Adultery Maids Conspiracy

[Dilbar420]

I think aditi should also give a chance to close encounter with bhiva convinced by among of these girls

[Dilbar420]

Is that any story like this story' "MAIDS CONSPIRACY"please suggest name

[vicks_ki_ipill]

Dear Author, I randomly just went through this story of yours and saw that its your first story. My wishes for you

Although I am still reading the PART 8 at the moment and I know I am quite late in giving the initial suggestions for the story but still I have a few, if you're keen to accept.

Honestly when I started reading this story and was finishing PART 1,  I genuinely felt that finally after so long I've luckily come across a story which sounds to have a great potential to turn into a masterpiece story. I must say your story's initial buildup was excellent and quite grasping. 
The story's concept, the dialogs, the storyline, the characters and mainly the conversation between them looks so genuine. I was total bang on.
It Looked as if I am reading some mature author whose idea of the story is to give it a realistic approach but but but sorry to say soon my expectations started dropping when I was finishing PART 2.
                    Right now I am on chapter 8 mid and I can already predict what would happen next. You are already on the path to make Aditi a slutty character which I was most afraid of, and trust me this would turn out to be the downfall of the story which would make the story of grade b type.

In the starting, you showed that Aditi is today's generation modern and educated woman who actually loves her husband and is very loyal kind but just after  watching a single video made her weak to a level that she started imagining Anna in her dreams in first go itself. But still giving it  benefit of doubt and assuming its okay as it could be natural for a loyal human as well if one sees that kind of exotic stuff but what you ruined in that was the sexual relation of Aditi and her Husband. Was it really necessary to show that Aditi's husband is so so soft or bad at sex?  You are already showing as if Aditi has very bad sex life which actually show that Aditi will be an easy target. You shouldn't have to show their sex life so dull.
In PART 6 itself, she has started losing her personality and has no objection in mating with Anna on those stairs. Although its not happened in actual but still we get an idea that she has already lost the battle of maintaining her strong character which we all were proud of a moment before. She is opening accepting to make out with Anna in front of Meena. I'm worried, in the next few episodes Aditi herself would start using that crude language, & then nothing will be left in the story as there won't remain any difference between Aditi or Meera or Nalini. Trust me slutty characters are never exciting. You're making her too easy to get in such a short span of time. 
                                   Also, I think you now are rotating the story too much on the base of those sex videos and it has started becoming boring a bit. It looks as if Meena will do the complete work of manipulation and changing Aditi's mindset on the basis of those videos itself and Anna will get Aditi as a easy wrapped gift without doing much. The seduction process is looking too easy now and Aditi is looking like a warrior who has already lost the battle. she has already become easy in eyes of MEENA which shouldn't have happened so early. Aditi now has no objection to anything MEENA says, she even was cool when MEENA bought another MMS of nalini. How can one change so quickly. Strange !!
Its looks as if even the character NALINI is also being forced to change ADITI's perception of mind. Which Mother in law laughs when her own son's wife is being talked about being fucked. At least she should raise some real concern there but nothing comes from her. 
Sorry but It now has slowly started looking like a porn instead of sex story now where things happen illogically.
 
I think you should give some twists and show Aditi a tuff character who is not that easy to seduce. May be, she somehow gets to know that Meena is the culprit and she is manipulating he working alongside with Anna. Things would definitely change from there and it would become tuff job for Anna to get Aditi after that. This would make the story interesting and hard to predict. This was just an idea as I'm sure you would have many others in your talented mind. 




I have a few pointers for any story if you'd like to apply them:


1. Most stories here on Xossipy have that same centuries old plot, making it very pathetic and boring.
   Step 1 > Husband will be shown loving but quite weak in sex who climaxes too early in bed but his wife will have a very high sex libido, thus husband keeping her physically unsatisfied. This approach eventually makes it very predictable that soon wife is going to get seduced.  [In our story it looks a bit like that]
   Step 2> Then, slowly the wife after getting seduced easily by someone slowly turn into a whore character who doesn't even care of her husband anymore. Worse, wife & lover sometimes even start humiliating the husband. End of the story. Right ?
Honestly, this plot is so common and so pathetic. Please don't follow the same approach in your story as well.


2. Always remember you are writing a sex story and not writing some porn script where things happen illogically at very fast pace. Always make your plots & circumstances sound realistic. Making Aditi weak and easy each and every time should not be the objective.

3. Its always fun and exciting when wife and husband are madly in love and are happy with each other in every aspect of life including sex. Real excitement unfolds when, even if at this 'all good stage', things change & wife still gets slowly seduced somehow. Let's see how you do it?
keeping my fingers crossed]

Seducing a Loyal, tuff and a strong character woman is an art in itself and far far more exciting than the woman who is quite easy & readily available  and desperate for attention of other men.

> Here till now personality of Aditi was shown strong & she looks like a perfect wife wife till now. Fingers cross how her personality turns out to be.

4. Please don't ever turn ADITI into some characterless cock hungry betraying slut woman who  easily opens her legs. Use logics in your story plot which are hard to question. Make the situations look realistic which you are actually doing till now.
Circumstances should always look realistic. Avoid illogical sex scripts.

If ADITI  is displayed as a loyal, strong character and a loving wife then it would be always hard for ANNA to get into her pants which is the real fun. This would create more interest in the story. Make her hard to get. Make her strong in eyes of MEENA.
Even if she gets intimate withy ANNA in some unavoidable situation, don't change her character in to some cheap whore which would make her easier to bed again. Maintain her dignity at all costs so that its always difficult to get her.

Don't ever snatch away the love and respect between the couple Aditi and her Husband because that makes the woman vulnerable and easy to get. Every one loves a woman who is devoted to love.

3. Never be in a hurry to make ADITI fuck by ANNA. Always remember, the day ADITI gets fucked, it would steal away some excitement for sure because that will make readers assume that, now she has become easy target to get. So take your time and build your story. Think it through and turn into a beautiful story. Small incidents should keep happening keeping us readers on edge which would slowly move towards its goal.
Otherwise it would be just like watching a porn which is useless.

