Adultery Maids Conspiracy

[Kgngff]

@nostalgic , take the story as & how u wish , muje sirf ye kehna tha Ek lowlife sud devour pieces like aditi divya etc etc, baki tumhara plot me interfere krne ka koi irada nehi hy. approach bilkul sahi hy tmhara. Lewd remarks , obscene harkat in a village is a must. They arnt cheap sluts fr sure , but sirf romantic passionate sex me limit kr dena absurd hoga, that sophisticacy is just hubby xclusive.Kuch readers ye samaj nehi pate

[Kgngff]

Bro Don't post shit and make The writer upset..
Why would she Love Anna he just has a big dick nothing more...
She already loves her husband..
And You didn't understood the essence Anna is already a dummy because Aditi already had Fantasized different men ( the mall guys and Bhiva too) ..So pls trust the writer this is not A love story...He already has planned many layers and Is giving us Hints that Anna will be Dummy..

Exactly. sala Anna bhiva me v romeo dhund rhe he kuch log

[Vijay41]

Bro Don't post shit and make The writer upset..
Why would she Love Anna he just has a big dick nothing more...
She already loves her husband..
And You didn't understood the essence Anna is already a dummy because Aditi already had Fantasized different men ( the mall guys and Bhiva too) ..So pls trust the writer this is not A love story...He already has planned many layers and Is giving us Hints hat Anna will be Dummy..

friend Posting my comment I don't want to participate in the writer's imagination.Sorry if wrong

[Nostalgic]

People who wants story to be back in apartment, they just want Anna to fuck Aditi, ok let's say it happened once, twice.. Thrice, Then what? it's end of story. You will find N number of stories on site like that. 
In sex scenes, I don't think much variations are possible but in seduction process there are lot of possibilities are there and that journey of getting seduced is always pleasant. 
I was trying to make emotional attachment between Anna and Aditi by introducing a villan or competitor for Anna, who is way too superior in some areas but Anna is experienced and big player. 
          Aditi was talking to Bhiva just to tease Anna, and she was pissed off because Anna fucked Rachna in front of her, She was jealous, and angry so she wanted to disturb Anna. Aditi is also human she also has desires and feelings but not in a single line I portrayed Aditi as a cheap woman and same time I did not degraded Annas personality. He is like an alpha man from start of the story. 
            If you come with predefined mindset , your mind won't accept anything else , You want story to go ahead with what is in your mind. If you point out some illogical things that is ok, sometimes I can answer and sometimes I just need it to make bridge for next scene. But if you want whole story to be turned then it's difficult and I would definitely loose grip that I already started loosing. 

I thought of ignoring comments, but some of regular readers I can't ignore. I saw more of negative comments and then I had deleted one encounter describing Bhivas fucking highcollege English teacher. 
   If you read the planning of tour or start of the tour, I described Meenal in different way, I wanted to add one encounter of that newly wed lady. But I see now more people want it just Aditi to get fucked as early as possible… 

[Lalla!]

People who wants story to be back in apartment, they just want Anna to fuck Aditi, ok let's say it happened once, twice.. Thrice, Then what? it's end of story. You will find N number of stories on site like that. 
In sex scenes, I don't think much variations are possible but in seduction process there are lot of possibilities are there and that journey of getting seduced is always pleasant. 
I was trying to make emotional attachment between Anna and Aditi by introducing a villan or competitor for Anna, who is way too superior in some areas but Anna is experienced and big player. 
          Aditi was talking to Bhiva just to tease Anna, and she was pissed off because Anna fucked Rachna in front of her, She was jealous, and angry so she wanted to disturb Anna. Aditi is also human she also has desires and feelings but not in a single line I portrayed Aditi as a cheap woman and same time I did not degraded Annas personality. He is like an alpha man from start of the story. 
            If you come with predefined mindset , your mind won't accept anything else , You want story to go ahead with what is in your mind. If you point out some illogical things that is ok, sometimes I can answer and sometimes I just need it to make bridge for next scene. But if you want whole story to be turned then it's difficult and I would definitely loose grip that I already started loosing. 

I thought of ignoring comments, but some of regular readers I can't ignore. I saw more of negative comments and then I had deleted one encounter describing Bhivas fucking highcollege English teacher. 
   If you read the planning of tour or start of the tour, I described Meenal in different way, I wanted to add one encounter of that newly wed lady. But I see now more people want it just Aditi to get fucked as early as possible… 

Your thinking is right bro you are on right track add more encounters other than aditi as always you are the master of suspense and this story will be one of the best erotic story at this time your idea of seduction is out of imagination if you loose grip due to my predefined mindset i am sorry for that you were on right track bro plz ignore my immature comment. I have full faith on you . You are the best writer of this time.

