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Soma started sucking his cock in her mouth with love. Dawa took hold at that time. The heat inside Soma's mouth made his monstrous cock swell.
Soma is sucking the giant cock of her borkha lover from the bottom. The scent of his peeing a while ago hits her nose. Maybe the subject is as repulsive to cleanliness character as it is to Soma. Still addictive. She is looking at his cock with care. Looking to see if Dawa can be satisfied. Jackie stood nearby wagging his tail. He is watching the sex play of his master and the master's mistress.
Soma has been sucking for a long time. Dawa now wants to face fucking. Her primitive giant Gorkha lover wants to fuck educated Soma's middle aged lovely fair chubby face. Dawa Sherpa immediately started fucking Soma's mouth.
Dawa ji continues to fuck in the mouth for a long time with pauses Soma's body trembled, her vagina flooded. Venom stings are unsettling. Soma's vagina is like a river like a deep hole in the forest. Soma knows that this cock will enter her pussy again and again. But now her master's will is everything.
Dawa Sherpa pulling bidi smoke on Soma's face. Soma's face is now like an open vagina for Dawa sherpa. Dawa threw away the burnt bidi and started fucking Soma's face more forcefully. Soma realizes that her lover doesn't want to fuck her cunt now. Now he wants to cum in his mouth. Soma feels huff and think how a very selfish man my Dawa ji, only understands himself but me.
Dawa, however, has something else in mind. He took the cock out of his mouth. His cock is glistening wet with saliva from Soma's mouth. He said in the tone of order---Soma, lie down on this bed of grass.
Soma did not disobey the orders of the domineering lover. Dawa turned right on Soma. Which is now called 69 position. Dawa will be more beneficial this time to fuck Soma's face. The face can be fuck like a pussy. So he did. On the opposite side, Soma's saree with Saya was lifted on her stomach and open her fair pussy. The man stuck his tongue into it. Jackie is a surprised dog. They started walking around without understanding what was happening.
Dawa is now nonstop fucking Soma's pretty face like pussy fucking in missionary pose. Meanwhile, Soma's restless pussy is having Dawa's tongue flirting. Evening is falling in the forest. The fog is covering. So what? Soma has also become a brave woman by falling in love with an adventurous mountain lover. Soma felt her orgasm coming without penetration. Water is dripping from her vagina. Dawa is definitely still going strong. Within a few moments, Dawa trembled and poured semen into Soma's mouth. Soma had to swallow his semen as much of the hatred as she could. The rest spread on her whole mouth. Dawa Sherpa stood up.
Dawa is busy building a fire by piling pieces of wood nearby. Soma lay still devastated, exhausted. Dawa said---Will you sleep or help a little?
Soma sat up. Dawa has ignited the fire. Soma's face then looks like a bangd woman in the light of fire. Dawa laughed and said---Wash your face.
Soma looked at Dawa ji with an angry face. She washed hee face and came fresh. Dawa saw Soma's face still showing mild anger. He said jokingly---This time you look like the strict teacher of the college.
Dawa knows that anger is just a drama. Because Soma didn't stop during oral sex. Dawa lay down with his head on Soma's lap and said---Take me under your saree's anchal.
----Why? What do you want to do with your mouth inside the may saree?
----I am hungry. I want wants to feed My Santu Babu-Antu Babu's mom's duddus.
A shy smile on Soma's face. Still, with a face of anger, she said---Get up from my lap. Yoy barbarian ! What were you did in my mouth?
---What's in the mouth?
Soma blushed. Said---You hurts my face.
Dawa said---will you drink some daru? A special mountain desi liquor. All pain will be healed.
---That's all that's left. You leave the smoke of beedi in my mouth, and now drink alcohol.
---Truly Soma, drink it. It will be great fun.
Dawa opened the bottle. Very strong smell. Dawa swallowed a bit. Then add a little water to the bottle. When he went to give it to Soma, Soma again acted angry. Dawa said---don't drink? Today you must drink. My order. Otherwise I'll pee on you.
Soma said---Dawa ji, why are you insisting?
---What is the harm of enjoying for a day? Our Sherpa woman here also drink to reduce the cold.
Soma reluctantly took the bottle and took a look. Then she said---Please, Dawa Ji. I can't...
Dawa's eyes widened in anger. Soma took a gulp from the bottle like a pet cat. Her throat was on fire. But what a sweet taste. Dawa took the bottle and poured another down his throat. Re-gave Soma. Soma poured again.
The bottle is half now, and it's dark all around. Only fire is burning near them. Soma's head is shaking. She is addicted. Understanding Dawa. Dawa played the tape recorder. The Nepali song was played immediately. Soma's heart suddenly felt a rush of joy and intense courage, she said----want to watch my dance? look at this.
