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Bro, you are good writer. Readers are not able to log in to this site due to some technical Issues. It was really frustrating for us to log in again and again. And in addition to that, we faced such a disheartening comment. Hope you understand the situation. You'll see the change once the issue gets resolved. Think positive brother. One day you'll see the heartwarming response you want.
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Bas m itna kahunga film chahe flop ho y hit log film banana nhi chodte kuki yeh ek kala h.aap bhi kalakar ho .apna karm kijiye.i m ur biggest fan .i like ur story from heart
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Ajay Bhai lagta h ye site bhi band hone wali h to doosri site pe jiska nam h www.//// ,aap waha pe ye story continue karna please
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Congrats bro for 1 lakh + views...
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Ajay Bhai Kam response Milne ka karan ye to ek new site h oopar se garmi itni jyada h ki mobile nikalne ka man hi nhi karta h aur Mai is time bahut busy hoo.kheto ka Kam joro par h to subah sham Kam karke jab lautta hooto Khana kha pi k turant so jata hoo.so please aap Meri majboori samajh sakte h please
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bus fikar thi to apne ander uth rahe us pyaas ki.....jo usey ander hi ander jalaye jaa rahi thi........aur raghu us aag ko pal pal bhadkaye jaa raha tha........dekhna tha ki wo aab raghu ke is sawal ka kya jawab deti hain............kya wo aaj ussey apni panty khud utarwayegi.....ya fir aaj raghu ko saaf saaf inkaar kar degi......magar dekhney se to kahin aisa nahin lagta tha ki kavya aaj inkaar ke mood mein hain........dekhna tha ki aagey waqt kaun sa sitam lekar aane wala tha.......................................................
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Kavya aaj yakeenan inkaar ke mood mein bilkul bhi nahin lag rahi thi.......wo poori tarah se madhosh ho chuki thi........uski bahon mein..........raghu ne aaj uski sochney samjhaney ki shakti jaise cheen li thi............kya sahi......kya galat ........wo kuch nahin soch paa rahi thi.........bus hosh tha usey to apne ander uth rahe us pyaas ki.........us aag ki..........jo kisi sholey ki tarah uske badan mein aab dahek rahi thi.........aur wo aab kisi bhi keemat par us pyaas ko kaise bhi shant karna chahti thi........magar ye raghu us pyaas ko bujhaney ke bajaye aur bhi bhadka raha tha...........shayad aab wo raghu ke mutthi mein aa chuki thi.......ye silsila na jane kab aur kahan jakar thamta agar is beech kavya ka mobile nahin baj uthatha.........
mobile ke achanak baj uthney se wo jaise gehri neend se jagti hain aur haule se apni dono aankhein khol leti hain..........is waqt kavya ki dono aankhein surkh laal ho chuki thi..........aur aisa lag raha tha jaise wo nashe ki halat mein ho.......ek ajeeb sa khumaar uski aankhon mein jhalak raha tha..........aur jab usey apne vastivikta ka hosh aata hain wo fauran raghu se door ho jati hain aur lumbi lumbi sansein lene lagti hain......jo dil itne der se zoron se dhadak raha tha.......wo aab aur bhi tezi se dhadakney laga tha.............chehrey par sharmindagi aur haya dono ke mile jule bhaav saaf nazar aa rahe they........wo baar baar raghu se apni nazrein chura rahi thi.....aisa lag raha tha jaise usney aaj koi bahut bada gunaah kar diya ho...........
mobile ki poori ring bajney ke baad kavya jaise hi aagey badhti hain tabhi dubara se uska mobile fir se baj uthatha hain........aur jab kavya us mobile ko apne haathon mein uthathi hain aur jab uski nazar mobile ke screen par padti hain.........ek ajeeb si bechani .......ek ajeeb sa durr uske chehrey par jhalak uthatha hain.......dil mein ek ajeeb sa durr aur bure bure se khyaal aab aane lage they ......haath mein jaise itni taqat nahin bachi thi ki wo us phone ko recieve kar sake.........wahin kuch door par khada raghu tirchi nazreion se kavya ke taraf dekhey jaa raha tha.......durr se wo bhi kavya ke samney kuch nahin bol paa raha tha.........aaj na jane itna sab kuch kaise ho gaya........usey khud par yakeen nahin ho raha tha.......
phone rahul ka tha.......halanki wo kabhi is time par phone nahin kiya karta tha......magar aaj achanak is tarah se........ye kavya ko hairan karney ke liye bus kafi tha.......aabhi bhi wo taktaki lagaye bus mobile screen ki taraf dekhey jaa rahi thi.......aakhir thodi himmat karke wo phone recieve karti hai aur udher se rahul fauran bol padta hain.......
