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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
(11-11-2023, 12:23 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Before readers start making assumptions about the direction in which the story may move in future, I would request them to have patience for the next 3-4 updates. Till then just comment on the particular update without discussing the direction in which the story might move. I know where to take the story and where to place a particular event. Thanks.

Yes Sean true to your words.... Let's not judge her and let her enjoy her youth and sexiting adventure which she wants to have. You know the story and your the creator of this story, so we will wait for the next update hope it has more encounter like the one she had with Hariya at her place when he bought the household stuff for her. Please keep updating regularly that's one biggest request from me and maybe from all the readers of this story. 
Cheers Sean
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Bhai ramu ko mat chechad me lo kyu ki hariya hi best hai isma
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Ek dum bawaal update!
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She is filled with so much lust, yet she was a virgin before marriage. Why? Were here parents strict? Only that could explain this explosion of lust in her the moment she gets some freedom and she is away from the eyes of her parents, husband, and her acquaintances in Delhi. Behind closed doors, or in front of unknown people who will not tell her family, she will do anything?

Maybe these tendencies in her get activated when she is probed by a "dabang mard". Someone who has the guts to take advantage of her not thinking about the society, only these kind of men trigger her. After all, she does consider Hariya a "asli mard", she has respect for him.

What if a timid/darpok mard tries to take advantage of her? She will not have any respect for such a namard. She will look at that person with revulsion. Just like she reacted to that old man not helping her when someone tried to run away with her purse. She will really destroy whatever little ego that kind of a person has. What if she misunderstands or underestimates a man like that? And makes the mistake of insulting such a man, under the protection of someone like Hariya, like she did with that old man in the purse incident? But what if then that man finds Anita without that protection? Will he try teach her a lesson? Because Anita does have that streak of pride she feels when she sees when men admire her beauty but she does feel superior to them if they are not "sachha mard". It gives a kick to imagine a situation in which such a extremely beautiful but proud person is taught a lesson. All fantasies obviously.

This imagined situation does remind me of someone. While Anita is a housewife, I'm reminded of a working person, a one-time boss of mine in office. She was married, 2-3 years older than me. Quite beautiful, talk and social, that I felt lucky to be reporting to her. She talked very sweetly. After some time I started dropping her home on my bike on my way home in the evening. She wore jeans to office so she sat normally on the bike. And I remember the feeling of her boobs on my back sometimes, obviously she did not sit sticking to me. It was only after some time that I notices the she talked sweetly to someone only if she had something to get from that person. Another guy reported to her as well. When he bought a car, she stopped coming with me on my bike and started going with him. Most of her sweetness went away. Only displayed when she wanted something work related done urgently. Obviously, i started getting irritated with her. But I'm sure a lot of readers here have also found themselves in such a situation... That you know the person to be cunning and only talking sweetly when advantageous to them, but they are oh so beautiful... That you kinda have a love-hate outlook towards them. Like I wanted nothing to do with her, but when once I saw her bending down to pick something up, her tight jeans got pulled lower along with the waistband of her panties, and i could very clearly see her fair ass crack (gaand ki daraar) for a good 7-10 seconds, all I wanted to do was hold her, pull her trousers down all the way, be d her over the meeting table, and give non stop dhakka to her like Hariya gave to Anita. Hated her, but loved the idea of teaching her a lesson like this.

I feel Anita causes similar feelings in men who as per her are not "dabang" or daring enough, and subconsciously she considers them inferior men.

I kinda thought Ramu was going to be this kind of a character, but doesn't seem so now. Won't assume though, will see how the story unfolds.
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This is like reading screenplay, you are so engrossed into reading that you forgot the world around you exist. The ability to make readers feel that they are the part of that story is just tremendous. What a writer you are sean, this is one of the toughest job to do and you do this regularly thank you. While reading this update I was imagining Myself to be ramu and hariya simultaneously, my heartbeat was at peak while reading the erotic encounter between three folks. And I can see what Anita is looking like reading the update . Just phenomenal writing.
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(11-11-2023, 08:58 PM)Hellybelly Wrote: The "best" cinemato narration ever, just like a movie running, in the begging update looked running fast but when needed it became very steady and normal in dialogue, witty and naturally real. Her changing of clothes and building lust inside ramu is very tightly fixed in plot. And like many writers I'd like to suggest one thing that plz give a detailed description of Anita's face , as you thought it to be because the character is so big that we are unable to think everything in our own way, hope you'd consider this.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. The reason I don't describe Anita's face is I want to leave it to readers' imagination to think of whoever they want as Anita. Everyone has their own likes and dislikes, one description may not be liked by a group of readers and the other may not be liked by another group of readers. In such a case it's better to let them imagine whoever they want to imagine as Anita. This will make the story enjoyable for all the readers. Though one thing I can say is that Anita doesn't have any nose piercing (I dislike it). She has ear and navel piercing. So based on the above if readers want to share any pic of whom they imagine while thinking of Anita's face (I believe earlier we had discussed about whom readers imagine when thinking about Anita as a personality and the body type. While imagining one can imagine various person based on different body parts). So when it comes to face only, let the readers share whom they imagine as Anita. I think you can start with your own imagination. 

Thanks.
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(12-11-2023, 01:22 AM)Kinkpinkboy Wrote: This is like reading screenplay, you are so engrossed into reading that you forgot the world around you exist. The ability to make readers feel that they are the part of that story is just tremendous. What a writer you are sean, this is one of the toughest job to do and you do this regularly thank you. While reading this update I was imagining Myself to be ramu and hariya simultaneously, my heartbeat was at peak while reading the erotic encounter between three folks. And I can see what Anita is looking like reading the update . Just phenomenal writing.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. Just as I said above, would love to know what/whom/how you thought Anita was looking like in this update. Thanks.
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(12-11-2023, 01:12 AM)creamydelight Wrote: She is filled with so much lust, yet she was a virgin before marriage. Why? Were here parents strict? Only that could explain this explosion of lust in her the moment she gets some freedom and she is away from the eyes of her parents, husband, and her acquaintances in Delhi. Behind closed doors, or in front of unknown people who will not tell her family, she will do anything?

Maybe these tendencies in her get activated when she is probed by a "dabang mard". Someone who has the guts to take advantage of her not thinking about the society, only these kind of men trigger her. After all, she does consider Hariya a "asli mard", she has respect for him.

What if a timid/darpok mard tries to take advantage of her? She will not have any respect for such a namard. She will look at that person with revulsion. Just like she reacted to that old man not helping her when someone tried to run away with her purse. She will really destroy whatever little ego that kind of a person has. What if she misunderstands or underestimates a man like that? And makes the mistake of insulting such a man, under the protection of someone like Hariya, like she did with that old man in the purse incident? But what if then that man finds Anita without that protection? Will he try teach her a lesson? Because Anita does have that streak of pride she feels when she sees when men admire her beauty but she does feel superior to them if they are not "sachha mard". It gives a kick to imagine a situation in which such a extremely beautiful but proud person is taught a lesson. All fantasies obviously.

This imagined situation does remind me of someone. While Anita is a housewife, I'm reminded of a working person, a one-time boss of mine in office. She was married, 2-3 years older than me. Quite beautiful, talk and social, that I felt lucky to be reporting to her. She talked very sweetly. After some time I started dropping her home on my bike on my way home in the evening. She wore jeans to office so she sat normally on the bike. And I remember the feeling of her boobs on my back sometimes, obviously she did not sit sticking to me. It was only after some time that I notices the she talked sweetly to someone only if she had something to get from that person. Another guy reported to her as well. When he bought a car, she stopped coming with me on my bike and started going with him. Most of her sweetness went away. Only displayed when she wanted something work related done urgently. Obviously, i started getting irritated with her.  But I'm sure a lot of readers here have also found themselves in such a situation... That you know the person to be cunning and only talking sweetly when advantageous to them, but they are oh so beautiful... That you kinda have a love-hate outlook towards them. Like I wanted nothing to do with her, but when once I saw her bending down to pick something up, her tight jeans got pulled lower along with the waistband of her panties, and i could very clearly see her fair ass crack (gaand ki daraar) for a good 7-10 seconds, all I wanted to do was hold her, pull her trousers down all the way, be d her over the meeting table, and give non stop dhakka to her like Hariya gave to Anita. Hated her, but loved the idea of teaching her a lesson like this.

I feel Anita causes similar feelings in men who as per her are not "dabang" or daring enough, and subconsciously she considers them inferior men.

I kinda thought Ramu was going to be this kind of a character, but doesn't seem so now. Won't assume though, will see how the story unfolds.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. One more incident to add is the bus incident with Ankit and that man. 

