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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
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(19-08-2023, 04:15 PM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: Like this development... refreshing the plot

(20-08-2023, 01:58 AM)StoryReader1 Wrote: Please continue
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Thanks a lot for analysing the update and letting me know what you think of the update and Anita's action. Appreciate your effort. Thanks again.

(19-08-2023, 08:31 PM)creamydelight Wrote: This is a very significant and unexpected development. When she went to the village, we knew something was up, but what has exactly realised till now is something that I could not have ever guessed. Kudos yet again on introducing this twist.

Anita really is a different woman. She knows he is drunk and likely to do what most others would consider "misbehaviour". He forcefully grabs a seat next to her, and clearly hints that he will do something that will cause "maza" to both him and her. Instead of raising an alarm, she instead talks a bit irritatedly with Ankit to not draw out the scene but to simply accept it. They kinda "cucked" him. Wonder what she would have done if it was Raj instead of Ankit.

There could be two reasons why she did this:
1) she really got scared and really wants to avoid a scene and any harm to Ankit .
Or what is more likely
2) internally she wants to see where it goes. The situation has called out to her subconscious sluttiness which has been cultivated over the last few months/weeks by Hariya.

But what's most striking to me is the irritated manner in which she told Ankit off.

Also, this guy is a bigger dabang than Hariya. Hariya at least waited for green signal from Anita before confidently talking on behalf of Anita to others like ice cream wala or sabjiwala. This guy in the other hand didn't even wait for anything. He just saw something he liked and decided to take it. Like he came, he saw, and he will conquer, and then maybe come again :p .

Dear writer,
Please do not leave us hanging at this stage for too long and request you to complete this scene soon!!
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So far so good but now some action have to start otherwise the story ll lose its thrill eith just touching and staring after a certain time you have to put those things as well hope to see action soon
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Eagerly waiting some foreplay in the journey
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Desperately waiting for what unfolds on the bus journey. What if the conductor comes and seeing the situation tries to rescue Anita by offering her another seat...will she be able to refuse? That will very clearly show her intentions
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A nice written story turning to bore now. Introducing new unwanted characters n turning a housewife into a whore is not fitting in a well going plot.
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UPDATE 53

Ankit Anita ke ishara karne par wahan se aage ke taraf jaane laga. Anita use dekhti rahi aur saath hi apni bayi chunchi par uss aadmi ke kohni ka pressure mehsus karti rahi. Ankit wahaan se 5-6 row aage ek seat par jaakar baith gaya.

Uske baithne ke baad Anita ki kaan mein awaaz aayi,"Sasura bahot zabaan ladata hai ee ladka. Baat ko samajhta nahin hai ki bada log kuchh bole to sunna chahiye".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Are aap aese uska seat le lijiyega to woh kya karega? Upar se aap uske gaal ko kitni zor se masal rahe the."

Yeh sunnkar woh aadmi Anita ki chunchiyon ko dekhne laga aur dekhne ke baad uski aankhon mein dekhkar bola,"Are to sasura ko samajhna chahiye na ki bada log jab saath baitha hai to baccha log ko beech mein ghusna nahin chahiye."

Anita yeh sunnkar use dekhti huyi boli,"Yehi baat to aap use pyaar se bhi samjha sakte the ki aapko yahan baithna hai. Aese use darane ka ya itni zor se gaal masalna kya zaruri tha?"

Woh aadmi Anita ki chunchi par kohni ka pressure banate hue bola,"Pura zaruri tha. U sasura tohar se bhi to zabaan lada raha tha. Hum aisan launda log ko theek karna jaanta hoon. Bina sakhti dikhaye sasura log ko baat samajh nahin aat hai. Ee umar mein sab sasura log hero banta hai. Sasura log abhi duniya dekha nahin hai isliye samajh nahi aat hai ki asli duniya mein aurat log ko hero naahi asli marad ka zarurat hota hai".

Anita ka dil yeh sunnkar dhadak gaya aur agle pal woh uss aadmi ko phir se uski chunchiyon ko ghurte hue dekhi aur woh uski chunchiyon ko gandi nazar se dekhne ke baad bola,"aur jab asli marad kauno jawaan khabsurat aurat ke saath baitha ho to ee sasura baccha logan ko patla gali se nikal lena chahiye"

Anita ka dil yeh sunnkar tezi se dhadakne laga. Woh uska baat sunnkar bina kuchh bole saamne dekhne lagi. Dheere dheere passengers aane lage the. Kuchh seconds aesa hi chala ki Anita saamne dekh rahi thi aur woh aadmi uski chunchiyon ko upar neeche hota dekh raha tha. Anita ek baar aankhon ke kone se use dekhi to use apni chunchiyon par nazar gadaye payi. Woh chup chap saamne dekhti rahi.

Woh aadmi ek minute baad dheere se puchha,"Aese toka jaana kahan hai?".

Anita yeh sunnkar use dekhi aur apni kaan ke paas ka baal peeche karti huyi boli,"Ji Raebareilly. Aap kahan jayenge?"

Woh aadmi Anita ki chunchiyon par kohni se dabao banate hue bola,"hum bhi uhin jaunga. Achha hai hum saath baithe hain. Humra eehan baithne se hum dono ka safar achha se aur bahot maze se beetega. U sasura eehan baithkar ka karta, bas mobile mein laga rehta. Humra jaisa marad eehan baithne se ee lamba safar tohra bhi achhe se maze se kat jayega".

