Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[Kinkpinkboy]

Fucking hell of an update, I remember reading this "calm before the storm" update in the previous version of this story and it was erotic as hell, I thought it cannot be better than this but Omfg what I have just read, Are you a human sean? How the fuck can you write something as erotic, sensual, which can make anyone cum without the proper sex part? I have always kept you in high regards of the writers, but this is something beyond the imagination. Keep it up mate, I can't wait to read the further supposedly "polished" development. This is the greatest update so far I have ever read anywhere. Thank you for your work.

[Ramukakalegend]

Super fabulous update..... erotic scenes and great flow of romance.
Also using the song to further turn anita on and Anita responding by swaying herbass for him...... kinky hot
Thanks alot

[val.coutinho]

Solid faadu update Sean bro...... Keep it coming hope there's more coming before Diwali.... Make it longer and more hotter update by the end of Diwali holidays....
Waiting eagerly.

[Vamp]

Bahut bahut garam aur kamuk kahaani

[abcturbine]

Speechless........eyes closed...... I am Hariyaaaaa....
Love you 'Dil se' for your writings

[Bulldozer]

Absolutely wonderful and mind blowing update ♥️

[Poly Sarkar]

Ekdum super duper hit update

[seansean007]

UPDATE 62

Agle din Shaam mein Anita ek jagah sadak ke kinare khadi thi aur auto ka intezaar kar rahi thi magar use ek bhi auto nazar nahin aa rahi thi.Wo pareshan dikh rahi thi aur kuchh samajh nahin aa raha tha ki woh kya kare ki tabhi use Hariya ek motor cycle par aata dikhai diya.

Anita Hariya ko dekh kar thodi raahat mehsus ki aur muskurane lagi aur kuchh seconds mein Hariya uske paas aakar ruk gaya.Motor Cycle Ramu chala raha tha aur Hariya peechhe baitha tha.

Anita ke paas aane se pehle Ramu Anita ko muskurata dekhkar sochne laga ki itni khoobsurat aurat use dekhkar kyun muskura rahi hai ki tabhi use dhyaan aaya ki woh Anita ko kahin dekha hai aur thoda sochne par yaad aaya use ki woh Hariya ke saath uske ghar mattress lekar gaya tha ki tabhi use peeche se Hariya ka awaaz sunai diya,"Abe Ramu gaadi rok to".

Yeh baat bolte tak Ramu lagbhag wahan pahunch chuka tha jahan Anita khadi thi.

Motor cycle rukne par Anita ko khushi huyi aur woh muskurane lagi ki tabhi Hariya Anita ko dekhkar poochha,"are memsaahab aap eehaan?".

Anita Hariya aur Ramu ko dekhkar thodi khushi aur thodi pareshani ke bhao chehre par laakar boli,"are Hariya ji aur Ramu ji aap dono. Wo main ek kaam se aayee thi magar auto ka ata pata hi nahin hai".

Hariya bhi thodi pareshani se dekhte hue Anita ko bola,"are memsaahab kya kijiye iss shaher mein aesa hi hota hai. Kabhi hadd se zyada jam ke kaaran jaldi gaadi nahin milti to kabhi log maar peet karke jhamela kar lete hain aur gaadi ko bandh karke rakh dete hain. Aaj ek auto wale aur ek bus conductor mein jhamela hua hai kuchh der pehle usi karan sab gaadi bandh kar diye hain. Public ka kaa hoga ee sochte nahin hai sasura log".

Anita yeh sunkar aur pareshan hokar boli,"Oh My God. Phir main ghar kaise jaungi. Ghar nazdeek bhi nahin ki main paidal jaa sakun upar se meri pair mein abhi moch bhi aa gayee hai thodi der pehle. Hey bhagwan main kya karun ab yahan to taxi bhi nahin milti hai".

Hariya muskurate hue bola,"are memsaahab humra hote hue ab aapko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hain. Hum log hoon to" aur yeh bolte hue wo motor cycle se utar gaya aur phir paas mein gutkha thook kar phir se apna haath se munh pochhte hue bola,"memsaahab ab aapko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Aap humare saath motor cycle par chaliye aapko ghar tak pahuncha denge".

Anita yeh sunkar muskura kar boli,"Achha hua aap sahi time par aa gaye nahin to mushqil ho jaati. Aap har jagah meri madad karne kahin na kahin se pahunch hi jaate hain".

Yeh sunkar Hariya muskurate hue bola,"are memsaahab hum aapko pehle din kahe the na ki hum bare kaam ke aadmi hain".

Anita yeh sunkar muskurai aur phir Ramu ke taraf dekhi to use apni nabhi ke taraf dekhte hue payi jisse woh samajh gayi ki woh uski nabhi se latki huyi belly button ring dekh raha hai.

Anita phir Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Hariya ji aese hum teen aadmi motor cycle par baithenge to security officer fine kar dega na. Meri wajah se aap dono ko pareshani ho jayegi. Agar fine hoga to main de dungi".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb eehan ka phain hoga. Ee kauno aapka Dilli jaisa bada sheher thode hai. Eehan sab chalta hai. Bas aapko kauno pareshani nahin hona chahiye".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji mujhe kya pareshani hogi. Mujhe to ek tarah se khushi hai ki aap".

Aur phir woh Ramu ke taraf dekhkar aage boli,"aur Ramu ji yahan aa gaye nahin to main aaj yahin reh jaati hehehe".

Anita ki baat sunnkar Hariya bhi has diya,"Hahaha". Anita jab Ramu ko dekhi to use apni chunchiyon ko dekhte hue payi magar bina sharm ke apni baat bolkar hasne lagi.

Hariya haste hue bola,"Are memsaheb hum logan ke hote hue aap kahe eehan rahenge. Bhagwaan bhi jaanta hai ki aapko hum jaisan marad ka zarurat hai abhi tabhi to bhej diya hum logan ko".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur muskrati huyi boli,"Hariya ji woh to theek hai lekin aesa lag raha hai Ramu ji ko yahan rukna achha nahin lag raha hai. Woh shayad jahan aap dono ko jaana hai seedha wahan jaana chahte hain".

Agle pal Anita Ramu ka baat suni jo uski chunchi se nazar hatakar uski chehre par dekhte hue bola,"Are memsaheb waisan baat nahin hai. Humka bhi khusi hai ki aisan zarurat ka mauqa par hum aapka kaam aa sake. Hum bhula nahin hoon ki hum jab Hariya ke saath aapke ghar aaye the to aap kitna achha se pesh aayi thi humare saath aur bakhshish bhi diye the".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"To aapko yaad bhi hai ki aap mere ghar aaye the. Jitna serious hokar aap mujhe dekh rahe the mujhe to aesa lag raha tha ki aapko main yaad bhi nahin hungi".

Ramu yeh sunnkar halka sa muskura kar bola,"Are nahi memsaheb u baat nahin hai".

Agle pal Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb ee aisan hi hai. Har waqt aise hi rehta hai".

Aur phir thoda dheere se bola,"Aur abhi to sasura ka peene ka time hai to peene ka soch raha hoga".

Ramu yeh sunnkar Hariya se bola,"Abe kaa bol raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurane lagi. Wahin Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Abe ka ho gaya. Memsaheb kauno anjaan thode hai jo sharma raha hai. Aur aese bhi memsaheb kitni achhi hai yeh to tum ka bhi pata hai. To memsaheb se sach kya chhupana".

Ramu yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya to Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji ab Ramu ji ko yeh pasand nahin hai to chhor dijiye. Unka apna niji mamla hai".

Phir woh Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji aese main bata deti hoon ki aap peete bhi hain to usme koi burai nahin hai. Aap adult hai, aapki marzi aap jo kare".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Sunn liya. Beqaar mein sasura chinta kar raha tha ki memsaheb ka sochegi. Abe memsaheb jitni khabsurat hai utni hi dil ki achhi aur samajhdaar bhi hai. Tohre baare mein kuchho ghalat nahin sochegi".

Hariya ke munh se apni khoobsurti ki phir se tareef sunnkar Anita muskurati huyi sir hilane lagi jaise bolna chah rahi ho ki kuchh bhi ho jaye Hariya ji meri tareef hi karenge. Phir woh Hariya ka baat sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji main kyun ghalat sochungi aapke baare mein. Hum sab yahan adult hain. Umar se bade hain hum sab. Yeh to samajhne ki baat hai ki din bhar mehnat karke shaam mein peekar aap aur Hariya ji apni thakaan mitate honge"

Hariya yeh sunnkar Ramu se bola,"Sunn liya memsaheb kitni samajhdaar hain"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Ab chaliye chalte hain. Meri wajah se aur der na ho jaye. Aap logo ko araam ki zarurat hogi".

Ramu jawaab mein bola,"chaliye memsaahab shaam ho gayee hai andhera bhi ho raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar ek kadam aage badhi to ladkhada gayi. Hariya uski haath pakad kar sambhalte hue bola"are sambhal kar memsaahab".

Anita uska haath pakadti huyi khud ko sambhalkar boli,"wo thodi der pehle moch aayee thi pair mein isliye thoda chalna mushqil ho raha hai".

Hariya ek haath se Anita ki bayee hath pakda aur dusri haath uski gaand par rakh kar sahara dete hue use motorcycle par baithate hue bola,"Aap araam se beech mein baithiye memsaheb. Hum peeche se sahara dunga aapko.

