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Incest Komal @ komalpreet kaur ( incest thriller short story )
#21
Kavi g update kar dayo
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#22
Kavita ji your writing skills are too good.. have no words to express.. will simply say you are my favourite writer... waiting
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Waiting mam
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#24
sara maza kharab ho janda
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 'Tusi e keha c menu es baar bore nyi hoyi honi ghar ch deor jo reh k gya'  gardn ghuma raj wal vekh priya kam krdi krdi muskurandi hoyi boli
 'Haan pr oh tan aya e nyi c ..' kahli kahli ch bolea raj 
 'Haan nyi aya c ... tusi menu cherd rahey c tease kr rahey c ' raj wal vekh hasdi hoyi boli priya'  mein b keh dita aya c ...'
 'Pr ...' samj na ayi raj nu  ki keh rahi a priya
 'Ki pr ... tusi e keha  c khoob masti kiti honi deor bhabhi ney mein b tuhanu tease krn lyi keh  ditta aho vohat masti kiti'  bull tuk muskurandi hoyi boli priya
 'Pr eda wadda jooth ..' hairaan hoyea raj priya dean akhn ch vekhda burburaya
 'Tusi e puchea c es baar bdi chehk chehk msti hoyi   lagdi a'  raj wal vekhdi priya boli  ' kitey tun tan nyi aman di goddi ch' 
 'Tun mna b tan kr sakdi c'  priya dey modey fad usnu apney wal kr raj dharkdey dil nal usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea'  mein tan waisey e mjak ch keha c' 
 'Mna krn  lgi c fer sochea mjak kr rahey ney  kr lain es lyi chup rahi .. pr tusi meri chuppi nu serious lay liya ... sida e puch lya Kha meri sonh tun tey aman ney kuch nyi  ..tere  tey aman vichaley kuch nyi hoyea'  raj dey moddeya tey hath rakh muskurandi hoyi boli priya
 'Haan pr tun sonh nyi khadi'  priya da jwaab sin apney bechain ho sukdey bulln nu chabda raj hairaan hunda bolea
 'Mein keha tan c tuhanu yakeen nyi apni vohti tey ..' raj nu preshaan hairaan ho behas krdey vekh boli priya 
 'Menu lga pkka tun aman nu  .. es lyi sonh nyi khadi meri .. ' haklanda hdbdanda hoyea raj bolea'  es lyi mein ...'
Boli kuch nyi priya tedi akh naal raj wal vekh nimi nimi muskurandi rasoyi ch apna kam krn lgi..
 'Das b ..' hor sabr na hoyea raj ton priya  dey modey fad bechain hoyea usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea..' chup kyoun a' 
 'Ds tan ditta .... nyi aya c aman chuttia ch'  gardan ghuma raj dean akhn ch vekh muskurandi hoyi boli priya '  j hor kuch puchna  tan rasoyi da kam mukka tuhadey kol e hona bed tey.. udon puch layeo ...hun mummy ji dinner udeek rahey ney .. tusi b fresh ho k change kr layo mein dinner ready kr lwaan ..'









Kamrey ch edr udr ghumdey bechain hoye raj  ton  hor udeek nyi hundi pyi c  ... baar  baar rasoyi ch kam krdi priya wal vekhda besbra hoyea ehi soch riha c kad priya kamrey ch awey tey o us naal gal karey ...
 'Sorry priya'  jiven e kamrey ch priya ayi  kahli kahli ch us kol jaa  ghut k jaffi panda raj emotional ho  bolea' Tun jooth kyoin bolea'
 'Hun kehra jhooth... ' raj dean wahan ch kasmasandi priya usdean akhn ch vekhdi anjaan bndi boli 
 

 'Aman tan chuttian ch college trips tey goa gya c ..'  priya da munh apney hathn ch fad usdean akhn ch vekhda raj bolea '   mein usdey trips dean pics facebook instragram  ch vekhiyaan .'
 'Ohhhh .. ' masoom jeha munh bna priya raj dean akhn ch vekhdi ena keh chup kr gyi
' tenu dss dena chahida c  raat mein tenu ena gussey'  priya dey munh tey ayi walln di latt nu prey krda raj gaur nal usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea
 'Tusi bolan e nyi dey rahey c .. pta nyi ki ki puchi ja rahey c .. kithey diti.... kidan diti ...deor nu blah blah pta nyi ki ki boli gye ..  chotta c fer tan rilak tilak janda hona..'  raj dey modey tey sar rakh akhn churandi priya holi jehi boli
 'Ohhh ..' samj naa ayi raj nu ki jwaab devey....sahi tan keh rahi c priya pta nyi kehra swaad aa riha c usnu raat priya nu aman barey puch puch... kuch der chup reh  sochda hoyea bolea'  tun e keha c chotta c  '
 'Mein kehra vekhya c usda chotta e hona tuhadey ton .' Raj wal vekh tedi akh naal usdey pattan wal vekh usdey moddey tey sar rakhdi boli priya .  'Ek tan tuhada pehln e lamba  motta  tey raat tan tuhada   hor b motta tey lamba lag riha c ..

