[yogirajtillu]

mat padho na .. baaki bahut kahaaniyan hain waisi .. sex se bharpoor.

5 star rating wali story hai. Agree that introducing lot of characters is leading to some confusion. Roshni can be a Sharif aurat with others and Masti only with teen buddhe. Overall, after Aslam ki Kamya this story has impressed me. That story by mgaya initially did not get responses but later became the best masterpiece. Overall I liked it until mgaya wrote it but later the character of Kamya suddenly changed to a whore by new writer. Shanti ji is transforming  Roshni slowly and slowly by creating situations and appears that the first action is not too far.

[yogirajtillu]

Not sure how to rate thread. Logging after long time just to rate 5 stars so Shantiji doesn't stop writing

[Bakchod Londa]

Mithai Dekhi Nahi Ki Makhyian Bhinabhinane Lag Gayi.
Dekhtey Safar Ke Dauran Salim Chicha Meethai Ka First Bite Le Pate Hain Ya Nahi ...Ya Direct Sabut Hi Nigal Janeka Irada Hai....

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

5 star rating wali story hai. Agree that introducing lot of characters is leading to some confusion. Roshni can be a Sharif aurat with others and Masti only with teen buddhe. Overall, after Aslam ki Kamya this story has impressed me. That story by mgaya initially did not get responses but later became the best masterpiece. Overall I liked it until mgaya wrote it but later the character of Kamya suddenly changed to a whore by new writer. Shanti ji is transforming  Roshni slowly and slowly by creating situations and appears that the first action is not too far.

Thanks for detailed response. Every story has side characters who just nudge the heroine into certain situations .. same is here.

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Not sure how to rate thread. Logging after long time just to rate 5 stars so Shantiji doesn't stop writing

If u like story and think its 5stars u may rate it as same.  No force

[Blackdick11]

Zabardast!!!!...ek dum sahi jaa rahi hain, shanthi ji.
Keep it up.
na jane roshni aisa konsa jadu karti h k sa usse dekhte hi log apne lund maslne lag jate...chahe woh aam sa coolie ho ya koi train ka TC. koi v usse flirt krne ka mauka hi nahi chor tha. mujhe to bas fikar us budhhe salim ki akhir kese khud par kabu rakh payega...is 12 ghnte ki train journey ke dauran...aur abhhi to shadi ka program v baki hai..... tension bahut high voltage hone wali hai.
Ab intezar nahi ho rha agle update ka ...kab aa rha hai agla update shanthi ji ...plz let us know

[yogirajtillu]

If u like story and think its 5stars u may rate it as same.  No force

Issue is different Shantiji. I want to rate 5 stars but unable to find option. Can you guide me how to rate 5 star.

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Issue is different Shantiji. I want to rate 5 stars but unable to find option. Can you guide me how to rate 5 star.

When u click on hindi stories thread . Then infront of my title there are stars. So click on 5th star if its 5 stars and it will be updated backend

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Zabardast!!!!...ek dum sahi jaa rahi hain, shanthi ji.
Keep it up.
na jane roshni aisa konsa jadu karti h k sa usse dekhte hi log apne lund maslne lag jate...chahe woh aam sa coolie ho ya koi train ka TC. koi v usse flirt krne ka mauka hi nahi chor tha. mujhe to bas fikar us budhhe salim ki akhir kese khud par kabu rakh payega...is 12 ghnte ki train journey ke dauran...aur abhhi to shadi ka program v baki hai..... tension bahut high voltage hone wali hai.
Ab intezar nahi ho rha agle update ka ...kab aa rha hai agla update shanthi ji ...plz let us know

Soon within two days

[yogirajtillu]

When u click on hindi stories thread . Then infront of my title there are stars. So click on 5th star if its 5 stars and it will be updated backend

Done hopefully got updated. Congrats, already reached 4 stars. Just one more star needs to increase

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Done hopefully got updated. Congrats, already reached 4 stars. Just one more star needs to increase

thanks dear .. yes thanks to all ur love

[ricah43165]

Soon within two days

Thank u for the info....
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Thank u for the info....
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Yes sure

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Ab train station par ruk jata hain …

“Roshni ji station aa chuka hain .. mujhe ab station par aapke cabin mein chipkali aur uski thdi saaf safai karne jinko bulaya hain wah aate hi honge .. aap cabin chaliye mere saath wah aaenge wahan par.”