Woh aadmi yeh bolne ke baad Anita ki chunchiyon ko dekhne laga. Anita use apni chunchiyon par nazar gadaye dekh waapas saamne dekhne lagi. Kuchh seconds baad uski kaan mein dheere se awaaz aaya,"Jhumka gira re Raebareilly ke bazaar mein. Jawani chadha re, Raebareilly jaane wale safar mein. Hai jhumka gira re".

Anita yeh sunnkar bina sharm ke uske taraf dekhi to woh aadmi muskura diya aur uski chunchiyon ko dekhne laga. Anita ek nazar use dekhne ke baad waapas saamne dekhne lagi. Phir aur passengers chadhne lage to woh aadmi bas apni kohni se Anita ki bayi chunchi par dabao banaye rakha, kuchh bola nahin.

Anita bhi chup chap baaki passengers ko chadhte hue dekhti rahi. Isi beech uske whatsApp par Ankit ka message aaya,"Bhabhi aap theek ho to? Woh aadmi badtameez hai. Aap achhe se rehna".

Anita yeh padhkar jawaab mein likhi,"Ankit main theek hoon. Thank you for being concerned, magar koi pareshani nahin hai. Hope tum achhe ho. Gaal zyada dard nahin kar raha hai to?".

Ankit jawaab mein likha,"Nahin bhabhi theek hai. I can take that much".

Anita jawaab mein likhi,"Still you shouldn't have talked back to him like that. Woh to accha hua meri baat maan liya woh aur tumhe chhor diya, nahin to pata nahin kya karta. Aese kisi se bewajah ka bahes nahin karte. Khaaskar jab koi bada saath ho baat karne ke liye".

Ankit jawaab mein likha,"I am sorry bhabhi".

Anita jawaab mein likhi,"No need to be sorry. I understand ki teenage mein josh rehta hai, but tumko yeh bhi samajhna hai ki woh aadmi ek lamba chauda mard hai. Uske saamne tum bacche hi ho. So you need to be smart and understand the situation and your position. Now forget it. Enjoy the journey".

Jawaab mein Ankit likha,"Ok bhabhi".

Anita jab messages type kar rahi thi to woh aadmi ka kohni apni chunchi par mehsoos kar rahi thi. Woh jab screen lock karke apni bayi taraf dekhi to woh aadmi ko apni chunchiyon par dekhte hue payi aur phir bina kuchh bole waapas saamne dekhne lagi.

Kuchh der baad bus chalne laga aur bus ka light bandh ho gaya. Anita bahar dekhne lagi. Aese baahar dekhne se khidki ke sheeshe mein halka dhyaan se dekhne se woh aadmi ka chehra aur nazar dikh raha tha. Anita dekhi ki woh aadmi kabhi uski badan ko dekh raha tha to kabhi saamne ke taraf.

Kuchh seconds baad Anita uske mobile ke bajne ka awaaz sunnkae uske taraf dekhi to woh halka muskura kar use dekha aur phir phone uthakar baat karne laga. Anita waapas baahar dekhne lagi. Agle 10 minute tak woh kisi se mobile par baat karta raha aur Anita bhi chup chap baahar dekhti rahi.

10 minute baad woh mobile rakhkar Anita ke taraf chehra karke uski kaan mein dheere se bola,"U jo pahaad hai, eehan ka bada naami pahaad hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Achha. Kya naam hai iska?".

Woh aadmi jawaab mein naam bataya to Anita muskurakar boli,"Achha" aur phir khidki se dekhne lagi.

Agle pal woh bola,"Aese dur se dekhne se chhota lag raha hai. Saamne se dekhne par bahot uncha aur bada hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar muskurai to woh uski chunchiyon ke taraf ishara karte hue bola,"Tohaar pahaad ke jaisa".

Anita usko saaf saaf apni chunchiyon ke taraf ishara karte hue uski tulna uss pahad se karte hue dekh li. Yeh sunnkar use sharm to nahin aaya magar woh ek baar aas paas dekhkar dheere se boli,"Kaisi baatein kar rahe hain aap?"

Woh aadmi thoda daye Anita ke taraf chehra karke dheere se bola,"Are sach bol raha hoon hum aur ka. Tohaar ee saamne to pahaad jaisa hi bada aur uncha hai".

Anita ka dil yeh sunnkar dhadak gaya aur badan mein ek ajeeb sa masti ka laher daudne laga magar woh bina kuchh bole waapas khidki se baahar dekhne lagi aur sheeshe mein uss aadmi ko uski chunchiyon ko dekhte hue payi.

Kuchh minute baad woh aadmi bola,"Aese tum kahan ki ho? Dekhne se to tum eehan ka nahin lagti. Shehri mem lagti ho"

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Ji main yahan ki nahin hoon.".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar puchha,"U to tum dekhne se hi lagti ho ki kauno sheher ki mem ho. Lekin kaun sa sheher?".

Anita yeh sunnkar boli,"Ji aap kuchh der pehle hi mile hain aur mujhse personal sawaal karne lage. Main kahan ki hoon kyun bataun?"

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar muskuraya aur uski chunchiyon ko dekhne laga. Uska nazar apni chunchiyon par padne par Anita bina kuchh bole baahar dekhne lagi.