 'Tun e keh rahi c galti ho gyi maaf kr deo ..' priya dey sar nu ungln nal palosda raj usnu apnia wahan ch ghutda bolea
 'Tuhanu gussa e ena chadeya hoyea c' moddey tey mukka mardi  priya boli' tusi eh kidan soch lya tuhadi vohti deor naal fas gyi honi ..'
 'Nyi nyi ...galti ho gyi'  ghut k priya nu jaffi panda  raj fer emotional hunda bolea'  sorry tera dil dukhaya ... tenu gussey hoyea ..'
 'Koi nyi ji'  sar chuk raj wal vekh muskurandi hoyi boli'  pr  eh  pta lag gya mere gharwaley nu gussa b anda  .....'..'Tuhada gussa vekh ek gal tan samj aa gyi .. tusi menu vohat e jyada pyar krdey o  esi lyi tusi gussey ...'
 'Pyaar  ' priya da munh apney hathn ch farda raj usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea' jaan a tun meri' 
 'Esi lyi kuttya c menu ...' bina akh jhapkey raj dean akhn ch vekhdi priya masoom jehi bn boli 
 'Kan farda agey ton kdi b nyi ..'ghut k jaffi pa  priya dey bulln kol apney bull lyada  raj ek lamba sah lenda bolea' hun tan bas pyaar ..'
 'Nyi bilkul b nyi' raj  dey bulln tey ungl rakh nakhra krdi priya apney bull usdey bulln ton dur krdi boli'  aj nyi mein khadi khadi deni kal jaan nikl gyi c jidan tusi kaudi kr ... '
' nyi nyi'  priya nu goddi chuk bed wal lijanda raj chehkda hoyea bolea ' aj tan apni parriya wargi vohti nu fulln wang pyar karunga' 
 'Reh deo ji' raj dey gal ch wahan pa usdi goddi ch jhuldi priya  akhn matkandi boli'  pta hay na raat ki keh rahey c' 
 'Ki  'priya nu bed tey lmi paa us nal lma painda raj muskuranda bolea  
 'Jad mein keha c mein dig jana tusi kidan  keha c nyi dign dinda eni  ku jaan hay tuhadey usch k  menu  khadi khadi nu us utey tang k  .. 'boldi boldi sharma gyi priya 
 'Kis tey tang k ..' priya dean akhn ch vekh raj muskuranda hoyea usnu cherda bolea 
 'Menu nyi pta' sharma k priya  modey tey mukka mardi hik ch munh lukondi boli'  besharm jehey ..'
'Sachin raat  kuch jyada e bol gya mein'  priya dey munh ton wallan di latt prey krda raj usdey mathey nu chumbda bolea'  pta nyi raat menu ena gussa kyoun. .' 

 'Koi na ji ..'  angrayi lendi  priya bull tukdi  boli'  tuhadey gussey ch jrhra  pyaar ...sarur tey swaad  lukeya c uff ....'
 'Mja aya c tenu ..' priya dey munh wal vekhda ek sakoon bhareya sah lenda  raj bolea ... 
 haan ch sar hilandi bull tukdi priya chehkdi hoyi boli' jad tusi gussey ch tika tika mere andr bahr kr rahey c  .. ufff eni dur dur mere andr   ja takra marria hye enj lagda c jiven  jannat ch ...uff jad tusi meri back try thapd marey mere wal b puttey  ahhh dard b hoyea pr us dard ander lukey swaad ch ek vakhra e sarur c  ..' 

 'Tun kehndi c galti ho gyi maaf kr deo eh sun .. mere ton pta nyi kyoun gussey ch thapd..' apney hath wal vekh  raj usdean galln chumbda bolea ..
 'O oh tan tuhanu hor josh dilandi c chetey a na jad b kehendi galti ho gyi udon tusi pura bahr kad eko baar ch  andr hye tilak k dhur tak  uffff ...'..Pehli baar tusi   gussey  ch ...hamesha pyar nal e menu ... pr ..raat gussey ch jehra pyar ...ummmh umar bhar chetey rehna  ...tuhadey nalo jyada gussa tan tuhadey usnu nu chardeya hoyea c..
 'Haan  'kuch sochda hoyea bolea raj' Tun b bol bol vohat exicte kita..' apney akadey lun nu priya dey patt tey ragarda raj siskda hoyea bolea'  ek ajeev feeling ho rahi c ..' 
 'Ho rahey c na tusi exicte menu pta c chahey gussey ch menu ... pr swaad tuhanu b pura aa riha c ... 'sar chuk raj dey bull chumdi priya chehkdi hoyi boli'  menu pta c ..'

