22-08-2023, 12:09 PM
Just write as you please. It is your story. There may be some lag. But it is ok. Continuaty is very much important. Digressing should not make you loose focus.
Incest குடும்ப கச்சேரி 2.0
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22-08-2023, 12:09 PM
Just write as you please. It is your story. There may be some lag. But it is ok. Continuaty is very much important. Digressing should not make you loose focus.
25-08-2023, 03:33 AM
your writing skills are great bro
25-08-2023, 05:18 PM
semma hot story.super mixing
31-08-2023, 02:23 AM
enna achu no updates... cont more
31-08-2023, 09:40 AM
waiting for your updatessss
31-08-2023, 03:29 PM
(20-08-2023, 03:46 PM)Eros1949 Wrote: You are wasting your effort and writing talent on this less interesting-flashback. Anyway your choiceYou have all the right to criticise or to review the story but don't tell the author to stop writing, There are very few authors who give regular updates and people like you are killing those few good authors.
31-08-2023, 06:57 PM
01-09-2023, 02:51 AM
(31-08-2023, 06:57 PM)Jeyjay Wrote: I am sorry. I am a great fan of this story. I enjoyed reading when Sanjana and close family was there. You were fantastic and very erotic. The flashback was less interesting with totally new characters.
04-09-2023, 06:04 AM
08-09-2023, 02:17 AM
please cont writing the strory
07-03-2024, 12:54 PM
(22-08-2023, 08:44 AM)Jeyjay Wrote: i have no choice ... may be my story not impressed you much, sorry for that ..but i cannot change the core of the story i have to go with this flash back ..to keep my story continue...stopping flashback is like ending my story . Thanks for your very kind response. Waiting for update |
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