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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
Good update
Good idea tk step out of the regular hariya anita bubble.
This will be key to her character developement and ultimate turn to her raunchy self
Myself a noob writer
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Nice update.
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Really Sean your writing skills are toooooo goooood. Keep up the skills by giving regular updates whenever possible. Waiting for another adventure of Anita with Bhima now.... ?
Val Namaskar
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Good update, Although I had expected some more fun in icecream part as I mentioned in my comments but nevertheless its good to have new character like Ankit and Bhima kaka. Just a request sean bro that let Bhima kaka seduce Anita little bit, that will make her more horny and it can force her to invite Hariya in her home for rough fuck since she is already having Hariya in her mind during her fuck session and even when she look herself in mirror.

Jaha tak Anita ke character ki baat hai to
1-) wo ek highly educated, modern aur behad khubsurat aurat to hai hi jiske liye mardo ka usko ghurna aur halki fulki chedchad normal baat hai par sath hi sath wo family relationships and apne husband ka bhi respect krti hai.
2-) Anita ki dabang mard achhe lagte hai jo ki swabhawik hai aur Hariya to full dabang hai isliye Anita usse jyada prabhavit hai aur jb Hariya aur Anita ke beech itna sb kuch ho chuka h aur Anita uske Nange Lund ko bahut paas se dekh aur hila chuki hai to Hariya ke lund ke sapne to usko aayenge hi aur yahi usko next step uthane ke liye majbur karega.
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(15-08-2023, 09:35 PM)creamydelight Wrote: One other interpretation of the character of Anita can be, in desi language.. she is a chaalu aurat. Not a bad person, but a smart and if needed, a cunning person. Such a person, if she wants, can carry on an extramarital affair very successfully and secretly. And such a woman knows how to get what she wants out of all men, both young and old. She can easily become the forbidden apple of an old/middle aged person's eye and handle them, and at the same time she can very alluring to younger fellows and toy with them. This is one reason why I also liked the Jeetu bit in the previous version of the story. But I understand that both Hariya and Jeetu at the same time did not make that much sense.

Thanks for putting across what you think about Anita's character. Appreciate it.
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(17-08-2023, 08:04 AM)Lovelychod Wrote: Good update, Although I had expected some more fun in icecream part as I mentioned in my comments but nevertheless its good to have new character like Ankit and Bhima kaka. Just a request sean bro that let Bhima kaka seduce Anita little bit, that will make her more horny and it can force her to invite Hariya in her home for rough fuck since she is already having Hariya in her mind during her fuck session and even when she look herself in mirror.

Jaha tak Anita ke character ki baat hai to
1-) wo ek highly educated, modern aur behad khubsurat aurat to hai hi jiske liye mardo ka usko ghurna aur halki fulki chedchad normal baat hai par sath hi sath wo family relationships and apne husband ka bhi respect krti hai.
2-) Anita ki dabang mard achhe lagte hai jo ki swabhawik hai aur Hariya to full dabang hai isliye Anita usse jyada prabhavit hai aur jb Hariya aur Anita ke beech itna sb kuch ho chuka h aur Anita uske Nange Lund ko bahut paas se dekh aur hila chuki hai to Hariya ke lund ke sapne to usko aayenge hi aur yahi usko next step uthane ke liye majbur karega.

Thanks for letting me know what you think about Anita's character. Appreciate it.
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I'm speechless of how this story has evolved, i have been reading and following seansean since the time of SWATI AND JAIRAJ STORY. I'VE READ AND RE-READ that story and i was delighted when Anita's story started....! It's been quite a while since Anita's story started and now I'm grateful to the writer for finally seeing it through i reaaly hope to see a LONG SEDUCTIVE REGULARLY UPDATED EROTIC STORY TO COMPLETION.
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(18-08-2023, 11:39 AM)Cxer Wrote: I'm speechless of how this story has evolved, i have been reading and following seansean since the time of SWATI AND JAIRAJ STORY. I'VE READ AND RE-READ that story and i was delighted when Anita's story started....! It's been quite a while since Anita's story started and now I'm grateful to the writer for finally seeing it through i reaaly hope to see a LONG SEDUCTIVE REGULARLY UPDATED EROTIC STORY TO COMPLETION.

Thanks a lot for the kind words.
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(07-08-2023, 01:46 PM)Ghosthunter Wrote: Absolutely well planned and seductive update!

(07-08-2023, 05:41 PM)Dipty Sharma Wrote: Hot,spicy aur bahut bahut kamuk update

(07-08-2023, 07:35 PM)The Mummy Wrote: Absolutely wonderful update! Your erotic and double meaning naughty conversation is extremely exciting! clps clps clps

(07-08-2023, 09:32 PM)Faggot. Wrote: Very very hot and sexy writings Namaskar

(07-08-2023, 09:44 PM)Felix Wrote: Fantastic update! Please keep slow and steady seduction like this way.