4. One final suggestion. please story listening to each and every reader. Remember its you who started the story so just go with the slow place. Don't be in a hurry to give steamy sex till its actually required.
Always Remember, its an erotic story and not some cheap porn.

 
I hope that helps. My best wishes for you.

Thanks

Dear story writer, you are outstanding, i have read so many stories here, but you are the superb till date, your story telling is very touchy and full of emotion, but i am totally agree with **critic_honest** whatever points he has mentioned is very good and necessary for masterpiece, whatever i was feeling the same points mr. **Critic_honest** mentioned, i hope you will keep it mind and make a masterpiece. Thank u

[xboard1986]

Aditi se Pehle spruha ki choot me jayega anna ka ganna

[Dilbar420]

Bhai kb update doge aap koi date time kch to aap bta do daily wait krta hu update ka bro achi story h esilia wait ni hota

[Vijay41]

Update bro.

[Rizzi1198]

We want update today

[KingRocks]

Outstanding story

[WriterPK]

Best story bro ?.. pls try to give regular update.. excellent writing skills..

[Nostalgic]

Part 29

 Divya and Meenal started their attempts to make a tower with Aditi now. 

Spruha looked at Anna and was feeling a little nervous now… ever since she saw that panty her mind was filled with lots of thought about Anna and Aditi. 
 Things Spruha noticed from the last few days like Anna and Aditi's eye contacts, the way Aditi talks with Anna. Spruha was suspecting that something is going on between Anna and Aditi but she was not sure.But from the moment she saw Aditi's cum filled panty in Anna's bag along with a few condoms, Her mind stopped working . It was clear to Spruha that Aditi is sleeping with Anna. The thought of Aditi getting laid by Anna itself was arousing and out of the world for her. How can such a classy, beautiful and smart lady having a physical relationship with a 60 year old sabji wala… 
     Anna is old and till last few years he was living in a small village, just because his land was sold for building construction he got rich but still his lifestyle never changed. But who cares how much wealth Anna has… There is something special that attracts women towards Anna, and Spruha knows what it is. Since Anna is well equipped Aditi had spread legs for him but Spruha was thinking how come Aditi got to know about his size? How did he approach Aditi?   Definitely Aditi won't simply agree for him by looking at his size there must be some magic he would have done on Aditi. 
Spruha recalled some discussions that happened in her house on the dining table, How mummyji ( Nalini) was praising Anna how he managed last year's trip so well. He was no less than the tour managers.  Even Papaji(Manoj) also praises Anna for his contribution in solving society issues.  He is definitely a smart man. Maybe I didn't notice his smartness but Aditi being smart herself must have understood Anna well before me. But how come their affair started? There must be some bridge ? or some incident that triggered this relationship… .. 
  whatever Spruha was thinking was not completely true, Yes there was something going on between Anna and Aditi but it was not reached till this point.  The highest point of their relationship happened just a few mins back and that was  Anna touching Aditis pussy over her shorts , and Aditi didn't like it because everyone was just a few meters away from her. That triggered the first setback for Anna and Aditis relationship… 
            But Spruha was unaware of this, Even Spruha noticed in the changing room how Aditi fumbled when Anna's topic was brought in between.  She was thinking that Aditi sensed that I am aware of their relationship so that is why when I was going to bring that flying disc they both looked at me and then they stopped talking and then Aditi started walking towards the sea. But now why was she asking to switch places? Why is she asking me to go on Anna's shoulder?  Does she just don't want me to not think more of their affair?  Or ?… . Or??  Or????  Is she suggesting something???? 
ohh my god… Spruhas heart started beating faster and faster… All the incidents , discussions and videos coming to her mind and final output of all was the same… just physical pleasure . That is natural… this is how nature behaves.  Why did Zubi go to Raja? Why is Rachana doing this with Bhiva? why couldn't Sana deny Bhiva after a certain time, he didn't force her, it was her call to let him take her without protection… 
why did Aditi let Anna fuck her on terrace?  How Meenal and Divya were also aroused the same way I did… Simple explanation is everyone wants it, but on face no one can accept that. Just in case if they get a chance no one says no to it. No one openly agrees to such things, rather keep it discreet only. As Aditi told while speaking in the afternoon, If alpha males want to take any woman they make it happen, That is why Rachana Or Sana couldn't fight with Bhiva they simply let him take what he deserves. Maybe that is how nature makes the balance.. otherwise it was not like they were not happy in their marriages, it's just the nature or the animal instincts in our human body surrendered to the powerful force that was attracting them. 
Since humans are more civilized and they are not fighting for food anymore and they don't have to fight with other men to win a woman. Human invented this marriage concept to make balance in society and make it very sacred otherwise there would have been too much fight and it would have always been violence. This marriage gives a breeding chance to the other bigger group of non-alpha males also, otherwise it would have been the only strong and alpha male would have bred the females like other animals.  But these marriage arrangements were done by humans as they evolve but they are still part of this nature. They can't ignore the ultimate and basic feeling for a strong partner and if someone is saying otherwise it's simply a lie. So when an alpha male approaches a female she may hesitate a little because of how brainwashing happening throughout generations but no one is above nature. 
      Lot of discussion about alpha male and how attraction towards them is natural. These discussions happened between Aditi and Spruha in the afternoon. Spruha understood from Aditis talks that if Bhiva would have got some more time she would have end up getting fucked by him. Having sex with someone else was something sinful thing for her but no more now, people around her are doing it….. 

 Spruha went near Anna she was not sure why Aditi asked her to switch the pairs but she was feeling more nervous and excited also.. 

Spruha:” Anna batayiye kaise chadhana hai… aapke ke kandhe pe.. “ ( Anna tell me how to climb on your shoulders..) 