As far as your real experience is concerned, why don't you write a short story on that? No need to write a marathon one but a short story of around a few updates. Thanks.
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(11-11-2023, 09:18 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Yes Sean true to your words.... Let's not judge her and let her enjoy her youth and sexiting adventure which she wants to have. You know the story and your the creator of this story, so we will wait for the next update hope it has more encounter like the one she had with Hariya at her place when he bought the household stuff for her. Please keep updating regularly that's one biggest request from me and maybe from all the readers of this story. 
Cheers Sean

Thanks a lot.
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(12-11-2023, 01:22 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. One more incident to add is the bus incident with Ankit and that man. 

As far as your real experience is concerned, why don't you write a short story on that? No need to write a marathon one but a short story of around a few updates. Thanks.

The bus incident? Was that written in that vein where the guy was an aggressor (which he definitely was) and Anita was at the recieving end? Because Ankit by himself did not surrender, it was only Anita who shut him up. Was Anita the victim there or willing participant? Because she also thought that sitting with such a person will be entertaining for the journey, instead of Ankit, who will just sit with earphones in his ears. Would like to know your views on that, i.e. in what frame of mind Anita was.. obviously there was also the thought from Anita that she did not want to make the situation more problems.

I take your suggestion of writing... But even a small story needs some discipline, which sadly, i find hard to have. That is why I admire writers who persist. Nonetheless, I will try.
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UPDATE 64


Anita ghar ke ander gayi aur uske peeche woh dono bhi gaye. Hariya Anita se bola,"memsaheb darwaza ander se bandh kar dete hain hum. Baahar bahot tez hawa beh raha hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar peeche ghumkar Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Haan Hariya ji bandh kar dijiye".



Hariya phir ghumkar darwaza ander se bandh karne laga to Ramu dekhne laga.



Anita apni gaand matkati huyi sofe ke paas jaakar uske taraf ishara karke dono se boli,"Aaiye aur baithiye aap dono".



Ramu ek nazar ghar mein daudakar sofe par Hariye ke saath baitha gaya. Woh baith kar sofe ko dekhne laga. Use bahot araam mil raha tha.



Hariya yeh dekhkar bola,"Kaisan laga? Sasura itna mulaayam sofa hai".



Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilate hue bola,"Haan achha hai"



Anita muskurakar boli,"Guest room mein aap dono chair par baithe hue the to araam bhi nahin mil raha hoga aur guest room ke bistar par baithkar peene mein achha bhi nahin lagta aap dono ko. Yahan sofe par araam se aap dono pee sakte hain. Din bhar ki mazduri karne ke baad thoda mulayam gadda par baithkar aap logo ko araam bhi milega aur peene ka bhi mazaa milega".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekha aur dono ki nazar mili to woh Anita ki aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,"Haan memsaheb bahot mulaayam aur gaddedaar sofa hai. Araam to mil raha hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb ka sab kuchh aese hi mulaayam aur gaddedaar hi hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke taraf dekhi to woh uski chunchiyon ko dekh raha tha. Phir woh aankhon ke kone se Ramu ko dekhi to woh bhi uski chunchiyon ko hi dekh raha tha. Iske bawjud Anita apni chunchiyon ko pallu se dhankne ki koshish nahin ki aur woh dono se boli,"Laiye kapde dijiye main washing machine mein rakh deti hoon".



Dono ek nazar Anita ko dekhe aur kapda de diye. Anita unke kapdo ko lekar boli,"Main washing machine mein rakhkar aati hoon to aap dono ke peene ke liye intezaam karti hoon aur phir garma garam pakode bhi banaungu. Tab tak aap dono araam se baithiye".



Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Theek hai memsaheb". Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur Ramu ko ek nazar dekhne ke baad ghumkar gaand matkati huyi dono kamre ke beech ek chhote se gallery jahan ghar ke peeche jaane ka darwaza tha aur saath hi washing machine bhi rakhne ka jagah banaya hua tha wahan chali gai.



Ramu aur Hariya dono Anita ki nangi peeth ko tab tak dekhte rahe jab tak woh gallery mein jaa kar unke nazro se ojhal nahin ho gayi.



Anita gallery mein jaakar washing machine kholkar unke kapdo ko ek ek karke ander daalne lagi aur aakhir mein uski haath mein do underwear bach gaye. Underwear ko dekhte hi Anita ki dil dhadak gayi aur saans tez ho gayi. Dono ne kapde ko guchha bana kar diya tha to Anita ko underwear nahin dikha tha ab tak magar ek ek karke jab woh kapde washing machine mein daal rahi thi to uski haath mein woh dono sabse chhote kapde hi bach gaye.



Unke underwear ko dekhte hi Anita samajh gayi ki dono tauli ke ander pure nange honge.Yeh sochte hi uski saans aur tez hone lagi. Woh dhadakte dil aur tez saans se dono ka underwear washing machine mein rakhne hi wali thi ki tabhi kuchh sochkar ruk gayi.



Woh dono haath mein ek ek under wear pakad kar pehle daye haath ke underwear ko apni naak ke paas lejakar gehri saans li aur aesa karte hi uski dil dhadak gayi. Anita ki naak mein ek behad hi ganda gandh ghusa aur aese hone se woh jhat se woh under wear apni naak ke paas se hatakar jor jor se saans lene lagi.



Kuchh seconds tak jor jor ka saans lene ke baad woh apni saanson ko kabu ki aur phir dusra underwear jo uski bayi haath mein tha usko naak ke paas lejakar sunghi aur phir waisa hi ganda gandh uski naak mein ghusa aur phir uski dil dhadakne lagi aur tez saans leti huyi use naak ke paas se hata di.



Anita phir kuchh seconds mein saans kaabu karke dono underwear ko dekhi aur dono ko ek saath apni naak ke paas lejakar jor se saans li. Uski naak mein iss baar dugna ganda gandh gaya aur uski dil phir dhadak gayi magar woh dono under wear ko naak se satayi jor jor se saans lene lagi.



Dheere Anita ko woh badbu achha lagne laga aur uski badan aur choot mein ek ajeeb si hulchul hone lagi. Woh lagbhag ek minute tak waise hi dono underwear ko naak se satai jor se saans leti rahi aur Hariya ke lund ko yaad karne ke saath saath Ramu aur Hariya ke majbut seene ko yaad karne lagi jo abhi nanga tha. Saath hi yaad karne lagi ki kaise un dono mardon ke majbut seene aur peeth ke beech uski dono chunchiyan dabi huyi thi.



Aakhir kaar lagbhag ek minute baad woh thoda hosh mein aayi to under wear ko apni naak se hatai aur hatate hi washing machine mein daalkar tez saans leti huyi washing machine bandh karke on kar di. Woh ek minute waise hi wahan khadi apni saans ko kabu ki aur phir waapas living room mein gayi to dekhi ki Hariya aur Ramu araam se three seater sofe ke dono kone mein baithe hue the.Dono apna taang phailaye hue the.



Hariya sofe ke daye taraf baitha hua tha aur apna daya haath daye side ke handrest par rakhe hue tha. Ramu baye side baitha daye side ke handrest par haath tikaye hue tha. Sharab ki chhoti bottle samne table par rakha hua tha.



Woh dono Anita ko dekhkar muskuraye to Anita bhi muskura kar boli,"Aap dono baithiye main abhi aati hoon".



Yeh sunnkar dono "haan" mein sir hilaye to Anita muskurakar apni kamre mein chali gayi. Woh ander jaakar apni haath dhoyi aur phir aaine ke paas baithkar apni baalon ko samet kar ek claw clip laga li. Anita ki puri baal ab uski sir par clip se bandhi thi aur bas dono kaano ke paas ek ek late latki huyi thi.



Aesa karne se Anita ki khoobsurti aur badh gayi magar woh iske liye clip nahin lagayi thi. Aesa karna hota to woh nahakar hi woh hairstyle kar leti. Use darasal kitchen mein pakoda banana tha aur woh baalon ka disturbance nahin chahti thi isliye use gucche mein apne sir par clip ke jariye bandh li magar aesa karne se uski khoobsurti aur badh gayi.



Anita apni baalon ko clip mein bandhkar kamre se nikli to dono Hariya aur Ramu Anita ko gaur se dekhne lage. Anita unhe dekhkar muskurai aur gaand matkati huyi kitchen mein chali gayi.



Kitchen mein jaate waqt uski peeth un dono mardon ke taraf huyi to dono ka lund phir se towel mein phadphada gaya. Baal ko sir ke upar karke clip lagane se Anita aur kamuk lag rahi thi aur uski gardan bhi ab nangi ho gayi thi. Jab baal woh khula chhor kar saamne girai huyi thi to uski peeth nangi thi magar gardan dhaki huyi thi. Ab baal ko waise clip kar lene se Anita ki gardan bhi nangi ho gayi thi aur gardan se uski gaand ki shuruat tak bas blouse ki teen patli dori hi thi.



