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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
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Pani puri wala jab Anita ko dekha to dekhte reh gaya. Woh Anita ko dekh hi raha tha to woh boli,"Hello. Aap paani puri saaf suthra banate hain to?"

Paani puri wala jo Anita ko dekhe jaa raha tha uski baat sunnkar thoda hosh mein aaya aur turant bola,"Ji, ji memsaahab. Saaf suthra hi banawat hai hum".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Theek hai. Aap saaf suthra pani puri banaiye, main paise lekar aati hoon".

Paani puri wala yeh sunnkar apna sir "haan" mein hilaya to Anita boli,"Aur teekha aur khatta hona chahiye".

Paani puri wala yeh sunnkar sir "haan" mein hilate hue bola,"Theek hai memsaahab".

Anita yeh sunnkar mudkar ghar ke taraf jaane lagi to paani puri wala ka nazar uski adh nangi peeth par pada jise dekhte hi uska dil dhadak gaya. Ek to usne zindagi mein itni khoobsurat aurat saamne se kabhi nahin dekha tha, bas filmon ya tv mein dekha tha upar se iss tarah ka kameez bhi kisi ko pehente hue nahin dekha tha.

Woh paani puri wala tv par ya social media par khoobsurat ameer ghar ki aurton ya actress aur models ko backless blouse pehne hue dekha tha magar backless blouse ki tarah kameez kabhi nahin dekha tha jisme aadhi peeth nangi ho.

Anita jaisi behad khoobsurat aurat ka chikna jism iss tarah se dekhkar uska dil dhadak gaya aur phir uska nazar uski gori peeth ke neeche uski matakti badi gaand par chala gaya. Chalte waqt Anita ki badi gaand ki thirkan aur matak uski chhoti kameez mein saaf saaf pata chal raha tha.

Woh paani puri wala lagbhag 55 saal ka tha aur halka kaale rang ka tha aur dhoop mein kaam karne se thoda aur kaala lag raha tha. Shareer se thoda theek thaak tha, na hi mota aur na hi patla. Height Anita ke jaisa hi tha. Woh ek dhoti kurta pehne tha aur Anita ki adh nangi peeth aur uske neeche matakti gaand ko dekhkar uske badan mein ek bijli sa romanch daud gaya aur dil dhadakne laga. Saath hi uske lund mein bhi thoda hulchul hua. Woh paani puri wala aas paas dekha aur phir thoda think ghontte hue apna lund dhoti ke ander adjust kar liya.

Woh phir apna haath dhokar paani puri ka masala banane laga. Anita lagbhag do minute baad waapas aayi to paani puri wala aalu ko ghunthte hue masala bana raha tha. Woh masala banate hue Anita ko dekhne laga to Anita muskurati huyi apne gate ke saamne sadak ke kinare lage paani puri ke thele ke paas aakar khadi ho gayi.

Anita ke itna paas aane par uski badan ki khushbu uss paani puri wale ki naak mein jaane laga. Itni achhi khushbu shayad hi uski naak mein kabhi gayi thi aur Anita ki jism se aane wali khushbu se uske dil ka dhadkan badh gaya aur saath hi lund mein hulchul hone laga.

Ghareeb aadmi hone ke naate woh Anita jaisi khoobsurat aur ameer aurat ke taraf dekhkar koi khatra mil nahin lena chahta tha to woh apna dhyaan masala banane mein lagane laga ki tabhi Anita khushi se boli,"Aap achhe se masala bane rahe hain na?Achhe se banaiyega, teekha aur khatta. Aesa ki khakar mazaa aa jaye".

Anita ki baat sunnkar na chahte hue bhi paani puri wala uske taraf dekha to Anita ko muskurate hue dekha. Anita ko muskurate hue dekh use thoda confidence mila to woh bola,"Haan memsaahab achhe se banawat hoon hum. Aapko khakar achha lagega".

Anita muskurakar puchhi,"Aapne haatha dhoya ya nahin?"

Paani puri wala muskurakar bola,"Are memsaahab aap ko hum saaf suthra hi khilaunga. Haath dhoke hi hum banawat hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Theek hai achhe se banaiye".

Paani puri wala bola,"theek hai aur aankhon ke kone se ek baar Anita ki cleavage dekh liya jise dekhte hi uske badan mein phir se bijli daud gayi aur lund mein hulchul ho gaya. Anita use apni cleavage dekhte hue dekh li magar chup chap normal tareeqe ae khadi rahi.

