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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
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(23-04-2023, 04:36 PM)Hellybelly Wrote: Changes are good....as story is gradually updating we can see that this version is way better

Thanks a lot. Would definitely need to hear from other readers as well how well the changes have been so far. Thanks again.
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The changes are subtle enough to not stick out and spoil the memory of the original readings, at the same time, reading the story is a lot easier this time, with visible structure, etc.

I'm having a great time reading it all over again from the beginning. Looking forward to things heating up further.

I particularly liked reading 2 small bits very much. One where Anita covers her nose to avoid the smell but then eventually wilfully smells the guy next to her in the auto. There's just something primal and erotic about a prim and proper hot upper class lady being exposed to or liking dirty smelly low class men. The other was where she delays smoothening her saari over her ass, sorry, gaand, when she notices a man approaching her direction and anticipates an ass grab/squeeze, even though it doesn't eventually materialize. So practical and pragmatic of our heroine, the way she takes these small episodes in her stride. She knows the effect she has on men, and she knows what will happen to her in crowded spaces, so rather than getting tensed or mortified, she acknowledges it as unavoidable and isn't perturbed by it. If anything, she gets a thrill from it. She looks around to ensure that no one is looking. That's what is more important to her, that a needless scene isn't created in public. If something is gonna happen, it better happen unnoticed. I just love such women.
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UPDATE 14

Do din baad Anita ko phir market jaana tha. Uss din bhi woh ek chhota blouse aur pardarshi saree pehni thi.Blouse ke peechhe humesha ki tarah kewal do inch ki kapde ki patti thi jo uski blouse ko uski gori badan par bandhe rakhi thi.Woh saree ko naabhi ke 3 inch neeche bandhi thi aur saath hi naabhi ke bagal se hote hue uski kandhe par jaa rahi thi jiske kaaran uski naabhi aur pet ka aadha hissa poori nangi thi.

Anita saree mein kaid apni badi gaddedar gaand ko matkati hui auto stand pahunchi to use dekhkar humesha ki tarah kuchh jawan autowale khush ho gaye.Sab use dekhkar muskurane lage to Anita bhi unhe dekhkar muskura di.Anita ko saree mein dekhkar sabhi drivers ke lund mein hulchul hone lagi magar woh auto drivers ke lund mein aur zyada hulchul tab huyee jab un logo ko Anita ki naabhi se latki uski belly ring ko dikha.

Anita iss shaher mein aane ke baad pehli baar belly ring Sunday ko Raj ke saath restaurant mein jaane ke waqt pehni thi aur aaj pehli baar wo iss tarah bazaar jaate waqt pehni thi to drivers pehli baar Anita ka yeh roop dekh rahe the jo use aur kamuk bana rahi thi.Sabhi drivers ka dil zoro se dhadakne laga aur unke lund betaab hone lage aaj Anita ka yeh naya roop dekhkar.

Woh belly ring lagbhag 2 inch lamba tha aur Anita ki naabhi se lekar uski saree se ek inch upar tak latki huyee thi aur wo belly ring chamak rahi thi dhoop mein.Sabhi ki nazre Anita ki nabhi par tik gayee.Anita unhe iss tarah khud ki naabhi ko ghurte dekhkar samajh gayee ki sab uski naabhi se latki huyi belly button ring ko hi dekh rahe the magar iske bawjood bhi wo apni naabhi saree se dhakne ki koshish nahin ki aur chup chaap khadi rahi waise hi.

Ek buzurg auto driver yeh sab kuchh dekh kar khud se hi dheere se bola,"Aa gayee besharam aurat apni jism ki numaish karne. Iske ander to sharam naam ki cheez hi nahin hai. Kaise kapde pehenti hai,koi itna chhota blouse pehenta hai kya?Woh bhi pardarshi saree mein. Hey bhagwaan yeh aurat to yeh sab jawaan mardon ko bigaad kar rahegi. Aaj to isne besharmi ki hadd paar kar di. Kaise naabhi mein wo gehna pehni hai. Ameer ghar ki aurat hai to jo mann mein aaye thode hi pehen kar ghoom sakti hai. Yeh naabhi mein latke jewar se yeh ameer ghar ki aurat kam aur koi randi zyada lag rahi hai. Bhagwan bachaye iss chhote shaher ke mardon ko iss besharam aurat se. Randi kahin ki".

Anita un jawaan drivers ko kuchh pal yun hi apni naabhi ko ghurte dekhi aur phir normal expression se poochhi,"Bhaiya aaj kaun si auto jayegi?".

Anita ki patli meethi awaaz sunnkar sabhi drivers hosh mein aaye magar isse pehle ki koi kuchh keh pata ek lagbhag 35 saal ka auto driver Anita ko peechhe se bola,"Memsaahab meri auto jayegi".

Anita use dekhkar muskurai aur apni gaand matkati huyi uske auto ki taraf chal di. Uske chalne se sabhi drivers Anita ki matakti gaand ko dekhne lage aur uske auto mein baithne tak dekhte rahe.Sab auto drivers uss 35 saal ke driver par mann hi mann gussa ho rahe the aur use mann mein gaaliyan de rahe the.Auto mein baaki passengers bhi baith gaye aur auto chalne lagi.

Thodi door chalne par Anita ko chhorkar baki sabhi passengers utar gaye. Kuchh door chalne par Anita aaine mein dekhi to paayi ki wo 35 saal ka driver uski naabhi ko hi dekh raha tha.Wo kabhi sadak par to kabhi Anita ki kaamuk naabhi ko dekhta.Anita kuchh pal ke liye use apni naabhi ko dekhte huye dekhi phir bina kuchh bole waapas baahar dekhne lagi.Aese hi Anita use kabhi kabhi apni naabhi par dekhte hue paati magar kuchh bolti nahin aur aakhirkaar wo market pahunch gayee.

