03-11-2023, 02:58 AM
Awesome update
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Adultery Maids Conspiracy
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03-11-2023, 02:58 AM
Awesome update
03-11-2023, 06:57 PM
How can you write sooooooooooo..... Erotic.....
Salutation to your writings...... Speechless..... But..... Waiting for continuation..... Desperately like..... Spruha....
03-11-2023, 09:03 PM
Excellent story..
Very hot.. good job man. Keep writing. Atleast try to post twice a week. We r waiting...for...
05-11-2023, 02:29 PM
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06-11-2023, 04:23 PM
Slow progress
08-11-2023, 01:05 AM
yes writer you're are slow, kindly hasten story a bit.
08-11-2023, 02:22 AM
The story is going at perfect pace and the writer is doing an excellent job.
Slow buildup and Then action is what will make this story great. If you force the Writer to hasten then it will kill the essence of the story. Bro You continue at your own speed. And If possible add some small incidents by random guys which will make the ladies more desperate for anna
08-11-2023, 11:45 AM
Great Build-up..
Anybody please suggest some threads similar to this.
08-11-2023, 06:58 PM
You are marvellous.....
Amazing...
08-11-2023, 06:59 PM
08-11-2023, 07:28 PM
11-11-2023, 03:38 PM
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11-11-2023, 03:43 PM
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11-11-2023, 04:04 PM
Wonderful.....
Great.... Build at your own pace..... Waiting.....
11-11-2023, 04:18 PM
Hello Author,
Can you have dialogues in English [or with English translation]. Full Hindi only dialogues are difficult to read OR understand. Unable to truly appreciate your hard effort when most of updated plot cant be read properly. You were adding translation earlier, why nothing this time? Sad
12-11-2023, 12:34 AM
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I eagerly waited for update and in the same time got disappointed as I didn’t understand due to Hindi.pls request to write in English or make translation
12-11-2023, 07:31 AM
Dear Author,
Please write in English or translate in English. If it is not possible, move this story to the Hindi section.
12-11-2023, 08:24 AM
Dear Author ,
You may have kept dialogues in Hindi for the conversation flow but if not providing translation, it is unreadable. This is English section - some amount of other languages can get in but not most of updates. Kindly move it to Hindi section and continue there if you have plans to do like this in posts ahead. A 100% true gem would be missing from English section but if most of updates are going to be in non-english, it makes no sense to keep it in here. Xossipy has dedicated English, Tamil, Malayalam, Telugu, Hindi, Punjabi and Bengali stories section. Thanks for understanding.
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