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Awesome story bro ... Bs thoda erotic scenes or add kro .. to story super hit h
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Kahani toh badiya hai.... likhte bhi badiya hoo.......
Doston..... Comment karna zaroor.... Ek Lekhak ke liye bohot zaruri hoti hai....
Comment zaroor karna.......
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Wonderful writings....
Superb plot development.....
Amazing writing skills.....
Thanks for effort.....
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Hi Doston.....
Jaise khana pakane wale ko jab tak koi nahi bolta ki khana kaise bana hai.....
Waise hi Kahani likne wale padne wale ko yeh batana hota hai ki unhe yeh kahani pasand aaya hai ya nahi.....
Please doston... comment kijiye.....
Mujhe toh kahani bohot pasand hai..... Is kahani ki toh main badi fan hoon.... Ab is kahani ki fan hoon.... Aage kya hoga zaroor likna......
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hi bro...
you are best...
Sheetal par Jyada focus karo....
or kahani me ye twist kya ho gaya hai...
vikash ka kuch ata pata nahi hai...
or Tahir ki jagah agar tailor budda waseem ka dost Karan hota to accha hota
usse sheetal ki sadi kara do...
Firoj ko real name sheetal ka pata chale jab wo uske sath suhagrat manaye to sheetal use apni real name wa real story bataye....
to or maza a jayega... kuch ye raaj hai
ab apki marji
story abhi bhi best hai... bro...
mere comment se kuch bura laga ho to sorry....
sheetal or Firoj par dhyan dijiye. please...
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Agle din Shital ko Raj ka phone aaya……
Raj: Shital’ji aap ko Malik (Abdul’ji) ne apne ghar pe bulya hai …..
Shital Abdul’ji ke ghar gayi….
Shital: Namaste Abdul’ji…..
Abdul: Kaise ho Shital?
Shital: Kaisi ho sakti hoon….. aisa lagta hai sab khatam ho gaya…
Abdul: Aisa mat kaho…. Waqt sare zakham bhar deta hai….. tum kise baat ki bilkul fikar mat karo…..
Shital: Fikar kaise na karu… Tahir ke ilaz ke liye woh hospital bohot chota hai…. Doctor keh rahe the ki use kise bade hospital main le jana hoga…. Agar main chali gayi toh Sanjana ka kya hoga… uski padayi…. Ufffff….. kya karu main…. Sochti hoo gaun main maa ke pas vapas bhej dun….. Par yeh nahi pata kahan le jaun Tahir ko….
Abdul: D (Ek Bade shehar ka naam)…. Shehar ka naam suna hai…..
Shital: Haa suna hai… par wahan main kise ko nahi janti….
Abdul: Mera ek bohot khas dost hai us shehar main… tum kaho toh woh sara intezam kar dega….
Shital: Samajh nahi aa raha kya karu…. Agar main naye shehar main jaungi toh Sanjana kaha rahegi…. Soch rahi hoon ki maa ke paas bhej dun gaun main….
Abdul: Gaun main….. gaun main maa ke paas….. lekin padayi….
Shital: Sahi kaha aapne…. Gaun main ko achi college bhi nahi hai….
Abdul: Agar tumhe koi aitraz nahi toh ek kaam kar sakte hai….. Woh 2 ladke… woh college ke ladke…. kya naam hai unka…..
Shital: Ajay aur Vijay ….
Abdul: Haa… wohi…. Meri bohot pehchan hai is shehar main….. Un dono ladkon se baat karke unke hi college main admission ki baat kar lunga…. Fiakr mat karo…. Tumhari behan ka admission karva dunga…. Isi shehar main humare aakhon ke samne rahegi….. Kya bolti ho….
Shital: Bohot bohot shukriya Abdul’ji….. aap nahi jante kitna ahsan kiya hum dono behnon pe….
Abdul: Bas bas…. Ahsan kaisa…. Sonabai aur Wasim mere khas Doston main hai…. unke dost mere dost…. Dosti main koi ahsan nahi karte…. Tum apni behan ki chinta bilkul mat karo….. Hum sab uska khayal rakhenge….. College main woh dono ladke… aur sham main Raj… Agli bar se ahsan mat kehna…
Shital: Thik hai…. Ahsan nahi kahungi….. Par Madad toh keh sakhti hoon na….. aur shukriya toh kehna mera farz hai….
Kehke wahan hospital jane ke bajay vapis hotel jati hai……
Sanjana se milti hai….. T-Shirt aur ek choti se chaadi pehni hui thi…..Thik waise hi Jaise ghar se nikalte waqt pehna tha…..
Shital: Kya hua Lado rani….. Tabiyat toh thik hai na….
Sanjana: Thik hoon Didi… kyu poocha…..
Shital: Kapde pehana hai isiliye…..
