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ADITI AND HOLI PARTY PART-2
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Aditi was really enjoying the moment and suddenly she felt someone holding her hand. Aditi thought it was Varun and looked and was surprised to see it was Samar.
Samar: hey Taj mahal... Happy Holi
Samar pulled her out of the crowd tightening his grip on his hand. She was a little taken aback but followed him and while being whisked away she saw Varun having a
drink at the bar counter with his friend rahul.
Samar took her away from the crowd and into the house. She gathered her senses a bit and asked him to stop.
Aditi: first of all stop calling me that and second of all where are you taking me?
Samar: calling you what??
Aditi: you know!
Samar: what?
Aditi: Taj mahal!!
Samar: What should I do i always stand by truth and seriously you are looking very hot Taj Mahal
Aditi: You cannot talk like this to me Mr. She said little smiling
Samar: I am just expressing myself plus tell me am I lying?
Aditi: ok but now where are you taking me?
Samar: listen its Holi...How will i miss this chance and let you go like that? After all you are Taj Mahal
Aditi gave him angry look but followed him into the house they passed a huge lobby. Aditi couldn't stop gushing at the lavishness inside the house everything from sofas
to the chandeliers.
As they passed the lobby they came to the back of the house and Aditi saw a beautiful swimming pool built at the backside of the house.
Aditi: oh my god.. that's beautiful.
Samar: Less than you jaan..
Aditi: Stop flirting Mr. It is not going to help you
Samar: He brought some colors in his hands and Aditi saw him.
Aditi: Started running and laughing saying you cannot catch me.
Samar: Samar ran after her and saw sexy round curvy ass jiggling a she was running.
Aditi: understood she won't be able to escape from Samar as he was running behind her fast, so she finally gave up and stopped.
The moment Samar got hold of her held both her hands tightly above her head. Samar was now holding her from behind and using his left hand held her waist from behind and gripped her tightly on her stomach.
He pushed her behind and held her tightly towards him. Her back is pressed tightly on his chest. And the moment he pushed her towards him, her protruding round ass got pressed against his crotch.
Aditi was unware about Samar intentions and was trying, moving to escape from his clutches, her ass was moving brushing on his hardness. He started getting hard on and he pressed his dick further into her ass.
As Aditi was struggling to get away from him Samar was trying to make most of the opportunity with Aditi as he tried to push her down and his hands were now on her waist.
Aditi: Samar stop what are you doing?
Samar: Taj Mahal Bura na mano Holi hai he said and held her waist and flipped her to stomach.
Aditi failed to notice this as she was trying to escape. Samar put color on her face and neck. He also put color on the exposed portion of her stomach and made sure one of his finger went inside her navel
Aditi continued laughing but soon realized Samar was almost on top of her now and Aditi got silent as Samar looked at her. Aditi on the other hand saw Samar looking at her in strange
manner.
Samar was looking at her face and his face was too close to her as Aditi eyes widened and she pushed Samar with force away from her and somehow managed to get free from the
him and she started running again and suddenly she tripped into the pool.
Although the pool was shallow she started panicking and was trying to keep her head above water, Samar saw her and started laughing.
Aditi panicked and was unable to keep her head above water and started drowning in panic. She was in a state of shock.
Samar who was busy laughing understood and quickly pulled his T-shirt off and jumped into the pool. As he got near her Aditi caught him wrapping her arms around his neck. Samar also gripped her hands as Aditi who was scared quickly wrapped her legs around Samar's body.
Samar hold her tight as Aditi clinged to him as he took the opportunity and placed his hands on her back. Samar slow walked to the edge of the pool and placed her on the top.
Aditi who's eyes were closed felt relieved as her legs where now in water but she was sitting as Samar climbed out and sat next to Aditi.
Aditi quickly clinged to Samar as strongly as she could in the process her breasts were getting squeezed to Samar's chest who was not wearing any T-shirt. Although Samar was really enjoying the moment but then he tried to calm her down
Samar: After some time are you ok now? You should be careful while running. Sorry I think I scared you as Aditi eye first time went to Samar chest and noticed his upper body was well toned and seems he spends lot of time in gym.