Kuchh seconds baad woh bola,"Aese hum Raebareilly ka hoon. Agar tohaar jhumka gir jayega to humka kehna hum khoj dunga".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhi to woh muskura diya. Anita ek ada se boli,"Jhumka Raebareilly mein nahin, Bareilly mein girta hai".

Anita ki baat sunnkar woh muskurakar bola,"Are to kaa faraq padta hai, hai to dono mein bareilly hi na."

Phir woh Anita ki chunchiyon ke taraf aankhon se ishara karke bola,"Jaise ee dono pahaad nahin hai magar hai to pahaad jaisa uncha aur bada hi na".

Anita phir se usko apni chunchiyon ke taraf ishara karke use pahad jaisa bada aur uncha bolte hue dekh li magar use sharm zara sa bhi nahi aya. Woh bas uska baat sunnkar chup chap baahar dekhne lagi.

Kuchh der baad woh aadmi Anita se phir bola,"Aese tum idhar kabhi aayi ho ya nahin?"

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar "na" mein sir hilakar boli,"Ji nahin".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"Tab to idhar ke baare mein tohar pata nahin hoga. Kauno baat nahin hum tohka idhar raaste mein jo khaas khaas jagah hai uke baare mein bataunga".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Theek hai.". Anita ko bhi laga ki kam se kam use idhar ke baare mein kuch jaanne ko to milega to woh uska baat sunnkar muskurakar jawaab di.

Kuchh der baad woh aadmi ek taraf dikhate hue bola,"U dikh raha hai u eehan ka bahot purana mandir hai."

Anita yeh sunnkar sheeshe se dekhti huyi boli,"Kidhar andhera mein kuchh samajh nahin aa raha hai?"

Agle pal Anita ko apni dono chunchiyon ke saamne uss aadmi ka haath sata hua mehsus hua aur woh apni chunchiyon ke taraf dekhi to uska haath hi tha jo uski dono chunchiyon se sata hua tha aur agle pal woh awaaz suni,"Are u dekho u chhota sa roshni aa raha hai".

Anita samajh gayi ki woh apna haath badhakar khidki ke taraf ungli se ishara karke use woh mandir dikhane ka koshish kar raha hai. Woh apni chunchiyon se nazar hatakar khidki se dekhi to ek roshni dikhati diya aur woh thoda dhyaan se dekhi to use ek mandir dikhati diya.

Agle pal woh awaaz suni,"Tohka dikhai diya?"

Anita yeh sunnkar khidki se dekhti huyi "haan" mein sir hilakar boli,"haan".

Agle pal woh suni,"Eehan ee maheena mein mela bhi lagta hai. Ek do din mein lagega".

Anita yeh sunnkar baahar dekhti hui boli,"Achha".

Agle pal use sunai diya,"Ek aur mandir hai thoda aage uhaan bhi ee maheena mein mela lagta hai. U mela dekhne laayaq hota hai. Sasura bahot bada jagah mein lagta hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar baahar dekhti huyi boli,"Achha".

Woh aadmi bina kuchh bole apna haath khidki ke taraf se hata liya aur phir pehle ke tarah apna kohni Anita ki bayi chunchi se sataye raha.

Thodi der baad Anita khidki se dekhti huyi boli,"Wahi woh mela hai kya?".

Anita yeh bolne ke baad use ek nazar dekhkar wapas khidki ke taraf dekhne lagi to woh bola,"Haan wahi hai".

Anita jawaab mein boli,"Haan sach mein bahot bada jagah mein laga hua hai".

Woh aadmi agle pal bola,"Haan bahot bada jagah mein phaila hua hai, jaise ee tohar pahaad itna phaila hua hai".

Anita ka dil yeh sunnkar dhadak gaya. Woh samajh gayi ki woh uski chunchi ka baat kar raha hai. Woh bina sharm ke uss aadmi ke taraf dekhkar dheere se boli,"Please aesi baatein mat kijiye".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchiyon ke taraf dekha aur uski chehre par dekhne laga. Anita bhi bina sharm ke use dekh rahi thi. Agle pal woh aadmi khidki ke taraf aankho se ishara karte hue bola,"U dekho u ek aur pahaad hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar khidki ke taraf dekhi to ek pahaad dikhai diya.

Woh chup chap baahar dekhti rahi. Agle kuchh minute aese hi woh dekhti rahi aur woh aadmi bhi chup kabhi uski chunchiyon ko to kabhi baahar yo kabhi saamne dekhta.

Kuchh minute baad woh aadmi bola,"U dekho u ek factory hai. U sasura kauno baahar ka factory hai, u chips banata hai na uhi".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Haan".

Phir woh use us company ka naam bata di aur bolne lagi ki woh aur kya kya cheez banata hai. Woh aadmi Anita ki baat sunnkar use dekhte raha. Anita jab baat puri ki to woh aadmi halka muskura kar bola,"Waah tohar to bahoto kuchh malum hai. Sasura shehri aurat sach mein padh likhkar tez ho jaati hai".

Phir woh Anita ki badan ko waapas gande nazar se dekhne ke baad bola,"Jitna khabsurat tum ho utna hi tez bhi. Achha hai".

