Adultery Naughty Plans Of Golu(servant) For Newly Wedded Tara
#21
waooo what a sexy and good writing. please write a longest story please
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#22
Amazing narration and excellent start bro.  It's indeed developing huge interest how Golu will trap Tara.  Hope to see their sexcapade soon.  Please write long story.
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Chapter 3

The Ethical Crossroads

Golu's pov:

As I lay awake in my room, listening to the passionate lovemaking of Rohan bhaiya and Tara bhabhi, I couldn't help but feel a pang of jealousy. I was struggling with my desires for Tara bhabhi and questioning my loyalty to the Gupta family. My heart raced and my palms sweated as I tried to quell the intense longing I felt for her.

My voyeuristic inspection remained that way until I was offered an opportunity to take it to the next level one fine morning.

Tara bhabhi would usually wake up and prepare coffee and breakfast for Rohan bhaiya before he left for work, but that morning was different. I presumed Tara bhabhi was unwell after Rohan bhaiya asked me to get things ready for him.

I was to serve breakfast to him in the living room while he ate hurriedly. When I brought the tray filled with freshly prepared scrambled eggs and toast to him, he seemed unusually worried.

"Tara isn't feeling well, is she?" I asked, trying to understand the situation. It was strange to see Rohan bhaiya act concerned about something.

He looked up at me, slightly surprised. "No it's not like that..Listen Golu, bhabhi didn't sleep much last night. So, I think she'll get up late. Please don't disturb her until then," he said, before proceeding to leave for work. But just as he stepped out, he turned towards me again.
"Umm, Golu, your bhabhi is, umm, not wearing proper clothes, so don't open the door until she's out, okay?" he said to me, with a concerned look.

It took me a couple of seconds to process Rohan bhaiya's words, but once I realised what they meant, I tried my best to maintain a deadpan appearance even though crackers went off in my head. Did he just say Tara bhabhi, my voluptuous Tara bhabhi was asleep without wearing adequate clothes on her body? "Sure bhaiyya, I won't go inside the bedroom while Tara bhabhi is asleep," I said, filling Tara bhabhi's place. "That's good. Again, I'm reminding you, don't go into the bedroom," Rohan bhaiya said, before he finally left. "Sure bhaiya. Bye, drive safely," I said, before closing the door.

I stood there motionless and dumbfounded, replaying Rohan bhaiya's words. Obviously, he was desperate to make sure I didn't enter the bedroom to see his wife in a state of inadequacy. But, his deterrence only instigated my mind to do exactly that. His words "your bhabhi is not wearing proper clothes" reverberated in my mind continuously as I tried to fight the demons in my head impelling me to open the door, to go against Rohan bhaiya's pleadings, to discover how improperly my Tara bhabhi was dressed. As I tiptoed towards the bedroom, numerous thoughts passed through my head. What did Rohan bhaiya exactly mean by "not wearing proper clothes"? Well, obviously, Tara bhabhi must've been sleeping without much clothes on, right? Why else would Rohan bhaiya be worried about me peeping in? But then, is it because she was fucked more than usual last night? I wasn't sure if I'd heard more moans from Tara bhabhi than usual, but then again, I was probably becoming immune to them. My heart started beating louder than ever as I neared the bedroom. The door was closed but it wasn't locked as I tried to evaluate the weight of that realisation. Tara bhabhi was, in all probability, still asleep, and all that stood between her and me was a door that I could open right now if I so wished.

My mind was a complex mix of emotions as I grieved with guilt at what my inner self was forcing me to do, but all the same, hardly able to control my manly instincts. She was my bhabhi, wife of Rohan bhaiya and daughter-in-law of Roshni memsaab, a woman who treated me like her own son and here I was moments away from breaking their trust.

Fortunately or unfortunately, just then, I heard a familiar sound. Agitated with the sudden intervention, I involuntarily took a step back before I realised the source of the noise. It was my phone ringing in the kitchen. I ran to pick up the call, lest Tara bhabhi wake up. My heart fell to see who it was.

"Hello, hi Roshni memsaab," I said.