" kya kar rahi thi jaan.........phone uthaney mein kya itna waqt lagta hain!!!!!!! " aur rahul jaise shikayat ke lehzey mein dheere se bol padta hain.....wahin kavya ka dil aur bhi zoron se dhadak utha tha...........wo kuch pal tak aise hi khamosh rehti hain aur apne bekabu dhadkanon ko sambhalney ki koshish karti hain........magar shayad aaj kuch bhi uske bus mein nahin tha.........na hi sansein.......aur na dil ki dhadkan..........aakhir wo thodi himmat karke haule se bol padti hain......
" wwwoooo....raaahhhhuulllll.........maiininnnnn......naaaahaaa raaaahiiiii thhhhiiiiiiiiiii...." aur kavya ki jubaan jaise ladkhada si jati hain wahin rahul achanak se bol padta hain.....
" kya hua jaan.......are you alright...............tum theek to ho..........ye tumhari awaaz ko kya hua......." aur rahul ke us sawal se jaise kavya ka kaleja aur bhi zoron se dhadak uthatha hain.........wahin kavya ke chehrey par durr ki lakheerein aur bhi gehri hoti chali jati hain.........usey kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha tha ki wo rahul ko kya jawab de........ussey kya kahe.....kya na kahe.......
" wooo......main duadti hoon aayi thi naa.......is wajah se ......haanf rahi hoon......" aur kavya jaise taise apni baat sambhalti hain wahin rahul uski baateion ko sunkar hans padta hain.......
" tum naaa........aacha maine tumhare paas ye batane ke liye phone kiya tha ki mera promotion ho gaya hain.......aab main supervisor se senior supervisor ban gaya hoon.........aur meri salary bhi badh gayi hain........." aur rahul jaise khushi se chahak uthatha hain wahin kavya haule se muskura padti hain aab wo kafi hudd tak normal ho chuki thi magar dil tha ki aabhi bhi zoron se dhadak raha tha.........
" ye to bahut khushi ki baat hain rahul........" aur kavya jaise apne baat ko yahin par khatam karti hain.......wo is waqt rahul se baat nahin karna chahti thi......do chaar baatein hone ke baad rahul bhi phone rakh deta hain aur udher kavya jaise hi phone rakhti hain ek baar fir se wo lumbi lumbi sansein lene lagti hain...........fir jaise hi uski nazar samney khade raghu par jati hain ek baar fir se uski nazrein sharam se neechay ki taraf jhuk jati hain.........wo raghu ka aab samna nahin karna chahti thi.........wo ussey bina kuch kahe seedha bathroom mein chali jati hain aur apne bathroom ka darwza aachey se lock karti hain.........aur lumbi lumbi sansein lene lagti hain.......
fir wo fauran shower on karti hain aur jakar shower ke samney usi haal mein khadi ho jati hain......aab shower ka pani kavya ke sir par gir raha tha jissey uska badan dheere dheere bheegta jaa raha tha..........usey bilkul bhi samajh mein nahin aa raha tha ki wo jo kuch kar rahi hain kya wo sahi hain..............ya fir galat........aise kaise wo aaj behak sakti hain.......kyon uska raghu ke samney zara bhi bus nahin chalta.....aakhir kyon wo usey inkaar nahin kar pati.........aisi kya khasiyaat hain usmein ki wo jab bhi usey apne kareeb pati hain madhosh si ho jati hain.........aakhir uska uske samney bus kyon nahin chalta........aakhir kyon???? shayad is kyon ka jawab kavya ko bhi nahin maloom tha..........shower ka pani pal pal uske badan ko bhigo raha tha........