Anita market mein ghusne se pehle thoda ruk kar idhar udhar dekhi aur phir aage badh gayee. Woh dekhi ki uss din kam sabji wale aaye the bazaar mein aur kuchh gine chune sabji ki dukaano par kafi bheed tha. Yahaan tak ki Anita jis sabji wale se sabji leti thi wo bhi nahin aaya tha.Anita sabji mandi ke theek baahar khadi uss sabji wale ke dukaan ke taraf dekhne ke baad pareshani se idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

Anita mann hi mann sochne lagi,"Hey bhagwan aaj ek to itni bheed hai aur yeh sabji wale bhaiya bhi nahin aaye. Jabse main yahaan aayee hoon kewal unse hi sabji leti hoon. Baaki sabji wale to mujhe jaante bhi nahin hain aur itni bheed mein mujhe kharab sabji na de de dusra sabji wala"

Anita itna sochne ke baad chehre par pareshani ka bhao laakar apni dayi haath ki nakhun ko dant mein ek pal ke liye daba kar aage sochi,"Kya karun?kis sabji wale ke paas jaaun? Sabhi jagah to bahot bheed hai".

Anita pareshan dikhte hue soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi use apni gaand par ek haath mehsus hua aur agle pal hi ek jaana pehchana awaaz sunai diya,"kaisi hain aap memsaheb?".

Anita ghoom kar dekhi to wahi gutkha wale ko khade paayi jo gutkha chabate hue muskura raha tha aur Anita ko apne taraf dekhte hi uski gaand ko dheere se daba diya.Anita bhi use dekhkar muskura di aur jab woh use dekhkar muskura rahi thi to woh aadmi uski gaand daba diya.

Uske dwara gaand dabaye jaane par Anita koi pratikriya nahi di aur muskurati hui usse boli,"are aap?".

Woh gutkha khata aadmi Anita ki aankhon mein dekhte hue hi uski gaand dubara daba diya aur paas mein hi gutkha thook kar apna dusra haath se munh ponchhte hue bola,"Jee memsaheb hum. Kaa baat hai aap thoda pareshaan lag rahi hain?".

Anita jo humesha saaf suthri rehti thi wo uss aadmi ko itne gande tareeke se apne haathon se apne honthon par lage gutkha ko saaf karte dekhne par bhi ghinn mehsus nahin ki aur chup chaap waise hi khadi rahi,uske haath ko apni gaand par mehsus karte hue.

Anita uska baat sunte hue muskura kar boli,"Nahin bas aese hi bahot bheed hai na aur main jis sabji wale se sabjiyaan leti hoon woh bhi nahin aaye hain to bas samajh nahin aa raha tha ki kahan se sabji lun".

Woh gutkha wala aadmi Anita ki gaand se upar haath le jaakar Anita ki nangi kamar par rakhkar uski kamar ko mehsus karte hue bola,"To itni si baat se humaari memsaheb ghabra gayee aur wo bhi humare rehte hue. Memsahab humare rehte hue agar aapko kisi cheez ki pareshani huyi to hum aapko apna shakal nahin dikhayenge,maa kasam".

Yeh kehte hue usne Anita ki kamar par achhe se haath ko ragad kar uski kamar ko pakad liya. Anita ko uski haath apni kamar par phirane se koi pareshani nahin ho rahi thi balki wo uski sadak chaap wali dialogue par muskura di aur halke se khilkhilate hue boli,"hehehe yeh kya baat huyee?Aap mere liye itna kyun karenge. Aapko bhi to kaam wagaira hai. Aap thodi bahot madad kar dete hain wahi bahot hai".

Wo aadmi Anita ki kamar se haath neeche sadka kar uski gaand ki bayee bhaag ko achhe se haath mein jitna aa sakta tha utna pakad kar dabate hue bola,"Are kyun nahin karenge memsaheb? Aap iss shaher mein nayee hain aur iss sheher ka ek achha naagrik hone ke kaaran humara farz banta hai aapki madad karna" aur yeh kehte hue woh Anita ki badi gaand ki dusri bhaag ko bhi achhe se daboch diya magar Anita bura maanne ke bajaye muskurati hue boli,"Theek hai theek hai. Jab madad karne ka aapne mann bana hi liya hai to ab aap meri madad bhi karenge ya sirf khade hokar bas baatein hi banayenge".

Yeh sunnkar wo aadmi bola,"Are haan memsaheb boliye na kya madad karoon aapki?".

Anita ko uska bebaaq aur baatein banane wala andaaz entertaining lagne laga tha. Aur jis tarah se woh achha nagrik hone ka baat kiya tha Anita ko woh samajhdaar lag raha tha. Anita ke liye yeh mayne nahin rakh raha tha ki woh uski gaand daba raha tha aur kamar sehla raha tha. Woh to aur bhi mard chupke se kar dete the magar jis tareeqe se woh sahi waqt par aa gaya tha aur uski madad karne ka baat kar raha tha ek achhe nagrik hone ke kaaran Anita ko yeh baat achhi aur samajhdari wali baat lagi.

Anita uska baat sunnkar halka muskurati huyi aaspaas ke taraf nazar ghumakar boli," Ab aap to dekh hi rahe hain main jisse sabji leti hoon wo sabji wale bhaiya nahin aayen hain. Baaki dukano par itni bheed hai ki mujhe samajh nahin aa raha ki kisse sabji lun. To mujhe bataiye ki main kahan se sabji lun.".