(08-08-2023, 04:26 AM)Wanton Wrote: Bahut badhiya update, well thought writing

(08-08-2023, 08:43 AM)Invisible Wrote: Absolutely wonderful, extremely exciting and stunning update ❤️

(08-08-2023, 08:46 AM)Pinkboy Wrote: Superb! Awesome update! Amazing writing!

(08-08-2023, 08:51 AM)Neha Singh Wrote: Chamatkar update, lajawab aur garam kahaani

(08-08-2023, 08:57 AM)Bimal Wrote: Bahut badhiya update
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(08-08-2023, 09:00 AM)Slyboy Wrote: What a fantastic and dashing writing! Super excellent descriptions

(08-08-2023, 09:13 AM)Jamsbond Wrote: Jabardast update, ekdum fatafati kahaani

(08-08-2023, 09:34 AM)Anju Ghosh Wrote: Bahut badhiya update, bahut khoob, ekdum mast update

(09-08-2023, 05:44 PM)Horse Power Wrote: Excellent writing. Full of sensuality and excitement. Go ahead with this great writings and please add more exciting,erotic and naughty conversations among the characters. Great love for your high quality writing skills.

(12-08-2023, 07:22 PM)Vidya Singha Mim Wrote: Jabardast,bahut hi shandaar,bahut bahut garam aur kamuk kahaani,bahut khoob,bahut acha laga is kahaani padhke Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar

(13-08-2023, 05:21 PM)Monster Dick Wrote: Bahut acha..

(13-08-2023, 05:44 PM)Vamp Wrote: ekdom hardcore,exciting,aur dashu update! clps clps clps

(13-08-2023, 09:09 PM)Wanton Wrote: Awesome aur garam update

(13-08-2023, 10:00 PM)RangilaRaaj Wrote: Nice update keep updating regularly please, weekly update is injustice to this story
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(14-08-2023, 02:43 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Really awesome and erotic expression given in this update..... Can't wait for the next one.... Hope she sucks him off or she teases Hariya like the way Hariya was teasing her during the ice cream eating session.

(14-08-2023, 07:57 AM)Invisible Wrote: Wonderful update, fantastic writing, excellent build up

(14-08-2023, 08:00 AM)JHS19 Wrote: Marvelous and fabulous update ❤️

(14-08-2023, 08:17 AM)Ishita Wrote: Bahut bahut sexy aur garam update ♥️

(14-08-2023, 08:19 AM)Jamsbond Wrote: Just superb! Awesome and amazing writing

(14-08-2023, 08:26 AM)Threesome Wrote: Ekdum lajawab aur mast update ♥️

(14-08-2023, 10:22 AM)Rajun Wrote: Super sensational update ❤️

(14-08-2023, 10:23 AM)Chandan Wrote: mast update bro  clps

(14-08-2023, 10:33 AM)Jerin Kabir Wrote: Chamatkar, bahut bahut exciting update

(14-08-2023, 02:38 PM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: Super excellent Update
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(15-08-2023, 07:59 AM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: Zabardast bro great update kahani man naya turn maza aye ga anita ka new encounter good going keep it up.

(15-08-2023, 08:36 AM)Monster Dick Wrote: Story to thik chal raha par bahut slow... Thoda fast hota to maza aur ata....

(15-08-2023, 12:25 PM)Curiousbull Wrote: Pehla number bhima ka hoga shayad.

(15-08-2023, 06:39 PM)Jerin Kabir Wrote: Kamaal ka update

(15-08-2023, 06:43 PM)Vamp Wrote: Ekdum lajawab aur super hit update

(15-08-2023, 08:44 PM)Rumana Wrote: Amazing update

(16-08-2023, 02:06 AM)Hellybelly Wrote: Very nice and needed updates....this is where the newer version stand distinct in innovation, which was lacked in previous one..here runs a parallel events which would add eroticism in story . Action oriented stories are short lived, don't get pissed if some reader demands it...keep writing the way you write...

(16-08-2023, 04:11 AM)Vik88 Wrote: Awesome update

(16-08-2023, 10:54 AM)Introvert Wrote: Fantastic and super excellent update clps clps clps

(16-08-2023, 05:24 PM)Jyotimoy123 Wrote: Nice update.
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Thanks for the kind words.

(16-08-2023, 12:55 PM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: Good update
Good idea tk step out of the regular hariya anita bubble.
This will be key to her character developement and ultimate turn to her raunchy self

(17-08-2023, 12:44 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Really Sean your writing skills are toooooo goooood. Keep up the skills by giving regular updates whenever possible. Waiting for another adventure of Anita with Bhima now.... ?
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Thanks for actively participating in the thread to keep it lively and engaging.