Ha Ha Ha…..
Shital: Lado jo ho gaya so ho gaya…. Main abhi abhi Abdul’ji se sari battain kar li hai…. Woh tera admission yahin ise shehar main…..
Sanjana: Sacchiiiii…… Par main rahungi kahan….. Jiju ke ghar nahi ja sakti…..
Shital: Haa…. Jiju ke ghar kyu jana…. Tum yahin isis hotel main rahogi….
Sanjana: Kya baat kar rahi ho Didi…. Sachiiii…. Unhe mere taraf se bhi shukriya bol do Didi….
Shital: Unhe sirf shukriya kehke kafi nahi hoga…. main chahti hoon ki hum dono jis kaam ke liye yahan aaye the…. Aaj raat woh kare…..
Sanjana: Kaunsa kaam?
Shital: Abdul’ji ko khush karne ka…..
Sanjana: Bilkul Didi…. Jitna unhone kiya uske liye shukriya kafi nahi hogi….. lakin karenge kaise….?
Shital: Raj humari madad karega….
Shital ne Raj se Abdul’ji ki khas Doston ke bare pata karwaya aur un sab ko Raj dwara aaj raat ko Abdul’ji ke ghar pe dawat ke liye amantrit kiya…..
Raj ne ek taxi ka intezam kiya jo Shital aur Sanjana ko Abdul’ji ke ghar le jane ke liye….
Shital: Raj tum bhi aate toh kitna acha hota….
Raj: Main kaise apne Malik ke dawat main ja sakta hoon…. Main yahin hotel main hi hoon…
Shital: Thik hai….. main samajh sakti hoon….
Taxi aa gayi…. Raj ne pehle se Abdul’ji ke ghar ke naukaron ke saath milkar sata intezam kar diya tha…..
Raj: Aap dono aise hi jaoge….?
Sanjana: Kyu janu…. Hum nangi achi nahi lag rahe kya….?
Shital aur Sanjana apne asli roop main kamre se bahar nikalkar receiption pe aa gaye the….. Ab dono main na koi sharam bachi thi nahi koi dar…. Abdul’ji ke ghar jane ke liye….
Raj: Are meri randion…. Tum dono nangi hi achi lagti ho…. Par pata hai na Abdul’ji ka ghar yahan se 10 KM hai… Taxi main jana hai….
Shital: Toh kya hua Raj babu…. Taxi driver ko waiting ke paise bhi toh dene honge…. Woh main apni chooth se de dungi…..
Sanjana: Aur main gaand se de dungi….. Aur mere janu….. vapis aane ke baad mujhe tumhara lund chahiye…… Hafte bhar se tadap rahe hoo….
Raj: Haa randi…. Hafte bhar se tadap raha hoon tere vapis se gaand marne ke liye…. Aap dono jaldi jao aur humare Malik ko khush karke jaldi aa jao….
Shital: Aaj raat jashan sirf Abdul’ji ko khus karne ke liye nahi hai… meri aazadi ki bhi hai…..
Raj: Aazadi….. Kaise aazadi?
Shital: Apne pati se…. chod diya maine use…. Poori baat Sanjana aane ke baad batayegi … Abhi hum chalte hai…..
Raj: Taxi hotel ke peeche ke raste main hai… maine use sab bata diya hai…. woh aap dono ko le jayega aur vapis le aayega…..
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Abdul’ji ke ghar pe jashan kaisa tha….. Kya kya hua
Yeh sab aur bohot kuch Agle bhag main…
Doston Ek nivedan…..
Main janta hoon… kahani ka yeh bhag app logon ko shayaad acha nahi laga hoga…. Thoda booring hua hai…. maine koshish ki zyada boring na hoo…..
Kahani se ruth mat jana… Vada karta hoon aage ke sare episode masaledar rahenge….
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Bro aap mast likh rahe ho ... Aise hi super likhte raho ... Hum humesha aapke sath h
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Aswm update bro ...
Or Hum hamesha aapke sath rahenge
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Bahut badhiya likha hai aapne, Vikas ki behan ka kya hua?
Rishte todane me jaldi kar di, thoda usme bhi twist laya ja sakta hai, Vinita ko bhi strong role de sakte ho. . Shital Vikas ko ek baar Jail me mil k bataye ki uski behan Vinita ne kya kamal kiya.
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Wonderful writings.....
Amazing.....
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Abdul ki party me kya hoga ???
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hi bro...
apne story ko poora change kar diya hai...
vikash ko jail karwa di...
or Firoj bhai ka part add hi karna bhool gaye..
kyonki waseem ke marne par Firooz ko sheetal sab sach batati or Karan abdul ki jagah sheetal ka dhyan rakhta use apne rakhail banakar or uski bahan ki jemmedari leta...
ab sab tumhare opper hai... bro...