Anna was feeling low because of the way Aditi behaved with him. No one talked with him like that so far, he thought of just lift Spruha and put her on his shoulders… 
But it would look like why he didn't do the same when Aditi was here, he thought just calm down and go with the flow… 
Then Anna bent a little down in knees and asked her to put her foot on his knees… 
When Spruha was about to keep foot because of the wave she got disbalanced and instead of keeping her foot on his knees it went a little ahead and hit his dick, her sole of foot touched his dick. It was now flaccid but still it was bigger Spruha sensed it. As her leg hit his dick Anna jerked and moaned “ Aahhhh”

Spruha and Anna was face to face and she immediately put her hand on her mouth in embarrassment and started laughing… “ Sorry Anna… Sorry sorry“ She was not able to control her laugh… Anna was trying to control his smile but as he saw Spruha start laughing like a teenage girl, she couldn't control it at all, since she was already nervous, something she was overthinking about and accidentally she touched his dick…This laugh was good icebreaker to kill that nervousness and Anna initially tried controlling but the way Spruha laughed he also started laughing. Since Aditi just left him in an insulting way, Spruhas willing and joyful company he immediately liked. 

Other ladies looked at them but they didn't understand and they continued with their play.... Aditi looked for a few seconds but Divya asked her to look at her… 

For a minute Anna instructed Spruha how he will help her to get on his shoulder and then he  took the position again… Spruha raised her leg and kept on his knees. One thing Anna noticed was that Spruha was wearing running shorts and those were loose on her thighs. As she raised her leg her shorts got raised and more of her thigh was exposed.. She put hands on Anna's shoulder and stood on his hand which was kept on his knees. When Anna raised his hand Spruha got disbalanced and the crotch area touched on Anna's face. Anna was not doing anything naughty like he did with Aditi.  He was careful with Spruha since he doesn't know what is in Spruhas mind.. 
He raised his hand so easily as if he was lifting a two kg bag… 
He stood up now… Spruha was standing in his hand… his hands were near his belly.. Spruha was holding his head for balance, Her pussy was just a few centimeters away from Anna's face… Now in the next step, Spruha has to lift her left leg and put it on his right shoulder and the right leg on his right shoulder…Ultimately she will be sitting on his shoulders… . 
Spruha said to Anna, she is going to put her left leg on his shoulder now…. She tried to raise her leg but she losing her balance, In this part she was feeling Anna's hands were shaking a little. she raised her left leg… and since her pelvic was in front of Anna's face, when she raised her left leg, her short pant raised too high… and since it was very loose on thighs…From the bottom of her shorts Anna saw her red panty with small white flowers on it … That was too much for Anna. Her left leg was raised and she had put her left thigh on his right shoulder… she was planning to turn a little and slide her left leg through his left shoulder.. But she felt Anna's hand moved little bit.. She was in that awkward position where her leg was raised and from the bottom of her shorts Anna could see her panty.. As she sensed Anna's hand shaking a little, she looked down towards Anna, Anna also looked at her ….Anna understood that Spruha was not aware that she was giving an unwitting display of her panties to Anna. Anna avoided looking into her shorts and looked on the other side. The way Anna turned his head,Spruha realized that Anna was avoiding looking in front and then she realized she was giving a display of her panty to Anna. So far she was giggling and kept on talking …but at this point she shut her mouth. As she stopped talking then Anna looked up and their eyes met. Both got confused now what to do next? They didn't know what was going on in each other's mind. Spruha started pulling her leg down… Anna sensed it and looked to his left side… Here in Spruhas mind a lot of chaos is going on, shall I keep the leg as it is? Or pull it down?  She had already pulled her let down and her foot was already on Anna's hand again. But she was thinking if Aditi can do it then why not me?   If she would have not been aware of Aditi's matter definitely she would have not thought the way she was thinking right now. Here Anna was not approaching at all, but the events of the whole day and discussions happened telling her it's  natural, others are doing it, why not you? she was thinking if I raise my leg again and keep on his shoulder again it will give a direct message to him. That would lead to committing adultery. Definitely she was not an easy target for Anna but since Aditi's matter progressed in such a way that it was a kind of validation from Aditi and that was a very crucial one for Spruha. If Aditi is doing it then lets try it and see where it takes.. 
   Spruha thought for a few seconds, Anna started lowering his hand to put Spruha down… but Spruha made her mind, she raised her leg again and kept foot on his right shoulder… Anna's hand was already lowered so the right foot was on his hand, Spruha didn't say anything but one can see her leg was stretched too much, she was in an awkward position. Anna raised his hand just a little to make her comfortable..
 They looked at each other with a momentary but meaningful connection.Spruha stayed there silently, Anna thinking that as a positive sign looked into her shorts, He saw the shape of Spruhas cute young and small pussy in her red panty…. And then looked back towards her.   She opened her mouth in shock by the direct approach by Anna… and then blushed, her face was red. It was no secret that Anna looked at the most private part of her body and in response to that she was blushing so Anna got the required signal,  without wasting  moved his face forward and gave a gentle kiss on her inner thigh, she grabbed his hairs tightly… Anna looked at her again… she was looking at him and she was breathing heavily… Anna looked at other ladies, they were still struggling on their knees and Meenal was giving support to Aditi. No one was facing towards Anna and Spruha… Anna looked at Spruha… and lowered his hand just a little so that her pussy was near his face.. and again moved his face forward… Spruha can feel his breath on her inner thighs… and then she felt Anna's warm breath near her leg joint… Anna clearly saw one side of her panty… he leaned and smelled her panty… and then again checked if these girls were looking here… Spuha also turned and checked.. and then Both Anna and Spruha looked at each other… This time before Anna leaned forward Spruhas moved pelvic forward to meet his face … This time Anna pushed the bottom of her shorts aside and directly touched his mouth on her pussy over her red panty… Spruha grabbed his hairs so tightly and let out a small moan..”unnn”… without wasting a second Anna took almost the whole of her pussy in his mouth, her cute and tiny barbie pussy was in Anna's mouth, For the first time in his life he was touching a small and closed pussy lips, He didn't see her pussy yet but he understood the size and shape of it. It looked like the pussy of those hot beach models, very tiny but cute pussy lips ..… . he grabbed the outer lips of her pussy in his mouth and gave a big suction 4-5 times. That was the next level of experience for Spruha.. She never experienced this, Pavan licked her there some times but with so powerful suction on her pussy she was experiencing for the first time, she felt like pussy was being sucked out… She moaned in a very low voice… Anna left her pussy after suction… and again looked at other girls…..all this happened within a span of 30-35 seconds and then he told Spruha.. “ Chadho ab kandhe pe… “ ( Get on by shoulders) 
She raised her leg this time Anna didn't do anything, Spruha was expecting some action from Anna but he signaled nodding his head “ No..“... When she put her left leg on his right  shoulder and sat there… Anna simply held her by the waist and lifted her and put her on his shoulders… She was sitting on Anna's shoulders as per the first level. Just to show others that they completed the first step and not to let them be suspicious about her, they started cheering… 

Spruha shouted… :”hooooooo… we did it… “

Meenal , Divya and Aditi looked with surprise… 

Meenal :” Itani jaldi? “ ( How fast?) 

