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Ammi Ka Pati Mummy Ka Sohar
Bhai usse acha hi likh rha hai wo kahani puri nahi hai ye to pura karne do
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Bhai iski bat mat suna ye khud copy kar ke likh rha dusre site par aap ache likh rhe isko khud likhne nhi aata hai
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Iska khud ka story pura nhi bich me chor ke bhag jata hai
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(21-10-2023, 06:26 PM)Aman#45 Wrote: Bhai iski bat mat suna ye khud copy kar ke likh rha dusre site par aap ache likh rhe isko khud likhne nhi aata hai

Kaun si site bhai..jara mujhe bhi batana
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(21-10-2023, 06:29 PM)Aman#45 Wrote: Iska khud ka story pura nhi bich me chor ke bhag jata hai

Kahani meri thi..mere hesaab se complete hai...maine buss itna bola ki kuch alag likho
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(21-10-2023, 06:26 PM)Aman#45 Wrote: Bhai iski bat mat suna ye khud copy kar ke likh rha dusre site par aap ache likh rhe isko khud likhne nhi aata hai

Bhai thoda to copy hai. Par almost alge he hai ye to mante he ho.
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(21-10-2023, 06:21 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai ye sara scene angoor...kamar mein chimti...nipple pe clip..ye sari meri story Mummy or uska Uska student se copied hain...inspiration sab lete hain...lekin poora hi chap doge to purane readers ko kya maza aaega...theme bus alag hai..banki to aap khud hi samajdaar ho...infact dialogues bhi almost same hi hain..

Tumhari story incomplete hai. Par total and final main he karuga. Okay ab se tumahi sorry se kuch nahi copy hogi
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(21-10-2023, 07:11 PM)Ayush67 Wrote: Tumhari story incomplete hai. Par total and final main he karuga. Okay ab se tumahi sorry se kuch nahi copy hogi

Bhai dekho bura manne wali baat nahi hai..apke liye hi bola maine ki apne ideas daaloge to apka hi readers badhenge..aur bhai maine apni side se wo story complete kar di thi..mujhe uske aage badhana hi nahi tha...readers to bolte hi hain aage likhne ko..lekin writer ka apna plan bhi hota hai...
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Bhai ek update aur de do
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(21-10-2023, 07:31 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai dekho bura manne wali baat nahi hai..apke liye hi bola maine ki apne ideas daaloge to apka hi readers badhenge..aur bhai maine apni side se wo story complete kar di thi..mujhe uske aage badhana hi nahi tha...readers to bolte hi hain aage likhne ko..lekin writer ka apna plan bhi hota hai...

tension mat lo. main apne hisab se dekhta hu
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Usko choro bhai ek update aur dedo romance wale
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(21-10-2023, 06:21 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai ye sara scene angoor...kamar mein chimti...nipple pe clip..ye sari meri story Mummy or uska Uska student se copied hain...inspiration sab lete hain...lekin poora hi chap doge to purane readers ko kya maza aaega...theme bus alag hai..banki to aap khud hi samajdaar ho...infact dialogues bhi almost same hi hain..

story ko bich me adhura choddne wale kripya is story se dur rahe ,me nahi chahta ki ek tumhara prabhav is writer pe pade

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(21-10-2023, 06:24 PM)Aman#45 Wrote: Bhai usse acha hi likh rha hai wo kahani puri nahi hai ye to pura karne do

bilkul sahi kaha

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(21-10-2023, 06:29 PM)Aman#45 Wrote: Iska khud ka story pura nhi bich me chor ke bhag jata hai

aajtak ek reply nahi kiya tarif ke liye ,or jaise hi pata chala ki story iski story milti julti hai ,tapaak se bich me kood pata

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Shi bola bhai
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(21-10-2023, 07:31 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai dekho bura manne wali baat nahi hai..apke liye hi bola maine ki apne ideas daaloge to apka hi readers badhenge..aur bhai maine apni side se wo story complete kar di thi..mujhe uske aage badhana hi nahi tha...readers to bolte hi hain aage likhne ko..lekin writer ka apna plan bhi hota hai...

 ha ,jaise tumhara aage ka plan tha " story bich me chodd ke bhag jane ka ""

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bro ,is mood pe akar update dene me deri mat karna ,kyo is mood pe khud ko control karna bahut muskil hota hai

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Par isne mere pura moral down kar Diya hai. Story likhne ka Dil nahi kar raha ha ab
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Nahi pura karo bhai humlog pura support karenge
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