Anita fridge kholkar ek bottle thanda paani aur ice tray nikali. Woh phir bottle ko ek tray mein rakh di aur saath hi do glass rakh di. Phir woh ice cube ice tray se nikal kar rakh ek bowl mein rakh li aur woh bowl ko bhi tray mein rakhkar kamar lachkati aur gaand matkati huyi sofe ke paas jaakar tray ko rakhti huyi boli,"Yeh lijiye barf, paani aur glass".



Hariya yeh dekhkar muskurate hue bola,"Thenku memsaheb". Ramu bhi agle pal yehi bola.



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi unhe dekhi aur puchhi,"Aur kuchh chahiye kya aap dono ko?".



Hariya phir Anita ki chunchi dekhne laga. Anita uska nazar apni chunchi par mehsus karke Ramu ke taraf dekhi to woh bhi wahi kar raha tha. Anita dekhi ki dono uski jism ko phir se upar se neeche tak dekhne lage hain to woh chup chap bina sharm ke khadi rahi.



Yeh sab 4-5 seconds ke liye hi hua aur Hariya phir Anita ki chehre par dekhkar "na" mein sir hilate hue bola,"Nahin memsaheb. Abhi itna theek hai. Baad mein kuch ho chahiye hoga to maang lenge".



Hariya aakhri baat bolkar waapas ek nazar Anita ki chunchiyon par le gaya aur ek nazar dekhkar waapas Anita ki chehre par dekha to woh muskurai aur phir Ramu ke taraf dekhi to use uski chunchiyon par nazar gadaye payi.



Anita use apni chunchiyon ko dekhte hue paakar bina sharm ke puchhi,"Aapko aur kuchh chahiye Ramu ji?"



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ki chehre par dekha aue dono ki nazre mili. Ramu "na" mein sir hilakar jaldi se apna nazar Anita ki chunchiyon par phir daalkar waapas Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Abhi itna hi theek hai memsaheb. Thenku".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur muskurati huyi dono se boli,"Theek hai. Aap dono araam se pijiye, main pakode banati hoon tab tak".



Anita phir ek ada se boli,"Aur kuchh bhi chahiye bejhijhak maang lijiyega".



Woh dono yeh sunnkar sir "haan" mein hilaye to Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Theek hai main kitchen mein jaati hoon. Aap dono peene ka mazaa lijiye".



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Theek hai memsaheb".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur phir Ramu ko ek nazar dekhne ke baad wahan se gaand matkati huyi kitchen mein chali gayi. Dono mard phir se Anita ki matakti gaand aur nangi peeth dekhne lage.



Anita kitchen mein jaa kar apron pehne bina hi pakoda banane ki tayyari karne lagi wahin Hariya aur Ramu glass mein thoda sa sharab rakhkar usme paani aur barf bhar liye. Anita kitchen mein kaam karti huyi unhe peete hue kabhi kabhi dekhti wahin woh dono bhi Anita ko dekhte rehte.



Agle kuchh minute aese hi hua. Anita sab kuchh tayyar karke gas chulha jala di aur karahi mein tel daalkar use garam hone ke intezaar karne lagi. Woh phir un dono ke taraf dekhti huyi muskurakar boli,"Araam se pijiye aap dono. Bas 5 minute mein thode pakaude tayyar ho jayenge".



Hariya ek sip lete hue kitchen ke taraf dekhte hue bola,"Haan memsaheb aap araam se banaiye. Sasura ee baarish mein aur karna hi kaa hai. Thoda sa peena hai aur aap ki khabsurat haath se bana pakauda khana hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Offo Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye. Bas tareef hi karte rehte hain meri".



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita bhi muskurati huyi un dono mardon ko dekhne lagi. Ramu bhi Anita ko dekhne laga. Hariya Anita ko dekhte hue tauli ke upar se apne baye haath se lund ko masalte hue ek ghunt sharab peene laga. Anita bina sharm ke uske lund ke taraf dekhne ke baad karahi ke taraf dekhne lagi.



Anita kuchh seconds baad waapas Hariya ke taraf dekhi to woh ab dheere dheere apna lund tauli ke upar se sehla raha tha aur ab uske lund ka ubhar tauli ke upar se pata chal raha tha. Anita ki dil Hariya ke lund ke ubhar ko dekhkar dhadak gayi aur use dhyaan aaya ki woh aur Ramu underwear nahin pehne hain. Unke badan par sirf tauli hi lapeta hua tha.



Anita ek nazar Ramu ke taraf dekhi jo chup chal sharaab pee raha tha. Anita phir uske lund ke taraf bhi dekhi to payi ki woh lund masal nahin raha tha.



Anita waapas, Hariya ke lund ke taraf dekhkar uske chehre par dekhi to woh muskurakar bola,"Memsaheb mausam baahar ke hisaab se kharab hai magar ghar mein baithne se achha lag raha hai. Ee mausam mein peene ka mazaa hi alag aata hai aur aaj to saath mein aapke haath ka bana, pakauda bhi khane milega".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Haan Hariya ji iss mausam mein garma garam pakaude khane ka alag hi mazaa hai. Tel bhi garam ho gayi. Main pakaude talna shuru karti hoon".



Hariya aur Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita bhi muskurakar unhe dekhne ke baad pakaudo ko karahi mein rakhne lagi. Jitna pakauda ek saath tala ja sakta tha utna pakaude rakhkar woh khadi hokar intezaar karne lagi.



Kuchh seconds baad Anita ghumkar apne peeth ke taraf dekhne ka koshish karne lagi aur uski chehre par thodi pareshani bhi aa gayi.



Agle pal woh Hariya ka awaaz suni,''kaa hua memsaahab?Kauno pareshani hai kaa? ''.



Anita Hariya ko thoda pareshani se dekhte hue sofe ke taraf jaane lagi. Uski dayi haath mein besan aur bayi haath mein thoda bahot masala laga hua tha.



Woh apni haathon ko dono side mein thoda sa uthayi hui, jaise aurtein haath mein aata ya besan wagaira lage rehne par rakhti hai jisse unki kapde se haath satt kar unn par na lag jaye, sofe ke paas jaakar uske Hariya se boli,"Pata nahin Hariya ji achanak se mere peeth par kuchh rengte hue mehsus hone laga. Yeh pakaude karahi mein rakhte waqt hi aesa mehsus hone laga tha aue mujhe halki gudgudi hone lagibthi, magar main khud ko samabhal rakhi thi ab tak. Ab itni der se reng raha hai ki mujhe pareshani ho rahi hai."



Anita phir apne peeche dekhne ka koshish karti huyi boli,"Aesi jagah par hai ki mujhe to dikhai bhi nahin de raha".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb".



Agle pal Anita ghumkar apni nangi peeth Hariya ke taraf karti huyi boli,"Hariya ji zara aap dekhiye na kuchh hai kya?"



Anita jaise hi apni puri nangi gori peeth Hariya ke taraf ki Hariya ke saath saath Ramu ka bhi dil dhadak gaya aur dono ke lund mein phir se garam khoon daudne laga.



Hariya Anita ki peeth ko dekhne laga aur phir bola,"Ee sasura bahot chhota chinti reng raha hai"



Anita yeh sunnkar peeche gardan karti huyi boli,"To jaldi se hataiye na Hariya ji".



Agle pal Hariya Anita ki kamar se woh chinti apne do ungliyon se pakad kar hata diya. Anita gardan peeche ki huyi thi to use baye taraf Ramu bhi sofe par baitha dekh raha tha. Anita aakhon ke kone se dekhi ki Ramu Anita ki peeth dekhte hue apne lund ko tauli ke upar se masalte hue sharab pee raha tha. Anita ka dil yeh dekhkar dhadak gaya.



Hariya jab woh chinti hataya tab bhi Anita ko apni peeth par kuchh rengte hue mehsus hua to woh boli,"Hariya ji zara thoda upar dekhiye to. Lag raha hai wahan par bhi koi chinti hai".



Hariya waise hi sofe par tang phailaye sirf tauli phene araam se baitha hua tha aur Anita uske samne khadi apni nangi peeth use dikhakar chinti hatane ke liye bol rahi thi. Hariya upar ke taraf dekha to jahan uski blouse ki neechli dori bandhi thi wahan ek chhota chinti reng raha tha.



Hariya agle pal do ungliyon se uss chinti ko pakadne ka koshish kiya to woh chinti nikal kar Anita ki blouse ki dori ki knot mein ghus gayi.



Anita ghumkar puchhi,"Kya hua Hariya ji?"



Hariya upar Anita ki chehre par dekhkar bola,"U memsaheb sasura aapka blouse ka dori ka ganth mein ghus gawa. Itna chhota hai ki sasura tezi se ander ghus gawa. Ek minute hum dekhta hoon".



