Adultery Maids Conspiracy

[Meaty_DickO]

Don't mind but please don't give unnecessary suggestions while you yourself are using English language. Let writter go with flow. If writter become sensitive and don't update, world will miss a masterpiece epic ???

Why worry? U r nt devoided of anything  ,The translations r perfectly giving the essence 
& Plz dont b ruf w fellow masturbators  .. its actually this apt use of desi language that makes arousing n realistic

[xboard1986]

Bro, public demands another big update

[Meaty_DickO]

Writer bro , an avg size updt can b expected per 3-4 days

[Dilbar420]

Can't wait plz update asap

[Vijay41]

[critic_honest]

Dear Author, I randomly just went through this story of yours and saw that its your first story. My wishes for you :)

Although I am still reading the PART 8 at the moment and I know I am quite late in giving the initial suggestions for the story but still I have a few, if you're keen to accept.

Honestly when I started reading this story and was finishing PART 1,  I genuinely felt that finally after so long I've luckily come across a story which sounds to have a great potential to turn into a masterpiece story. I must say your story's initial buildup was excellent and quite grasping. 
The story's concept, the dialogs, the storyline, the characters and mainly the conversation between them looks so genuine. I was total bang on.
It Looked as if I am reading some mature author whose idea of the story is to give it a realistic approach but but but sorry to say soon my expectations started dropping when I was finishing PART 2.
                    Right now I am on chapter 8 mid and I can already predict what would happen next. You are already on the path to make Aditi a slutty character which I was most afraid of, and trust me this would turn out to be the downfall of the story which would make the story of grade b type.

In the starting, you showed that Aditi is today's generation modern and educated woman who actually loves her husband and is very loyal kind but just after  watching a single video made her weak to a level that she started imagining Anna in her dreams in first go itself. But still giving it  benefit of doubt and assuming its okay as it could be natural for a loyal human as well if one sees that kind of exotic stuff but what you ruined in that was the sexual relation of Aditi and her Husband. Was it really necessary to show that Aditi's husband is so so soft or bad at sex?  You are already showing as if Aditi has very bad sex life which actually show that Aditi will be an easy target. You shouldn't have to show their sex life so dull.
In PART 6 itself, she has started losing her personality and has no objection in mating with Anna on those stairs. Although its not happened in actual but still we get an idea that she has already lost the battle of maintaining her strong character which we all were proud of a moment before. She is opening accepting to make out with Anna in front of Meena. I'm worried, in the next few episodes Aditi herself would start using that crude language, & then nothing will be left in the story as there won't remain any difference between Aditi or Meera or Nalini. Trust me slutty characters are never exciting. You're making her too easy to get in such a short span of time. 
                                   Also, I think you now are rotating the story too much on the base of those sex videos and it has started becoming boring a bit. It looks as if Meena will do the complete work of manipulation and changing Aditi's mindset on the basis of those videos itself and Anna will get Aditi as a easy wrapped gift without doing much. The seduction process is looking too easy now and Aditi is looking like a warrior who has already lost the battle. she has already become easy in eyes of MEENA which shouldn't have happened so early. Aditi now has no objection to anything MEENA says, she even was cool when MEENA bought another MMS of nalini. How can one change so quickly. Strange !!
Its looks as if even the character NALINI is also being forced to change ADITI's perception of mind. Which Mother in law laughs when her own son's wife is being talked about being fucked. At least she should raise some real concern there but nothing comes from her. 
Sorry but It now has slowly started looking like a porn instead of sex story now where things happen illogically.
 
I think you should give some twists and show Aditi a tuff character who is not that easy to seduce. May be, she somehow gets to know that Meena is the culprit and she is manipulating he working alongside with Anna. Things would definitely change from there and it would become tuff job for Anna to get Aditi after that. This would make the story interesting and hard to predict. This was just an idea as I'm sure you would have many others in your talented mind. 