“Theek hain Khalid ji chaliye”



“Roshni ji pehle aap chaliye..”



Roshni ab apni gaand matkate huye aage chali jati hain ,





 piche se khalid ab Roshni ki matakti chaal dekh apne ubharte lode ko khujlata hain ..(haay kya chutad hain iski uffff … agar pakad kar daba lun toh ahhh kitna maja aaega )… is soch se uska loda ek jordar jhatka maarta hain …



Khalid ki nazar fir uski gori se bahon pr , deep blouse wali Mulayam makhmali peeth par jaati hain .. uska loda toh uski pant mein bina control ke jahtkon par jhatka maarta hain … uffff is lode ko daba lun pure badan par iske ahh ufff kya kadak maal hain yaar …. )



Aise sab khalid tc ke dimaag mein baatein chalti rehti hain aur wah dono cabin pahunch jate hain …

“Salim ji uthiye .. yahan cleaning karne tc sir ne kisko bulaya hain .. chipkali bhi nikalenge ..”



Salim ab khalid ko dekhta hain aur samajh jata hain tharki sala Roshni par aankehin tikaye huye hain …

Khalid bhi salim ko dekh muskurata hain …(sala aisi mast maal ko pataya hoga kamine ne .. maze leta hoga sala buddha …)



Fir kuch 5 min baad do log aate hain cabin ki cleaning or chipkali ko nikalne …



“Roshni ji mujhe jana hoga .. is stop ka log karna padega .. is station par itna bada stp nahi hota hain .. isliye ab iske baare mein note don karna padega … mein ab jata hun …”



Salim kahi aur dekh raha hota hain toh Khalid Roshni ke kanon mein kehta hain

“Roshni ji agar kuch takleef ho toh aapke paas toh mera number hain hi .. call kar lijye .. aapka intezar karunga … “ aur khalid Roshni ko dekh muskurata hain ..



“Haan khalid ji theek hain .. aap jaiye”. Fir Khalid TC wahan se chala jata hain.





kuch 10 min baad sab kaam khatam hota hain aur wah aadmi wahan sechale jate hain.. aur train apni safar par fir se nikal jati hain.



“Roshni ji accha kaam kiya aapne ..”



“Salim ji aap toh so chuke the mast … ab karna toh pada hi na .. aapko pata hain mujhe chipkali se kitna dar aur ghinn hoti hain … chalo ab sab clean ho chuka hain …”



Fir ek ladka chai lekar aata hain aur kuch snacks .. aur dono salim aur Roshni chai peete peete snacks khatam kar dete hain.



“Salim ji aap rukiye mein jara tc sir ko shukriya karke aati hun.”



“Roshni ji arrey kyun , usne kaam kiya na apna .. ab chor dijiye ..”



“Arrey .. bahut madat ki hain .. kafi jaldi se madat kari hain , aise yeh train wale nahi karte kaam .. unhe shukriya toh kehna hi hoga..”



“Accha mein bhi ata hun … Roshni ji”



“Arrey kya aap mere body guard ho .. haha …” Roshni hasti hain.. “Mujhe pata hain unka office mein jakar shukriya kar aati hun tab tak aap aram kijiye ..

Salim ab kya bolta .. chupkar se wahi baithe rehta hain aur Roshni chali jati hain



(Sala Tc .. safar mein 3 ghante huye hain aur ab tak mein hi na le paya aur wahan who tc toh khud hi maze le raha hain Roshni ke company ka .. kuch karna hoga yaar nahi toh safar khatam hogi aur Roshni se kuch masti aur baatein bhi nahi ho paegi … Salim kuch plan ki sochta hain.)





Dusri aur roshni tc ke office chali jati hain .. wahan who tc ko unki chair mein dekhti hain .. tc kuchh mobile par dekh raha hoain aur kuch table ke niche harkatein karte Roshni ko dikhta hain .. (darasal TC Roshni ko dekh itna garam ho chuka tha who apni mobile par kuch porn dekh raha tha aur apne mote lode ko hila raha tha 

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.. lekin Roshni yeh dekh nahi paati table ki wajah se. )

“Khalid ji ,…. Aap busy lagte ho …”



Roshni ki achanak aawaz sun wah hadbada jata hain … ufff yeh toh wapas aa gayi … itna sochte hi wah apne lode ko jhat se pant mein daal ta hain .. lekin zip lagana bhul jata hain ..