Anita yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilayi to Hariya Anita ki woh neeche ki dori ke ander ek ungli ghusakar thoda sa uthaya aur uske ander dekhne laga. Anita chup chap waise hi khadi thi. Ramu unn dono ko dekh raha tha.



Hariya dori ke ander se ungli nikalte hue bola,"Sasura gaanth ke ander ghus gawa hai. Dikhai nahin de raha".



Anita yeh sunnkar gardan ghumakar Hariya ke taraf thodi pareshani se dekhti huyi boli,"Uff ander to ab chubhne bhi laga hai".



Agle pal Anita Ramu ka awaaz suni,"Sasura kaat raha hoga uhan chhupka".



Anita Ramu ka awaaz sunnkar uske taraf dekhi to woh apna lund masalna bandh kar chuka tha magar baya haath tauli ke upar se lund par hi tha. Anita ko wahan pehle se thoda zyada uncha dikhai diya to woh samajh gayi ki uska lund thoda pehle se bada aur sakht ho gaya hoga. Yeh sochte hi uski dil dhadak gayi.



Anita apna dhyaan uske lund ke taraf se hatakar jawaab di,"Haan Ramu ji wahi lag raha hai"

Phir woh Hariya ko dekhti huyi boli,"Hariya ji use jaise bhi nikaliye. Bahot chubh rahi hai ab. Aese chhod dene se to kaat kaat kar mera bura haal kar degi yeh chinti".



Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhte hue bola,"Gaanth khol kar nikal dete hain memsaheb".



Anita jawaab mein boli,"Haan Hariya ji aur koi tareeqa bhi nahin hai. Agar knot mein ghus gayi hai to kholkar nikal dijiye".



Hariya agle pal Anita ki blouse ka sabse neechli dor ka ek hissa pakad kar khinch diya aur woh knot khul gayi. Dono taraf ke dor mein se jo Hariya pakad ke khola tha woh uske haath mein tha aur dusri dor Anita ki peeth se neeche ke taraf latak gayi. Anita bina sharm ke waise hi khadi rahi. Use kuchh ehsaas hua to woh aankhon ke kone se Ramu ke lund ke taraf dekhi to use woh masalte hue payi.



Anita Ramu ke lund ke taraf dekhne lagi wahin Hariya jo dor uske haath mein tha us par chinti dekhne laga to ek jagah use woh dor se hi chipka dikhai diya.



Hariya use dekhkar bola,"Mil gawa sasura".



Yeh sunnkar Anita ki dhyaan waapas peeche Hariya ke taraf gayi to dekhi ki woh uski bayi dori pakde hue dusre haath se chinti ko pakadne ka koshish kiya to woh haath se phir nikal kar dori ke shuruaat (jahan woh blouse se stitch kiya gaya tha) ke taraf bhagne lagi.



Hariya yeh dekhkar bola,"Abe sasura kahan bhaag raha hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya se puchhi,"Kya hua Hariya ji?".



Hariya chinti par dhyaan rakhe bola,"Ee, sasura ander ke taraf bhaag raha hai".



Anita pareshani ke bhao se boli,"Offo. Hariya ji jaldi pakadiye use".



Agle pal Anita Ramu ka awaaz suni,"Abe memsaheb theek bol rahi hai. Jaldi se pakad. Kahin idhar udhar ghus jayega to pakadna mushqil hoga".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhi to woh bhi khisakte hue Hariya ke bagal mein aa gaya aur apna mobile ka flashlight on karke Anita ki peeth ke taraf kar diya.



Agle pal chinti Anita ki blouse aur dori ke stitching wale jagah par dori se utar kar Anita ki peeth par aa gayi aur ander blouse ke taraf ghusne ka koshish karne lagi. Anita jab waapas apni jism par chinti ko rengte hue mehsus ki to pareshani se boli,"Hariya ji pakadiye jaldi, chinti meri blouse ke paas tak aa gayi hai".



Agle pal Hariya dekha ki woh chinti Anita ki blouse ke side mein ghus gayi. Hariya tezi se iss baar Anita ki dori ke shuruaat ke paas ka blouse ka hissa pakda aur thoda utha diya to chinti Anita ki side mein jahan uski chunchi shuru hoti thi wahan tak jaa chuki thi aur woh uski chunchi ke ubhar par chadhne ki koshish karne lagi.



Anita ki chunchi ki shuruaat jahan uski ubhar uth rahi thi wahan nanga dekh Ramu ka lund tauli ke ander phadphada gaya. Hariya ke saath bhi aesa hi hua magar woh khud ko kabu kiye Anita ki chunchi ke shuruat wale bhaag par ungli rakh kar aakhir kaar use pakad hi liya.



Anita bhi jab chinti ko apni chunchi par chadhte hue mehsus ki to thodi chintit ho gayi ki use ab ghar mein jaa kar blouse utarkar dekhna padega. Lekin Hariya jab uski chunchi ki shuruat mein apna mota khurdura ungliyon ko rakhkar chinti ko pakad liya to use raahat mili.



Ramu yeh dekhkar bola,"Sasura pakda gawa ee dafa".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhi to use apni peeth ke taraf dekhte hue payi.



Agle pal Hariya chinti ko Anita ki chunchi ke shuruaat se uthane laga to Anita ki munh se "aaahhh" nikal gayi.



Yeh sunnkar Ramu aur Hariya dono use dekhte hue ek sath puchhe,"Kaa hua memsaheb"



Anita thodi pareshani se unhe dekhti huyi boli,"Woh aap jab chinti ko hata rahe the to ek baar mujhe kaat liya. Aesa laga jaise sui chubh gayi ho".



Yeh sunte hi Ramu aur Hariya dono ka nazar waapas Anita ki chunchi ki shuruat tak gaya. Agle pal Hariya apna dusre haath ka index finger Anita ki chunchi ki shuruaat par rakhkar dheere se malte hue bola,"Ab aapko thoda araam milega".



Anita chup chap waise hi khadi rahi aur Hariya ka baat sunnkar use dekhkar muskurane lagi.



Hariya Anita ki chunchi ki shuruati bhaag ko ek haath ki ungli se sehlate hue dusre haath ki ungli use dikhate hue bola,"Yehi sasura tha jo memsaheb ko pareshan kar raha tha".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Uff aakhirkar aapne pakad hi liya ise. Sach mein mujhe tang hi kar di thi isne to. Aakhir mein bhi itni jor se kaat li mujhe".



Ramu bhi Hariya ke ungli ke taraf dekhte hue bola,"Lekin sasura memsaheb ka peeth par kahan se aa gawa?"



Hariya chinti sofe ke peeche farsh par girakar bola,"Kahin se bhi aa gawa hoga sasura".



Phir woh Anita ki chunchi ki shuruat se haath hatakar uski peeth par lejakar uspar upar se lekar neeche tak phirate hue bola,"Ab itna chikna aur mulaayam peeth dekhkar aa gawa hoga kahin se. Sasura soch raha hoga ki chikna rasta hai to memsaheb ki peeth par dono race laga raha hoga".



Anita jo bina sharm ke Hariya ke saamne apni blouse ki ek dori khuli huyi peeth par latakte hone ke bawjud bhi khadi hokar uske haath ko apni peeth par rengte hue mehsus kar rahi thi woh uska baat sunnkar usi tarah besharmi se use dekhkar apni ankhein badi karke muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji".



Yeh sunnkar Hariya hasne laga to Anita bhi besharmi se muskurati huyi apni sir hilake Ramu ko dekhi to woh bhi Anita ki peeth dekhe muskura raha tha.



Hariya Anita ki peeth par phir se neeche uski gaand ke upar se lekar jahan uski dusri (beech ki) dori bandhi thi wahan tak haath phirate hue bola,"Aur nahin to kaa. Itna chikna aur mulayam peeth hai memsaheb ka. Sasura dono mazaa se race laga raha tha".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati rahi to Ramu bola,"To kaa memsaheb ka blouse ka woh dori tak race tha ka jo u sasura dusra chinti wahan pahunch kar ruka hua tha".



Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke Ramu ke taraf dekhi to woh muskura diya wahin Hariya hasne laga,"Hahaha".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Ramu ko dekhkae boli,"Ramu ji aap bhi".



Hariya agle pal hasi rokte hue bola,"Are memsaheb u jahan race khatam hota hai uka ka kehta hai"



Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Finish point".



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Haan memsaheb wahi. Sasura wahi samajh raha hoga chinti jaise Ramu bola".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Ramu ko dekhi to Hariya aage bola,"Aur jaise ee race khatam hote waqt beech se toot jaat hai waise hi aapka dori abhi khul gawa hai".



Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga,"Hahaha" to Anita bhi muskurakar boli,"Offo Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye" aur phir woh bhi Hariya ko dekhkar khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe".



