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(03-01-2024, 03:09 AM)dicklicious30 Wrote: Bro unga story vera level. Paathom sirithom paduthonu ore template la illama unga story ovoru scene layum different ahvum engaging ahvum iruku. Pudhu character creation, dialogues , story narration and scene description avlo brilliant ah iruku . Adhu poga periya update thodarndhu kuduthite irukeenga...vera level. Unga hardwork ku romba thanks.. Next update ku wait pannitu irukom❤️❤️❤️❤️
100% agreed that
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super story bro
Oru chinna suggestion pona thadava yeluthum pothu intha story la oru short film frd edukra maari panninga
Athe maari ithula oru item paatu ku kutty kutty dress a pottu side actress aadura mari vacha super ah irukkum
Appuram oru kabadai viladura oru scene shoot panra mari vacha innu super ah irukkum
Please consider this..
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Bro waiting for your update
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It's very tough to wait for update in this thread. Eagerly waiting for next update. Hope it is a long one and comes soon ??
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no update for last 12 days
The original Ondipuli from ExBii
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(06-01-2024, 09:27 PM)Jeyjay Wrote: Whenever a new character is introduced usually readers won't accept it, but in your story as soon as a new character kicks in people demand more from the new character, Initially when the tailor was introduced people asked you to write more about the tailor, now u introduced an auto driver, now people asking to write more about him, credit goes to your writing talent, none of the characters has disappointed us...please go on with the same flow..one of the best stories with my opinion.
Bro JeyJay your story was very hot, why did you delete all updates due to some stupid comments
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Hope we get updates for pongal atleast. Waiting for update.
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கதையின் தலைப்பில் இருக்கும் அந்த டிசைன் எங்கிருந்து எடுத்தீர்கள் என்ற நியாபகம் இருக்கிறதா நண்பரே?
ரொம்ப unique. Easy to identify the stories..
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(08-01-2024, 09:19 AM)james suiza Wrote: Sema story.. Tailor portion was very good, appadiye adult webseries partha mathiri irunthuchu...please continue nanba
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(06-01-2024, 09:27 PM)Jeyjay Wrote: Whenever a new character is introduced usually readers won't accept it, but in your story as soon as a new character kicks in people demand more from the new character, Initially when the tailor was introduced people asked you to write more about the tailor, now u introduced an auto driver, now people asking to write more about him, credit goes to your writing talent, none of the characters has disappointed us...please go on with the same flow..one of the best stories with my opinion.
Thanks bro, thanks a lot....
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(06-01-2024, 06:01 PM)Ondithepuli Wrote: i am expecting something with autokaaran before they reach home!!
i wont disappoint your expectation
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(04-01-2024, 01:13 AM)Sparo Wrote: Fentastic update bro
(05-01-2024, 04:48 AM)eviltimes0 Wrote: Thanks for the big update bro!
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(03-01-2024, 04:33 AM)Kalifa Wrote: வாவ் என்ன மாதிரி ஸ்டோரி ரைட்டிங் யா ஒவ்வொரு காட்சியும் கண்ணுல ஓடுது .இந்த இலை மறை காயா காட்சிகளை கொண்டு போறது நல்லாருக்கு
ok bro ...mudinja alavuku kondu poren
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(03-01-2024, 03:09 AM)dicklicious30 Wrote: Bro unga story vera level. Paathom sirithom paduthonu ore template la illama unga story ovoru scene layum different ahvum engaging ahvum iruku. Pudhu character creation, dialogues , story narration and scene description avlo brilliant ah iruku . Adhu poga periya update thodarndhu kuduthite irukeenga...vera level. Unga hardwork ku romba thanks.. Next update ku wait pannitu irukom❤️❤️❤️❤️
thanks bro... intha weekend la kandipa update panren bro
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(01-01-2024, 08:10 PM)omprakash_71 Wrote: மிகவும் அற்புதமான படைப்புக்கு நன்றி நண்பா நன்றி
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(09-01-2024, 10:59 AM)kingjack Wrote: super story bro
Oru chinna suggestion pona thadava yeluthum pothu intha story la oru short film frd edukra maari panninga
Athe maari ithula oru item paatu ku kutty kutty dress a pottu side actress aadura mari vacha super ah irukkum
Appuram oru kabadai viladura oru scene shoot panra mari vacha innu super ah irukkum
Please consider this..
thank u bro for your suggestion, i will try to add ur suggestion in my future update
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(01-01-2024, 12:40 PM)shawblack Wrote: You really are the king of x. I read only till the auto man part and I was not able to control myself ?. Have to read the remaining part after taking some rest ?. I have to say that your script is really out of the world. I have read a lot of Savita bhabhi comics, your story and script rivals it. i have not read completely. but hope that the auto man gets more screen prescence along with other characters like the politician . jusy a humble opinion and request.
Thank u bro, much appreciated for that response...
(10-01-2024, 09:29 AM)shawblack Wrote: It's very tough to wait for update in this thread. Eagerly waiting for next update. Hope it is a long one and comes soon ??
(14-01-2024, 04:27 PM)shawblack Wrote: Hope we get updates for pongal atleast. Waiting for update.
unfortunately my house is filled with guest for Pongal celebration, hence i couldn't update further, so please be patient ..by this weekend i will give a long update for sure..
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15-01-2024, 04:26 PM
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லக்ஷ்மி அம்மா
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(15-01-2024, 04:23 PM)king of x Wrote: Thank u bro, much appreciated for that response...
unfortunately my house is filled with guest for Pongal celebration, hence i couldn't update further, so please be patient ..by this weekend i will give a long update for sure..
ok bro no problem :)
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