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Thank you for the wonderful update
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Good going include more womens
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unexpectedly a dull update mostly consisting of the previous one. Its too early to include Suma in the story. The story started on a good note with the rich teenager Priyanka losing her virginity to an old beggar in her farm house. Priyanka's further stay in the farm house be shortened to a week. This period is enough for her to be addicted to the beggar's cock. It will be better that Priyanka leaves the farm house in a week spent mostly being fucked by the beggar. The beggar should go back to live in his cabin a short distance from the farm house. Let Priyanka baby go to his cabin on her own for his cock.
The beggar can trap Suma after Priyanka leaves the place. The beggar's cock has the capability to impregnate Suma. The story should mainly revolve round Pryanka and the beggar.
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Super update.
Please make Priyanka asking the begger to ANALyze her, jealous arise while watching the enjoyment of Begger face from banging the suma's ass.
We see Priyanka's Kind, Love, Anger, Courage, Fear, wonder, Disgust (Envy or Jealous is missing)
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Super and hot. Please keep continue the story.
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Tantalizing hot...
Spine chilling....
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The story is taking a wrong direction. Beggar's cock is the actual thing which should bind Priyanka baby with him not a divine relation of marriage. The erotic nature of story will be more joyful. Its not necessary to impregnate Priyanka. Suma is there fir this purpose. Let baby Priyanka be a slave to the beggar's cock without any sort of wify duty.
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The story is taking a wrong direction. Beggar's cock is the actual thing which should bind Priyanka baby with him not a divine relation of marriage. The erotic nature of story will be more joyful. Its not necessary to impregnate Priyanka. Suma is there fir this purpose. Let baby Priyanka be a slave to the beggar's cock without any sort of wify duty.
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Dear
This is your imagination. I am writing on my imagination. Anyway, thanks for the suggestion.
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Dear
Thanks for the prompt reply. Hope u didnt mind my criticism. I am always with u.
Dear
If you want to continue this story you can do. I Will stop here.
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Your story is very interesting. Don't stop story always on Author's view
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Very nice. Let parents of priyanka die in an accident, so that these three continue the fuck in the same house and give birth to beggar babies.
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Interesting.
Priyanka is now getting convinced easily.
Next begger will convince for threesome and then to have his baby in her womb.
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Excellent friend. Did not like the wedding, it is jus a trick to make priyanka do whatever he asks. Will he do the same to the maid as well.