Anita ko na jaane kyun uska yeh baat achha laga. Woh uska baat sunnkar muskurai aur mann hi mann sochne lagi,"Yeh aadmi jaisa bhi hai magar kam se kam aurat ko padha likha dekh appreciate to kar rahe hai. Sach mein koi inhe dekh kar nahin keh sakta ki aesa soch yeh rakh bhi sakte hain".

Anita phir baahar dekhne lagi. Agle ek ghanta tak aese hi dono ke beech halki phulki baat chit hoti rahi aur woh aadmi kabhi Anita ko baahar kuchh dikhane ke bahane uski chunchiyon se apna haath sata deta ya kohni se dabao banaye rakhta. Anita bina koi reaction ke normal tareeqe se usse baat karti rahi.

Beech beech mein woh aadmi uski chunchiyon ke baare mein bhi bol deta ki pahaad ke jaisa bada aur uncha hai to Anita bina sharm ke use dekhkar thodi narazgi se use waisa nahin bolne ke liye bolti.

Dedh ghante baad raat ke 10 baje bus ek dhaaba par ruka. Sab log utarne lage. Anita ki seat peechhe thi to woh intezaar karne lagi sabke utarne ka. Sameer ka seat aage tha magar woh bhi ruka hua tha kyunki woh Anita ke saath utarna chahta tha.

Aakhirkaar sab utar gaye to Anita uss aadmi se boli,"Ji mujhe utarna hai. Please jagah dijiye".

Woh aadmi seat par hi baitha hua thoda peechhe ke taraf khisak gaya. Anita yeh dekh kar puchhi,"Aapko nahin utarna hai".

Woh aadmi muskurate hue bola,"Utarna hai humka magar ledij pehle".

Anita yeh sunnkar sochne lagi ki utna jagah hi nahin hai ki woh araam se nikal payegi. Woh sochkar boli,"Ji jab aapko utarna hai to uthhiye na".

Woh aadmi bola,"Are hum bola na ki ledij pehle. Tohar utarne ke baad hum utrunga".

Anita yeh sunnkar usse boli,"Lekin kam se kam mujhe seat se nikalne ka jagah to dijiye".

Woh aadmi seat par thoda peeche hue hi bola,"Are saamne jagah to hai. Jao na tum"

Anita yeh sunnkar samajh gayi ki usse bahes karke fayeda nahin. Bahot ziddi tha woh aur apni hi manmani karega.

Anita yeh soch hi rahi thi ki Sameer udhar aakar bola,"Uncle aap hatenge nahin to bhabhi kaise niklegi?".

Woh aadmi Sameer ka gaal pakad kar dabate hue hilakar bola,"Abe hum tohri bhabhi se baat kar raha hoon na. Jab bada baat kare to beech mein nahin bolna chahiye abhi tak samajh nahin aaya tohka".

Sameer dard se karah utha,"aaahhhh chhoro mujhe".

Anita bhi yeh dekhkar pareshan hokar boli,"Kya kar rahe hain aap. Chhoriye".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar uska gaal chhor diya to Anita Sameer se boli,"Sameer main baat kar rahi thi na. Kyun bewajah ka tum bhi behes karne aa gaye."

Sameer chup chaap apna gaal sehlate hue Anita ko dekh raha tha. Anita usse boli,"Ab khade hi rahoge ya baahar chalna bhi hai.Chalo".

Sameer chup chap ghum gaya aur darwaze ke taraf chalne laga. Anita bhi apni seat se uthi aur baahar ke taraf jaane lagi to usko utarne mein mushqil ho rahi thi. Woh phir side se khadi ho gayi jisse uski gaand uss aadmi ke taraf ho jaye. Woh jaan rahi thi ki woh aese hi baahar nikal payegi aur isi kaaran se woh aadmi apne seat se nahin uth raha tha taaki woh uski gaand ki ubhar ko dekh sake.

Anita chup chaap uss aadmi ke saamne se guzarne lagi aur wahi hua jo woh soch rahi thi. Uski gaand uss aadmi ke munh se satt gayi. Yeh hone ke bawjud bhi woh chup chap wahan se nikalne ka koshish karne lagi magar agle pal use apni gaand par uss aadmi ke chehre ka pressure mehsus hua aur pressure aesa tha ki woh uss aadmi ke chehre aur aage ki seat ke beech atak gayi.

Agle pal woh aadmi uski gaand par dheere dheere apna chehra ragadne laga. Aesa hone par Anita jaldi se saamne ke taraf dekhi jidhar Sameer ja raha tha aur use thodi raahat mehsus huyi jab Sameer bina peechhe dekhe bus se utar gaya.

Sameer ke bus se utarne ke baad Anita bina sharm ke peeche gardan karke uss aadmi ko dekh kar boli,"Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap. Chhoriye mujhe jaana hai".

Woh aadmi uski baat par koi pratikriya nahin diya ulta woh Anita ki gaand ki dono bhago ko pakad kar use baahar ke taraf khinch kar uske beech darar mein apna munh ragadne laga.

Yeh hone se Anita ki pura badan mein current jaisa mehsus hua aur dil dhadakne laga.

Anita agle pal mann hi mann sochi,"Inko kuchh bolkar fayeda nahin hai. Bas apni hi karte jayenge".

