Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[kanikaakochr]

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[Yampag]

Hey Seanbro.. thanks for your long and continuous updates.. a master erotica of Anita.. involving erotic mingling with different characters.. keep it up bro.. still many things are in store to explode from your side..

Sabse Jo baat hamein jakad ke rakhati hai wo hai sexual chedchhad.. sath me aisa he hot conversation.. it's the height of superb slow seduction. Abhi Tak fir bhi Anita apne pati ke alawa kisi se chudi nahi hai par lund se maje bahut le rahi hai.. market se le kar gali.. sasural.. dhaba.. bus.. aur abhi Ghar ke andar Anita ka khel chalu hi hai.. Jo hamara khada karne me kamyaab ho hi jata hai..
Aur aisi slow seduction wale khel se charam seema tak jaane me hi badaa mazaa aataa hai.. yehi yeh story ka crux hai..

Thoda Jo miss ho Raha hai yahaa woh Jitu se jaisi chudaai Hui thi waisi abhi Tak nahi hui hai.. pure raw sex.. aur jo unn logo ki pasine ki ya unke sharir se smell jisse Anita apne jahen me utaar leti thi aur vahi khinch jaati thi.. tann Mann se.. wo thoda miss ho rahaa hai.. woh bus wale incidents me aur abhi pasine se lathbath hariya ke sath bhi.. Jo aap ek scene khada karte the Anita ka woh miss kar rahe hai.. matlab unlogo ke sharir ki gandh se Anita ka aksrshit hona.. yeh story ka majedaar jaayaka tha..

BT yeh criticism bilkul nahi hai.. aap bahetarin writer ho yeh koi jhutla nahi shakta.. yahaa hame padhane ke liye time aur jagah mushkil se milte hai to aap to likhane ka kaam karte hai.. hum wo characters ke hisab se padhate hai.. Anita yeh boli/kiya to hariya ne ye bola/kiya.. but aapko to sab characters ke baare me khud hi sochna padata hai fir aap likhate ho.. bahot tough task hai.. hamare liye yeh bhi bahot badi baat hai ki jis story ko hum doondhte rahete the aur Puri milti bhi nahi.. waha aapne usse fir se likha aur naye characters aur situations ke saath aage bhi badha rahe ho.. aap dusri stories koi bhi likho lekin yeh kahaani ka flavor.. tadka.. aisa hi rakhana change mat karna.. hame uummid hai ki aap hamein niraash nhii karenge..

Abhi wale scene me Maine yeh soch thaki.. hariya sharir to kholke baith jayega lekin baat karte karte Anita se hi uska pent khulvata aur lund bahaar nikalwata to tel ki jagah dono ka thuuk milake massage karvaata.. aur Anita hariya ke bajuu me chipak ke baith kar apne saari ke pallu se..bahot pyaar se hariya ka lasina pochhati.. mere hariya ji kitni mahenat karte hai meri madad karne ke liye.. aise sab baate karte woh pochhati jaati uoard se leke chhati pet se hote huve lund takk woh pochhati aur hariya ke jaane ke baad Anita apne pallu ko sungh kar madhosh hoti.. juice hariya ko pilaati baad me hariya ne jahha muh lagaakar Piya waha se hi wo bhi juice pitii.. juice ki bunde hariya ki khuulii chhat pe girti aur Anita whaa uungli se yaa jibh se chht leti.. hariya ke balo me haath ghoomati jab usse jaane ke liye samjha Rahi thi yaa phone le ne ke liye bolti thi..
Aur abhi to jaane ka time to aayaa hai leking hariyaa ne Anita ki chuchi muh me le li.. blouse ke upar se hi.. kya turning point hai aur wahi par aapne story atkaa di.. aur agla update yahi se aage khulega tab dekhte hai kya hota hai..

[Yampag]

Hey Seanbro.. thanks for your long and continuous updates.. a master erotica of Anita.. involving erotic mingling with different characters.. keep it up bro.. still many things are in store to explode from your side..