'Sorry ...' chatt wal vekhda burburaya raj ..' tere naal rat dhaka kita ..' dilon dukh lag riha c usnu jidan raat usney priya nu gussey ch ...
 'Eh tan sahi keha ..  'raj dey moddey tey sar rakh usdi hik tey ungln ferdi priya bull chab muskurandi hoyi boli'  dhakeya tan tusi purey josh ch c ...
 'Galti ho gyi ...' priya wal vekhda raj bolea'  pta nyi menu ki ho gya c' 
 'Hye rabba ena gussa ena josh'  raj nal chimbdi priya ahh bhardi boli'  pr ek gal a nihal e kr ditta tusi .. ufff josh ch menu kaudi kr jehrey tusi ..
 'Swaad aya c .. ' priya dey reshmi wallan ch ungln ferdey raj nu kuch sakoon milia .. nyi tan soch riha c kal usney jidan gussey ch priya naal dhaka kitta naraj na ho gyi hovey uston ...
 'Haan'  bull tukdi boli priya .. pr khadi khadi thak gyi c .. keha b c tuhanu bed tey .. pr tusi .. pta nyi kehra sarur tey swaad aa riha c tuhanu'  sar chuk raj wal vekh nimi nimi muskurandi hoyi priya boli'  kehndey aj khadi khadi nu.'
 'Oh oh ..' samj na ayi ki jwaab devey 

  'kehndey edan e kaudi kr chuadna ...   'jad samj ayi ki boln lgi c dandn thalley jeeb dba chup kr gyi ..
 'Ki keha .'..'kahli kahli ch priya dey bulln wal vekhda bolea raj  lun nu tan jhatka e lageya priya dey munh ton chaudna sun 
 'Kuch nyi ... kuch nyi  ..' raj di hik tey nonh chubondi boli priya'  kidan kehndey c khadi khadi e laini teri..
 'Ohh ohhh ..  'apna sah niglda raj ahh bharda bolea  'pehli baar tenu edan nangi khadi vekheya ...'
 'Sarey cha purey kr lye.. kehndey .kehndey c nangi ho kaudi ho tey tey ...kehndey chung mera ..' apney patt tey chubdey raj dey akadey hoye lun wal vekhdi priya akhn matkandi boli'  bdey kharab o tusi ..'
 'Ohh ohhh ..'fer samj na ayi ki jwaab devey 
 'Mein b sochea kr lain cha purey . ' raj di hik tey ungln ferdi priya bull tukdi boli' esi lyi  tuhada chumeya ..'
 'Chumeya .. 'siskarda hoyea  raj bolea' tun jidan munh ch lay chuseya tey  chungeya ufff..'
 'Roab paa hukm e edan ditta . chungna paina c  'apna lak hila patt raj dey lun tey ragrdi priya hasdi hoyi boli' naley sochea tuhadey nalo jyada gussa tan tuhadey us nu chadeya hoyea a ...krna paina c usnu shant ... 
 'Uff priya das nyi sakda kinna swaad'  apney lun di takr priya dey patt tey marda raj ah bhar besbra ho bolea 
 'Pta menu .. tey tey kidn mintan krdey c .'sar chuk raj wal vekhdi priya muskurandi hoyi boli'  na kr  mera chitt jana' 
 'Uff   pagal kr ditt c tun'  priya nu wahan ch ghutda raj siskatda hoyea bolea 
 'Soch lya c chutda tan chutt javey pr hun esda gussa thand krna e karna  ' chehkdi hasdi hoyi priya boli' nyi tan es ney tan menu son nyi dena .. gussey ch pta nyi ki ki krn nu kehna ..'
' samaj nyi  aa rahi c ki ho gya c menu'  pyaar naal priya da sar  chumda raj bolea'  koi hosh nyi c ..'
 'tuhadey nalo jyada gussa tan tuhadey usnu   chardeya hoyea c kidan  funkarda ..  'tedi akh nal apney patt tey chubdey raj dey akad k khadey lun wal  vekhdi boli priya '  pta es di changi seva krni paini tan e es nu shanti milni ... '
 'By god priya raat jidan tun'  apney lun dey topey tey priya dey bulln nu chetey krda siskar utheya raj 
 'Ki krdi ji tusi roab e ena pa rahey c chungna pya ... ' raj di hik tey mukka mardi priya usnaal  chimbdi boli 
 'Ohi tan ..' ahh bharda raj apney bull ghutda bolea' tun tan hath ch fadn ch jijhkdi c tey raat ufff..'
 'Edn e a ... sang lagdi c jijhkdi c  pr raat ..'sar chuk raj wal vekh apney bull ghutdi boli priya'Soch lya c aj tuhada chung chung pani kadna ufff .. mein tan pee e jana c tuhada sara gussa ... oh tan tusi ain maukey tey mere munh ton vahr kad lya .. '
 'Mein tan   hor  ' priya dey bulln tey ungl ferda raj machlda hoyea bolea' pr munh vichon kad dey e  chutt gya'
 'Tey tey sara gussa josh dhar bn mere munh tey... mein b soch lya c aj puri luchi bn jana ..sar chuk raj wal vekhdi  priya usdi ungl bulln ch ghut chusdi hoyi boli  'dil tan karda c kha e jwaan kidan funkarey maar maar tapda c tuhada lulla ..'