(15-08-2023, 03:56 AM)creamydelight Wrote: I really thought Anita would somehow not go to the village and that would give her some quality time with Hariya

(15-08-2023, 08:11 PM)creamydelight Wrote: Village duration of stay zaada lamba nahi hoga... Isliye jo village me hona hoga wo tez hoga.. possibly.. shayad bhima Anita ko garam karke bheje jisse Hariya ka faayda ho jaaye...
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Thanks a lot for continuously provising your detailed feedback and analysis of the updates. Really appreciate your active participation in this thread.

(07-08-2023, 07:01 AM)Lovelychod Wrote: Again a good one, though I was expecting more open action specially after last encounter when Hariya dry humped Anita but show isn't over yet so lets wait what will be coming.

Anita ke andar randipana to bahut hai bas Hariya ko aisa hi use bahar nikalna hai. Hariya ne chuchi chusne ka bhi bol hi diya pr Anita sb jante hue bhi kaise Hariya ke maje le rahi h ki "abhi ap chatne aaye hai to chatiye, chusne ka liye kuch nhi milega". Dekhte hai kya Hariya ab direct Anita ki Bur chatne ko bolta h ya nhi ya bol to skta hi hai ki jaise ap icecream ko mere lund se satakar chus rahi hai usi tarah se mujhe bhi icecream ko apki chut se satakar chatna hai. Jis mod pe apne update ko roka h Sean sir, bas dimag me yahi chal raha h ki kya ho skta h .. tabhi?
Just guessing, 1-) wo jagah to sunsaan h to kisi ke aane ka to sawal nhi h. Ho skta h icecream ki kuch boond Hariya ke Lund pe gir gayi ho, agar aisa hua tb to Anita Hariya ke lund ko chusegi hi.
2-) Ho skta h Hariya ne apna hath Anita ke blause ke andar dalkar Anita ki nangi chuchi ko pakad liya ho.

Waise ye tree bhi in dono ke chedchad ka gawah hai to is tree ko thoda aur inaam milna chahiye. Hariya ne last time jis tarah se Anita ko dinning table pe jhukakar apne nange lund se dry humping kiya tha aur usko thokne ka bhi bol diya tha, aur to aur Anita se Haa bhi bulwa liya tha, to ab kya Hariya ye kr skta h -
1-) kuki Anita saari me hai to is baar Hariya Anita ki gaand ko nanga nhi kr skta jaisa usne last time jb dono tree ke niche mile the to Hariya ne Anita ki salwar aur panty ko thoda niche krke kiya tha. Fir kya Hariya Anita ki Chunchi ko nanga kr skta hai blause se bahar nikalkar?
2-) kya Hariya Anita ko tree ke sahare jhukakar uski Gaand me saari ke upar se hi apna muh ragade aur fir kya Hariya me itni himmat hai ki ek step aur badhkar Anita ki saari ko uski kamar tk uthakar apne nange Lund se Anita ki panty ke upar se ragade aur dry humping kare? I am sure agar Hariya aisa krta hai to Anita naraj nhi hogi balki aur prabhavit hogi Hariya se aur sochegi ki jb Hariya ji khule me uski saari ko upar krke uski gaand ko thoda nanga krke aise thok rahe hai to jb wo unko ghar bulayegi tb to Hariya ji usko dauda daudakar chodenge.
Aur dry humping krye hue Hariya Anita ko fir se thokne ka bole pr thoda alag andaaj me. Jaise ki phle to Hariya dry humping krte hue Anita se bahut kinki sawal kare like memsahab kya sahab ne raat me apko thoka tha ghodi banakar us mattress me jaisa maine bola tha aur Anita bhi full randipane se jawab de, fir ye bhi puch skta h ki kya apko thukwate hue meri aur mere lund ki yaad aa rahi thi aur fir se Anita ke dimag me Hariye se thukwane ki baat daale.
3-) Anita ne last time thukwane ke liya Haa kaha tha pr khulkar nhi bola tha. Is baar Hariya aur khulkar Anita ko dry humping karke itna madhosh kr de ki Anita khud bole ki wo jaldi hi bulayegi Hariya ko apne ghar apni thukai krwane ke liye.May be Hariya puch skta hai ki apko ek chota sa namuna dikhau kaise kaise thukai karunga apki and kuki Anita ki dry humping chal rahi hogi piche se to uske muh se "Haa" nikal jaye aur fir turant hi Hariya Anita ki apni taraf ghumake usko uthakar apne Lund pr baitha le aur dry humping krta hua bole ki " dekhiye memsahab, piche se ghodi banakar to apko thokunga hi aur fir apko apne Lund pr isi tarah baithakar pure ghar me ghuma ghumakar chodunga..aur ye sb sunkar aur Hariya ke lund se uski chut pe hoti dry humping se madhosh hokar Anita ekdum randipane se bole ki Jaldi hi wo Hariya ko bulayegi apni chudai krwane ke liye..