Anita yeh saree pehni thi to isliye wo motorcycle par sideway baith gayi.

Anita ke baithne ke baad Hariya uske peechhe usse chipak kar baith gaya. Anita yeh dekhkar thodi aur aage khisak gayi jisse Hariya achhe se baith sake. Aesa karne se Anita ki dayi chunchi ka side wala bhaag Ramu ke peeth se satt gaya. Ramu ko jab yeh ehsaas hua to uska dil dhadak gaya aur badan aur lund mein ajeeb sa maze ka ehsaas hua.

Peeche se Hariya bhi Anita se chipak kar baith gaya jisse uski bayi chunchi ka side ka bhaag Hariya ke seene se satt gayi aur Hariya ka lund bhi pant ke upar se Anita ki bayi jangh se satt gaya. Anita bhi uske lund ko apni jangh par mehsus kar paa rahi thi.

Hariya phir Anita ki baayi haath pakad kar apne daye taraf se motorcycle ke peechhe pakda diya aur phir apna baya haath se uski nangi kamar ko pakad kar bola,"memsaahab ab aap araam se baithiye. Aap mehfuj hai aese,girne ka darr nahin".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko dekhkar muskurai. Dono ke chehre ke beech sirf kuchh inches ke hi faasle the aur aese mein Hariya ke munh se gutkha aur sharab ka gandh Anita ko mahek rahi thi. Saath hi Hariya ke shareer se uske paseene aur uske shirt se sharab ki mishran wali tez durgandh usko mahek rahi thi.

Use yaad aaya ki aesi durgandh jab woh daal,aata chawal yeh sab lekar uske ghar aaya tha aur woh usse chipak kar uske lund ki maalish kar rahi thi tab bhi aa rahi thi magar aaj uske paseene ki durgandh kaafi tez thi kyunki abhi shaam tha aur Hariya ka badan din bhar ki mehnat mazduri se paseene se bheega hua tha. Yahan tak ki uska shirt aur pant par bhi paseena sukhne se kahin kahin safed lakeer ban gayi thi. Yehi haal Ramu ke shirt aur pant ka bhi tha aur uske badan se bhi paseene aur sharab ki tez durgandh aa rahi thi.

Anita ki naak mein unn dono mazdur mardon ke beech chipak kar baithne se unke paseene ki tez durgandh jaa rahi thi magar use ghinn nahin aa rahi thi balki ulta ek mazaa sa lag raha tha usko. Woh ulta tez saans lekar unke durgandh lene ki koshish ki.

Hariya Anita ko araam se baithne ki baat bolne ke baad bola,"chalo Ramu gadi chalao".

Anita dayee haath apne god mein rakhi thi. Motorcycle jaise hi chali Anita ka balance bigadne se thodi aage ke taraf, matlab apni dayi taraf jhatke se Ramu ke badan se puri chipak gayi aur uske munh se "ouch" nikal gayi.

Ramu ko Anita jaisi khoobsurat aurat ke munh se "ouch" sunnkar bhi achha laga magar phir agle pal Hariya ka awaaz suna,"Abe Ramu araam se chala".

Ramu jawaab mein bola,"Haan Hariya theek hai".

Phir woh motorcycle chalate hue hi saamne aaine mein Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb".

Anita ki baal motorcycle chalne se hawa mein udne lagi thi. Woh dayi haath se apni baal ko kaan ke peeche karti huyi boli muskurakar aaine mein hu Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Itha ho hi jaata hai".

Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita bhi use aaine mein dekhkar muskurati rahi. Agle pal Ramu bola,"Memsaheb agar aapko kauno pirablam nahin hai to aap apna daya haath se humka pakad lijiye".

Hariya bhi yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb Ramu ko pakad lijiye aapko belens banane mein madad milega".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Sach mein aap dono ko mera kitna khyaal hai".

Phir woh apni dayi haath aage lejakar Ramu ke pant ke thoda upar uske shirt ke upar se pet se hote hue uske baye kamar ko pakad li. Hariya bhi apna daya haath peeche Anita ki kamar par rakh diya.

Ab situation yeh tha ki Anita Ramu aur Hariya ke neeche sideways baithi thi aur apni dayi haath Hariya ke daye side se hote hue peeche lejakar motorcycle pakdi thi jisse uski bayi chunchi aur Hariya ke seene ke beech koi rukawat nahin thi aur uski bayi mulayam chunchi Hariya ke seene se side se dabi huyi thi.

Wahin Hariya ka lund pant ke upar se hi Anita ki bayi jangh se sata hua tha aur Anita apni jaangh par uske lund ke ubhar ko mehsus kar paa rahi thi.

Hariya apna baaya haath Anita ki pet par rakhe use sehla raha tha aur daya haath uski gaand ke upar nangi kamar par rakhe wahan sehla raha tha.

Anita apni dayi haath aage lejakar Ramu ka daya kamar pakdi thi aur uski kalai Ramu ke shirt ke upar se uske pet par tha. Aesa karne se uski dayi chunchi aur Ramu ke peeth ke beech kuchh nahin tha aur uski dayi chunchi Ramu ke peeth se sati huyi side se dabi huyi thi. Dekha jaye to uski dono badi chunchiyan side se dono mardon ke kathor seene aur peeth se dabi huyi thi.

Anita Ramu ka kamar pakad kar aaine mein dekhti huyi boli,"Ramu ji ummeed karti hoon ki aapko koi pareshani nahin ho rahi hai mera haath rakhne se".

Ramu motorcycle chalate hue aaine mein Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Are memsaheb pareshani kaisan. Motorcycle par aese side mein ghumkar baithne se to aise pakad kar hi belens milta hai".

Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Thank you Ramu ji".

Ramu yeh sunnkar halka sa muskurakar bola,"Aap bas araam se baithiye memsaheb".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to Hariya bola,"Ab theek hai memsaheb. Ab thoda jhatka lagega bhi to aap ko pareshani nahin hogi".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Pareshani kaise hogi Hariya ji. Peeche se aap apne majbut haathon se mujhe pakde hue hain aur aage se main Ramu ji ka majbut badan pakdi huyi hoon. Aap dono jaise majbut mardon ke beech baithkar pareshani ho aesa ho hi nahin sakta".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Aisan baat hai to thoda test kar let hain humlog apna majbuti".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko muskurati huyi dekhi aur agle pal woh Ramu se bola,"Ramu thoda achanak se jhatka dena to".

Ramu kuchh seconds aese hi motorcycle chalane ke baad achanak se break lagaya to Anita jor se Ramu ka kamar pakad li aur Hariya apna baaya aur daya haath ko Anita ki kamar ki dayi taraf karke jor se pakad liya.

Aesa hone se Anita ko jhatka nahin laga bas achanak break lagne ae lay mein Ramu thoda sa aage khisak gaya, itna ki samajh nahin aye kyunki Anita uske kamar ko jor se pakdi huyi thi aur uski bayi haath motorcycle ke peeche pakdi huyi thi. Wahin Hariya ke jor se pakde hone se Anita bhi nahin khiski aur Anita ke aage hone se Hariya bhi nahin khiska. Teeno majbuti se apne seat par dante rahe. Bas lay ke kaaran unke badan ka upri bhag thoda aage ke taraf jhuka.

Aage halka sa jhukne ae Anita ki dono chunchiyan Hariya ke seene aur Ramu ke peeth ke beech dab gayi. Jab achanak ruka to Anita ki munh se halki cheekh nikli thi "aaaahhh" aur unka upar ka badan jaise hi aage ke taraf thoda jhuk kar seedha hua Anita ki hasi chhut gayi,"Hehehe".

Anita ko hasta dekh Hariya bhi hasne laga magar Ramu bas halka muskurate raha. Anita ki chunchiyan un dono mardon ke beech dabi huyi thi magar use isse koi farq nahin pad raha tha aur woh khilkhilakar has rahi thi.

Woh hasi control karke boli,"Aap dono bhi na sach mein".

Agle pal Ramu ka awaaz aaya,"Memsaheb hum aur Hariya taaqat mein pass hue ki phel"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi aage aaine mein Ramu ko dekhti huyi boli,"Pass woh bhi pure 100 number se".

Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita ko apni bayi chunchi par haath mehsus hua. Woh yeh mehsus karke bayi ghumkar Hariya ke taraf dekhi jo uski bayi badi chunchi ko muthhi mein jitna bhar sakta tha utna bharte hue bola,"Agar hum aapko aur achhe se pakde hote to ee thoda aage bhi nahin jhukti aap".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi to Hariya uski chunchi dabate hue muskuraya aur agle pal Anita Ramu ka awaaz suni,"Are to sahi se pakadna chahiye tha na memsaheb ko".

Ramu Anita ki chunchi par Hariya ka haath nahin dekh sakta tha. Woh bas Hariya ka baat ka jawaab dete hue bol raha tha.

Anita Ramu ka baat sunnkar apni ankhein badi ki to Hariya uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are theek hai ab achhe se pakad liye hoon memsaheb ko.".

Anita bas apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi aue besharmi se muskura rahi thi. Hariya muskurakar Anita ko dekhte hue uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Ab memsaheb ko achhe se pakad liya hoon hum. Tum tezi se gaadi chalao Ramu, bahot door jaana hai".