Anna:” Hamari ekdm sahi team hai…kya bolti ho Spruha? “ ( Our team is good… what do you say Spruha?) 

Spruha :” Yes Anna… we are the best“ And both gave high-five. 

Aditi looked with a smile but Anna ignored her.. After going there she realized that she spoke very rudely…  

Meenal :” Anna kaise kiya aapne? “ ( How did you do it?) 

Anna:” Jaisa tumhne bola waise hi… “ ( The way you told that way only… ) 

Anna again looking at Spruha.. :” Spruha utaro… inse nahi ho payega… hame hi madat karani padegi… “ ( Spruha get down… They can't make it… we will have to help them… ) 

Spruha:” Bechare… .” ( Ohh.. Poor.) 

Meenal shouted.. :” No need for your help… . We know how to do it… “  Spruha and Anna started laughing… .. It looked like Meenal took it on her ego… 

Divya.. :” Anna usko anadr pani mai fenk dijiye… “ (  Anna throw her in deep water..)  Divya looked at Spruha and said… 
And giggled… Anna also. laughed.. 

Meenal asked Divya and Aditi to focus now… 

Spruha said.. To Anna.. :” Anna thoda anadar leke chaliye na… par fenkana nahi ha.. “ ( Anna please take into little deep water… but don't throw me)  since Meenal and team doesn't want Annas help and Spruha was asking Anna to take into a little deep water. it was chance for Anna to explore more.. 


Anna walked into deep water , water level was at his neck… Even though Spruha was on his shoulder she was scared, she said not this much deep. 

They were now far away from other ladies, if they speak also others can't hear at all.. 

Anna facing towards Aditi and group , his and Spruhas back was towards sea..…with his both hands he was holding Spruha by her waist, But now he held her waist by left hand and put his right hand on Spruhas outer thigh… and looked up… he can't see her face properly but he just gave hint that something is coming up for her… he slowly slide his right hand in her shorts through her outer thighs and since it was happening on back side.. Even though if other ladies look here they won't see Anna's hand , They might think it is on her waist only…he slowly slid his hand inside and he could feel Spruhas right ass cheek. He gently squeezed it… Spruha lifted her right buttok little to give his hand an access… Then Anna pushed his hand inside her panty.. And he squeezed her whole right ass cheek. He could feel the perfect round shape ass cheek , it was tight with smooth skin. Spruha tightened her grip on his hairs. 

Anna looked at her and said.. :” Spruha… kaisa lag rha hai? “ ( How do you feel?)   He was slowly squeezing her ass cheek .. 

Spruha blushed but didn't answer… 

Anna again… :” Spruha… kya kulle hai tumhare… aur ye gaand bhi… (Spruha.. What an ass you have.. And this anus also..) 
Anna placed his middle finger in her ass crack… and with left hand he pushed her upward.. She understood and she lifted her butt little up again giving him access… . Anna pointed his finger on her butt hole and started slowly rubbing it. It was a slow and gentle rub that was giving a tingling sensation and too much arousal to Spruha.. 

Spruha didn't say anything but she was wiggling her hips and she grabbed his hairs tightly… He then tried to touch her pussy but it was getting difficult in this pose… he looked at her and said… 
Anna : “ Chut mai ungali dalun kya? “ ( Shall finger your pussy?) 

Spruha was hearing such vulgar words for the first time, she was already  aroused his words were making extra effect… 

She looked at others and nodded her head in no but she was blushing , Anna took that Yes… 

Anna lifted her by the waist and turned her …now she was facing the sea and her back was towards other ladies.. Her pussy was on Anna's face but Anna didn't keep her in that pose… he just simply left her… she fell in water… since the water level was till Anna's chest… Spruhas shouted… :” Nahii… “( Nooo)  but Anna's one hand was below her back, so as not to let her drown.… and one hand was holding her thighs… Spruha panicked… Even other ladies looked at them and started laughing… . 

Anna:” Daro mat… try to karo tairane ka”( Don't be afraid… try to swim..)  He was pretending as if he wanted to teach her swimming… 
He slowly pushed his right hand between her thighs… and said.. 

Anna said loudly ” Daro mat… kuch nahi hoga…try karo…”  After that in a low voice he said..” bs bich bich mai darane ki acting karana….. Taki unko lage pani mai tairane ke koshish kar rahi hai… “ ( Don't be afraid… nothing will happen… just in between shout so that they will think that… you are trying to swim  ) 

Other ladies looked at them, Divya started laughing and said something that these guys couldn't hear because Spruha was continuously splashing water… . Once Anna saw other ladies not looking here… he looked at Spruhas face and said.. 

Anna:” bahut sundar dikhti ho… “ (You look beautiful) 

Spruha blushed… Anna was slowly creasing her ass cheek under water.. 

Anna:” Spruha .. kya gaand hai tumhari? “ ( Spruha… what an ass you have?)   Spruha who was already aroused.. Was going mad with Anna's words… 

Spruha looked into his eyes as she felt his hand inside short on her ass cheeks and in between touching his finger on her butt hole.. This is the highest level of arousal she experienced in her life.. 

