Adultery Maids Conspiracy
(08-01-2024, 10:26 AM)Dilbar420 Wrote: Use of hindi language more excitement

Don't mind but please don't give unnecessary suggestions while you yourself are using English language. Let writter go with flow. If writter become sensitive and don't update, world will miss a masterpiece epic ???
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(09-01-2024, 12:42 AM)Big_Bang Wrote: Don't mind but please don't give unnecessary suggestions while you yourself are using English language. Let writter go with flow. If writter become sensitive and don't update, world will miss a masterpiece epic ???
Why worry? U r nt devoided of anything  ,The translations r perfectly giving the essence 
& Plz dont b ruf w fellow masturbators  .. its actually this apt use of desi language that makes arousing n realistic
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Bro, public demands another big update
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Writer bro , an avg size updt can b expected per 3-4 days
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Can't wait plz update asap
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Dear Author, I randomly just went through this story of yours and saw that its your first story. My wishes for you Smile

Although I am still reading the PART 8 at the moment and I know I am quite late in giving the initial suggestions for the story but still I have a few, if you're keen to accept.

Honestly when I started reading this story and was finishing PART 1,  I genuinely felt that finally after so long I've luckily come across a story which sounds to have a great potential to turn into a masterpiece story. I must say your story's initial buildup was excellent and quite grasping. 
The story's concept, the dialogs, the storyline, the characters and mainly the conversation between them looks so genuine. I was total bang on.
It Looked as if I am reading some mature author whose idea of the story is to give it a realistic approach but but but sorry to say soon my expectations started dropping when I was finishing PART 2.
                    Right now I am on chapter 8 mid and I can already predict what would happen next. You are already on the path to make Aditi a slutty character which I was most afraid of, and trust me this would turn out to be the downfall of the story which would make the story of grade b type.

In the starting, you showed that Aditi is today's generation modern and educated woman who actually loves her husband and is very loyal kind but just after  watching a single video made her weak to a level that she started imagining Anna in her dreams in first go itself. But still giving it  benefit of doubt and assuming its okay as it could be natural for a loyal human as well if one sees that kind of exotic stuff but what you ruined in that was the sexual relation of Aditi and her Husband. Was it really necessary to show that Aditi's husband is so so soft or bad at sex?  You are already showing as if Aditi has very bad sex life which actually show that Aditi will be an easy target. You shouldn't have to show their sex life so dull.
In PART 6 itself, she has started losing her personality and has no objection in mating with Anna on those stairs. Although its not happened in actual but still we get an idea that she has already lost the battle of maintaining her strong character which we all were proud of a moment before. She is opening accepting to make out with Anna in front of Meena. I'm worried, in the next few episodes Aditi herself would start using that crude language, & then nothing will be left in the story as there won't remain any difference between Aditi or Meera or Nalini. Trust me slutty characters are never exciting. You're making her too easy to get in such a short span of time. 
                                   Also, I think you now are rotating the story too much on the base of those sex videos and it has started becoming boring a bit. It looks as if Meena will do the complete work of manipulation and changing Aditi's mindset on the basis of those videos itself and Anna will get Aditi as a easy wrapped gift without doing much. The seduction process is looking too easy now and Aditi is looking like a warrior who has already lost the battle. she has already become easy in eyes of MEENA which shouldn't have happened so early. Aditi now has no objection to anything MEENA says, she even was cool when MEENA bought another MMS of nalini. How can one change so quickly. Strange !!
Its looks as if even the character NALINI is also being forced to change ADITI's perception of mind. Which Mother in law laughs when her own son's wife is being talked about being fucked. At least she should raise some real concern there but nothing comes from her. 
Sorry but It now has slowly started looking like a porn instead of sex story now where things happen illogically.
 
I think you should give some twists and show Aditi a tuff character who is not that easy to seduce. May be, she somehow gets to know that Meena is the culprit and she is manipulating he working alongside with Anna. Things would definitely change from there and it would become tuff job for Anna to get Aditi after that. This would make the story interesting and hard to predict. This was just an idea as I'm sure you would have many others in your talented mind. 