 'Ki keha  'priya dey munh ton lulla sun jhatkey nal funkarda hoyea akad e gya raj da lun
 'Lulla'  chatkara lay lulla keh  uchi uchi hasdi hoyi priya angrayi lendi boli'  pr jiven e siri nap jaan kdi usdi tusi tan akhn band kr so e gye' 

 'O o gussey tey exictment ch ena kuch bol gya c himmat nyi ho rahi tere nal gal krn di ja fer akh milaan di . ' priya nu apney naal ghutda raj  kuch sochda hoyea bolea'  sorry' 
 'Mein tan washroom ton bahr nikldi hoyi dri hoyi c .. ' raj dey modey tey sar rakh akhn meechdi boli priya' pta nyi hor kini ku meri rail banayoungey aj mera gharwala pr tusi .. 
 'Tera dil  '  priya nu sehaj swaabh ch boldi naraj na hundi vekh raj usdey reshmi walln nu chumda bolea
 'Aho'  apni thodi raj dey moddey tey ragar haan ch sar hilandi priya akhn chuk raj wal vekhdi boli'  pr tusi apna swaad lay gaddi adh vichaley rok so gye ..
 'Ena kuch keh  ho gya c mere ton gussey ch tenu' hassan di kosis krda raj bolea'  mein sochea  tun naraj ..'
'Naraj tan hoyi c jad . ' raj dean akhn ch vekhdi priya boli'  apna  pura pura swaad lay so gye .. tey mein ..'

'Koi na aj nyi sonda na e tenu son dena'  ghut k jaffi panda raj priya dey dhid tey hath ferda chehkda hoyea bolea'  sari raat ...'
'Nyi nyi ..' jiven e priya nu raj da hath apney dhid ton fisl salwaar dey naley wal janda mehsoos hoyea usda hath fad rokdi hoyi bed tey uth beithi 
 'Kyoun ..' thora hairaan hunda raj b bed tey uth beith usdi pith chumda bolea'  naraaj a' 
 'Naraaj ..' gardan ghuma raj wal vekhdi priya muskurandi hoyi boli' naaraj tan nyi .. pr ajay ghar dey kam mukaney ney... mummy ji naal b thora kam a' 
'Ohhh' besbra ho raj  priya di gardan chumda bolea'  jana jaruri a' 
' hanji jana jaruri a ...mein tan kam krdi ney tuhanu kamrey ch edr udr ghumdey vekhya ea lyi kam chad k aa gyi'  raj wal vekh muskurandi hoyi priya boli'  sochea puchn tan sahi pareshaan lagdey o ..'
 'Na ja naa .. savery kr lawin kam ...'picheo priya nu jaffi panda raj machlda hoyea .bolea ..
 'Nyi ji jana tan paina ..' raj dean wahan ton nikl bed ton utardi priya apney wallan da juda krdi boli'  fikr na karo jaldi aa jawangi ..fer ..'
 'Fer ..' ah bhar priya di wanh fad besabra hoyea bolea .
 'Fer ...'akhan matka chehkdi hoyi priya agey nu ho raj dey bull chumdi boli'  fer aa k puchungi  tuhadey lulley nu k raat ena gussa kyoun chadeya hoyea c ..
 'O teri'  priya dey munh ton lulla sun bed ton uchal e pya raj' ki keha ek baar fer kahin ..'
 Hasdi chehkdi priya raj dey pattan ch akad k bahr nu ubrey lun wal vekhdi boli'  lulla' 
Sah niglda hauka lay bekabu e ho uthea raj jidan chatkara lay priya ney akhan matkandi keha' lulla' apni hik tey hath rakh ah bharda bolea'  jaldi aawin ..'


 'Bilkul ji jaldi e awangi ... tuhadey nalo jyada menu . .. raat aap tan swaad lay so gye meinu adh vichaley . 'bahr nu jandi gardan ghuma raj wal vekhdi priya hasdi hoyi boli'  bs raat wang so na jayeo ...'















Bahr aa .. rasoyi wal jandi ney ek baar mummy ji dey kamrey wal vekheya  gungunadi hoyi priya dey munh tey  ek sakoon c  tey dil mummy ji dey ehsaan ch  ijjat naal bharea hoyea c.. hunda b kyoun na ...j mummy ji .. aj dopehrey ... jad o hall ch mummy ji kol beithi c udon ... usnaal gal na krdey taan ... mummy ji di diti slah haley b usnu chetey c tey thank god sab kuch usi trah ho riha c ..



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'Ki gal pareshan lagdi a ..' samney sofey tey chup chap  beithi priya nu  vekhdi komal ney akhir puch e lya 
 'Nyi tan mummy ji ..' ek dum kahli kahli ch boli  priya'  pareshaan kyoun ..'
 'Kafi der ton notice kr rahi haan gumsum beithi a .. tera fav serial aa riha'   priya wal vekh fer tv wal vekhdi  boli komal ..' aj o b nyi vekh rahi ..'
 'O  bs mummy ji... mood kuch ..' komal ton akhn churandi priya tv wal vekhdi boli ..
 'Raj ney kuch keha ...'gaur naal priya dean udas akhn ch vekhdi komal ney puchea  
 'Nyi nyi o kyoun kuch .. ' hdbda k komal ton  akhn churandi  boli priya  
 'Menu lga raj  nal koi gal hoyi . ..hamesha khush  chehkdi rehn wali  meri nunh aj chup chap udas beithi sochan ch dubi hoyi ..' kuch sochdi priya da chehra padan di kosis krdi  boli komal 
 'Nyi mummy ji o kyoun kuch kehngey kal e tan tour ton waps aye ney ..' komal wal vekh apney sar tey chunni theek krdi priya  tv wal vekhdi boli'  ajhehi koi gal nyi ...'
' fer theek a ..'  hall ch edar udr vekhdi komal priya dean akhn ch vekh holi jehi  boli'  menu lga kitey raj  nu tere tey aman barey pta lag gya ..'
 'Mere tey aman barey'  kahli kahli ch hadbda k haklandi hoyi burburayi priya .... dil dhark k munh ch aa gya chehrey da rang e ud gya ..mummy ji eh ki puch rahey ..