Ramu bhi muskura raha tha. Anita khilkhilana bandh karke boli,"Ab Hariya ji race khatam ho gayi hai to finishing point ko waapas sahi kar dijiye".



Anita yeh bolkar khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe"



Hariya yeh sunnkar haste hue bola,"Haan memsaheb abhi theek kiye det hoon. Sasura kahin phir se chinti race lagane na aa jaye"



Anita yeh sunnkar khilkhilati rahi,"Hehehe Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye hehehehe Ohh my god sach mein".



Hariya bhi hasta hua Anita ki dono side ka dori pakad kar bandhne laga. Anita dori bandhwati hui khilkhila rahi thi,"hehehe".



Hariya dori bandhte waqt bola,"Offo kya khabsurat badan hai aapka memsaheb. Sach mein aap bahot khabsurat hain".



Anita yeh sunnkar khilkhilana bandh karke ek ada se phir se ghumkar Hariya ko dekhti huyi boli,"Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye. Kitni tareef karenge meri".



Hariya yeh sunnkar dori bandhne ke baad Anita ki peeth par phir se apna khurdura haath pherte hue bola,"Are memsaheb ab aap hai hi itni khabsurat to hum kaa kare. Yaqeen nahin hota to Ramu se puchhiye"



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhi to use khud ki nangi peeth ko upar se neeche tak gaur se dekhte hue payi. Anita phir apni nazar uske lund ke taraf le gayi to dekhi ki woh apna baya haath tauli ke upar se lund par rakhe dheere dheere masal raha tha jo dhyaan se dekhne mein hi samajh aata. Woh dekhi ki Ramu ke tauli mein ubhar pehle se aur bada ho gaya tha. Anita ka dil yeh dekhkar dhadak gaya.



Anita yeh Ramu ko dekh hi rahi thi ki Hariya Anita ki peeth par haath pherte hue aage bola,"Ee sasura Ramu ka to nazar hi nahin hatt raha hai aapki khabsurat badan se".



Ramu yeh sunnkar hadbada kar Anita ki jism se nazar hataya to Hariya has diya,"hahaha sasura tohar chori memsaheb pakad li".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ki taraf dekha to woh bina sharm ke muskurati huyi use dekh rahi thi. Ramu usko dekh kar bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb".



Agle pal Hariya bola,"Abe maafi kahe ko maang raha hai. Memsaheb ab hai hi itni khabsurat ki nazar to chala hi jayega. Wahi to hum bol raha hoon memsaheb ka lekin memsaheb maan nahin rahi hai. Tohra ka kehna hai".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ki taraf dekha to Hariya Anita ki peeth par phir se haath pherte hue bola,"Ee dekh kitni khabsurat hai memsaheb. Hai na".



Anita chup chap waise hi khadi rahi aur dono mardon ko apni jism ko gande nazar se dekhne de rahi thi. Hariya to uski peeth ko pura maze se sehla raha tha aur Anita bina sharam ke waise hi khadi thi. Use ab dheere dheere phir se apni jawani aur khoobsurti par garv hone laga tha khaaskar Ramu ko apna lund masalte hue dekhkar.



Ramu Anita ki jism ko dekhkar bola,"Haan sach mein memsaheb bahot khabsurat hai".



Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki peeth ko sehlatw hue use dekhkar bola,"Dekhiye memsaheb Ramu bhi wahi bol raha hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar ek ada se boli,"Offo aap dono bhi na. Bas meri tareef hi karne ke mood mein hai. Ab bas bhi kijiye. Main chalti hoon nahin to pakaude jal jayenge".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi apni gaand ko matkati huyi kitchen ke taraf jaane lagi to Hariya bola,"Are jalne dijiye memsaheb. Aap u pakoda sw zyada garam hai to sasura jalega hi".



Anita tab tak kitchen mein pahunch chuki thi aur Hariya ka baat sunnkar besharmi se un dono ke taraf dekhkar apni aankhein badi karke boli,"Hariya ji".



Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga "hahaha" aur Ramu bhi muskura diya. Anita bhi "Hariya ji" bolne ke baad khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe offo aap log bhi bahot funny hain. Aaj to mujhe hasane ka mann bana liya hai aap logo ne".



Hariya yeh sunnkar haste raha"Hahaha" aur phir muskurate hue tauliye ke upar se apna lund masalte hue bola,"Are memsaheb jab humlogan ke paas phann wala cheez hai to phanni to honge hi"



Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke lund ke taraf dekhi jahan tauli ke ander ka ubhar pehle se thoda aur bada ho gaya tha aur Hariya usi par baaya haath rakhe masal raha tha.



Anita phir Ramu ke lund ke taraf dekhi to woh bhi tauli ke upar haath rakha dheere dheere apna lund masal raha tha. Uska bhi ubhar pehle se bada ho gaya tha.



Anita yeh dekhne ke baad pakaude karahi se nikalne lagi to Hariya aage bola,"aur memsaheb jab thoda waqt beeta rahe hain to haste muskurate hue bitaye. Aap hum dono ka itna khyaal rakh rahi hai to hum log bhi koi kami kahe rakhe?Ka Ramu ka bolta hai".



Ramu bhi Hariya ko dekhkar bola,"Haan Hariya sahi" aur phir dono apna apna glass uthakar ek dusre se takrakar ek ghunt mein sab pee gaye.



Hariya phir Anita ko dekhkar puchha,"Memsaheb aapka ka kehna hai".



Anita muskurati huyi karahi se pakaude nikalkar tray mein rakhti huyi boli,"Haan Hariya ji sahi baat hai. Jab thoda bahot saath waqt beeta hi rahe hain to haste muskurate hi beetana chahiye aur aap dono to pure mood mein hai. Mujhe bhi itna hasa rahe hain. Aap dono ko enjoy karte dekh mujhe bhi achha lag raha hai. Aese mausam mein aur kya kar sakte hain".



Anita phir karahi mein talne ke liye aur pakode rakhti huyi boli,"Bas pakode ki kami thi woh bhi thoda sa tayyar ho gaya hai. Main lekar aati hoon".
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(12-11-2023, 02:43 PM)creamydelight Wrote: The bus incident? Was that written in that vein where the guy was an aggressor (which he definitely was) and Anita was at the recieving end? Because Ankit by himself did not surrender, it was only Anita who shut him up. Was Anita the victim there or willing participant? Because she also thought that sitting with such a person will be entertaining for the journey, instead of Ankit, who will just sit with earphones in his ears. Would like to know your views on that, i.e. in what frame of mind Anita was.. obviously there was also the thought from Anita that she did not want to make the situation more problems.

I take your suggestion of writing... But even a small story needs some discipline, which sadly, i find hard to have. That is why I admire writers who persist. Nonetheless, I will try.

I am not going to explain Anita's POV or rationale behind agreeing to sit next to that man because if I wanted I would have done that in that part of the story. I am talking from your POV as a reader. May be Anita agreed to let that man sit next to her because she understood that he is a dabang and an asli mard for not only desiring to sit next to her but also finding a way to do that, even if it meant forcingly taking away someone else's seat. May be she thought that an asli mard wanting to to sit next to a jawan aurat like her is only natural and therefore if he wanted to sit next to her then there was nothing wrong in it and a teenager shouldn't meddle in between and leave upto the adults to decide what is appropriate. 

Readers should make up their own assumptions and therein lies the eroticism. Trying to read someone's mind and what one will do next in an erotic situation is another thing that increases eroticism. 

Thanks for being an active reader of this story. Appreciate it.
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(12-11-2023, 06:47 PM)seansean007 Wrote: I am not going to explain Anita's POV or rationale behind agreeing to sit next to that man because if I wanted I would have done that in that part of the story. I am talking from your POV as a reader. May be Anita agreed to let that man sit next to her because she understood that he is a dabang and an asli mard for not only desiring to sit next to her but also finding a way to do that, even if it meant forcingly taking away someone else's seat. May be she thought that an asli mard wanting to to sit next to a jawan aurat like her is only natural and therefore if he wanted to sit next to her then there was nothing wrong in it and a teenager shouldn't meddle in between and leave upto the adults to decide what is appropriate. 

Readers should make up their own assumptions and therein lies the eroticism. Trying to read someone's mind and what one will do next in an erotic situation is another thing that increases eroticism. 

Thanks for being an active reader of this story. Appreciate it.

My first view on reading the update was on similar lines

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May be Anita agreed to let that man sit next to her because she understood that he is a dabang and an asli mard for not only desiring to sit next to her but also finding a way to do that, even if it meant forcingly taking away someone else's seat. May be she thought that an asli mard wanting to to sit next to a jawan aurat like her is only natural and therefore if he wanted to sit next to her then there was nothing wrong in it an
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I thought when you replied to my post that you had meant it in that "teaching a lesson" vein or aggressor - victim thing.