I have a few pointers for any story if you'd like to apply them:


1. Most stories here on Xossipy have that same centuries old plot, making it very pathetic and boring.
   Step 1 > Husband will be shown loving but quite weak in sex who climaxes too early in bed but his wife will have a very high sex libido, thus husband keeping her physically unsatisfied. This approach eventually makes it very predictable that soon wife is going to get seduced.  [In our story it looks a bit like that]
   Step 2> Then, slowly the wife after getting seduced easily by someone slowly turn into a whore character who doesn't even care of her husband anymore. Worse, wife & lover sometimes even start humiliating the husband. End of the story. Right ?
Honestly, this plot is so common and so pathetic. Please don't follow the same approach in your story as well.


2. Always remember you are writing a sex story and not writing some porn script where things happen illogically at very fast pace. Always make your plots & circumstances sound realistic. Making Aditi weak and easy each and every time should not be the objective.

3. Its always fun and exciting when wife and husband are madly in love and are happy with each other in every aspect of life including sex. Real excitement unfolds when, even if at this 'all good stage', things change & wife still gets slowly seduced somehow. Let's see how you do it?
keeping my fingers crossed]

Seducing a Loyal, tuff and a strong character woman is an art in itself and far far more exciting than the woman who is quite easy & readily available  and desperate for attention of other men.

> Here till now personality of Aditi was shown strong & she looks like a perfect wife wife till now. Fingers cross how her personality turns out to be.

4. Please don't ever turn ADITI into some characterless cock hungry betraying slut woman who  easily opens her legs. Use logics in your story plot which are hard to question. Make the situations look realistic which you are actually doing till now.
Circumstances should always look realistic. Avoid illogical sex scripts.

If ADITI  is displayed as a loyal, strong character and a loving wife then it would be always hard for ANNA to get into her pants which is the real fun. This would create more interest in the story. Make her hard to get. Make her strong in eyes of MEENA.
Even if she gets intimate withy ANNA in some unavoidable situation, don't change her character in to some cheap whore which would make her easier to bed again. Maintain her dignity at all costs so that its always difficult to get her.

Don't ever snatch away the love and respect between the couple Aditi and her Husband because that makes the woman vulnerable and easy to get. Every one loves a woman who is devoted to love.

3. Never be in a hurry to make ADITI fuck by ANNA. Always remember, the day ADITI gets fucked, it would steal away some excitement for sure because that will make readers assume that, now she has become easy target to get. So take your time and build your story. Think it through and turn into a beautiful story. Small incidents should keep happening keeping us readers on edge which would slowly move towards its goal.
Otherwise it would be just like watching a porn which is useless.

4. One final suggestion. please story listening to each and every reader. Remember its you who started the story so just go with the slow place. Don't be in a hurry to give steamy sex till its actually required.
Always Remember, its an erotic story and not some cheap porn.

 
I hope that helps. My best wishes for you.

Thanks
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Wonderful writings...
Amazing continuation.....
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(09-01-2024, 09:32 AM)Kgngff Wrote: Why worry? U r nt devoided of anything  ,The translations r perfectly giving the essence 
& Plz dont b ruf w fellow masturbators  .. its actually this apt use of desi language that makes arousing n realistic

Sure bro!!! Sorry if my words hurt ?
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Bro, plz update yaar
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when we will see update idea plz
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The story is good , & U had bn updting it more/less regularly , & this had genuinely raised hopes...
Readers r supportive , but pls atleast dont make them beg now. Break this Over -delay n uncertainty trend in xossip...
U can dear
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Waiting dear
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Wow Wow Wow! just WOW! What an amazing update! This is probably the most amazing update I've ever read!

Nostalgic I'm saying you really are a master narrator! Wow with each update you try to break the limitation on how to make it most erotic. And hands down I've tell you, this is the most erotic update I've read. There is no actual sex that is happening and yet you've made it so erotic to read. So best!

