Romance Dildariyan by entertainerjatt ( completed )
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Romance Dildariyan by entertainerjatt ( completed )
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29-12-2018, 07:36 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by Ashish120 [img]file:///images/buttons/viewpost.gif[/img] entertainerjatt Thanks bhai....aur Competition ke bare mein jaldi hi sab pata chal jayega...keep supporting
29-12-2018, 07:37 AM
Update 35
Fir Diksha alag ho gayi aur sabhi apna lunch khatam karke apne apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye….Raj Monty aur Sandy bhi…. Ab age…. Ghar pahunchte hi Raj ne apne kamre mein thodi der aram kiya….wo chahta tha k wo competition jeete toh usne us din jamkar guitar ke sath apni singing par mehnat ki…Udhar Priya ne bhi apni dancing practice mein puri jaan laga di…. Aise hi kayi din nikal gaye Roj sabhi college jate wahan apne apne doston ke sath masti karte competition ki batein karte…Monty ab Raj aur Sandy ke sath acha ghul mil gaya tha…Raj aur Sandy ne purani batein bhul kar Monty ko dil se apna dost man liya tha…Monty ne bhi Raj ki har tarah se madad ki competition ki tyari mein…aur college mein sabhi ko kehte k agar Raj final mein pahuncha Toh use hi vote dena… Toh aise hi din gujrte gaye kayi baar Priya aur Raj ka Amna samna huya par dono ek dusre ko ignore karte gaye…jab bhi dono Ki ankhein milti toh aisa lagta Jaise dono ek dusre ke khoon ke pyase ho par control kar rahe hon… Vaise ek chij alag bhi huyi thi k Isha ke upar apna gussa nikalne ke baad Raj ke behavior mein thoda change a gaya tha…ab wo pehle ki tarah baat baat par gussa nahi nikalta tha…Uske is behavior ki wajah se Monty se uski dosti ho gayi thi aur Riya aur Diksha bhi ab usse thodi boht batein kar leti thi par Priya se un dono ki dosti boht pakki ho chuki thi toh wo jyada time priya ke sath hi bitate the…ab Raj kisi ko bhi avoid karne ki kosish nahi karta tha…bas Priya aur Sonia ko chod kar… Udhar Raj ke munh se apne prati nafrat bhare shabad sunne ke baad Isha ka bura haal tha…use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k Raj ne aisa kion kiya Kionk Raj toh use apna dost samjhta tha…pata nahi kion Raj ke man mein uske prati nafrat bhar gayi…ek.pal ke liye toh usne socha k ho sakta hai k uske bin wajah bataye chale Jane se Raj naraz hai…par Nafrat ka karan yeh nahi ho sakta….use kus samaj nahi a raha tha toh usne faisla kiya k wo Sandy se is bare mein baat karegi… Friday: 4:00pm Isha ne Sandy ko call kiya thodi der mein hi Sandy ne phone pick kar liya… Sandy(unknown number dekh kar): hlo kon… Isha: main Isha bol rahi hun… Sandy: oh ishu kaisi ho yaar itne dino baad phone kar rahi ho… Isha: main thik hun Sandy tu bata… Sandy: thik hun…kaise phone kiya… Isha: yaar mujhe na tujhse ek baat karni hai… Sandy: han bolo kya baat hai… Isha: yaar aise nahi kahin bahar milte hain… Sandy: kya hua kus problem toh nahi na… Isha: nahi but ek jaruri baat hai… Sandy: chal thik hai a jata hun kahan ana hai… Isha: xxxx restaurant mein adhe ghante baad… Sandy: OK main abhi Raj ke ghar ja raha tha….main use phone karke bata deta hun k mujhe Isha ne bulaya hai… Isha: nahi nahi Raj ko mat batana… Sandy: are aisi kya baat hai…jo use nahi batana… Isha: bas hai kus ab jaldi se wahan pahuncho baki baat wahin karenge.. Sandy: OK… Fir Sandy ne phone rakh diya…Sandy puri tarah se confuse tha ek toh Isha ka aise bulana…dusra Raj ko bhi na batana….teesra aur sabse bada aur dangerous k Raj ko kya jhuth bole….par fir bhi usne apni himmat bandhe Raj ko phone kiya..aur Raj ne pick bhi kar liya… Raj: han bhai bol abhi tak pahuncha nahi… Sandy: bhai yaar sorry ek jaruri kaam a gaya hai toh nahi a paunga… Raj: sale aj mujhe audition ke liye Jana hai kal ko competition hai…aur tu bol raha hai k main nahi aunga… Sandy: bhai samja kar na boht jaruri kaam hai vaise bhi Monty toh a hi raha hai na main seedha college mein audition ke time milta hun… Raj: chal thik hai…par dekh Lena agar 5:45 baje tak wahan nahi pahuncha toh…kya hall hoga tera… Sandy: chal thik hai bhai main tum logon ko wahin milta hun… Fir Sandy jaldi se apni bike uthata hai aur Isha ke bataye address par pahunch jata hai….wo Restaurant mein pahunch kar idhar udhar najar ghumata hai toh Isha ek table par baithi dikhti hai usne ek fitting wala jeans and top pehna tha…kasam se boht khubsurat lag rahi thi…khair in sab baton ko chodo toh Sandy Isha ke paas jata hai…. Sandy: hi Ishu kaisi ho… Isha: thik hun ao baitho…kya loge order kar do… Sandy: kus nahi laina aj Raj ka audition hai uske paas bhi Jana hai… Isha: asha kis chij ka audition hai… Sandy: wo college mein annual competition hai usi ke liye… Isha: yeh toh boht achi baat hai… Sandy: han…tum batao Isha kion bulaya hai mujhe… Isha(chehra serious banate huye): dekho Sandy yeh baat hum dono k bich mein hi rehni chahiye…aur tum bhi meri baat dhyan se sunna… Sandy: yaar ab tum mujhe dara rahi ho jaldi se batao… Fir Isha ne Sandy ko Uske aur Raj ke beech huyi wo phone wali baat bata di…Sandy ko toh apne kanon par yakeen nahi ho raha tha…use toh jhatke pe jhatke mil rahe the pehle Monty aur Raj ko lekar Ab Isha aur Raj ko lekar… Sandy: yaar kya bol rahi ho tum Raj tumse kaise nafrat kar sakta hai…aur sabse badi baat tumhe khud ko nahi pata k wo tumse nafrat karta hai… Isha: han yaar mujhe kus nahi pata wo aisa kaise ban gaya… Sandy: dekho yaar baat boht badi hai…hum itni asani se iska solution nahi nikal sakte….aisa karte hain ek baar competition ho Jane do fir kus karte hain… Isha: Han yeh sahi rahega…main nahi chahti k Raj ko is bare mein pata chale aur wo pareshan ho aur uski performance par asar pade… Sandy: toh thik hai…abhi mujhe Raj ke paas Jana hai…wo mera wait kar raha hoga…bye and take care fikar mat karna… Isha: Ok bye sandy…. Fir Sandy jaldi se wahan se apni bike lekar college ki taraf chal pada....tabhi ek sakhs Jo usi restaurant mein baitha tha usne kisi ko phone kiya…samne bale ne phone pick kiya… Sakhs: sir wo ladka toh chala gaya… Samne se: (mujhe nahi pata samne se kya kaha) Sakhs: sir mujhe unki batein toh nahi suni par maine dekha toh aisa laga Jaise wo log koi serious baat kar rahe ho… Samne se( nahi suna) Sakhs: han sir main un logon par puri najar rakhunga… Fir usne phone kaat diya… Udhar Raj college mein khada idhar udhar dekh raha tha…wahan boht se students the sayad sabhi audition dene aye the…Tabhi Monty wahan a gaya… Raj: bhai tu kahan chala gaya tha… Monty: yaar papa ka phone aya tha…vaise Sandy aya k nahi Tabhi piche se kisi ki awaj ayi… Sandy: bhai a gaya main… Raj: sale acha huya time par a gaya nahi Toh boht pitta.. Sandy: bhai aise kaise na ata… Tabhi ander se Diksha kudti huyi ayi…(yahan ap logon ko bata dun k pichli baar ke winner ko chod kar sabhi contestants ko audition dena tha…is liye Priya ko chod kar sabhi audition dene aye the) Diksha (Monty ke gale lagte huye): bhai meri selection ho gayi… Monty: wow yeh toh boht achi baat hai… Raj: congratulations yaar… Sandy: congo diksha… Diksha: thanks yaar… Abhi thoda time hi huya tha k Raj ka naam announce huya…toh Raj ko in teeno ne gud luck kaha aur Raj apne audition ke liye ander bani stage ki taraf chala gaya…aur Sandy Monty aur Diksha wahin khade rahe… Toh dosto kayi patte khulne baki hain…par sab se kareeb Jo raaz hamare is waqt khada hai…wo hai competition….toh friends bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath aur aise hi apna pyar aur keemti comments dete rahiye…. To be continued….
29-12-2018, 07:38 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by Prakash vermaentertainerjatt Thanks bhai ....aur yeh toh ap logon ko decide karna hai k is story mein kus naya hai yah nahi...