Sabse Jo baat hamein jakad ke rakhati hai wo hai sexual chedchhad.. sath me aisa he hot conversation.. it's the height of superb slow seduction. Abhi Tak fir bhi Anita apne pati ke alawa kisi se chudi nahi hai par lund se maje bahut le rahi hai.. market se le kar gali.. sasural.. dhaba.. bus.. aur abhi Ghar ke andar Anita ka khel chalu hi hai.. Jo hamara khada karne me kamyaab ho hi jata hai..
Aur aisi slow seduction wale khel se charam seema tak jaane me hi badaa mazaa aataa hai.. yehi yeh story ka crux hai..

Thoda Jo miss ho Raha hai yahaa woh Jitu se jaisi chudaai Hui thi waisi abhi Tak nahi hui hai.. pure raw sex.. aur jo unn logo ki pasine ki ya unke sharir se smell jisse Anita apne jahen me utaar leti thi aur vahi khinch jaati thi.. tann Mann se..  wo thoda miss ho rahaa hai.. woh bus wale incidents me aur abhi pasine se lathbath hariya ke sath bhi.. Jo aap ek scene khada karte the Anita ka woh miss kar rahe hai.. matlab unlogo ke sharir ki gandh se Anita ka aksrshit hona.. yeh story ka majedaar jaayaka tha..

BT yeh criticism bilkul nahi hai.. aap bahetarin writer ho yeh koi jhutla nahi shakta.. yahaa hame padhane ke liye time aur jagah mushkil se milte hai to aap to likhane ka kaam karte hai.. hum wo characters ke hisab se padhate hai.. Anita yeh boli/kiya to hariya ne ye bola/kiya.. but aapko to sab characters ke baare me khud hi sochna padata hai fir aap likhate ho.. bahot tough task hai.. hamare liye yeh bhi bahot badi baat hai ki jis story ko hum doondhte rahete the aur Puri milti bhi nahi.. waha aapne usse fir se likha aur naye characters aur situations ke saath aage bhi badha rahe ho.. aap dusri stories koi bhi likho lekin yeh kahaani ka flavor.. tadka.. aisa hi rakhana change mat karna.. hame uummid hai ki aap hamein niraash nhii karenge..

Abhi wale scene me Maine yeh soch thaki.. hariya sharir to kholke baith jayega lekin baat karte karte Anita se hi uska pent khulvata aur lund bahaar nikalwata to tel ki jagah dono ka thuuk milake massage karvaata.. aur Anita hariya ke bajuu me chipak ke baith kar apne saari ke pallu se..bahot pyaar se hariya ka lasina pochhati.. mere hariya ji kitni mahenat karte hai meri madad karne ke liye.. aise sab baate karte woh pochhati jaati uoard se leke chhati pet se hote huve lund takk woh pochhati aur hariya ke jaane ke baad Anita apne pallu ko sungh kar madhosh hoti.. juice hariya ko pilaati baad me hariya ne jahha muh lagaakar Piya waha se hi wo bhi juice pitii.. juice ki bunde hariya ki khuulii chhat pe girti aur Anita whaa uungli se yaa jibh se chht leti.. hariya ke balo me haath ghoomati jab usse jaane ke liye samjha Rahi thi yaa phone le ne ke liye bolti thi..
Aur abhi to jaane ka time to aayaa hai leking hariya ne Anita ki chuchi muh me le li.. blouse ke upar se hi.. kya turning point hai aur wahi par aapne story atkaa di.. aur agla update yahi se aage khulega tab dekhte hai kya hota hai..

[seansean007]

Thanks for the detailed feedback. I just have one word 'patience'. The readers of this story have already been showing lots of patience since a long time and I appreciate it and hope you all will continue to do the same. Everything has to happen at proper time and point of the story. Thanks again.

Hey Seanbro.. thanks for your long and continuous updates.. a master erotica of Anita.. involving erotic mingling with different characters.. keep it up bro.. still many things are in store to explode from your side..

Sabse Jo baat hamein jakad ke rakhati hai wo hai sexual chedchhad.. sath me aisa he hot conversation.. it's the height of superb slow seduction. Abhi Tak fir bhi Anita apne pati ke alawa kisi se chudi nahi hai par lund se maje bahut le rahi hai.. market se le kar gali.. sasural.. dhaba.. bus.. aur abhi Ghar ke andar Anita ka khel chalu hi hai.. Jo hamara khada karne me kamyaab ho hi jata hai..
Aur aisi slow seduction wale khel se charam seema tak jaane me hi badaa mazaa aataa hai.. yehi yeh story ka crux hai..