Keep this going!
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This story is turning now really funny !! lol

I am on PART 10 and it made me feel as if every one is magically changing just to make Aditi think that getting fucked by Anna is alright.
Spruha's character changed overnight just after looking at that condom. wow !! She started talking about fucking that big dick guy just like that out of nowhere. Does that happen in real life. A BIG NO ...
All of a sudden they are discussing things about sex which which author says they never did. I guess some magic happened in a minute, lol.
And the most funny thing is Anna. Is he some God or some Superhero ? Lol. He sees everything happening as if he has 20 eyes and what he doesn't see he eventually finds it out. He gets to know everything somehow which is so stupid. He should have been a detective rather than a vegetable vendor, coz he would solve anything just by imagining.
Seriously story is getting illogical day by day..
Why is no one against it and at least calls it immoral thus making it difficult for Anna.
Come on dear author, don't be in such a haste to make Aditi Fuck. Now it feels as if whom so ever comes in story, he/she will help say, yes yes go fuck Anna just because he has big dick..

come on at least thoda toh difficult banao for Anna otherwise it will start getting very boring which it already has actually.

Sorry but ,this story is turning so unrealistic and illogical now.

only exciting thing was Aditi somehow smelling his cum but Anna shouldn't have got to know this. He is not God !!
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The author has dropped subtle hints about the mystery between Aditi and Bhiva with each updates and it is only to be revealed with Anna. But based on the hints, I'm suspecting Aditi has offered more than her magnificent beautiful big boobs to Bhiva! Wow!

I'll tell you why..

if you had observed, Aditi before going upstairs she was wearing that sensuous white shorts and by the time she reached terrace to call her hubby, she had changed her shorts to pants.
And also like Anna had mentioned in the recent update. He had been in the bathroom (fantasizing about our dear Aditi) for more than 25 minutes. Wow! and just as he feared, "that's a lot of time!"

And also Aditi herself revealed that "she would lie down and spread her legs and surrender her pink pussy to such a big cock!" Wow!
So there should be a possibility that Bhiva was able to seduce Aditi completely and went all the way in. (Thanks to Meena for manipulating her views on Adultery and surrender completely to the sight of big cocks, as those opportunities are so rare!) They definitely had quickey. Why? because if you remember, Aditi had also mentioned about the story of how Bhiva seduced his teacher and impregnated her. That story he cannot tell to Aditi under 5 minutes (contrary to what Aditi had explained to Spruha about what happend between them), so he definitely used this story to seduce Aditi and spread her legs. Because of her sleazy shorts, Bhiva had easy access, once he saw her pink pussy he went mad and fucked her good for 25 minutes as he revealed earlier to Rachana that he's crazy for pink pussies and would do anything to fuck one because he never seen one. Our Aditi fits the right description would have try to fulfill this poor man's souls wish for the last time before they depart! In that heat, she might've even let him cross all boundaries and deposit his cum deep inside her just like how his teacher allowed him to impregnate her. That would just steamy hot revelation!

And after having steamy hot session, she wore her panties and shorts back, but later on found she still dripping with Bhiva's cum made her panties and shorts soiled and smell of cum. So she had to change her shorts to pants and panties! (Remember Spruha saw Aditi's red panties in Anna's bag in the recent update when she came to collect frisbee, she found Aditi's panties with thick cum stains!) All of this should add up!

She was feeling happy that she got leverage on Anna who had fucked Rachana in front of her. She was able to exact revenge on Anna. But also she was feeling sad that it was not Anna who get to be the first to fuck her in her love hole. So after the session when she saw Anna, she forgot all her anger towards him and just wanted to hug him and offer her boobs to him as a way of sorry to him.



Or... Or... Or..
What I said is completely wrong because Bhiva came down stairs running with his hand on his cheeks. To which Aditi revealed to Spruha that she had slapped him earlier because he try to get too naughtly.
Wow! way to go author for keeping that mystery alive! We'll only know when she reveals to Anna ;)
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(14-01-2024, 01:30 AM)xossissippi Wrote: The author has dropped subtle hints about the mystery between Aditi and Bhiva with each updates and it is only to be revealed with Anna. But based on the hints, I'm suspecting Aditi has offered more than her magnificent beautiful big boobs to Bhiva! Wow!