Wo aadmi ab Anita ki kamar par haath laate hue bola,"Bas itni si baat? Chaliye memsaahab hum aapko ek achhe dukaan par le chalta hoon. Woh dukan ek kone mein hai jahaan thoda roshni kam rahti hai isliye wahan bheed kam rehti hai"

Anita yeh sunnkar thodi sochti huyi boli,"To kam roshni mein to woh sadi huyi sabjiyaan na taul de".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaheb humre rehte hue aapko wo kharab sabji de nahin sakta. Hum dekhte rahunga".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati hui boli,"Thank you so much. Sach mein aap meri madad karne ke liye tayyat rehte hain magar abhi mujhe raasta bata dijiye main khud chali jaungi. Main nahin chahti ki meri madad karne ke chakkar mein aap kaam ke liye late ho jaye aur aapko maalik se daant pare".

Wo aadmi yeh sunnkar gutkha thook kar phir se apna munh gande tareeqa se ponchh kar bola,"Are memsaahab aap uski chinta mat kijiye. Zyada se zyada humein naukri se nikaal dega saala aur kya. Hum ghareeb logo ke liye naukri paise se zyada mayne insaano ki madad karna rakhta hai aur hum jab bol diya hoon to apna jabaan se muqar nahin sakta. Aap humre saath sabji dukan par chaliye aur aapko achha sabji mile ee ka khyaal hum rakhunga".

Anita uska baat sunnkar muskura di aur thodi aascharyata se apni sir hilati huyi boli," Aap bhi na. Theek hai raasta aapko pata hai to aap chaliye aage aage".

Wo aadmi yeh sunkar Anita ki kamar ko halke se dabochte hue bola,"are memsaahab aap chaliye na aage aage. Hum aapko raasta dikhaate hue le chalunga".Yeh sunkar Anita muskurati hui sir hilai aur "theek hai chaliye" bolkar aage chalne lagi aur bazaar mein ghus gayi.

Anita aage aage chal rahi thi uss bheed mein aur wo aadmi uski kamar par haath rakhe peechhe peechhe chal raha tha.Thoda aage chalne par achanak se Anita ko apni gaand par kuchh mehsus hua jo ki wo aadmi ka haath to bilkul bhi nahin tha.

Anita samajh gayi ki wo kya hai.Jaise hi Anita ko woh cheez apni gaand par mehsus huyi wo uss aadmi ki awaaz suni,"Abe kaun dhakka de raha hai be,araam se nahin chal sakta?".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskura di hai aur apna sir halke se hila di uski baat par ki kaise woh bebaaq tareeqe se dhakka dene par bol raha tha.Woh aadmi ka wo cheez ab Anita ki gaand se sati huyee hi thi peechhe nahin ho rahi thi.

Thoda aage chalkar Anita ko peechhe se dhakka laga uss aadmi ke badan se aur uski gaand par wo cheez aur saaf saaf mehsus huyee. Yehi nahin dhakke ke kaaran uss aadmi ka haath Anita ki kamar se sadak kar uski pet par chali gayee.Woh aadmi phir gusse se bola,"Abe dikhai nahin deta itni bheed mein dhakka de raha hai. Araam se chal".

Agle pal Anita ko wo aadmi ka awaaz phir sunai diya magar iss baar thoda dheere tha,"Memsaahab aap theek hain to? Sab araam se nahin chal sakte. Dhakka dhukki karna zaroori hai inko".

Yeh sunnkar Anita jawaab mein boli,"Haan main theek hoon. Kya kar sakte hain bheed hi itni hai ki dhakka dhukki ho hi jaati hai. Aese dukaan aur kitni door hai?".

Woh aadmi apna hath sadka kar Anita ki naabhi ke taraf le gaya aur bola,"Bas memsaahab thodi door aur" aur yeh bolkar woh uski naabhi ke pass ungli le gaya aur ungli wahan pahunchne par thoda achambhit ho gaya. Iske saath hi uska lund khada hone laga.

Anita ko apni gand par aur kuchh nahin itni der se woh aadmi ka lund hi mehsus ho raha tha aur ab jab uss aadmi ka lund ko khada hone laga to ise mehsus kar Anita ki saans bhi thodi tez hone lagi.

Jaise hi wo aadmi apni ungli Anita ki naabhi ke taraf le gaya uska ungli Anita ki belly button ring se takraya aur wo samajh gaya ki Anitaapni naabhi mein kya pehna hai.Zahir si baat hai ki koi bhi aurat jab apni naabhi mein wo ring pehenti hai to aur kaamuk lagti hai aur yehi kaaran tha ki yeh samajhte hi uss aadmi ka lund khada hone laga.

Woh aadmi apne ungli ko Anita ki naabhi se latki huyi belly button ring ke neeche se le jaate hue uski naabhi mein ghusa diya aur usme ungli phirane ke baad uss latke huye jewar ko apni ungli par lete hue Anita ke kaan mein dheere se bola,"Memsaahab yeh kya hai?".

Anita apni saans ko durust karti huye bejhijhak boli,"Woh belly button ring hai,aurton ki navel mein pehnne wali jewar".

Anita ab uss aadmi ka khada hota lund apni gaand par mehsus karti huyi aage chalti rahi.Woh admi phir poochha,"Memsaahab yeh jewar to hum kisi aurat ko aaj tak pehente nahin dekha hoon,sirf tv par hi dekha hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar chalti huyi boli,"Woh actually sabhi aurtein nahin pehenti yeh isliye aapne kabhi nahin dekha hoga. Main bhi kabhi kabhi hi pehenti hoon".