I have a few pointers for any story if you'd like to apply them:


1. Most stories here on Xossipy have that same centuries old plot, making it very pathetic and boring.
   Step 1 > Husband will be shown loving but quite weak in sex who climaxes too early in bed but his wife will have a very high sex libido, thus husband keeping her physically unsatisfied. This approach eventually makes it very predictable that soon wife is going to get seduced.  [In our story it looks a bit like that]
   Step 2> Then, slowly the wife after getting seduced easily by someone slowly turn into a whore character who doesn't even care of her husband anymore. Worse, wife & lover sometimes even start humiliating the husband. End of the story. Right ?
Honestly, this plot is so common and so pathetic. Please don't follow the same approach in your story as well.


2. Always remember you are writing a sex story and not writing some porn script where things happen illogically at very fast pace. Always make your plots & circumstances sound realistic. Making Aditi weak and easy each and every time should not be the objective.

3. Its always fun and exciting when wife and husband are madly in love and are happy with each other in every aspect of life including sex. Real excitement unfolds when, even if at this 'all good stage', things change & wife still gets slowly seduced somehow. Let's see how you do it?
keeping my fingers crossed]

Seducing a Loyal, tuff and a strong character woman is an art in itself and far far more exciting than the woman who is quite easy & readily available  and desperate for attention of other men.

> Here till now personality of Aditi was shown strong & she looks like a perfect wife wife till now. Fingers cross how her personality turns out to be.

4. Please don't ever turn ADITI into some characterless cock hungry betraying slut woman who  easily opens her legs. Use logics in your story plot which are hard to question. Make the situations look realistic which you are actually doing till now.
Circumstances should always look realistic. Avoid illogical sex scripts.

If ADITI  is displayed as a loyal, strong character and a loving wife then it would be always hard for ANNA to get into her pants which is the real fun. This would create more interest in the story. Make her hard to get. Make her strong in eyes of MEENA.
Even if she gets intimate withy ANNA in some unavoidable situation, don't change her character in to some cheap whore which would make her easier to bed again. Maintain her dignity at all costs so that its always difficult to get her.

Don't ever snatch away the love and respect between the couple Aditi and her Husband because that makes the woman vulnerable and easy to get. Every one loves a woman who is devoted to love.

3. Never be in a hurry to make ADITI fuck by ANNA. Always remember, the day ADITI gets fucked, it would steal away some excitement for sure because that will make readers assume that, now she has become easy target to get. So take your time and build your story. Think it through and turn into a beautiful story. Small incidents should keep happening keeping us readers on edge which would slowly move towards its goal.
Otherwise it would be just like watching a porn which is useless.

4. One final suggestion. please story listening to each and every reader. Remember its you who started the story so just go with the slow place. Don't be in a hurry to give steamy sex till its actually required.
Always Remember, its an erotic story and not some cheap porn.

 
I hope that helps. My best wishes for you.

Thanks

[abcturbine]

Wonderful writings...
Amazing continuation.....

[Big_Bang]

Why worry? U r nt devoided of anything  ,The translations r perfectly giving the essence 
& Plz dont b ruf w fellow masturbators  .. its actually this apt use of desi language that makes arousing n realistic

Sure bro!!! Sorry if my words hurt ?

[xboard1986]

Bro, plz update yaar

[Dilbar420]

when we will see update idea plz

[M¡Lf€@TeR]

The story is good , & U had bn updting it more/less regularly , & this had genuinely raised hopes...
Readers r supportive , but pls atleast dont make them beg now. Break this Over -delay n uncertainty trend in xossip...
U can dear

[Rizzi1198]

Waiting dear

[xossissippi]

Wow Wow Wow! just WOW! What an amazing update! This is probably the most amazing update I've ever read!

Nostalgic I'm saying you really are a master narrator! Wow with each update you try to break the limitation on how to make it most erotic. And hands down I've tell you, this is the most erotic update I've read. There is no actual sex that is happening and yet you've made it so erotic to read. So best!

Keep this going!