I'll tell you why..

if you had observed, Aditi before going upstairs she was wearing that sensuous white shorts and by the time she reached terrace to call her hubby, she had changed her shorts to pants.
And also like Anna had mentioned in the recent update. He had been in the bathroom (fantasizing about our dear Aditi) for more than 25 minutes. Wow! and just as he feared, "that's a lot of time!"

And also Aditi herself revealed that "she would lie down and spread her legs and surrender her pink pussy to such a big cock!" Wow!
So there should be a possibility that Bhiva was able to seduce Aditi completely and went all the way in. (Thanks to Meena for manipulating her views on Adultery and surrender completely to the sight of big cocks, as those opportunities are so rare!) They definitely had quickey. Why? because if you remember, Aditi had also mentioned about the story of how Bhiva seduced his teacher and impregnated her. That story he cannot tell to Aditi under 5 minutes (contrary to what Aditi had explained to Spruha about what happend between them), so he definitely used this story to seduce Aditi and spread her legs. Because of her sleazy shorts, Bhiva had easy access, once he saw her pink pussy he went mad and fucked her good for 25 minutes as he revealed earlier to Rachana that he's crazy for pink pussies and would do anything to fuck one because he never seen one. Our Aditi fits the right description would have try to fulfill this poor man's souls wish for the last time before they depart! In that heat, she might've even let him cross all boundaries and deposit his cum deep inside her just like how his teacher allowed him to impregnate her. That would just steamy hot revelation!

And after having steamy hot session, she wore her panties and shorts back, but later on found she still dripping with Bhiva's cum made her panties and shorts soiled and smell of cum. So she had to change her shorts to pants and panties! (Remember Spruha saw Aditi's red panties in Anna's bag in the recent update when she came to collect frisbee, she found Aditi's panties with thick cum stains!) All of this should add up!

She was feeling happy that she got leverage on Anna who had fucked Rachana in front of her. She was able to exact revenge on Anna. But also she was feeling sad that it was not Anna who get to be the first to fuck her in her love hole. So after the session when she saw Anna, she forgot all her anger towards him and just wanted to hug him and offer her boobs to him as a way of sorry to him.



Or... Or... Or..
What I said is completely wrong because Bhiva came down stairs running with his hand on his cheeks. To which Aditi revealed to Spruha that she had slapped him earlier because he try to get too naughtly.
Wow! way to go author for keeping that mystery alive! We'll only know when she reveals to Anna ;)

100% Agreeing with You brother
The author is great in giving small hints and later make them big revelation..

The title Is maid's Conspiracy And Maid is not done with her conspiracy..
Anna Is just a side tool and writer has given a lot of hints regarding this..
Bhiva got what he wanted and Aditi will tell Anna that not when she is seduced but when she will show him his place that he is not the candidate to Get Aditi..

Writer is Great Visionary and won't keep a linear plot of a Anna Getting Aditi 
Bhiva tasted her and Soon some Another character will come Introduced By The Maid
And that will be the Ultimate plan of The Maid..

Anna is Just a deviation and Soon A major twist will come

This is Very Exciting story Because From the Title to Small Hints .
It's Maids Conspiracy and She will conspire Not Anna.
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Part 28

Spruha put Aditi's  panty and condoms in Anna's bag again as it is and locked the car and went back to sea. 

     When she came, Anna, Aditi and Meenal were already swimming in deep water. 
Spruha was still in deep thought, she started playing with Divya but her one eye was on Aditi and Anna only.  
Here Anna , Meenal and Aditi were swimming in deep water. Anna was impressed by the swimming skills of Meenal. Aditi was also swimming but she was an average swimmer… since Meenal was around Anna and Aditi couldn't continue the conversation which was stopped earlier. 
        Meenal got an idea… she said let's make a human tower. Aditi also liked that idea… they started swimming towards shallow water…  They reached near Divya and Spruha and talked about this idea.  Meenal suggested that we stand in water with a level around our waist so even if we fall down we won't get hurt. Everyone liked the idea… It was decided that Spruha will sit on Divya's shoulder and Aditi on Annas… and Meenal will stand on Aditi and Spruhas shoulder… 
Aditi was shocked by that idea, she will be sitting on Anna's shoulder.. Her heart jolted with happiness but she saw, Anna was still swimming in deep waters. 
Everyone called him back… he was denying  but all ladies forced him to come and join them. Spruha was closely monitoring Anna and Aditis behavior. Since she saw some stuff now she was looking at every action of Anna and Aditi with suspicion. She herself was wet by the thought of the panty and the possible sex on the terrace. 