Wo aadmi ab Anita ki belly button ring se khelne laga aur bola,"Memsaahab hum yeh abhi dekha to nahin hoon magar hum aapko bol sakta hoon yeh pehen kar aap aur khoobsurat lag rahi hogi samne se dekhne par".

Anita yeh sunnkar bas muskura di aur isi tarah wo aadmi uski ring se khelte hue aur peechhe se apna khada lund uski gaand par chubhate hue Anita ko wo sabji dukaan par le gaya.
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गजब लेखनी
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(23-04-2023, 08:15 PM)creamydelight Wrote: The changes are subtle enough to not stick out and spoil the memory of the original readings, at the same time, reading the story is a lot easier this time, with visible structure, etc.

I'm having a great time reading it all over again from the beginning. Looking forward to things heating up further.

I particularly liked reading 2 small bits very much. One where Anita covers her nose to avoid the smell but then eventually wilfully smells the guy next to her in the auto. There's just something primal and erotic about a prim and proper hot upper class lady being exposed to or liking dirty smelly low class men. The other was where she delays smoothening her saari over her ass, sorry, gaand, when she notices a man approaching her direction and anticipates an ass grab/squeeze, even though it doesn't eventually materialize. So practical and pragmatic of our heroine, the way she takes these small episodes in her stride. She knows the effect she has on men, and she knows what will happen to her in crowded spaces, so rather than getting tensed or mortified, she acknowledges it as unavoidable and isn't perturbed by it. If anything, she gets a thrill from it. She looks around to ensure that no one is looking. That's what is more important to her, that a needless scene isn't created in public. If something is gonna happen, it better happen unnoticed. I just love such women.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. There were two objectives behind re-writing this story instead of continuing from where I had left it. 
1. Make the readability better. 
2. Make it more erotic by making the necessary changes without deviating from the core story and character of the lead. 

I am glad that I have been able to meet both these objectives as per your understanding. I am also glad that atleast one reader was able to notice the difference in eroticism one small description can make (Anita delaying to smoothen her saree). 

Thanks a lot.
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Jo Anita jaisi kaamuk aurat ki saansein tez hone par majboor kar de, uski himmat dekh kar Anita ki choot bhi phadak rahi hogi
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Mast story hai .
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Ashadaran kahaani! Please let Anita flirt ? many but let only one low class ugly servant to be successful to seduce and fuck Anita.
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UPDATE 15

Uss dukan par pahunch kar woh admi side mein paan thuka aur apna munh ponchh kar sabji wale se bola,"Chalo bhai humaari memsaahab ko taaza taaza sabji do aur achhe bhao lagana".

Yeh bolkar woh aadmi Anita ko ek nazar dekha. Anita uss aadmi ke taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur use gutkha thuk kar munh ponchh kar sabji wale ko sabji dene ke liye bolte hue dekh aur sunn rahi thi.

Woh aadmi Anita ko dekhkar uski gaand dabaya aur phir sabji wala se bola,"Aur sunn. Sada sabji ghalti se bhi na dena".

Anita uss aadmi ke taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur use aesa bolte sunn use achha laga ki kaise woh sabji wale ko pehle hi warn kar raha tha sada sabji nahin dene ke liye. Anita yeh sab sunti huyi chup chap khadi thi.

Uss dukaan par bas ek budhi aurat thi jise sabji wala sabji de raha tha.Woh Anita ko aaj pehli baar dekh raha tha aur use dekhte hi uska dil dhadak gaya.Itni khoobsurat aurat uske sabji ke dukaan mein kabhi nahin aayee thi.

Wo ek pal Anita ko dekha aur phir uska nazar wo gutkha wala aadmi par pada jo kisi dabang ki tarah use dekh raha tha maano keh raha ho ki Anita ko aese na dekhe.

Woh apna nazar ghooma kar bola,"Ek minute bhai chachi ko sabji de doon phir memsaheb ko dunga".

Wo gutkha wala aadmi yeh sunnkar thoda gusse mein bola,"Abe memsaheb ko sirf hum dunga. Tu sirf sabji taul" aur yeh bolkar woh Anita ki gaand daba diya. Anita uska baat sunnkar uske taraf dekhi to woh aadmi use dekhkar muskura diya. Anita ek pal ke liye soch mein pad gayi ki woh aesa kyun bola magar phir uska baat banane ka aadat ko jaanti huyi woh bhi muskura di ki zarur woh baat bana raha hoga.

Sabji wala bhi ek pal uss aadmi ko dekha aur kuchh bolne ka soch hi raha tha ki woh aadmi usko dekhkar bola,"Ab munh kya dekh raha hai? Jaldi kar, memsaheb ke paas pura din yahan khada rehne ka time nahin hai. Aur budhi amma bhi intezaar kar rahi hai. Jaldi sabji taul"

Woh sabji wala uss aadmi ka yeh bebaaq andaaz aur baat sunnkar ghabrakar bola,"Haan bhai jaldi kar raha hoon" aur yeh bolkar apne kaam mein lag gaya.

