25-04-2023, 03:36 PM
raat ko jald de dena bro,,, EID ka maza nahi aa raha hai,,, update de kar kuch maza lene do,, aur pic bhi dalna
(25-04-2023, 08:33 PM)Baban Wrote:Uffffff achanak Tarun ji ki bahut yaad ane lagi Rebecca ko. Khaas karkey unke taango ke beech ke us hisse ko sochti Hui uttejit ho uthi zamindar bahurani. Lekin deemag me agar pati ka lund ghoom raha tha toh aankhon ke samney ek aur hi lund majud tha. Ek bahut hi badsoorat vikari ka. Rebecca soch toh rahi thi zamindar ghar se belong karta hua ek educated gentleman ke private part ko par ghoor rahi thi ek fatey huye lungi ke under tamboo bana hua dandey ko. Bar bar usey yaad aa raha tha kaise pati ke taango ke beech baithkey woh unke us sexy part ko muh me lekar chusti hai lekin neeli ankhein tika hua tha lungi ke under apne aap hilta hua woh gupt chis pe. Yeh kya ho raha pata nahi usko... Bus brain kuch aur deekha raha tya aur aankhe kuch aur dekhne pe majboor ho raha tha.
(26-04-2023, 12:07 AM)masud93 Wrote: accha hai,, par very small,, kahani bhi aage nahi badha,,,
(26-04-2023, 12:30 PM)Avishek Wrote: Uffff Gazab ka kamukh update diya apney yeh toh. Ek taraf nature ka sundar roop, uske upar bahurani ka akho dekha woh sab scenes. Jis tarah se aap uske mental stuation ko describe kar rahe ho na uffff! Deemag me Tarun ka lund aur aankhon ke samney vikari ka! Yeh wala part shandar laga. yr): clp);
(26-04-2023, 07:12 PM)Papai Wrote: This particular part man ufff Fck!!
Mental tussle ko jis tarikey se present kar rahe ho aap Dada kya hi bolu. Aapke har ek story me yeh baat maine notice ki hai. Female character ka mentally transformed hona. The way you design that special part uffffff![]()
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(26-04-2023, 12:02 PM)Mande Wrote: Excellent!! It's not about only sex but the description of nature, rural beauty & culture, the mental tussle of Rebecca and so on. You really a good writer and need to try your hand for writing novels in future about adultery. You have the x factor of eroticism and you know how subtly that need to be mixed with your narration...well done brother!! Keep going and entertain us through your writing...to reach the ultimate goal of physical affair building the plot is necessary and your are doing absolutely right...thank you once again for taking out time and posting your creation...great job and will look forward to more episodes that is the seed you have ploughed should now grow bigger and help Rebecca to taste the rustic & desi sex......thank you...SAATHAY ACHI BHAI...
(27-04-2023, 03:24 PM)Baban Wrote:এখন শুধু এটার অপেক্ষায়Bahut Dhanyabad dost♥️
Aapka Analysis gazab ka hota hai harvar ! Ek ek point ko jis tarah samajhke comment kartey ho. Aap jaise pathak ke liye likhne me bhi sukh milta.
Is story ka chapter 1 agley update ke sath khatam ho jayega. Fir part 2 kab lekar aa paunga pata nahi. Lekin aapko bolunga... Jab aap mental tussle ko padhna pasand kartey ho toh meri bengali story - Nosto sukh(নষ্ট সুখ) zarur padhna. Bahut detail milega. Aur apna comment dena mat bhoolna. Even aap meri hindi story Pervert bhi padh sakte ho. Aapke comments ka intezar rehega♥️
(27-04-2023, 03:24 PM)Baban Wrote:Bahut Dhanyabad dost♥️
Aapka Analysis gazab ka hota hai harvar ! Ek ek point ko jis tarah samajhke comment kartey ho. Aap jaise pathak ke liye likhne me bhi sukh milta.
Is story ka chapter 1 agley update ke sath khatam ho jayega. Fir part 2 kab lekar aa paunga pata nahi. Lekin aapko bolunga... Jab aap mental tussle ko padhna pasand kartey ho toh meri bengali story - Nosto sukh(নষ্ট সুখ) zarur padhna. Bahut detail milega. Aur apna comment dena mat bhoolna. Even aap meri hindi story Pervert bhi padh sakte ho. Aapke comments ka intezar rehega♥️