Phir woh kuchh seconds tak waise hi nikalne ki koshish karti huyi apni gaand daye baye karne lagi magar isse woh nikal to nahin paa rahi thi, ulta aesa karne se uski gaand uss aadmi ke chehre par ragadne lagi.

Anita ko jab yeh ehsaas hua ki woh nikal to nahin paa rahi hai balki ulta uss aadmi ki chehre par khud apni gaand ragad rahi hai to woh ruk gayi aur sochne lagi ki tabhi use kuchh dhyaan aaya to woh muskura di aur mann hi mann sochi,"I hope this works. It should definitely work".

Agle pal woh aage ki seat ko pakad li aur ek gehri saans lene ke baad pura jor laga kar apni gaand ko peechhe ke taraf dhakel di. Aesa karne se woh aadmi ka sir jhatke se peeche seat ke taraf ho gaya aur Anita ko jaise hi ehsaas hua ki us aadmi ka chehra uski gaand se alag ho gaya hai aur itna jagah hai ki woh nikal sakti hai woh baahar nikal aayi.

Anita ko khushi huyi ki uska plan kaam kar gaya aur aage chalte hue uski chehre par muskurahat aa gayi yeh soch kar ki woh aadmi socha bhi nahin hoga ki woh aesa plan karke wahan se nikal jayegi. Anita ko zara bhi sharm nahin aa rahi thi ki woh aadmi uski gaand par chehra ragad raha tha aur woh nikalne ke liye apni gaand peeche ke taraf dhakel kar uss aadmi ke chehre ko peeche kar di taaki woh baahar nikal sake.

Anita bus ke darwaze ke taraf jaati huyi muskurati huyi mann hi mann sochi,"Tit for Tat" aur apni gaand ki matak badha di. Woh aadmi Anita ki matakti gaand ko dekhne laga.

Anita gaand matkati huyi darwaze tak pahunchi aur chup chap bus se utar gayi.

Anita bus se utarkar jaldi se washroom ke taraf gayi. Use jor se peshaab lagi huyi thi. Woh washroom ke taraf gayi to 6-7 aurton ka line laga hua tha.Woh samajh gayi ki itni der woh ruk nahin sakti isliye woh koi aur washroom dekhne lagi yeh ummeed se ki aur bhi washroom hoga. Woh dhaabe ke upar dekhne lagi yeh ummeed se ki dhabe par rehne ka bhi intezaam hoga to washroom bhi hoga. Magar upar koi kamra nahin tha. Woh bas asbestos se dhaka hua dhaba tha. Woh mann hi mann sochne lagi ki driver ko achhi jagah rokna chahiye tha bus. Agar kamra hota to zarurat padne par woh kamra hi book kar leti sirf peshaab karne ke liye, magar kamra bhi nahin tha.

Woh kuchh sochkar gents washroom ke taraf jaane lagi to wahan par bhi line dikha. Woh line ke taraf dekh kar waapas ghumi ki tabhi woh aadmi bhi woh line ke taraf jaata dikha.

Woh ek nazar usko dekhne ke baad aas paas dekhne lagi. Phir woh kuchh sochkar dhaba ke peeche chali gayi. Udhar andhera tha, koi light nahin thi sivay chaand ke roshni ke. Woh peechhe jaakar dhaabe ke deewar ke taraf dekhne lagi yeh ummeed se ki shaayad peeche koi washroom ho magar use nahin mila to uski munh se nikal gayi,"What the hell!"

Woh yeh bolkar peechhe ghumi to chaunk gayi. Uski dil ki dhadkan tez ho gayi magar phir woh khud ko sambhalkar kuchh bolne wali thi ki tabhi woh aadmi bola,"Are mem idhar andhere mein kaa kar rahi ho. Kisko dhundh rahi ho? ".

Anita boli,"Ji kuchh bhi nahin".

Anita ko peshaab laga hua tha to woh usse bewajah ka baat mein ulajhna nahin chah rahi thi. Woh itna bolkar udhar se jaane wali thi ki woh aadmi puchha,"Kaa baat hai? Bahot pareshan hokar ghum rahi ho?Raat ka waqat hai, kuchho chahiye to bolo, hum dunga".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Ji?"

Woh aadmi Anita ko upar se neeche dekhkar apne pant ke upar se lund ko sehlate hue dheere se bola," Tohra kuchho chahiye to bolo , hum zarur dunga".

Anita yeh sunnkar boli,"Ji nahin mujhe kuchh nahin chahiye."

Yeh bolkar Anita udhar se jaane lagi to woh aadmi bola,"Are memsaahab bolkar to dekho. Tum bathroom khoj rahi thi."

Anita yeh sunnkar sochi ki use washroom to mil nahin raha shayad usse bolegi to shayad koi raasta nikale.

Anita uska baat sunnkar boli,"Ji main washroom hi khoj rahi thi. Mujhe jaana hai. Woh ek washroom mein to bahot bheed hai".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"Lagta hai bahot jor se laga hua hai tumka isliye intezaar nahin kar rahi".

Anita to besharm aurat thi. Uska aese bolne se use zara bhi sharm nahin aai aur woh puchhi," Idhar aur koi washroom nahin hai kya?"

Woh aadmi aas paas dekhkar bola,"bathroom to nahin hai magar tohka moot laga hai to uska intezaam hum kar sakta hoon".