(07-08-2023, 02:39 PM)Lovelychod Wrote: [Image: tenor-3.gif]

Jb Hariya Anita ki chuchi dabata hoga to Anita kuch aise kamuk expression deti hogi...

(08-08-2023, 01:16 PM)Lovelychod Wrote: [Image: images-50.jpg]

Kya Anita ki Gaand aisi lagti hogi saree me?

(14-08-2023, 08:54 AM)Lovelychod Wrote: Excellent and seductive update. Sabse achhi baat is story ki ye hai ki lagta hi nhi ki hm ek sex story padh rahe hain balki aisa lagta hai ki aankho ke same ekdum real life chal rahi h jisme Anita dheere dheere seduce ho rahi hai aur Hariya uske randipane ko parat dar parat bahar nikal raha hai. Aur jis bariki se Sean bhai ek ek detail ko likhte hai jaise ki 1-) Hariya apne daaye hathe se Anita ki bayi chuchi ko daba raha tha aur jb uska baya hath free hua to wo apne baye hath se bhi Anita ki dayi chuchi ko pakad liya aur dabane laga 2-) Anita ne kaise apne aguthe aur index finger se stick pakadi hai aur baki teen finger se Hariya ke lund ko pakadi hai. Yahi Sean bro ko baki writer se alag krta h.

Jis tarah se dono ek dusre ki man ki baat ko jante hue ki samne wala kya chahta hai, ek dusre ko tease kr rahe hai wo wakai lajawaab hai. Pahli baar Anita apne chehre ke paas se itna bada aur nanga lund wo bhi kisi aur ka dekh rahi hai to laajimi hai ki uski chut me geelapan aur khujli ho rahi hogi aur jis tarah se wo apne honth ko daato ke beech daba rahi hai ufff.... soch kr hi Lund khada ho jata hai. Ab Hariya ne bol diya hai ki uske lund se bhi malai nikalta hai aur wo use chuskar apni pyas bujha skti hai aur Anita ka mn bhi hoga Hariya ka lund chusne ko pr wo thoda na nukur to karegi hi to Hariya usko yaad dila skta hai ki pichli baar Anita ne bola tha ki next time wo uske lund ko achhe se dekhegi aur pyar bhi kr degi to ye sahi time hai aur Hariya thoda force karega to jarur Anita uska lund chusegi kuki man to uska bhi hai hi.

Hope jb Anita Hariya ka lund chusna suru karegi aur Hariya aise hi kinki aur gandi baate krte hue usko aur uttejit kare lund chusne ko and Anita maje se lund chuskar uska pura pani pi jaye aur fir Hariya bol skta hai ki "memsahab Lund chuskar aur uska pani pikar apne apne muh ki pyas to mita li pr apke paas kuch aur hai jiski pyaas bujhne ki bajay badh gayi hai aur uski pyas hamara lauda hi bujha skta hai". Anita sb jante hue bhi randipane wale andaj me puche ki aisi kaun si chij hai mujhme jo abhi bhi pyasi hai aur apka hathiyar kaise uski pyas bujhayega to Hariya is baar direct uski pussy ko saari ke upar se chukar bole ki mai apki is pyasi chut ki baat kr raha hu aur fir wahi tree ke sahare usko jhukakar apne lund se dry humping krta hua bole ki "hum apko aise hi jhukakar apna ye lauda apki is pyasi chut me daalkar apki ragad ragadkar thukai krke apke chut ki pyas bujhaunga, boliye memsahab thukwayiega aise ap humse" aur Anita masti me khulkar bole.
Agar khule me aisa ho jaye to maja hi aa jaye, this is just my thinking baki Sean bro to khud hi magician hai unko kya batau. Let see kya hota hai aage...
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kiaa jawaan biwi story closed kardi ?
i think aap ko is story ko kuch din kay liye hold kardena chaiye
aur jawaan biwi story ko aagey barhana chaiye ] pata nhi kio
is story mey ab wo maza nhi aarha ]
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UPDATE 52

Anita kuchh der ke baad phir upar dekhi to Bhima ko khud ki taraf dekhte huye paayi. Kuchh seconds tak woh usko dekhi aur woh usko hi dekhte raha. Anita waapas kitchen ke taraf dekhti huyi muskura kar baat karne lagi.

Aesa lagbhag agle 5 minute tak hua aur iss 5 minute mein Anita 2-3 baar upar chhat ke taraf dekhi aur Bhima ko khud ki taraf dekhte paayi magar uski chehre par koi gussa ya muskurahat nahin thi.

5 minute baad Bhima agle 2 minute tak Anita ke upar dekhne ka intezar kiya magar Anita nahin dekhi to Bhima wahan se chala gaya. Use zyada der tak khade hue lagatar Anita ko dekhna sahi nahin laga. Bhima ke jaane ke kuchh seconds baad Anita waapas upar dekhi to Bhima nahin tha aur phir woh bhi upar dekhna bandh kar di.