Divya and Meenal finally convinced Anna to join them… It was decided that Spruha will climb on Divya's shoulder and Aditi on Annas .. Once they form this base, Meenal will climb on top of them. 
 Meenal played this many times with her friends when she used to go swimming in high school days, she was instructing Spruha  how to get on the shoulder of Divya,... She asked Anna and Aditi to start till she guides Spruha and Divya… 
Those three ladies were busy there. To avoid falling on each other those two group were standing on distance

Aditi looked at Anna and blushed, she couldn't control her smile… Anna told her let's go a little away from them… Anna- Aditi were around 25-30  feets away from the other ladies. Spruha looked at them thinking why they are going away from us. 

Anna could have simply held Aditi by the waist and lifted and kept on his shoulder but he didn't do that… 
Aditi came near Anna with a smile on her face. Plan was like Anna will bend a little in knees, he will open his palm and let it rest on his knees, Aditi will step up on his hand and then Anna will stand up and then he will raise his hand a little and Aditi will lift her leg and keep it on his shoulder and then sit over his shoulder. As instructed by Meenal, Anna bent in knees and put both of his palms on his knees. Aditi came near him and put both her hands on his shoulders, since Anna was bent his face was near her boobs, It's first time she was touching Anna. Aditi was excited to climb on Anna's shoulder but at the same time she was very cautious since everyone was there. She put her right foot on his palm. And she stood on his knees, his face was near her belly.. To balance herself she leaned forward and her belly touched his face.. Aditi clenched his T-shirt on his shoulder… he slowly started lifting her by raising his hand , when he was lifting her she got disbalanced again and she learned forward and her crotch area touched Anna's face, she pushed her hip backwards a little to avoid touching his face to her crotch over her shorts. Anna looked at those fair and muscular thighs… only 6 inch of her legs were covered by those shorts… Anna looked at her thighs from bottom to top and imagined the complete naked body of Aditi. Aditi's back was towards Spruha and the group so they didn't notice what was going on here.. They were also struggling there, they fell many times and they were laughing and making fun of each other. 
 Anna was looking at her crotch and she was avoiding his face near her crotch, First time she was so close to Anna , she was feeling shy… and more importantly she was afraid because everyone was around them. 
Anna lowered his hand and again kept on his knees, he looked at her and asked “ Balance kr degi na? uthaun upar ab? “ ( You will balance right? Shall I raise you? ), she giggled and said yes… 