Rami agle pal gaadi ko aage badhaya aur halka sa jhatka phir diya. Anita jor se Ramu ka kamar phir se pakad li aur Hariya uski bayi chunchi ko jor se dabaye hue tha. Anita phir se halka sa cheekhi,"Aaahhh" aur khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi apne mutthi mein pakda hua tha aur woh khilkhila rahi thi. Usko khilkhilata dekh Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabate hue hasne laga.

Ramu motor cycle chalate hue aaine mein Anita ko hasta dekh bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb iss baar jaan bujh kar hi aesa kiye hum. Soche ki ek aakhri baar aapko hasa de".

Anita khilkhilati huyi aaine mein Ramu ko dekhkar ek ada se boli,"Hehehe koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Ab to mujhe bhi koi darr nahin hai. Aap aur Hariya ji jaise majbut mardon ke beech baithkar ab darr kis baat ka".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Aesa baar baar chalana to sasura theek nahin hai. Magar memsaheb ko achha lag raha hai to ek baar aur aesa karke achhe se gaadi chala Ramu".

Ramu kuchh seconds baad phir waise hi jhatka diya to Anita phir se Ramu ka kamar jor se pakdi khilkhilane lagi. Hariya bhi uski chunchi ko jor se dabaye hue tha.

Ramu Anita ko ek baar aaine mein khilkhilate huw dekh normal tareeqe se motorcycle chalane laga wahin Anita khilkhilati huyi boli,"Hehehe oh my god aap dono bhi sach mein bahot funny hai hehehehe".

Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabaye hue haste hue bola,"Hahaha hum dono phanni hai kyunki hum dono ke paas phanwala cheez hai memsaheb".

Hariya yeh bolkar apne lund ke taraf aakhon se ishara kiya. Anita khilkhilati huyi Hariya ka baat sunti huyi uske taraf dekh rahi thi aur Hariya jab apne lund ke taraf ishara kiya to Anita besharmi se apni jangh se sate Hariya ke lund ke ubhar ko dekhi aur dekhkar khilkhilana bandh karke apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi aur apna sir hilakar muskurati huyi saamne dekhne lagi.

Ramu aaine mein Anita ko muskurate dekh muskurakar bola,"ek aakhri baar humre taraf se memsaheb aapko hasa deta hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ab bas bhu kijiye Ramu ji. Aap dono to mujhe hasa hasa kar pet mein dard kar denge".

Agle pal Anita ko Hariya ka awaaz sunai diya,"Are memsaheb kuchho nahin hoga. Ek aakhri baar bas".

Anita yeh sunnkar khud ko mentally tayyar kar li aur Ramu kuchh seconds baad phir se jhatka diya jisse Anita ki munh se cheekh nikki,"Aaahh" aur phir uski dayi chunchi Ramu ke seene se dab gayi aur bayi chunchi Hariya apne mutthi mein bharkar dabaye hue tha. Anita iske bawjud besharmi se khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe" aur Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabaye has raha tha "hahaha".

Anita Hariya ko hasta dekh khilkhilati huyi boli,"Ohh my god" aur phir khilkhilati huyi saamne aaine mein Ramu ko muskurate hue dekhne lagi.

Anita jo padhi likhi, behad hi khoobsurat, model aur actress jitni khoobsurat thi aur ameer ghar ki shaadi shuda aurat thi woh besharmi se do anpadh ganwar majdur jinke kapde par paseene se kahin kahin safed dhabbe ho gaye the aur jinke badan se paseene aur desi sharab ki gandh aa rahi thi unke beech motorcycle par baithi ek ke peeth se apne chunchi dabti huyi aur dusre ke haath se apni dusri chunchi masalwati huyi puri behayayi aur besharmi se khilkhilati huyi apne ghar ja rahi thithi, jaise koi rundi apne customer ke saath unka bistar garam karne ya koi badchalan aurat apne yaaron ke saath rangreliyaan manane jaa rahi ho.

[Hellybelly]

Welcome back sean...nice to read 2 update after a long period..hope everything will be go on at same speed, the way hariya has rubbed and anita in second turn massage his dick from back is unparalleled and hot af..but I wonder when a character like jeetu will enter to put some spark in story..hariya is there and he'll have some fun but deep down we all know that audacious jeetu is now needed in story. Plz consider this

[seansean007]

Welcome back sean...nice to read 2 update after a long period..hope everything will be go on at same speed, the way hariya has rubbed and anita in second turn massage his dick from back is unparalleled and hot af..but I wonder when a character like jeetu will enter to put some spark in story..hariya is there and he'll have some fun but deep down we all know that audacious jeetu is now needed in story. Plz consider this

I have said it earlier and saying it again for the second time,"Please read the very first post of this thread". Hope this time you get your answer. Thanks.

[Chandan]

you're the best 

[Hellybelly]

I have said it earlier and saying it again for the second time,"Please read the very first post of this thread". Hope this time you get your answer. Thanks.

Gotcha...I believe in your plans...now just waiting for diwali week dhamaka

[dragonslair]

UPDATE 62

Agle din Shaam mein Anita ek jagah sadak ke kinare khadi thi aur auto ka intezaar kar rahi thi magar use ek bhi auto nazar nahin aa rahi thi.Wo pareshan dikh rahi thi aur kuchh samajh nahin aa raha tha ki woh kya kare ki tabhi use Hariya ek motor cycle par aata dikhai diya.

Anita Hariya ko dekh kar thodi raahat mehsus ki aur muskurane lagi aur kuchh seconds mein Hariya uske paas aakar ruk gaya.Motor Cycle Ramu chala raha tha aur Hariya peechhe baitha tha.

Anita ke paas aane se pehle Ramu Anita ko muskurata dekhkar sochne laga ki itni khoobsurat aurat use dekhkar kyun muskura rahi hai ki tabhi use dhyaan aaya ki woh Anita ko kahin dekha hai aur thoda sochne par yaad aaya use ki woh Hariya ke saath uske ghar mattress lekar gaya tha ki tabhi use peeche se Hariya ka awaaz sunai diya,"Abe Ramu gaadi rok to".

Yeh baat bolte tak Ramu lagbhag wahan pahunch chuka tha jahan Anita khadi thi.

Motor cycle rukne par Anita ko khushi huyi aur woh muskurane lagi ki tabhi Hariya Anita ko dekhkar poochha,"are memsaahab aap eehaan?".

Anita Hariya aur Ramu ko dekhkar thodi khushi aur thodi pareshani ke bhao chehre par laakar boli,"are Hariya ji aur Ramu ji aap dono. Wo main ek kaam se aayee thi magar auto ka ata pata hi nahin hai".

Hariya bhi thodi pareshani se dekhte hue Anita ko bola,"are memsaahab kya kijiye iss shaher mein aesa hi hota hai. Kabhi hadd se zyada jam ke kaaran jaldi gaadi nahin milti to kabhi log maar peet karke jhamela kar lete hain aur gaadi ko bandh karke rakh dete hain. Aaj ek auto wale aur ek bus conductor mein jhamela hua hai kuchh der pehle usi karan sab gaadi bandh kar diye hain. Public ka kaa hoga ee sochte nahin hai sasura log".

Anita yeh sunkar aur pareshan hokar boli,"Oh My God. Phir main ghar kaise jaungi. Ghar nazdeek bhi nahin ki main paidal jaa sakun upar se meri pair mein abhi moch bhi aa gayee hai thodi der pehle. Hey bhagwan main kya karun ab yahan to taxi bhi nahin milti hai".

Hariya muskurate hue bola,"are memsaahab humra hote hue ab aapko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hain. Hum log hoon to" aur yeh bolte hue wo motor cycle se utar gaya aur phir paas mein gutkha thook kar phir se apna haath se munh pochhte hue bola,"memsaahab ab aapko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Aap humare saath motor cycle par chaliye aapko ghar tak pahuncha denge".

Anita yeh sunkar muskura kar boli,"Achha hua aap sahi time par aa gaye nahin to mushqil ho jaati. Aap har jagah meri madad karne kahin na kahin se pahunch hi jaate hain".

Yeh sunkar Hariya muskurate hue bola,"are memsaahab hum aapko pehle din kahe the na ki hum bare kaam ke aadmi hain".

Anita yeh sunkar muskurai aur phir Ramu ke taraf dekhi to use apni nabhi ke taraf dekhte hue payi jisse woh samajh gayi ki woh uski nabhi se latki huyi belly button ring dekh raha hai.

Anita phir Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Hariya ji aese hum teen aadmi motor cycle par baithenge to security officer fine kar dega na. Meri wajah se aap dono ko pareshani ho jayegi. Agar fine hoga to main de dungi".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb eehan ka phain hoga. Ee kauno aapka Dilli jaisa bada sheher thode hai. Eehan sab chalta hai. Bas aapko kauno pareshani nahin hona chahiye".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji mujhe kya pareshani hogi. Mujhe to ek tarah se khushi hai ki aap".

Aur phir woh Ramu ke taraf dekhkar aage boli,"aur Ramu ji yahan aa gaye nahin to main aaj yahin reh jaati hehehe".

Anita ki baat sunnkar Hariya bhi has diya,"Hahaha". Anita jab Ramu ko dekhi to use apni chunchiyon ko dekhte hue payi magar bina sharm ke apni baat bolkar hasne lagi.