[critic_honest]

This story is turning now really funny !! lol

I am on PART 10 and it made me feel as if every one is magically changing just to make Aditi think that getting fucked by Anna is alright.
Spruha's character changed overnight just after looking at that condom. wow !! She started talking about fucking that big dick guy just like that out of nowhere. Does that happen in real life. A BIG NO ...
All of a sudden they are discussing things about sex which which author says they never did. I guess some magic happened in a minute, lol.
And the most funny thing is Anna. Is he some God or some Superhero ? Lol. He sees everything happening as if he has 20 eyes and what he doesn't see he eventually finds it out. He gets to know everything somehow which is so stupid. He should have been a detective rather than a vegetable vendor, coz he would solve anything just by imagining.
Seriously story is getting illogical day by day..
Why is no one against it and at least calls it immoral thus making it difficult for Anna.
Come on dear author, don't be in such a haste to make Aditi Fuck. Now it feels as if whom so ever comes in story, he/she will help say, yes yes go fuck Anna just because he has big dick..

come on at least thoda toh difficult banao for Anna otherwise it will start getting very boring which it already has actually.

Sorry but ,this story is turning so unrealistic and illogical now.

only exciting thing was Aditi somehow smelling his cum but Anna shouldn't have got to know this. He is not God !!

[xossissippi]

The author has dropped subtle hints about the mystery between Aditi and Bhiva with each updates and it is only to be revealed with Anna. But based on the hints, I'm suspecting Aditi has offered more than her magnificent beautiful big boobs to Bhiva! Wow!

I'll tell you why..

if you had observed, Aditi before going upstairs she was wearing that sensuous white shorts and by the time she reached terrace to call her hubby, she had changed her shorts to pants.
And also like Anna had mentioned in the recent update. He had been in the bathroom (fantasizing about our dear Aditi) for more than 25 minutes. Wow! and just as he feared, "that's a lot of time!"

And also Aditi herself revealed that "she would lie down and spread her legs and surrender her pink pussy to such a big cock!" Wow!
So there should be a possibility that Bhiva was able to seduce Aditi completely and went all the way in. (Thanks to Meena for manipulating her views on Adultery and surrender completely to the sight of big cocks, as those opportunities are so rare!) They definitely had quickey. Why? because if you remember, Aditi had also mentioned about the story of how Bhiva seduced his teacher and impregnated her. That story he cannot tell to Aditi under 5 minutes (contrary to what Aditi had explained to Spruha about what happend between them), so he definitely used this story to seduce Aditi and spread her legs. Because of her sleazy shorts, Bhiva had easy access, once he saw her pink pussy he went mad and fucked her good for 25 minutes as he revealed earlier to Rachana that he's crazy for pink pussies and would do anything to fuck one because he never seen one. Our Aditi fits the right description would have try to fulfill this poor man's souls wish for the last time before they depart! In that heat, she might've even let him cross all boundaries and deposit his cum deep inside her just like how his teacher allowed him to impregnate her. That would just steamy hot revelation!

And after having steamy hot session, she wore her panties and shorts back, but later on found she still dripping with Bhiva's cum made her panties and shorts soiled and smell of cum. So she had to change her shorts to pants and panties! (Remember Spruha saw Aditi's red panties in Anna's bag in the recent update when she came to collect frisbee, she found Aditi's panties with thick cum stains!) All of this should add up!

She was feeling happy that she got leverage on Anna who had fucked Rachana in front of her. She was able to exact revenge on Anna. But also she was feeling sad that it was not Anna who get to be the first to fuck her in her love hole. So after the session when she saw Anna, she forgot all her anger towards him and just wanted to hug him and offer her boobs to him as a way of sorry to him.