saari bhi uske jism se jaise bheeghkar chipak si gayi thi..........wo fauran apni dono aankhein band karti hain aur apna ek haath haule se apne kandhey ki taraf le jati hain..........aur haule se kandhey par laga safety pin nikal deti hain........jissey uski saari ka pallu farsh par gir padta hain.......aab kavya samney blouse mein bilkul khamosh khadi thi aur lumbi lumbi sansein le rahi thi.....udher shower ka pani aab uske sir par aur uske chaati par gir raha tha...........aankhein aabhi bhi band thi .......wo fauran apna ek haath neechay apne pet ki taraf le jati hain aur apne saari par laga ek aur safety pin dheere se khol deti hain.......aur agle hi pal wo apni saari ko apne jism se alag kar deti hain.........aab wo is waqt blouse aur peticoat mein khadi thi.....
guzarte waqt ke saath saath kavya ke badan se kapdey bhi dheere dheere utartey jaa rahe they..........wahin wo ek baar fir se madhosh hoti jaa rahi thi.........sabse pehle unsey apna blouse utra.........fir bra...........aur saari ka saaya utarney ke baad last mein apni panty bhi...........aab kavya sir se lekar pawn tak poori nangi thi...........uske jism par jitne bhi samosey aur raghu ke haathon ke kale dhaabey aur daag lage they sab us pani mein dhultey jaa rahe they........wahin kavya aabhi bhi lumbi lumbi sansein le rahi thi.............jaise jaise wo shower ka pani uske jism ko bhigota jaa raha tha waise waise kavya ke badan mein uthney wali aag bhi badhti jaa rahi thi............wo aag aab bhala pani se kahan bujhney wali thi........
kavya haule se apni dono haath apne chuchiyon par le jati haun aur bahut aahista se apne gulabi danon ko aahista se sehlaney lagti hain.......apne ungliyon ke beech dabakar wo kaskar apni dono nipples ko masal deti hain......wahin uski ek aaaaaaahhhhh..foot padti hain........madhosh se ek baar fir se uski aankhein dubara se band ho jati hain...........aahista aahista se uske dono haath apne nangey badan par sarak rahe they.......wo haule se apni right hand ko sarkatey hue neechay ki taraf le jane lagti hain..............apne choot ki taraf........
fir wo haule se apni dono tangein aur faila deti hain..........aabhi bhi uska ek haath apne nipples par tha jisey wo apne ungliyon ke beech dabayey hue haule haule se masal rahi thi.......dil ki dhadkanein aur sanson ki raftaar ek baar fir se badh chuki thi..........wo haule se apni middle finger apne choot ke lab par ferti rehti hain aur kuch der tak apne ungliyon se apne clit ko sehlatey rehti hain........unhein chedti rehti hain..........fir aahista se apne haathon par hulka sa dabav banati hain aur agle hi pal uski middle finger aasani se uski choot mein sama jata hain jissey kavya ke mooh se ek hulki si siskari....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh.......................foot padti hain.....lajaat se uski aankhein dubara band ho jati hain..........
ek baar kavya fir maze ki duniya mein thi........fir se usey koi hosh na tha........guzarte waqt ke saath saath wo apne haathon ki raftaar ko bhi dheere dheere badhati jaa rahi thi.......upar se shower ka thanda pani uske badan mein uth rahi us aag ko aur bhi hawa deta jaa raha tha.........jab ek ungli se usey maza nahin aata to wo apni dusari ungli bhi saath saath apni choot ke ander bahar karney lagti hain...........aur ye silsila zyada der tak nahin chalta aur kavya ki sansein ek baar fir se poori tarah bekabu hone lagti hain............uski choot se behta rus dheere dheere shower ke pani mein ghulta jaa raha tha..........
haathon ki raftaar aur tezz ho chali thi..........wahin kavya kabhi apne right nipples ko apne unglion ke beech dabakar masal rahi thi.....to kabhi left nipples ko..........wahin uski choot bhi lagataar pani chodhti jaa rahi thi......sansein poori tarah se bekabu ho chuke they......aur jism ki aag aab dheere dheere apne charam par pahunchney lagi thi.............agle hi pal kavya ka jism akadney lagta hain aur haathon ki raftaar aur tezz ho jati hain...........wo wahin sisaktey hue jharney lagti hain aur uske haath tab tak nahin ruktey jab tak uske ander ki aag poori tarah se shant nahin ho jati.............kavya wahin lumbi lumbi sansein lete hue farsh par nangi halat mein baithi hui thi..........uspar shower ka pani aabhi bhi gir raha tha..........magar jo toofan uske jism mein aabhi kuch der pehle tha aab wo shant ho chuka tha........
