21-10-2023, 06:24 PM
Bhai usse acha hi likh rha hai wo kahani puri nahi hai ye to pura karne do
Ammi Ka Pati Mummy Ka Sohar
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21-10-2023, 06:24 PM
Bhai usse acha hi likh rha hai wo kahani puri nahi hai ye to pura karne do
21-10-2023, 06:26 PM
Bhai iski bat mat suna ye khud copy kar ke likh rha dusre site par aap ache likh rhe isko khud likhne nhi aata hai
21-10-2023, 06:29 PM
Iska khud ka story pura nhi bich me chor ke bhag jata hai
21-10-2023, 06:31 PM
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21-10-2023, 07:09 PM
21-10-2023, 07:11 PM
(21-10-2023, 06:21 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai ye sara scene angoor...kamar mein chimti...nipple pe clip..ye sari meri story Mummy or uska Uska student se copied hain...inspiration sab lete hain...lekin poora hi chap doge to purane readers ko kya maza aaega...theme bus alag hai..banki to aap khud hi samajdaar ho...infact dialogues bhi almost same hi hain.. Tumhari story incomplete hai. Par total and final main he karuga. Okay ab se tumahi sorry se kuch nahi copy hogi
21-10-2023, 07:31 PM
(21-10-2023, 07:11 PM)Ayush67 Wrote: Tumhari story incomplete hai. Par total and final main he karuga. Okay ab se tumahi sorry se kuch nahi copy hogi Bhai dekho bura manne wali baat nahi hai..apke liye hi bola maine ki apne ideas daaloge to apka hi readers badhenge..aur bhai maine apni side se wo story complete kar di thi..mujhe uske aage badhana hi nahi tha...readers to bolte hi hain aage likhne ko..lekin writer ka apna plan bhi hota hai...
21-10-2023, 07:33 PM
Bhai ek update aur de do
21-10-2023, 07:35 PM
(21-10-2023, 07:31 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai dekho bura manne wali baat nahi hai..apke liye hi bola maine ki apne ideas daaloge to apka hi readers badhenge..aur bhai maine apni side se wo story complete kar di thi..mujhe uske aage badhana hi nahi tha...readers to bolte hi hain aage likhne ko..lekin writer ka apna plan bhi hota hai... tension mat lo. main apne hisab se dekhta hu
21-10-2023, 07:39 PM
Usko choro bhai ek update aur dedo romance wale
21-10-2023, 09:10 PM
(21-10-2023, 06:21 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai ye sara scene angoor...kamar mein chimti...nipple pe clip..ye sari meri story Mummy or uska Uska student se copied hain...inspiration sab lete hain...lekin poora hi chap doge to purane readers ko kya maza aaega...theme bus alag hai..banki to aap khud hi samajdaar ho...infact dialogues bhi almost same hi hain.. story ko bich me adhura choddne wale kripya is story se dur rahe ,me nahi chahta ki ek tumhara prabhav is writer pe pade
21-10-2023, 09:10 PM
(21-10-2023, 06:24 PM)Aman#45 Wrote: Bhai usse acha hi likh rha hai wo kahani puri nahi hai ye to pura karne do bilkul sahi kaha
21-10-2023, 09:11 PM
(21-10-2023, 06:29 PM)Aman#45 Wrote: Iska khud ka story pura nhi bich me chor ke bhag jata hai aajtak ek reply nahi kiya tarif ke liye ,or jaise hi pata chala ki story iski story milti julti hai ,tapaak se bich me kood pata
21-10-2023, 09:12 PM
Shi bola bhai
21-10-2023, 09:12 PM
(21-10-2023, 07:31 PM)rodrigo_ Wrote: Bhai dekho bura manne wali baat nahi hai..apke liye hi bola maine ki apne ideas daaloge to apka hi readers badhenge..aur bhai maine apni side se wo story complete kar di thi..mujhe uske aage badhana hi nahi tha...readers to bolte hi hain aage likhne ko..lekin writer ka apna plan bhi hota hai... ha ,jaise tumhara aage ka plan tha " story bich me chodd ke bhag jane ka ""
21-10-2023, 09:16 PM
bro ,is mood pe akar update dene me deri mat karna ,kyo is mood pe khud ko control karna bahut muskil hota hai
21-10-2023, 11:39 PM
Par isne mere pura moral down kar Diya hai. Story likhne ka Dil nahi kar raha ha ab
22-10-2023, 01:17 AM
Nahi pura karo bhai humlog pura support karenge
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