Anita yeh sunnkar uss aadmi ke taraf dekhi to woh muskura diya to Anita bhi uske andaaz ko dekhkar muskura kar aascharyata se sir hila di. Woh aadmi yeh dekhkar Anita ke pure side mein uske aue nazdeek khada ho gaya aur halke sw uski gaand daba diya. Anita gaand dabaye jaane par bina sharam ke ek pal use dekhi aur phir saamne sabji wale ko dekhne lagi.

wo sabji wale ke saamne Anita ke peechhe sat kar khada hona nahin chahta tha kyunki wahaan bheed kam thi aur Anita ke dusre side bagal mein woh budhi aurat khadi thi. Anita aur uss aadmi ke ek feet peechhe deewar thi jiske kaaran Anita ki gaand kisi ko dikh nahin sakti thi upar se wahaan roshni bhi kam thi. Iske kaaran woh budhi aurat bhi Uss aadmi ka haath Anita ki gaand par dekh nahin sakti thi.

Anita ko kuchh mehsus hua to woh dayi taraf ghumkar Uss budhi aurat ke taraf dekhi jo use hi ghur rahi thi. Anita use aese ghurte dekh jab dono ki nazre mili to Anita muskura di. Woh budhi aurat Anita ko ajeeb nazar se dekhi aur bina muskuraye waise hi ajeeb nazar se uski cleavage aur phir neeche nangi pet par dekhkar dheere se boli,"Hey bhagwaan kya zamana aa gaya hai".

Anita Uss budhi aurat ko dekh hi rahi thi sabji wala bola,"Kaa hua chachi kauno baat hai kaa?"

Woh budhi aurat sabjiwale ko dekhkar boli,"Nahin kuchh nahin. Jaldi sabji do. Main yahan se jaun".

Sabjiwala yeh sunnkar sabji uthaye hue bola,"Jee chachi. Jaldi hi kar raha hoon".

Anita sabjiwala ka baat sunnkar uske taraf dekhne lagi ki tabhi woh gutkha khata aadmi Anita ki gaand ki bayee phank par panjaa rakha aur use upar neeche karke hilane laga. Anita ki gaand ki wo naram mulayam hissa upar neeche hilne lagi saree ke ander hi.

Apni gaand ki hilta mehsus kar Anita ki saans phir tez ho gayee aur woh ek nazar chupke se Uss aurat ke taraf dekhi jo sabjiwale ke taraf dekh rahi thi to woh bhi uss gutkhe wale aadmi ke taraf dekhe aur kuchh bole bina bas chup chap sabji wale ko sabji taulta dekhne lagi.

Woh aadmi Anita ki gaand hilate hue ek nazar uski gaand par daalkar waapas Anita ko dekhte hue poochha,"Memsahab aapko yeh shaher kaisa lag raha hai?".

Anita yeh sunn uski taraf dekhi to woh aadmi uski gaand hilate hue muskura diya to Anita bhi muskurati hui boli,"Haan achha hi hai. Yahaan thodi shaanti hai,bazaar ko chhorkar hehehe. Bazaar mein bahot bheed aur shor sharaba rehti hai".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar muskurata hai aur Anita ki gaand ko phir se upar neeche karke use hilate hue bola,"Ka kariyega memsaahab iss shaher ke aas paas ke gaon ke log bhi yahin bazaar karne aate hain isliye bheed rehti hai".

Anita uska baat par muskura di aur teerchi nazar se uske haath ko apni gaand se khelte dekhkar phir dusri taraf teerchhi nazar se uss budhi aurat ko dekhi jo chupchap sabji ko taulta dekh rahi thi.

Anita teerchi nazar se uss budhi aurat ko dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi wo aadmi aage bola,"Lekin bheed hone ke bawjud jabse aap aayin hai aapko sabji lene mein kabhi pareshani nahin hua hoga? Ee hum bol sakat hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar muskura di to woh aadmi bhi muskurate hue uski gaand daba diya. Anita yeh mehsus kar waapas uss budhi aurat ke taraf dekhi to woh use phir se ajeeb nazar se dekhne lagi. Anita ko yeh thoda ajeeb lag raha tha aur samajh nahin aa raha tha ki woh aesa kyun kar rahi thi. Woh chupke se ek nazar apni gaand ke taraf dekhi jo thoda andhere mein tha aur use yaqeen tha ki uski gaand par uss aadmi ka haath uss aurat ko nahin dikhega.

Anita uss aurat ko dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi dono ki nazar phir mili to woh aurat munh phulai huyi waapas sabji wale ko dekhne lagi.

Theek usi waqt woh aadmi Anita ki gaand par tight se lipti saree ko thoda ander karke uss ki gaand ki daraar mein ungli ghusane ki koshish karne laga magar saree tight hone ke kaaran zyada ghusa nahin paaya.

Anita yeh mehsus karte hi ghoom kar use dekhi to wo thoda ghabra gaya.Use laga ki usne gaand ki daraar mein ungli ghusana kuchh zyada hi kar diya, khaskar tab jab bagal mein ek aurat khadi thi.

Wo thoda ghabrate hue bola,"Koi pareshani hai kya memsaahab. Hum rahu ya jaoon? Theek hai memsaahab hum chalta hoon".

Wo aadmi Anita ki gaand se haath hata kar jaane hi wala tha ki Anita boli,"Aapko late ho rahi hai kya?Agar late ho rahi hai to chale jaiye".

Wo aadmi yeh sunnkar ruk gaya aur paas mein gutkha thuk kar waise hi gande andaaz mein munh ponchhkar dubara Anita ki gaand par haath rakhkar bola," Are nahin memsahab humka late nahin ho raha hai. Humka laga ki hum to aapko dukaan dikha diya hoon aur ab shayad aapko humra rehne se pareshani ho rahi hai".