kavya ki aankhein aabhi bhi band thi aur wo usi haal mein baithi hui apni sanson ko durust kar rahi thi...........dil ki dhadkanein bhi aab dheere dheere kum honi shuru ho chuki thi............kareeb 10 minute tak kavya waise hi farsh par chup chaap se baithi rehti hain fir jaise usey hosh aata hain wo haule se apni dono aankhein kholti hain aur shower band karti hain..........towel se apna badan poochey ke baad wo ek ek kar apne kapdey pehaney lagti hain.........aur fir taiyaar hokar seedha bedroom mein chali jati hain........aur aaiyney mein khud ko bade dhyaan se ek tuk dekhney lagti hain..........kuch sochkar usske chehrey par ek pyari si muskaan tair jati hain.........
raghu apna kaam khatam karke jaa chuka tha........aur jab kavya ki nazar samney ghadi ki taraf jati hain uske mano hosh udd jate hain.......is waqt ghadi mein 12.30 baj rahe they..........yani wo pichley ek ghantey se bathroom mein thi...........aur ek ghantey se zyada raghu ke saath..........usey na jane aab kya hota jaa raha tha.......kyon uske swabhaav mein aab badlaav aa gaya tha .........aisa lag raha tha jaise wo aab dheere dheere badalti jaa rahi hain............dekhna tha waqt kavya ko aur kitna badalney wala tha.....
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shaam ka samay tha aur kavya apne kamrey mein soyi hui thi............udher ram college se aane ke baad humesha ki tarah raghu aur jeetu se milne unke kamrey ki taraf chal padta hain.........aaj bhi wo dono ram ko apne paas aaya hua dekhkar dheere se muskura padte hain......wahin raghu jeetu se aaj ke hue haadse ke bare mein ussey kuch nahin bataya tha........wo chahta tha jab kavya poori tarah se uski mutthi mein aa jayegi tab wo ussey kuch kahega.......
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" kya baat hain chote malik..........aaj bhi aapke chehrey par wahin udaasi........" aur jeetu ram ki taraf dekhtey hue haule se bol padta hain wahin ram ek baar fir se bura sa mooh bana leta hain.........
" aap fikar kahe ko karte hain malik..........mere hote hue aapko fikar karney ki kauno (koi ) zaroorat nahin...........dekhtey jaiye main kaise aapki tabiyaat ko rangeen kar deta hoon......" aur jeetu apne kale peelay kale daant dikhata hua haule se hans padta hain wahin raghu bade gaur se kabhi ram ke taraf dekhey jaa raha tha.............to kabhi jeetu ke taraf.......
" kya karega bol tu............malkin ne humare malik ko laat maar di hain aur tujhe mazak sujh raha hain.........kum se kum tu kuch kar nahin sakta to bolo mutt kar......." aur raghu jaise jeetu par baras padta hain........wahin jeetu bhi jaise taav mein aa jata hain.......
" main.........bolta nahin hoon.............karta hoon.......aur bata kya karna hain mujhe......agar nahin kar saka to mera naam bhi jeetu nahin......." aur jeetu jaise apne baat par zor dete hue bol padta hain wahin raghu uski baateion ko sunkar dheere se muskura padta hain.........
" to fir theek hain.........chote malik....... zara apna phone dijiyega mujhe.........." aur raghu ram ke taraf ek tuk dekhney lagta hain wahin ram apne jeb se phone nikalta hain aur dheere se raghu ke haathon mein thama deta hain........wahin raghu ke chehrey par fir se ek gandi hansi jhalak padti hain........usney soch kar to bahut kuch rakha tha magar aab dheere dheere wo apne plan ko ajnaan de raha tha.......
