na tarsaoo

[shdas]

I think is story ka end ho gaya hain ab ( phir se ) ..
Just to conclude ..

Hariya gutka bahut khata tha ...use mooh ha cancer ho gaya ..use Mumbai se call aa gaya Mukesh ki jagah tobacca NA khaye ka advertisement karne ke liye ( jo pehle Hindi movies main picture shuru se pehle chalta tha )  ..wo mumbai chala gaya ..and ad ke baad wahin mar gaya ..
 
 Ramu ko kitchen main tel nahin mila tha Anita ki maalish ke liye..wo lene wo Iraq chala gaya tha..par USA ki drone ne use waha uda diya ...

Pani Puri wala Anita ke liye teekhi mirch wala paani bana raha tha ghar main..anita ki wajah se use apna lund sehlane ki aadat si ho gayi thi ..wahin mirch wale haath se usne apne lund ko masal diya...itni jalan hui ki use dil ka dauda pad gaya....

Wo sabhi auto waale jo Anita ko taadte the un sabne OLA join kar li aur wo auto stand band ho gaya ...

Ice-Cream wala jo Bazaar ke pass rehta tha usko un Buddho ne jo Anita ki madad nahin kar paye the maar kar bhaga diya 

Raj and Anita ab saath saath sabji lene market jaate hain ....Anita ab mote mote Kheere khareedti hain Hariya ki yaad main  aur Raj ko  un Kheero ki sandwich bana kar khilati hain....par Anita ki gaand aaj bhi Hariya ko nahin bhuli..jab bhi kahin koi anjaan uski gaand ko chuta hain toh uske dil main bas ek hi naam aata hain ..Hariya Ji ..

THE END

[creamydelight]

I think is story ka end ho gaya hain ab ( phir se ) ..
Just to conclude ..

Hariya gutka bahut khata tha ...use mooh ha cancer ho gaya ..use Mumbai se call aa gaya Mukesh ki jagah tobacca NA khaye ka advertisement karne ke liye ( jo pehle Hindi movies main picture shuru se pehle chalta tha )  ..wo mumbai chala gaya ..and ad ke baad wahin mar gaya ..
 
 Ramu ko kitchen main tel nahin mila tha Anita ki maalish ke liye..wo lene wo Iraq chala gaya tha..par USA ki drone ne use waha uda diya ...

Pani Puri wala Anita ke liye teekhi mirch wala paani bana raha tha ghar main..anita ki wajah se use apna lund sehlane ki aadat si ho gayi thi ..wahin mirch wale haath se usne apne lund ko masal diya...itni jalan hui ki use dil ka dauda pad gaya....

Wo sabhi auto waale jo Anita ko taadte the un sabne OLA join kar li aur wo auto stand band ho gaya ...

Ice-Cream wala jo Bazaar ke pass rehta tha usko un Buddho ne jo Anita ki madad nahin kar paye the maar kar bhaga diya 

Raj and Anita ab saath saath sabji lene market jaate hain ....Anita ab mote mote Kheere khareedti hain Hariya ki yaad main  aur Raj ko  un Kheero ki sandwich bana kar khilati hain....par Anita ki gaand aaj bhi Hariya ko nahin bhuli..jab bhi kahin koi anjaan uski gaand ko chuta hain toh uske dil main bas ek hi naam aata hain ..Hariya Ji ..

THE END

Very creative, but let's not be so negative. Writers have real lives which will take precedence

[shdas]

Very creative, but let's not be so negative. Writers have real lives which will take precedence

No Negativity ...I like the  writer's work and totally get  his priorities ..that is why not a single word on him .
This is just pure humor ( or the lack of it ) ...some how did not like this story sitting duck on Page3-4  ..peace

[shaibuu129]

I think is story ka end ho gaya hain ab ( phir se ) ..
Just to conclude ..

Hariya gutka bahut khata tha ...use mooh ha cancer ho gaya ..use Mumbai se call aa gaya Mukesh ki jagah tobacca NA khaye ka advertisement karne ke liye ( jo pehle Hindi movies main picture shuru se pehle chalta tha )  ..wo mumbai chala gaya ..and ad ke baad wahin mar gaya ..
 
 Ramu ko kitchen main tel nahin mila tha Anita ki maalish ke liye..wo lene wo Iraq chala gaya tha..par USA ki drone ne use waha uda diya ...

Pani Puri wala Anita ke liye teekhi mirch wala paani bana raha tha ghar main..anita ki wajah se use apna lund sehlane ki aadat si ho gayi thi ..wahin mirch wale haath se usne apne lund ko masal diya...itni jalan hui ki use dil ka dauda pad gaya....

Wo sabhi auto waale jo Anita ko taadte the un sabne OLA join kar li aur wo auto stand band ho gaya ...

Ice-Cream wala jo Bazaar ke pass rehta tha usko un Buddho ne jo Anita ki madad nahin kar paye the maar kar bhaga diya 

Raj and Anita ab saath saath sabji lene market jaate hain ....Anita ab mote mote Kheere khareedti hain Hariya ki yaad main  aur Raj ko  un Kheero ki sandwich bana kar khilati hain....par Anita ki gaand aaj bhi Hariya ko nahin bhuli..jab bhi kahin koi anjaan uski gaand ko chuta hain toh uske dil main bas ek hi naam aata hain ..Hariya Ji ..

THE END

Hasi i comment padh k but ma samjh sakta hu k ap ne kis pov sy comment kiya hai, ap writer k story slow le k jane py gussa ho rahe ho, dekhe writer ki apni marzi hoti hai k wo story ko kese le k jana chahta hai,,,, mene b feel kiya hai k Story thori c slow hai par likhne wale ka mind ma kya chal raha hai ab ya to wohi jane k wo story ko kese likhe ga,

[shaibuu129]

I think is story ka end ho gaya hain ab ( phir se ) ..
Just to conclude ..