Anna:” Office ke liye jb sari pahanke jati ho… man karta hai.. sari uthake tumhe jam kar chodun… fir gili chut se… tuze office bhejun…….“ (While going to the office you wear a sari right… I feel like just raise your sari and fuck you roughly and then send you to office with wet pussy. )  He said this and touched his finger on her pussy directly for the first time… she let out moan directly looking into his eyes as he touched her pussy… her mouth was open… 

To touch her pussy he has to make some adjustment, when he left one had from Spruhas back she got scared little… but Anna told her not to worry, Anna's words gave her assurance. 
Spruhas head and chest were above water and the remaining body was under water. 
To access her pussy, Anna slowly pulled her panty and shorts down , till her mid thighs. 

Spruha was shocked and said. :” Anna puri mat nikaliye… “ ( Anna please don't pull it out..)   This is first time she spoke something openly to stop Anna but in that also she was allowing him to pull her panty till her thighs which so far done by her husband only.. 

Anna:” Daro mat… bharosa hai mujh pe? “ ( Don't worry… do you believe me?) 

Spruha Looked into his eyes and nodded yes.. 

Anna squeezed her ass again and without wasting a second….he was feeling Spruhas naked ass cheeks in his palms and then slowly rubbed her pussy…..He felt her slit from top to bottom and bottom to top for some time. Spruha was looking into his eyes with an open mouth , she was breathing heavily….

Anna was feeling her pussy for some time directly looking into her eyes.. 

Anna:”Spruha kitani tight our choti chut hai tumhari… “ ( Spruha how tight and tiny pussy you have   ) 

Spruha didn't say anything she just blushed.. 

Anna rubbed her pussy and then slowly pushed his middle finger inside her… she was aroused and wet, she closed her eyes and she experienced finger penetration….. it was tight.. Anna said.. 

Anna:” Spruha… kitani tight hai tumhari chut aisa lag rha hai pahali baar andar kuch andar ja rha hai..… “ ( Spruha… how tight your pussy is… It looking like first time something going inside..) 

Spruha:” Ohh. Uunnnnn”  Anna looked into her eyes he can feel how much aroused that young woman was… 

Spruha let out a small moan… as Anna slowly started pumping it in and out… then he started half rotating it from left to right and right to left… Spruha moaned..”Ohh.. “  
Anna:” Unagli pe itana tight lag rahi hai… lund ghusane par kaise lagegi tumhari chut… “

Spruha… just looked at his face.. With “ Ohh..hmnn.. “

Anna:” Lund legi na mera… tumhari chut mai? “ ( You will take my dick your pussy right?) 

Spruha..didn't say anything.. Blushed and looked at the other side… 

Anna increased his finger movements… 

Anna:” Spruha chudegi kya mujhse? “ ( Spruha will you get fucked by me?) 

Spruha was blushing… she was avoiding eye contact with Anna… 

Anna did something and slowly stepped forward… he stopped moving his finger and he pulled his finger out… Spruha looked at Anna's face… 
Anna slowly pointed his dick in front of her pussy and pulled her and rubbed his dick on her pussy… Spruha was shocked and tried to push her leg on Anna's thigh to keep his dick away from her pussy and her leg slipped.. She came down and Anna pushed at the same time and Spruha felt the big dick head of Anna pressed against her pussy, Anna moved it a bit and pushed just a little inside.. Her eyes widened, her body tensed… she gripped tightly on Anna's shoulder… and she moaned “Eeeeiiennnn.. “ 
Anna pushed a little further… . She tightened her lips and eyes with this movement…it was a little painful and she opened her eyes after two seconds and said.. 
Spruha:” Anna aise mat kariye… “ (Anna don't do it this way..)  She was breathing heavily… 

Anna didn't remove it and just  pretended as If he didn't hear… Anna:” Kya boli? “( What did you say?)  He pushed it further and his complete dick head was in her pussy now, she was feeling her pussy was stretched like never before… . It was a little painful but more of a never experienced pleasure she ever felt. She was getting aroused by lots of discussion around sex from the afternoon. She looked into Anna's bag and got to know about Aditi's panties and condoms.  Perception about Anna was totally changed for her since she was thinking Anna had already won Aditi…and that same Anna technically fucking her under water… . 

Spruha moaned again and said… :” Umnn… Anna please aise nahiiiiiiii“ ( Umnn.. Anna please not like thisssssss ) 

Anna:” aise nahi to Kaise?? “ ( Then how??) 

Spruha was feeling the pressure of his dick was slowly increasing on her pussy… 

Spruha:” condom laga kr.. “ ( with condom)  Spruha had thought about it but when she was accepting for the first time openly it was still difficult to believe that things are progressing too fast. 

Anna smiled and then pulled his dick and asked “kya boli thik se batao… ? “ ( What did you say? … tell me once again) 

Even though dick was already removed from her pussy she was still breathing heavily, her mouth was still wide open… . 
She smiled and looked back at the other girls no one was looking here and she turned and said… 
Spruha:” Condom laga kr kijiye… “ ( Do it with a condom.. “) 

Anna:” Kya karu condom laga kr.. “ ( What shall i do with condom) 

Spruha blushed and :” Aap jo abhi kr rahe the wo… “ ( What you were doing ..the same)   She was aroused now, she was feeling very shy while saying this… . 

Anna:” Mai kya kar rha tha ? “ ( What I was doing?) 

Spruha couldn't control her smile and she looked at the other side… Anna pulled her waist down again and she felt his dick near her pussy again…  and Anna asked again  what I was doing? 

Spruha widened her eyes and blushed again as she felt Anna's dick near her pussy… 

Anna:” Mai kya kar rha tha??? “ ( what I was doing?) 

Spruha:” aap wo kr rhe the....… “ (You were doing it.. That) She blushed… 

Anna rubbed on her pussy again and asked… :” mujhe samajh aaye aise bata…mai kya kar rha tha? … “ ( I should be able to understand tell me in that way… what I was doing.?) 
He pushed his dick again… . 