" to ek kaam kar..........is phone ko apne saath leta jaa.......aur thode door par samney ek mobile ki dukaan hain.....jaa aur ismein wo wali picturein bharwa laa..........maloom hain na main tujhe kaun si wali picturein bol raha hoon........full chudai wali........jismein kahani nahin hoti balki shuru se lekar aanth tak bus chudai chalti rehti hain ...........wo wali........aur aaj apne chote malik bhi dekh lengey.........bada maza aayega......aur haan tu jaldi se aa jana...........aaj main chote malik ko ek aur live chudai dikhaney wala hoon......jisey dekhkar hum sab ko bada maza aane wala hain........" aur raghu ke chehrey par fir se wahi gandi hansi nazar aane lagti hain jiski wajah na ram samajh pata hain...................na hi jeetu........
jeetu fauran us mobile ko raghu se le leta hain aur kuch paise lekar wo fauran bahar shop ki taraf nikal padta hain.......aaj na jane kitne arsey ho gaye they usey aisi filmein dekhey hue..........ye soch sochkar uska lund mein khoon ka sanchaar badhta jaa raha tha........wahin uska lund bhi dheere dheere sakht hota sa nazar aa raha tha.......kadam khud ba khud tezz ho chale they.......karreeb 1/2 ghantey baad jeetu blue film bharwakar us mobile mein lata hain..........aab uski chalney ki raftaar aur bhi tezz ho chuki thi......wahin wo jaldi se jaldi us film ko dekhna chahta tha.......magar dikkat ye bhi thi ki usney aaj tak android phone kabhi chalaya nahin tha.........agar wo iske bare mein kuch janta to wo aasani se us video ko play karke dekh sakta tha..........munn marte hue wo fauran apne kamrey ki taraf chal padta hain......wahin ram aur raghu uske aane ka badi hi besabri se intezar kar rahe they.......
jeetu ko dekhkar raghu ke chehrey par hansi aa jati hain wahin ram ke chehrey par ghabrahat jaise badh jati hain........ghabrahat is liye kyon ki usney aisi picturein aaj tak na kabhi dekhi thi.........magar haan suni zaroor thi......wo bhi apne doston ke mooh se.......aur aaj raghu aur jeetu dono usey aisi movie dikhhaney wale they to uski ghabrahat to badhegi hi...........
" ye lijiye chote malik.........." aur jeetu haule se apne haath mein thama phone ram ke taraf badha deta hain wahin ram ki dil ki dhadkanein aur bhi tezz hoti chali jati hain........wo kanpkapatey haathon se apne mobile ko leta hain aur dheere se us mobile ke files ko dekhney lagta hain..........thode der baad usey kareeb 4, 5 videos dikhayi dete hain.........wahin raghu ram ke taraf dekhkar haule se muskura padta hain.......
" aap is mobile ko yahin samney rakh dijiye malik.........aur bade itmenaan se us video ko dekhiye...........dekhiyega ki kaise mard aurat ki choot ko faadta hain..........kaise wo uske choot mein lund pelta hain..........kaise wo apna lauda ussey chuswata hain......aur apni mani bhi pilata hain.........is picture mein aapko ye sab dekhney ko milega......" raghu ki aisi open baatein aur upar se wo video ram ke dil ki dhadkanon ko badhati jaa rahi thi....wahin uska lund dheere dheere tight hota jaa raha tha.....kuch aisi hi halat aab un dono ki bhi thi......
ram ek video ko select karta hain aur mobile samney ki deewar par khadi karke rakh deta hain........aab jeetu aur raghu wahin ram ke bagal mein baithey they ar wo sab aankh faadey us video ko dekhey jaa rahe they.......tabhi ek videshi ladka aata hain aur wo chalte hue ek band kamrey mein jata hain........ander jane ke baad ek ladki bister par leti hui nazar aati hain......angrezi mein na naje wo ussey kya kehta hain .....kuch bhi kaha ho un teenon ko to bus chudai se matlab tha.......fir wo uske lips ko suck karta hain aur fauran uske chuchiyon ko apne haathon mein lekar masal deta hain........
fir ladka ladki ke ek ek kar sare kapdey utarta hain aur ladki ghutnon ke bal wahin farsh paar baith jati hain aur uske pent ko kholney lagti hai.....jab us aadmi ka pent khulta hain aur jab lund samney nazar aata hain ram ki to jaise sansein atak si jati hain......wahin raghu aur jeetu dono aankhein faadey us video ko dekh rahe they.........fir wo ladki haule se mooh kholti hain aur us aadmi ka lund choosney lagti hain.....
