Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[Fuckstar]

Anita out and about in Salwar Kameez

Not sure about the face but this is the juicy figure that comes to my mind when I think about Anita Singh

Iss jaaneman ka naam kya hai Bhai?

[seansean007]

Thanks!!

Super erotic scene.....thanks

Bahut badhiya update, ekdum outstanding aur mast kahaani

[seansean007]

The earlier version stopped at hariya and Anita sex after foreplay at her house. So let's see how this one goes. Hope it's more erotic.

Do update fast please

You haven't found this version to be more erotic till now?

[seansean007]

I must say Sean you are a very smart writer..... Just when you realised that Hariya 's interactions might be getting too regular, you introduced this wedding event.....
Hope this gives us readers a small break from Anita and Hariya's sexcapades and introduces a new character that you might use later but it's foundation is laid in the wedding festivities.

Although in the previous version I didn't like Deepu's character much but he had this one episode where Anita gives him keys to open the store room but puts the keys in her bra and takes them out using his mouth while pressing her ass and later fucks her.....
I don't want to see Deepu but this episode has its own share of fan following......

The writing is great...... Anita massaging Hariya's dick in open is just erotic as hell.....

Thanks for the kind words and feedback. Appreciate it.

[seansean007]

Was expecting some comments around this last update as I believe this was the episode where things become a little more exciting with Anita's participation, especially when 'sabjiwala' was saying that a bigger cumcumber cannot be found and Hariya knowing what he (Hariya) had actually meant when he asked Anita to pick a cucumber which actually resembles the size that she was feeling in her hand and while sabjiwala was speaking and Hariya was ready to answer him back by listening to him (both occupied in conversation), Anita quietly and very honestly searched for the appropriate cucumber by diligently focusing on the task given by Hariya rather than listening to the 'sabjiwala' and pointed that cucumber with her beautiful slender index finger.

As per me this part would definitely have made readers blood rush (I may be wrong) and they would have gotten a hint of Anita's personality.

She also further took hold of the cucumber herself while 'sabjiwala' was busy talking and put that big cucumber in the bag herself. This may be either because she was annoyed that the 'sabjiwala' was unnecessarily comparing two incomparable cucumbers when her pick was something bigger and thicker or may be because she was making sure that sabjiwala doesn't mistakenly put the other smaller cucumber in her bag while talking when she clearly wanted that bigger and thicker cucumber. This should have been another part where the readers blood would have rushed to where they want the blood to be while reading these kinds of stories.

Last but not the least, she actually said that Hariya is expert in "chaatne mein" but she didn't specifically said "dimagh chaatne mein" when she actually spoke in that context and sabjiwala also took her words in that context only. Though she spoke in that context but she might have meant something else. This also shows something about her character which is really important point in the story.

The above three are example of small things where I put in a lot of thoughts to make sure the story remains erotic and fulfils it's purpose. Writings dialogues and situations like these takes time, effort lots of thinking. All I expect is atleast readers should let me know how they felt while reading the update and if there are parts which really made their blood rush but alas that is too much to expect.

I don't care about 'good/ great update' or 'good/great writing'. You don't need to praise me. Just let me know what you as readers are enjoying in a particular update because that's why I post here. If even this is not possible, then what's the point of putting the story on a public platform?

I may appear as a rude or an arrogant person when you read the above paras but I just spoke my mind out (though to be honest I didn't want to do this but was forced to) because I am very straight forward person. Anyway what could be done, somethings never change.

[Wanton]

very very nice update

[creamydelight]

Chaatne wala I thought was Anita referring to Hariya's ice cream licking and hinting at pussy licking because of the way Hariya started licking the ice cream

For me though, the most erotic parts were 1) when she was disrobing in front of the mirror after coming back from the market; 2) and when she widens her eyes to let Hariya know it's time to stop trying to finger her butt; 3) and when Hariya himself puts the elastic of the salwar back in place after taking his hand out, even though it's putting clothes on rather than taking them off, but doing that increased the chances that Anita would let Hariya take her clothes off sometime in the near future.

[Hellybelly]

Was expecting some comments around this last update as I believe this was the episode where things become a little more exciting with Anita's participation, especially when 'sabjiwala' was saying that a bigger cumcumber cannot be found and Hariya knowing what he (Hariya) had actually meant when he asked Anita to pick a cucumber which actually resembles the size that she was feeling in her hand and while sabjiwala was speaking and Hariya was ready to answer him back by listening to him (both occupied in conversation), Anita quietly and very honestly searched for the appropriate cucumber by diligently focusing on the task given by Hariya rather than listening to the 'sabjiwala' and pointed that cucumber with her beautiful slender index finger.

As per me this part would definitely have made readers blood rush (I may be wrong) and they would have gotten a hint of Anita's personality.

She also further took hold of the cucumber herself while 'sabjiwala' was busy talking and put that big cucumber in the bag herself. This may be either because she was annoyed that the 'sabjiwala' was unnecessarily comparing two incomparable cucumbers when her pick was something bigger and thicker or may be because she was making sure that sabjiwala doesn't mistakenly put the other smaller cucumber in her bag while talking when she clearly wanted that bigger and thicker cucumber. This should have been another part where the readers blood would have rushed to where they want the blood to be while reading these kinds of stories.

Last but not the least, she actually said that Hariya is expert in "chaatne mein" but she didn't specifically said "dimagh chaatne mein" when she actually spoke in that context and sabjiwala also took her words in that context only. Though she spoke in that context but she might have meant something else. This also shows something about her character which is really important point in the story.