 'Ehi gal hay na ..' priya nu ghabra k akhn churandi vekh komal sofey tey thori agey nu hundi holi jehi boli ..
 'Nyi nyi' himmat kr bdi muskil naal komal dean akhn ch vekhdi boli priya  .. lattan usdean kambn lgea .. eh mummy ji ki puch rahey ney .....' nyi nyi mummy mere tey aman vich kuch .. kuch nyi ..
 'Menu b ehi lagda c deor bhabhi ch  bs hassa majak ... pr usdin rasoyi ch ...jad tere kol khada aman galln krda krda teri hik palosn lga .. menu lga tun gussey hoyoungi pr jad tun muskurandi ney addea chuk apni hik usdey modey naal ragar bull agey nu kitey samj gyi... akh mataka kafi agey wadh gya deor bhabhi ch' 
 'Nyi tan mummy ji .. 'haklandi hoyi mukr gyi priya enj lageya kisi ney usnu chori kardi fad lya hovey ...ghabra k edr udr vekhdi boli'  mein tey aman rasoyi ch ..kado' 
' jad es baar college dean chuttiyan ch aman ghar aya c ...' gaur nal priya  dey chehrey wal vekhdi  boli komal.. priya da udeya munh. .. usnu  hadbda k boldi vekh samj tan gyi komal  saaf jhooth bol rahi a priya
 'Nyi mummy ji tuhanu bhulekha  lga hona ..' himmat  kr larkharandi awaaz ch boli priya  saaf pta lg riha c usdey shabd usda sath nyi dey rahey ...
 'Ohh ..' priya wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi komal boli'  fer tan menu eh b bhulekha lga hona tun us raat  chori chori aman dey kamrey ch gyi ..'
Hun tan enj lga priya  nu usda khoon e suk gya ... jwaan larkharn lgi ... ghabrayi hoyi apna sah nigl sofey tey ekethi jehi ho edar udr vekhn lgi himmat nyi c usdi mummy ji naal  akh milla sakey ...
Ek dum shanti sannata hall ch .... saaf sunayi dey rahi c priya  nu.. dharkdey dil di awaaz ..
 'Hun eh na kahi waisey e gyi c aman nu usdey kamrey ch milan..' priya nu ghabra k ekethi jehi ho sofey tey beithi  vekh fer boli komal '  jwaan bhabhi kuwarey deor kol raat nu ...awen tan nyi ' 
 'Oh oh mummy ji  'ena e niklya priya dey munh ton...  samj na ayi ki jwaab devey mummy ji nu sab pta usdey tey aman barey ....'
 'Chal chadd eh sab ... ' uth k priya kol aa beithdi komal boli ..  'ho janda jwaan deor bhabhi ch eh... edi wdi gal nyi ... tun upset udass pareshan kyoun a ..' 
 'O muumy ji  'kuch boldi boldi chup kr gyi priya  hath pair ajay b kamb rahey c pr dil dey kisi konney nu sakoon jeha milia mummy ji da jwaab sun .. usnu gussa hon ja kuch kehan di bjaye ..mummy ji ney tan aap e keh ditta'  ho janda jwaan deor bhabji ch eh sab .. edi wadi gal nyi ..' 
 'Raj  nu pta lag gya .. tere tey aman barey ' gaur nal priya dean akhn ch vekhdi komal boli 
Boli tan kuch nyi priya .. pr haan ch sar hilla hall ch edr udr vekhn lgi ... hun jad mummy nu sab pta hay e tan lukona kyoun 
 'Raj nu  kidan pta lga ..  'kuch sochdi hoyi komal nu samj aa gyi priya  saver di udas upset ukhdi ukhdi kyoun a ... usdi thodi fad munh upr nu chukdi boli'  o tan ethey nyi c ... tun daseya ..'
Haan ch sar hilandi priya apney bull ghutdi pareshan hoyi edr udr vekhn lgi 
 'Matlab tun aap das ditta raj  nu  'hairan hoyi komal kahli kahli ch boli'  pagal a tun .. ki lord c ..' 
 'O o mummy ji unha ney apni sonh dey k pucheya ...' boldi boldi priya di awaaz bhar ayi ..' mere ton das ho gya ..' 
 'Pagal a edi wadi gal gharwaley nu kon dasda ..' hor hairaan hundi komal boli ..' sonh  khan nu keh riha c kha lendi ...pr edi wadi gall gharwaley nu  ..
' jhoothi sonh enha di'  komal wal vekhdi hoyi priya  dean akhn bhar ayean ...' mein kidan ..'