Aditi: No dont say sorry I slipped and fell down but you came in time.
She looked towards Samar and both of them started laughing.
Samar: You know people say Taj Mahal looks most beautiful when you see it early morning when the Sun ray fall into it. My Taj Mahal looks too hot when wet
Aditi: She realized her white suit was sticking to her skin and the suit had become really transparent. When out of the pool she realised that now her suit had totally become transparent and her black bra was practically visible also her cleavage was in the full view of Samar.
She quickly tried to cover her modesty and crossed her hands across her boobs.
Aditi: Can you please stop staring
Samar: No
Aditi: What?
Samar: Only a fool would let go this opportunity.
Aditi: Stop it please and help me how am I supposed to go out like this.
Samar: Well I have an automatic washing machine which can dry the clothes in 20 minutes.
Aditi: then take me there.
Samar: ok you walk in front.
Aditi: no ways you walk and i will follow you. I know why you want to be behind me.
Samar: alright follow me.
As Samar led her to the room and showed her the washroom where the washing machine was placed he was occasionally looking back. She was covering her boobs with her hands folded but he could see the black bra she was wearing and as the suit was wet it was sticking to her navel and the suit had almost become transparent so her gorgeous round navel was on
display and samar was enjoying the view.
Samar: so here is the machine. And he explained her how to use it without stopping staring at her wet body.
Aditi: ok now if you can please go out and get me a towel.
Samar: sure and he handed her the towel which was hanging on the towel stand.
Aditi looked at him and indicated him to leave her so she can change and wash her clothes.
Samar: do I really need to go out?
Aditi said dont be too naughty as Samar went out of the bathroom.
Samar: so I will be waiting outside.
Aditi: ok
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Aditi started opening the hooks of her suit one by one quickly. With each hook, her beautiful valley between those breasts became more visible. After unhooking, she removed the suit and peeled it off from her body, leaving her only in black bra and skirt.
She then took her hands down and in one swift motion removed her skirt and quickly removed her panties. And finally, she took off her bra from the most beautiful breasts and threw to the pile of clothes kept for washing. She took her clothes and placed it in washing machine just then Samar knocked.
Samar: Please take my jeans also and placed it in machine.
Aditi slowly opened the door and put her hands outside as Samar gave his jeans which she took and placed it in machine but forgot to latch the door
Aditi decided to wash the color and stood under the shower and started the shower. The hot water from shower felt nice as the color from her head and face started dripping down her legs. She quickly cleaned it and washed her eyes and face to remove the Holi color inside her eyes which was irritating her.
Outside Varun had too much of drinks and he felt like dancing so he started looking for aditi. She was nowhere to be seen. Suddenly his heart sank. He looked around for
Dev and spotted him with other guests and had a sigh of relief. But where is Aditi then... he thought to himself and after looking around for good 5 minutes and when he couldn't find her he approached Dev.
Varun: Hey have you seen Aditi?
Dev: she must be around.
Varun: I have already looked around but can't find her.
Dev tried to spot her but also couldn't find her suddenly he thought of Samar and couldn't find him either. That bastard must have taken her inside somewhere. He can't have her before I taste her that's what Dev thought to himself.
Dev: She must have gone inside the house. Come on. And both of them went inside the house and looked around. They looked in the pool too. The water in the pool was
colorful bcos of Aditi and Samar. Dev thought to himself. So some how he got her inside the pool and then looked at Varun.
Dev: I dont think she is here. Let's check out the room. Varun was now calling her name out loud Aditi.. but to no response. As they got near the guest room Samar could listen to Varun calling out Aditi's name and he could hear him getting close.
Samar rushed towards the bathroom and was about to knock but saw the door was open as he went inside and slowly closed it without making a sound.
As Samar got inside the bathroom he could not believe his eyes as Aditi was taking shower and was standing completely naked
Aditi: What the hell are you thinking? Why did you come inside the bathroom?
Samar: placed his finger but Aditi was in no mood to listen and was about to shout when Samar took the opportunity and placed his lips on her and kissed her.