“Arrey Roshni ji aap aa gayi .. “



“Haan khalid ji aapko shukriya karne aayi hun .. aap busy toh nahi the …?”



(uff ab kya batau tune itna garam kar diya hain porn dekh raha tha aur tere baare mein soch muth maar raha tha ….)



“Nahi nahi kuch nahi baithiye na..”



Roshni baith jati hain … Tc fir apni chair ko table ke piche se nikal kara age lata hain …



Roshni use dekhti hain aur uski nazar khalid ke crotch area par jati hain .. aur uska zip khula dekh chaunk jati hain lekin chehre par koi bhaav nahi badalti …

(ufff khalid ji ki toh zip khuli hain .. ufffkya who mobile par … uffff aur kya who m…. uffff )



Khalid is bata se bekhabar chair adjust karta hain .. wahan Roshni uski khuli zip par fir se nazar dalti hai .. use andar kuch hilte huye bhi dikhta hain .. lekin apni nazar hatae huyi baithi rehti hain.



“Roshni ji kaisi shukriya ki baatein kar rahi ho aap .. farz hain mera …”

Roshni khalid ko dekh nahi pa rahi thi .. bas uske khule zip ki sochti rehti hain..



“Roshni ji kya hua .. zara yahan dekhiye …”



Roshni Dheere se chehra khalid ke taraf karti hain .. control karte huye ki uski nazar uske khule zip par na jaaye..



“nahi bas shukriya karne aayi thi .. mei jaati hun”



“arrey Roshni ji na jaiye rukiye na … fir khalid aage apni baithne ki position adjust karta hi hain ki Roshni ki nazar uske khule zip par jati hain aur Roshni uske lode ke kuch hisse ko dekh pati hain ..



(ufff unka loda ka hissa dikh raha hain ufff mein kya karu ….)



Khalid kuch aur adjust karta hain seat aur Roshni ko ab uska loda aur saaf dikhta hain .. uske gaal toh pure laal ho jate hain …

Khalid bhi aakhir kar dekh hi leta hain Roshni ki nazar uske crotch ke wahan pehle ki Roshni uski nazar wahan se hata laeti hain tab tak… .. fir khalid khud niche dekhta hain toh use samajh aata hain ki uski zipkhuli hain aur Roshni ki nazar wahi par thi … lekin is baat se bekhabar hote ka natak kar wah bolta hain

“Roshni ji fir se aap kahi aur dekh rahi ho .. dekhiye na yahan ..”



Khalid kamina tha .. wah ab jaan bujh ka raise baitha hua tha ki uska loda zip mein se Roshni ko aur dikhe ..

Roshni mudti hain aur nazar fir se zip par jati hain … khalid maze leta hain is sab ka … Roshni ji kahan nzar hain aapki ..

Roshni sharmati hain puri laal gaalon ki sharmahat se …

Khalid ab “Roshni ji jara muje toilet jana hain .. aap kahi na jaiye rukiye ..plz”



Roshni kuch nahi bolti … fir khaliduth jata hain toh ab uska loda thoda bahar hi aata hain zip ke .. Roshni ki toh sharmahat aur badhti hain .. (ufff inhe pata hain kya zip khula hain aur mei inke lund ko ufff f… ab mein kya kahu inse uffff )



Khalid is sab ka mazza lete huye jata hain usi ke office ke bahar toilet mein .. aur jaan bujh kar darwaza zara khula chorta hain …



Wahan Roshni se raha nahi jar aha tha .. wah ab khalid ke lode ko dekhne utsuk thi ..

Uski devil thots fir se aati hain

“Roshni ja kar dekho kitna mota loda hoga tc ka .. jaao …”

“Arrey Roshni pagal ho kya .. aise na karo .. kya hua hain tumhe”



“Arrey j ana dekh .. aise mauke nahi milte .. mardon ke lundon ko dekhne .. ja .. man ki murad puri kar .. mujhe pata hain tujhe uska lund dekhna hain..”