Uss raat aur kuchh nahin hua. Agle din dopahar ke aas paas Bhima ko apne gaon se khabar aaya ki uske pita ka haalat kharab hai to woh apne gaon chala gaya. Shaam mein Raj ke chacha ke paas khabar aaya ki Bhima apne pita ko sheher hospital le gaya hai to uske liye waapas aana mushqil tha.

2 din baad subah mein Ankit ko apne college hostel jaana tha kyunki college ka session start hone wala tha.

Agle din bhi Bhima phone karke bol diya tha ki woh 2-3 din tak aa nahin payega. Woh gaadi lekar gaya tha. Raj ke chacha bol diye use ki woh apne pita ka khyaal rakhe aur araam se 2-3 din baad hi aaye. Bhima uss ghar ka bahot purana naukar tha isliye Raj ke chacha use kuchh nahin bole ki uske bete ko hostel jaana tha aur gaadi nahin tha.

Haalanki Ankit ko 2 din baad subah mein jaana tha magar kyunki gaadi ab thi nahin to baat hua ki woh agle din raat mein hi bus se chala jayega.

Anita bhi boli ki woh bhi Ankit ke saath chali jayegi to Radhika boli,"Bahu tu bus se kaise jayegi. Humein bade bhai sahab aur didi se baat nahin sunni hai. Tu 3 din aur ruk jaa araam se Bhima tujhe gaadi se pahuncha dega. Ankit ko to jaana hai to uske paas koi raasta nahin hai. Tu to ruk jaa kam se kam".

Raj ke chacha bhi bola,"Haan bahu ruk jao. Humein bhaiya aur bhabhi se baat nahin sunni hai. Unhe pata chalega ki tumhe bus se jaana pada to kitna bura lagega unko aur hum kya kahenge".

Anita yeh sab sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Uncle yeh to intercity AC bus hai. Isme kya pareshani hogi. Aur rahi baat kisi ke pata chalne ki to kisi ko kuchh bolne ki zarurat hi nahin hai ki main kaise waapas gayi. Uncle situation hi aesa hai ki koi kuchh nahin kar sakta. Aap jaan bujh kar mujhe bus mein thodi bhej rahe hain".

Radhika yeh sunnkar boli,"Lekin bahu 3 din aur ruk jaogi to kya ho jayega. Yahan kya itna bura hai ki 3 din ruk nahin sakti".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Aunty waisi baat nahin hai. Mujhe yahan koi pareshani nahin hai. Magar Raj ko khane peene mein dikkat hota hoga. Main khana banane ke liye kisi ko kaam par rakhi nahin hoon. Mujhe khud khana banana itna achha lagta hai ki kisi ko rakhi nahin khana banane ke liye".

Radhika yeh sunnkar muskura kar boli,"Theek hai bahu jaise tumhe achha lage. Bas tumhe koi pareshaani nahin honi chahiye".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskura kar boli,"Aunty koi pareshaani nahin hogi".

Raj ke chacha bole,"Bahu agar jaana hi hai to gaon ke 2-3 logo ke paas gaadi hai. Main pata karta hoon agar woh jaane ke liye tayyar hai to usi mein chale jaana"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Theek hai uncle, magar koi jaane ke liye tayyar nahin hoga to pareshaan mat hoiyega".

Shaam tak Raj ke chacha pata kar chuke the. Agle shaam mein paas wale gaon mein shaadi thi to sabhi gaadi book ho chuke the, lekin bus stand tak pahunchane ke liye ek gaadi mil gaya tha.

Anita ko yeh baat pata chala to woh muskurakar boli,"Uncle koi baat nahin main Ankit ke saath bus mein chali jaungi".

Agle din shaam mein Anita Ankit ke saath jaane ke liye nikal gayi. Jaane se pehle Radhika Ankit se boli,"Achhe se jaana aur bhabhi ko koi pareshani mat hone dena. Bhabhi tumse badi hair aur padhi likhi bhi. Duniyadari samajhti hai to raaste mein inka baat manna.".

Ankit yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya wahin Anita bhi muskura di.

Bus stand pahunchne par Ankit ticket counter chala gaya ticket lene wahin Anita ek taraf side mein bags ke paas khadi huyi Radhika se phone par baat kar rahi thi ki woh log achhe se bus stand pahunch gaye hain.

Anita muskurati huyi baat karti huyi ek taraf dekhi to ek aadmi use ghurte hue dikhai diya. Anita use dekhi to woh aadmi uski badan par nazar dauda kar uski aankhon mein dekhne laga. Anita dekhi ki uska aankh thoda laal tha.

Anita uske aankhon mein ek pal dekhne ke baad waapas saamne dekhti huyi muskura kar phone par baat karti rahi.