"Hello Golu, how are you doing?" Roshni memsaab said.

"I'm doing fine, memsaab. How are you, how is saab?" I asked, with a pang of guilt even though I'd done nothing.

"We're good, Golu. We miss all of you, so much," she said, in an endearing tone that totally melted my heart.

I was genuinely fond of Roshni memsaab and held great respect for her for all of what she did for me. All of a sudden, my desire to open the door and catch the sight of Tara bhabhi's inadequate attire brought immense shame in me. How could I even wonder doing such an immoral thing to the daughter-in-law of Roshni memsaab, a woman that looked after me just like her own kids.

I was overcome with guilt and regret.

"I miss you too Roshni memsaab. I feel like coming back, but I want to be of help to Rohan bhaiya and Tara bhabhi here, just like you wished," I said, with a heavy heart. "I know, Golu. I wish you were here with me. But, you should be there with your bhaiya and bhabhi. They need your help," she said. Roshni memsaab and I conversed for some more time. It had been a while since I last spoke to her and I certainly missed the old lady. Like I said, I was immensely fond of her and never was I away from her for so long. My inner demons were still at it, but after speaking to Roshni memsaab, there was no way I was going to betray her. 

Just then, I noticed that Tara bhabhi's bedroom door had creaked open slightly. Anxiety swept over me, fearing that she might have awakened and walked out onto the balcony to answer her phone. If she did, I would be caught red-handed, spying on her without clothing. I quickly rushed to the door and pushed it shut firmly, only to find out that it was unlocked. Panic-stricken, I scanned the room frantically, searching for signs of Tara bhabhi's presence.

To my relief, she was nowhere to be seen. Gathering my composure, I thanked the heavens for their timely intervention. I hadn't realized the gravity of my actions until this moment. The thought of intruding upon Tara bhabhi's privacy sent shivers down my spine.

After that I closed the door of room and said goodbye to roshni memsaab on phone 

Suddenly, I noticed a soft creaking sound coming from within the bedroom. Then Tara bhabhi finally walked out of it, dressed in a conservative pair of casuals, just like every other day.

Still My heart pounded heavily like a hammer striking an anvil. Was Tara bhabhi awake? Had she heard me speaking to Roshni memsaab? Were my attempts to conceal my sinister intentions futile? Were my fears baseless? Or worse, had Tara bhabhi witnessed my censure? 

My mind was constantly agitated for the rest of the day. While I was glad I'd managed to refrain myself from committing what I considered a mini-crime, the sick part of my brain fuelled with adrenaline taunted me that I'd missed what was an incredible opportunity at getting to witness the dream woman of my life in an attire that necessitated a word of warning from her husband.

The rest of the day went about like usual. Tara bhabhi would stick to the couch watching TV or talking to her friends on her phone in between her chores while I prepared lunch and did other household work. We spoke sometimes, usually when she wanted me to get her a juice or a cup of coffee. But that was pretty much it. Of course, she wasn't arrogant by any means, but I figured we didn't have much to talk about, so that was that.
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#24
Superb update
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#25
Very nice writing
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#26
Lovely going
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#27
Can golu bed Tara. Waiting for more.
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#28
the stroy is good but was left incomplete in some other forum. you are yet to reach at that stage here. Hope you are the original author and will complete this time..
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#29
(24-12-2023, 11:36 PM)longindian_axe Wrote: the stroy is good but was left incomplete in some other forum. you are yet to reach at that stage here. Hope you are the original author and will complete this time..


Yes, right.
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#30
Hi, can you please share link for that story here…
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(25-12-2023, 09:30 AM)befriend007 Wrote: Hi, can you please share link for that story here…

Yes, so we can read upto that point. Here writer is taking longer time to post it
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(25-12-2023, 10:14 AM)y2klak Wrote: Yes, so we can read upto that point. Here writer is taking longer time to post it

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Remove the *** and enjoy
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#33
Good update
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#34
Dear Author, I randomly just went through this story of yours.
I can see the story is still building up and is in its initial important stage where it either becomes a piece of art or total bullshit. I have a few suggestions if you're keen to accept.