“Nahi mat karna aise Roshni tum acchi lady ho plz na karo…”



Lekin Roshni apne devil thots ko apne upar havi hone deti hain aur uth kar toilet ke paas jaati hain.



wahan kahlid apne lode ko pichsab karte huye wah dekhti hain .. uski dil men churiyan chalne lagti hain .. (uffff kafi mota hain … ab salim aur aslam aur Ramesh se toh mota nahi lekin  ufffff kafi mast hain  .. oh god roshni yeh tum kya soch rahi ho uffff..)

Khalid bhi apne lode ko hilata hain .. uski aaknhon ke kone se wah dekh pata hain roshni ki nazarein.. aur apne lode ko aur hilata hain .. aur pura sakht karta hain apne lode ko..





Wahan Roshni ke anadar k garmi aur ek lode ko dekh badhti hain ..uski nazar bas khalild ke mote lode par hi tikai rehti hain … uffff kitna accha hain .. muh mein toh …)





(ufff  Roshni kya sochti rehti ho aise gandi cheezein ufff …ufffff unka mutna khatam ho raha hain .. yahan se jana chahiye   uffff…)



Aur ek aakhri nazar dal Roshni wahan se jakar office mein baith jati hain.



Khalid ab wahan aata hain is baar zip band kiye .. wah toh khush tha ki Roshni uske lode ko dekh chukti thi … aisi gori gadrayi badan wali mahila uske lode ko dekh chuki thi .. is baat se uska loda toh sakth hi rehta hain pant mein.

Wah office aata hain toh Roshni ki nazar seedhe wahan jati hain aur uske sakht ubhar ko dekh pati hain.. lekin uski nazar wahan se hatne ka naam hi nahi leti … uski chut mein hulchul honi shuru huyi thi …

“Roshni ji … kaisa laga …”



“Khalid ji matlab …” Roshni hadbada kar bolti hain .. apne nazaron ko wahan se nikalti huyi.



“Roshni ji .. train kaisa laga …. Bas wahi puch raha hun ..”



“hm.. hmm.. haan accha hain .. bahut accha …”



Roshni lode ki baatkar rahi thi .. ya train ki ???….



“Khush hun aapko bahut accha laga .. train …”



“Roshni fir khalid ko dekh hadbadati huyi ..

“haan train .. haan train bahut acchi hain …”

“Roshni ji kafi clean hain na …. Mein bahut clean rakhta hun yahan …”



“Haan khalid ji kafi clean hain .. train …”



“Accha aur kya accha laga .. waise badi train hain na …”



“Haan kafi badi hain … train ..”

Roshni kitni bhi try kare uski nazar khalid ke lode ke wahan chali hi jati hain .. uske sakth lode ke ubhar par..



Fir khalid uth khada hota hain aur kuch paper apni table se uthane Roshni eke zara nazdeek jata hi hain .. aur Roshni ki aankhon ke samne ab khalid ka sakth ubhar tha … kafi kareeb uske lips ke ..



Khaid jaan bujh kar kuch dhundne ka natak karta hain .. Roshni ki nazar bhi uske lode ke sakth ubhar par hi thi.. wahan se hata nahi rahi thi nazar aur uski aankhein bhi halke se band ho rahi thi …






Scene aise ta ki agar train thoda bhi bada jhatka deta toh khalid ka sakth ubhar jakar seedhe Roshni ke muh se takrata …



Fir khalid kuch paper nikalta hain … aur baith jata hain kursi par…



“Roshni ji … ..



Roshni is sab se kafi sehem chuki thi .. uski chut mein garmahat badh rahi thi … garmi cha rahi thi … pehle ki kuch aur hota wah uth jati hain..



“Khalid ji mujhe jana hoga .. fir se shukriya aapka ..”

“Arrey Roshni ji kahan jar ahi ho …” aur khalid Roshni ke hathon ko tham leta hain ..

Roshni ki badan mein mano churiyan chalne lagti hain…



“Khalid ji .. kya kar rahe ho aap … mera haath choriye na..”



