Fantasy Dunia kamini to me Maha kamina

[Jayfuker]

aage

javed me kuch der aaram karna chahta hu tum dono aapas me bhidna nhi

javed_ ji bhai

me apni gaadi me bne half bed per let gya
raat bhar se soya nhi tha chudai k chakkar me or subhah bhi so nhi paya tha

nind aisi aayi ki pta hi nhi chala ki kab 4 ghante gujar gye

jab me utha to javed ne mujhe kha ki ravi kaa call aaya tha
kaam ho gya he
app baat kar lo

mene gaadi side me lagwai muh dhoya bathroom wagera ki or fir ravi ko call kiya

ravi_ bhai kaam ho gya he dono gang kaa game biaa diya he ladko ne

me_ hmmm nuksaan Kitna hua

ravi_  humare bhi 2 ladke maare gye he bhai

me_ in 9 mese

Ravi_ nhi bhai wo to sab safe he unke sath 8 bheje the unme se or un 6 ko nikal diya he jaipur k liye

me_ thik he acha sun un 2 ladko kaa pure ritiriwaj se antim saskar karo or unki family ko ab koi problem nhi honi chahiye wo tumhari jimmedari he

ravi_ bilkul bhai 

me_ ravi mumbai tumhari he 

ravi_ ji bhai

mene call cut kiya

Javed_ kyaa hua bhai 

me_ Mumbai me 2 gang or khatam ho gyi 

Javed_ aakhir ladko ne kar dikhaya 

raj_ bhai Mujhe aaj bhi yaad he jab humne hamid or karim lala kaa game bajaya tha 


me_ raj aaj humara wakt he kal kisi or kaa bhi ho sakta he 
or hum kisi ki mout kaa jasn nhi manate

raj_ sorry Bhai 

me_ raj wakt to humara bhi theek nhi chal rha abhi 

raj _ haa bhai 

javed_ bhai aage chaking chal rhi he 

me_ javed ye humara state he or hum yaha darenge to dusre state me ghanta kuch karenge

Raj_ bhai mene news padi thi ki purv cm Arun Singh khi bhag gya he ghotale karke
lakin wo to 

me_ mene bhi yahi suna he jo tumne suna he

raj_ per bhai app to uske piche gye the naa

me_ wo baat ab purani ho chuki he raj bhul jao use 

Javed_ bhui ye to thik he lakin rajsthan me bhi hume chaking mil Sakti he 

me_ bikul mil sakti he lakin tum sirf gaadi chalao baki ki chinta mujh per chod do 

javed ko sirf 40 din huye the mere sath wo abhi thak mujhe puri tarah se jaan nhi paya tha 
lakin wafadar tha or man me sawal aana wajib tha to uske man me bhi sawal aa rhe the ki kyaa ho rha he kyu iss type se 
ak baat ye bhi thi ki jab se wo mere sath tha hum kahi bahar nhi gye the wahi bunglow me log aate the milte the to uske liye ye anubnav naya tha

ager raj ki baat karu to ager in 4 mahino ko chod de to usse pahle wo kaafi time sath tha mujhe samjhata bhi tha or mere soch ko samjhane ki koshish karta tha 
mujhse pahle bhi ak gangster kaa khas wo rah chuka tha 
halaki wo baat purani thi

ab aate he vartman per

hum ab mp ki border cross kar rajshahi rajsthan me inter ho chuke he 
wahi rajsthan jo aaj kal 2 chutiyo ki wajah se news me bna hua he 

kher baat apni karte he 

hum Jaipur pahuche ak hotel book ki or wahi thodi ruke fresh huye raat k karib 3 baj rhe the 

me_ raj yaha koi aadmi jo humari help kar paaye

raj_ aisa to koi nhi lakin jin logo ne pallavi or gudiya ko uthaya unme se ak ko mene dekha he or uska adda bhi me lagbhag janta hu 

me_ gaadi nikalo fir 

hum 3 uss address per gye jaha uske hone ki sambhavana thi 

raj_ yaha se bas 200 Miter per ak makaan he waha uss kholi per kai baar mene use aate jaate dekha he mere auto me aata tha wo kai baar

me_ thik he javed tum gaadi me betho hum aate he 

javed_ per bhai apko iske sath

me_ javed chinta mat karo me aa rha hu thik he 

raj or me us kholi k gate tak pahuche raj ne gate open kiya 

nind me usi aadmi ne gate khola 
uska naam tha dilawar

[omkarkumar2001]

