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shradha ek innocent wife and teacher
(13-09-2023, 01:02 PM)noghtyboy786 Wrote: 2 din kaa break le raha hu

More like 2 SAAL ka break

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Waiting dear.....
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Kya hua bro update?
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Update please
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hi bro..

next update yaar
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Please update
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We are eagerly waiting for the update
When we see the next update @naughtyboy786
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Writer aata to Roz hai xossipy pe par story kisi or ki hai na to jab wo update dega tab ye wo update copy karke yaha dega......
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Ye story yehi tak hi thi xossip par. So dont expect updates
ThanQue
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Story acche se chal raha tha but firse tumne updates Dena band kar diya. Abhi 1 lakhs ke upar views bhi ho gaya hai. Par fir bhi tum updates nahi diya. 2 din ka break liya tha but 1 month ho gaya Bina updates ke. Mai socha tha iss bar tum story ko complete karoge but , mai galat tha !!!! Itna achaa story ko tum barbad karke rakh diya !!!!! Kisiko tum reply bhi nahi de rahe ho jabki tum online pe ate ho fir bhi reply nahi dete ho ???? Mai tumse bohot request Kiya tha aur bohot appreciate bhi kiya tha shayad issiliye tumhe khud par bohot gurur aur ghamand ho gaya hai !!!!! Neway , last bar puch raha hu story ko age likhoge ke nahi ???? Updates ayega ke nahi ???? Story complete karoge ke nahi ????? Last bar bol do , fir tumhe msg karke aur disturb nahi karunga .....

Galti mera hee tha jo tumhe itna appreciate Kiya aur bhorosa Kiya tum par.....
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(12-10-2023, 11:06 PM)Monster Dick Wrote: Ye story yehi tak hi thi xossip par. So dont expect updates
ThanQue

Sahi bol rahe ho aap..
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(12-10-2023, 11:06 PM)Monster Dick Wrote: Ye story yehi tak hi thi xossip par. So dont expect updates
ThanQue

Bilkul sahi bol rahe ho aap
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(26-09-2023, 10:36 PM)sexikaur Wrote: More like 2 SAAL ka break

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Sahi bola aapne. Ab yeh 2 saal ka break nahi ... Lagta hai story totally closed ho gaya hai.... Galti mera hee tha jo writer ko itna appreciate Kiya tha !!!! Itna bhorosa Kiya tha !!! But, writer ne yeh sabhit kar diya ke kisiko itna bhi appreciate mat karo !!!!! Aur yeh bhi sabit kar diya ke story ko age likhne ke liye unke pass koi idea bhi nahi hai !!!! Writer bhoreshe ke layek hee nahi hai !!!!
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Jabki mai khud writer ko personal msg karke bohot Sara points bataya tha iss story ke liye.... Par kon janta tha ki yeh writer bhi dusra writer ke tarah hee niklega!!!!!
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Neway , dear all readers please stop reading this incomplete story...... Go ahead for new stories in this site.
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Aur ha bar bar yeh incomplete story ko read karke iska views increase mat kijiye .. isse koi farak padne wala nahi hai.... Updates ka ummed ab chor dijiye ...
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haan write gandu nikla, story chhod kar apni gaand marvaane chala gaya dhondu, imran, abdul se
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Dear writer,
          Tum story ko close kar diya tha thik tha .... But , firse tum story ko start Kiya , lekin issbar bhi update Dena band kar diya!!!!! Agar story ko complete nahi karna hai to firse start hee keoun Kiya tha ?????? Itne sare readers ko khush karke firse tum updates Dena band kar diya, jabki tum khub acche se jante ho ki tumahara iss story ka readers kitna bachain hai update ke liye ......
Fir bhi tum issko koi importance nahi de rahe ho !!!!!!  

Updates na Dene ke liye tum par bohot gussa aya tha , tumhe bohot kuch bola bhi ,but sach kahu to mai daily 2 bar iss site pe ake check karta hu shayad tum new updates post Kiye ho... But, daily nirash hona padta hai..... Jabki dekhta hu tum online pe aye the, fir bhi update ka koi khabar nahi hai !!!!!

Abhi sirf ek hee story hai jo sabse best hai , aur woh story hai tumhara iss story jo mai bohot zada pasand karta tha aur abhi bhi karta hu.... Sirf aur sirf iss story ke liye hee mai ab daily 2 bar check karta hu but, harbar nirash hona padta hai.....

Janta hu personal life sabka hota hai aur Kam ke liye log busy bhi raheta hai lekin fir bhi thoda free time to sabke pass hota hai ..... Fir bhi tum iss story par koi importance nahi de rahe ho.... 

Tumne updates Dena bandh kar diya fir bhi iss story ka views daily increase hota ja raha hai..... Abhi bhi tum chaho ge ke story ko band hee rakhna?????? 

I don't know tum kya soch rahe ho iss story ko leke??? Akhir tum story ko complete karoge ke nahi mai nahi janta !!!!!! Fir bhi ek bar sochna iss story ke liye........ It's really very disappointed !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????
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Sach baat to yeh hai ki, abhi bhi Dil nahi Manta hai ki yeh story complete nahi hoga ???? Mai abhi bhi asha rakhta hu iss story ka new updates ayega aur story pura complete bhi hoga ...... Par pata nahi akhir kar yeh hoga ke nahi !!!!!!!! Itna bolne ke baad fir bhi aur ek bar request kar raha hu, agar tumhe Lage ki story ko complete karna sahi hai to please story ko complete karna...... Isse zyada aur kaya bol sakta hu !!!!!! Because, na hee mai koi writer hu aur na hee tumhare jaisa writing skills hai .... Agar Aisa hota to mai khud hee iss story ko complete karta . Lekin tum sirf writer nahi balki tum ek aag ka gola hooo aur tum legendary writer ho .... Tumhara story writing skills ke sath sath story ka plot aur build up dusra koi nahi kar sakta.........

Aur ek sach baat bol raha hu, at present tumhara iss story ke alawa aur koi excellent story iss site par hai hee nahi jisko read karke maza aye .... Issiliye tumko aur ek bar request kar raha hu..... Pata nahi ab tum kya decision loge iss story ko leke ????? !!!!!!!!!!!!  Fir bhi agar time mile to firse ek bar sochna iss story ko leke........
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Bro, akhir kab updates milega??????? Story ko aise hee close mat karo ...... Abhi bhi ummed laga ke baitha hu ke shayed updates ayega . Aur jab bhi online pe ata hu to ek ummed ke sath ata hu , kaya pata shayed updates aagaya  hoga !!!!!!!  Lekin har din nirash hona padta hai....... Akhir kab tak post hoga new updates??????? Please don't close this excellent story........ It's a request to you..... Please complete this story. If at present you are busy then ok , no problem.. Take your time..but, please tell us , when we will seen new updates????
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