Diwali update is here!!! Thank you for the Diwali update!!! Good to know there's something to read when guests leave after festivities tonight!!!

Happy Diwali to you and to Anita!
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Ramu ko mat maza karne do seanbro ye galat assumption karwa raha hai aur story me maza bhi nhi aa raha galat tarique ke chechad pad ke wo bhi raj ke gher aane ke time pe
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Absolutely erotic and super kinky stuff!

Seansean ability to dive deep into not just microdetails but nano details.... is unbelievable!
Superb narration and description, as others said very much like screenplay

One thing i felt, updates 62 to 64 i wish were structured quite differenttly to updates 58 to 61.... because i feel events of episode 58 to 61 should have naturally made Hariya and Anita both longing for more of each other immediately....so maybe hariya would have tried going again to her home 0right next day or anita looking for hariya next day right after oiling episode.... wouldnhave felt more natural.....

So 62 to 64 with coincidental meetup with Hariya and ramu and then the events at home... seem abit disconnected / out of place with reference to hariya anita action their previous meeting at her home.....

But all in all very eager for next update..... we are getting closer!
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(13-11-2023, 02:43 PM)threshlegend Wrote: Absolutely erotic and super kinky stuff!

Seansean ability to dive deep into not just microdetails but nano details.... is unbelievable!
Superb narration and description, as others said very much like screenplay

One thing i felt, updates 62 to 64 i wish were structured quite differenttly to updates 58 to 61.... because i feel events of episode 58 to 61 should have naturally made Hariya and Anita both longing for more of each other immediately....so maybe hariya would have tried going again to her home 0right next day or anita looking for hariya next day right after oiling episode.... wouldnhave felt more natural.....

So 62 to 64 with coincidental meetup with Hariya and ramu and then the events at home... seem abit disconnected / out of place with reference to hariya anita action their previous meeting at her home.....

But all in all very eager for next update..... we are getting closer!
Party agree now that you point it out
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I think we are living in Anita's story. I don't know whether we can judge her character on the basis of what was she before her marriage and what is she becoming now. She has likings to all the things she hasn't encountered before her marriage, when she was living with "sophisticated" family and her upbringing to it. Where everyone would respect her boundaries and treat her respectively. The scenario would have been different if hariya would have been there in her life before her marriage. Maybe she is adventurous and hariya is the apt person to touch that part within her. You see, she doesn't flirt our give any attention directly to anyone, neither she is initiating the sexual tention or desires towards hariya also even after a lot has happened between them. For her it is done and dusted at that moment, she encounters, she lives in that moment fully and wham, it is over. If next day something will not happen, she wouldn't bother by that I guess. And because of this fact, I think I am able to see why the developments in the story happening. I was, like in the previous version, expecting the "thukai" development immediately after the oil messaged update but this didn't happened and instead we see the unexpected turnaround. I don't think so I'll be able to decode it, other than things I have noticed before.
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Slowly and steadily Anita is opening herself in the world of adultery adventure. But she is still hesitating like we can see she immediately threw underwears into the washroom after 1 or 2 minutes of inhaling the "ganda Gandhi".
Super kinky update.
I think ramu, like hariya is not confident enough to play and initiate anything. He like any other low class person trying to maintain the relationship between both the classes Anita and he comes from. But it is hariya who is opening him by directly complimenting Anita in the most sexiest and raunchiest way. It is also Anita, while she is aware of ramu being around her but she didn't mind playing and participating with that and when ramu also complimented her in the same way by saying "aapke saamne piyenge to Nasha dugna ho jayega" and also in the scane when hariya was helping her trying to remove the insect from her back. Ramu's character is also developing, the timid ramu is also coming out of his shell. He needs only encouragement by either Anita or hariya but But he will also open up eventually, I hope.
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UPDATE 65

Anita pakaude karahi mein talne ke liye rakhkar ek tong uthayi aur tray mein rakhe hue tale pakaudo ko tong se uthakar dusre tray mein rakhi aur uthakar apni gaand matkati huyi sofe ke taraf jaane lagi aur jhuk kar tray ko table par rakhne lagi. Ramu aur Hariya ka nazar Anita ki cleavage par tha.

Anita muskurati huyi tray ko table par rakhti huyi boli,"Yeh lijiye garma garam pakode".

Hariya muskurakar bola,"Thenku memsaheb".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"You're welcome"

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya aur phir pakodo ko dekhte hue bola,"Are ee sasura to jala hi nahin. Lag raha hai samajh gawa ki jalne se kuch ho fayeda nahin, memsaheb jitna garam to ho nahin sakega"

Anita yeh sunnkar phir se apni aankhein badi karke muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji offo".

Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga,"Hahaha" to Anita bhi apni sir hilakar muskurati rahi. Ramu bhi muskurane laga.

Anita phir boli,"Khakar bataiye na kaisa bana hai".

Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Haan memsaheb" aur woh pakaudo ke taraf haath badhate hue bola,"Aese aap banai hai to achha hi hoga. Itna pyaar se banai hain aap".

Anita yeh sunnkar bas muskurati rahi. Phir woh Ramu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji aap bhi khaiye na".

Ramu bhi "haan" mein sir hilaya aur glass mein rakha sharab ek ghunt mein pee gaya. Anita use dekhne lagi.

Hariya ek pakauda uthakar khane laga aur khate hue bola,"Waah memsaheb. Sach mein bahot tasty hai. Hum to bol hi rahe the ki aap banai hai to achha hi hoga, khaaskar jab itni pyaar se banai hain aap".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurane lagi. Ramu bhi tab tak ek pakoda lekar khane laga aur woh bhi bola,"Haan memsaheb bahot achha bana hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati rahi to Hariya bola,"Memsaheb aap bhi khaiye na".

Anita muskurati huyi apni hathon ke taraf ishara karke boli,"Hariya ji abhi main pakode banane mein lagi hoon. Baad mein kha lungi. Aap log khaiye".

Agle pal Hariya ek pakoda uthate hue bola,"Are memsaheb khaiye na. Ek taste karke to dekhiye".

Aue woh Anita ki taraf pakoda badhaya to Anita apni sir hilati huyi boli,"Offo Hariya ji. Khilakar hi manenge".

Aur Anita Hariya ke taraf jhuk gayi to Hariya uski munh mein pakoda rakh diya. Anita ke jhukne se uski chhoti blouse mein achhi khasi cleavage dikhne lagi. Ramu ka nazar wahin chala gaya. Hariya bhi Anita ki munh mein pakode daalkar uski cleavage dekhne laga. Anita uske saamne hi jhuki thi to woh uske nazar ke direction se samajh gayi ki woh uski cleavage dekh raha hai magar woh chup chap seedhi hokar pakoda khane lagi.

Hariya aur Ramu dono use dekhne lage to Anita aankhon se ishara ki ki woh dono bhi pakoda khaye. Hariya ek pakoda uthakar khane laga.

Anita pakoda khakar boli,"Haan Hariya ji bani to achhi hai. Chaliye mujhe khushi hai ki aap dono ko bhi pasand aaya".

Agle pal Ramu ek pakoda uthate hue bola,"Ek aur khaiye na memsaheb".

Anita Ramu ke taraf dekhkar uske paas jaati huyi boli,"Theek hai Ramu ji ek aur kha leti hoon nahin to aap bolenge ki Hariya ji ne khilaya to main kha li aur aapke khilane par nahin khai".

Ramu muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaheb aisan kauno baat nahin hai".

Anita muskurakar uske paas jaakar jhuk gayi to Ramu uski munh mein ek pakoda rakh diya. Phir se Ramu aur Hariya uski cleavage dekhne lage aur Anita un dono ka nazar dekhi ki kaise woh dono uski cleavage dekh rahe hain magar bina kuchh bole woh muskurakar khadi ho kar pakauda khane lagi.

Woh khadi huyi to Ramu uski kamar ke taraf dekhkar bola,"Memsaheb eehan thoda besan lag gawa hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni dayi kamar par dekhi to thoda besan laga hua payi. Agle pal woh Hariya ka awaaz suna,"Are lag gawa hai to ponchh dena. Memsaheb ka haath mein to pehle se besan laga hai to woh kaise ponchegi. Uhan khadi hai to tum hi ponch do".

Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya aur apna baaya haath se Anita ki kamar ko ponchhne laga. Woh pehli baar Anita ki jism chhu raha tha. Itni gori mulaayam aur chikni jism woh zindagi mein kabhi nahin chhua tha. Aesa lag raha tha jaise makhmal chhu raha ho.

Ramu ka dil dhadakne laga aur lund phadphadane laga Anita ki jism chhukar. Woh uski kamar ko baye haath se saaf karte hue daye haath se glass mein paani daalkar thoda sharab daala aur ek hi ghunt mein peekar upar Anita ki taraf dekha.