Spruha “ Anannna… .. Aise nahi ….nahhhhiii“( Anannnna… not like this)  as she felt the pressure of his dick on her pussy again… 

Anna:” Mai kya kar rha hun? “ ( What am I doing?)  Saying this he slowly pushed his dick inside again…and the tip of his dick just entered her pussy again,It was not easy for her to accommodate such a size immediately. Spruha knew if she didn't answer he would keep on penetrating it… . She wants it but not without a condom… 

Spruha:” You are fucking me… . “ She blushed and before she could take a breath… Anna pushed his bulbous again inside her pussy, this time it was a little smooth entry… 

Anna :” Mujhe samajh aaye aise batao… .” ( Tell me in the way I can understand… )  he was giving slow pressure on his duck… and dick was already 4 inches inside her pussy… she was sensing that her pussy was filled up, The friction on her pussy walls. This was the highest level of sensation Spruha experienced so far.. But she knew she can't do without protection. 

Spruha looked into Anna's eyes and said “Anna aap mujhe chod rahe ho….. please condom laga kr chudiye.” ( You are fucking me… . But please wear condom and then fuck me.  ) 
Anna looked into her eyes and still kept his dick inside her… 

Anna:” Mai kahan kya kr rha hun? “ ( I am not doing anything) 
He could feel that slowly her pussy was becoming lubricant and letting his dick slide in… he pushed one more inch inside her… 

She was feeling for the first time something has gone so deep in her pussy. Her facial expressions were totally different, Anna could see that Spruha was losing control of her body now… . 

Spruha:”Annnnuaaa… . Ummmnn.. nahiiii nnna”

Anna:”man kar rha hai… aise khade khade hi tumhe khapa-khap… . Khapa-khap chodu… “( I am feeling like.. Just fuck you here as standing like this..) 

Spruha looked into his eyes… she was aroused but she got alert, she knew this should be stopped here since both are getting excited here… 

Spruha:”  ummnnoo…Nahiiii… Anna.. aise nahi… please aaj raat ko condom laga ke kr lijiye….. “ ( No.. Anna.. Not like this… please at night please do it with condom… ) 


Anna looked her pleasing face and then slowly removed his dick till tip was still inside… and asked her one more time. M

Anna:” bs ek bar anadar ghusa deta hun… “ ( Just once I will push it inside… ) 

Spruha immediately responded… :” Anna aise nahi, bahut bada hai aapka..…please aram se karate hai na......“ ( Anna , not like this, yours is very big…… please..will do it slowly…) 

Anna was still looking into her eyes, he was feeling difficult to control his urge to penetrate fully in Spruha pussy … 

Spruha sensed it… she can see how impatient Anna was becoming:” Anna aapka bahut bada bhi hai…..thode aram se aur condom laga kr kijiye na, ….  Mujhe bhi chahiye ye…par aise nahi..“ ( Anna yours is big… With a condom and a little gently we can do it…I also want it but not this way)   Anna accepted it, it was big achievement that Spruha accepted that she also wants it.. 

Anna understood the situation here and pulled his dick out… then he  pulled her panties and shorts up… and pushed his dick in his shorts… And then started teaching Spruha how to swim… in just a few mins… lots of things happened here. Spruha has taken the first dick apart from her husband in her pussy. Even though it was just half inside her, but still technically other than her husband's dick inserted inside her pussy… 

While teaching her Anna asked her slowly again… 

Anna:” Kab karna hai? “ ( When will we do it?) 

Spruha blushed and.. :” Wo aap dekh lena.. “ ( That you figure out… ) 

Anna:” Mujhe akele ko hi karna hai.? “ ( Am I doing it alone?) 

Spruha giggled… :” Kahan aur kab karna hai ye aapko dekhana hai… par kisi ko pata lagna nahi chahiye… “ ( When and where to do it that you will see… . But know one should get an idea  … ) 

Anna:” Kisi ko samajh nahi aayega… “ ( No one will get to know… ) 
Spruha smiled looking at him… . 

Anna said… let's go and see what they are doing…  And they went near other ladies… 

Aditi was climbing till., Divyas shoulder now and she was trying to turn… but she lost balance and fell in water… 

Meenal mockingly blamed it on Anna and Spruha… saying you came here that is why she fell down… 

Anna offered them help again… this time all three said.. No help required, we can manage ourselves, we were almost there… 

Anna said:” Thik hai… hame kya? “ ( Ok… why should we care..) 

Anna:” Chalo swimming sikhata hun tumne… “ ( Lets go I will teach you swimming… ) 

Spruha said.. :” Han chaliye.. “( Let's go..) 

When she came inside the water with Anna and said in a low voice..… “ Swimming sikhane ke chakkar mai fir se shuru mat karna… “ ( In order to teach me swimming don't start it again… ) she was referring to what Anna did a few mins back while teaching her swimming.. 

Anna:” Kya nahi shuru karu? … .  “ ( What should I not start?...) 

Spruha covered her face… laughed and said… :” Han wahi… “( Yes.. that is what.) 

Anna:” Mann to kar raha hai ki… .. “ ( My mind is saying… ) 

Spruha :” Kya kah tha hai aapka mann? “ ( what is your mind saying? ) Spruha asked, blushing… 

Anna:” Ki yahi ret mai tumhe pura nanga kar ke… . Jam kr chodun… pura lund ghusa kr jam kar chudai karu tumhari… . Aur fir tumhari chut mai mera pura ka pura beej dalun… “(That to make you naked and fuck you in this sand… my whole dick penetrating deep inside want to fuck you passionately… .. And wanted to shoot cum deep inside you) 

Spruha was shocked, she covered her mouth..… she was blushing… 

Anna looked at Spruha for some time, he can't believe this beautiful woman is going to get fucked by him. 

Then Anna went into shallow water but he walked away from other ladies… Spruha also walked behind him before he asked himself… 
water level was till his belly button.. Spruha came near him and smiled… she knew he came here because he was going to do something… 

[Nostalgic]

Anna's back was towards other ladies… he asked Spruha to come in front of him. They were away from other ladies… and playing independently on their own. 
He did something underwater with a waistband of his shorts, Spruha understood that he had taken out his dick again… he looked back at other ladies once and then looked at Spruha again and went a few steps in shallow water.. And asked Spruha to come in front of him… and when Spruha was in front of him, he did something with his shorts and suddenly his dick sprang out, outside the water… his bulbous and some portion was out of water… it was pointing to the sky. Spruha was shocked by the sheer size of that bulbous… 
Spruha Covered her mouth… and shook her head… :” Ohh my god….Kitna bada hai ye “ ( Ohh my God..how big it is… ) 

Anna just smiled and looked at her… she again looked at that dick and said… 

Spruha:” Anna dekh kar hi dar lag rha hai…” ( Anna just by looking at it i am scared.. ) 

Anna:” Yahi abhi tumhari chut mai jakar aya hai… “ ( This was inside your pussy … ) 

Spruha looked at the size and can't believe she took such a big dick… but it was just half inside her. 