This time Anna leaned forward, Aditi could feel his face rubbing on her belly.. Anna looked around,  he saw Sudha aunty and Nalini were walking on the beach barefooted… They went far away. Since Aditi was in front of his face… other ladies can't see his face.. So he raised his hand, when his nose reached near the bottom of her T-shirt, he leaned and put his face below T-shirt and grabbed it in his mouth, and slowly lowered his hands… Aditi came down but her T-shirt was raised up because Anna held it in his mouth. 
Anna looked at her flat and fair belly, It was wet and smooth, water droplets on her belly were making Anna mad . He was holding her T-shirt in mouth, he opened his mouth and moved his face such that T -shirt was on his face… his face touched Aditi's belly,The soft skin of her belly Anna can feel on his face. she was shocked and she felt like an electric current went through her body. Anna didn't waste a single second and he  smooched Aditi's belly… he held her skin in his lips for a few seconds, Aditi was shocked and excited at the same time. She held his shoulder tightly..her mouth left open, she tried to push him but he didn't let her. …… he smooched a few times on belly and then moved to the belly button… it was big and deep… he rubbed his nose inside the belly button, Aditi left his shoulder and grabbed the back of his neck from behind.. After nose… Anna dug his tongue in her belly button and started  licking it. Aditi was feeling a tingling sensation and suddenly he grabbed a large portion of her belly into his teeth. Aditi in low voice “Annn.aa….naii” (Noooo) she immediately grabbed the back of his head. She liked these touches but she knew it was risky… she pulled his head backwards.. And she also bent to not let him touch her belly… in this movement, her foot slipped from Anna's palms… and when she was falling down… first her belly rubbed on annas face again then… her boobs… and when her face was in front of him… Anna grabbed her by her ass cheeks before her feet touched the floor as she fell down and her thighs were underwater and her ass cheeks were  above water… before her feet touch sand… Anna held her by her cheeks, she felt a sudden grip on her ass cheeks and Anna catched her whole body weight by holding her cheeks . That was a sudden jerk on her ass cheeks…It was like a slap on both her ass cheeks and that shook her body. when she felt that jerk, her face was just in front of Anna… with that jerk she groaned.. :” Ohhoo”… her mouth left open as it is… They looked into each other's eyes . He was feeling her ass cheeks in his hands for the first time.. without wasting a second he squeezed both cheeks directly looking into her eyes… Aditi's eyes widened… her mouth which was already opened.. widened, she wiggled and Anana immediately left her…..she got scared, her face was red, once Anna left her, she blushed but she was scared too then she looked at Anna… and when she looked back towards other ladies luckily no one was looking at them or maybe she didn't notice who watched that fall. 
    Spruha didn't understand what Anna did to Aditis belly but she watched when Anna squeezed Aditi's ass. 
Here Meenal, Divya and Spruha tried to make the tower again with a different approach.  Anna saw those girls were busy, he signaled Aditi to try one more time, Aditi blushed and she saw these ladies were not focusing on her and Anna, she thought let's try one more time. 
This time Anna went a little inside, water level was above his waist. 
 Aditi came near, Anna bent his knees again and his more than half body was under water. He placed left hand on his left legs knee, Aditi raised her right leg again and placed it on his hand, unlike last time this time she was keeping her foot on only one hand. Anna's other hand was inside the water so no one can see it. Before Aditi could step up on his hand, she felt Anna's right hand on her thighs. She looked back towards other girls once, no one was paying attention here. When she looked at Anna, he was already touching her pussy over her shorts. Still with two layers of clothes as panty and shorts, he still could feel the shape of her pussy.
Aditi in a low voice:” Anna mat kariye… please.. “ ( Anna don't do it… please) 

Anna:” Maine kya kiya? “ ( what did i do?) 

Aditi tried to stop him.. 

Aditi:” Anna sab ke samane aisa mat kijiye… “ ( Anna don't do these things in front of others… ) 


Aditi looked into Anna's eyes as he was touching her pussy inside the water. 
Just to show others now he started giving instructions to Aditi, how she will climb up and get on his shoulders. He was pretending to tell her a plan but inside the water he was rubbing her pussy. Aditi was aroused but she was very scared now. 
Anna held her feet and moved near his crotch and Aditi's eye widened as her foot touched Anna's dick over his shorts. She tried to pull back her leg but Anna held it tightly… Anna did something underwater and this time he pulled her leg.. and Aditi could feel his naked dick just below her foot she was very nervous now. She can still feel the warmth of that dick even if it was below water.Anna tried to push his finger in her shorts but it was very tight on her thighs so it was an unsuccessful attempt, but Aditi understood what he tried she immediately got alert and pushed Anna in disbelief. 
Aditi pushed his hand and looked at him with an angry face. Anna in between slowly touching her pussy, she was thinking Anna will understand, she doesn't want to be rude with Anna.  
  She looked at Anna with an angry face and pushed his hand, Anna pushed his dick inside shorts and gave a smile, Aditi didn't respond, she just looked to the other side.. showing her disappointment. She was very angry now, this kind of kiddish behavior in a public place she can't expect from Anna. It might ruin her image in front of other ladies. 
Aditi remembered the morning incident also, because Anna pushed Nalini aunty for sex, they got caught by Rachana. How could he  behave carelessly? As she was thinking about it she heard Meenals voice.. 