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Or... Or... Or..
What I said is completely wrong because Bhiva came down stairs running with his hand on his cheeks. To which Aditi revealed to Spruha that she had slapped him earlier because he try to get too naughtly.
Wow! way to go author for keeping that mystery alive! We'll only know when she reveals to Anna ;)

[The Thinker]

The author has dropped subtle hints about the mystery between Aditi and Bhiva with each updates and it is only to be revealed with Anna. But based on the hints, I'm suspecting Aditi has offered more than her magnificent beautiful big boobs to Bhiva! Wow!

I'll tell you why..

if you had observed, Aditi before going upstairs she was wearing that sensuous white shorts and by the time she reached terrace to call her hubby, she had changed her shorts to pants.
And also like Anna had mentioned in the recent update. He had been in the bathroom (fantasizing about our dear Aditi) for more than 25 minutes. Wow! and just as he feared, "that's a lot of time!"

And also Aditi herself revealed that "she would lie down and spread her legs and surrender her pink pussy to such a big cock!" Wow!
So there should be a possibility that Bhiva was able to seduce Aditi completely and went all the way in. (Thanks to Meena for manipulating her views on Adultery and surrender completely to the sight of big cocks, as those opportunities are so rare!) They definitely had quickey. Why? because if you remember, Aditi had also mentioned about the story of how Bhiva seduced his teacher and impregnated her. That story he cannot tell to Aditi under 5 minutes (contrary to what Aditi had explained to Spruha about what happend between them), so he definitely used this story to seduce Aditi and spread her legs. Because of her sleazy shorts, Bhiva had easy access, once he saw her pink pussy he went mad and fucked her good for 25 minutes as he revealed earlier to Rachana that he's crazy for pink pussies and would do anything to fuck one because he never seen one. Our Aditi fits the right description would have try to fulfill this poor man's souls wish for the last time before they depart! In that heat, she might've even let him cross all boundaries and deposit his cum deep inside her just like how his teacher allowed him to impregnate her. That would just steamy hot revelation!

And after having steamy hot session, she wore her panties and shorts back, but later on found she still dripping with Bhiva's cum made her panties and shorts soiled and smell of cum. So she had to change her shorts to pants and panties! (Remember Spruha saw Aditi's red panties in Anna's bag in the recent update when she came to collect frisbee, she found Aditi's panties with thick cum stains!) All of this should add up!

She was feeling happy that she got leverage on Anna who had fucked Rachana in front of her. She was able to exact revenge on Anna. But also she was feeling sad that it was not Anna who get to be the first to fuck her in her love hole. So after the session when she saw Anna, she forgot all her anger towards him and just wanted to hug him and offer her boobs to him as a way of sorry to him.

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Or... Or... Or..
What I said is completely wrong because Bhiva came down stairs running with his hand on his cheeks. To which Aditi revealed to Spruha that she had slapped him earlier because he try to get too naughtly.
Wow! way to go author for keeping that mystery alive! We'll only know when she reveals to Anna ;)

100% Agreeing with You brother
The author is great in giving small hints and later make them big revelation..

The title Is maid's Conspiracy And Maid is not done with her conspiracy..
Anna Is just a side tool and writer has given a lot of hints regarding this..
Bhiva got what he wanted and Aditi will tell Anna that not when she is seduced but when she will show him his place that he is not the candidate to Get Aditi..

Writer is Great Visionary and won't keep a linear plot of a Anna Getting Aditi 
Bhiva tasted her and Soon some Another character will come Introduced By The Maid
And that will be the Ultimate plan of The Maid..

Anna is Just a deviation and Soon A major twist will come

This is Very Exciting story Because From the Title to Small Hints .
It's Maids Conspiracy and She will conspire Not Anna.

[Nostalgic]

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[Nostalgic]

Guys sorry for the delay,because of some personal commitments and rough times not getting time to write and not in right mood and emotion to write erotically.  I will try to provide one more small update in few days which is almost completed and I would need some time before I go for next part...

[qazmlp]

thats quite alright dost... We will miss your writings though... and wish you overcome the rough times in ur personal life soon...

[Dilbar420]

I think aditi should also give a chance to close encounter with bhiva convinced by among of these girls