Soma stood up. The legs are not moving. Soma is knotted at the waist of her saree. Then she dance in Rabindrik style. Dance on Rabindra sangeet she learned in her student life. Dawa began to watch the dance of Soma Chakraborty, a forty-year-old college teacher. Soma doesn't feel cold anymore. She took off her shal. Soft body fat, and heavy breasts are swaying. Jackie also sits cross-legged near his owner Dawa Sherpa.
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Dawa finished the bottle. His red eyes suddenly said in a hard tone----I don't like this dance. Dance like Randi. I want to see a Randnach.
Soma said---How is that?
Dawa swayed his muscular body in a way that mimicked Soma's soft heavy breasts. Soma is intoxicated. So he started. In this dance there is nothing but a plump fair waist and swinging heavy breasts. Dawa Sherpa, however, is enjoying itself.
Dawa again inserted a beedi between his lips. Soma brought the lighter and lit it. Then she again started dancing. Dawa is lying with a slight bump, occasionally pulling the ball. He brought his cock from his trouser. Seeing Soma's obscene dance, he took it in his hand and started shaking it.
Dawa pointed to Soma's breast and asked to remove her anchal. Drunk Soma did so. Dawa Ji took off his own genji. Soma is now dancing in saya, blouse. Both Dawa and Soma began to dance with their hips swaying intoxicated. Soma has no idea. She has forgotten that she is a well-educated woman, a high college teacher, a mother of two sons, a wife of a high-ranking government officer!
Soma never danced in her student life except to Rabindra Sangeet. Today, she dances to the rhythm of Nepali songs like Dawa ji. Dawa also is dancing to the rhythm of Nepali music by holding her waist behind. Dawa lifted her blouse with bra and exposed her breasts. Then he started pressing both breasts. Soma giggled drunkenly. Both are laughing. Soma's ass is raised by the waist, Dawa sherpa is rubbing his hands on her thighs. He turned Soma towards himself. The two face each other and dance in this cold weather. Dawa wearing trouser only, bare chest. Soma wearing a Saya, but her blouse lifted above her fair plump heavy breasts. Soma is now a drunk womam said in an intoxicated tone---I love you Dawa Ji.
---I am also Soma. how much do you love me?
Soma's tone is faint. Dawa knows that he made her drunk a well educated conservative beautiful woman. He knows this woman is drunk now to love with dawa.
Soma said like a drunkard---a lot....
--Give me proof?
Soma laughed out loud. Said---Kiss me? Fuck me, I will do whatever you want.
---Will you marry me?
Soma said---Yes I will. I will do it here. In this mountain of yours. Soma is really drunk now. There is no place to think about the future.
Dawa said---We will do it in the temple tomorrow. In that Shiva temple. Promise?
Soma pinched Dawa's lips. Dawa took Soma on his lap and started walking towards the forest in the dark. Jackie is also moving behind. Open facing hills. A streak of light is visible in the distance. In a far away village. Dawa said---Wait here. Won't go anywhere.
Dawa went down the mountain slope and came to the river. He extinguished the fire. He collect Soma's bag, his own bag. When he came back, all around deep darkness! He took out the flash light from his bag and turned it on. Gathered wood and made a fire. But where is Soma!
Dawa started looking for Soma. He began to shine the flash light around the forest, but there was no Soma anywhere. Dawa called---Soma? Soma? Soma Ji?
No response. Dawa was worried. He started looking here and there like crazy man. The addiction to Dawa is not what it used to be. Beside the huge deep ditch, Soma was drunk, what if Soma? If she fall into this ditch, you will not find a single bone of the body. Dawa is going crazy.
----- Soma! Soma! Where are you?
The forest trembled with the shout of a masculine heavy tone of Dawa Sherpa like thunder. But there is no Soma anywhere.
Suddenly Dawa remembered Jackie. Where is jackie!
Can't see Jackie! Dawa has moved deeper and deeper into the forest. Even familiar places feel unfamiliar to him now. Something happened in grass. like a soft fur, Dawa Sherpa stumbled. What is that! In the light of the torch, he can clearly see the area covered in blood. Jackie's body is lying.
Dawa was surprised at first, then excruciating pain. And then his eternal rage. Dawa does not understand who did this! But where is Soma? Dawa will be crazy!
The trail of blood on the grass moved higher up the hillside. Dawa is looking right blood, is it Jackie's? No. Dawa did not have to go far. Lying half-naked Soma, wearing petticoat lifted to her waist, exposed breast. Murder! Dawa realizes that someone has killed his Soma. Dawa never cried, he was a hard hearted man. When Kesavi's mother died, he had pain in his chest, but he did not shed a single tear. He didn't drop it even today. Dawa Sherpa is bursting with pain and sorrow. Suddenly he became angry---Madarchod! Who are you? Come in front of me...