Aditi was shocked to see Samar in the bathroom who was in his boxers and kissing her. She tried to break the kiss and was about to say something when they both heard footsteps walking inside the room and Samar quickly indicated to her that someone is outside indicating not to make any sound as they heard Varun and Dev calling her name.
Aditi got scared hearing Varun calling her name and she got close to Samar. As Varun and Dev walked in the room Aditi was almost hugging Samar and shivering.
The scanned the room and just when Varun and Dev was about to leave seeing the room empty the machine beeped. Varun and Dev heard some noise from bathroom and walked towards the bathroom.
Now Aditi started to panic of being caught naked in bathroom when Samar quickly latched the door. Varun was about to open the bathroom door when Samar quickly said from inside asked who is it?
Varun heard Samar and said sorry we were looking for Aditi and if he is aware of where she could be. Samar quickly said sorry I forgot to tell you guys I had send her to office to fetch one file due to urgent call from Martha.
She should be back in hour or so. Don't worry she has gone by car and one of my office colleague is with her. Varun said ok that's when he was about to leave Dev asked what are you doing in bathroom?
Samar said Holi color got in my eye and i slipped into the pool so had come to take quick shower and clean my eyes.
Dev was relieved that Samar did not got his hands first on Aditi before him. However he was skeptical about it but thought against it.. As Varun and Dev were about to leave when Samar said can you close the door before leaving. They both went as Dev assured Varun it must have been urgent and as she has gone in Car she will be back in hour till then let's go and have some drinks.
Finally Varun and Dev left as Aditi sighed a deep breath. They were very close to get caught
when Samar managed the situation quietly nicely.
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ADITI AND HOLI PART 4
Samar and Aditi just took sigh of relief. Aditi who somehow was happy about how Samar handled the situation and send Varun and Dev away from the room was happy and felt relieved.
But she completely forgot that she was naked in the bathroom and Samar in his T-shirt and boxers next to her.
Aditi was standing next to Samar naked and she realized it and brought her one hand down to cover her pussy and one hand to cover her boobs. She moved away from Samar.
Samar who also was lost now realized how lucky he was and standing next to Aditi who was naked and his eyes now went to Aditi and he could not believe his luck that she was standing naked in front of her.
Aditi who still now was tensed due to getting caught realized she was in more trouble as she was standing naked in front of Samar. Aditi skipped breath as she saw Samar abs and chest
glistening in water.
Aditi who still now was lost and scared came to senses and realized her position. She was complete naked and wet standing inside shower with some other man who was not her husband.
Samar's dick certainly became hard watching Aditi naked. His dick was growing hard and hard to be free from the confinements. Had it not been for his jockstrap, his erection
would be sporting a prominent tent in his tracks. Samar for moment was unable to take his eyes as Aditi who was completely naked in front of him.
Aditi was lost for words and did not know how to react or what to say. She felt shiver ran through her body.
Aditi eyes meet Samar who now was looking at her admiring her in full glory and could sense Samar was getting hard.
Aditi in panic without thinking quickly and stopping the shower opened the machine trying to get her clothes back and completely forgot the shower was still running and all her clothes got wet again.
Samar in the meanwhile could not believe his luck that he was standing in shower with Aditi completely naked. Aditi realised her mistake and looked at him and Samar looked at her
their eyes meet for a while. Aditi heart started to beat faster as Samar came close to her and said "Taj Mahal".
Samar was standing so close to her and she was all naked. Aditi could see a tent slowly building up in Samar trousers.
Aditi was much fairer than Samar had imagined her to be and she had an outstanding figure. Samar saw her firm boobs and the nipple poking at him and it was a site to watch as
he was completely lost in the moment of lust. Samar's dick began to react in his trousers.
Aditi tried to cover herself with clothes which got wet again due to the shower running closed her eyes when Samar got close to her and felt his hand touch hers.
A few tense seconds passed before Aditi opened her eyes and looked at Samar. Samar was in no hurry to let go of this opportunity but managed to look at her and said We need to put the
clothes again in washing machine to dry even my clothes are completely wet.