Anita chup chap pakode khati huyi Ramu ko hi dekh rahi th. Ramu uski kamar par nazar lejakar use ponchhte hue bola,"Sach mein memsaheb aap bahot khabsurat hai. Aapka kamar kitna chikna aur mulaayam hai".

Anita ki dil yeh sunnkar dhadak gayi. Woh samajh gayi ki Ramu par sharab ka thoda asar karne laga hai.

Ramu uski kamar saaf karke bola,"memsaheb saaf ho gawa".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Thank you Ramu ji".

Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Hariya bola,"Are hum to bol hi rahe the ki memsaheb ka peeth kitna khabsurat aur chikna hai. To kamar bhi to waisa hi hoga na. Sasura memsaheb ka peeth par haath rakhne se aisan lagat hai jaisan makhan par haath phisal raha ho".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Offo Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye. Yeh kuchh zyada hi tareef ho gaya. Itni bhi chikni nahin hai meri peeth".

Hariya bola,"Are to hum par yaqeen nahin hai to Ramu se bhi puchh lijiye".

Anita yeh sunne ke baad apni saree ke upar peeche kamar par haath mehsus karke udhar dekhi to Ramu ko wahan haath rakhe payi jo dheere dheere apna haath peeche uski kamar par pher raha tha.

Woh haath pherte hue bola,"Hariya sach hi bol raha hai memsaheb ki aapka peeth bahot chikna aur mulaayam hai. Memsaheb humne itna khabsurat badan sirf filmo mein hi dekha hai. Sach mein aap heroine jaisi khabsurat hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji aap aur Hariya ji ne aaj soch hi liya hai ki bas meri tareef hi karenge".

Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Are memsaheb tareef usi ka hota hai jo uke layaq hota hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Offo Hariya ji main to baaton mein aapse jeet hi nahin sakti. Baatein banana to koi aapse seekhe".

Hariya yeh sunnkar hansne laga,"Hahaha" to Anita bhi khilkhilane lagi "hehehe".

Ramu Anita ki kamar par haath pherte hue muskurane laga. Anita hasna bandh karke muskurati huyi un dono se boli,"Aap dono aur pakaude khaiye na. Abhi to aur tal rahi hoon main".

Hariya ek pakauda uthate hue bola,"Haan memsaheb" aur khane laga to Anita Ramu se boli,"Ramu ji aap bhi khaiye na. Aap dono to bas meri tareef hi mein lag gaye hai".

Ramu Anita ki peeth par haath pherte hue bola,"Memsaheb hum to kha hi raha hoon. Aap bhi khaiye na".

Anita use dekhkar muskura kar boli,"Aur pakode tal rahi hoon main. Jab pura tala jayega to main bhi khaungi. Aap log to peene baithe hain to aap log khaiye".

Ramu Anita ki peeth par haath pherte hue ek pakauda dusre haath se uthate hue Anita ke taraf badhate hue bola,"Are memsaheb hum log to kha hi raha hoon. Ek aap kha lijiye na".

Anita yeh sunnkar jhuk kar apni munh khol di aur Ramu uski peeth sehlate hue daye haath se uski munh mein pakauda rakh diya. Anita phir seedha khada hokar muskurati huyi khane lagi.

Ramu uski kamar sehlate hue ek pakauda khud bhi khane laga.

Anita yeh dekhne ke baad muskura kar boli,"Achha aap log khaiye main pakaude karahi se nikal kar aur pakaude laati hoon".

Hariya yeh sunnkar ek pakauda uthate hue bola,"Are memsaheb ek humre haath se bhi kha lijiye jaane se pehle".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Lag raha hai aap log sab pakaude mujhe hi khila denge".

Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga,"Hahaha" to Anita bhi khilkhilane lagi "hehehe" aur khilkhilati huyi Ramu ke paas khadi huyi hi Hariya ke taraf jhuk gayi to woh uski munh mein pakauda daalkar uski cleavage dekhne laga. Wahin Ramu ke chehre ke saamne Anita ki chunchi thi to woh uski peeth par haath pherte hue uski chunchi ki ubhar dekhne laga.

Anita phir seedhi hokar pakaude khati huyi boli,"Aap log khaiye main aati hoon". aur woh ghumkar gaand matkati huyi kitchen mein jaane lagi.

Hariya aur Ramu dono Anita ki gaand aur nangi peeth dekhkar apna lund masalne lage. Ramu Anita ki gaand ki thirkan dekhne laga. Haalanki uske mann mein Anita ke liye izzat thi magar ek mard hone ke naate woh Anita ki jism ke prati hawas bhi rakhne laga tha jiska apna ek alag jagah tha. Izzat apni jagah aur hawas apni jagah thi. Isliye woh Anita ki badan ko bhi gandi nazar se mauqa milne par ghurta tha, Hariya ke jaise. Hariya aur uske dono ke mann mein Anita ke liye izzat thi magar saath mein hawas bhi tha aur isliye Hariya ko dekhkar Ramu bhi Anita se ghulne laga tha aur khul kar tareef karne ke saath uski jism ko hawas se dekhne aur chhune bhi laga tha., lekin saath mein izzat bhi kar raha tha.

Anita kitchen mein jaakar pakaudo ko karahi mein ulat palat karne lagi. Kuchh der tak woh waise hi pakaude talne mein lagi rahi. Karahi ke pakode ko woh nikalkar tray mein rakh di aur phir dusra aur aakhiri round ke pakode talne ke liye karahi mein rakhne lagi.

Anita unn pakaudo ko karahi mein rakhkar tale hue pakaudo ke tray ko uthakar gaand matkati aur kamar lachkati huyi sofe ke paas gayi. Kyunki Ramu sofe ke baye taraf baitha tha jo ki kitchen se nazdeek tha, Anita usi ke paas jaakar jhuk kar tong se pakaudo ko table par rakhe tray mein daalane lagi.

Ramu Anita ki badan ko phir se ghurne laga, uski nangi kamar aur peeth, uski ubhri huyi gaand aur chunchiyan aur sapaat pet jisme gehri naabhi se chamakti huyi belly button ring latak rahi thi. Wahin Hariya Anita ki cleavage dekhne laga. Dono ka lund tauli ke ander phir se phadphadane laga aur dono hi uspar haath rakhkar dheere dheere masalne lage.

Anita pakaudo ko tray mein rakhne ke baad seedhi khadi hokar muskurakar unn dono ko dekhkar boli,"Khaiye aap log".

Woh dono "haan" mein sir hilakar pakauda uthane lage to Anita baari baari se dono ke lund ke taraf dekhi jahan ubhar dheere dheere bada ho raha tha aur woh dono uss par haath rakhe hue the.

Anita ek gehri saans lekar boli,"Aap dono khaiye main kitchen mein jaati hoon".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb aap bhi humre saath baithkar khaiye na. Sasura hum dono hi kha rahe hain aur aap kaam kar rahi hain".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji to kya hua? Aur wese bhi ab kitchen ka kaam khatam hi hone wala hai. Yeh akhri pakaude hain jo karahi mein hai. Uske baad main bhi free ho jaungi to aap logo ke saath baithkar khaungi".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Theek hai memsaheb" aur phir paani ke bottle se glass mein paani rakhne laga magar usme thoda hi paani tha.

Anita yeh dekhkar Hariya ke taraf jaati huyi boli,"Dijiye Hariya ji main dusra bottle laa deti hoon aur isme paani bharkar rakh deti hoon".

Anita yeh bolti huyi uske taraf gayi ki tabhi jor se badal garza aur bijli chamakne lagi. Anita khidkiyon ke sheeshe se baahar dekhti huyi boli,"Yeh baarish to lag raha hai rukega hi nahin".

Hariya aur Ramu bhi yeh sunnkar ghumkar khidki ke taraf dekha aur phir Hariya ghumkar Anita ki peeche se haath lejakar uski dayi side ke kamar par haath rakhkar sehlate hue upar usko dekhkar bola,"Itna achha mausam hai memsaheb. Aap bhi eehan humlog ke saath baithti to humka achha lagta. Jaldi se kaam khatam karke humlogan ke saath baithiye na. Aapse baat chit karke humlogan ko achha lag raha hai".

Anita besharmi se wahan khadi hokar Hariya ko apni kamar sehlate hue apna baat bolte dekh rahi thi. Jab woh baat pura kiya to Anita use dekhti huyi boli,"Bas Hariya ji 5 minute aur. Aaplog khaiye main kaam khatam karke aati hoon".

Hariya yeh bolkar apna haath Anita ki kamar se khiska kar peeche uski gaand par rakhkar dabate hue bola,"Theek hai memsaheb".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur table se bottle uthane lagi to rukkar muskurakar boli,"Offo main bhi na. Meri haathon mein besan lage hain iska dhyaan hi nahin tha"

Anita yeh bolkar khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe".