Thoda Jo miss ho Raha hai yahaa woh Jitu se jaisi chudaai Hui thi waisi abhi Tak nahi hui hai.. pure raw sex.. aur jo unn logo ki pasine ki ya unke sharir se smell jisse Anita apne jahen me utaar leti thi aur vahi khinch jaati thi.. tann Mann se.. wo thoda miss ho rahaa hai.. woh bus wale incidents me aur abhi pasine se lathbath hariya ke sath bhi.. Jo aap ek scene khada karte the Anita ka woh miss kar rahe hai.. matlab unlogo ke sharir ki gandh se Anita ka aksrshit hona.. yeh story ka majedaar jaayaka tha..

BT yeh criticism bilkul nahi hai.. aap bahetarin writer ho yeh koi jhutla nahi shakta.. yahaa hame padhane ke liye time aur jagah mushkil se milte hai to aap to likhane ka kaam karte hai.. hum wo characters ke hisab se padhate hai.. Anita yeh boli/kiya to hariya ne ye bola/kiya.. but aapko to sab characters ke baare me khud hi sochna padata hai fir aap likhate ho.. bahot tough task hai.. hamare liye yeh bhi bahot badi baat hai ki jis story ko hum doondhte rahete the aur Puri milti bhi nahi.. waha aapne usse fir se likha aur naye characters aur situations ke saath aage bhi badha rahe ho.. aap dusri stories koi bhi likho lekin yeh kahaani ka flavor.. tadka.. aisa hi rakhana change mat karna.. hame uummid hai ki aap hamein niraash nhii karenge..

Abhi wale scene me Maine yeh soch thaki.. hariya sharir to kholke baith jayega lekin baat karte karte Anita se hi uska pent khulvata aur lund bahaar nikalwata to tel ki jagah dono ka thuuk milake massage karvaata.. aur Anita hariya ke bajuu me chipak ke baith kar apne saari ke pallu se..bahot pyaar se hariya ka lasina pochhati.. mere hariya ji kitni mahenat karte hai meri madad karne ke liye.. aise sab baate karte woh pochhati jaati uoard se leke chhati pet se hote huve lund takk woh pochhati aur hariya ke jaane ke baad Anita apne pallu ko sungh kar madhosh hoti.. juice hariya ko pilaati baad me hariya ne jahha muh lagaakar Piya waha se hi wo bhi juice pitii.. juice ki bunde hariya ki khuulii chhat pe girti aur Anita whaa uungli se yaa jibh se chht leti.. hariya ke balo me haath ghoomati jab usse jaane ke liye samjha Rahi thi yaa phone le ne ke liye bolti thi..
Aur abhi to jaane ka time to aayaa hai leking hariyaa ne Anita ki chuchi muh me le li.. blouse ke upar se hi.. kya turning point hai aur wahi par aapne story atkaa di.. aur agla update yahi se aage khulega tab dekhte hai kya hota hai..

[Wolf wild]

Update

[Kinkpinkboy]

Waiting for the update sean

[Aparichit69]

Waiting for the update sean

Kinkpinkboy Ji aap bhi na...????

[seansean007]

A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.

[Hellybelly]

I think dialogues are not always repetitive as in a particular scene the happening activity itself took a lot of repetitive sentence. But in scenes do mind that same dialogue must not repeat for multiple times to avoid boredom.for eg hariya keep repeating the same thing and anita keep replying him in same manner....and btw this is also imp but not in all scenes....in some scenes ok but for a particular scene same dialogues can be boring and can portray like author has run out of words....but doing this story will be amply long and slow seductive (not fast in words)as it should be ...just an observation not criticism.

[Kinkpinkboy]

I don't think sean apart from 2-3 readers, there are other so many people complaining about the repetitive nature of the dialogues. I don't think there is anyone who can teach you how to write what to write. We all other people are enjoying the narration. Even if something we feel unusual, we know for the fact that it is there for the right purpose. But there hasn't been any unusual moment so far.