" aapko maza aa raha hain na malik........" aur raghu ram ke taraf dekhtey hue haule se ankh maar deta hain wahin ram ka chehra safed padh jata hain....usey un dono ke saath is tarah baithkar dekhna bahut ajeeb sa lag raha tha.........jaise jaise movie aagey badhti jaa rahi thi waise waise raghu aur jeetu ke maze badhtey jaa rahe they......wahin ram ki to jaise sansein ruk si gayi thi.....usney aaj tak sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ki aisi movies bhi kabhi banti hogi........
thode der baad wo ladki bhi poori nangi ho jati hain aur ram aankh faady us ladki ki taraf aise dekhney lagta hain jaise wo koi ajooba dekh raha ho......wahin raghu aur jeetu dono ka lund poora akad gaya tha.........movie dekhtey waqt raghu ko kuch sharat soojhati hain aur wo jeetu ki taraf dekhtey hue muskurane lagta hain....wahin jeetu raghu ki taraf sawal bhaare nazreion se aise dekhney lagta hain jaise wo uska irada samajh gaya ho.......
" chal beta jeetu.......tu bhi yahin shuru ho jaa.......aur aaj apne malik ko live show dikha.........." wahin jeetu raghu ki taraf aise dekhney lagta hain jaise koi bakra katney se pehle kasai ko dekhta ho...........usey raghu par ander hi ander bahut gussa bhi aa raha tha magar wo raghu ko naraz bhi nahin karna chahta tha......kyon ki ek wo hi umeed ki kiran tha jo uska paar ghaat laga sakta tha.......jeetu marta kya na karta.........wo bhi chup chaap se apne kapdey nikalney lagta hain wahin ram ki jo rahi sahi himmat thi wo bhi jawab dene lagi thi......durr se wo na hi raghu ko kuch bol paa raha tha.......na hi jeetu ko inkaar kar paa raha tha.......ek taraf chudai ki movie chal rahi thi......wahin dusari taraf jeetu ki live video........ye sochkar ram ki halat patli hone lagi thi.........
jeetu haule haule apne sare kapdey utarta chala jata hain aur jab wo apne underwear utarta hain ram ki nazrein us video se hutkar jeetu ke lund ki taraf chali jati hain......wahin uska gala sookhney lagta hain......lund to jaise fatney ke kagar par tha..........itn sakht...inta hard ho gaya tha jaise maloom padta tha ki haath lagate hi pichari nikala jayega.......shayad isi durr se ram apne lund par haath nahin laga raha tha.......wahin ram kabhi us video mein us aadmi ka lund dekh raha tha...............to kabhi jeetu ke lund ko....aur shayad wo un dono ke lund ko comparision bhi kar raha tha.....aur jahan tak uska manan tha ki jeetu k lund us movie ke aadmi se kahin zyada mota tha ...............aur bada bhi..........
ram ne aisa nazara kabhi apni zindagi mein nahin dekha tha..........wahin raghu muksuraye jaa raha tha......jeetu samney ki movie ki taraf dekhtey hue aab apna lund dheere dheere hila raha tha......wahin ram ek taraf chudai ka scene dekh raha tha jismein wo ladki us aadmi se apni choot marwa rahi thi.......aur cheekh chilla rahi thi.............wahin dusari taraf jeetu apne lund ko tezi se hila raha tha........ye nazara dekhkar uske tan badan mein jaise aag si lag gayi thi..........wo wahin lumbi lumbi sanein le raha tha.....wahin uske lund se precum nikalna shuru ho gaya tha.......wo ek pal ke liye bhi apni nazrein un dono jagah se nahin hata paa raha tha........
screen mein wo aadmi alag alag tarike se us ladki ki choot marta hain to aakhiri mein apna cum us ladki ke mooh mein gira deta hain......ye nazara dekhtey hue aakhir jeetu ka bhi sabra ka bandh toot jata hain aur wo sssssssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa karte hue uska bhi lund garam garam lava ugalney lagta hain jisey ram badi badi aankhein kiye hairat se dekhey jaa raha tha........kaise wo khud ko sambhaley hue tha ye wahi janta tha.........wahin jeetu ki aankhein kuch der ke liye mano band si ho jati hain aur wo lumbi lumbi sansein leta hua wahin kisi laash ki tarah bilkul thanda padh jata hain......wahin raghu bhi apne lungi ke upar se aple laude ko dheere dheere sehla raha tha........aabhi uska cum nikalney ka koi irada nahin tha.....wo to bus ram ko chudai mein pukka kar raha tha............
wo video khatam hone ke baad jeetu ram ke mobile ko uski taraf dheere se badha deta hain wahin ram us video ko band kar deta hain........fir jeetu apne cum saaf karke jaldi se apna pent pehan leta hain aur bahar ki taraf nikal jata hain........wahin ram ke dimag mein aabbhi bhi wo video to kabhi jeetu ka lund ghoom raha thaa.........uska badan ander hi ander jaise sulag gaya tha.......sach to ye tha ki uski bhi iccha muth marney ki kar rahi thi....magar yahan un dono ke beech wo aisa kabhi nahin kar sakta tha..........
