[Daredevil]

Bahut garam aur exciting update raha yeh.
Maja agaya bhai

[Voyonkor Bishu]

Vah vah vah bhai. Iss update mein aap ki writing ka jadu hai bhai. Vah.

[Taniyamalik]

hahahah fabulous and this is the cherry on the cake!

[Introvert]

Absolutely wonderful, mind blowing and super sensational update ❤️

[The_Ramukaka]

Again super buildup ovrr the last one.

[creamydelight]

Wow... Anita chose the ice cream for Hariya too

[Curiousbull]

Ab Anita ko bhi pink aur white wala ice cream chahiye wah wah.

[seansean007]

Why can’t people be bit patient. A writer is already trying his best to deliver the story.
So just be patient, and appreciate with the comments and if possible reviews.

Seansean007 has restarted this story. Let’s have little faith with bit patience.

Thanks for being understanding.

[seansean007]

On a lighter note, this board will be put by the jealous conservative women of the town after noticing all their husbands drooling over Anita.

Funny.

[seansean007]

On a lighter note, this board will be put by the jealous conservative women of the town after noticing all their husbands drooling over Anita.

Funny.

[seansean007]

waiting for the next update? Is the writer ok?

Yes.

[seansean007]

Thanks all.

Absolutely wonderful, terrific and extremely hot update ?

Maja agaya bhai , wellcome back . Ab aur raha nahi jata jaldi se chodwa do .

suparrrrrr se uparrrrrr update hai bhai

Kya likhte aapne yaar, ekdum jackass aur mast kahaani

Fuckingly hot update

Wonderful

Very sexy. Thanks for the update.

Superb hot update

Bahut acha update ha,Bahut hi passand aya mujhe

Bahut garam aur exciting update raha yeh.
Maja agaya bhai

Vah vah vah bhai. Iss update mein aap ki writing ka jadu hai bhai. Vah.

hahahah fabulous and this is the cherry on the cake!

Absolutely wonderful, mind blowing and super sensational update ❤️

Again super buildup ovrr the last one.

[spica308]

Thanks all.








What is significance of design of kameez. 
Anita may be inviting Hariya to stick is inside through the straps. 
Perhaps seansean007 can enlighten us 

[spica308]

Thanks all.








What is significance of design of kameez. 
Anita may be inviting Hariya to stick is inside through the straps. 
Perhaps seansean007 can enlighten us 

[seansean007]

the stakes are getting higher by every passing update. anita is mesmerised by the acts of hariya and she keeps getting pleasantly surprised  by him pushing more and more. amazing update

Thanks a lot.

[seansean007]

Absolutely masterclass  Update!!!
Those intricate details....the language consistency....the descriptions........ the increasing boldness of hariya...fingering and now even boob groping...the seduction body part by body part..... so well constructed and realistic
Anita's resistance melting day by day....and her leniency towards hariya....amazing
Was so hoping anita to turn around and generously offer her back view... and so satisfied she did
. hope hariya gets to sniff the sweat aur even lick the sweat from his fingers if not lick from his tongue yet!!....so erotic....
The only aspect i find tough to imagine is hariya doing all this near the veg shop....and vendor is there at times....
But otherwise the scene is ultra erotic

Thank you sean bhai for coming back

Thanks a lot for the detailed analysis and feedback. 
I think I had made it clear that all other vegetable vendors were gone and there was only one vegetable vendor. Also when they were having fun in front of that veg seller I had also mentioned that he sits and keeps the vegetables on a raised concrete platform which is high enough to hide anything below the waist of anyone standing in front of the platform. I have also mentioned that it is usually a little dark at that place. 

As far as them having fun after purchasing the vegetables, I have mentioned that they had vanished from the vegetable vendor's sight. Also Anita keeps looking around every now and then and Hariya also knows the place well enough to understand from where people might come or look at them. 

I have tried to keep the story and events as realistic as possible. If reader's still think that there are any event which seem unrealistic feel free to let me know (but also keep in mind that stories cannot be 100% realistic, slight unrealism has to be there for it to be enjoyable, but it should not be so unrealistic that it doesn't make any sense).So if you feel that the it is unrealistic beyond limit then let me know.

Thanks!!

[seansean007]

Only one of you got it right. After reading these two comments I am now doubtful that everyone got it right. It would have been excellent if everyone got it right.
Thanks!!

Wow... Anita chose the ice cream for Hariya too

Ab Anita ko bhi pink aur white wala ice cream chahiye wah wah.

[Kinkpinkboy]

Whoa, sean you are just magical. It was on 2nd last update where I thought Anita would show her back and hariya will stick his finger in her ass crack from behind. But, hariya went ahead and almost started dry humping her. And now I don't think I am getting a feeling of reading this before because you've altered, removed and made a fresh update. This version is more thrilling than the last version. Thank you for putting efforts for the readers like us. I must say that waiting all those years was a worth.

This last update whoa, I cannot imagine experiencing this, I mean your thought process starts where ours stop. Hariya going beyond and offering her his dick to suck is beyond imagination, hariya now knows that he can proceed with his wishes, because he is not playing with her body only but also with the mind. As Anita has never experienced this, but even when it is her first time, I don't want accept the fact that it's her hidden desire only which is coming out of the case now and it is hariya only who is skilled enough to do that.

Also that last icecream part, Idk about what is your thought process or what Anita might be thinking when hariya described the chocobar to icecream wala and Anita didn't get what exactly hariya is referring to and also Anita choosing Pink and white colour combination of icecream for hariya. Is that her subconscious mind making her do naughty things or she knows and is conscious?

I guess this is what missing in the previous version, Anita's participation, and by doing it you are giving us a pleasure of heaven.

And thank you for leaving upto the readers to imagine Anita Singh and not revealing it. Because for each and every reader out there Anita Singh is different for everyone. But I am curious to know who are you imagine to be Anita when you are writing all of this?

Thank you for this marvelous update and I hope you are doing good

[pro10]

sexy updates.
But I am waiting when hariya will get the blowjob

[The_Ramukaka]

Thanks a lot for the detailed analysis and feedback. 
I think I had made it clear that all other vegetable vendors were gone and there was only one vegetable vendor. Also when they were having fun in front of that veg seller I had also mentioned that he sits and keeps the vegetables on a raised concrete platform which is high enough to hide anything below the waist of anyone standing in front of the platform. I have also mentioned that it is usually a little dark at that place. 

As far as them having fun after purchasing the vegetables, I have mentioned that they had vanished from the vegetable vendor's sight. Also Anita keeps looking around every now and then and Hariya also knows the place well enough to understand from where people might come or look at them. 

I have tried to keep the story and events as realistic as possible. If reader's still think that there are any event which seem unrealistic feel free to let me know (but also keep in mind that stories cannot be 100% realistic, slight unrealism has to be there for it to be enjoyable, but it should not be so unrealistic that it doesn't make any sense).So if you feel that the it is unrealistic beyond limit then let me know.

Thanks!!

Thanks alot for the detailed clarification.
Doubt is cleared and sry as i missed those details out as described.

Story Is very realistic as i ve said myself above....and agreed there has to be some sort of unrealism/Fantasy ... please keep on going.

Thanks