Hariya haste hue bola,"Are memsaheb hum logan ke hote hue aap kahe eehan rahenge. Bhagwaan bhi jaanta hai ki aapko hum jaisan marad ka zarurat hai abhi tabhi to bhej diya hum logan ko".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur muskrati huyi boli,"Hariya ji woh to theek hai lekin aesa lag raha hai Ramu ji ko yahan rukna achha nahin lag raha hai. Woh shayad jahan aap dono ko jaana hai seedha wahan jaana chahte hain".

Agle pal Anita Ramu ka baat suni jo uski chunchi se nazar hatakar uski chehre par dekhte hue bola,"Are memsaheb waisan baat nahin hai. Humka bhi khusi hai ki aisan zarurat ka mauqa par hum aapka kaam aa sake. Hum bhula nahin hoon ki hum jab Hariya ke saath aapke ghar aaye the to aap kitna achha se pesh aayi thi humare saath aur bakhshish bhi diye the".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"To aapko yaad bhi hai ki aap mere ghar aaye the. Jitna serious hokar aap mujhe dekh rahe the mujhe to aesa lag raha tha ki aapko main yaad bhi nahin hungi".

Ramu yeh sunnkar halka sa muskura kar bola,"Are nahi memsaheb u baat nahin hai".

Agle pal Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb ee aisan hi hai. Har waqt aise hi rehta hai".

Aur phir thoda dheere se bola,"Aur abhi to sasura ka peene ka time hai to peene ka soch raha hoga".

Ramu yeh sunnkar Hariya se bola,"Abe kaa bol raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurane lagi. Wahin Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Abe ka ho gaya. Memsaheb kauno anjaan thode hai jo sharma raha hai. Aur aese bhi memsaheb kitni achhi hai yeh to tum ka bhi pata hai. To memsaheb se sach kya chhupana".

Ramu yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya to Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji ab Ramu ji ko yeh pasand nahin hai to chhor dijiye. Unka apna niji mamla hai".

Phir woh Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji aese main bata deti hoon ki aap peete bhi hain to usme koi burai nahin hai. Aap adult hai, aapki marzi aap jo kare".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Sunn liya. Beqaar mein sasura chinta kar raha tha ki memsaheb ka sochegi. Abe memsaheb jitni khabsurat hai utni hi dil ki achhi aur samajhdaar bhi hai. Tohre baare mein kuchho ghalat nahin sochegi".

Hariya ke munh se apni khoobsurti ki phir se tareef sunnkar Anita muskurati huyi sir hilane lagi jaise bolna chah rahi ho ki kuchh bhi ho jaye Hariya ji meri tareef hi karenge. Phir woh Hariya ka baat sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji main kyun ghalat sochungi aapke baare mein. Hum sab yahan adult hain. Umar se bade hain hum sab. Yeh to samajhne ki baat hai ki din bhar mehnat karke shaam mein peekar aap aur Hariya ji apni thakaan mitate honge"

Hariya yeh sunnkar Ramu se bola,"Sunn liya memsaheb kitni samajhdaar hain"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Ab chaliye chalte hain. Meri wajah se aur der na ho jaye. Aap logo ko araam ki zarurat hogi".

Ramu jawaab mein bola,"chaliye memsaahab shaam ho gayee hai andhera bhi ho raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar ek kadam aage badhi to ladkhada gayi. Hariya uski haath pakad kar sambhalte hue bola"are sambhal kar memsaahab".

Anita uska haath pakadti huyi khud ko sambhalkar boli,"wo thodi der pehle moch aayee thi pair mein isliye thoda chalna mushqil ho raha hai".

Hariya ek haath se Anita ki bayee hath pakda aur dusri haath uski gaand par rakh kar sahara dete hue use motorcycle par baithate hue bola,"Aap araam se beech mein baithiye memsaheb. Hum peeche se sahara dunga aapko.

Anita yeh saree pehni thi to isliye wo motorcycle par sideway baith gayi.

Anita ke baithne ke baad Hariya uske peechhe usse chipak kar baith gaya. Anita yeh dekhkar thodi aur aage khisak gayi jisse Hariya achhe se baith sake. Aesa karne se Anita ki dayi chunchi ka side wala bhaag Ramu ke peeth se satt gaya. Ramu ko jab yeh ehsaas hua to uska dil dhadak gaya aur badan aur lund mein ajeeb sa maze ka ehsaas hua.

Peeche se Hariya bhi Anita se chipak kar baith gaya jisse uski bayi chunchi ka side ka bhaag Hariya ke seene se satt gayi aur Hariya ka lund bhi pant ke upar se Anita ki bayi jangh se satt gaya. Anita bhi uske lund ko apni jangh par mehsus kar paa rahi thi.

Hariya phir Anita ki baayi haath pakad kar apne daye taraf se motorcycle ke peechhe pakda diya aur phir apna baya haath se uski nangi kamar ko pakad kar bola,"memsaahab ab aap araam se baithiye. Aap mehfuj hai aese,girne ka darr nahin".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko dekhkar muskurai. Dono ke chehre ke beech sirf kuchh inches ke hi faasle the aur aese mein Hariya ke munh se gutkha aur sharab ka gandh Anita ko mahek rahi thi. Saath hi Hariya ke shareer se uske paseene aur uske shirt se sharab ki mishran wali tez durgandh usko mahek rahi thi.

Use yaad aaya ki aesi durgandh jab woh daal,aata chawal yeh sab lekar uske ghar aaya tha aur woh usse chipak kar uske lund ki maalish kar rahi thi tab bhi aa rahi thi magar aaj uske paseene ki durgandh kaafi tez thi kyunki abhi shaam tha aur Hariya ka badan din bhar ki mehnat mazduri se paseene se bheega hua tha. Yahan tak ki uska shirt aur pant par bhi paseena sukhne se kahin kahin safed lakeer ban gayi thi. Yehi haal Ramu ke shirt aur pant ka bhi tha aur uske badan se bhi paseene aur sharab ki tez durgandh aa rahi thi.

Anita ki naak mein unn dono mazdur mardon ke beech chipak kar baithne se unke paseene ki tez durgandh jaa rahi thi magar use ghinn nahin aa rahi thi balki ulta ek mazaa sa lag raha tha usko. Woh ulta tez saans lekar unke durgandh lene ki koshish ki.

Hariya Anita ko araam se baithne ki baat bolne ke baad bola,"chalo Ramu gadi chalao".

Anita dayee haath apne god mein rakhi thi. Motorcycle jaise hi chali Anita ka balance bigadne se thodi aage ke taraf, matlab apni dayi taraf jhatke se Ramu ke badan se puri chipak gayi aur uske munh se "ouch" nikal gayi.

Ramu ko Anita jaisi khoobsurat aurat ke munh se "ouch" sunnkar bhi achha laga magar phir agle pal Hariya ka awaaz suna,"Abe Ramu araam se chala".

Ramu jawaab mein bola,"Haan Hariya theek hai".

Phir woh motorcycle chalate hue hi saamne aaine mein Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb".

Anita ki baal motorcycle chalne se hawa mein udne lagi thi. Woh dayi haath se apni baal ko kaan ke peeche karti huyi boli muskurakar aaine mein hu Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Itha ho hi jaata hai".

Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita bhi use aaine mein dekhkar muskurati rahi. Agle pal Ramu bola,"Memsaheb agar aapko kauno pirablam nahin hai to aap apna daya haath se humka pakad lijiye".

Hariya bhi yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb Ramu ko pakad lijiye aapko belens banane mein madad milega".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Sach mein aap dono ko mera kitna khyaal hai".

Phir woh apni dayi haath aage lejakar Ramu ke pant ke thoda upar uske shirt ke upar se pet se hote hue uske baye kamar ko pakad li. Hariya bhi apna daya haath peeche Anita ki kamar par rakh diya.

Ab situation yeh tha ki Anita Ramu aur Hariya ke neeche sideways baithi thi aur apni dayi haath Hariya ke daye side se hote hue peeche lejakar motorcycle pakdi thi jisse uski bayi chunchi aur Hariya ke seene ke beech koi rukawat nahin thi aur uski bayi mulayam chunchi Hariya ke seene se side se dabi huyi thi.

Wahin Hariya ka lund pant ke upar se hi Anita ki bayi jangh se sata hua tha aur Anita apni jaangh par uske lund ke ubhar ko mehsus kar paa rahi thi.

Hariya apna baaya haath Anita ki pet par rakhe use sehla raha tha aur daya haath uski gaand ke upar nangi kamar par rakhe wahan sehla raha tha.

Anita apni dayi haath aage lejakar Ramu ka daya kamar pakdi thi aur uski kalai Ramu ke shirt ke upar se uske pet par tha. Aesa karne se uski dayi chunchi aur Ramu ke peeth ke beech kuchh nahin tha aur uski dayi chunchi Ramu ke peeth se sati huyi side se dabi huyi thi. Dekha jaye to uski dono badi chunchiyan side se dono mardon ke kathor seene aur peeth se dabi huyi thi.

Anita Ramu ka kamar pakad kar aaine mein dekhti huyi boli,"Ramu ji ummeed karti hoon ki aapko koi pareshani nahin ho rahi hai mera haath rakhne se".