Yeh baat sunkar isse pehle ki Anita kuchh bolti,wo sabji wala bol parta hai,"Are bhai itna bakbak karoge to memsaahab ko pareshani to hogi hi".

Wo gutkha wala aadmi Anita ki gaand par haath rakhe hue use dabakar bola,"Abe tujhe beech mein bolne ke liye kisne kaha hai. Memsaahab ko pareshani hogi to khud bolegi aur bhool mat memsaahab ko yahaan tere dukan par hum laaya hoon warna itna kona mein tera dukaan hai ki makkhi bhi nahin aata jaldi".

Yeh sunnkar Anita bol parti hai,"are are aap log lad kyun rahe ho?" aur phir wo sabji wale ko dekhkar boli,"Bhaiya aap apna kaam kijiye. Main inko jaanti hoon mujhe inse koi pareshani nahin. Aap please chup chap jaldi jaldi sabji tauliye mujhe late ho raha hai".

Yeh sunnkar woh budhi aurat mann hi mann boli,"Hun besharm aurat kahin ki. Na jaane kitne mardon ko jaanti hogi".

Woh budhi aurat yeh soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi Anita gutkhe wale aadmi ko dekhkar boli," Mujhe koi pareshaani nahin hain aapse. Main to bas aap se yeh poochhna chah rahi thi ki aaj itne kam sabji wale kyun aaye hain?".

Woh aadmi yeh sunkar Anita ke thode aur kareeb ho gaya aur Anita ke haath se apna pant ke ander kaid lund ko sata diya aur phir uski gaand ke beech daraar mein ungli ghusane ki koshish karte hue bola,"are memsahab yeh sabji wale gaon ki taraf se train se aate hain magar aaj wo subah wali train cancel ho gayee kuchh kaaran se isliye".

Anita yeh sunnti huyi ek nazar Uss aurat ke taraf dekhi aur phir waapas Uss aadmi ke taraf dekhkar muskurati huyee "ohh" bolkar waapas sabji wale ko dekhne lagi

Woh aadmi Anita ki haath se apna lund sata kar thoda kamar hilaya aur Anita ki saree ko thoda upar karke uski gaand ke paas wale saree ke portion ko thoda dheela karne laga. Anita yeh mehsus karte hi teerchhi nazar se uss budhi aurat ko dekhi aur phir waise hi tirchhi nazar se apni gaand me taraf dekhi jahan uss aadmi ka haath saaf saaf nahin dikh raha tha to woh chup chap khadi huyi sabjiwale ko dekhne lagi.

Woh aadmi thoda sa saree ko upar karke Anita ki jaangh ke paas gaand ki daraar mein ungli ghusane mein thoda safal ho gaya hai aur phir wo chaaro ungli ko uski gaand ki daraar mein uski jaanghon ki shuruaat se lekar upar ki taraf pherne laga aur saath hi lund ko pant ke ander se hi Anita ki haath par ghaseetne lagta hai.

Anita ki saans isse tez hone lagi thi.Woh teerchhi nazar se sabji wale ko aur phir uss budhi aurat ko dekhi jo ab paise de rahi thi. Woh aurat paise dekar Anita ko ek nazar dekhi aur wahan se chali gayee.

Anita uss aurat ko jaate hue dekh rahi thi ki tabhi sabji wala Anita se bola,"memsaheb aap thoda do minute ke liye rukiyega haan bathroom se aata hoon".Anita sir hilakar sehmati di aur wo sabjiwala uss concrete se bane unchi platform se utar kar chala gaya.

Woh aadmi Anita ki gaand dabate hue sabjiwale ko jaata dekh dheere se bola,"Sasure itna der se intezaar karaya ab hum log ka baari aaya to mutne chala gaya".

Uss aadmi ke munh se "mutne" shabd sunnkar Anita ka dil dhadak gaya aur woh bina sharm ke uss aadmi ke taraf dekhkar thodi narazgi se boli,"Aap bhi na? Aese koi bolta hai kya?"
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Exciting story
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great writing
eagerly waiting for the next.
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UPDATE 16

Woh aadmi Anita ki narazgi dekhkar bola,"Are maaf kar dijiye memsaheb. U sasura munh se nikal gawa. Kaa kare memsaheb aadat hai. Hum aapke jaisa padha likha hoon nahin ki kahan kaise baat kiya jaata hai samajh payen".

Anita use dekhti huyi uska baat sunn rahi thi aur uske baat se mann hi mann sehmat huyi ki woh anpadh ya kam padha likha ghareeb aadmi hai aur jaisa mahaul mein pala badha hai wahan to shayad log aese hi baat karte honge to isme uska kya ghalti. Kam se kam usme itna himmat aur imandari to hai ki apna ghalti maan raha hai warna log to bas khud ko sahi saabit karne par lage rehte hain.

Anita uska baat sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Theek hai koi baat nahin. Lekin please aese words, mera matlab hai aese shabd mat bola kijiye. Achha nahin lagta hai na".

Woh aadmi Anita ki gaand dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb aap to padhi likhi hain shayad isliye achha nahin lag raha hai, magar sasura jo baat hai u to bolna hoga na. Ab u kaa karne gaya hai? Hum jo bola hoon wahi to karne gaya hai na".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Offo to use kuchh aur bhi to bol sakte hain na".

Woh aadmi Anita ki gaand dabate hue puchha,"Aur kaa bolun memsahab? U sasura bathroom bolke gaya hai magar humko itna angreji aata hai ki hum samajh sakun ki bathroom nahane ke liye jaata hai log. Aap batao memsahab u sasura ka nahane gaya hai ".