Yeh sunnkar Anita ko sharm to nahin aayi magar is tareeqe se bolne par woh thoda aascharya zarur ki aur usse boli,"Yeh aap kya bol rahe hain? Koi aese bolta hai kya?Chhoriye main khud hi dekh leti hoon".

Anita yeh bolkar wahan se jaane lagi to woh aadmi bola,"Are tohar jaisi gori mem ka to ee he nakhra hai. Saaf saaf kuchho bolti nahin bas nakhra karti ho"

Yeh sunnkar Anita rukkar use dekhne lagi aur ek pal dekhne ke baad thodi narazgi se boli,"Yeh sab aapke wajah se hi hua hai. Agar aap mujhe bus mein aese nahin rokte to main jaldi se aakar washroom chali jaati".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"To isliye to hum madad karna chahta hoon aur puchh raha hoon. Ab sasura hum moot ko aur ka bolunga? Tum nahin bologi to hum kaise intezaam karunga."

Anita yeh sunnkar narazgi jatati huyi boli,"Are to iske liye kya karna hai yeh bolne ki kya zarurat hai. Washroom mein jo marzi main karungi".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"Tum samajh kahe nahin rahi ho. Agar tumka hagna hai to paani ka bhi to intezaam karna hoga aur agar mootna hai to bina paani ka bhi chal jayega. Usme to tohta ander se khud paani niklega. Isliye hum puchh raha hoon ki mootna hai ki hagna hai tumka".

Anita ka dil yeh sunnkar dhadakne laga. Yeh sunnkar Anita ko uske bolne ka andaaz achha to nahin laga magar uske baat ka logic ko woh sahi maani.

Yeh sochkar ki uske baat mein logic hai uske kaaran Anita ke lehje se narazgi to jaa chuki thi magar phir bhi woh thode nakhre wali ada se boli,"To aap alag tareeqe se bhi to yeh puchh sakte hai. Lekin aap phir se waise hi puchh rahe hain. Koi aese bolta hai kya?"

Woh aadmi Anita ko upar se neeche tak dekhkar uske chehre par dekhkar bola,"Koi se humka ka lena dena. Hum to aese hi bolta hoon. Sasura sabka jaise hum baat karunga to humre aur baaki mein ka faraq hoga?"

Anita ko pata nahin kyun uska yeh bebaaq andaaz achha laga. Pehle zabardasti uske bagal mein baith jaana , phir usse saara raasta baat karne ka koshish karna, bus se utarte waqt uski gaand mein khullam khulla apna chehra ragadna aur ab aese bebaqi se gandi baatein karna.

Anita ko uska himmat aur dabangai achha lag raha tha aur ab uska yun uski madad karne ki koshish karne se Anita thodi prabhavit ho rahi thi. Use laga ki jab uske bolne ka andaaz hi waisa hai to bewajah ka kya sochna aur bura manna. Use uske bhasha par dhyaan na dekar woh kya kehna chahta hai woh samajhna chahiye aur uske saath co-operate karna chahiye taaki woh uski madad kar sake.

Woh yeh sunnkar use dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi woh bola,"Ab bolo bhi ki tumka hagna hai ya mootna hai?".

Anita yeh sunnkar bina sharm ke usko dekhti huyi boli,"Ji woh du..dusra wala".

Yeh sunnkar woh aadmi bola,"Mootna hai tumka?"

Anita yeh sunnkar aas paas dekhi aur phir usko dekhkar "haan" mein sir hila di.

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar usse bola,"Aao humre saath" aur woh Anita ki haath pakad kar use dhaaba ke peeche jidhar thoda andhera tha udhar jaane laga. Anita aas paas ek baar dekhi aur phir woh aadmi ke haath mein khud ka haath diye hi uske saath chal di. Woh apna haath usse alag karne ki koshish nahin ki.

Kuchh kadam chalne ke baad woh aadmi ek taraf dikhate hue bola,"Jao udhar moot lo".

Anita yeh sunnkar uss taraf dekhi. Jis zameen par dhaaba bana tha woh aas paas ke kheton se uncha tha. Woh aadmi woh dhaaba ke zameen ke kinare ke taraf ishara karte hue Anita ko bol raha tha.

Udhar dekhkar Anita pareshan hokar boli,"Ji wahan kaise kar sakti hoon main?Yeh to washroom nahin hai".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar thoda jhunjhlata hua bola,"Phir nakhra shuru ho gaya tohaar. Ee sahar nahin hai. Highway hai. Tumko bathroom chahiye to jao jaakar line mein lag jao."

Anita ko bahot jor se peshaab lagi thi. Uske liye zyada der bardaasht karna mushqil tha ab.Woh pareshaani se aas paas dekhne lagi.

Woh aadmi yeh dekhkar bola,"Are kauno nahin hai.Tum jao aur maze se moot kar halka ho jao".

Anita ko uske munh se aese khullam khulla baat sunnkar thoda ajeeb laga khaaskar maze se mootne aur halka hone ka baat. Lekin ab woh uska aese baat karna uska andaaz samajh rahi thi aur bura nahin maan rahi thi aur sharm to Anita ko aese bhi aati nahin thi.

Woh uske baat ka bina bura maane bina sharm ke usko dekhkar boli,"Nahin aese khule mein main nahin karungi".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"Achha jao udhar jaakar kar lo".