Khalid ek halka sasqueeze deta hain ..”Oh sorry Roshni ji .. “ aur apna haath nikalta hain ..

“I am so sorry Roshni . I didn’t mean to..”



“Its fine Khalid ji … but I need to go.. mujhe jana hoga …”



“Haan Roshni ji zaroor mein kaun hun aapko rokne wala .. u may go..”



Roshni imprss thi khalid ke English se .. kafi fluent the .. “Khalid ji bas salim ji intezaar kar rahe hone ..”



“No problems jaaiye .. bas humein na bhuliye Roshni ji … humara number bhi diya hain aapko .. jab koi tarin ki booking hoy a aur kuch kaam , mujhe call kariye …”

“Han khalid ji theek hain …”

Fir Roshni wahan se chali jati hain .. uske dimaag mein khalid ka mota loda ghumte rehta hain .. chut ki garmahat bhi use mehsus hote huye Roshni ab wahan se cabin ke taraf chali jati hain.



Ab dusri aur is sab ke daruan Salim apne plan ko amal karne mein laga hua tha …

Wah is safar mein kisi bhi haal mein Roshni ke saath puri masti karna chahta tha … agar sidhe tareeke se Roshni usse pat nahi jati toh wah ghee tedi ungli se bhi nikalna janta tha …

Usne ek sexual feelings badhane wali goli laayi thi .. usne use Roshni par use karne ka plan banaya tha agar wah seedhe tarike se usse masti nak arti toh.. Salim ab kafi desperate ho chuke the aur use abhi istemaal karne ka soch liya tha usne.

Train mein soft drinks bechte huye ek aadmi ko pakad kar usne do soft drinks le li thi .. aur wah use coke mein milane wala tha aur use Roshni ko dene wala tha peene.





Roshni cabin mein aa gayi ..



“Roshni ji sab theek hain na .. “



“Haan salim ji theke hain sab .. kyun nahi hoga .. theek hun “



Roshni ke dimaag meinbas khalid ka loda ghum raha tha aur uske anadr ki garmi badhi huyi thi.

“Roshni ji meine soft drinks kharidi hain .. hum dono pienge use abhi theek hain na …”

“Haan theek hain .. lekin jara rukiye bag se thoda wipe nikalne dijiye .. mere haaath thode gande hain,,,”



Roshni uth kar bag se wipe nikalne lag jati hain .. aur salim usi mauke ka fayda uthate huye uski soft drink mein wah nasheeli garmi badhane wali goli milata hain…



Roshni apne hathon ko clean karti hain .. fir Salim ek soft drink ki bottle Roshni ko deta hain .. jis mein nasheeli goliyan milayi huyi thi.




Roshni is sab se bekhabar soft drink pine , bottle ko apne hothon se lagati hain…

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Shanthi ji inka bolna b sahi hai..... Aur apka story ko plot Krna b sahi hai......but story ko jyda plot krne se story me excitement khatam hojata hai.......ab isi kahani me dekh lijiye...... Already jitne character apne introduce kiye hai.... Unke sath to rupali ka kuch grand masti karao.... But aur naye naye cameo characters ap la rhe ho.....apke is update ko padne se pehle mene iski length dekhi.... Lga bahut bda update hai to pakka kuch mazzedar hoga..... But jb pada......... To bilkul normal update lga.......I hope ap samjhengi.

Noted. Lekin plot is also important. Also roshni ki aag bhadkane ke liye in side charachters ka importance hain. Roshni in sab se prabhavit hokar aage teeno buddhon ke saath hi puri masti karegi .. uski fikar na kariye.

[0987654321mnb]

Super update. Keep it up.

[Bakchod Londa]

...................Roshni is sab se bekhabar soft drink pine , bottle ko apne hothon se lagati hain.

uffff.... shanthi ji apne to bich majdhar me hi suspence k sath chhod diya... age ko kya hua??? Kya salim ka plan sach m kam kar gaya?

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

Super update. Keep it up.

thanks dear

[ShanthifrmSingapore]

uffff.... shanthi ji apne to bich majdhar me hi suspence k sath chhod diya... age ko kya hua??? Kya salim ka plan sach m kam kar gaya?

agle update mein .dear ...

[sexikaur]

yr):   Your story is very hot!!!