The above three are example of small things where I put in a lot of thoughts to make sure the story remains erotic and fulfils it's purpose. Writings dialogues and situations like these takes time, effort lots of thinking. All I expect is atleast readers should let me know how they felt while reading the update and if there are parts which really made their blood rush but alas that is too much to expect.

I don't care about 'good/ great update' or 'good/great writing'. You don't need to praise me. Just let me know what you as readers are enjoying in a particular update because that's why I post here. If even this is not possible, then what's the point of putting the story on a public platform?

I may appear as a rude or an arrogant person when you read the above paras but I just spoke my mind out (though to be honest I didn't want to do this but was forced to) because I am very straight forward person. Anyway what could be done, somethings never change.

Most blood rush part was when she realised his finger on her asshole and said he is expert in licking....she herself picked the word tarbooz which was also very erotic...she zipped him in last and shagged him throughout is all way erotic and takes a lot of effort to writer to creat these scenes...new version is good at erotica as we do not encountered real action till, older was less in interaction and more in action side, so the eroticism was not as saturated in older....but the new is best in all aspects.... thanks

[Kinkpinkboy]

Apologies for being late to the party. This version sean is way more thrilling and it creates goosebumps everytime I read. Tbh I read that icecream parts thrice till now and just unable to get over it simply because of the way you have described the scene where Anita is not talking much but doing action by sucking on that icecream and ahhh man that last scene where when after finishing icecream she puts all the stick into her mouth and takes it out like just she is sucking dick(I am awaiting for this moment very badly). And thank you for telling us how Anita is feeling, what she is thinking after what hariya is doing to her. Hariya is not just playing with the body of most beautiful woman he has ever seen but he is quite a master in playing with her mind. This matters especially when Anita hadn't been involved with any illicit or to say had any bf which is common for the urban people, before marriage. Like she has done nothing? And now she is experiencing all of these, especially when she is not satisfied sexually with her husband, she may not show this but we all know how she is encouraging hariya and now is participating with him fully. She has become rebellious and have started taking stand for herself when all these years she is being neglected or maybe she has neglected what pleasure she is mad for. Maybe Anita has a hidden kink of low class people from starting and that can be one of the reasons of she not having any relationship before marriage. Hariya is the one who has become successful to take out her kink and let Anita explore and experience. I like how hariya is still respectful towards her this is too sexy to handle because somewhere we all enjoy this that how by reading the conversation of low class men with upper class women gives us extra kind while reading sexual content. Thank you for this efforts.


And now this last update, whoa i cannot imagine that someone can write in so much erotic way that we are literally shagging, and yes sean you are correct that we as a reader are failing to acknowledge the gems like you as much as we acknowledge porns these days. Reading stories is way more thrilling and experiencing than porn. And let alone watching build up like this. What you are doing is, creating a history. You are by far one of the best I have come across.

Anita is becoming bolder, I have never imagined this, she initiated the word "tarbuz" and no I am nowhere trying to think that Anita doesn't know what she is doing. She is conscious and she knows what exactly she is doing. You have repeatedly told that how she is impressed by hariya's boldness and his dabang andaaz. I guess she is becoming like a hariya little bit and hariya has influenced her to become what she is becoming. I like how she is not being shy of shagging hariya in the market though still after looking around and taking cognizance of the surrounding. And why all of these things important? Because it sets the narrative for the future development of the story. It sets the base of how Anita will open more and will take initiative and enjoy what she hasn't all these years. I want too see all of the Anita's holes being ripped apart. Fucked ruthlessly, face slapped, face fucked and she participating in all of these. I am 100% sure Anita craves for this and she has all these kinks, it is only the matter of time and the people who will be successful bringing out all of these qualities.

Thank you very much sean for all these marvelous updates, i am grateful personally.

[creamydelight]

I don't think she's unsatisfied or anything like that. She has that attitude that there's no problem in enjoying anything and everything that gives excitement and pleasure as long as it's not hurting anyone and more importantly as long as no one finds out about it

It's like, she knows that society considers cheating wrong but she doesn't, so all she needs to do is ensure no one knows about it, and as far as she is concerned she doesn't consider it cheating or simply doesn't care about it as long as she's having fun and nobody finds out

[kanikaakochr]

Awesome

[creamydelight]

I'm imagining if in this groping and stroking, one of them makes the other climax in front of the sabji wala. Who could it be? Maybe not a full orgasm, maybe just a mini orgasm, a shudder... how would he/she control and cover up...

[Kamal54]

You haven't found this version to be more erotic till now?

Nothing can be more erotic than this version. Your style of building up the erotic  situation is unparalleled.

[Monster Dick]

Ab update bandh hogaya...

[creamydelight]

Ab update bandh hogaya...

Effectively Roz hi aa raha tha update abhi tak... Kabhi kabhi ek se zaada bhi.... writer ki apni life bhi hai na

[creamydelight]

[3XXX]

waiting

[Curiousbull]

This was a more erotic version for sure and just concentrated on Hariya so it made the story very erotic.

But you have stopped just where or before the earlier one stopped

Vat c is also active here you two can collaborate to take it further i.e., if you are facing a writers block. Just saying

Eagerly waiting for further erotic updates.

[Hellybelly]

Maybe he is taking some time to rest or retreat...hope for an update...

[dragonslair]

The conversation between Hariya, anita and the vegetable seller was so naughty. I think the vegetable seller will soon be onto these two and their antics. Hariya is progressing nicely and patiently