He said why did you pull them out of the machine? Now we have to do it all over again.
Samar slowly moved closer and closer to Aditi who moved back with each step and finally her back was to the wall when Samar raised his hand and Aditi who had closed her eyes felt his hands as he took the clothes which Aditi was holding to hide herself.
Aditi stood blank as she was once again naked in front of Samar as he took his T-shirt off as Aditi stood like statue watching him undress.
Samar was shirtless now as Aditi saw his chest and went into frozen state and took the towel to cover herself again.
Aditi looked at his chest then into his eye and then again to his chest as she found herself gripping her lips tight.
Aditi: Stood in confused state not knowing what to say
Samar: slipped his fingers inside his boxers and pushed it all the way down. He was now standing naked in front of Aditi.
Aditi: What are you doing Samar you cannot do this in front to me? Can you please go out now?
Samar ignored what she was saying placed all the clothes in washing machine along with his boxers and set the timer for drying.
Aditi kept closing her eyes opened it slowly to saw Samar standing one feet away from her and her eyes went to his chest and the hard muscles.
For sometime there was no moment and Aditi could not take her eyes looking at his chest.
Samar saw her staring at his upper well toned body and took her hands and placed it on his chest..
Aditi tried to move her hands off his chest but Samar was holding her hands and it pressed in his chest a little feeling the hardness.
Samar leaned little on to Aditi and gave her kiss on her cheeks. Samar took the silence from Aditi as Yes and kissed her lips couple of times and moved his hands to touch her hips.
Aditi felt strange sensation ran her body as he pressed her hips and slowly massaged it.
Samar same time was kissing her but Aditi did not kissed him back. Samar kept kissing her seeing no protest from Aditi and this time pulled her into his body and Aditi felt her boobs touching his chest and his hard cock poking at her stomach.
Aditi felt her body responding to the touches and felt very hot as moan escaped her mouth.
Now Samar and Aditi who were lost in paradise as they started kissing each other as Aditi kissing him back
Aditi could now feel his cock poking at her stomach and enjoyed the heat it was giving her.
Samar took the opportunity and moved his hands freely and felt her naked body and moved little back when Aditi saw him as her eyes went scanning his body and finally went down and she saw his cock.
Aditi was lost as her eyes fixed looking at Samar's cock that she didn't notice Samar looking at her.
Samar once again grabbed her shoulders and lowered his lips on to hers. This was too sudden, too direct and she didn't know how to react. A part of her said push him away and slap him but she stayed still, not going by what her mind told her but to go by what her instincts told her.
Startled by how sudden and how fast things were moving, Aditi froze and tried to move away from Samar.
Her heart was pounding and she felt dizzy and for a few seconds she was lost.
The first time, she didn't relent, the second time she didn't relent, the third time, the lips moved just slightly and it was enough. She moaned as his tongue sneaked inside her mouth and his lips closed on hers. Aditi was trembling from the arousal and this was something she never experienced or thought off.
Just then her eyes went to his dick which was poking around her stomach and Samar saw her watching it and asked do you want to touch it.
Aditi: was caught red handed lowered her eyes and before she could speak Samar pulled her in his arms and placed his lips on her again.
Aditi just managed to say no, but Samar wasted no time praising her and said you are so hot my Taj Mahal as his hands now started exploring her body.
Samar ignoring her placed his mouth on her tits. . She quickly turned her head and now was facing the wall not knowing what to do closed her eyes exposing her hot ass to him.
Aditi heart was beating fast now and Samar moved close behind her and his hands touched her waist and she felt something poking behind her back as Samar pressed his crotch on her ass.
The moment Samar cock touched her skin Aditi felt current ran through her body. Aditi bit her lower lips as Samar was rubbing his dick on her ass slowly.
Aditi: Mind was telling her to stop Samar but her body was loving it.
Samar: Hands now slipped to the sides of her navel and slowly travelled down as his fingers were touching her clit.
Aditi: Nooo Samar please let me go.