 'Kuch nyi hunda jhoothi sachi sonh khan naal'  priya dey modey tey hath rakhdi komal  boli'  apni gharwali dey munh ton eh sun kehra gharwala ... ' gussey hoyea hona ladeya hona tere naal..' 
 'Hanji .. 'haan ch sar hilandi priya boli'  saverey b changi trah gal nyi kitti hun b kinni der ho gyi bahr gye hoye ney phone b nyi chuk rahey ...'
'Ohhh'  priya  da jwaab sun komal  b pareshan ho uthi fer kuch sochdi hoyi  boli'  ki daseya raj nu ..' 
 'Ehi ... ' kuch sukuchandi hoyi priya  boli'  es baar jad aman vacations tey aya c mein us naal   .    .. galti ho gyi maaf kr deo .' 
 'ki Lord c dasan di tenu ki lagda tun das ditta galti mn lyi raj ney maff kr ditta'  gaur nal priya da udaas masoom chehra vekhdi boli komal 
 'Nyi ...' nah ch sar hilandi ron hakki hoyi priya boli'  vohat gussey hoye ... '
 'Hmmm ...' kuch der chup reh komal ney puchea  '  hun fer ..' 
 'Kuch samj nyi aa rahi mummy ji .. pta nyi eh ki ...' akhn vichon hanju nikl galln tey aa gye subkdi hoyi burburayi  'meri e galti a menu aman naal     .galat kitta mein enha nu cheat krkey ...'
 'Hmmmm ..'kuch sochdi hoyi komal  nu tars b aya tey gussa b priya  tey ki lord c raj  nu eh sab dasan di ...
' mein apni life aap barbaad kr lyi ...' hichkia lendi sofey tey sar tikandi burburayi priya '  pta nyi hun   eh meinu   ..'
 'Koi life barbaad nyi ...  kuch nyi hoyea'  tars e aa gya  komal nu  priya nu hickhia lendi rondi vekh modey fad usdean akhn ch vekhdi boli'  tun aman nu phone kr ..' 
 'Nyi nyi'  ek dum mukrdi hoyi kahli kahli ch boli priya '  mein hun  aman nal kadi b nyi ..' 
 'Gal tan sun puri ..' priya wal vekh boli komal ..' aman nu phone kr key keh j koi puchey usnu tan ehi kahey es baar chuttia  tey o ghar nyi aya c college friends naal goa trip ghuman gya c ...'
 'Matlab . .'smj na ayi ki keh rahey ney mummy ji apney hanju punjdi komal wal vekhn lgi
 'Jo mein keh rahi haan o kr tey usnu eh b keh apnia koi goa dean purnia pics b facebook tey upload kr devey .. ' priya nu samjandi hoyi komal boli'  j raj vekhey tan us  nu lgey k aman es baar ghar aya e nyi  vacations tey goa gya c 
 'Ji  'kuch kuch samj ayi ki kehna chah rahey ney mummy ji ..'
 'Tey jad raj   ayouga mein b usnu keh dayongi  tun tour tey rehnda  'priya wal vekhdi boli komal'  tey aman b vacations tey ghar naa aa k goa ghuman chala gya.. tuhanu dona bharwan nu ghar di koi fikr hay b k nyi ...'
 'Mummy ji tusi ...' akhn ch chamak dil ch ek aas ...mehsoos hoyi  priya nu komal di gal sun 
 'Haan .. ek tan apni nunh nu edan udas  dukhi nyi vekh sakdi tey duji jehri galti tun raj nu apney tey aman barey das key kiti a o b theek krni a ..  ' priya wal vekh muskurandi hoyi komal boli' bs jo mein keh rahi haan tun ohi kr .. fer vekhin sab normal.pehln wang ....
 'Ji mummy ji .'.  Ena sundey e priya  dean akhn ch chamak aa gyi agey nu ho komal  nu jaffi pandi boli'  tusi kinney changey o ... 
 'Tey tun oni e pagal  'priya  nu apnia wahan ch ghutdi  hasdi hoyi boli komal' .. ajehi gal b koi apney gharwaley nu dasda jhalli jehi ...'

 'Guilty feel ho rahi c  'sar chuk komal  wal vekhdi apney aap nu sambhldi  boli priya '  pta nyi kyoun behak jehi gyi c mein aman naal  ..'
 'Kyoun mja nyi aya ..' priya  dean akhn ch vekhdi muskurandi hoyi  boli komal'  ena sohna sunkha gabru jwaan deor a tera' 
 'Mummy ji .. 'shrm nal munh e lal ho gya priya  da eh mummy  ji ney ki puch lya akhn churandi edr udr vekh lgi ..
 'Najarey tan purey luttey honey  deor bhabhi ney' priya di thodi fad usdean akhn ch vekhdi komal akhn matkandi hasdi hoyi  boli
 'Menu nyi pta'  komal ton akhn churandi  sharma k munh  luko lya chunni ch priya ney 
 'Aye hye hun vekh kidan kehndi a menu nyi pta'  priya dey munh ton chunni prey kr us  nu cherdi komal  hasdi hoyi boli'  fer ki krdi rahi sari raat deor kol ...' jad kuch na boli priya  kuch der chup reh fer boli kimal ' Vekh tan lya c us raat tenu aman dey kamrey ch jandi nu puchn b lgi c fer sochea deor nu e den chali a kehri kisi begainey nu ... naley fer nwa nwa jwaan hoyea munda a changa e a  bhabhi khiyal rakhey hor kitey aand gwand di luchi run dey hathey chard gya badnaami dey naal naal koi syapa na khada ho javey ...'