Kuchh der baad Anita waapas udhar dekhi to woh aadmi ko abhi bhi uski badan ko ghurte hue dekhi. Uska nazar uski gaand par tha. Woh aadmi uski gaand dekh raha tha to Anita ek nazar uske huliye par daali. Woh aadmi kaala tha aur lagbhag 50 saal ka lag raha tha. Chehre par halka khurdura safed dadhi aur munchh tha. Aankh laal aur chehre par zara bhi muskaan nahin tha.

Uske shirt ka upar ka do button khula tha aur usse uske seene ka baal halka sa dikh raha tha aur saath hi seene pat latka hua mota chain dikhai de raha tha.

Anita andaza lagayi ki uska seena thoda majbut lag raha tha aur kandha chauda tha. Lambai mein bhi lagbhag 6 feet ka lag raha tha woh. Neeche ek pant pehne hua tha aur pair ke paas ek bag rakha hua tha.

Anita jab uske huliye ko dekh rahi thi tab woh waapas uski gaand se nazar hatakar uski aankhon mein dekhne laga. Anita ek pal use dekhi aur phir phone ko disconnect karke waapas saamne ke taraf dekhne lagi.

Lagbhag ek minute baad Anita ticket counter ke taraf dekhne ke baad waapas uss aadmi ke taraf dekhi to use apni chunchi ki ubhar par dekhte hue apne zabaan par honth phirate hue dekhi. Anita yeh dekhkar waapas ticket counter ke taraf dekhi to Ankit ticket lekar aa raha tha.

Anita Ankit ko dekhkar muskurai. Ankit bhi uske paas aakar muskurate hue bola,"Bhabhi ticket mil gayi. Chaliye bus mein baithte hain".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"That's great. Chalo chalte hain".

Ankit Anita ka suitcase pakad kar chalne laga. Anita ek nazar uss aadmi ke taraf dekhi jo use hi dekh raha tha. Dono ki nazar mili aur phir Anita chup chap apni gaand matkati huyi chalne lagi.

Anita safar mein araam ke liye ek patiyala salwar kameez pehni thi. Patiyala salwar thoda pardarshi tha to dhyaan se dekhne par sadak ke roshni mein uski taangon ka shape pata chal raha tha. Upar woh ek chhota kameez pehni thi jo uski gaand ke theek neeche khatam ho jaa raha tha.

Kameez ka peeche ka hissa mein uski aadhi peeth tak sirf strings the jisse uski gori peeth dikh rahi thi. Saamne bhi thoda gehra gala hone ke kaaran uski cleavage thodi dikh rahi thi. Woh humesha ki tarah koi dupatta nahin rakhi thi.

Woh aadmi Anita ke chalte waqt uski adhnangi gori peeth aur matakti gaand ko dekhkar apne honthon par zabaan phiraya.

Ankit bus ke paas pahunch kar bola,"Bhabhi yeh ticket lijiye aur aap bus mein baithiye, main samaan rakhwa kar aata hoon".

Anita muskurakar apna ticket lekar bus mein chadh gayi. Bus mein jaakar dekhi to sabse peeche ke seat se ek seat aage double seat ke khidki ke taraf uska seat tha. Woh jaakar wahan baith gayi.

Kuchh seconds baad Anita ki naak mein thoda sharab ki gandh gayi to woh baaye taraf dekhi. Agle pal uske bagal wale seat par ek aadmi aakar usse chipak kar baith gaya aur iss hisab se baitha ki uska kohni Anita ki baayi chunchi se satt gaya.

Anita uske baithne par uske chehre par dekhi to woh wahi aadmi tha jo baahar use ghur ghur kar gandi nazar se dekh raha tha. Woh waqai mein lamba chauda tha aur apni chunchi par uske kohni ke pressure se Anita samajh gayi ki woh aadmi mazbut tha.

Jaisa lamba chauda woh tha Anita ko laga ki woh jaan bujh kar usse chipak kar uski chunchi par kohni ko nahin sataya tha balki jagah ki kami ke kaaran woh waise baitha tha.

Anita use dekhi to woh aadmi bhi use dekha aur phir ek nazar uski cleavage ke taraf dekhne ke baad jab waapas Anita ke taraf dekha to woh boli,"Yeh seat reserved hai. Kisi aur ka seat hai yeh".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar Anita ki aankhon mein dekha aur phir ek nazar uski cleavage par daalne ke baad uski aankhon mein dekhkar bola,"Pata hai humka. Tohaar saath woh chikna ladka jo hai sasura usi ka seat hoga".

Anita uska bhasha sunn ek nazar use dekhti rahi magar phir woh boli,"To phir aap kyun baith gaye?Aap apne seat par jaiye"

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar bola,"Hum eehan baith gaye to kaa hua?U ladka humra seat par baith jayega".

