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Misc. Erotica ये कहाँ आ गए हम - पूनम का रूपांतरण
(14-10-2023, 08:38 AM)wildarman Wrote: agree with u

U guys are right in a way... I don't disagree. I am just trying to continue.. Hope it's not that bad that you will dislike this. May be just don't like this story continuation as much you guys liked first one... Hope this gives some satisfaction.
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(19-10-2023, 11:19 AM)Bychanceteller Wrote: U guys are right in a way... I don't disagree. I am just trying to continue.. Hope it's not that bad that you will dislike this. May be just don't like this story continuation as much you guys liked first one... Hope this gives some satisfaction.

As someone who had started three stories which were older or stopped midway or didn't feel right the way it ended. 

I would recommend you to write this story from the beginning. This will give you a better picture to how to take your characters ahead.

Looking forward to an entire new story on similar lines.

#Support, #DontDiscourage
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(07-10-2023, 11:18 PM)Bychanceteller Wrote: Aur rima call kat di. Fir Rima apne hair wagera thodi sajane lagi. Uske bad Poonam ko dekhi. Wo bed baithi Hui thi. Aur uski pic rima uthayi.
Rima Poonam ko dekhi, aur boli
Rima- pose to de achhe se. Guddu ko mast wali bhejenge na.
Poonam muskurai, aur khadi ho gayi. Rima usko piche Jane ko ishara ki. Poonam piche gayi apne khule balon age se leke saja li. Aur khadi Hui kamar pakad ke. Rima aur ek pic li. Usko dekhi zoom ki aur boli- achhi to he par sexy nahi lag rahi tu.

Fir Rima phone rakhi uth ke gayi boli diwar ke bagal ke khadi ho jao. Poonam khadi ho gayi.
Rima boli- Guddu ko aisi pic bhejungi ki uski land tight khada jayega tumhe dekh ke. Rat Tak taras jayega.

Fir Rima ek hairbrush pakad ke Poonam ke piche gayi. Uske hair age se alag kar ke sare piche kar li. Ab Poonam ki clevage dikhne lagi thi. Uske hair thodi achhe se brush ki. Aur age aa kar Poonam boobs ko pakad ke upar ki, taki aur bade Lage. Poonam ki ankh badi ho gayi, par wo Chupchap khadi thi. Ek ladki ek ladke ko uski sexy si photo bhejne ke liye taiyar kar rahi thi. Fir dress ke neck line aur niche ki. Usse uske cleavge aur dikhne lagi.

Ab samne se Rima use upar se niche dekhi aur boli- Ab lag rahi ek number ki sexy maal. Aaj to club me sare ladke tere ko dekhenge.

Kya baat hai  clps
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full support aage bdaao story
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Ufffff
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Waiting dear....
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