29-12-2018, 07:41 AM
Update 36
Abhi thoda time hi huya tha k Raj ka naam announce huya…toh Raj ko in teeno ne gud luck kaha aur Raj apne audition ke liye ander bani stage ki taraf chala gaya…aur Sandy Monty aur Diksha wahin khade rahe… Ab age Raj under gaya toh wahan char judge baithe the….Raj ne apna introduction diya aur unlogon ne Raj ka song sun kar use select bhi kar liya…Raj khusi khusi bahar a gaya…use dekh kar sabhi uske paas a gaye…Raj kus bolta isse pehle… Teeno ek sath: congratulations Raj(hairani se): kis liye… Sandy: bhai tu select ho gaya… Raj: tum logon ko kaise pata… Diksha: hamein toh pehle hi pata tha k tu select ho jayega… Monty: aur upar se tere chehre ki khusi bata rahi hai k tu select ho gaya… Raj: chalo thanks…ab chalo yaar ghar chalein… Sandy: kahan chalo kus party karte hain… Raj: yaar kal ko competition hai…mujhe jaldi Sona bhi hai nahi toh ache se performe nahi kar paunga… Diksha: chalo koi baat nahi party kal ko competition ke baad kar lenge jab Priya jeetegi… Raj: apne sapno ke pankh abhi kaat do nahi toh kal ko buri tarah se bikhar jayenge… Sandy: han party toh hogi par Priya ki aur se nahi Raj ki aur se… Monty: bhai dekho party chahe tum log hi de dena par jitega toh hamara bhai Raj hi…. Diksha: dekh lenge yeh toh… Raj: are yaar ab chalo bhi…. Monty: han chalo bhai… Fir wo Charon apne apne gharon Ki taraf chal padte hain…Raj ghar jaker yeh khabar apne mummy papa ko sunata hai aur wo boht khus hote hain…fir dinner ke baad apne kamre mein chala jata hai… Aj ki raat kayi logon ke liye boht lambi hone wali thi…jaise Raj ko competition ki tension…Priya ko Raj ko harane ki tension…Sandy ko Isha ki baton ki tension aur Isha ko apne dost Raj ko kho dene ka dar…toh in sabhi ke man mein ajeeb uthal puthal ho rahi thi…khair sabhi Jaise taise neend ke agosh mein kho gaye… Saturday 4:30 am… Vaise toh Raj roj is time jaag jata hai…par Aj kus khas hai wo hai Annual Talent Competition….toh aj Raj ki body mein ek ajeeb sa josh tha….Raj jaldi se utha apni gym wagerha khatam karne ke baad apna nashta kiya aur Guitar utha kar college ke liye nikal gaya…Vaise toh raj ke parents bhi ane wale the par Wo log competition ke time hi Jane wale the… Toh Raj Jaise hi college pahuncha toh wahan kisi festival jaisa mahol tha…har taraf students saj sabar kar fir rahe the….college ke play ground mein program ka arrangement kiya gaya tha Groud mein ek bada sa aur shandar stage lagaya huya tha….abhi competition shuru hone mein time baki tha toh Raj Sandy ko dhundne laga…Tabhi wahan Sandy aur Monty ek sath ate dikhe… Raj: are bhai asha huya tum log a gaye main tum dono ko hi dhundh raha tha… Sandy: bas shaitan ko yaad karo shaitan hazir… Raj: sale kion shaitan ki insult kar raha hai… Raj ki baat par Monty Hans pada wahin Sandy ki shakal kharab ho gayi… Raj: chal chod yaar abhi Competition mein time hai toh kion na canteen mein baith jayein… Sandy: chal bhai… Fir wo canteen mein chale gaye kareeb Adhe ghante ke baad Raj Diksha aur Priya wahan se chale gaye kion unko perform karna tha…toh Sandy aur Monty Riya aur Sonia ke sath baith gaye fir wo batein rahe aur kareeb ek ghante ke baad wo sabhi bhi Competition ki jagah chale gaye wahan unke parents pehle hi baithe the toh wo sabhi apne apne parents ke paas baith gaye Sandy Raj ke mom dad ke paas baith gaya.. Akhirkar jis pal ka sabko intzar tha wo pal a hi gaya Competition shuru huya pehle top 20 ka competition huya….Raj aur Priya ke performance ne tehlka macha diya….un dono ke sath Diksha bhi top 10 mein pahunche… Top 10 mein toh competition aur bhi muskil ho gaya sabhi ne apni puri jaan laga di….Raj aur Priya ne bhi acha performance kiya….Sabhi performance ke baad Anchor stage par aya…uske hath mein results the..aur sabhi ki sansein bullet train ki tarah chal rahi thi….sabhi contestant stage par ek line mein khade the aur unke dost parents bhai Behan niche chairs par baithe unke top three mein pahunchne ke pray kar rahe the…toh anchor ne result announce kiya… Anchor: Toh ladies aur gentlemen hamare Top Three ka naam mere paas hai…toh Sabse pehle contestant jinho ne finale mein apni jagah banayi hai wo hain….Miss Manisha Goyal… Dusre hain Mr. Raj Sinha… Aur teesre Hamare defending champion Miss Priya Agarwal Announcement ke baad teeno ko chod baki sabhi Contestant stage se chal gaye...Diksha bhi bahar ho gayi thi Raj aur Priya ne bari bari use haunsla diya aur wo bhi in dono ko gud luck keh kar chali gayi…. Ab bas intzar tha Finale ka Jo k adhe ghante baad shuru hone wala tha…tab tak sabhi ne lunch kiya Finalists ne apni apni last preparation ki…aur Fir adhe ghante baad sabhi apni apni jagah baith gaye aur Anchor stage par pahunch gaya… Anchor: toh dosto humne aj ek se badh kar ek performances dekhi par ab hum log pahunch chuke hain hamare Final round mein yahan teen contestants perform karenge…par is baar results judge nahi balki ap log tay karoge…ap sabhi ko ek ek slip di jayegi jis par College ki mohar lagi hogi…agar koi slip bina mohar k huyi Toh uski counting nahi hogi…toh ab ap logon ke samne pesh hai hamari pehli finalist Miss Manisha Goyal… Sabhi ne clap kiya aur wo ladki stage par ayi aur boht hi khubsurat dance performance di….performance khatam hote hi anchor fir se aya… Anchor: kya gajab ki performance thi…maja a gaya dekh kar…toh dosto ab hum badhte hain apne agle finalist ki taraf….Mr. Raj Sinha… Fir sabhi ne claps ki Raj stage par aya ….usne apna guitar set kiya aur shuru kar diya… Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte Tere bina kya wajood mera [x2] Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa Kyunki tum hi ho Ab tum hi ho Zindagi ab tum hi ho Chain bhi, mera dard bhi Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho Tera mera rishta hai kaisa Ik pal door gawara nahi Tere liye har roz hai jeete Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina Har saans pe naam tera Kyunki tum hi ho Ab tum hi ho Zindagi ab tum hi ho Chain bhi, mera dard bhi Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho... Tere liye hi jiya main Khud ko jo yun de diya hai Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm.. Kyunki tum hi ho Ab tum hi ho Zindagi ab tum hi ho.. Chain bhi, mera dard bhi Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho [x2] Jab tak Raj gata raha tab tak sabhi kisi aur hi duniya mein kho gaye…Raj ne Jaise hi gana khatam kiya Toh sabhi ne khade ho kar taliyan bajayi…Raj ne sabhi ko thanks kaha aur chala gaya…fir Stage sambhalne Anchor a gaya… Anchor: what a romantic performance….bhai maja a gaya sun kar raungte khade ho gaye….Toh dosto badhte hain ek aur behtreen Finalist ki taraf…jinhone pichli baar bhi yeh competition apne naam kiya tha…Miss Priya Agarwal…. Fir Priya Stage par ayi…aur kya khub ayi….uske dance ne toh Jaise tehlaka macha diya uske har step par dekhne wale bhi thirak rahe the….ek ek thumke par ladkon ka dil unki chati faad kar bahar a raha tha….sach mein kamaal hi kar diya….aur jab performance khatam huyi toh sabhi ne jis tarah se taliyan bajayi usse toh saaf saaf lag raha tha ..k Manisha ke dance aur Raj ki singing par Priya ke nakhre bhari pad gaye the…..par abhi voting baki thi….aur sabhi indians ko pata hai k Votes kisi ko bhi ja sakte hain… Anchor: Toh is khubsurat dance performance ke bad hamara competition yahin samapt hota hai…ab ap log apne apne vote us box mein daal dijiye apke paas dus minute hain fir ek ghante baad result hamare samne hoga… Fir sabhi ne voting ki …. jyada time Toh tha nahi Toh sabhi ne apne apne favorite ka naam likha aur box mein daal diya… Ek ghante baad teeno finalist Stage par khade the aur Anchor hath mein Result liye….aur Raghuveer Mohit aur Minister( kionk yeh teeno hi har saal trophy dete the) hath mein winner ki trophy liye… Raj aur Priya ki dhadkne jyada fast thin Manisha se kionk…Unke Papa unko trophy dene wale the…teeno apni fingers cross kiye khade the… Anchor: toh dosto total 4139 logon ne votes diye hai….aur third position par hain 1134 votes ke sath Miss Manisha Goyal… Sabhi ne Taliyan bajayin aur Manisha ne apni trophy li aur stage se niche chali gayi…. Anchor: Toh dosto ab humare paas siraf do finalist bache hain….Dono ko kafi voting huyi hai aur difference bhi boht hi kam hai…jo pehli position par hai unke hain 1504 votes aur dusri position wale ke hain 1501 votes…..toh hamare winner hain…. Guys mujhe competitions ka jyada experience nahi hai….fir bhi ap logon ki demand thi toh Maine ise daal diya sayad iski bajah se story mein thoda thandapan bhi aya par agle update mein kus aisa dhamaka hoga jo apne kabhi nahi socha hoga….toh meri galtiyon ko maaf karte huye…Dildariyan ko aise hi pyar dete rahiye…. To be continued…..
29-12-2018, 07:42 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by spxossip entertainerjatt Thanks bhai...aur rahi baat update ki Toh main bhai isse bada likh nahi pata sayad ho sakta hai k wo PC yah laptop par type karte ho aur main toh mobile par hi use karta hun...par fir bhi kosish karunga...aur mujhe friends ka kabhi bura nahi lagta Toh ap befikar suggest karte rahiye
29-12-2018, 07:47 AM
Update 37
Anchor: Toh dosto ab humare paas siraf do finalist bache hain….Dono ko kafi voting huyi hai aur difference bhi boht hi kam hai…jo pehli position par hai unke hain 1504 votes aur dusri position wale ke hain 1501 votes….. Ab age…. Raj aur Priya ka dil bade jor se dhadak raha tha…kionk Jo dusri position par ane wala tha wo sirf 3 votes se harne wala tha… Anchor: toh dosto Annual Talent Competition 2016 ke winner hain Mr. Raj Sinha… Raj ko Toh ek pal ke liye Jaise hosh hi nahi raha…Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha k use Priya se jyada votes mile....Wo toh khusi se pagal ho chuka tha…udhar Sandy aur Monty bhi boht khus lag rahe the aur apni jagah par hi khade khade dance kar rahe the Akhirkar Raj ko Winner ki aur Priya ko Runner up ki trophy de di gayi…wo dono abhi bhi wahin khade the… Priya ki ankhon mein halke halke ansoo the….wo sirf teen votes se haar gayi…Raj ne bhi uski Taraf dekha…Aj Raj ko pichle 5 saal mein pehli baar Priya par gussa nahi aya kionk aj uski ankhon mein agar koi bhi dekh leta toh sayad kisi ka pathar dil bhi pighal jata…khair Raj ko winning speech dene ke liye kaha gaya aur Raj mike ke samne aya… Raj: sabse pehle mein ap sabhi ko dil se shukriya bolta hun kionk mujhe nahi laga tha k main voting ke adhar par jeet paunga…par ap logon ne mujhe votes di…main yeh akele kabhi nahi kar pata…agar mera dost mera bhai Sandy mujhe na manata…aur Mere papa meri mom…aur mere pyare uncle aunty(mohit ki taraf ishara karte huye) ka ashirwad mere sath na hota…Monty ne bhi mujhe boht support kiya..thanks guys and love you all.. Fir Raj wahan se Jane laga..par wo jata jata Priya ko ek aur jhatka de gaya…aur iski usne bilkul umeed nahi ki thi…Raj Priya ke paas gaya aur usne uske kandhe par hath rakha… Raj: Priya yaar tum dukhi mat ho tumne mujhse asha kiya aur agar faisla judges dete toh pakka tum hi jeet ti… Raj ne yeh sab itni jaldi kiya k Priya ko kus samaj nahi aya…k yeh sab kaise huya…Raj jab yeh sab bol raha tha tab uski ankhon mein nafrat yan gussa nahi tha ….balki wahi masoomiyat thi Jo 5 saal pehle huya karti thi aur isi masoomiyat ne Priya ko ander tak hila diya…uski ankhon ne Jo ansoo kafi der se rok rakhe the wo lagatar behne lage...usne apne ansoo chipane ke liye apni garden niche ki aur wahan se tez kadmon mein nikal gayi… Udhar Raj apni mom ke paas gaya unka ashirwad liya…Tabhi wahan Monty a gaya Sandy toh pehle se hi baitha tha…Raj ki mom uth kar Geeta ke paas chali