Samar touched her neck from the back and started to rub. Aditi tried to stop him but he slowly removed her hands and started rubbing her sensuously. Samar hands were now moved around the back of her neck, shoulders and gently massaging them.
Slowly he bent down and kissed her neck.
What are you ..Aditi tried to turn back. Samar stopped her and whispered Shhh you will like it and continued to massage her.
Aditi attempts to stop him went in vain. Aditi could feel her nipples already hardened going against her mind. Aditi I have wanted to do this the moment I saw you he kissed her on her mouth gently first and then started to kiss her wildly.
Samar's hands went to her soft boobs and started pressing and rubbing them as he continued kissing her. He pinched her nipples and made her moan. He parted her legs wide
and touched her pussy lips. He put one finger on the lips and took it to his mouth and sucked it.
Aditi you taste so good Samar lowered his head to her pussy and started licking and sucking her pussy. Aditi was writhing and moaning. As Aditi was lost completely
Samar then said Aditi I want you to return the favor I did to you and pressed her shoulder and soon she was on her knees facing his dick near to her face.
No...I shouldn't...please Aditi managed to say as the cock head touched her lips.
Reality was soon hitting Aditi and she said Samar, what are you doing?. Varun must be looking for me outside. He will get suspicious as she was saying Samar quickly cut her off and said
dont worry I told him you will be back in one hour so we still have 45 mins.
Samar got close to her held her hand and kept it on his dick. Aditi immediately pulled her hand back.
Samar: I know u want to see it, feel it, don't be shy...u can have it. Samar again held her hand and kept on his penis. But, this time she didn't pull it. She started feeling Samar's huge dick, its size, its thickness, its hardness.!! Her eyes were still closed.
Samar : u can open ur eyes honey...i know u have never seen such thing...open it..!!
Aditi partially opened her eyes and looked at Samar's dick.
Samar: You liked it??? You can play with mine...don' be shy..!!
Aditi then fully opened her eyes. She was terrified as well as amazed to see such a huge penis!! She was getting excited. She was just lost looking at Samar's 8 inch long
Samar caught her by hairs and stroked in his huge penis inside her mouth. Aditi's mouth was too small to take in Samar's monstrous dick. But, Samar kept stroking his dick in her mouth.
Aditi too showed no reluctance to suck Samar's cock. She was sucking his cock like an obedient student. She was totally lost in lust and out of her senses.
Just then the machine beeped for the second time and it brought her back to senses. She quickly pushed Samar aside took the towel and got her clothes and ran away from the bathroom.
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Aditi quickly got dressed and her mind was processing what happened in the bathroom. She started feeling guilty and as Samar walked outside wearing his clothes from bathroom.
Aditi: What the hell were you thinking? Why did you come inside the bathroom? You could have stayed in the room?
Samar: Yeah...but What if they would have asked what I was doing with you in underwear? Remember I also had given you my T-shirt and Jean which got wet.
I did not plan this or invited them to come finding you. Nor did i push you in the pool so stop blaming me for all this. Whatever happened was natural and we both got
carried away. Samar said in angry tone looking at Aditi.
Aditi went silent not knowing what to say and tears rolled from her eyes.
Samar: Little worried that Aditi may not allow him close again said please dont cry
Aditi: What if someone comes to know about this? what will I say to Varun?
Samar: Aditi we wont tell anyone trust me as he reached out and wiped her tears from the cheek. I like you so much and I won't spoil your name or bring shame to you or
your family as you mean a lot to me.
Aditi felt little relieved hearing Samar and his care towards her as she stopped crying.
Aditi: Shall we go?
Samar: sure. But are you ok going out like this.
Aditi: what do you mean?
Samar: look at your suit.
Aditi looked at her suit in panic. What's wrong with it. It looks fine. What's he trying to say aditi thought to herself.
Aditi: what's wrong???
Samar: well when you came in it was all drenched in color now looks shiningly white. What will you explain outside that the colors magically evaporated.
Aditi: oh my god.... what are we going to do…
Samar: here you go…
And he gave him a thali full of colors which he had arranged when aditi was changing.
Aditi: i am really sorry.. all you have been doing is helping me. And i shudnt have talked to you the way i talked in the bathroom.