Anita dekhi to woh aadmi usi khet ke dusre taraf ishara kar raha tha. Udhar kuchh ped paudhe the.Uske liye ab bardaasht karna mushqil ho raha tha. Woh sochi ki ab uske paas aur koi raasta nahin hai. Kam se kam udhar ped paudhe ke peeche karegi to koi dekhega nahin.

Woh ek baar phir aas paas dekhi to woh aadmi bola,"are kauno nahin hai. Tum jao aur araam se mooto".

Anita yeh sunnkar use dekhkar bina sharm ke boli,"maine aese khule mein kabhi nahin kiya hai. Ajeeb lag raha hai".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar use dekhkar bola,"U to tohar ke dekh ke hi lag raha hai ki tum shehri aurat ho aur aese khet mein kabhi muti nahin hogi. Lekin sab cheez ka pehla baar hota hai. Ab jao. Eehan khadi rahogi to salwar mein hi moot dogi phir humka hi bologi tumhare bag se dusra salwar laane ke liye".

Yeh sunnkar Anita ko thoda ajeeb laga aur woh aascharya se use dekhti huyi apna munh thoda khol di. Ek to yeh soch kar ki usko bolne se kuchh fayeda nahin aur dusra ki use zor se peshaab laga tha yehi sochkar Anita usse behes nahin karna chahti thi.

Woh bina sharm ke use dekhti huyi boli,"Theek hai aap bhi jaiye ab yahan se".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaahab hum chala jaunga to koi aa jayega to? Hum eehaan khada hokar dekhunga ki koi nahin aaye".

Anita ko yeh tarq betuqa laga. Woh samajh rahi thi ki woh aadmi wahan se kyun nahin jaana chah raha tha. Lekin woh ab bahes mein waqt nahin beetana chah rahi thi.

Woh usse boli,"To udhar jaakar khade rahiye. Yahan nahin.Aur dusri taraf dekhiyega".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"Achha theek hai lekin tum itna uncha se khet mein utar jaogi to?"

Anita yeh sunnkar khet ke taraf dekhi to woh thoda neeche tha. Use bhi laga ki use utarne mein mushqil hoga. Woh udhar dekh hi rahi thi ki woh aadmi bola,"Chalo hum utarne mein madad kar dete hain".

Yeh bolkar woh aadmi Anita ki haath ko phir pakadkar bola,"Chalo hum utarne mein madad karta hoon".

Yeh bolkar woh khet ke kinare jaane laga. Anita bhi koi virodh nahin ki aur uske saath jaane lagi.

5-6 kadam chalne ke baad khet ka kinara aa gaya to woh aadmi bola,"Hum tumka pakde hain. Tum araam se utro".

Anita uska haath pakdi huyi neeche utar gayi aur uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Thank you. Ab aap udhar jaakar dusri taraf dekhkar khade rahiye".

Woh aadmi jidhar Anita ishara kar rahi thi udhar dekha. Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar Anita se bola,"Theek hai. Ab tum jao nahin to salwar mein hi moot dogi to tumko aur humko dono ko pareshaani hogi".

Anita yeh sunnkar bina jawaab diye peshaab karne ke liye ped paudho ke taraf chali gayi. Udhar jaakar woh ek baar dekhi to woh aadmi dusri taraf hi dekh raha tha magar phir bhi Anita hisaab laga kar aese jagah par baithi jahan woh aadmi usko dekh nahin sakta tha.

Anita phir apni elastic wali salwar ko neeche sadka kar baith gayi aur agle pal uski choot se tezi se peshaab ki dhaar behne lagi. Peshaab nikalte hi Anita ko raahat mili.

Woh aankh bandh karke khud se boli,"Ohh God finally I am relieved. What a relief! " aur yeh bolkar woh aankh khol kar peshaab karti rahi. Woh ab aas paas dekhne lagi. Usko raahat to mili thi magar yeh sab ajeeb lag raha tha. Woh zindagi mein pehli baar khule mein peshab kar rahi thi, woh bhi khet mein.Raat to tha magar thoda chand ki roshni se ujala tha.

Anita peshaab karne ke baad bag se tissue paper nikaal kar apni choot ko saaf ki aur phir uthkar apni panty aur salwar ko upar chadha li.Woh salwar pehen kar jaise hi ghumi to uski nazar uss aadmi par chali gayi.Woh usi ke taraf dekh raha tha. Use dekhte hi Anita ka dil dhadak gaya.

Woh aadmi apna jagah badal chuka tha aur Anita andaza lagayi ki woh aesa jagah khada tha jahan se woh sab dekh sakta tha. Anita ko pura yaqeen tha ki woh aadmi uski nangi gaand dekh chuka hai. Jis position mein woh khada tha Anita ko pura yaqeen tha ki woh uske uthne par uski nangi gaand dekh liya hoga.

Anita use dekhne lagi aur woh aadmi bhi use hi dekh raha tha. Dono ki nazar mil chuki thi.
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(21-08-2023, 01:39 AM)kanikaakochr Wrote: A nice written story turning to bore now. Introducing new unwanted characters n turning a housewife into a whore is not fitting in a well going plot.

Can you elaborate what you said? I can understand the first part. Everyone may not like something,for some it might be boring because they want a quick paced story. But would like you to substantiate what you said in the second part. Thanks.
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(21-08-2023, 01:39 AM)kanikaakochr Wrote: A nice written story turning to bore now. Introducing new unwanted characters n turning a housewife into a whore is not fitting in a well going plot.