gayi… Monty: bhai tune toh kamal kar diya… Sandy: han yaar faad dala… Raj: bhai agar tum dono meri support na karte toh main kabhi yeh nahi kar pata…. Sandy: yaar bhai aur kis kam ate hain…sale tere liye toh main apni jaan bhi de sakta hun… Yeh sun kar Raj ne Sandy ko apne gale laga liya… Monty: kamino mujhe bhul gaye… Raj aur sandy ne apni ek ek bajhu kholdi… Raj: aja yaar tu bhi… Fir teeno ek dusre se aise hi gale lage huye kudne lage…Aj teeno sach mein boht khus the…Dur khade Geeta aur Sunidhi in logon ko dekh kar khus ho rahe the… Kafi khusiyon bhara mahol tha…par ek sakhs aisa bhi tha Jo boht udaas tha…jiski ankhein lagatar Beh rahi thi wo koi aur nahi balki Priya hi thi…jo wahan se bhagkar apni car mein jaker baith gayi thi aur roye j rahi thi… Udhar Geeta aur Sunidhi apas mein batein kar rahi thin… Geeta: aj dono bachon ne kitna acha kiya na… Sunidhi: han mujhe toh Priya ka dance boht pasand aya…kahan hai wo mujhe use batana hai k usne boht acha kiya… Geeta( Charon taraf dekhte huye): pata nahi kahan hai sayad Sonia ko pata ho… Sunidhi: han par Sonia toh wahan khadi hai…aur uske sath toh nahi hai Priya…chalo usse puch lete hain sayad pata ho… Fir wo dono Sonia k paas chali gayin…. Geeta: Sonia Priya kahan hai… Sonia: pata nahi aunty sayad washroom gayi ho…main dekh kar ati hun… Fir Sonia wahan se chali gayi aur Priya ko dhundh ne lagi par use kahin nahi mili usne phone bhi kiya but koi response nahi aya…ab use boht tension ho rahi thi….use pata tha k wo apni haar kabhi bardast nahi karegi…usne socha k kahin ghar na chali gayi ho…usne Parking mein uski car dekhne ki sochi …aur Jaise hi wo wahan pahunchi toh usne dekha k Priya car mein baithi ro rahi hai…usne car ka door khola aur Priya ko gale laga liya… Sonia: chup ho ja yaar…kion ro rahi hai… Priya kus nahi boli bas roti rahi… Sonia: dekh chup ho ja…nahi Toh sab pareshan ho jayenge…. Priya( rote huye): Sonia mujhe ghar Jana hai… Sonia: chal thik hai main drive karti hun aur aunty ko phone karke bata deti hun k hum ghar ja rahe hain…tu dusri seat par baith Ja…. Fir Sonia ne Priya ko dusri taraf bithaya aur Geeta ko phone karke keh diya k Priya mil gayi hai wo kafi thak gayi hai toh hum ghar ja rahe hain…fir Sonia Priya ko lekar Priya ke ghar ki taraf chal padi…wahan pahunch kar wo Priya ko uske room mein le gayi aur khud uske liye pani lene chali gayi…aur thode time baad pani ka gilas hath mein liye Sonia wapis Priya ke room mein agayi… Sonia: le sabse pehle pani pi….. Priya ne pani piya aur thoda shant bhi ho gayi par wo siskiyan lagatar liye ja rahi thi…. Sonia: yaar tu ro kion rahi hai tune apna 100% diya…aur jeet hi sab kus nahi hoti…. Priya: yaar main competition mein haarne ki wajah se nahi ro rahi hun… Sonia: toh fir kisi ne kus kaha tere se… Priya: nahi… Sonia: toh fir bol bhi k kya hua mera dil baitha ja raha hai… Priya( sisakte huye): Sonia main aj fir wahin a khadi huyi hun…jo baat Maine itne saal apne dil mein chipaye rakhi wo fir aj mere samne a gayi hai… Sonia: yaar tu kya bole ja rahi hai…meri kus samaj mein nahi a raha…. Priya: yaar main haar gayi….main apne ap ko sahi sabit nahi kar payi…wo aj fir se jeet gaya… Sonia: Priya ab mera dimag kharab ho raha hai…yaar mujhe Teri boht fikar ho rahi hai…tu mujhe sab saaf bata…. Priya: yaar Maine tujhse ek baat chupayi hai… Sonia: kya…. Priya: main Raj se pyar karti hun…. Yeh sun kar Sonia ka munh khula ka khula reh gaya…use kus samaj nahi a raha tha….ap logon ki tarah par agle update mein sab clear ho jayega….k yeh kya hai kion hai kab se hai…abhi k liye itna hi…bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath…apka apna SIDHU…. To be continued…..
29-12-2018, 07:48 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by spxossip entertainerjatt Thanks bhai...apne meri kafi help ki...so thanks bhai
29-12-2018, 07:49 AM
Update 38
Priya: yaar Maine tujhse ek baat chupayi hai… Sonia: kya…. Priya: main Raj se pyar karti hun…. Ab age Priya ki baat sun kar Sonia ka munh khula ka khula reh gaya use kus samaj nahi araha tha k Priya kya bol rahi hai....use toh lag raha tha k wo koi sapna dekh rahi hai…Sonia ki aisi halat dekh kar Priya ne hi apni baat age badayi…. Priya: mujhe pata hai yaar tu kya soch rahi hai…par main koi majak nahi kar rahi…. Sonia( hosh mein ate huye): par yeh sab kaise huya aur kab huya…tune mujhe bataya kion nahi… Priya: Sonia Maine jab Raj ko pehli baar dekha tha tabhi wo mujhe boht acha laga tha…par us din mere upar Raj ko sabak sikhane ka bahut chada tha….aur Maine wahi kiya Jo mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha....aur wo Mumbai chod kar chala gaya… Sonia: agar tu usse pyar karti thi toh tujhe use mafi mang kar rokna chahiye tha…. Priya: yaar tab mujhe laga yeh pyar nahi hai bas mujhe uski cuteness pasand thi…aur us waqt mere upar meri ego hawi thi…maine uske Jane ke baad bhi kayi baar socha k main use phone karke mafi maang lun…par yeh mujhe meri haar lagti…par mera uske prati akarshan din prati din badhta gaya…aur kab yeh pyar mein badal gaya mujhe pata nahi…uski wo masoomiyat bhari ankhein mujhe har pal mere samne mehsus hoti mom uske bare mein jo bhi batein karti mujhe achi lagne lagi thi….main roj Sunidhi aunty ke paas jati aur unke ghar mein lagi Raj ki photo ko niharti rehti….par tab tak kafi der ho chuki thi mujhe laga k ab Raj meri baat kabhi nahi sunega… Priya ne apni baat ek sans mein bol di….yeh baat batate huye uski ankhon mein fir se nami a chuki thi…. Sonia: yaar par tune uske wapis ane ke baad bhi uske sath acha behave nahi kiya…. Priya: tujhe pata hai Sonia jis din Raj wapis ane wala tha toh Maine tere samne aisa dikhaya k main uske ane se boht dukhi hun…par asal mein main us din boht khus thi k ab main Raj se mafi maang lungi…mera Raj wapis a raha hai… Sonia: toh fir tune mafi mangi kion nahi… Priya: kionk Jo wapis aya tha wo mera Raj nahi tha….jab Maine use party mein pehli baar dekha toh uski ankhon mein wo masoomiyat nahi thi balki mere liye gussa aur nafrat thi Jo mujhe saaf najar a rahi thi….bhale hi wo handsome ho gaya tha par main uski jis masoomiyat se pyar karti thi wo mujhe najar nahi a rahi thi…us din main tut chuki thi….mujhe mera akhir rasta band hota najar a raha tha…toh Maine socha k main Raj ko bhula dungi aur ab use kabhi yaad nahi karungi....isliye maine yeh sab kiya taki main apne aur Raj ke beech itni nafrat bhar dun k mera pyar us nafrat ke samne khatam ho jaye…..Maine kosish boht ki…. bahar se dikhane mein kamyab bhi rahi par main kabhi use bhula nahi payi jab bhi koi ladki usse baat karti hai toh mujhe boht bura lagta hai…isiliye main Diksha aur Riya se bhi lad padti thi… Priya ne yeh sab ek sath bol diya….Sonia bhi uski baat ko bade dhyan se sun rahi thi….use abhi bhi ek baat samaj mein nahi a rahi thi k jab Priya ne Raj se dur hone ka faisla kar hi liya tha toh aj akhir aisa kya hua Jo wo itna tut gayi…aur yeh baat use sirf Priya hi bata sakti thi…toh usne apna agla sawal puch hi liya… Sonia: toh fir aj tujhe kya ho gaya Jo tu yeh sab batein dobara soch rahi hai… Priya: Sonia asal mein main kabhi sahi nahi thi na toh 5 saal pehle aur na ab….Maine Raj ko dekh kar socha k wo badal gaya hai…..par main galat thi wo sirf badlne ka Natak kar raha hai…asal mein wo aj bhi vaisa hi hai Sab se pyar karne wala…usne Toh ek baar mujhe bhi girne se bachaya par aj jo usne kiya uske baad toh mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai k wo ander se aj bhi vaisa hi hai….sab ki fikar karne wala….aj jab main harne ke baad ankhon mein ansoo liye khadi thi toh aj bhi usi ne mujhe haunsla diya…..aur us waqt uski ankhon mein mere liye gussa nahi tha….aj uski masoomiyat ke age main fir haar gayi…main fir galat sabit huyi….Sonia main haar gayi…. Itna bolte hi Priya ne fir se rona shuru kar diya…..Priya ko rote dekh Sonia ki bhi ankhein bhar ayi usne Priya ko apne gale laga liya aur uska sir sehlane lagi…usne use rone se roka nahi….wo chahti thi k wo apni puri bhadas nikal de….kafi der aise hi Rone ke baad Priya ka rona siskion mein badal gaya aur wo Sonia se alag ho gayi usne apni ankhon se ansoo poche aur apni baat age badayi… Priya: Sonia main sayad ab Raj ko kabhi na pa sakun Maine apni murkhta ke karn Raj ko kho diya…maine uske man mein apne liya boht nafrat bhar di hai…jo sayad kabhi khatam na ho sake… Sonia: toh ab tu kya karne wali hai… Priya: pata nahi par ek baat hai k main uske bina kisi ki nahi ho sakti main uske bina nahi ji sakti….main maar jaungi… Priya ka itna bolna tha k Sonia ne ek karara thapad Priya ke gore najuk galon par jad diya…Priya toh sun pad gayi uski life mein aj pehli baar use thapad pada tha…uski toh sansein atak gayi…Usne pehli baar Sonia ko gusse mein dekha tha….Hamesha sabhi Priya ke gusse se darte the par aj Priya kisi se dar rahi thi…. Sonia(gusse mein): yaar tu pagal toh nahi ho gayi…Priya tujhe pata hai Teri sabse badi problem kya hai....yahi k tu pehle kaam karti hai aur baad mein sochti hai tu hamesha faisla lene mein jaldi karti hai…tu boht jaldi kisi ke prati apna bichar bana leti hai… Sonia ki baat sun kar Priya ne apni garden niche karli kionk Sonia Jo bhi bol rahi thi wo ek dum sahi tha….Priya hamesha faisla lene mein jaldi karti hai aur baad mein pachtati hai…Sonia ne use hamesha samjaya tha par wo samjti nahi thi….Khair Sonia ne apni baat age badayi par is baar pyar se…. Sonia: dekho Priya aise paglon wali baat nahi karte main Jo puchti hun tum uska sahi sahi jawab do… Priya(halki awaj mein): pucho…. Sonia: tum Raj se kitna pyar karti ho… Priya: apni jaan se bhi jyada… Sonia: toh tum nahi chahti k Raj tumhe utna hi pyar kare… Priya: han par wo aisa kion karega… Sonia: dekho Priya yeh baat toh tum bhi janti ho k Raj dil ka bada acha insan hai wo kisi se nafrat kar hi nahi sakta…tum sirf itna karo ke sabse pehle usse mafi mango aur usse dosti karo…rahi baat pyar ki toh is par kisi ka jor nahi hota yeh kabhi bhi kisi se bhi ho sakta hai…vaise bhi jab tum Raj ki masoomiyat ke samne ghutne tek sakti ho toh tere pyar ke samne uski nafrat bhi dhire dhire khatam ho jayegi… Priya: par agar Raj mujhse pyar nahi karega toh… Sonia: dekho tum toh usse pyar karti ho na…hum use toh tumse pyar karne par majbur nahi kar sakte par kamse kam uske dil se tumhare liye nafrat khatam karke dosti toh kar hi sakte hain na… Priya( ek lambi saans lete huye): han tum sahi keh rahi ho….agar Raj mujhse pyar na bhi kare toh kam se kam Nafrat toh na kare…hum dost hi sahi par wo mujhse baat toh karega hi na… Sonia: han yeh huyi na baat ab usse mafi mang Lena… Priya: thik hai…and thanks yaar mujhe samjhane ke liye…. Fir Priya Sonia ke gale lag gayi….aur ab Priya pehle se thik feel kar rahi thi….Sonia ne aj tak use hamesha sahi galat ka farak bataya tha par aj Jo Sonia ne kiya tha wo ek Sacha dost hi kar sakta hai… Khair us din kus khas nahi huya….Sonia us din wahin Priya ke sath hi rahi waise bhi agle din Sunday tha toh dono der raat tak batein karti rahin….aur sath mein hi so gayin… Udhar dusri taraf Raj Sandy aur Monty ne mil kar khub masti ki….us din competition ke baad jyada time toh bacha nahi tha aur Raj thak bhi kafi gaya tha par fir bhi teeno ek restaurant mein gaye aur batein karte huye khana khaya….fir ghar jate jate Raj kafi thak gaya aur jate hi so gaya… Toh dosto Itna toh pata chal gaya k Priya Raj se boht pehle se pyar karti hai….par kya Raj use maaf karega kya uski aur Raj ki dosti hogi aur kya yeh dosti pyar mein badal payegi yeh toh waqt hi batayega…toh dosto Dildariyan ke sath aise hi bane rahiye…Aur apne is nachij dost ko aise hi pyar dete rahiye….apka apna SIDHU… To be continued….