Anita uska baat sunnkar muskurati huyi aashcharyata se sir hilakar boli,"Offo aap to baat banane mein expert hain. Kya hi bolun main ab. Jo samajhna hai samajhiye aap magar shuru mein aap jo bole waise mat boliyega please".

Woh aadmi Anita ki gaand dabate hue puchha,"Are memsahab aap kahe naraaz ho rahi hai. Aap bataiye ki hum ka ghalat bola hoon ki bathroom mein log nahane jaate hain. Aur agar hum sahi bola hoon to bataiye usko kaa bolna hoga jo u karne gaya hai".

Anita uske baat par na chahte hue bhi muskura rahi thi. Uska baat karne ka andaaz aur jis tarah se woh baat ko banaye jaa raha tha woh Anita ko entertaining lag raha tha. Woh muskurati huyi boli,"Achha use toilet bhi keh sakte hain ki woh toilet gaya hai".

Hariya Anita ki gaand ko dabate hue bola,"Achha toolet".

Yeh sunte hi Anita muskura di. Anita ko muskurata dekh woh aadmi uski gaand ko dabate huw bola,"Are memsahab hum aapke tarah padha likha to hoon nahin ki achhe se bolun. Humka jitna aaya hum bol diye".

Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Are koi baat nahin. Aese mujhe too let se yaad aaya ki aap late to nahin ho rahe hain? Aapko kaam par bhi jaana hai. Main nahin chahti ki aap late ho jaye aur aapke maalik ko aapko daantne ka mauqa mile".

Woh gutkha wala aadmi yeh sunnkar apna gutkha side mein thik kar phir se gande tareeqe se munh ponchhkar Anita ko dekhte hue bola,"Are memsaahab kuchho nahin hoga. Hum jab bol diya hoon ki hum aapka madad karke jaunga to apna jabaan par kaayam rahunga".

Yeh bolkar woh Anita ki gaand ki daraar mein ungli rakhe uski gaand ke bhaag par apna panja rakhkar uski gaand ko masal diya jisse Anita ko thoda dard hua aur wo ek nazar jidhar sabjiwala gaya tha udhar dekhkar waapas uss gutkhe wale aadmi ko dekhti huyi boli,"Aese aap sabhi aurton ki madad karte rehte hain kya?".

Woh aadmi yeh sunnkar Anita ki dusri gaand ki bhaag ko bhi jor se masal diya aur uski maansal gaand ki haath mein daboche hue bola,"nahin memsaahab sirf aapki hi madad karta hoon kyunki aap bahot achhi hai dil ki isliye"

Anita use dekhti hui boli,"Achha aapko kyun lagta hai ki main dil ki achhi hoon?"

Woh aadmi ab Anita ki kamar par waapas haath laakar use sehlate hue bola,"wo memsaahab aap itni padhi likhi, ameer aur khoobsurat hokar bhi ghamand nahin karti aur hum jaise ghareeb se bhi achhe se baat karti hain isse saaf pata chalta hai ki aapka dil bahot bada hai" aur yeh kehte hue wo Anita ki blouse mein kaid chunchi ko dekhne laga aur uski chunchi dekhte hue bola,"Sach mein kitna bada hai aapka dil memsaahab".

Anita bas use apni chunchi par ghurte dekhti rahi aur jab wo aadmi use waapas dekha to muskurate hue uski blouse ke peechhe ki do inch ki patti ko chhute hue bola,"Aese memsaahab aap kapde bahot mehenge pehenti hai,inn kapdo mein aap bahot khoobsurat lagti hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati hui boli,"Thank you".

Woh aadmi phir Anita ki haath pakadkar usko apne lund ke theek paas jaangh par rakh kar sehlate hue bola,"Dekhiye memsaahab humara pant ka kapda kitna mota aur ghatiya quality ka hai,hum ghareeb log aesa hi kapda pehen paate hain".

Anita apna haath peechhe khinchte hue ek nazar jidhar sabji wala gaya tha udhar daudakar uss aadmi ko dekhkar boli,"Are koi baat nahin aap ghareeb hain to kya hua,insaan to theek hi hain".

Wo aadmi Anita ki haath ko apne pant par waapas rakhte hue dusra haath se uski blouse ki patti mein ungli ghusaakar pakarte hue bola,"dekhiye memsaahab aapki blouse ke kadpe chhukar hi pata chalta hai ki ek dam keemti aur achhe quality ke hain aur saath mein araamdayak bhi hain. Wahin humara kapda dekhiye ek dam low quality ka".

Anita yeh sunnti huyi use dekhkar boli,"Are koi baat nahin".

Yeh sunnkar wou aadmi turant bola,"Are memsahaab ek baar humra pant achhe se chhu kar to dekhiye. Anita yeh sunnkar chup chap uske pant ko halke se apni ungliyon mein lekar kapde ko thoda masal kar dekhi jiske kaaran uski haath se uska lund bhi sat gaya aur phir wo boli,"Lijiye dekh liya maine. Koi baat nahin aapka kapda jaisa bhi hai lekin aap aadmi to theek hain. Wahi maybe rakhta hai".

Yeh sunnkar woh aadmi thoda aage badhkar Anita se chipak gaya jiske kaaran Anita ki haath uske aur uss aadmi ke darmiyaan chap gayi aur uske paas uss aadmi ke lund ko chhute hue khade rehne ke sivaay koi upay nahin tha.

Woh aadmi phir Anita kisi blouse ki pichhe ke chhote kapda ko sehlate hue poochha,"Aese memsaahab aap apna blouse kis darzee se banati hai?"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati hui boli,"Nahin main readymade hi leti hoon saree ke saath,main kisi tailor ke paas nahin jaati".