Ramu motorcycle chalate hue aaine mein Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Are memsaheb pareshani kaisan. Motorcycle par aese side mein ghumkar baithne se to aise pakad kar hi belens milta hai".

Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Thank you Ramu ji".

Ramu yeh sunnkar halka sa muskurakar bola,"Aap bas araam se baithiye memsaheb".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to Hariya bola,"Ab theek hai memsaheb. Ab thoda jhatka lagega bhi to aap ko pareshani nahin hogi".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Pareshani kaise hogi Hariya ji. Peeche se aap apne majbut haathon se mujhe pakde hue hain aur aage se main Ramu ji ka majbut badan pakdi huyi hoon. Aap dono jaise majbut mardon ke beech baithkar pareshani ho aesa ho hi nahin sakta".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Aisan baat hai to thoda test kar let hain humlog apna majbuti".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko muskurati huyi dekhi aur agle pal woh Ramu se bola,"Ramu thoda achanak se jhatka dena to".

Ramu kuchh seconds aese hi motorcycle chalane ke baad achanak se break lagaya to Anita jor se Ramu ka kamar pakad li aur Hariya apna baaya aur daya haath ko Anita ki kamar ki dayi taraf karke jor se pakad liya.

Aesa hone se Anita ko jhatka nahin laga bas achanak break lagne ae lay mein Ramu thoda sa aage khisak gaya, itna ki samajh nahin aye kyunki Anita uske kamar ko jor se pakdi huyi thi aur uski bayi haath motorcycle ke peeche pakdi huyi thi. Wahin Hariya ke jor se pakde hone se Anita bhi nahin khiski aur Anita ke aage hone se Hariya bhi nahin khiska. Teeno majbuti se apne seat par dante rahe. Bas lay ke kaaran unke badan ka upri bhag thoda aage ke taraf jhuka.

Aage halka sa jhukne ae Anita ki dono chunchiyan Hariya ke seene aur Ramu ke peeth ke beech dab gayi. Jab achanak ruka to Anita ki munh se halki cheekh nikli thi "aaaahhh" aur unka upar ka badan jaise hi aage ke taraf thoda jhuk kar seedha hua Anita ki hasi chhut gayi,"Hehehe".

Anita ko hasta dekh Hariya bhi hasne laga magar Ramu bas halka muskurate raha. Anita ki chunchiyan un dono mardon ke beech dabi huyi thi magar use isse koi farq nahin pad raha tha aur woh khilkhilakar has rahi thi.

Woh hasi control karke boli,"Aap dono bhi na sach mein".

Agle pal Ramu ka awaaz aaya,"Memsaheb hum aur Hariya taaqat mein pass hue ki phel"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi aage aaine mein Ramu ko dekhti huyi boli,"Pass woh bhi pure 100 number se".

Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita ko apni bayi chunchi par haath mehsus hua. Woh yeh mehsus karke bayi ghumkar Hariya ke taraf dekhi jo uski bayi badi chunchi ko muthhi mein jitna bhar sakta tha utna bharte hue bola,"Agar hum aapko aur achhe se pakde hote to ee thoda aage bhi nahin jhukti aap".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi to Hariya uski chunchi dabate hue muskuraya aur agle pal Anita Ramu ka awaaz suni,"Are to sahi se pakadna chahiye tha na memsaheb ko".

Ramu Anita ki chunchi par Hariya ka haath nahin dekh sakta tha. Woh bas Hariya ka baat ka jawaab dete hue bol raha tha.

Anita Ramu ka baat sunnkar apni ankhein badi ki to Hariya uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are theek hai ab achhe se pakad liye hoon memsaheb ko.".

Anita bas apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi aue besharmi se muskura rahi thi. Hariya muskurakar Anita ko dekhte hue uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Ab memsaheb ko achhe se pakad liya hoon hum. Tum tezi se gaadi chalao Ramu, bahot door jaana hai".

Rami agle pal gaadi ko aage badhaya aur halka sa jhatka phir diya. Anita jor se Ramu ka kamar phir se pakad li aur Hariya uski bayi chunchi ko jor se dabaye hue tha. Anita phir se halka sa cheekhi,"Aaahhh" aur khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi apne mutthi mein pakda hua tha aur woh khilkhila rahi thi. Usko khilkhilata dekh Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabate hue hasne laga.

Ramu motor cycle chalate hue aaine mein Anita ko hasta dekh bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb iss baar jaan bujh kar hi aesa kiye hum. Soche ki ek aakhri baar aapko hasa de".

Anita khilkhilati huyi aaine mein Ramu ko dekhkar ek ada se boli,"Hehehe koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Ab to mujhe bhi koi darr nahin hai. Aap aur Hariya ji jaise majbut mardon ke beech baithkar ab darr kis baat ka".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Aesa baar baar chalana to sasura theek nahin hai. Magar memsaheb ko achha lag raha hai to ek baar aur aesa karke achhe se gaadi chala Ramu".

Ramu kuchh seconds baad phir waise hi jhatka diya to Anita phir se Ramu ka kamar jor se pakdi khilkhilane lagi. Hariya bhi uski chunchi ko jor se dabaye hue tha.

Ramu Anita ko ek baar aaine mein khilkhilate huw dekh normal tareeqe se motorcycle chalane laga wahin Anita khilkhilati huyi boli,"Hehehe oh my god aap dono bhi sach mein bahot funny hai hehehehe".

Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabaye hue haste hue bola,"Hahaha hum dono phanni hai kyunki hum dono ke paas phanwala cheez hai memsaheb".

Hariya yeh bolkar apne lund ke taraf aakhon se ishara kiya. Anita khilkhilati huyi Hariya ka baat sunti huyi uske taraf dekh rahi thi aur Hariya jab apne lund ke taraf ishara kiya to Anita besharmi se apni jangh se sate Hariya ke lund ke ubhar ko dekhi aur dekhkar khilkhilana bandh karke apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi aur apna sir hilakar muskurati huyi saamne dekhne lagi.

Ramu aaine mein Anita ko muskurate dekh muskurakar bola,"ek aakhri baar humre taraf se memsaheb aapko hasa deta hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ab bas bhu kijiye Ramu ji. Aap dono to mujhe hasa hasa kar pet mein dard kar denge".

Agle pal Anita ko Hariya ka awaaz sunai diya,"Are memsaheb kuchho nahin hoga. Ek aakhri baar bas".

Anita yeh sunnkar khud ko mentally tayyar kar li aur Ramu kuchh seconds baad phir se jhatka diya jisse Anita ki munh se cheekh nikki,"Aaahh" aur phir uski dayi chunchi Ramu ke seene se dab gayi aur bayi chunchi Hariya apne mutthi mein bharkar dabaye hue tha. Anita iske bawjud besharmi se khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe" aur Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabaye has raha tha "hahaha".

Anita Hariya ko hasta dekh khilkhilati huyi boli,"Ohh my god" aur phir khilkhilati huyi saamne aaine mein Ramu ko muskurate hue dekhne lagi.

Anita jo padhi likhi, behad hi khoobsurat, model aur actress jitni khoobsurat thi aur ameer ghar ki shaadi shuda aurat thi woh besharmi se do anpadh ganwar majdur jinke kapde par paseene se kahin kahin safed dhabbe ho gaye the aur jinke badan se paseene aur desi sharab ki gandh aa rahi thi unke beech motorcycle par baithi ek ke peeth se apne chunchi dabti huyi aur dusre ke haath se apni dusri chunchi masalwati huyi puri behayayi aur besharmi se khilkhilati huyi apne ghar ja rahi thithi, jaise koi rundi apne customer ke saath unka bistar garam karne ya koi badchalan aurat apne yaaron ke saath rangreliyaan manane jaa rahi ho.

this update seems like a dream come true from hariya from the earlier update. The slow burn and the conversation getting more and more open and raw is apparent now. As hariya and anita inch closer to their goal of ultimate pleasure the process of going there is the usp here. Anita getting acquainted and comfortable with ramu being naughty and even flirting with him is something new and gives rise to hopes of him having a bigger role. You are all good for a long story and we hope as a reader and fan that this will continue and see its rightful end (although many wont ever want it to end).

[Kinkpinkboy]

As the last paragraph of the update mentions that she is behaving like a "badchalan" aurat, Is it time that we say she is, isn't she? But I would love to add that she is not only "badchalan" but she is also "chalu" aurat. She might not be aware of that but considering her over "frankly" Ness with the men like hariya and ramu is testament of that. She is a player who very well knows that what does she actually desire and acts freely and challenges the "dabang" men by being loke that.

One more good update from you sean, I was so engrossed in reading and that I was thinking that Anita's hand will slip towards the ramu's "lauda" and she hold it tightly, in one of the naught break play and then ramu and Anita's story will start simultaneously. I was hoping for it alas, next time I'm the future.

I think and one important improvement this storytelling can make is, by describing what Anita's attire is actually in detail and also what hariya and ramu immediately thought after looking at her. That would be awesome scenario to read, what hariya thinks of Anita as a person, that we as a reader would love to read I guess, according to me at least.
After all of these actions, I am really hoping that we will read the ever anticipated update about the "thukai" between Anita and hariya, considering it almost at the end before the beginning after reading the 2nd last update. Cannot wait to read that.