29-12-2018, 07:51 AM
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29-12-2018, 07:54 AM
Update 39
Udhar dusri taraf Raj Sandy aur Monty ne mil kar khub masti ki….us din competition ke baad jyada time toh bacha nahi tha aur Raj thak bhi kafi gaya tha par fir bhi teeno ek restaurant mein gaye aur batein karte huye khana khaya….fir ghar jate jate Raj kafi thak gaya aur jate hi so gaya… Ab age… Agle din yani Sunday ko kareeb 8:00 baje Sandy ke phone ki ring baji wo abhi abhi utha tha aur tea pi raha tha…usne apna phone dekha toh Isha ka tha…usne phone pick kiya… Isha( ek dum se): Sandy Raj ke competition ka kya hua…wo jeet gaya kya aur kaisa hai wo…. Sandy: are oh madam thoda sabar karo…ek Toh itni subah subah chay bhi nahi pine di aur upar se swaal pe swaal… Isha: sorry sorry…chalo batao Raj kaisa hai… Sandy( thode vyang bhare lehje mein) : main thik hun… Isha: sorry yaar tera bhi puchne wali thi…ab toh bata Raj kaisa hai aur uske competition ka kya result aya… Sandy: wo thik hai aur wo jeet bhi gaya… Isha: mujhe pata tha wo jeet hi jayega… Sandy: han…par kya tune bas yahi puchne ke liye phone kiya… Isha: nahi asal mein tumne kaha tha k competition ke baad Raj ke badle huye behavior ka pata karenge… Sandy: han…par humein sab se pehle yeh pata karna hoga k Raj aisa kar kion raha hai…uske baad hi hum kus kar payenge…. Isha: ab yeh sab kaise pata kar sakte hain… Sandy: mere paas ek plan hai aisa karte hain aj dopehar 1:00 baje milte hain… Isha: OK par kahan…. Sandy: xxxx park mein… Isha: chal thik hai main pahunch jaungi tum bhi time par a Jana… Sandy: OK meri maa ab mujhe chay pine de… Isha: chal thik hai bhukhad kahin ka…bye… Fir Isha ne call kaat diya aur Sandy chay peene laga aur kus sochne laga… Udhar Priya ke ghar mein Sonia abhi bhi wahin thi raat ko late sone ke karan dono late hi uthi…aur ab bed par baithi batein kar rahi thin… Priya : yaar Sonia Raj ab toh kitna handsome ho gaya hai…ab toh uspe kitni ladkian Marti hongi… Sonia: han yeh toh hai…tu bata tujhe Raj mein kya acha lagta hai… Priya: yaar mujhe Toh uski ankhein badi pasand hain pata nahi kya hai uski ankhon mein Jo main kho si jati hun unmein… Sonia: wo toh hai kus aur bhi toh hoga na usmein… Priya: han yaar uske six pack abs…kitne hot lagte hain… Sonia: luchi tu uske kamre mein tak jhak karti hai…sharam nahi ati tujhe… Priya(Sonia ke marte huye): yaar wo toh ek din main uske ghar mein aunty ke sath baithi batein kar rahi thi tab wo sayad gym laga kar aya tha usne shirt nahi pehni thi…aur han ek din wo hamare ghar aya tha uski shirt pe khana gir gaya aur wo washroom mein saaf kar raha tha toh main use towel dene gayi thi….tab main fisal kar girne wali thi toh wo mujhe bachane ke liye bina shirt ke bahar a gaya tha… Sonia: oho kya baat hai Priya Agarwal Raj ki bahon mein aur Raj bina shirt ke kya scene hoga yaar kash mein wahan hoti… Priya( Sharm se uske gaal lal ho chuke the): chup kar besharam kahin ki… Sonia Priya ki halat par hasne lagi aur Priya use marne lagi toh wo kamre mein idhar udhar daudne lagi…tabhi Priya ka pair mud gaya aur wo gir gayi…Sonia ne Priya ko sahara dekar bed par bithaya aur bhag kar Geeta ko bula layi aur Pani bhi le ayi… Geeta( preshan hokar): beta kya hua chot toh nahi lagi… Priya(dard se): mummy pair mein boht dard ho raha hai…. Sonia: le pehle pani pi….( Geeta se) aunty ise koi pain killer de dijiye aur doctor ko bhi bula lijiye…. Geeta: han beta main apne kamre se lekar ati hun… Fir Geeta jaldi se niche gayi aur pain killer le ayi aur sath mein Mohit ko bhi bol diya k Priya ko chot lagi hai doctor ko bula lo…Fir mohit ne doctor ko phone kiya aur fir dono upar aye aur Priya ko pain killer de di… Kus time baad doctor bhi a gaya…usne pair ka ache se muyana kiya aur kus din pair par jyada pressure na dalne ko kaha…fir doctor chala gaya aur Priya aram karne lagi… Dopehar karib 12:30 Sonia apne ghar chali gayi kion Priya ka dard ab kus kam tha… 1:00 pm… Isha park mein khadi sandy ke ane ka wait kar rahi thi…..tabhi Sandy apni bike par ata dikha isse Isha ne rahat ki saans li…par yeh kya uske sath koi aur bhi tha….yeh koi aur nahi balki Riya hi thi...sandy ne bike park ki aur Riya ko sath le kar Isha ke paas pahuncha…Isha ke chehre par confusion thi…aur Sandy ko iska karn pata tha… Sandy: Isha yeh meri Behan hai Riya…aur Riya yeh hai Isha… Dono ne apas mein hi hlo ki aur haal chal pucha par abhi bhi Isha ke man mein confusion thi k Sandy Riya ko sath kion laya hai….Sandy Isha ki halt samj gaya tha Sandy: dekho Isha hum yeh sab akele nahi kar sakte hamein kisi tej dimag ki jarurat hai aur Riya yeh kaam ache se kar sakti hai…toh Maine ise bata diya sab kus aur yeh maan gayi help ke liye… Riya: mujhe bhi laga tha k Raj ke past mein kus toh huya hai jis se wo itna unfriendly ho gaya hai…aisa lagta hai Jaise use kisi par jaldi bharosa nahi hota… Sandy ne bhi Raj aur Monty ki jo baat suni thi wo bata di… Isha: yaar ab yeh Monty kon hai aur mera usse kya lena dena… Riya: par Raj ka toh hai.....wo hamein kam se kam Raj ke Mumbai chodne ke piche kon tha yeh toh bata hi sakta hai…aur rahi baat apki aur Raj ki toh wo yah toh Raj bata sakta hai yah fir Ap… Isha: par mujhe is bare mein khud nahi pata… Riya: mujhe pata hai…isiliye pehle Monty wala case suljate hain …apka thoda complicated hai is par thodi jyada mehnat karni hogi… Sandy: toh ab hamein kya karna hoga… Riya: karna kya hai Monty se puchtach… Sandy: OK main Monty ko yahin bulata hun…. Riya: thik hai but is bare mein Raj ko pata nahi chalna chahiye… Fir Sandy Monty ko phone karta hai aur us park mein usi waqt ane ko kehta hai…aur bolta hai k Raj ko mat batana…Monty ko thoda ajeeb laga but fir bhi usne bol diya k wo adhe ghante mein a jayega… Toh dosto yahan toh In sabhi ne puri tyari karli hai…par kya Monty In logon ko sab bata dega…aur agar bata bhi diya toh pata lagne par Sandy aur Riya kya karenge…kionk naam toh Priya aur Sonia ka hi ayega…toh dosto ab hamari kahani mein dhire dhire sabhi panne khulenge…yeh sab janne ke liye Dildariyan ke sath bane rahein….aur apne friend SIDHU ka support karte rahein…. To be continued…..