1. Most stories here on Xossipy have that same centuries old plot, making it very pathetic and boring.
>Husband will be shown loving but quite weak in sex who climaxes too early in bed but his wife will have a very high sex libido thus, him keeping her physically unsatisfied all the time. [Thankfully you haven't shown Rohan like that which I just loved].
> Then, slowly the wife will demand more sex, which her husband obviously won't be able to provide and eventually she would  start looking for other men and would soon get seduced easily by other guys around her and hence slowly turn into a whore character who doesn't even care of her husband anymore. Worse, wife & lover sometimes even start humiliating the husband. End of the story. Right ?
Honestly, this plot is so common and so pathetic. Please don't follow the same thing in your story as well.

Your plot is honestly looking promising till now.
but please don't add such boring plot where wife at home starts getting bored because her husband is busy in work all the time or goes out of station because of work thus making wife suffer alone at home who in turns gets bored and things start happening with servant out of boredom, curiosity and loneliness blaming her husband. Sounds Pathetic right?

2. Always remember you are writing a sex story and not writing some porn script where things happen illogically at very fast pace. Always make your plots & circumstances sound realistic. Making Tara fuck at each and every point should not be the objective.

3. Its always fun and exciting when wife and husband are madly in love and are happy with each other in every aspect of life including sex. Real excitement unfolds when, even if at this 'all good stage', things change & wife still gets slowly seduced somehow. Let's see how you do it [Will Rohan turn Cockold at some point in story? keeping my fingers crossed]

Seducing a Loyal, tuff and a strong character woman is an art in itself and far far more exciting than the woman who is already ready and desperate for attention of other men.
> Here although, we don't much know about personality of Tara but she looks like a perfect wife modern wife till now. Fingers cross how her personality turns out to be.

4. Work on the character of TARA. we're still unclear about her personality, her body type. May be slowly it would unfold.
Please don't ever turn TARA into some characterless cock hungry betraying slut woman who gets easily seduced by servant. Use logics in your story plot which are hard to question. Make the situations look realistic when you'll put the couple into [Thank god you did not make Golu enter the room making him watch Tara Naked or without clothes].
Circumstances  should always look realistic. Avoid illogical sex scripts.

If TARA is displayed as a loyal, strong character and a loving wife then it would be always hard for Golu/People to get into her pants which is the real fun. This would create more interest in the story. Make her hard to get.
Even if she gets fucked by someone in some unavoidable situation, don't change her character in to some cheap whore which would make her easier to bed again. Maintain her dignity at all costs so that its always difficult to get her.
Don't ever snatch away the love and respect between a couple because that makes the woman vulnerable and easy to get.
{Don't be like -> Husband tries to convince wife to get fucked by someone. Wife in starting says no and then says yes for husband's happiness and then she starts enjoying and eventually becomes town whore.} It would be such a cliché.

3. Never be in a hurry to make TARA fuck by anyone. Always remember, the day Tara gets fucked, it would steal away some excitement for sure because that will make readers assume that, now Tara has become easy target to get. So take your time and build your story. Think it through and turn into a beautiful story. Small incidents should keep happening keeping us readers on edge which would slowly move towards its goal.
Otherwise it would be just like watching a porn which is useless.

4. Finally, I feel you should stop asking for advices from the readers for next part. It's your story and you are genuinely doing good, so go ahead with you thoughts. If you start following each and everyone here, you will ruin the story. Just go with the slow place. Don't be in a hurry to give steamy sex till its actually needed.
Always Remember, its an erotic story and not some cheap porn.

Also, the most important which often authors forget, please keep updating on time otherwise readers start losing interest and always try to come up to your promises of updates to maintain the trust.


I hope that helps. Your story is going really great.

Thanks
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#35
Good start but I think you should make Golu Rohan And Tara's Sex vitness and describe their encounter through Golu. I think people would love to read Rohan And Tara's sex encounter before Tara Gets Seduced by Golu
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#36
And if you want to read my story please click the link given in my signature
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#37
Please give a big update
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#38
Excellent one after long time keep it up
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