I disagree into the "turning into a whore" part. The reason you might be calling it a bore could be the somewhat repetitive nature of the groping/ched-chaad done by Hariya. While some of it was repetitive, it was always in small increments. So the change in Anita has been slow and steady. In fact, it is only because of this repetitive nature that one is able to justify what Anita did in the bus by asking Ankit to go to another seat without her actually being a whore. She has been slowly and steadily tuned by Hariya in such a way that she finds the courage to do this, or rather, finds it normal and not too much phased by it. Had it been the Anita who had just moved to this small town, such an action by her would be unrealistic and she could then be called a whore/slut or whatnot. But this Anita... No
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This is just becoming boring without any action now it ll looose intrest otherwise make sure their is some action from. Next time in the plot introducing uneccesary characters and just stretching it too much ll kill it
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Wonderful update
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Nice Update....
Just feel missed opportunity to have anita in one of her sarees, if not backless, atleast deepback blouse one... wudve given that passenger some room to play
Myself a noob writer
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Very nice update sean... This new character and new plot is ery interesting..
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One should understand the difference between a story and a novel, Anita Singh is a erotic novel itself so there will be multiple subplots and small climaxes of their own, readers should be patient and enjoy the reading and development rather demanding for action, just for sex you can read any other story but once you see the action your excitement will be down further,..so what we can do is compare and suggestions on the basis of older story.
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Wahh.. wahhh.. wahh..., Excellent, super seductive update. Maja aa gaya padhkar. Jis tarah se suddenly is new character ki entry hui hai aur jis dabang andaj me hui hai, kya hi kahna ekdum mast.
Ye to Hariya se bhi ek kadam aage nikala. Jis dabang andaj me ye Anita ko chhed raha h aur ekdum khulkar bol raha h usse Anita bahut prabhavit hui, iska ekdum khulkar Anita ke chuchi ki tulna pahado se kai baar krna aur fir jb Anita bas se utar rahi thi to ekdum khulkar uski Gaand ko pakadkar apna muh ragadna, fir khulkar puchna wo bhi ek aurat se ki tumko mootna hai ya hagna ufff... Kya writing hai sean bro, hats off to you.
Jis tarah ka logic diya is aadmi ne ki agar tumko hagna hai to pani bhi lagega aur agar mootna hai to bina pani ke bhi kaam chal jayega aur upar se ye bolna ki "agar moot lagi hai to isme to khud tumhare andar se paani niklega" uff... Kisi bhi aurat se aise direct bolne ke liye bahut himmat chahiye aur koi bhi aurat sharm se pani pani ho jaye aise sunkar, par yahi Anita ko baaki sbse alag banata hai ki ye sb sunkar bhi wo bahut bura nhi maani balki wo usse aur prabhavit hui jo Anita ke andar bahut mast randipana chipa hai ye darshata hai.
Jis tarah se is aadmi ne dabangai dikhayi hai uska inaam bhi ise mil gaya aur Hariya se phle isne Anita ki Nangi, badi katilana Gaand ko dekh liya.

Jaha tak rahi Anita ki baat to ye to saaf hai ki wo ek bahut hi khule vicharo wali aurat h aur usko ekdum dabang andaj wale mard pasand hain. Anita ke andar ek mast chudasi randipane wali aurat chupi hai jo dheere dheere bahar aayegi jaise jaise story aage badhegi.

Ek observation hai ki ladke ka naam to Ankit hai but jb bas se sb utar rahe the to waha uska naam kai jagah pe Sameer likha h, may be galti se hua hai ya fir sean bro reader's ko check kr rahe hai ki koi notis krta h ya nhi.

Abhi to safar baki hai, gaand to isne dekh hi liya hai. Ho skta hai ki ab ye bhi usi jagah moote wo bhi Anita ko dikhakar aur dekhte h ki safar me kya hota hai. Bas ek request hai sean bro ki aage bhale hi apne iska role soch rakha ho pr abhi ke liye ye bs Anita ko mast uttejit kr de jisse Anita ki chudas aur badh jaye aur Anita ki ye chudas usko majbur kr de Hariya se chudwane ko, kuki phla haq to Hariya ka hi banta hai jis tarah se Hariya ne itne dino tk mehnat ki hai.
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Nice story. Very hot, very well written and well concepted. Pahle page se jo lauda khada hua to bina chut ke maje liye, shaant nahi ho paya.

Here's the link to my story thread. Check it and let me know, if you like it!


https://xossipy.com/thread-56958-post-53...pid5330018
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Nice update and very good writing. Just did not understand one thing, while boarding the bus the young chaps name was Ankit then suddenly in this update Ankit becomes Sameer. Was it a mistake while writing?
Sorry Sean about pointing it out. Hope I have not hurt you.
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Wow seansean in FORM
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(21-08-2023, 02:01 AM)seansean007 Wrote: Can you elaborate what you said? I can understand the first part. Everyone may not like something,for some it might be boring because they want a quick paced story. But would like you to substantiate what you said in the second part. Thanks.

Sean, you are undoubtedly the BEST. Keep writing and developing the characters as you think fit. Don't get influenced by the comments. Cheers.
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