29-12-2018, 07:56 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by Shalvi1992 entertainerjatt Thanks... Main koi kaam beech mein nahi chodta...vaise abhi toh main bacha hun par fir bhi agar main mar gaya toh yeh story incomplete reh jayegi....yah ho sakta hai k koi aur pura kar de....but agar sansein chalti rahi toh likhta rahunga Quote:Originally Posted by Shalvi1992 entertainerjatt Yaar sorry tum toh badhak gayi main toh bas possibility bata raha tha...and plz ruthna mat tumhare kehne par toh Maine competition bhi karwa diya...ap story aise hi padhte raho
29-12-2018, 08:17 AM
Update 40
Fir Sandy Monty ko phone karta hai aur us park mein usi waqt ane ko kehta hai…aur bolta hai k Raj ko mat batana…Monty ko thoda ajeeb laga but fir bhi usne bol diya k wo adhe ghante mein a jayega… Ab age Kareeb adhe ghante baad Monty wahan a gaya….Sandy ke sath Riya aur Isha ko dekh kar use boht ajeeb laga…khas kar Isha kionk wo use janta nahi tha… Monty( confusion bhare lehje mein) : bhai kya hua sab thik hai na… Sandy : bhai humein tumse ek baat karni hai…pehle main inse tumhara into. Karwa dun…yeh hain Isha…aur isha yeh Monty hai… Fir dono ne ek dusre se hii hlo kiya… Sandy: yaar mujhe tumse ek baat puchni hai…sach sach batana... Monty(ander se thoda ghabra gaya tha): kya pucha hai bhai… Sandy: bhai mujhe ghuma fira kar batein karni nahi ati…asal mein Maine tumhare parents ki anniversary wale din tumhari aur Raj ki batein sunli thin… Monty(thoda ghabra gaya tha): bhai ismein meri koi galti nahi hai… Sandy: hum tumhe kus nahi bolne wale….humein bas yeh janna hai k iske piche kon tha… Monty: bhai main nahi bata sakta…mujhe faltu mein panga nahi karna…main bas itna bolna chahunga k in sab mein meri koi galti nahi hai… Sandy: yaar dekh hamare liye yeh sab janna boht jaruri hai…acha yeh bata tu Raj ko ab apna dost samjta hai… Monty: han… Sandy: Toh yaar yeh sab usi ke liye hi Toh kar rahe hain…yeh hamein tu hi bata sakta hai… Monty( majburi mein): thik hai but Raj ko kus mat batana… Riya(excitement mein): nahi batayenge…. Monty: mujhe aisa karne ke liye Priya aur Sonia ne kaha hai… Monty ki baat sun kar sabhi ke munh khule ke khule reh gaye…kionk un logon ne iski umeed bhi nahi ki thi…Riya aur Sandy toh aise khade the Jaise koi bhoot dekh liya ho…un logon ki aisi halt dekh kar Monty age bola… Monty: main isi liye nahi bata raha tha....mujhe pata tha tum logon ka kya reaction hoga…bhai ab main chalta hun… Yeh bol kar Monty toh wahan se nikal gaya par Sandy aur Riya abhi bhi hairan preshan the….Isha bhi khade khade un dono ko aise dekh rahi thi….tabhi Riya ne is chupi ko toda…. Riya: di aisa nahi kar sakti…. Isha: kya bol rahi ho tum… Riya: han jiska Monty ne naam liya hai wo meri di aur unki friend hain… Sandy: yaar sayad yahi karan hai k Raj in dono ko nahi bulata….main toh soch bhi nahi sakta tha k wo dono aisa kar sakti hain…main abhi jaker unse baat karta hun… Riya: sandy ruko gusse mein pagal mat bano….agar Raj ne is baat ko chipaya hai toh koi wajah hogi…hamein bhi is baat ko raaz rakhna hoga….aur age ke plan par kaam karna hoga…. Sandy: ab aur kya bacha hai… Riya: dekho is baat ka Raj ke Isha ji se nafrat karne ka koi Lena dena nahi hai…isliye abhi koi aur bhi baat hai jo hamein nahi pata… Isha: toh ab hamein kya karna chahtiye… Riya: dekho Raj apse nafrat karta hai par apko iske bare mein nahi pata….iska ek hi matlab hai k in sab ke peeche koi teesra hai… Sandy: kya koi teesra… Riya: han koi aisa Jo Raj aur Isha ji ki ladayi karwana chahta ho… Isha: par kion karega koi aisa… Riya: dekhiye apko kisi aise sakhs par shak hai jo apko aur Raj ko ladwana chahta ho…usko aisa karne se koi fayada ho… Isha: nahi mujhe toh koi yaad nahi…. Riya: koi baat nahi ap thande dimag se yaad kijiye agar kisi ka naam yad aye toh jarur batana…. Isha: OK main Sochungi…. Sandy: Riya ab hamein chalna chahiye… Fir Riya aur Sandy apne ghar ki taraf chal pade….Sandy ka dimag toh gusse se fata ja raha tha…par Riya ne roka tha isliye wo kus kar bhi nahi sakta tha… Sandy aur Riya ghar pahunche toh Sonia hall mein hi baithi thi….usko dekh kar Sandy ko bada gussa aya par usne apne apko control kiya…Sonia ne unhe ate huye dekh liya… Sonia: a gaye tum dono kahan gaye the… Sandy ne Sonia ki baat ka koi jawab nahi diya aur aise hi wahan se apne kamre ki aur chal pada…Sonia ko thoda ajeeb laga par Riya ne baat ko sambhal liya… Riya: di hum aise hi bahar ghumne chale gaye the…. Sonia: yeh Sandy ko kya hua aise kion gaya apne kamre mein bahar kisi se jhagda toh nahi karke a raha… Riya: nahi di asal mein Maine use raste mein boht tang kiya is liye wo gussa hai mujhse… Sonia: acha toh yeh baat hai…tu use tang mat kiya kar wo chid jata hai… Riya: are di ap fikar mat kijiye hamara chalta hai…jaldi hi maan jayega...ok di main bhi thak gayi hun thoda aram kar lun…. Fir Riya wahan se apne kamre mein chali gayi…Sonia wahin hall mein baithi rahi…. Toh dosto is update mein itna hi…Ab yeh dekhna hai k Riya kaise Raj aur Isha ke past se Jude raaz ka pata lagati hai…aur agle update mein aur bhi surprise mil sakta hai…so Dildariyan ko aise hi support karte rehein….apka apna SIDHU… To be continued….
29-12-2018, 08:19 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by spxossip entertainerjatt Thanks bhai and sorry k apko nirash hona pada...Maine pehle hi kaha tha k main koi writer nahi hun...bas aise hi likhne laga...but ap log mujhse jyada jante ho toh ab main kosish karunga k faltu ki bakwas na ho story mein....aur rahi bura manne ki baat toh apka haq banta hai mujhe sahi galat batane ka
29-12-2018, 08:23 AM
Update 41
Riya: are di ap fikar mat kijiye hamara chalta hai…jaldi hi maan jayega...ok di main bhi thak gayi hun thoda aram kar lun…. Fir Riya wahan se apne kamre mein chali gayi…Sonia wahin hall mein baithi rahi…. Ab age…. Dusri taraf Raj apne kamre mein aram kar raha tha use koi pata nahi tha k uske upar ek bomb futne wala tha…us din toh kus khas nahi huya… Agle din Monday subah 8:00 baje… Raj naste ki table par baitha tha…aur uske parents bhi breakfast kar rahe the…tabhi Raj ne apna Breakfast khatam kiya aur Jane laga… Raj: bye mom dad main college ja raha hun… Sunidhi: bye beta… Raghuveer: bye aur Priya ko bhi apne sath lete Jana… Raj ko jhatka laga… Raj(hairani se): main kion leke jaun…uske paas bhi toh car hai na… Sunidhi: han hai par wo chala nahi sakti…uske pair mein chot lagi hai…hum logon ne toh use college Jane se bhi mana kiya par wo nahi mani Toh humne socha k tere sath chali jayegi…aur han uska dhyan rakhna… Bechare Raj ki toh shakal hi utar gayi use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k uske sath yeh kaisa julm ho raha hai…aur Priya kaise maan gayi…ap log bhi yahi soch rahe ho na k yeh sab kaise hua Toh main ap logon ko bata dun k asal mein huya kya… Kal sham ko jab Raj ke parents ko pata chala k Priya ko chot hai toh wo log uska pata lene gaye…baton baton mein Priya ke college Jane ki baat chali… Geeta: ab ise kus din tak college bhi nahi Jane dungi… Priya: nahi mom main ghar par bore ho jaungi... Geeta: par apne pair ki halt toh dekh… Priya: par mom Maine keh diya k college Jana hai toh Jana hai… Sunidhi: koi baat nahi Raj Toh hoga hi na college mein aur wo ise sath bhi le jayega…tu Jane de ise Geeta… Sunidhi ki baat sun kar Priya ki toh lottery lag gayi…bina mange use sab kus mil gaya ab Toh wo chot lagne ke liye bhagban ko man hi man thanks kar rahi thi…ab bas Geeta maan jati… Geeta: han yeh sahi rahega Raj ke sath hone se mujhe bhi koi tension nahi rahegi… Priya ke man mein toh ladu foot rahe the par wo kus boli nahi…toh dosto is tarah Priya Raj ke gale pad gayi….par ab bechara kar bhi kya kar sakta tha…gal pada dhol bajana hi tha toh usne apne parents ki baat maan li… Raj: OK mom main gadi uske ghar le jata hun use wahin se baitha lunga… Tabhi piche se awaj ayi...yeh awaj geeta ki thi… Geeta: iski koi jarurat nahi hai…priya yahin se tumhare sath chali jayegi main use yahin le ayi hun… Geeta ke sath Priya khadi thi…Use dekh kar Raj ka para high ho gaya par usne control rakha...jabki Priya Toh Raj ko dekh kar boht khus thi aur usse jyada khus is baat se k aj pura din Raj ko uska khyal rakhna padega… Sunidhi: ab jao tum dono late ho jayega…aur han Raj tum Priya ko akele mat chodna agar use koi takleef huyi toh mujhse bura koi nahi… Raj( beman se): ji mom… Fir Raj apni gadi ki taraf chal pada Priya ko uski mom ne sahara dekar gadi mein baitha diya aur fir dono wahan se chal pade…abhi dono thodi dur hi gaye the k Rai ne gadi rok di Priya uski taraf dekhne lagi Jaise puch rahi ho k kion roki gadi…Raj ne use kus ishara kiya par Priya ko samaj nahi aya yah fir wo samjna nahi chahti thi…thak har kar Raj ko na chahte huye bhi Priya se baat karni padi… Raj: seat belt bandh lo… Priya: OK… Fir Priya ne seat belt bandh li wo man hi man mein boht khus thi k Raj ne usse thodi hi sahi par baat toh ki par Raj ka toh bura haal tha wo Priya ke sath aur nahi baithna chahta tha isliye usne gadi tez speed se college ki taraf dauda di…college pahunchte hi Raj ne jaldi se door khola aur Jane laga par itni jaldi kahan bhagta…Priya bhi jaldi se door khol kar bahar nikli aur Raj ko awaj di… Priya: Raj meri help kardo plz main bina sahare chal nahi sakti… Raj bechara fir fas gaya aur chup chap Priya ke paas ja kar khada ho gaya Priya ne Raj ke kandhe par hath rakha aur Raj dheere dheere chalne laga Priya bhi uske sahare chal rahi thi…. Abhi dono college mein enter huye hi the k Priya ka balance bigad gaya wo chilate huye girne lagi hi thi aur Raj ne use sambhal liya…aur Situation kus is tarah thi k Raj ka ek hath Priya ki kamar mein tha aur dusra Priya ki arm pakde huye…Priya ke dono hath Raj ke kandhon par the aur wo Raj ke hath ke sahare piche ki taraf jhuki huyi thi…. In sab ke beech Priya ki Raj se ankhein mili aur wo lagatar Raj ke chehre ko dekhe ja rahi thi jis karn Raj bada uncomfortable feel kar raha tha…wo baar baar as paas dekh raha tha…kionk sabhi unhi ko dekh rahe the….Lekin Priya toh Raj ke chehre mein hi khoyi huyi thi…Raj ne use khada karne ke liye upar khincha par thoda jyada hi jor lag gaya aur Priya seedha Raj ke gale lag gayi…Priya ne is jhatke ko sambhalne ke liye Raj ki Peeth par apni bahein kasdi…Ab in dono mein hawa ke gujrne ki bhi jagah nahi thi….Priya abhi bhi Raj ki bahon mein khoyi padi thi…par Raj ko puri hosh thi aur Apne as paas khadi janta ko aise dekhte dekh kar uski halt