Apart from that "app bhi na" response of Anita to hariya's action or words it is because either there is usual shyness in her because of the "sanskari" upbringing she had been through, while her actions have become bolder and she is keep getting unfolded, it is her talkative emotions which are not opening up, because she is not a whore "yet", she is still a memsahab for hariya, and also using dirty words or giving the dirty responses to hariya's actions, is not something will come out of nowhere because thede things needs an extreme level of comfort for the women who have been brought up in a sophisticated environment till now, while some can open up but Anita hasn't yet and this is what makes her different characters than other if connect Anita's character with any real life person. There are stages where she will open up, and I am sure you have thought about this as well being a writer. She will open up, she will behave like a slut but not so early. There are things we have maintain and keep our patience for, true and faithful readers knows this.

Sean please don't de moralise yourself because of the 2&3 readers, I know it's frustrating when people gets personal with you.
But there are other folks who have been with you since 3-4 years from the inception of this story, And i know you know that. Please use your imagination and write however you want.

There is one thing I would like to tell you is, there will be criticism, there will be some parts or sometimes an entire update, where people will not like it, but I just want to tell you is, it is okay, it is alright to not like something always, but I don't think you should try to stop or change yourself from writing because we are not liking particular things you are doing, I think it should be taken as learning lesson for the future writing. What are you writing is a learning lesson to us as a readers too, because it has been long since only the seduction is unfolding, we were too used to read, see regular sex stories where we didn't experience this but here we are reading it. Please continue to do so.

Thank you

Waiting for the new update

[Nostalgic]

A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.

Please don't get distracted by some random comments. Your writing style is unique, this slow and steady seduction and that too with same consistency, without deviating fron main storyline is not a simple job. To create a scenario in mind and then put it In words, edit it some times before publishing it. It must be taking lots of your personal time.  Appreciate your efforts

[fantasywriter]

A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.

I did not see dialogues as repetitive. Simple sentance like "I love you" repeated numerous time. Similarly we repeat some dialogs during conversation with people or in typical type of mood.  Some time we repeat same dialogues to someone when we know that the person liked that dialog or way of talking.

 
"aap bhi na", kaha kaha sochne lagte ho!  

Are, sadaharn log eise hi baat-chit karten hain. 

Kindly, keep writing in the same style.

[Hellybelly]

A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.

[srider69]

A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.

Sean, perhaps this reply may sound repetitive as many respondents have already voiced the same. You are a great writer with a certain flair, and that's what makes it very interesting.

The fact that Anita keeps saying Aap Bhi Na is like a central theme suggesting that she is interested and continuing with what the other person like Hariya is saying, but she is still keep the decorum of society while she is being promiscuous at the same time. .

You should continue definitely. And you are reaching there, the point of no return, soon, and we are eagerly awaiting. Try to see if you can bring more characters after once Anita culminates with Hariya.

Appreciate a long update soon!

[creamydelight]

Sean, perhaps this reply may sound repetitive as many respondents have already voiced the same. You are a great writer with a certain flair, and that's what makes it very interesting.

The fact that Anita keeps saying Aap Bhi Na is like a central theme suggesting that she is interested and continuing with what the other person like Hariya is saying, but she is still keep the decorum of society while she is being promiscuous at the same time. .

You should continue definitely. And you are reaching there, the point of no return, soon, and we are eagerly awaiting. Try to see if you can bring more characters after once Anita culminates with Hariya.

Appreciate a long update soon!

"
The fact that Anita keeps saying Aap Bhi Na is like a central theme suggesting that she is interested and continuing with what the other person like Hariya is saying, but she is still keep the decorum of society while she is being promiscuous at the same time. .
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I believe this is very succinctly put. I had a similar opinion, but wasn't alle to put it in appropriate words. She says the same thing to every verbal sexual escalation from Hariya... So Hariya knows that she does not object to it or asks him to stop it, and she always says that in a seductive tone, so he knows she is enjoying the praise and wants more, without her actually saying so, and in fact she is only offering cursory modesty on the surface, but inwardly, she might be proud of the praise she is getting, albeit in the only language that she knows comes naturally to Hariya.

[Jyotimoy123]

Bhai update

[shobhitaits]

pl update

[Rizzi1198]

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[Jyotimoy123]

Update kab doge bhai

[shobhitaits]

pl update