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साधारण इंसान बना अरबपति खानदान की बहु और फिर उसके परिवार का मालिक
#1
[color=#cc3333Main ek alg mazhab se hu, aur meri partner alg dharm se, hm log live in me hai kafi time hai, kya m apni original story post kr skata hu, kyon ab wo sirf meri live in partner hi nhi rhi, main uske poore pariwar ka malik ho chuka][/color]
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#2
Bhai kuch likho pehle..character intro...story intro..kuch bhi..phir pucho...aise interest kaise lenge log?!
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#3
Welcome
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Waiting 4 start
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#5
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#6
please continue
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#10
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#11
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#12
Story mast hai.. par Padhne main thodi taklif ho rahi hai...word ki wajah se
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(04-06-2023, 03:38 PM)Mgaya Wrote: Story mast hai.. par Padhne main thodi taklif ho rahi hai...word ki wajah se

Thanks for feedback sir, 

Aapke feedback ke according font size bada kr diya hai..

Story achhi lgi hai batane ke liye aapka sukriya, ab m aage story badha sakta hu
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#15
Ohhh very nice keep it up
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#17
Superb ...thoda bada update do bhai...!!,
Itne main dil nahi bharta
Aur words se mera matlab size nahi...spellings se tha..jo samjhne main mushkil de rahe the...last 2 updates main woh kafi behtar hai...!!
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(05-06-2023, 07:10 AM)Mgaya Wrote: Superb ...thoda bada update do bhai...!!,
Itne main dil nahi bharta
Aur words se mera matlab size nahi...spellings se tha..jo samjhne main mushkil de rahe the...last 2 updates main woh kafi behtar hai...!!

sir thoda time issue rahta hai, hm log ek trip par hai aur janvi ko pta nhi hai ki yaha ye sb bhi chal rha... isliye aur thoda chhup kar karna padta hai...
try karuga ki aage se aapko spelling me problem na aaye

Thanks for feedback
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agar aur log bhi apna feedback dege aur btayege ki story achhi lag rhi hai ya nhi to mujhe lhushi bhi hogi aur aage likhne ka bhi man krega....
achha ya bura jaisa bhi ho feed back jarur dijiye
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