Samar: its ok. Now apply the color quickly your husband must be waiting.
She started sprinkling color on her suit. She applied some on her face and then on her neck. Then some of it on her collar bones. Then she tried to put some color on
her small amount of cleavage which was visible but realised samar was staring at her with widely open eyes. Thia time she requested.
Aditi: can you turn around.
He really dint want to miss the view but had no other option. After some time aditi called him.
Aditi: listen can you apply some color at the back of my suit. I can't reach my back.
Samar cud not believe what she had just said and got really excited. He turned and hiding his excitement said with a straight face
Samar: sure.
And aditi turned around and pulled her hair in front through her shoulder. Samar was now seeing her upper back then her eyes went slowly to her lower back. The curves
of her back were just perfect.
Her upper back was a little outwards and as we go down to her lower back it curved beautifully inwards and then at the end of lower back her beautiful swollen hips. He cud have
looked at the view for eternity but
Aditi: can you hurry please
Samar: sure.
And then he took some colors from the thali and sprinkled it on the suit. Then he placed his hand on her upper back and started rolling his hands in rounds slowly.
Aditi felt a strange sensation in her body. But she wanted it to be over with as quickly as can.
Aditi: can you hurry a little bit.
Samar: i want it to look authentic. So just be patient.
And then he slowly brought his hands down towards the lower back and took it up again. He repeated this for good 2 minutes. Aditi was getting aroused with Samar's massage at her back.
Aditi: is it done(in a very low voice).
Aditi: shall we go??
Samar: You go from the back door and I will join in sometime. I don’t want them to be suspicious.
Aditi: ok she said and left
Aditi: Varun and Dev were busy drinking as Aditi walked and said come on let's just go I want to eat something. And all three walked where food was being served.
Varun excused himself to go to the rest room. And as Aditi and Dev were having food Samar joined them and said.
Samar: hey Aditi... I have been looking for you. Thanks for bringing the file so quickly.
Varun: Yaa its great...Samar. And this whole concept of waterless Holi it's really good. Personally i dont like when people waste water on Holi. Samar looked into
Aditi eyes for asecond their eyes locked and then Aditi started looking elsewhere.
Samar: What about you Aditi. You also like waterless Holi. Aditi was in no mood to answer the question but it would have looked weird.
Aditi: Yeah actually I love waterless Holi
Aditi said in a sarcastic tone. Now Dev was hinting that something is going on here between Aditi and Samar.
Dev: Aditi i dont know why... but it sure looks you are not enjoying the party.
Aditi: oh no Dev. It sure is a great party. And I am enjoying every bit of it.
Saying this she looked in Samar eye's and again their eyes locked for a second. This time Dev saw it and was now sure there was something going on here between them.
After finishing their food when they were just about to go. Samar found a chance to talk to Aditi alone.
Samar: back inside u put up a great show u save both of us. If Varun had walked inside. He would have known about us.
Aditi in an angry tone.
Aditi: There in no us. Whatever happened was an accident.
Samar: oh really…
Aditi: Yes.
Samar: Well you seemed to enjoy the little time we had with each other. And why dint you tell them what exactly happened instead of telling all the lies. he was speechless. She couldn't look into Samar's eyes.
Aditi: well. Well..
Samar: you know what. People generally lie when they have something to hide. What did you had to hide back inside?
It's getting late. Aditi interrupted him.
Samar just stood there watching Aditi as she moved towards Varun
Wait, Samar said and she stopped.
I am married. Aditi said, her back still towards him.
I know. I am sorry.
Aditi saw Varun coming and was relieved she didn't have to answer the question.
Varun: Are you ready. Let's go. Thanks for the party Samar.
And as they walked outside Aditi looked back at Samar and he waved at her saying bye and although she really dint want to but smiled at him....
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very well developed.....
great writing skills....
hope you will add new situations of extreme exoticness to the life of Aditi.....
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Please translate Hindi dialogues
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whenever readers start commenting on any story in this forum either story updates goes slow or updates stopped. This is on regular basis.
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