[The Thinker]

People who wants story to be back in apartment, they just want Anna to fuck Aditi, ok let's say it happened once, twice.. Thrice, Then what? it's end of story. You will find N number of stories on site like that. 
In sex scenes, I don't think much variations are possible but in seduction process there are lot of possibilities are there and that journey of getting seduced is always pleasant. 
I was trying to make emotional attachment between Anna and Aditi by introducing a villan or competitor for Anna, who is way too superior in some areas but Anna is experienced and big player. 
          Aditi was talking to Bhiva just to tease Anna, and she was pissed off because Anna fucked Rachna in front of her, She was jealous, and angry so she wanted to disturb Anna. Aditi is also human she also has desires and feelings but not in a single line I portrayed Aditi as a cheap woman and same time I did not degraded Annas personality. He is like an alpha man from start of the story. 
            If you come with predefined mindset , your mind won't accept anything else , You want story to go ahead with what is in your mind. If you point out some illogical things that is ok, sometimes I can answer and sometimes I just need it to make bridge for next scene. But if you want whole story to be turned then it's difficult and I would definitely loose grip that I already started loosing. 

I thought of ignoring comments, but some of regular readers I can't ignore. I saw more of negative comments and then I had deleted one encounter describing Bhivas fucking highcollege English teacher. 
   If you read the planning of tour or start of the tour, I described Meenal in different way, I wanted to add one encounter of that newly wed lady. But I see now more people want it just Aditi to get fucked as early as possible… 

Bro You Ignore them.. just keep focusing on your Vison.. This Story is like Ladder and The Bhiva Angle is great .. brings the much needed tension that who will get Aditi..

I have been following this from beginning this is the best story on Xossip..
You please focus on Your vision and Ignore the Distractions..

Waiting for the terrace encounter Between Bhuva and Aditi..

[Madhukaju]

Stay true to your craft. 

I usually don’t comment but people looking for instant gratification can find enough on this site and elsewhere. True erotica is an art and you have got it so please don’t sway with mass.

It was evident that aditi got her boobs sucked and that is a much better high then bam bam sex. People like you, Aurelius, krish are master storyteller and would love to let you imagine take us in absolutely new directions.

Though if possible post a quick update do we can enjoy what aditi just experienced.

[Rizzi1198]

Nostalgic bro write on your own style you are writing a stunning story till now dont bother this type comments plz

[Vijay41]

No bro...Let Anna have sex with Adithee even at the end of this story... Adithee's character is very nice don't spoil it....There are many other characters like Divya, Nalini, Sudha, Meena and many more characters but don't worry if you bring them...Let Atithi be a little (special)...it is in. your imagination as a writer...Please....


Specifically. (I apologize to you (the writer) if I posted my comments in any wrong way)…

I really want this story to be very good...friend Adithi, let Anna have sex very, very well.

[Vijay41]

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[Lundwala]

GUYS LET THE WRITER DECIDE WHAT TO DO WITH HIS/HER STORY.. WE ARE HERE TO ENJOY THE CREATION SO PLEASE DO THAT ONLY...IF ANYONE HAS COMPLAIN THEN PLEASE START YOUR OWN STORY AS YOU WANT

[abcturbine]

Nostalgic is a profilic writer....
He knows better than all of us here how the story should proceed...
We are here to enjoy his writing skills not our predefined scenarios...
Readers are welcome to suggest specific situations or other contributions that could help writer in making the story better......
Let him write the way he writes....

[abcturbine]

You are true GEM...
eagerly waiting for continuation...

[M¡Lf€@TeR]

Anna in natural BANGER mode...


Audacious bhiva, the prodigious fukr

[xboard1986]

Bhima is waiting for gangbang

[xossissippi]

My dear author Nostalgic, sorry that I couldn't write sooner.

I logged in just to write this, be very true and honest to your story. We are all but admirers, you show us the story.

Don't take any of our opinions or suggestions very seriously. There are some negative comments i agree but think of it this way, they are so immersed in the world you created that there mind is not able accept some things that don't go as per their imagination. You should be proud that they are fully immersed in the world you created and all that beautiful unexpected things you're going to unfold in the future. They are reacting this way only because they care deeply for the story and nothing is personal.

Just remember that there are lot more sincere readers than the negative commenters who may not comment or express their opinions, but are truly invested in this world and wants to see this story succeed.

We are there with you Author! Don't leave or cut any section, Screw people's opinion write your hearts out! Let us know your imagination! WE ARE ALWAYS THERE WITH YOU!

[M¡Lf€@TeR]

Engrossed in kitty party gossip ----

[Amit2021msm]

Please write as you already thought to! Don’t change please !