Meenal :” oyee… . Itni dur kyun gaye ho?  “ ( Oyee..  why do you go that far?)  Meenal shouted and asked casually as she saw Anna and Aditi were standing on 25-30 feets from other ladies. She didn't know what was going on .  Aditi who was already worried got more scared by that question… but Anna said casually.. 

Anna:” are ek shankh jaisa kuch laga tha pair ko kuch yahan… pr abhi samajh nahi aa rha hai kahan gya… “ ( I felt like Conch near my legs but.. Now I'm not able to trace it… )  he showed as if he was searching with leg.. 
Meenal said “ohh is it” and re focused on her task.. 

Anna looked at Aditis angry face and said in low voice
Anna:”  Ab nahi karunga… gussa mat kro” ( I won't do it now… Don't get angry)   She was still looking angry… 

Anna again… :” Nahi karunga ab… “ ( I won't do it again… ) Anna went one step back… Aditi looked back at other ladies and she saw Spruha was looking at her, her and Spruhas eye contact happened and Aditi got scared to death. She just panicked…Her whole arousal just washed away…While changing clothes itself she sensed that Spruha knew about Anna and herself  but now she was looking at her in suspicion definitely she must have seen what Anna was doing here.  In just a matter of seconds Aditi imagined what will happen if everyone comes to know that I am doing this with Anna? What about my marriage? What about Samar?  What about my reputation? Why am I doing it? Can't I control my urge?   What am I doing with Anna? 

Aditi:”Bs hogya aapka….Aapke liye majak hoga.. Mere liye nahi.. “ (Stop it now…Maybe it will be fun for you… not for me..)   She said this in a very rude way … Anna felt very bad. This was insulting… he couldn't imagine hearing something like this from Aditi. 

She said this and turned and went near other ladies,..  

Anna was shocked,Anna felt that she was overreacting. She was giving signals that is why Anna approached further to touch her.She insisted and that is why Anna came here now all of sudden she became defensive. Anna was feeling lonely there. Even he said he won't do anything further to Aditi. He just wanted to give a signal to Aditi and break the barrier between them so that next time they get the chance, things will go further. Anna was careful , he was keeping an eye on other ladies if anyone was watching but he didn't know that Spruha had already doubted them and he didn't know that Spruha had seen his bag also. Spruha was stealing glances in between to see what Anna and Aditi was doing. 
              Actually Aditi was also right in her place, she didn't want others to know about things which are going on between Anna and herself. Since she is being extra careful about her  appearance, clothes and her image.  She always takes extra care . 
All this happened in a matter of just two minutes. Aditi went near Spruha and the group. 
Since Spruha doesn't  swim, she was a little afraid of water… Her fear was that if I fell from Divya's shoulder I may drown. 
Meenal and Divya were laughing… they were convincing Spruha that water level is just till her stomach, how can she get drowned. 
Then Aditi said.. 

Aditi:'' You go with Anna, he knows swimming. I will go on Divya's shoulder.. “ There was no logic at all, she won't get drowned in shallow water. The worst case scenario little water might go in her mouth that's it… 
      Anna was confused whether to stay here or go, he was feeling he got insulted by Aditi .. 

Spruha looked at Aditi for two seconds, she thought Aditi and Anna had some discussion and that is why Aditi is asking me to get on Anna's shoulder, she immediately agreed to this approach with a smile… 
She came near Anna and said.. 
“ Ab mujhe dar nahi… “ ( I don't have fear now… )   Anna who was feeling lonely in that group. He was thinking of leaving and felt insulted. As he heard Spruha saying that It was like a cool breeze on Anna's just broken heart
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Guys sorry for the delay,because of some personal commitments and rough times not getting time to write and not in right mood and emotion to write erotically.  I will try to provide one more small update in few days which is almost completed and I would need some time before I go for next part...
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thats quite alright dost... We will miss your writings though... and wish you overcome the rough times in ur personal life soon...
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