Thori hairaan hoyi  priya nu samj na ayi ki jwaab devey .. pr ek gal da sakoon c usdey tey aman barey jini sehaj swaab nal mummy ji ney keha'  nwa nwa jwaan hoyea munda a changa e  a bhabhi khiyal rakhey hor kitey aand gwand di luchi run dey hathey chard gya badnaami dey naal naal koi syapa na khada ho javey ...'hauka bhareya sah lendi boli'  fer b mummy ji  mein...Galti ...menu aman nal eh sab nyi ..'
 'Kehri galti ..  ' deor naal eh saab koi edi wadi gal nyi .... aksar ho janda deor bhabhi ch ...  ' priya dey patt tey hath maar hasdi hoyi boli komal'  tere ton b ....' 
 'Fer b mummy ji'  kuch sochdi hoyi boli priya 
 'Jyada na soch jwani ch ho janda tere ton b  .. ' priya  wal vekhdi komal  boli'  tun tan fer viah ton doh saal baad .. mera tan viah ton sat ath mahiney baad e kand ho gya c ..'
 'Tuhada ...  'hadbda k hairaan hundi priya  nu yakeen na hoyea usney ki suneya .. 
 'Aho nee umar e ajehi hundi .. deor nal hassa mjak krdey krdey  kad ..' priya wal vekhdi komal boli'  akh mataka  ..    ho  javey pta e nyi lgda ..'
 'Matlab matlab tusi b deor nu ... ' akhn kad komal wal vekhdi priya  boli ek khanak chehak jehi aa gyi usdi awaaz ch ... '
 'Tenu ki lagda tun pehli a jis ney  deor nal ... ' bharwatey chuk akhn matka muskurandi hoyi komal priya  wal vekhdi boli'  kehri nyi krdi .. saria e krdia ney .. mere ton b ho gya c deor naal akh mattaka...'
 'Oh tan hona e c .. tusi tan hun b niri aagg o ..   us velley   tan tuhada  husn dul dul painda hona ....  ' komal  nu upr ton lay haithn tak vekhdi priya  chatkara lendi boli  .. 
 'Luchi!!!!... saas lgdi haan teri menu e tichran' priya  dey moddey tey hath maar hass pyi komal 
 'Fer ki hoyea saas b tan kdi nunh c' akhn matkandi   komal nu cherdi priya hasdi hoyi boli
 'Aho cigi nunh pr tere wargi nyi  ' priya dey goddey tey hath maar uchi uchi hasdi hoyi boli komal ' jehri apney gharwaley nu das devey ji mere ton  deor ton fudi marwa ho gyi  ...'
 'Omg mummy ji tusi edan b bol ...' komal da jwaab sun munh e khulla reh gya priya da 
'Tun  marwa sakdi a tey mein bol b nyi sakdi' uchi uchi hasdi hoyi komal ek dum chup kr us wal vekhdi boli 

 'Mere naal tichrn baad ch kr lawin pehln aman nu phone krkey keh jo mein samjaya  tey tey ..ek gal hor aman nu b kdi pta nyi lagna chahida k meinu tere tey aman barey pta a ..
 'Nyi mummy ji kdi b nyi .. eni pagal nyi ...' khush hundi chehkdi hoyi priya boli
 'Tera koi bharosa  nyi jehri gharwaley nu das sakdi a'  tak tki lga priya wal vekhdi hasdi hoyi boli komal
 'Usdi tusi fikr na karo aisa yakeen dilyoungi gharwaley nu k mere tey aman vich kuch nyi .. k sari umar kal di raat kyi maffia mangda firu ...  ' chehkdi hoyi priya komal wal vekhdi boli' bs tusi enha nu keh dayeo es baar aman vacation tey ghar naa aa k goa friends nal ghumn gya ..'
 'Hun ena ku tan jhooth bolna e paina apni masoom bholi pr jhalli jehi nunh lyi .....priya  wal vekhdi hoyi  boli komal..' sachin tun niri jhalli a ..'
 Mummy ji mummy ji ...  !gaur nal komal wal vekhdi priya  ney puchea'  sachin tusi .'
 'Ki sachin mein ..' priya wal vekh hasdi hoyi komal boli
 'Tusi keha na viah ton baad ek  baar kand karwaya .. ' ajay b yakeen nyi ho riha c priya nu jo mummy ji ney keha o sach c ja fer mjaak
 'Nyi nyi .'ek dum.mukrdi hoyi boli komal
 'Naley tusi apey keha kand karwaya .. ' gaur nal komal wal vekhdi boli priya 
 'Karwaya nyi kand kitta c .. priya wal vekhdi komal  hasdi hoyi boli  'mera deor b tere deor wang hassa mjak tichran krda rehnda c .. lucha akhn fad fad kadi meri hik vekhda kadi turdi da lak   .. kyi baar ekeleya nu mauka b miliya sochea kuch karuga pr darda sangda galln kr kr e swaad lainda riha ..! 
 'Fer'  chehkdi hoyi priya boli
 'Fer ki .. 'hasdi kuch sochdi  hoyi komal  boli  'ek raat ghar ch asin dono ekeley c .. beithey galln krdey pye c . galln krda karda baar baar meri hik nu e niharda pr  shyad himmat nyi kr paa riha c  .  Mein angrayi lay ishara b kitta changi trah naap lay hik meri... pr usdi  himmat e nyi hoyi ... ghar dono ekeley . Dil kr b riha c usda  pr dar b riha c kitey mein gussey na ho ...jwaa nira budhu c ..
 'Fer  'utsuk hoyi priya ney puchea
 'mein e sochea es budhu ney tan galln ton agey wadhna nyi meinu e es nu  napna paina .. ' uchi uchi hasdi hoyi komal boli
 'Sachin ..' chehkdi hairaan hundi priya boli
 'Hor ki'  ... aap b tars riha c menu b tarsa riha c' priya wal vekhdi hasdi hoyi boli komal'  kr taa kand fer mein ..ragard ditta .kuwara deor bhabhi ney ..'
 'Omg' apney munh tey hath  rakh  hairaan hubdi priya boli'  fer ..'
 'Fer .. ' priya wal vekh hasdi hoyi boli komal'   jyada swaad naa lay jo keha o kr .. aman nu phone kr samja jo mein tenu keha ..'
 'Ji mummy ji  'sofey ton uth khadi hundi priya apney kamrey wal jandi boli'  eh problem solve ho javey fer detail ch puchungi tuhanu ..
 'Ki'  gardan ghuma priya wal vekhdi komal boli
 'Tuhadey tey tuhadey deor dey kand barey'  hasdi chehkdi hoyi priya apney kamrey andr jandi boli'  puri detail ch ....'