sarmindagi ke karn boht buri ho rahi thi…ladke Toh itni khubsurat ladki ko Raj ki bahon mein dekh kar jal rahe the aur ladkian Raj ko Priya ke itna kareeb dekh kar ahein bhar rahi thi aur Priya ki jagah khud ko imagin kar rahi thi…. Tabhi Raj ko ek aur jhatka laga…Raj ki halat aur kharab ho gayi kionk samne Sonia Sandy aur Riya khade in logon ko dekh rahe the sayad abhi aye the… Sonia ne jaldi hi baat ko sambhal liya aur Priya ko Raj se alag kiya…aur raj ko bola… Priya: thanks Raj ab main ise sambhal lungi… Raj ki toh Jaise jaan chuti wo jaldi se wahan se bhaga…Par ab sarminda hone ki bari Priya ki thi kionk use Raj se alag hone ke baad hosh aya aur jab usne as paas itne sare logon ko dekha Toh uska Sharm ke mare bura haal ho gaya….usne apni garden niche karli…. Sonia use apne sath classes ki taraf le gayi…tamasha khatam hote hi sari janta idhar udhar nikal gayi wahan do sakhs abhi bhi khade soch rahe the… Sandy: yaar yeh sab kya hai…Raj aur Priya ek sath…aur wo bhi is tarah… Riya: mujhe lagta hai…Raj ne Priya ko maaf kar diya hoga usne Monty ko bhi maaf kar diya…. Sandy: Monty ki baat alag hai par mujhe nahi lagta Raj Priya ko maaf karega….wo toh in dono se baat bhi nahi karta… Riya: chal chod mujhe lagta hai yeh sab an jane mein hua hoga…chal lectures ka time ho gaya… Fir dono apni apni class attend karne chale gaye…Sandy Raj ke sath jaker baith gaya…aj usne Priya ko nahi bulaya wo kal se Sonia se bhi kam hi baat kar raha tha…wo bhi jab majburi ho… Sonia aur Priya sath mein hi baithi thi aur dhire dhire batein kar rahi thi… Sonia: yaar Priya tu pagal hai kya yeh bahar kya kar rahi thi… Priya ne use puri baat batayi wo kaise Raj ke sath ayi aur kaise uska balance bigda aur wo sab ho gaya… Sonia: toh yeh baat hai par tujhe apne ap par control rakhna chahiye… Priya: han mujhe pata hai par main RAJ ke paas jate hi sab bhul jati hun… Sonia: Toh madam puri tarah se pagal ho chuki hain… Priya: kya yaar… Sonia: majak kar rahi hun…. Fir aise hi dono batein karti rahi Sonia Sara time Priya ko chedti rahi…aise hi pure lectures nikal gaye….aj Raj ko Priya ko sath lejana tha toh wo lunch ke baad use sath lekar ghar ke liye nikal gaya… Raste mein Priya lagatar Raj ko dekhe ja rahi thi yeh Raj ko bada ajeeb lag raha tha…par wo uski taraf jyada dhyan nahi de raha tha....tabhi Priya ne kus aisa bola jisse Raj ko jhatka laga… Priya: Raj gadi roko mujhe tumse baat karni hai… Par Raj ne gadi nahi roki…Jab Raj ne Priya Ki baat nahi mani toh Priya ka sir ghum gaya usne gusse mein Handbreak khinch diya aur car wahin ruk gayi aur ek tez jhatka laga… Raj( gusse mein): tum pagal ho gayi ho kya… Par Priya ko koi asar nahi huya…wo Raj ko pyar se boli… Priya: Raj plz meri baat sunlo…mujhe tumse kus baat karni hai…. Raj: han jaldi bolo kya hai… Priya: aise nahi kisi jagah baith kar ache se… Raj: mere paas tumhari faltu bakwas ke liye time nahi hai… Priya: pls Raj… Raj: yaar mujhe samaj nahi araha tum yeh sab kion kar rahi ho…tumhari koi nayi chal hogi..... Priya: Raj tum kus bhi keh sakte ho par plz ek baar meri baat sunlo… Raj: dekho Priya main tumhe subah se bardast kar raha hun ab boht huya chup chap ghar chalo aur mera peecha chodo…. Priya: toh theek hai tum jao ghar mujhe yahin utar do main khud chali jaungi…par tab tak nahi jaungi jab tak tum meri baat nahi sunoge… Raj ko pata tha k agar usne Priya ko yahin choda toh ghar par uski shamat a jayegi…isliye ab wo majbur tha… Raj( beman se): han batao kahan Jana hai… Priya(khus ho kar): xxx restaurant… Fir Raj ne gadi us taraf dauda di…. Toh dosto ab age kya hoga yeh toh agle update mein hi pata chalega…par mujhe umeed hai k ap logon ko yeh update pasand aya hoga....keep supporting….aur apne SIDHU aur Dildariyan ko aise hi pyar dete rahein…. To be continued…..
29-12-2018, 08:23 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by Shalvi1992entertainerjatt Thanks shalvi...aur agle update mein kafi kus clear ho jayega....aur sorry yaar updare chota dene ke liye ab se dhyan rakhunga....
29-12-2018, 08:26 AM
Update 42
Raj( beman se): han batao kahan Jana hai… Priya(khus ho kar): xxx restaurant… Fir Raj ne gadi us taraf dauda di…. Ab age…. Raj aur Priya restaurant mein pahunche aur ek table par jaker baith gaye… Raj: han ab bolo jaldi se… Priya: kya tum do mint ke liye apna gussa shant nahi kar sakte… Raj: nahi tumhe Jo baat karni hai jaldi karo… Priya: yaar karti hun pehle kus order Toh karlein… Raj: hum log yahan date pe nahi aye hain Jo bolna hai jaldi bolo… Priya : han par ek coffee toh pi hi sakte hain… Raj: yaar kus bhi karo par jaldi…. Fir Priya ke chehre par halki si muskan a gayi aur usne do coffee order ki...waiter coffee rakh kar chala gaya…aur fir Priya ne Raj ko coffee lene ka ishara kiya…Raj ko peeni toh thi nahi par Priya se baat jaldi khatam karne ke usne coffee ka cup utha liya… Raj: han ab jaldi bolo kya baat hai… Priya(ek lambi saans lene ke baad): dekho Raj main janti hun k Maine 5 saal pehle Jo kiya wo galat tha…par main sach bol rahi hun tumhare Jane ke baad main ek ek pal tumse maafi mangne ke liye tadpi hun...par kabhi himmat nahi huyi…aj mujhe laga k isse acha moka nahi milega…boht himmat karke main tumse yeh sab bol rahi hun…plz mujhe maaf kar do… Priya yeh sab ek saans mein bol gayi…par Raj ko koi farak nahi pada… Raj: Priya tumhari baat puri huyi ab hamein ghar chalna chahiye…. Yeh bol kar Raj uth kar Jane laga…par Priya aj apni baat manwaye bina nahi manne wali thi…usne Raj ka hath pakad liya aur use apni taraf ghuma kar uske samne ghutno ke bal baith gayi aur apne hath jod kar maafi mangne lagi… Priya: Raj Maine aj se pehle kisi ke samne sir nahi jhukaya…par aj sab ke samne tumhare age hath jodti hun…plz mujhe maaf kardo nahi toh maa kasam main tadap tadap kar mar jaungi… Yeh bolte waqt Priya ki ankhon mein ansoo a Gaye…wo sach mein aj se pehle itni emotional kabhi nahi huyi thi…Raj bhi bechara kitna apne apko rokta Priya ki halt ko dekh kar bade se bada pathar bhi dol jaye…Raj toh fir bhi ek naram dil insan tha…hamesha apni ego ke liye ladne jaghdne wali Priya aj itne logon ke samne Raj ke samne maafi ki bheekh mang rahi thi…sabhi usko dekh rahe the par wo sirf Raj ko dekhe ja rahi thi uski ankhon mein ek aas thi…aur wo Raj ki maafi ke liye thi… Akhir Raj ne bhi Priya ke paschatap ke age apne gutne tek diye…Raj ne Priya ko kandhon se pakad kar uthaya aur Jo usne bola usse Priya ke dil mein Raj ke liye pyar ke sath sath izzat bhi badh gayi… Raj: Priya tumne apni galti mani yeh boht badi baat hai par tum Mohit uncle ki izzat ho unka guroor ho…main tumhe aise jhuka huya nahi dekh sakta…aj ke baad kabhi bhi kisi ke age mat jhukna… Priya(ankhon mein khusi ke ansoo liye): tumne mujhe maaf kiya na… Raj: ab kya likh kar dun… Raj ki baat sun kar Priya muskra padi aur wo itni khus ho gayi k wo bina kisi baat ki parwah kiye Raj ke gale lag gayi…Raj ne ise aise hi samja usne koi jyada react nahi kiya aur Priya ne bhi apne ap ko control mein rakha aur jaldi hi alag ho gayi… Raj: ab ghar chalein… Priya: han chalo… Fir Raj ne bill pay kiya aur Priya ko shara diya aur gadi mein baitha kar ghar ki taraf chal pada….Priya boht khus thi…Raj ko is baat ki khusi thi k Priya ne apni galti itni bahaduri se mani…Raj ne gadi apne ghar ki garage mein park ki aur Priya ko sahara dekar apne ghar hi le aya….Priya ne hi bola tha aisa karne k liye…fir Raj Priya ko hall mein baitha kar apne kamre mein chala gaya…Priya ne naukar ko bol kar Sunidhi ko bula liya aur Sunidhi ne use pani diya aur uske sath batein karne lagi…. Sham 5:00 baje…sandy ka ghar…. Sandy ke phone par ek call aya Sandy ne call receive kiya Isha ka call tha… Isha: hlo Sandy kaisa hai.. Sandy: thik hun tu bata… Isha: thik hun kya tu meri baat Riya se kara sakta hai… Sandy: OK main use bula kar call back karta hun… Isha: OK… Fir Sandy Riya ko bula laya…aur Isha ko call back kiya Isha ne jaldi hi receive bhi kar liya… Riya: hlo Isha ji kaisi hain ap… Isha:thik hun tum batao… Riya: main bhi thik hun…koi kaam tha kya mujhse… Isha: han tumne kal mujhse pucha tha na k koi aisa shaks ho jis par mujhe shak ho… Riya( ab uska interest badh chuka tha): han…apko kisi ka naam yaad aya… Isha: han…ek ladka tha Nikhil naam hai uska… Riya: Nikhil…kon hai yeh aur apko is par shak kion hai… Isha: yeh mera ek childhood friend tha…maine ise hamesha apna dost mana…par yeh mujhse pyar karta tha…isne propose bhi kiya tha aur Maine reject kar diya tha par hamare bich iske baad bhi friendship thi…par Raj ke ane ke baad achanak Nikhil ke behavior mein change a gaya…wo kus chida chida sa rehta tha…hamari friendship bhi khatam ho gayi…wo Raj ko bhi mil chuka tha…ho sakta hai in sab ke piche wahi ho… Riya: han apki baat mein dum hai….yeh hai kahan ka vaise… Isha: pune ka hi hai… Riya: pura naam kya hai… Isha: Nikhil Gupta… Riya: Ok…kya ap ab iske sath contact mein hain… Isha: nahi Delhi Jane ke baad kabhi baat nahi huyi… Riya: ok main kus sochti hun apko kus aur yad aye toh batana… Isha: ok…bye Riya… Riya: bye… Fir Isha ne phone kaat diya aur Riya ek gehri soch mein dub gayi….use is tarah dekh kar Sandy ne karn pucha toh Riya ne puri baat bata di… Sandy: par ab ham kya karein… Riya: kya tum iske bare mein pata laga sakte ho… Sandy: han pune mein toh kus bhi kar sakta hun… Riya: toh thik hai tum iske bare mein pata karo uske baad hi kus karenge… Sandy: OK main apne dost ko bolta hun… Fir Sandy ne apne ek dost ko phone kiya yeh itna important nahi hai toh into. Ki jarurat nahi hai…. Sandy: hlo bhai kaisa hai…. Dost: thik hun bhai tu bata Mumbai ja kar bhul hi gaya… Sandy: nahi yaar aisi baat nahi hai… Dost: aur bata kaise yaad kiya… Sandy: bhai ek admi ke bare mein pata lagana hai… Dost: kon hai bhai… Sandy: Nikhil Gupta naam hai bhai… Dost: han janta hun main ise jyada toh nahi par itna pata hai k gatiya sa admi hai…gunda type…ek ameer baap ki bigdi aulad hai… Sandy: thanks bhai agar iske bare mein kus aur pata laga pao toh jarur batana… Dost: thik hai bhai… Fir Sandy ne phone kaat diya… Riya: kya hua kus pata chala… Sandy ne puri baat batayi… Sandy: ab kya karna hai… Riya: sochte hain kus…abhi main apne room mein jati hun… Toh dosto Raj ne Priya ko dil se maaf kiya yah nahi aur yeh Nikhil Gupta ka case kya mod lega yeh toh samay hi batyega….par abhi ke liye itna hi….umeed hai k ap logon ko update pasand aya ho…keep supporting Dildariyan…aur apne dost SIDHU ko aise hi pyar dete rahein… To be continued….
