18-10-2023, 07:01 PM
Adultery Zeba ke gadraye chutad [ new update]
18-10-2023, 07:16 PM
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Awesome and amazing and of course extremely hot update!!!!
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19-10-2023, 12:39 AM
Great update, but I think you have added so many characters. This story was supposed to be on Zeba and Pandit. Please try to focus more on only Zeba and Pandit at the start. More characters can come later.
In the first update you showed Zeba as very innocent and now she is watching all this and laughing doesn’t suit Zeba personality.
Pandit should try to get Zeba into his house again.
Please consider this.
Overall very great story.
In the first update you showed Zeba as very innocent and now she is watching all this and laughing doesn’t suit Zeba personality.
Pandit should try to get Zeba into his house again.
Please consider this.
Overall very great story.
19-10-2023, 12:58 AM
(19-10-2023, 12:39 AM)Therocksayys Wrote: Great update, but I think you have added so many characters. This story was supposed to be on Zeba and Pandit. Please try to focus more on only Zeba and Pandit at the start. More characters can come later.
In the first update you showed Zeba as very innocent and now she is watching all this and laughing doesn’t suit Zeba personality.
Pandit should try to get Zeba into his house again.
Please consider this.
Overall very great story.
Thanx friend , actually Uzma, aur Kallu wala episode shuru me itna bada nhi socha tha lekjn phir kahani banti chali gyi.But is episode ko ab yhi khtm kr dunga.
Basic idea was to seduce Zeba to some level.
NEXT WILL BE ABOUT ZEBA AND PANDIT l
19-10-2023, 02:01 AM
(19-10-2023, 12:58 AM)sanju55 Wrote: Thanx friend , actually Uzma, aur Kallu wala episode shuru me itna bada nhi socha tha lekjn phir kahani banti chali gyi.But is episode ko ab yhi khtm kr dunga.
Basic idea was to seduce Zeba to some level.
NEXT WILL BE ABOUT ZEBA AND PANDIT l
Thanks dost for considering. Yes and it will definitely help Zeba to get seduced at some level and help Pandit when he next take her into his room.
Apke jaise writers bohat kam hai. Start mein hi itne saare characters confuse kardete hain k focus kis par kare. Zeba is story ki jaan hai aur hum sab ki favourite.
Ab able update ka besabri se intezaar hai.
19-10-2023, 02:09 AM
(19-10-2023, 02:01 AM)Therocksayys Wrote: Thanks dost for considering. Yes and it will definitely help Zeba to get seduced at some level and help Pandit when he next take her into his room.
Apke jaise writers bohat kam hai. Start mein hi itne saare characters confuse kardete hain k focus kis par kare. Zeba is story ki jaan hai aur hum sab ki favourite.
Ab able update ka besabri se intezaar hai.
Thanks a lot for liking my writing skills.
Read my other story also
https://xossipy.com/thread-58477.html
19-10-2023, 05:12 AM
Bahut badhiya update, bahut accha likha aapne yaar ♥️
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