" isey aap lejakar raat mein aaram se dekhiyega malik........chahe to aap isey dekhtey hue muth bhi maar sakte hain........aur agar aapka dil kare to aap ye video memsaheb ko bhi dikha sakte hain.......sach kehta hoon ismein bada maza aayega..........." aur raghu apne peelay kale daant dikhata hua haule se hans padta hai wahin ram ajeeb nazreion se raghu ke taraf aise dekhney lagta hain jaise usney koi bhoot dekh liya ho........
" magar......kahin bhabhi .......mujhe maregi to......" aur ram bholepan mein dheere se bol padta hain wahin raghu uski baateion ko sunkaar muskura padta hain.....
" aap bhi kitne bhole hain malik.........arey memsaheb ko bhi to apni galti ka ehsaas hona chahiye..........unhein bhi to lagna chahiye ki unhone aapke saath galat kiya hain..........ye video aapko dekhta hua dekhegi to unka bhi dil machlega...........aur wo isi tarah aapki mutthi meih hogi......." aur raghu itna kehkar shararat bhare andaaz mein haule se hans padta hain wahin is baar ram bhi gehrey soch mein doobata chala jata hain.....dekhna ttha ki agey waqt kaun sa mod lekar aane wala tha......................................................
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14-06-2019, 08:25 PM
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Mazaa a gya jani bas ab raghu chod de jaldi se kavya ko.. ?
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Ajay bhai aap story likhna mat chhodiye aap bohat purane lekhak hai sayad 2012 ya 2013 se likh rahe hain story me tb se aapki sab story padhi he aap dil se story likhte hai jab adult story likhte hai to sab raider ke andar khalbali macha dete hai aur jab love story likhte ho to sab ki aakho me aashu laa dete ho bhai aap story likha bandh mat karo aap jesa koy nhi bhai
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14-06-2019, 08:44 PM
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[quote='Ajaykumar82' pid='544150' dateline='1560515783']
bhai mood kharab ho jata hain kabhi kabhi..........kabhi kabhi to dil karta hain ki yahan aana hi chodh doon......magar fir aap sabki yaad aa jati hain to dil wapas se pighal jata hain.....
bhai yahan main bhi janta hoon ki fame bahut mayney rakhta hain.........magar aisi popularty kis kaam ki jab koi response hi na mile......
Sahee kehrahe hain ajay yaara... Ap to phr b experience writer hain... Main to new comer tha.... Maine apni ek story start ki thi but response ki waja se hi band kardi.... Yaha or xossip par kuch overrated writer hain like The Evil... Jo ek hi theme par ek trah ki hi story likhte hain... Unko zarurat se ziada response milta... Jab k we know usse lakh darjey achi hamari story hai... Isilye dukh hota.... Ab pata nahi woh responce aese writers ka planted hota hai ya real... God knows... But i understand ajay yaara... Ap apni jaga right ho... Itna regularly update or itni nice narration k bawjood b kuch overrated writers jesa response na aye to dukh hota hai....
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bahut khub, sahi ja rahe ho
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Yaara bunty ka to nahi pata.... But pink baby to great writer hain.... Unka or evil ka to koi comparison hi nahi.... I really feel evil ka response planted hota hai....kyun k ek to usko update dene me maut ata hai or na hi uski ki kahani me koi maza hai... Just fucking fucking fucking..... Start me iski ek story k kuch updates muje ache lagey the and i comment on it... But then i realize k ye ek hi theme likhta hai... Or kuch isko ata hi nahi.... Or ajay yaara ap b usse boht behtar or ache writer ho.... Ap dil mat kharab karo apna
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Excellent update yaara...maza aagaya...
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