All the best for the next update. Waiting...

[seansean007]

As the last paragraph of the update mentions that she is behaving like a "badchalan" aurat, Is it time that we say she is, isn't she? But I would love to add that she is not only "badchalan" but she is also "chalu" aurat. She might not be aware of that but considering her over "frankly" Ness with the men like hariya and ramu is testament of that. She is a player who very well knows that what does she actually desire and acts freely and challenges the "dabang" men by being loke that.

One more good update from you sean, I was so engrossed in reading and that I was thinking that Anita's hand will slip towards the ramu's "lauda" and she hold it tightly, in one of the naught break play and then ramu and Anita's story will start simultaneously. I was hoping for it alas, next time I'm the future.

I think and one important improvement this storytelling can make is, by describing what Anita's attire is actually in detail and also what hariya and ramu immediately thought after looking at her. That would be awesome scenario to read, what hariya thinks of Anita as a person, that we as a reader would love to read I guess, according to me at least.
After all of these actions, I am really hoping that we will read the ever anticipated update about the "thukai" between Anita and hariya, considering it almost at the end before the beginning after reading the 2nd last update. Cannot wait to read that.

All the best for the next update. Waiting...

Thanks for the detailed feedback. I usually don't put what the males think of Anita in words but try to put it across through their gaze. How they look at Anita also shows what they think of her without putting it explicitly in words. If I start putting that in words then the story will lose a little bit of mystery and eroticism. 

Also since most of the readers are males, I leave it upto their imagination on what they want to think of Anita if they are in place of a particular male with whom Anita is having an encounter or who is looking at her. This is the very reason I constantly ask readers to put comments on what they think of Anita or her behaviour in a particular update. I think if the readers engage themselves more in the discussion and openly put across their thoughts of her and whether it reminds them of any particular incident or woman in real life then the story will become more interesting and erotic as it will connect with readers lives. Readers should definitely call out their take on Anita, her character and her behavior. You did this very well in this feedback by openly calling out what you think of her and her character and I am sure while describing her character you must have got a sense of pleasure as well because you described her the way you think about her without holding yourself back. That's what I look forward to from the readers. 

As far as Hariya is concerned he obviously tells Anita what he thinks of her openly, her beauty, her sexiness, how her swaying ass makes his cock hard, etc. 

Hope I was able to justify the update. I will also keep the improvement points in mind and try to keep improving the story. Thanks a lot for being such a wonderful and engaging reader. Hope you keep enjoying the story.

[Brownboy7171]

Bhai Anita ki thukai mat karna because wo badchalan aurat nahi hai aur ramu ko unme enter mat kar bas hariya tak hi simit rakho aur chechad tak hi rakho usme he aur chechad badao sex mat karwao

[seansean007]

Before readers start making assumptions about the direction in which the story may move in future, I would request them to have patience for the next 3-4 updates. Till then just comment on the particular update without discussing the direction in which the story might move. I know where to take the story and where to place a particular event. Thanks.

[Kgngff]

Sean bhai , story mast hy. Just thoda sa aur controlled/realistic ho skta kya? Mtlab ek ache ghar k aurat ka ish tarah triple load me.... .. ap samaj skte ho . Jismani vukh to honge bhai pr aise moments me anita k taraf se kafi hesitation ya total avoidance hota toh..... ....
Anyway its ur story... go ahead

[seansean007]

UPDATE 63

Anita usi tarah hasti khilkhilati huyi Hariya aur Ramu ke beech motorcycle par unse chipki baithi apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi thi. Hariya uski bayi chunchi pura raste masalte raha aur Anita ek baar bhi use apna haath uski chunchi se hatane ke liye nahin boli.



Shaam ka waqt tha aur Ramu highway se hote hue ek gali se Anita ke ghar ke taraf gaya jidhar logo aur gadiyon ka aana jaana nahin tha to koi dekhne wala nahin tha ki Anita ki chunchi koi daba raha hai shayad isi kaaran se Anita Hariya ka haath apni chunchi se hatane ke liye ishara nahin ki ya boli nahin.



Anita ki ghar se 2-3 minute ki doori par halki halki baarish hone lagi aur ghar pahunchte pahunchte baarish tez ho gayi. Anita baarish tez hota dekh boli,"Ohh no. Yeh baarish to tez ho gayi"



Hariya motorcycle se jaldi se utarte hue bola,"Ee to achha hua ghar pahunch gaye nahin to itna tez baarish mein raaste par mushqil ho jaata".



Anita bhi yeh sunnkar "Haan Hariya ji" boli to Hariya uske taraf haath badhate hue bola,"Aaiye memsaheb".



Anita Hariya ka haath pakad kar motorcycle se utar gayi to Hariya bola,"Chaabhi dijiye memsaheb hum jaldi se ee lohe ka gate khol deta hoon".



Anita jaldi se apni bag se chabi lekar Hariya ko di to woh gate kholkar bola,"Aaiye memsaheb hum jaldi se aapko ander chhor deta hoon nahin to aap bheeng jaiyega".



Anita aage badhi to Hariya use chabhi dekar Ramu se bola,"Tum ruko Ramu hum memsaheb ko jaldi ander chhod kar aata hoon".



Anita yeh sunnkar boli,"Hariya ji baarish tez ho gayi hai. Aap dono abhi kahan jayenge. Aap log bhi chaliye ander".



Ramu yeh sunnkar bola,"Are nahin memsaheb hum aapki pareshani nahin badhana chahte. Aap jaiye".



Anita yeh sunnkar ghumkar Ramu ke taraf dekhkar narazgi se boli,"Kaisi baat kar rahe hain Ramu ji. Main saath aai to aap logo ko pareshani nahin huyi aur aap dono thoda der yahan ruk jayenge to mujhe pareshani ho jayegi".



Phir woh Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Hariya ji aap hi samjhaiye na Ramu ji ko. Itni baarish mein aap dono jayenge to pura bheeng jayenge aur tabiyat kharab ho jayegi"



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Abe Ramu memsaheb theek bol rahi hai. Chal jab tak baarish nahin rukta hum dono yahin ruk jaata hoon".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ki bheegi badan ko dekhne laga. Uski chhoto blouse uski chunchiyon se chipak chuki thi aur uski cleavage mein paani ghus rahi thi. Anita Ramu ko apni badan ghurte hue dekh boli,"Jaldi chaliye Ramu ji nahin to aur bheeg jaiyega"



Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya to Hariya Anita ki haath pakde ander ghar ki taraf dauda. Ramu peeche se motorcycle lekar ander gaya aue uska nazar daudte waqt Anita ki gaand par tha.



Bheegne ke kaaran Anita ki saree uski gaand ki daraar mein ghoos gayee thi aur uski dono gaand ke phaank ka poora aakar samajh aa raha tha jo daudne se hil rahi thi. Anita ki badi gaand ko hilta dekh Ramu ke lund mein garam khoon daudne laga.



Anita guest room ki taraf badh gayee aur ghar ka chabi jo dusre guchhe mein thi usko bag se nikalne lagi. Hariya Ramu ko gate bandh karne bol diya to woh motorcycle ko park karke jaldi se gate bandh karke aa gaya.



Anita tab tak chabi nikal kar guest room kholne lagi. Ramu waapas aakar jaise hi Anita ko guest room kholte dekha uska dil dhadakne ke saath saath lund mein bhi hulchul ho gaya. Anita kisi badi gaand jiske daraar mein bheegi huyi saree ghus chuki thi aur uske upar adh nangi bheegu huyi gori peeth jispar paani phisal raha tha yeh dekhkar kisi bhi mard ka khoon garam ho sakta tha to phir Hariya aur Ramu jaise mardon ka khoon garam na ho aesa ho hi nahin sakta tha.



Woh dono Anita ko gaand aur uski adhnangi peeth ko dekhne laga. Kuchh seconds baad Anita ki gaand ko ghoomte dekh Ramu samajh gaya ki wo peechhe ghoom rahi hai to jhatt se apni aankhen uski gaand se hatakar uske chehre par kar diya.



Anita use apni gaand ko dekhte hue dekh li thi magar phir bhi bura maan bina muskurati hui boli,''aaiye aap dono isme araam kijiye''.



Hariya aur Ramu ke poore badan se paani tapak raha tha. Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb hum aese jayenge to aapka pura ghar geela aur ganda ho jayega"



Anita use dekhkar boli,''Ohh main bhi na. Rukiye main tauli deti hoon''.



Yeh bolkar Anita guest room mein jaakar wardrobe kholne lagi.Wardrobe se do tauli nikal kar woh baahar aai aur Ramu aur Hariya ko ek ek tauli deti huyi boli,"Yeh lijiye aap dono apna badan sukha lijiye".



Ramu aur Hariya dono Anita ko dekhte hue uske haath se tauli le liye. Hariya muskurate hue bola,"Thenku memsaheb".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to Ramu bhi bola,"Thenku".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ko dekhkar muskurai.





Agle pal Hariya Anita kisi badan ko upar se neeche tak dekha to Anita uske taraf dekhi. Woh chup chap khadi rahi aur Hariya ko apna badan par nazar daudane di. Hariya uski badan par ek nazar daudane ke Anita ko dekha to woh boli,''aap dono apna badan ponchh kar guest room mein jaa kar araam kijiye tab tak main bhi thoda fresh hokar kapda badal leti hoon. Main bhi puri bheeng chuki hoon''.



Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Haan theek hai memsaheb. Aap bhi apna ee khabsurat badan ponchh kar kapda badal lijiye".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskura di to Hariya aage bola,"Bheegne se sasura aapka pura kapda aapka khabsurat badan se chipak gawa hai".



Hariya yeh bolkar Anita ki badan ko phir se upar se neeche tak dekhkne laga. Anita use phir se apni badan ko ghurte dekhne lagi, uska nazar uski chunchi se chipki blouse par aur bheegi pet par jaa raha tha. Ramu Anita ke bayi taraf khada tha to Anita aankhon ke kone se dekhi ki woh side se uski gaand dekh raha tha jahan saree uski gaand se chipak kar thoda uski daraar mein bhi ghus gayi thi.



Anita bina bura maane boli,"Haan Hariya ji bheegne se to chipkega hi".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb aur aapka to pichhe ghus bhi gawa hai".



Anita ko Hariya se Ramu ke saamne aese bolne ki ummeed nahin thi aur woh yeh sunnkar ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi to woh muskura diya. Anita apni aankhon ke kone se Ramu ko dekhi to woh bhi halka muskura raha tha.



Ramu ko muskurata dekh Anita apni besharmi ki sabut deti huyi bina sharm ke uske taraf dekhi to woh bhi Anita ko dekhkar muskurate raha.



Anita bhi muskurakar boli,"Achha aap dono badan sukha kar guest room mein araam kar lijiyega. Main thoda fresh ho jaati hoon tab tak".



Anita yeh bolkar apni gaand matkati hui ghar ka darwaza ke taraf jaakar darwaza kholne lagi. Anita ke darwaze ki taraf jaane waqt Hariya aur Ramu sir aur badan ponchhne lage aur ponchhte hi dono ka nazar Anita ki gaand par waapas para aur dono tauli ko waise hi sir aur badan par rokkar uski gaand dekhne lage jisme saree ghusi huyi thi. Dono ek nazar uski bheegi kamar aur peeth par bhi lejakar dekhe.



Anita darwaza khol kar living room mein dakhil ho gayee aur darwaza ander se bandh karte waqt woh dono ke taraf dekhi to woh dono halka sa muskura rahe the. Anita bhi muskura di aur darwaza bandh kar di. Dono Hariya aur Ramu ka lund phadphada gaya Anita ki gaand aur adhnangi peeth aur kamar ko dekhkar. Dono gehri saans lekar waapas sir aur badan ponchhne lage.



Dono apna badan ponchh kar guest room mein gaye aur do kursi par baithe agle aadhe ghante tak dono uss room ki khoobsurti dekhte rahe aur saath mein aapas mein baat karte rahe, khaakar Anita ke baare mein ki kaise woh itni padhi likhi, ameer aur khoobsurat hone ke bawjud bhi dil ki kitni achhi hai.



Dono baat kar hi rahe the ki Anita waapas guest room mein aayee. Woh naha kar kapde badal li thi.Woh ek bahurang saree pehni huyi thi jispar hara, laal , gulabi aur nili rang ki patti (stripe) bani thi.



Woh saree uski gori jism ko aur bhi khoobsurat bana rahi thi. Saree ke saath woh usi pattern mein ek chhota blouse pehni thi jo uski chunchi ke neeche aakar khatam ho jaa rahi thi. Upar cleavage bhi thoda dikh rahi thi. Woh saree ko naabhi se 3 inches neeche pehni thi jiske kaaran uski gori sapaat pet puri nangi thi aur bas ek side mein hi uski kandhe par jaati huyi pallu se thodi dhanki huyi thi.



Puri nangi gori sapaat pet ke beech uski gehri naabhi se dedh do inches ka belly button ring latak rahi thi jisme laga white stone roshni mein chamak rahi thi.



Woh jab aayee tab Hariya aur Ramu dono Anita ko dekhte reh gaye saath hi Anita bhi unn dono ko dekhne lagi. Woh dono kursi par sirf tauli lapete hue baithe the, uske alawa un dono ke badan par aur koi kapda nahin tha.



Ramu aur Hariya Anita ki chunchi ki ubhar, nangi pet aur nabhi se latki chamakti huyi belly button ring dekh rahe the wahin Anita unke baalon se bhare seene ko dekh rahi thi. Aesa kuchh seconds tak hua uske baad Ramu bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb woh kapda bheega tha to use sukhne ke liye rakh diye aur ee tauli pehen liye".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ko dekhi aur muskurati huyi ek ada se chalti huyi aage unke paas jaati huyi boli,"Are koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Aap dono to meri wajah se hi bheege hain. Main nahin rehti to aap dono apne ghar jaate aur bheegte bhi to kam se kam badalne ke liye kapda to hota aap dono ke aas paas".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb kahe humka sharminda kar rahi hain aap. Aapka madad karke to humka achha laga ab isme thoda bheeg gaye to kaa hua. Kaa Ramu ka bolta hai".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Haan memsaheb. Hum dono ko aapka madad karke achha laga".



Hariya aur Ramu ke kareeb unse ek se dedh feet ki duri par Anita unke saamne khadi thi jiske kaaran uski pet un dono ke aankhon ke saamne thi. Ramu apna baat bolkar ek nazar Anita ki nangi pet aur uske beech nabhi se latki huyi chamakti huyi belly button ring ko dekhne laga.



Anita Ramu ke nazar ko apni pet par rengte hue dekhne ke baad ek nazar Hariya ko dekhi to use bhi apni nangi pet par dekhte hue payi.



Woh dono ko apni nangi pet ko dekhte hue paakar woh bina kuchh reaction ke muskurakar boli,"To aap log bhi mujhe sharminda mat kijiye maafi maang kar. Ab aap dono ka kapda bheeng gaya hai to use to utarenge hi. Bheega hua kapda pehen kar apna tabiyat kyun kharab karenge. Iske liye maafi maang kar mujhe sharminda mat kijiye. Jo bhi kiya hai aap dono ne theek kiya hai".



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue Anita ki chehre ko dekhkar bola,"Sach mein memsaheb aap kitni achhi hain. Jitna khabsurat aapko upar wale ne banaya hai aap utni hi achhi aur samajhdaar bhi hain".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to agle pal Ramu bola,"Haan memsaheb sach mein aap bahot achhi hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Aap dono bhi to bahot achhe hain. Mujhe aese raaste par khadi dekhkar meri madad karne ke liye tayyar ho gaye aur apne saath mere ghar tak le aaye".



Ramu aur Hariya dono halka muskurane laga to Hariya bola,"Ab memsaheb aapka jaisan khabsurat, pyaari aur nazuk aurat ko hum aese wahan kaise chhod sakte the".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji woh to theek hai lekin ab meri tareef karna bandh kijiye. Bas meri tareef hi kar rahe hain aap dono".



Yeh sunnkar Anita khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe" to Hariya bhi hasne laga "hahaha". Wahin Ramu bas muskurata raha. Anita Ramu ko muskurate hue dekhkar boli,"Achha baatein to hoti rahengi. Aap dono bheeg gaye the to main aap dono ke liye adrakh wali chai bana deti hoon".



Ramu ko iska ummeed nahin tha. Woh yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhne laga ki tabhi Hariya hasna bandh karke bola,"Are memsaheb aap kahe takleef kar rahi hain".



Anita muskurakar boli,"Isme takleef ki kya baat hai. Main bhi peena chahti hoon to sochi ki aap dono se bhi puchh loon ki aap dono adrakh wali chai peete hain ya nahin. Sabki apni apni pasand hoti hai to puchhna zaruri hai na".



Hariya muskurakar bola,"Waah memsaheb phir se aap kitni samajhdaari ki baat boli".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati rahi to Ramu Hariya ke taraf dekha jaise aankhon se kuchh kehna chahta ho. Anita bhi Ramu ke taraf dekhi to woh bhi samajh gayi ki woh shayad kuchh kehna chahta hai.



Anita use dekhkar puchh,"Ramu ji aap kuchh kehna chahte hain kya? Agar aap adrakh ki chai nahin peete to nimbu chai bana dun aapke liye. Ya juice piyenge aap?"



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekha. Anita use itna kuchh peene ke liye offer karegi woh socha nahin tha. Woh uski khoobsurti se uske taraf aakarshit to tha hi aur uski badan ko gandi nazar se ghurne mein achha to lag raha tha magar saath hi Anita ke prati thodi mann mein izzat bhi hone lagi uski achhi behavior dekhkar ki itni ameer, khoobsurat aur padhi likhi hone ke bawjood bhi woh dil ki achhi thi aur ghamand zara bhi nahin tha tabhi to uske aur Hariya jaise mazduro ke saath itni achhe tareeqe se khul kar ghul mil gayi.



Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Woh memsaheb hum bole the na ki shaam mein sasura ko thoda peene ka aadat hai. Jab tak thoda piyega nahin isko chain nahin milega".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhi aur apni sir hilati huyi boli,"Ramu ji to yeh bolne mein aap jhijhak rahe the? Isme jhijhakne ki kya baat hai. Main to pehle hi bol chuki hoon ki hum sab adults hain. Agar aapko peene ka mann hai to wahi sahi. Lekin mere ghar mein to peene ka kuchh nahin hai."