Yeh baat sunkar wo aadmi Anita ki poori upar nangi peeth par haath phirane ke baad bola,"Kamaal hai memsaahab. Itna fitting kapda aapko readymade mil jaata hai?"

Anita uske kapdo ke maamle mein kam jaankari par muskurati huyee boli,"Jee branded kapde fitting milte hi hain".

Woh aadmi Anita ki blouse ke patti ke neeche patli si bra ki strap ko pakarte huye puchha,"memsaahab kya yeh bhi branded hai".

Anita iss baar kuchhh nahin bolti balki ulta usse poochhi,"Aese apne apna naam aaj tak kabhi nahin bataya?".

Yeh baat sunkar wo aadmi paas mein phir gutkha thuka aur gande tareeqe se munh ponchhte hue Anita ko chunchi ko dekhne ke baad use dekhte hue muskura kar bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaahab, humra naam Hariya hai".

Anita yeh sunkar muskurate hui boli,"Hariya. Achha".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"U memsaahab utna achha naam nahin hai. Gaon dehat ka naam hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Are nahin, jaisa bhi hai achha hai"

Woh aadmi muskurate hue puchha,"Aese memsaahab aap apna naam nahin batayengi ka?"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ohh I am so sorry. Mera naam Anita hai,Anita Singh".

Hariya yeh sunkar muskurate hue Anita ki gaand dabate hue bola,"Waah memsaahab.Bahut hi pyara aur meetha naam hai aapka. bilkul aapki tarah".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar bas use dekhti huyi apna sir hilane lagi to Hariya uski chunchi ko dekhte hue uski gaand ko masal diya. Jaise hi woh Anita ki gaand masla ki tabhi wo sabji wala wahaan aa gaya aur dono ka dhyaan udhar chala gaya.

Anita ko jo jo sabji chahiye thi woh bol di aur wo sabji wala taulne laga. Wahin Hariya bejhijhak Anita ki gaand se haath upar lejakar poori peeth par haath pherne laga aur Anita bina kisi virodh,bina kisi pratikriya ke wahaan chup chaap khadi sabjiyan dekh rahi thi.


Hariya phir apne pant ka zip kholne laga aur use kholkar apna lund nikaal kar khula chhor diya Anita ki haath ke bagal mein.Anita ko jab yeh ehsaas hua to uski saanse phir se tez hone lagi aur dil thoda dhadak gaya. Woh ek nazar sabzi wale ke taraf dekhi aur usko sabjiyan chunte hue dekh chup chap khadi rahi.

Agle kuchh pal ke baad Hariya ka lund Anita ke haath se takra gaya aur Anita ke badan mein jhurjhuri hone lagi aur use apni badan mein maze ki ek ajeeb laher mehsus huyi. Woh chup chap waise hi khadi rahi aur agle kuchh minute tak uski haath se Hariya ka lund takrate raha aur Hariya uski nandi peeth se lekar gaand tak haath phirate raha. Iss sabke beech wo dono chup chaap wahin lagbhag chipke hue khade rahe.

Hariya ka haath Anita ki peeth par reng rahe the aur uska lund uski haath se takraakar khada hone laga tha.Anita ki bhi saans tez hone lagi.Sabji wale ne Anita ko sabji dekar hisaab bata diya.

Anita jab paise nikal rahi thi to Hariya apna lund pant mein waapas daal kar zip bandh karke sabji wale ke haath se thaila lete hue bola,"Ee humka do. Hum memsaahab ka madad karne ke liye hi khada hoon".

Anita yeh sunkar sabji wale ko paisa deti hui Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Are nahin aap rehne dijiye ab aap kaam par jaiye,main manage kar lungi".

Hariya Anita ki gaand ko dabochte hue bola,"Are memsaahab dijiye na. Humare hote hue aapko itna bhaari cheez uthane ka zaroorat nahin"..

Anita yeh sunnkar muskura di aur use sabji ka thaila pakadne di aur khud sabji wale se chhutta lekar bag mein dal li.

Hariya phir waise hi Anita ki gaand par haath daale aur dusre haath se sabji ka thaila pakde usko ek andhera gali se hote hue auto stand le gaya aur use baitha kar bola,"theek hai memsaahab,hum chalta hoon".

Anita muskurakar use "thank you" boli to Hariya muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaaheb humka kahe sarminda kar rahi hain. Aapka madad karna to humra faraz hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurane lagi to Hariya kuchh sochne laga aur kuchh seconds sochne ke baad puchha"memsaahab aap phir kab ayengi?".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati hui boli,"pata nahin,ho sakta hai do teen din baad aaun".

Yeh sunkar Hariya paas mein hi gutkha thookte hue phir se apne haath se munh pochhte hue bola,"theek hai memsaheb.Aap araam se jaiye. Hum chalte hoon." aur yeh bolkar wo wahaan se chala gaya. Anita use jaate hue dekhne lagi.
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#73
Hot update. Bahut majedaar aur chatpata update hai bhai .wonderful my friend. hats off
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lajawab update
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#75
Thanks for the quick and highly erotic updates.

Will Anita smell the finger which touched Hariya's lund?
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Absolutely sexy and seductive writings
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#77
awesome update! bahut bahut mast kahaani
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#78
bahut hi shandaar aur lajaawab story. Hariya will be the perfect match for Anita.
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#79
Wow keep the updates coming..
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#80
story already majood hai again q post kar rahe ?
shaibuu devil2
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