Paani puri wale ko laga ki Anita use uski cleavage dekhte hue nahin dekhi hai to woh turant apna chehra samne ke taraf karke waapas masala ko dekhne laga taaki uski chori pakdi na jaye.

Woh apne female customers ko kabhi aese nahin dekhta tha magar Anita thi hi itni khoobsurat ki na chahte hue bhi use dekhne ka mann kar raha tha aur khaaskar jab woh itni badan dikhai kapde mein uske saamne khadi huyi thi.

Uss kameez mein Anita ki cleavage achhi khasi dikh rahi thi aur itna cleavage bhi woh paani puri wala saamne se kabhi nahin dekha tha, bas social media aur tv par hi dekha tha. Aese mein itna zyada cleavage, theek aankhon ke saamne dekhne ko mile khaaskar ek model ya actress jaisi khoobsurat aurat ko to uske jaise mard ko to dekhne ka mann karna hi tha.

Iske bawjud woh khud ko control karne ka koshish kar raha tha yeh sochte hue ki Anita ameer ghar ki aurat hai aur agar woh use aese gandi nazar se dekhte hue pakad li to woh mushqil mein pad sakta tha.

Paani puri wala masala banane ke baad Anita ko patte ka ek chhota katori de diya jise Anita pakad li aur phir paani puri wala use paani puri diya. Anita use uthakar khane ke liye thoda samne ke taraf jhuki jisse ki uska paani uski kapde par na gire.

Anita paani puri munh mein daalkar ek pal ke liye uska taste mehsus ki to paani puri wala puchha,"memsaahab theek bana hai to? Aapko kauno shikayat to nahin hai".

Anita paani puri khati huyi muskurakar apni dayi haath ke anguthe aur index finger ko jod kar boli,"Pura perfect hai. Yummy" aur phir patte ka katori aage karke boli,"Aur dijiye".

Paani puri wala Anita ki munh se tareef aur uske chehre par muskurahat dekhkar khush ho gaya tha to jab Anita usse aur paani puri mangi to woh hadbada kar dusra paani puri mein masala aur paani bharkar patte ke katori mein rakh diya aur Anita ke taraf hi dekhne laga.

Wahin Anita ka dhyaan ab katori mein rakhi huyi paani puri par tha aur woh use uthakar khane ke liye phir saamne jhuki to iss baar paani puri wala ka dhyaan uski cleavage par chala gaya. Ek to Anita ki cleavage gehre gale wali kameez mein pehle se hi achhi khaasi dikh rahi thi upar se thoda saamne jhukne par aur zyada dikhne lagi.

Anita ki cleavage dekhkar paani puri wala ka dhadkan phir tez ho gaya aur badan mein bijli jaisa masti ka laher phir daud gaya. Saath hi uske lund mein hulchul bhi hua. Woh apna think phir se ghont kar turant nazar Anita ki cleavage se hata kar uske chehre ko dekha to Anita muskurati huyi paani puri kha rahi thi.

Woh khane ke baad apni katori phir aage karke boli,"Sach mein aapki paani puri bahot tasty hai".

Paani puri wala khushi se muskurate hue bola,"Humka bahot khushi howat hai memsaahab ki aapko humra paani puri pasand aawat hai" aur yeh bolte hue woh ek aur paani puri rakh diya aur nazar Anita ki cleavage par le gaya.

Anita phir se jhuk kar paani puri khayi to paani puri wala phir se uski cleavage dekhne laga. Anita chup chap paani puri maze se kha rahi thi. Paani puri wala Anita ka dhyaan uske taraf jaane se pehle hi apna nazar hata diya aur Anita ki chehre par dekha to woh munh mein paani puri rakhkar seedhi hokar munh chalakar muskurati huyi khane lagi. Paani puri wala use dekhkar muskura diya.

Anita paani puri kha gayi to paani puri wala agla paani puri use dene hi wala tha ki Anita boli,"Thodi aur kachhi mirch daliye".

Paani puri wala "haan" mein sir hilate hue bola,"Jee memsaahab" aur ek hara mirch aalu ke masale mein kaat kar mila diya aur phir use bharkar Anita ko paani puri diya.

Anita phir se jhuk kar paani puri khayi. Woh paani puri wala phir se Anita ki cleavage dekh raha tha aur jab woh waapas Anita ke taraf dekha to woh seedha hokar munh chalakar kha rahi thi. Phir kuchh second baad woh apni baayi haath ko hilati huyi izhaar ki ki use teekha lag raha hai magar uski chehre par muskurahat di.