Phir woh Anita ki chunchiyon ko dekhne laga. Anita use apni chunchiyon par dekhte hue dekhne lagi. Yeh sab kuchh seconds tak hua aur woh aadmi phir Anita ki aankhon mein dekhkar bola,"U baccha eehan baith kar kaa karega? Hum eehan baithunga to safar mazaa se beetega, humre liye bhi aur tohre liye bhi".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske aankhon mein kuchh seconds tak dekhti rahi ki tabhi use awaaz sunai diya,"Uncle aap ghalat jagah baith gaye hain. Yeh seat mera hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar uss aadmi ke aankhon se nazar hatakar uske bagal mein dekhi to Ankit ko wahan khada payi. Isse pehle ki Anita kuch bolti woh aadmi Ankit ko dekhkar uske baaye gaal ko jor se pakad kar hilate hue bola,"Haan humka pata hai ki tohar seat hai. Lekin eehan hum baitha hun ab. Tum hamaar seat par jao".

Ankit apne gaal utne jor se daba kar hilaye jaane par karaah utha "aaahhh".

Woh aadmi aage ke seat ke taraf apne aankhon se ishara karte hue bola,"U wala seat humaar hai. Jao jaakar baith jao".

Ankit is beech karahte hue ek baar bola,"aaaahh uncle chhoriye, uncle aaahhh"

Woh aadmi Ankit ka baat nazarandaaz karte hue apna baat pura kiya. Anita ko samajh nahin aaya ki woh kya kare. Yeh sab kuchh ek do minute mein hi ho gaya tha aur Ankit aur woh aadmi hi ek dusre se baat karte rahe jiske kaaran Anita ko kuchh bolne ya karne ka mauqa nahin mila. Woh bhi bas thodi pareshani aur hairani se uss aadmi ko Ankit ka gaal debate hue bolte hue sunn rahi thi.

Akhir mein woh aadmi apna baat khatam karke Ankit ka gaal chhod diya aur halka sa chumma dene jaisa honth banakar uska gaal thap thapata hua bola,"chalo baccha pyaar se bol raha hoon hum uuhan jaakar baith jao aur eehan bada log ko baithne do".

Yeh bolkar woh aadmi Anita ke taraf dekha jo chup chap usi ko dekh rahi thi. Agle pal phir se woh Ankit ka baat suni,"Nahin uncle main yahin baithunga. Aap apna seat par jaiye".

Phir woh Anita ke taraf dekhkar bola,"Bhabhi aap boliye na uncle ko yahan se jaane".

Isse pehle Anita kuchh bolti woh aadmi iss baar Ankit ka dusra gaal pakad kar waise hi jor se hilate hue bola,"Tohaar ka seedha baat samajh mein nahin aawat hai? Chalo achha baccha ke tarah jakar baitho uhan".

Ankita phir se karaah utha,"aaahhh uncle aaahhh chhoriye mujhe aaaaahhh bhabhi".

Anita iss baar uska baat khatam hone par boli,"Are yeh kya kar rahe hain aap? Koi bacche ke saath aese karta hai kya? Aapse kitna chhota hai yeh aur aap aese uska gaal jor se pakde hue hai. Chhoriye use".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar Anita ki taraf dekhne laga aur jab tak woh bolti rahi woh Ankit ka gaal pakde hue Anita ko hi dekhte raha.

Anita ka baat khatam hone par woh bola,"To hum bhi to uhi bol raha hun ki baccha hai to bachhe ke tarah rahe".

Phir woh Anita ki chunchiyon ko dekhkar uski aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,"Aur bada log ko bada log ke tarah rehne de. Lekin sasura bada badtameez baccha hai. Samajh nahin aa raha hai ee sasura ko ki bada se kaise baat kare".

Agle pal Ankit bola,"Uncle badtameezi to aap kar rahe hain mera seat aaahhhhh".

Ankit ke bolte hue hi woh aadmi phir se uske gaal ko jor se daba diya. Anita yeh dekhte hi uss aadmi se boli,"Are phir se aap kyun isko tang karne lage. Chhoriye ise. Jab aap bol hi rahe hain yeh baccha hai to baccha samajh kar chhor dijiye".

Woh aadmi Ankit ka gaal par pressure kam karke Anita ko dekhkar bola,"To baccha ke tarah rehna chahiye na. Jab dekh raha hai ki bada log saath mein baitha hai to kahe beech mein tapak raha hai".

Agle pal woh Anita ki chunchiyon ko dekhne ke baad apne kohni se uss par pressure banate hue uski ankhon mein dekhte hue bola,"ee sasura uhan humre seat par baith jayega to kaa hoga?"

Ankit phir se bol pada,"Uncle mera seat to yeh hai...".

Woh aadmi Ankit ko dekhkar phir se Ankit ka gaal anguthe aur index finger ke beech daba diya to Anita beech mein boli,"Ankit chup bhi karo. Main baat kar rahi hoon na".