Anna:” Chudana hai ya nahi? “ ( Do you want to get fucked or not?) 

Spruha blushed.. She turned first covering her mouth and after a few seconds turned back and said… :” Par aap dhire dhire karoge na? “ ( You will do it slowly right?) 

Anna:” Kya? “ ( what?)   Spruha blushed and looked into his eyes trying to control her smile… she looked into his eyes for two seconds and then.. 

Spruha:” Aap… mujhe….. thode pyar se… . “ She couldn't control laugh… 

Anna just kept looking at her… she again looked back at Anna and started laughing  .

Anna:” Kya thik se batao… nahi to wapis andar jayega.. “ ( What? Tell me clearly..  Otherwise it will go inside again)    Anna said this but both knew he was kidding… 

Spuha smiled, who was too much aroused and was liking this vulgar communication and said with a smile on her face .. 
Spruha:” Jab bhi aap mujhe chodenge…  please dhire dhire se chodiye… ..” ( Whenever you will fuck me… please fuck me slowly..)  She can't believe she was talking like this… but once you are in heat, you do alot of nasty things . 

Anna said. :” Bahut pyar se chodunga Spruha tumhe… …aise ki tujhe meri lat lagani chahiye.. “ ( I will fuck you with a love… So that you get addicted) 

Spruha was looking at his dick closely… She remembered what Aditi talked about Bhivas dick and then she realized that indeed Anna's dick was also looking like a big python looking at her… 

Spruha smiled… and splashed water on him.. 

Then Anna sat in the water which was just till his waist… As he sat.. water level reached till his neck.. And his whole body was underwater… Spruha was around 3 feets away from him… he started pumping his dick inside water with his right hand, he told Spruha to come near him when he says… He was already aroused and the tightness he felt on his dick when he pushed bulbous in Spruhas pussy, he was recalling that feeling… .. He pumped his dick for minute or two… looked back at the ladies they collapsed again and continue retrying … he looked at Spruha and asked her to come forward and he slowly got up… his back was still facing other group members… he was very hard now, Spruha could see dick head was bigger than earlier… since he was on the edge… Spruha was covered because of Anna standing in front of him and others couldn't see her, Spruha knew why he asked her to come near… Anna said 

Anna:”Chuso jaldi se … “ ( Suck it immediately… )  there was urgency in his voice, Spruha was already mentally prepared she didn't waste much time… she immediately bent down and took it in her mouth. She could feel a hot piece of meat in her mouth… with the warmth of her tongue, Anna's dick gave a jerk… she pushed as much as in her mouth… and Anna couldn't control it… his body shook, Spruha realized and was pulling her mouth then Annas first jet of cum spread on her tongue since tongue was in front of his dick slit… Spruha immediately pulled her mouth and second shooted on her face… . She was shocked and before she move third one was shooted again on her face. Then she went one step back and next two smaller ones shooted in the water and She could see those big strings were floating on the water… she was feeling that heavy cum on her face, Anna looked at her… Anna pushed his dick inside his shorts. Spruha also turned to the other side.. Taking his dick in mouth and shooting his cum happened in less than 30 seconds. 

Anna came in front of her, she was facing Anna now and her back was towards other members… she was still holding cum in her mouth, she was holding her lips tightly and trying to control laugh… She was tasting Annas cum for the third time now. This time it came just fresh out of his balls and directly to her mouth. 

Anna :” Bahut hi takdwar beej hai wo… waste mat krna.. “ ( Very powerful seed is that.. Don't waste it..) He giggled.. 

If she wanted she could have spat it immediately but she didn't, she even didn't wipe the jets which are on her face… . She looked at Anna and gulped the cum which was already in her mouth… she made a weird face.. With raising her shoulders… then she touched her face and felt the cum all over her face… she looked at her stick hands… with fingers she checked the stickiness of Annas cum in front of him. Then she washed her face… . She knew the real value of sperm, from last 5 months she and Pavan trying all possible options to get impregnated but since sperm count of Pavan is less and what he cum is not even 5 ℅ of what Anna came… 
Anna looked at her and said… 

Anna looking at Spruhas face, he still can't believe that he is able to hook this beautiful young woman. It was unexpected, his complete focus was on Aditi but unexpectedly Spruha came into the picture and things progressed so fast. He was still not clear why it looked like Spruha was waiting for this….. One thing he is sure, There is one more cunt he has now, to get pounded by his big dick . 
        Spruha wanted to ask about Aditi's but she thought this is not the right time, I will ask later. 

Spruha  washed her face again and said.. 
“ Chaliye unko thodi madat karate hai… “ ( Let's go and help them… ) and she started walking towards Meenal and the group…. 

Those girls didn't accept the help from Anna and Spruha because it's hurting their ego now… meanwhile Nalini and Sudha aunty came from walking…. 

Somehow they managed and with the help of Meenal, Aditi could sit on Divya's shoulder….. Anna and Spruha saw that Divya and Aditi made it. Spruha said “ Anna let's do it… “

Spruha was thinking about climbing the same way she did last time.. But Anna turned her and grabbed her by her waist and simply lifted her and put on his shoulder… 
She was surprised how easily Anna can lift her.. 
Spruha:” baap re..Anna itani asani se aap mujhe utha sakate ho..? “ ( ohh my god… you can lift me so easily Anna? ) 

Anna:” soch le kandhe pe itani asani se rkh skta hun? To fir ?? “ ( Just imagine how easily I can lift and keep on my shoulder… then think about?) 