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#26
Nice update.. keep posting
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#27
Welcome back ti the best writer on xossipy please regular updates deyo
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#28
Thriller story h shukr incest ni. pr update late. Pencho mera kemti time khrab.
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#29
very nice and wonderful.waiting
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#30
Waiting mam
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#31
Update please
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#32
waiting madam you're ar best writer I enjoy to read all your stories
biggest fan here???
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#33
Nice story h mam
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#34
eh story v agge likhi tuhadi stories d tarah hi...bahut sohni hai......maza aagya pad ke.....
ki es story de next update v hai ke story end ho gyi....jive tussi dasya si ke do update ch story khatam hi jaugi....SHORT story hai...?
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#35
Kavita ji as usual.. Smajh nahi au da ki likhe tuhadi story vaare..
Tuc likhde edda lagda sabh akha sahmane hi ho riha.. Words nahi milde tareef karan layi..
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(15-06-2019, 09:47 AM)doonknightz Wrote: eh story v agge likhi tuhadi stories d tarah hi...bahut sohni hai......maza aagya pad ke.....
ki es story de next update v hai ke story end ho gyi....jive tussi dasya si ke do update ch story khatam hi jaugi....SHORT story hai...?

Nai nai veer lagda kavi mam hun new story likh ke laike aaunge oh sochde hone k new story likhn jive baki stories pending rakhiya is nu v list vich pa dio
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#37
Kamaal a ashok mahi ji mein start ch e daseya c 2 update ndi story hovey gi .. so dono kr dittey ... lagda ehi tan naal nyi read kiti story ...simple theme c gharwaley nu vohti dey deor naal affair da pta lg janda ... usda gussa jelousy dasin tey end ch vohti apni mother in law di help naal convice kr di kosis krdi k ajeha kuch usney deor naal kitta e nyi
.in fact es baar usda deor vacations tey ghar aura e nyi c ..

What more update u want then this happy ending of story


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(16-06-2019, 01:58 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Kamaal a ashok mahi ji mein start ch e daseya c 2 update ndi story hovey gi .. so dono kr dittey ... lagda ehi tan naal nyi read kiti story ...simple theme c gharwaley nu vohti dey deor naal affair da pta lg janda ... usda gussa jelousy dasin tey end ch vohti apni mother in law di help naal convice kr di kosis krdi k ajeha kuch usney deor  naal kitta e nyi
.in fact es baar usda deor vacations tey ghar aura e nyi c ..

What more update  u want then this happy ending of story
fer pls rishtean di chaanv update krdo seerat and sonal da scene end krke
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(16-06-2019, 01:58 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Kamaal a ashok mahi ji mein start ch e daseya c 2 update ndi story hovey gi .. so dono kr dittey ... lagda ehi tan naal nyi read kiti story ...simple theme c gharwaley nu vohti dey deor naal affair da pta lg janda ... usda gussa jelousy dasin tey end ch vohti apni mother in law di help naal convice kr di kosis krdi k ajeha kuch usney deor  naal kitta e nyi
.in fact es baar usda deor vacations tey ghar aura e nyi c ..

What more update  u want then this happy ending of story
fer pls rishtean di chaanv update krdo seerat and sonal da scene end krke
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(16-06-2019, 04:21 PM)Anmol Sidhu Wrote: fer pls rishtean di chaanv update krdo seerat and sonal da scene end krke

Ji us scene da end kr ditta c ... hope tusi last update da last dialogue read jarur kita hoyega


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