The soft sound in the silent forest is sudden in origin. A man behind a pine tree in the face of a flash light. In the light of the flash light, the glasses are clearly visible in his eyes.
The man in the full slip jacket came out in front of Dawa. Dawa knows this man, knows him very well. This man is an ordinary Bengali gentleman known to him. The face still has the impression of a typical intellectual educated personality like Bengalis. Aiming the revolver in his hand at Dawa.
Dawa Sherpa of strong well built six feet body, whose muscular strength, temper, and the whole village of Tunglu is afraid of him. Now he trembling in front of this man, an ordinary intellectual educated working class Bengali man. The man did not give a single second, came to the Dawa's chest and pierced two bullets one after the other! 'Dumm! Dumm!'
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In the morning, three bodies, one of a dog and two of a human, were found in the forest. Semen was found on the thigh of the woman, the woman was bangd and killed by goons; security officer thought. Goons or goon security officer dont know. It is not known how many there were. According to the security officer, this Bengali woman came with his two son to visit sandakphu forest. because of the identity of the Gorkha watchman of their house, who was killed by goon also in Sandakpur forest.
The security officer believe that the killers must be forest poachers.
Years have passed. Subir took two sons home. Sold the Kolkata flat and moved to Delhi. The grief of losing their mother gripped the two boys. But Santu got more shock. He also talks less with his father these days. Subir knows that he has a big responsibility now. security officer investigation is going on, so sometimes he has to come to Kolkata. Subir comes to Kolkata and learns that the security officer investigated and found out that Soma had an extramarital relationship with this Watchman. security officer also arrested two poachers. They are out for lack of evidence.
Subir is supposed to return from Kolkata today. security officer want to close the case. There is no evidence of this murders. Darjeeling security officer station to Kolkata and investigating this contact, the security officer feel that there is no way to solve this case. The security officer will close the case after Subir's permission.
Subir returned from Kolkata to Delhi by evening flight. He now took a new flat instead of taking a quarter. Antu in the reading room. Santu is standing by the window in his own room. Light rain is falling outside. His eyes were deeply focused on the rain outside. He did not even look at Dad entering the house.
Subir left his clothes and freshened up and made tea for himself. He stood in front of the big picture of Soma. Once Subir used to draw art, Subir has a very good idea about art. He suddenly felt that there was a mistake somewhere in this frame. A bird should have been next to this large portrait of Soma. Yes Subir wanted to make Soma a free bird as she wanted. Subir thought to himself that he managed to free Soma.
----I set you free Soma. Eternal, celestial.
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Nice one sir.... But the end was very emotional
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21-09-2023, 11:41 PM
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Finally got the desired update!
Nothing to say.. In one word..Mindblowing!!!
Just started reading .. After completing 2 paras, I couldn't but comment. Let finish the full updates. . .
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Why this has been finished in here? You can run the story...You told in Bengali thread you will give 3 updates.
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You are so clever Henry da..you finished but we don't want finishing this story like here..you can continue the love of soma and dawa .. their marriage and love ..then you can finish like you want
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Nice compilation but poor climax.
Henry closed this story at once because he is not finding enough time to write the stories nowadays.
This story definitely deserves PART 2. I cannot digest this climax.
Let Dawa and Soma come back again. Because in the new channel, they have mentioned only 2 bodies and they have mentioned any name. So, they are not dead yet and can give a come back.
Due to her injury Soma affected by memory loss and couldn’t remember anything. The local nearby village people has rescued her and were giving her treatment for 2 years. In 2 years of treatment slowly slowly she starts remembering that she has a family - husband and 2 children and they lived in Kolkata. So, she understands this truth and travelled back to Kolkata to see her family. But then she comes to know the truth through her neighbors that Subhir has sold the flat and moved to Delhi. Then she travels to Delhi to meet Subhir and explained her situation and told him that she had memory loss and remember only few things. Subhir was happy hearing this that she doesn’t remember Dawa and they started living again like husband and wife in Delhi.
Dawa try to find this truth and comes to Delhi to meet Soma and tries to remind and explain her everything, but Soma doesn’t remember anything and reacts completely like a stranger. Dawa understands the situation and stays in Delhi find a watchman job nearby Soma’s house and try to get close to Soma again. This time Soma will be a tough target because she stays with her husband.
And the usual story starts again!!!
There are many stories has been concluded and then continued as part 2 due to readers wish and comments. So, this story should be continued too and we require majority of audience to support on this to continue. May be Henry can consider this to continue in such a way, if he is not interested or doesn’t have time someone who are good in writing stories can continue with Henry’s permission.
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Perfectly ended. Without dragging it too much ..
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He doesn't want to write more or doesn't get enough time for reading... it's so early finishing of this great story . We want you you come back.