29-12-2018, 08:27 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by spxossipentertainerjatt Bhai main samaj gaya par main sochta hun k jab ek update dusre update se juda ho toh aur bhi jyada maja ata hai...par agar ap logon ko yeh pasand nahi hai toh main thode badlaw karne ki kosish karunga
29-12-2018, 09:08 AM
Update 43
Riya: kya hua kus pata chala… Sandy ne puri baat batayi… Sandy: ab kya karna hai… Riya: sochte hain kus…abhi main apne room mein jati hun…. Ab age…. Fir Riya wahan se chali gayi…aur Sandy bhi washroom mein chala gaya… Udhar Priya ne Sonia ko phone kiya…sonia ne phone pick kiya… Sonia: hlo kaisi hai ab tu… Priya: thik hun ab toh…maine tujhe ek baat batane ke liye phone kiya hai… Sonia: han bata… Priya: Maine Raj se maafi mang li…aur usne mujhe maaf bhi kar diya… Sonia: yeh toh achi baat hai… Priya: han…ab main use tere bare mein bhi bata dungi k Teri koi galti nahi thi… Sonia: jaisa tu thik samje…toh kal milte hain…. Priya: han aur ache se sab bataungi k kaise maine Raj se maafi mangi… Sonia: OK… Fir Priya ne phone kaat diya…uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya… Next day Tuesday… Kal ki tarah aj bhi Raj aur Priya sath Jane wale the…dono college ki taraf chal pade….aj Raj ko Priya koi boj nahi lag rahi thi…usne Priya ko jyada na sahi thoda boht samaj liya tha k wo dil ki buri nahi hai….Priya toh aj kus jyada hi khus thi aur Raj se batein karne ki kosish kar rahi thi….Raj bhi batein kar raha tha par jyada nahi…par Priya ke liye itna kafi tha…fir dono aise hi batein karte huye college pahunche… Aj Priya pehle se kus thik thi par uske pair mein abhi bhi dard tha isliye Raj uske sath sath hi chal raha tha…wo dono Jaise hi college mein enter kiye toh Sandy aur Monty dono sath mein khade the…jab unhone Raj aur Priya ko sath mein dekha toh thoda ajeeb laga… Monty: yaar yeh east aur west ek sath kaise…. Sandy: pata nahi bhai kal se yeh tamasha dekh raha hun par kus samaj nahi ata… Monty: kya pata kahin Priya ki koi chal na ho… Sandy: pata nahi riya bata rahi thi k uske pair mein chot lagi hai isliye Raj use sath leke ata hai… Monty: kus keh nahi sakte bhai.. Fir Raj Priya ko Sonia aur Riya ke paas chod kar Monty aur Sandy ke paas chal pada…Raj ko paas ate dekh dono chup ho gaye… Raj: kaise ho tum dono… Monty: thik hain bhai hum toh tu bata kya hal hai.. Raj: hal Toh bilkul thik hai…kya batein chal rahi thi tum dono mein aur mere ate hi chup kion ho gaye… Sandy: kus nahi yaar aise hi idhar udhar ki batein kar rahe the…tu aya toh socha tu koi achi baat sunayega… Raj: mere paas toh koi baat nahi hai…vaise bhi lecture ka time ho gaya hai..chal chalte hain… Sandy: chal thik hai.. Fir dono Monty ko canteen mein Milne ka bol kar apne class mein chale gaye…pura din kus khas nahi huya…dopehar ko lunch ke baad Raj Priya ke paas gaya… Raj: chalein Priya … Priya: chalo… Fir Raj aur Priya dono wahan se chale Gaye….gadi mein baith kar abhi dono kus dur hi gaye the….k tabhi in logon ne dekha k ek admi raste mein pada hai…rasta wahan sunsan tha kam hi log ate jate the…sayad isi liye kisi ne use dekha nahi hoga..... Raj: are yeh kya huya yeh admi kon hai… Priya: pata nahi lagta hai behosh hai… Raj: han sayad koi accident huya hoga…main jaker dekhta hun… Priya: chalo main bhi ati hun… Raj: nahi tum baitho… Raj itna bol kar gadi se utra aur us admi ke paas chala gaya…Raj ne Jaise hi us admi ka chehra dekhne ke liye use paltane ki kosish ki tabhi piche se koi jhadion se nikla aur usne Raj ki Peeth par chaku se teen war kiye…Raj ke munh se dard bhari cheekh nikli…us admi ke chehre par rumaal bandha huya tha…par jab wo wahan se bhagne laga toh uska rumal khul gaya…sadak par laita admi bhi jaldi se utha aur bhag gaya…par tab tak Raj ki ankhein band ho chuki thi….yeh sab itni jaldi huya k priya ko kus na kar payi…Priya ne Raj ko is halt mein dekha toh wo boht dar gayi…wo jaldi se gadi mein se nikli aur apne dard ki parwah kiye bina Raj ki taraf bhagi…Raj ke paas jaker Priya niche baith gayi usne Raj ka sir apni thigh pe rakha aur Raj ko uthane ki kosish karne lagi…. Priya(rote huye): Raj plz uth jao…mujhe boht ghabrahat ho rahi hai….Rajjjj Par Raj nahi utha kus der aur kosish karne ke baad Priya ne Raj ko wahin choda aur gadi ki taraf bhagi…usne apna phone uthaya aur ambulance mangwayi….jaldi hi ambulance a gayi aur in logon ne Raj ko uthaya aur ambulance mein dal kar Hospital ki taraf chal pade… Priya bhi Raj ki gadi lekar unke piche piche chal padi….uske pair mein itni bhag daud karne se dard hone laga tha par Raj ke dard ke samne yeh kus nahi tha…fir wo sabhi Hospital pahunche…Par wo log use admit nahi kar rahe the… Dr: dekhiye miss agarwal yeh security officer case hai…pehle apko FIR karni hogi .. Priya: plz Raj ko bacha lijiye use kus ho jayega… Dr: hum bhi majbur hain… Fir thak har kar Priya ne Mohit ko phone kiya....Mohit ne phone pick kiya… Mohit: han beta jaldi bolo kya kaam hai main ek important meeting mein hun… Priya(rote huye): papa wo Raj… Mohit: beta kya hua tum ro kion rahi ho…sab thik toh hai na… Priya: papa Raj par kisi ne hamla kiya hai…main Ambulance ki madad se use hospital le ayi par yeh log use admit nahi kar rahe… Mohit: kya bol rahi ho tum Raj par hamla…jaldi se doctor se meri baat karwao… Priya ne Dr. Ko phone diya… Mohit: ap log use admit karlo main baki sab sambhal lunga…par agar use kus huya toh mujhse bura koi nahi…. Dr. Thik hai ap security officer se baat kar lijiye…hum apni puri kosish karenge… Mohit: ok… Fir un logon ne Raj ko admit kar liya…Priya ne sabhi ko phone kar diya ghar mein Sonia ko…sab ko bata diya….sab se pehle Sunidhi aur Geeta aye…. Sunidhi (ghabrayi huyi): kya hua kahan hai mera bacha… Priya kus na bol payi bas Sunidhi ke gale lag kar Rone lagi… Geeta: tum ro kion rahi ho…kya hua use… Priya: mom wo behosh hai abhi ICU mein hain… Sunidhi: yeh sab kya ho gaya…kya bigada tha kisi ka mere bache ne… Geeta: hamara Raj toh kisi ko kus kehta bhi nahi…pata nahi kisi ki usse kya dusmani hogi… Sunidhi: abhi hai kahan wo… Tabhi Raghuveer aur Mohit bhi a gaye….in logon ke sath security officer bhi thi…. Raghuveer: Priya kya hua….Raj par kisne attack kiya… Priya: pata nahi uncle hum toh college se a rahe the….(fir Priya ne puri baat in logon ko bata di) security officer wala: ap ne un logon ka chehra nahi dekha… Priya: nahi hamla karne wale ka chehra bandha huya tha aur dusre ki Peeth meri taraf thi…jab tak main wahan pahunchti wo log bhag gaye… security officer wala: Sinha Saab apki kisi se koi dushmani…yah kisi par shak ho… Raghuveer: nahi hamari kisi ke sath koi dusmani nahi hai…na hi kisi par shak… Inspector: toh fir Raj ke hosh mein ane ke baad hi kus pata chalega…hum fir ayenge… Mohit: thik hai jab use hosh ayega hum apko bata denge… Fir security officer wale chale gaye…aur ghar wale wahin bench par baith gaye…Sunidhi Geeta aur Priya lagatar roye ja rahi thin aur Mohit aur Raghuveer bhi udaas the par wo un logon ko hausla de rahe the…. Thodi der baad Sonia Riya Sandy Monty aur Diksha bhi a gaye sab pareshan lag rahe the….sabhi seedhe college se hi a rahe the….kionk jab Priya ne Sonia ko phone kiya toh usne sabhi ko bata diya tha… Toh dosto abhi ke liye itna hi….ab age kya hoga…Raj par kisne hamla karwaya… yeh ane wala waqt hi batayega….ap aise hi Dildariyan ko apna pyar dete rahiye….apka apna SIDHU… To be continued….