Hariya bhi Anita ki gaand dabate hue hasne laga,"Hahaha".

Ramu bhi muskurane laga. Anita kabhi use to kabhi Hariya ko dekhti huyi khilkhilati rahi,"Hehehe".

Hariya yeh dekhkar Anita ki gaand dabakar bola,"Waah memsaheb aap hasti bhi hai to khabsurat lagti hai, balki sasura hasi aapke wajah se khabsurat lagne lagta hai".

Anita khilkhilati huyi boli,"Hehehe Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye. Aap logo ne to mera itna tareef kar diya hai ki mujhe dhyaan bhi nahin tha ki mere haathon mein besan lage hue hai hehehe".

Hariya uski gaand dabate hue thoda apne paas khincha aur Anita bhi uska sath deti huyi khadi huyi hi thoda uske taraf khisak gayi.

Hariya uski gaand dabate hue pehle uske aankhon ke saamne Anita ki nangi pet aur kamar ko dekha phir upar uski chehre par dekhte hue gaand ko dabate hue hi bola,"Are memsaheb ka ho gawa jo aapko dhyaan nahin raha to. Hum aur Ramu jaisa marad hain na aaj aapka madad karne ke liye".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Hariya ko dekhne ke baad ek nazar Ramu ko dekhi jiska aankh dheere dheere laal ho raha tha peene se. Woh Anita ki badan ko dekhte hue baye haath ko tauli ke upar se apne lund par rakhe dheere dheere masal raha tha. Anita Hariya ke lund ke taraf dekhi to uska lund ka ubhar saaf pata chal raha tha kyunki woh wahan haath nahin rakhe tha. Woh ek haath se Anita ki gaand daba raha tha aur dusre se thode paani mein hi thoda sharab rakhkar pee raha tha.

Anita Hariya ke lund ke ubhar ko dekhne ke baad uske chehre ko dekhti huyi boli,"Haan Hariya ji"

Agle pal Hariya uthkar bottle uthate hue bola,"Chaliye memsaheb hum ee boyal lekar chalta hoon aur dusra botal lekar aa jaunga".

Agle pal Ramu bola,"Hariya ee bidi thoda chulha ke paas rakh dena? Ee bheeg kar naram ho gawa hai. Aag ka garmi se peene layaq ho jayega".

Anita kuchh bolti isse pehle Hariya bola,"are sasura pehle dena chahiye tha na. Itna der se chulha jal raha tha ab tak garam ho jaata".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko dekhkar Ramu ko dekhi to Hariya aage bola,"Sasura peeta hai to dimagh fuse ho jaata hai. Aur kauno cheez ka dhyaan hi nahin rehta tumka".

Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhi to uska aankh dheere dheere laal ho raha tha. Woh samajh gayi ki sharab ka asar ho raha hai.

Anita Hariya se boli,"Koi baat nahin Hariya ji. Beedi abhi bhi garam ho jayega".

Phir woh Ramu ko dekhkar muskurati huyi boli,"Meri tarah Ramu ji ko bhi hasi mazaak mein dhyaan nahin raha hoga. Ek to yeh barish ka mausam aur pakaude khane ke saath peene ka mazaa. Upar se itna hasa rahe hain aap dono to sabka dhyaan to hasne par aur khaane peene par hi hai".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ke bagal mein khada uski gaand dabate hue bola,"Haan ee baat to hai. Upar se sasura aapke jaisan itna khabsurat aurat saamne hai to sasura ka dhyaan koi aur cheez par kahan se hoga".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi to woh hasne laga,"Hahahah".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Bas bhi kijiye Hariya ji"

Agle pal woh Ramu ka awaaz suni,"Abe to tohra dhyaan bhi to memsaheb par hi hai"

Anita yeh sunnkar besharmi se khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe" aur Hariya ko dekhkar ek ada se boli,"Ramu ji ne to aapka bhi chori pakad liya Hariya ji hehehe".

Hariya bhi yeh sunnkar Anita ki gaand dabate hue hasne laga,"Hahaha".

Ramu bhi muskurane laga. Anita khilkhilati huyi boli,"Hehehe oh my god aap dono bhi na. Achha hai dono ek dusre ka chori pakad liye hehehe".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekha to woh bhi use dekhi. Hariya agle pal Anita ki gaand se uski kamar par haath lejakar sehlate hue Ramu se bola,"Are lekin ee mein ghalat ka hai. Haan hum dekhat hoon memsaheb ka aur humra dhyaan memsaheb par hi hai aur kahe na ho".

Anita yeh sunnkar khilkhilana bandh karke Hariya ko dekhi. Agle pal Hariya daye haath se Anita ki kamar sehlate hue baye haath ko uske taraf karke upar se neeche ishara karte hue bola,"Ee khabsurti dekh raha hai. Atna khabsurat badan, itna gora aur chikna jisam kauno heroine jaisa jab saamne hoga to dekhne ka mann kahe nahin karega. Hum marad hoon to aisan khabsurat aurat samne hoga to dekhunga hi. Ee mein chhupane ka kaa baat hai. Khabsurti ko dekhna aur tareef karne mein ka burai hai".

Ramy yeh sab sunte hue Anita ki jism ko dekhne laga. Wahin Anita bina sharm ke garv se wahan Hariya ke saath khadi thi. Use phir se apni khoobsurti par garv hone laga tha ki do mard kaise uski khoobsurti ki tareef kar rahe hain woh bhi bejhijhak.

Agle pal Ramu Hariya ko dekha to woh bola,"Are to hum bhi to wahin kar raha hoon. Ka hum marad nahin hoon jo humka memsaheb ka dekhne ka mann nahin karega. To sasura tum kahe bol rahe ho".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are to yehi baat bolna chahiye tha na pehle jab hum tum ka bol raha tha".

Anita besharmi se Hariya ke paas khadi huyi apni kamar par uska haath mehsus kar rahi thi woh bhi ek aur mard ke saamne. Uski chehre par garv ka bhao tha un do mardon ke munh se apni tareef sunnkar.

Agle pal Hariya Anita ki badan ke taraf phir se ishara karte hue bola,"Jab memsaheb itna khabsurat hai to bolo ki tum memsaheb ka khabsurat badan dekh rahe ho iss liye peene aur memsaheb ka khabsurat badan ko dekhne ke alawa tohra auro kauno cheez par dhyaan nahin hai. Ee to garav se bolna ka baat hai ki sasura atna khabsurat aurat jab saamne ho to sasura u namard hi hoga agar memsaheb ka ee khabsurat badan ko na dekhe".

Anita jo chup chap khadi garv se Hariya ka baat sunn rahi thi woh boli,"Offo Hariya ji ab chhoriye bhi yeh baat. Ghum phirkar aap log bas meri tareef hi karne lag rahe hain. Ab kitchen chaliye nahin to pakaude jal jayenge to aap bolne lagenge ki yahan aap aur Ramu ji meri tareef kar rahe the to pakaude yeh sunnkar udhar karahi mein jalne lage".

Anita yeh bolkar khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe"

Hariya yeh bhi yeh sunnkar Anita ki gaand par haath lejakar use dabate hue hasne laga,"Hahaha sahi baat".

Ramu bhi muskurane laga.

Anita Ramu ko dekhti huyu besharmi se apni gaand par Hariya ka haath mehsus kiye khilkhila rahi thi,"Hehehe ohh my god lag raha hai aaj ki shaam hasi rukne wali nahin hai uff hehehehe".

Phir woh Hariya ko dekhkar hasi rokti huyi boli,"Hariya ji ab chaliye bhi. Pakaude lekar aate hain phir jitna hasana ho hasate rahiyega hehehe"

Hariya Anita ko dekhkar uski gand dabakar haath uski kamar par lejakar bola,"Chaliye memsaheb"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji aap baithiye main aur Hariya ji pakaude aur paani lekar aate hain. Phir main bhi aap dono mardon ke saath baithkar pakaude khane ka maza lungi aur aap dono jitna dil kare hasate rahiyega mujhe".

Anita yeh bolkar phir khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe".

Ramu yeh sunnkar apne lund ko dheere se masalte hue "haan" mein sir hilaya to Anita khilkhilati huyi Hariya se boli,"Chaliye Hariya ji hehehe".

Hariya muskurakar bola,"Chaliye memsaheb" to Anita ghumkar gaand matkati huyi chalne lagi. Hariya uski kamar se haath nahin hataya aur na hi Anita use hatane ka ishara ki. Woh gaand matkati huyi chalne lagi aur Ramu Anita ki nangi peeth aur matakti gaand dekhne laga aur dekhte hue lund masalne laga. Phir uska dhyaan Anita ki kamar par rakhe Hariya ka haath par gaya aur woh glass mein jo thoda sa sharab tha woh uthakar pee gaya.
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