Hariya gutka bahut khata tha ...use mooh ha cancer ho gaya ..use Mumbai se call aa gaya Mukesh ki jagah tobacca NA khaye ka advertisement karne ke liye ( jo pehle Hindi movies main picture shuru se pehle chalta tha )  ..wo mumbai chala gaya ..and ad ke baad wahin mar gaya ..
 
 Ramu ko kitchen main tel nahin mila tha Anita ki maalish ke liye..wo lene wo Iraq chala gaya tha..par USA ki drone ne use waha uda diya ...

Pani Puri wala Anita ke liye teekhi mirch wala paani bana raha tha ghar main..anita ki wajah se use apna lund sehlane ki aadat si ho gayi thi ..wahin mirch wale haath se usne apne lund ko masal diya...itni jalan hui ki use dil ka dauda pad gaya....

Wo sabhi auto waale jo Anita ko taadte the un sabne OLA join kar li aur wo auto stand band ho gaya ...

Ice-Cream wala jo Bazaar ke pass rehta tha usko un Buddho ne jo Anita ki madad nahin kar paye the maar kar bhaga diya 

Raj and Anita ab saath saath sabji lene market jaate hain ....Anita ab mote mote Kheere khareedti hain Hariya ki yaad main  aur Raj ko  un Kheero ki sandwich bana kar khilati hain....par Anita ki gaand aaj bhi Hariya ko nahin bhuli..jab bhi kahin koi anjaan uski gaand ko chuta hain toh uske dil main bas ek hi naam aata hain ..Hariya Ji ..

THE END

I guess writer bohat zeyadha slow sex romance tadpane wala is cheez ko story ma dikha k story likh raha hai

[shdas]

Hasi i comment padh k but ma samjh sakta hu k ap ne kis pov sy comment  kiya hai, ap writer k story slow le k jane py gussa ho rahe ho, dekhe writer ki apni marzi hoti hai k wo story ko kese le k jana chahta hai,,,, mene b feel kiya hai k Story thori c slow hai par likhne wale ka mind ma kya chal raha hai ab ya to wohi jane k wo story ko kese likhe ga,

Nahin dost ..Mujhe writer se NA koi problem hain na shikayat ... its his story , his life ..i am a mere spectator ..wo yeh thread delete kar de kal then also I am fine..
I check this story every day ....dheere dheere yeh page 3 par aa gayi thi ...so maar diya comment ..and dekhiye aap jaise acche logo ne comment kiya and now again the story atleast is visible ..Sean jab aayege agar aayege then will again read :-)

[creamydelight]

True... I also check this story at least once everyday

[Teebone1985]

every writer may be in his ways is living his fantasy through the story he/she is narrating... and every writer enjoys certain aspects more than some others... having read this story numerous times over many many years I did become addicted to it... however the instance where the story was left off last time incompleted for many many years seems to similar to where it is left off now ...which makes it clear that the writer does enjoy writing erotica which leads to sex rather than actual sex itself...

this is just my opinion... i know people or the writer are going to read this and start commenting on top even angrily maybe or subtly, which you all are free to do .... just for them i am still a big fan of this story and writers style....... but i think this could be one reason or there could be multiple valid reasons/events evolving in writers life or thinking.....which I respect... its hard to commit to writing whilst managing the world around you...... even after reading this ...if u still angry or whatever feel free to respond accordingly its a free world afterall han...... 

anyways i do check this story page every day once hoping for it to be updated maybe its become a habit that will eventually wear off like the last time when i came to peace with the fact that there would be no more updates, but honestly after all the begging i did last time for many years... i wont request the writer to post anymore

the way i take this is ....we always have a master piece to the point it was left off.... and thank him for that

[shdas]

every writer may be in his ways is living his fantasy through the story he/she is narrating... and every writer enjoys certain aspects more than some others... having read this story numerous times over many many years I did become addicted to it... however the instance where the story was left off last time incompleted for many many years seems to similar to where it is left off now ...which makes it clear that the writer does enjoy writing erotica which leads to sex rather than actual sex itself...

this is just my opinion... i know people or the writer are going to read this and start commenting on top even angrily maybe or subtly, which you all are free to do .... just for them i am still a big fan of this story and writers style....... but i think this could be one reason or there could be multiple valid reasons/events evolving in writers life or thinking.....which I respect... its hard to commit to writing whilst managing the world around you...... even after reading ...if u still angry or whatever feel free to respond accordingly its a free world afterall han...... 

anyways i do check this story page every day once hoping for it to be updated maybe its become a habit that will eventually wear off like the last time when i came to peace with the fact that there would be no more updates, but honestly after all the begging i did last time for many years... i wont request the writer to post anymore

the way i take this is ....we always have a master piece to the point it was left off.... and thank him for that

Cant agree more ... the very fact which makes this story so unique ( really slow paced erotica )  also makes it more  challenging ( or may be at one point impossible) to write ...there is just no end to a situation or a character ..and every new situation demands the same build up ...i sometimes feel there could have been a character like Jeetu ( who i guess was in last version)  who could have made the story a bit fast paced in some episodes ..and then ofcourse there was Hariya to make it slow erotica ...nevertheless great erotica and  if this is it then so be it ....

[imles4le]

I think is story ka end ho gaya hain ab ( phir se ) ..
Just to conclude ..

THE END

Ohhhhhh.... itni jaldi kahani band ho gai.... plssssss.... koi ise age badhao....५

[imles4le]

Very creative, but let's not be so negative. Writers have real lives which will take precedence

Right.....