29-12-2018, 09:09 AM
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29-12-2018, 09:14 AM
Update 44
Fir security officer wale chale gaye…aur ghar wale wahin bench par baith gaye…Sunidhi Geeta aur Priya lagatar roye ja rahi thin aur Mohit aur Raghuveer bhi udaas the par wo un logon ko hausla de rahe the…. Thodi der baad Sonia Riya Sandy Monty aur Diksha bhi a gaye sab pareshan lag rahe the….sabhi seedhe college se hi a rahe the….kionk jab Priya ne Sonia ko phone kiya toh usne sabhi ko bata diya tha… Ab age….. Sandy: kahan hai Raj… Raghuveer: beta abhi wo ICU mein hai… Sandy: yeh kya ho gaya uske sath… Monty: han uncle kus pata chala in sab ke peeche kon hai… Raghuveer: nahi beta kisi ko kus nahi pata…. Itne mein doctor wahan a gaya…kya ap log jara cabin mein aoge...fir Raghuveer Mohit Sunidhi aur Geeta sabhi doctor ke sath chale gaye aur baki sab wahin baithe rahe…par tabhi kus aisa huya jisse sabhi shock ho gaye… Sandy ne gusse mein Priya ka hath pakda aur use khada kar liya…isse sabhi hairan reh gaye….Priya ka pehle se ro ro kar bura haal tha upar se Sandy ka aisa behavior… Sonia: Sandy yeh kya badtamiji hai… Sandy: Sonia tum chup hi raho aur tum Miss Priya Agarwal…band karo apna yeh tamasha…kion kiya tumne aisa mere dost ke sath…kya bigada tha usne tera… Priya: yeh kya bol rahe ho tum… Sandy: ab boht ho gaya tum dono ka drama hamein sab pata hai kaise 5 saal pehle tum logon ne Raj ko yahan se bhaga diya tha…ab firse….is baar toh had hi paar kardi…use jaan se marwane ka plan bana liya…. Yeh sun kar Priya wahin ghutno ke bal baith gayi…aur apna munh chipa kar Rone lagi…Sonia use hausla dene lagi aur Monty aur Riya sandy ko shant karne ki kosish karne lage…Diksha ko kus samaj nahi a raha tha… Riya: bhaiya chup ho jao kion bakheda kar rahe ho… Monty: han yaar yeh time in sab baton ka nahi hai… Sandy: nahi yaar boht ho gaya…yeh chudail mere dost ko kha jayegi…yeh nahi chodegi use… Tabhi Sonia uthi aur ek jhanatedar thapad Sandy ki gaal par jad diya... Sonia(gusse mein): tum kya jante ho….tumhe jab puri baat pata hi nahi toh kion bol rahe ho…han manti hun Priya se galti huyi thi…par isne puri bheed ke samne Raj se maafi mangi…aur tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho k yeh Raj ko mar degi…Are pyar karti hai yeh Raj se…itna k Raj ke liye jaan bhi de sakti hai….agar aj yeh na hoti toh mar gaya hota wo…isne uski jaan bachayi….tumhe akal bhi hai kus…yeh kab se Raj ke liye roye ja rahi hai aur tu hai k is par hi ilzam lagane laga…. Sonia ki baat sun kar sab hairan the…k priya ne raj se bheed samne maafi mangi aur khas kar is baat se k wo Raj se pyar karti hai…par ek insan tha jo preshan bhi tha Diksha.....Sandy apna sir niche kiye Sonia ki batein sune ja raha tha…par uska gussa shant nahi huya…use Priya par ab bhi yakeen nahi tha… Isse pehle wo kus aur bolta wahan sabhi bade a gaye…sabhi ke chehre par chinta thi….unko dekhte hi Priya jaldi se uthi aur unke paas chali gayi… Priya: kya bola Dr. ne…kaisa hai ab Raj... Raghuveer: beta abhi uski halt boht najuk hai…doctor ne bola hai jyada khun beh Jane ke karn uski halt boht kharab hai…agar use agle 24 ghante mein hosh nahi aya toh kus serious situations ho sakti hain…wo coma mein bhi ja sakta hai ja fir uski jaan… Raghuveer iske age kus na bol paya…uska gala bhar aya…uski ankhon mein kafi time se ruke ansoo beh nikle…aur sath mein sabhi ka man udaas ho gaya...ladkion ne toh rona hi shuru kar diya… Fir sabhi aise hi is intzar mein baithe rahe k Raj ko hosh a jaye…par Raj toh kisi gehri neend mein soya huya tha Jo uthne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha…aise hi baithe baithe raat ho gayi… Sabhi wahan rukna chahte the par akhir lambi behas ke baad yeh faisla huya k mohit aur Raghuveer wahan rukenge…fir sabhi ghar ki taraf chal pade…Sonia aj Priya ke sath hi rukne wali thi toh wo dono Raj ki gadi se ghar ki taraf chal padin…Sonia drive kar rahi thi… Dono abhi kus dur hi gaye the k Priya ne Sonia ko rukne ko kaha… Priya: Sonia gadi rokna… Sonia: kya hua yaar… Priya: mujhe mandir Jana hai… Sonia: yaar boht raat ho chuki hai…ghar chal nahi toh sab pareshan honge… Priya: yaar main Raj ko aise nahi dekh sakti….mujhe uske liye pray karni hai… Sonia: par tu toh kabhi mandir jati nahi… Priya: aj Jana hai…ab jyada swaal mat kar… Fir Sonia ne gadi mandir ki taraf mod di…wahan pohunch kar Priya aur Sonia mandir mein gayi aur bhagwan se Raj ki health ke liye pray karne lagi tabhi wahan pujari agaya… Pujari: beta tum dono itni raat mandir mein…sab thik Toh hai na… Priya: pujari ji mere PATI hospital mein jindagi aur maut ke beech lad rahe hain…agar unko 24 ghante mein hosh nahi aya toh unki jaan ko khatra hai… Sonia Priya ki pati wali baat se hairan thi…par kus boli nahi… Pujari: beta main bhagban se binti karunga k wo tere suhag ki raksha kare…tum bhi bhagban se binti karo… Priya ne apni ankhein band ki man hi man bhagban se binti karne lagi… Priya( man mein): bhagban ji maine kabhi bhi apse kus nahi manga…par aj mere Raj ki jaan bakhs dijiye….jab tak use hosh nahi ata main pani tak nahi piungi…agar use kus ho gaya toh main bhi bina kus khaye piye apni jaan de dungi… Priya ne bhagban se binti ki aur Sonia ko sath lekar wahan se chali gayi…aur fir dono gadi mein baith kar ghar ki taraf chal padin…raste mein koi baat nahi huyi…ghar pahunchte hi…Priya ki mom un logon ka intzar kar rahi thi… Geeta: kahan reh gayi thi tum dono… Sonia: kus nahi aunty wo gadi dheere lekar aye hain.. Geeta: chalo thik hai ab jaldi se khana kha kar so jao… Priya: mom mujhe toh nahi khana…ap dono kha lo… Geeta: kion nahi khana a jaldi kha le… Priya: mom apne bhi nahi khaya… Geeta: wo mera man nahi hai… Priya: mom toh mera v man nahi hai… Geeta: beta mera Raj Jo mujhe apni maa manta hai hospital mein pada jindagi aur maut ke beech lad raha hai…main kaise kha lun… Priya: mom mera kya wo kus nahi lagta…mere samne uske upar itni berehami se war kiye gaye main kaise khana kha lun…meri ankhon ke samne bar bar wahi lamha a raha hai…mere kano mein Raj ki wo dardnak cheekh gunj rahi hai… Geeta: beta wo hai hi itna pyara har koi usko pyar karta hai.. Uski fikar karta hai.. Par meri samj mein yeh nahi a raha k wo kon tha jisne uspar hamla karwa diya…chalo yeh toh abhi nahi keh sakte…tum dono aisa karna aram se so jana aur Sonia tum khana kha lena...main Sunidhi ke paas ja rahi hun wo bechari aj boht dukhi hai… Priya: han mom ap jaiye jab hamara aisa haal hai toh unka toh wo jigar ka tukda hai… Sonia: han aunty ap be fikar hokar jaiye yahan main hun Priya ke sath… Fir Geeta wahan se Sunidhi ke ghar chali gayi aur Priya aur Sonia Priya ke room mein...Sonia ne bhi khana nahi khaya..room mein pahunchte hi Sonia ne kafi time se rok rakha swaal puch hi liya Priya se… Sonia: Priya aj tumne mandir mein pandit ji se jhuth kion bola… Priya: Maine konsa jhuth bola… Sonia: tumne kaha k tumhara pati hospital mein hai… Priya: han toh ismein konsa jhuth hai…maine Raj ko apna pati maan liya…ab yeh Priya Agarwal agar kisi ki hogi toh sirf Raj ki…tumhe pata hai aj jab Raj behosh ho gaya toh meri jaan hi nikal gayi thi…mujhe yeh ehsas aj hi huya k main uske bina nahi reh sakti… Sonia: toh hamari bano Raj ko patane ka pura man banaye baithi hai.. Priya: wo tere hone wale jija ji hai…izzat se baat kar… Sonia: oh ho kya baat hai… Priya(serious hokar): yar Raj par kisne attack karwaya hoga…agar wo mujhe mil jaye toh use jaan se mar dungi… Sonia: yaar aj nahi toh kal mil jayega tu fikar kion karti hai… Priya: yaar mera Raj wahan jindagi aur maut ke beech lad raha hai…agar use kus v huya toh main apni jaan de dungi… Priya itna bolte hi rone lagi…Sonia ne use gale se laga liya aur uske balon mein hath firane lagi.. Sonia: Priya tu ro mat bhagban use thik kar denge…akhir abhi toh Raj ne boht kus dekhna hai…abhi toh tera pyar dekhna hai…use kus nahi hoga tu ro mat aur uske liye pray kar… Priya: agar bhagban uski jaan ke badle meri jaan lele toh bhi mujhe dukh nahi… Sonia: yaar aisi batein nahi karte…chal ab tu chup ho ja main tere liye juice lekar ati hun… Priya: nahi mujhe nahi pina jab tak mera Raj thik nahi ho jata main pani tak nahi piungi… Sonia( haste huye Priya ke sir pe mar kar boli): pagal kahin ki…chal Teri marji ab so ja…fir subah hospital mein chalenge… Priya: ok gud night… Sonia bed par lait kar so gayi…par Priya ki ankhon mein neend ka koi ata pata nahi tha…uske liye yeh raat badi lambi hone wali thi…akhir uska pyar uska Raj jindagi aur maut ke beech lad raha tha…uski kaise ankh lag jati…usne toh yeh Raat jag kar hi beetani thi…wo bas Sonia ke bagal mein laiti Raj ki lambi umar ki dua mangti rahi… Toh dosto Raj ke sabhi karibion ke liye yeh samay bada dardnak tha…Priya ki Raj ke liye yeh Dildariyan kya uski jaan bacha payengi ..yah wo jindagi aur maut ke beech ki yeh jang haar jayega…yeh toh waqt hi batayega…apne dost SIDHU ko aise hi pyar dete rahein… To be continued….. |
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