Spruha blushed , she understood what he meant to say… she blushed and felt very erotic if Anna is lifting her and keeping her on his big dick and her weight will make her go down slowly on his dick and his dick slowly disappear inside her.  She was very excited for that moment, she was feeling like she was a teenager and today is the date with her boyfriend and the possible things can happen on her date making her excited.  She is going to get fucked by very dick and that was excitement for her young and starved body… 


Nalini looked at both towers and said let me click the photo first… she clicked photos of Aditi-Divya and Anna -Spruha….. 
Divya tried to do something extra and they collapsed again… 

Nalini said Spruha… let me click your photo again because the one which I clicked earlier is not clear.. Anna walked a little away from Meenal and other ladies to not to let them appear in frame… 
Nalini was so far oblivious to the things Anna spoke about Spruha while having sex and he is carrying  Spruha on his shoulder, all of sudden she recalled it. Since Anna never talked about Spruha afterwards she forgot about it… she looked at Spruhas thighs, her shorts were raised up, her thighs were rubbing Anna's neck and cheeks. She regretted her own idea of clicking photos of daughter-In-laws exposed thighs with this 60 year old fuck boy. But she thought he won't try and Spruha won't reciprocate to him if he tried also, with this thought she cleared the thoughts from her mind. 
But she doesn't know that her daughter-in-law had already crossed the line, technically she had already cheated on her son. Spruha had already taken the second dick of her life. 

Anna sensed the facial expressions of Nalini and thought these things needs to be done in very subtle way until he takes Spruha for the first time.  Anna dropped Spruha in water… and started laughing… 

Spruha started splashing water on Anna, but he went into deep water for swimming….. Spruha was liking Anna's company, she was missing him… . 
These ladies couldn't make the tower so the plan was finally canceled… These ladies started playing with flying discs . 
They played in the water for one more hour, Anna kept little distance from Spruha since he doesn't want Nalini to notice, Spruhas excited behavior around him… but Spruha was getting impatient why he was keeping distance. 
They decided that they will wrap up and go to the hotel now… booking was already done by Meenal and Spruha, They found this hotel on the internet and booked it. While going out of water Anna gave meaningful smile to Spruha, she smiled back.. Spruha was not sure how things will progress, whether they will get the chance or not but she was hoping it should happen today only. 
     Anna changed his clothes and came out of the changing room… then these ladies went inside. Meenal and Aditi came out of the changing room. Anna was standing far away from the changing room. Aditi thought about going and speaking with Anna. She thought she was a little rude but she was still clear that Anna should have thought about others' presence and such things should not be done in public places.
Meenal, who was tired, thought of going to the car instead of standing here.. Aditi said you carry on I will come with Anna.. 
Aditi went near Anna, she wanted to make it clear… . Because in the morning also because he pushed Nalini aunty for sex and they got caught... 

Aditi:” Anna.. aapko Kya huwa hai aaj? Subah bhi waise… abhi bhi yahan logo.. ( Anna… what happened to you today? In the morning also.. And now here also people..)  
Before she could finish her sentence… without even looking at Aditi's face, In a very rude tone Anna said .. 

Anna:” Gaadi wahan hai… jao baitho. “ ( Car is there… go and sit) 

This was too much for Aditi, no one ever ever talked to her in such an insulting way.  She felt how egoistic Anna is?  I went there to talk to him, for something he had done wrong… ideally he should have come to me to talk, that he didn't do… but when I approached he was insulting me… This damage escalated too quickly because both had pride and most importantly there was some emotional connection established between them.  More than the words they both are hurt because how can he/she talk to me like that?  If someone else would have talked to them in this way they would have definitely not cared much but here They were unaware so far but their relationship was already swinging on emotional attachments  and that is why this unexpected turn took this relationship to a different road now… . 

Aditi:” Fuck off… “  She said rudely , turned and started walking towards the car… she was fuming with anger now… 
What does he think of himself?  Does he think I am begging for it?   I won't let him come near me… . let him suffer now. 

Anna was expecting she would speak with him nicely because she insulted me in the first place. She was supposed to say sorry… he didn't want to drag this topic, he was thinking even if he showed disappointment and asked her to go to the car she would stay and talk to him, but instead Aditi said “Fuck off..” as if he is some pervert, his male ego was hurt now, he can't hear something from woman of his dream, woman he admires…..… even though it looked weird , he might not accept also… but he was emotionally attached to Aditi. 
He might not care if someone else fucks Nalini or Meena or Spruha also… but with Aditi he can't  accept it, he can't see anyone else that is why he was worried when Bhiva was gone upstairs….. 
     And now it might trigger a game to hurt each other emotionally….

[xboard1986]

What a wonderful update

[Rizzi1198]

Awsome update very hot

[Big_Bang]

If Spruha didn't save Aditi's chastity by sacrificing her own pussy then Aditi would be fuking Anna bad in subsequent episodes. But anyways as I said it is precious epic we are witnessing, let us wait and enjoy some reluctant fun between Aditi and Anna. Cheers!

[xboard1986]

Jldi dena update bro

[WriterPK]

Great.. best story.. I request you to add a new black boy or ugly black student character to seduce aditi.. it would be more fun.. she can tease anna.. just request only bro . All your wish.. your writing skills is best.. you are too good in giving regular updates. If you give regular updates means that all the characters will be fresh.. pls continue this good work.. you are rocking..

[abcturbine]

simply outstanding.....
sheer....brilliance....

[The Thinker]

Great.. best story.. I request you to add a new black boy or ugly black student character to seduce aditi.. it would be more fun.. she can tease anna.. just request only bro . All your wish.. your writing skills is best.. you are too good in giving regular updates. If you give regular updates means that all the characters will be fresh.. pls continue this good work.. you are rocking..

Good suggestion bas black means negro na ho real nahi lagega...

Writer ne bahut ache se Bhiva ko introduce kiya hai 
Uska aur Aditi ka terrace wala encounter jabb aayega sab se badhiya hoga wo part story ka..

And writer is really placing small hints ki Anna ko Aditi nshi milegi aur Uska katega ..

[unknownperson]

This story is amazing..
Can anyone suggest me another story same like this story line..
Other than Heavelny Angel ???

[xboard1986]

Wapas aao bro