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I mainly write erotica stories about extramarital affairs. A woman has many future possibilities if she has an extramarital affair.
1. Finally the woman divorces the husband.Live in or have a new family with her new lover. The age 18 to 30, this is what happens when women commit adultery at this young age.
2. The husband feels helpless. He has no choice but to accept his wife's affair. In that case the husband is cuckolded. In the age of 35 to 50, mature wife, has this extramarital affair practically due to illness of husband, sexual impotence, boredom or absence of husband.
3. Marital life is at the stage of quarrels. A wife or husband now goes to the stage of suicide or mental imbalance. Very exceptional event. And this incident is very tragic. It occurs when a woman marries against her will despite having a boyfriend and has an affair with an old boyfriend after marriage.
4. Husband sues wife for adultery. It destroys the honor of husbands or wives in the society. Whoever has more money or social influence wins. In this case, if there are children than all extramarital affairs, they suffer more.
5. An extramarital affair is kept secret from the husband. The affair ends in a few years or in an instant or a period of time. A lot of wife's extramarital affair are like that. Such extramarital affairs are common in the society. But it remains a secret. No one can know. Middle age housewives are involved in this affair.
6. It is the path of violence. Killing each other happens. Such events are deadly. Which is an exception but we can find out in the newspaper.
Again, if a man commits adultery, the consequences may be different. Since here is the story of female adultery; In this story I ended up on route 6. It could have been the other route. But some context of the story was moving in that direction. This is what I had in mind in my story. Maybe this ending could have been done more creatively. I had to hurry due to lack of time.
I will definitely bring a new story when the time comes. For now I will finish 'Hemanter Aranye' in Bengali section before Puja. Maybe a new story appeared during the Puja vacations. Maybe in that new coming story the readers' wishes were not fulfilled, maybe. Thank you.
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Everything was good. the emotions, scenes , build up all quite good. But just add anal. mature wifes ass & lowclass mans dick is a must.. the man will coax & cajole & little bit pressurize the woman for anal. Pls add this in ur stories
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We want you regular
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Fantastic Finish. Hats off to your writing.
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Superb writing.....
For non bengali readers we have only this story to enjoy your writing skills....
So kindly continue....
Or
Translate your other stories in english....
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(21-09-2023, 10:39 PM)Henry Wrote: In the morning, three bodies, one of a dog and two of a human, were found in the forest. Semen was found on the thigh of the woman, the woman was banged and killed by goons; security officer thought. Goons or goon security officer dont know. It is not known how many there were. According to the security officer, this Bengali woman came with his two son to visit sandakphu forest. because of the identity of the Gorkha watchman of their house, who was killed by goon also in Sandakpur forest.
The security officer believe that the killers must be forest poachers.
Years have passed. Subir took two sons home. Sold the Kolkata flat and moved to Delhi. The grief of losing their mother gripped the two boys. But Santu got more shock. He also talks less with his father these days. Subir knows that he has a big responsibility now. security officer investigation is going on, so sometimes he has to come to Kolkata. Subir comes to Kolkata and learns that the security officer investigated and found out that Soma had an extramarital relationship with this Watchman. security officer also arrested two poachers. They are out for lack of evidence.
Subir is supposed to return from Kolkata today. security officer want to close the case. There is no evidence of this murders. Darjeeling security officer station to Kolkata and investigating this contact, the security officer feel that there is no way to solve this case. The security officer will close the case after Subir's permission.
Subir returned from Kolkata to Delhi by evening flight. He now took a new flat instead of taking a quarter. Antu in the reading room. Santu is standing by the window in his own room. Light rain is falling outside. His eyes were deeply focused on the rain outside. He did not even look at Dad entering the house.
Subir left his clothes and freshened up and made tea for himself. He stood in front of the big picture of Soma. Once Subir used to draw art, Subir has a very good idea about art. He suddenly felt that there was a mistake somewhere in this frame. A bird should have been next to this large portrait of Soma. Yes Subir wanted to make Soma a free bird as she wanted. Subir thought to himself that he managed to free Soma.
----I set you free Soma. Eternal, celestial.
very nice story...enjoyed ++++++++END++++++++
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Though the end was cruel, it was convincing. Thank you for the wonderful story.
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So that Bengali educated man is subir? Subir killed the dawa and soma?
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Should be continued......
Henry da we will miss your writings....
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28-09-2023, 02:38 PM
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No one would dare to say this was your first 'english' story. You rocked it! It was full of sexual and emotional tension. And the end was as apt as it was shocking. So I was fully satisfied by the read.
I must say, you have been done fabulous job by explaining debauchery of a mom and wife, Soma in third person narrative, which is damn difficult thing to do.
Kudos..
And beg you to please consider writing in english going ahead (along with bengali... I know there will be hardcore readers for your bengali stories).
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