Ankit yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya to Anita uss aadmi ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Aap kyun zidd kar rahe hain?Apne seat par chale jaiye".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchi ko dekhkar uski aankhon mein dekhkar bola,"Zidd hum nahin ee kar raha hai. Ee eehan baith kar ka karega? Lamba safar hai hum eehan baithunga to achhe se baat chit karte hue safar kat jayega. Ee baccha ko dekho, abhi se kaan mein earphone thuns kar gaana sunn raha hai. Ee pura raasta mobile mein hi ghusa rahega.".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske aankhon mein dekhti huyi boli,"To aapne mann bana liye hai ki aap yehi baithenge?".

Woh aadmi Anita ki chunchiyon ko dekhkar bola,"Haan ee jagah baccha log ka baithne ka nahin hai. Ee jagah ek mard ka baithne ka hai, humra jaisa marad aur ee sasura baccha ko ee baat samajh nahin aa raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar use dekhkar boli,"Are to aese samjhayenge to kaise samjhega. Aap samjha kam rahe hain aur ise dara zyada rahe hain."

Yeh sunnkar pehli baar woh aadmi halke se muksuraya aur uske muskurahat mein ek garv tha apne dabangai par.

Anita usko muskurata dekh uske aankhon mein dekhkat boli,"Aap khud ko dekhiye aur ise dekhiye. Aapke saamne to sach mein yeh bachha hi hai na. Kya aapko apna taaqat ek bacche par istemaal karna achha lag raha hai?"

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar muskurate hue Anita ki badan ko dekhne laga to woh boli,"Ab chhor bhi dijiye iske gaal ko".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar muskurate hue Ankit ke gaal ko chhorkar bola,"Chalo ab achha baccha ke tarah jao uhaan jaakar baitho".

Ankit agle pal apna gaal sehlate hue bola,"Uncle yeh zabardasti.."

Ankit pura bolta isse pehle Anita boli,"Ankit ab chup bhi karo aur jao inke seat par baith jao. Baat badhane se kya fayeda".

Ankit apna gaal sehlate hue bola,"Bhabhi aap to samjho".

Anita yeh sunnkar boli,"Ankit main samajh rahin hoon tabhi to bol rahi hoon".

Anita jab yeh bol rahi thi tab uski chunchi par uss aadmi ka kohni sata hua tha. Anita apna baat jaari rakhi,"Yeh to yahan se hatna nahin chah rahe to kam se kam tum hi baat samjho. Ya phir tum aese hi inse jhamela karte rehna chah rahe ho".

Ankit yeh sunnkar apna gaal sehlate hue "na" mein sir hilaya to Anita muskurakar thoda pyaar se boli,"Baithna hi to hai. Yahan baitho ya aage kya farq padega. Jao jaakar inke seat par baith jao".

Ankit yeh sunnkar apna sir hilaya aur ek nazar uss aadmi ke taraf dekha to woh muskurakar uske gaal ko thapthapate hue bola,"Achha baccha ho gaya tu ab. Aese hi pehle samajh jaata to achha hota".

Agle pal woh aadmi apne saamne apna haath aapas mein jod kar ungliyon ko ek saath crack karte hue aur angrai lete hue bola,"Ab jao aur bada log ko araam karne do".

Aesa karne se uske kohni ka pressure Anita ki chunchi par badh gaya. Ankit uska baat sunnkar Anita ko ek baar dekha to Anita apni aankhon se use apne seat par jaane ka ishara ki.
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Like this development... refreshing the plot
Myself a noob writer
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Bhai thode lmbe plot bnao no action ab boring ho rha intrest khtm ho jyega
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This is a very significant and unexpected development. When she went to the village, we knew something was up, but what has exactly realised till now is something that I could not have ever guessed. Kudos yet again on introducing this twist.

Anita really is a different woman. She knows he is drunk and likely to do what most others would consider "misbehaviour". He forcefully grabs a seat next to her, and clearly hints that he will do something that will cause "maza" to both him and her. Instead of raising an alarm, she instead talks a bit irritatedly with Ankit to not draw out the scene but to simply accept it. They kinda "cucked" him. Wonder what she would have done if it was Raj instead of Ankit.

There could be two reasons why she did this:
1) she really got scared and really wants to avoid a scene and any harm to Ankit .
Or what is more likely
2) internally she wants to see where it goes. The situation has called out to her subconscious sluttiness which has been cultivated over the last few months/weeks by Hariya.

But what's most striking to me is the irritated manner in which she told Ankit off.

Also, this guy is a bigger dabang than Hariya. Hariya at least waited for green signal from Anita before confidently talking on behalf of Anita to others like ice cream wala or sabjiwala. This guy in the other hand didn't even wait for anything. He just saw something he liked and decided to take it. Like he came, he saw, and he will conquer, and then maybe come again :p .

Dear writer,
Please do not leave us hanging at this stage for too long and request you to complete this scene soon!!
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