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Adultery Zeba ke gadraye chutad [ new update]
#41
(18-10-2023, 08:42 AM)Kerry Watson Wrote: Faddu aur fataka update
welcome dost
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#42
(18-10-2023, 12:01 PM)Raghu Wrote: fantastic update bro, this is really a marvelous story!!! Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar

Thank you so much
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#43
Awesome and amazing and of course extremely hot update!!!!
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#44
(18-10-2023, 01:37 PM)Shilpa. Wrote: bhut hi badjya update hai bhai, mujhe bhut hi acha laha

Thank you so much dear, keep conmenting
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#45
(18-10-2023, 02:01 PM)Incestlala Wrote: superb Nice Story

Thanks a lot , keep commenting dear
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#46
(18-10-2023, 05:41 PM)Sharmin Shila Wrote: Ekdum lajawab kahaani

Thank u so much dear, keep commenting
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#48
(18-10-2023, 06:15 PM)Shin54 Wrote: Bahut bahut garam kahaani
Welcome dear and thnx for comment,
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#50
(18-10-2023, 07:28 PM)Vamp Wrote: Awesome and amazing and of course extremely hot update!!!!

thnx dost
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#51
Great update, but I think you have added so many characters. This story was supposed to be on Zeba and Pandit. Please try to focus more on only Zeba and Pandit at the start. More characters can come later.
In the first update you showed Zeba as very innocent and now she is watching all this and laughing doesn’t suit Zeba personality.
Pandit should try to get Zeba into his house again.
Please consider this.

Overall very great story.
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#52
(19-10-2023, 12:39 AM)Therocksayys Wrote: Great update, but I think you have added so many characters. This story was supposed to be on Zeba and Pandit. Please try to focus more on only Zeba and Pandit at the start. More characters can come later.
In the first update you showed Zeba as very innocent and now she is watching all this and laughing doesn’t suit Zeba personality.
Pandit should try to get Zeba into his house again.


Please consider this.

Overall very great story.

Thanx friend , actually Uzma, aur Kallu wala episode shuru me itna bada nhi socha tha lekjn phir kahani banti chali gyi.But is episode ko ab yhi khtm kr dunga.

Basic idea was to seduce Zeba to some level.

NEXT WILL BE ABOUT ZEBA AND PANDIT l
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#53
(19-10-2023, 12:58 AM)sanju55 Wrote: Thanx friend , actually Uzma, aur Kallu wala episode shuru me itna bada nhi socha tha lekjn phir kahani banti chali gyi.But is episode ko ab yhi khtm kr dunga.

Basic idea was to seduce Zeba to some level.

NEXT WILL BE ABOUT ZEBA AND PANDIT l

Thanks dost for considering. Yes and it will definitely help Zeba to get seduced at some level and help Pandit when he next take her into his room. 

Apke jaise writers bohat kam hai. Start mein hi itne saare characters confuse kardete hain k focus kis par kare. Zeba is story ki jaan hai aur hum sab ki favourite. 

Ab able update ka besabri se intezaar hai.
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#54
(19-10-2023, 02:01 AM)Therocksayys Wrote: Thanks dost for considering. Yes and it will definitely help Zeba to get seduced at some level and help Pandit when he next take her into his room. 

Apke jaise writers bohat kam hai. Start mein hi itne saare characters confuse kardete hain k focus kis par kare. Zeba is story ki jaan hai aur hum sab ki favourite. 

Ab able update ka besabri se intezaar hai.

Thanks a lot for liking my writing skills.

Read my other story also
https://xossipy.com/thread-58477.html
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#55
Bahut badhiya update, bahut accha likha aapne yaar ♥️
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#56
(19-10-2023, 05:12 AM)Rumana Wrote: Bahut badhiya update, bahut accha likha aapne yaar ♥️

THNX DEAR,
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#58
(19-10-2023, 05:56 AM)sanju55 Wrote: ZEBA KA PEHLA SEx KISKE SATH CHAHTE HO?

kALLU , YA PANDIT

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only kallu
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#59
(19-10-2023, 10:23 AM)SweetSonali Wrote: only kallu

Yes dear it will be Pandit 11 inch lumba and 5 inch mota
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#60
(19-10-2023, 10:28 AM)sanju55 Wrote: Yes dear it will be kallu


Kallu will be perfect with his monster dick and Pandit will only masturbate imagining Zeva. thanks
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