Awesome updates

[Jignesh Rana]

Nice update

[Aflatoonz]

Bhai kahan gum ho gaye, update plz

[Jignesh Rana]

Please update jaybhai

[Jignesh Rana]

Bhai bahot wait karvaya please update

[Jayfuker]

thanks dosto iss story ko itna pyar dene k liye 
or 1 lakh view's dene k liye

  thanks for supporting 

[Kala23]

Koi pblm hua kya sir, up ko update nehi arahe

[Jayfuker]

Koi pblm hua kya sir, up ko update nehi arahe

job or working se time hi nhi mil paa rha he bhai 
lockdown me bde lod ko kam karne me lagaa hu

iss liye story ko aage nhi bdaa paya kabhi samay mila bhavishya me to aage continue karunga

abhi likhne ki koshish karta hu per wo focus de nhi pata jo abhi tak iss story ko diya he 

iss liye kuch post nhi karta 

or wese bhi me iss story ko ak naye masale k sath dobara likhna chahta hu 

ise complete jarur karunga kisi naa kisi din  

[Mahakaal]

job or working se time hi nhi mil paa rha he bhai 
lockdown me bde lod ko kam karne me lagaa hu

iss liye story ko aage nhi bdaa paya kabhi samay mila bhavishya me to aage continue karunga

abhi likhne ki koshish karta hu per wo focus de nhi pata jo abhi tak iss story ko diya he 

iss liye kuch post nhi karta 

or wese bhi me iss story ko ak naye masale k sath dobara likhna chahta hu 

ise complete jarur karunga kisi naa kisi din  

Ok wait

[King1969]

Update

[Jayfuker]

mene Aaj kal ki kuch stories view ki kyaa chutiyapa chal rha hai Stories me
ak tarah ki ghatiya manshikta failai jaa rhi hai
***** aaurat '. ladka aadmi
abhey nallo dallo kuch to thang kaa likh lo
tumhari maa bhi tumharey heros k pass hi gyi hogi
tumharey liye
sudhar jao yaar kuch bhi likho thoda thang kaa likho acha likho
salo jo lati hai iske unki manshikta per iska kyaa asar hota hoga tum soch bhi nhi sakte
isse bahar nikalo
warna tumhara bhai lekar aayega nayi kahaniyan sirf '.ao ki thukai ki

band karo ye chutiyape or ak saa content maa maa jaake maa chudao apni
kuch to Aisa likho jo padne pe maja de gilt nhi .

[Jayfuker]

story purani hai per mje dar hai padoge nhi to janoge kese.

[Yash12]

story purani hai per mje dar hai padoge nhi to janoge kese.

Main aaj hi yeh story padi h apki...bahut achi h ise continue karo  aap

[Jayfuker]

bro jitni likhi hai utni hi bahut hai Bahut labmi hai aap.mja lo ab iska flow nhi rha likhne kaa .

ise likhne k liye mujhe khud ise padna padega sab yaad karne k liye

or ab ye mumkin nhi hai

to tumse request hai jitni hai utni pado or reply karte raho taki ak din ise dobara likhne ki ikcha jaage man me...

[Jayfuker]

iss story ko rate nhi karoge?

5 ⭐ star nhi doge ?

[Jayfuker]

feedback please...

[Jayfuker]

lout k aau kyaa....?

[ShakirAli]

lout k aau kyaa....?

Bohot arsa pahle xossipy pe Tusahar bhai (bestforu83) ne ye story likhi thi kaafi aage tak aur phir incomplete chhod di thi… shukriya aaka is story ko fir post karne ka and hopefully aap is story ko aage badhaaoge aur complete karoge….

Agar aap regular update ka irada rakhte to jaroor aao laut ke… welcome back! 

[Jayfuker]

ye meri story hai bhai me iska original writer hu first lockdown me likhi thi mene ye tumne kaha pad lu isko or kab
I am the only one Jay thakur
Jayfuker

ye plot mera hai or koi bhi isko pura nhi kar sakta jab tak ki me naa Karun..