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb kauno baat nahin u Ramu sasura lekar ghumta hai agar kabhi kahin peene ka mann ho aur aas paas na mile"



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ohh tab theek hai aapko peena hai to araam se pijiye".



Hariya phir bola,"Aese memsaheb juice ke alawa to bahot saara doodh bhi hoga yahan" aur yeh bolkar woh Anita ki chhoti blouse mein kaid uski chunchiyon ko dekhne laga.



Anita ko iski ummeed nahin thi. Uski dil dhadakne lagi aur saans tez ho gayi jisse uski chunchiyan bhi upar neeche hone lagi. Saath hi uski choot mein bhi thodi hulchul ho gayi. Woh jaldi se aankhon ke kone se Ramu ko dekhi to payi ki woh bhi uski chunchiyon ko hi dekh raha hai.



Anita apni saans control karke Hariya ko dekhi to woh uske chehre par dekhkar muskuraya. Hariya ko muskurata dekh Anita puchhi,"Hariya ji aap chai piyenge ya aap bhi Ramu ke saath hi piyenge".



Hariya muskurakar bola,"Ab memsaheb sasura jaisa bhi hai humra dost hai. Thoda saath to dena hi padega".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Theek hai. Main khud ke liye chai bana leti hoon. Aap dono araam se pijiye".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Theek hai memsaheb. Woh do glass milega kaa?"



Anita sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Haan Hariya ji kyun nahin. Uske saath kuchh khayenge kya?"



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are nahin memsaheb kuchho nahin. Aap pareshan mat hoiye".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Are Hariya ji pareshani ki kya baat hai. In fact main soch rahi thi ki mausam achha hai to kuchh namkeen bana leti hoon. Iss mausam mein pakaude khane ka alag hi mazaa hai. Main pakaude hi bana deti hoon. Main bhi kha lungi aur aap dono bhi kha lijiyega".



Hariya aur Ramu ek dusre ko dekhe aur phir Hariya bola,"Theek hai memsaheb jab aap bana rahi hai to hum dono bhi kha lenge".



Anita muskurakar Ramu aur Hariya dono ke taraf ek ek karke dekhkar boli,"Theek hai. Tab tak main do glass laa deti hoon".



Ramu "haan" mein sir hilaya aur bola,"Memsaheb thoda paani aur baraf bhi milega?".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyu Ramu ko dekhkar apni sir hilakar boli,"Ramu ji kyun nahin milega. Aap bhi na. Jo bhi chahiye aap logo ko woh bejhijhak mangiye. Aap dono koi anjaan to hain nahin ki kuchh bolne ya mangne se pehle jhijhak ho".



Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya to Anita use aur Hariya ko dekhti huyi aage boli,"Ek kaam kijiye ap dono ander living room mein hi aa jaiye na. Wahan araam se sofe par baithkar aap dono pi lijiyega aur main kitchen mein pakaude banakar garam garam aap dono ko serve bhi kar dungi. Living room mein hi kitchen bhi hai to jo bhi chahiye aap logo ko asaani se mil bhi jayega aur thodi bahot baat chit bhi hote rahegi".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan baat to sahi hai".



Ramu ko Anita ki baat par yaqeen nahin ho raha tha to woh ek pal ke liye Hariya ko dekhkar waapas Anita ko dekhne laga to Anita boli,"Lag raha hai Ramu ji ko akele aapke saath hi peene ka mann hai. Woh mere saamne peena nahin chahte hain".



Ramu yeh sunnkar bola,"Are nahin memsaheb aisan baat nahin hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar ek ada se boli,"To phir soch kya rahe hain? Chaliye araam se ander baithkar piyega."



Ramu jawaab mein bola,"Bas yehi soch rahe hai memsaheb ki aapke saamne piyenge to nasha dugna ho jayega".



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurakar bola,"Abe Ramu sasura". Wahin Anita apni ankhein badi karke Ramu ko dekhti huyi ek ada se muskurati huyi boli,"Ramu ji aap bhi. Main to sochi bhi nahin thi ki aap aese tareef bhi kar sakte hain".



Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Hariya bola,"Sasura chhupa rustam hai hahaha".



Anita bhi sunnkar muskurati rahi to Hariya bola,"Lekin sasura ka isme kauno ghalti nahin hai memsaheb. Aap sach mein bahot khabsurat lag rahi hain iss saree mein. Kasam se heroine lag rahi hain aap".



Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko dekhkar muskurati huyi boli,"Offo Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye" ki agle pal Ramu bola,"Humka to memsaheb heroine se bhi zyada khabsurat lag rahi hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Ab main kya bolun. Aap dono hi meri tareef karne lage".



Iske jawaab mein Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb tareef usi ka kiya jaata hai jo uke layaq hota hai. Aap hai hi itni khabsurat".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Hariya ko dekhi to woh uski jisk ko upar se neeche tak dekhne laga. Agle pal Anita Ramu ke taraf dekhi to woh bhi uski jism ko upar se neeche tak dekhne laga. Dono mardon ke munh se khud ki khoobsurti ki tareef sunnkar aur phir unki nazro ko apne jism par rengta dekh Anita ko apni khoobsurti par garv hone laga aur woh garv se wahan chup chap khadi rahi.



Kuchh seconds baad Hariya bola,"Waah memsaheb sach mein bahot hi pyaar se banaya hai aapko upar wale ne".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ab bas bhi kijiye aap dono".



Yeh sunnkar Hariya muskuraya to Anita bhi muskurati huyi dekhkar boli,"Ab aap dono ko peena bhi hai ya ek guna nasha aese hi ho gaya?"



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaheb" aur phir hasne laga,"hahaha" to Anita bhi besharmi se khilkhilane lagi "hehehe".



Ramu bhi Anita ki badan ko dekhte hue muskurane laga. Anita khilkhilati huyi boli,"Hehe sach mein aap dono bahot funny hain. Ab chaliye"



Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya to Hariya bola,"Chalo Ramu".



Dono uth gaye. Ramu ek kursi par sukhne ke liye rakhe uske kapdo ke taraf gaya aur pant se sharab ka ek chhota bottle nikala to Anita boli,"Aap log apne kapde bhi lete chaliye. Washing machine mein jaldi se dhul bhi jayega aur sukh bhi jayega".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekha aur "haan" mein sir hilakar apna kapda uthane laga. Hariya bhi aage badhkar apna kapda dusra kursi se uthaya.



Anita phir boli,"Chaliye aur chabi le lijiye. Guest room bandh kar dete hain jab tak aap dono ander rahenge tab tak ke liye" aur woh dono ke aage chalti huyi guest room se baahar jaane lagi. Ramu jaldi se chabi uthaya aur woh aur Hariya bhi baahar jaane laga.



Hariya aur Ramu ka nazar Anita ki peeth par pada aur dekh kar dono ka lund phadphada gaya. Anita ki chhoti blouse mein peeche teen dori hi thi, ek gardan ke paas, ek neeche peeth par aur ek un dono ke beech. Iske alawa uski peeth par aur koi kapda nahin tha. Uski gori chikni peeth gardan ke neeche se lekar uski gaand ke upar jahan saree bandhi huyi thi wahan tak puri nangi thi un teen dori ko chhodkar jiska kaam badan ko dhankna nahin balki blouse ko Anita ki badan par bandhe rakhna tha. Uski baal bhi aage ke taraf kiya hua tha to woh bhi uski peeth ko dhank nahin rahi thi.



Anita gaand matkati aur kamar lachkati huyi unn dono mard jo sirf tauli lapete the unke aage chal rahi thi aur woh dono ka nazar uski nangi peeth aur matakti gaand par tha.



Anita kamre se baahar nikli to baarish aur hawa pehle se tez ho gayi thi. Aesa lag raha tha ki aandhi aayegi. Tez hawa ke kaaran verandah mein bhi baarish ki thodi chhinte aa rahe the jisme se kuchh chhinte Anita ki gori badan par bhi pad raha tha.



Ramu jab darwaza lock kar raha tha to Hariya tez hawa aur baarish dekhkar bola,"Ee sasura baarish to aur tez ho gawa aur aandhi bhi aane wala lagta hai".



Ramu bhi darwaza lock karne ke baad Anita ke peeche chalte hue bola,"Haan lag raha hai rukne wala nahin hai. Jagah jagah paani bhi lag gawa hoga".



Anita yeh sunnkar chalti huyi boli,"Haan. Khair hum log ghar par aa chuke hain to yahan safe hain".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb"



Anita ghar ke darwaze ke paas gayi to bijli chamakne lagi aur phir halka badal garza. Bijli chamakne se Anita ki gori badan bhi verandah ki halki roshni mein chamak uthi, khaaskar jahan jahan baarish ki thodi chhinte padi thi. Ramu aur Hariya dono ka nazar wahan pada to unka lund tauli ke ander phir se phadphada gaya.

[Hellybelly]

The "best" cinemato narration ever, just like a movie running, in the begging update looked running fast but when needed it became very steady and normal in dialogue, witty and naturally real. Her changing of clothes and building lust inside ramu is very tightly fixed in plot. And like many writers I'd like to suggest one thing that plz give a detailed description of Anita's face , as you thought it to be because the character is so big that we are unable to think everything in our own way, hope you'd consider this.