Anita ko aesa karte dekh paani puri wala muskurakar dekha. Anita bhi muskurati huyi paani puri kha rahi thi aur khati huyi apni nazro se paani puri wale ko paani puri ke taraf ishara ki. Paani puri wala samajh gaya ki Anita aur pani puri maang rahi hai to woh agle paani puri banane laga.

Woh phir se paani puri diya to Anita use uthakar kha gayi aur phir se teekha lagne par apni patli si bayi haath ko hilane lagi aur muskurati huyi munh chalakar paani puri khaane ka mazaa le rahi thi. Paani puri wala dekha ki uski naak ab thodi laal hone lagi thi. Anita bahot gori thi aese mein teekha khaane par jab uski naak laal hone lagi to woh bahot pyaari lag rahi thi.

Anita woh paani puri khane ke baad boli,"Bas ek aur" to paani puri wala ek aur paani puri de diya. Anita phir se khane ke liye jhuki aur woh paani puri wala uski cleavage dekhne laga. Anita ki aankh se bhi ab thoda aasun tapak gaya aur woh muskurati huyi paani puri wale ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Ek sukha bina mirchi ka dijiyega".

Anita phir apni baayi haath ki ek ungli se apni aankh ke neeche giri huyi thodi si aansun ko ponchhne lagi ki tab tak use sukha paani puri mil gaya aur woh use kha gayi.

Use khane ke baad Anita paani puri wale se boli,"tissue paper, ohh sorry, thoda sa paani dijiyega. Haath dho lun".

Paani puri wala uske taraf ek bada bottle badha to Anita boli"Itna bada bottle main ek haath se kaise pakdungi. Ek kaam kijiye thoda paani meri haath par daal dijiye. Yeh bolkar Anita apni dayi haath thoda aage karke jhuk gayi taki paani ka chhinta uss par na pade. Uske jhukne se uski cleavage thodi aur dikhne lagi.

Paani puri wale ki nazar jab uski cleavage par padi to uske lund mein phir hulchul ho gaya. Woh apna thuk phir ghontte hue Anita ki haath par paani dalne laga. Thoda paani daalne par Anita boli,"Bas ho gaya".

Anita bas teen ungliyon ka istemal ki thi paani puri khane ke liye aur uski haath mein zyada kuchh laga nahin tha isliye bas thodi si paani se apni ungliyon ka upri bhaag dho li. Paani puri wala paani daalte waqt bhi uski cleavage hi dekh raha tha aur Anita dwara paani daalne ke liye mana karne par wahan se nazar hataya.

Anita phir apni bayi haath mein pakdi huyi ek 50 ka note nikal kar use de di. Paani puri wala use 30 rupya waapas kar diya aur waapas karte hue bola,"Yeh lijiye memsaahab. Ummeed hai ki aapko humra paani puri pasand aaya hoga"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Haan achha tha. Sach mein maine ummeed nahin kiya tha ki itna tasty hoga, magar aap ne achhe se banaya?"

Woh paani puri wala khush hokar bola,"Are memsaahab bas mehnat aur imandari se banawat hoon. Aap customer logan ko humra paani puri khakar khus dekhkar humka bhi khusi milta hai aur saath mein do waqat ka roti mil jaata hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Achha aap idhar se roz isi time auto stand ke taraf jaate hain?".

Woh paani puri wala bola,"Time to ek nahin rahat hai memsaahab. Kabhi kabhi dusra jagah zyada bikri howat hai to late bhi ho jaat hai. Lekin aapko humra paani puri pasand aa gawa to roz isi time mein hum aa jaunga"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Nahin iski zarurat nahin hai. Main roz nahin khati. Bas kabhi kabhi mann hota hai to kha leti hoon. Aaj ki tarah kabhi aap jaate hue dikhenge to aakar kha lungi. Achha main chalti hoon. Thank you itna tasty paani puri khilane ke liye".

Paani puri wala khush hokar bola,"Are memsaahab humka sarminda kar rahi hain aap. Ee toh humra roji roti hai. Achha khilayenge tabhi to humra bikri hoga".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskura aur phir wahan se mudkar jaane lagi. Paani puri wale ka nazar phir se uski adhnangi gori peeth aur uske neeche thirakti huyi badi gaand par chala gaya. Woh Anita ko jaate hue dekhne laga.

Jab Anita gate ke paas jaakar gate bandh kar di to woh apne lund ko dhoti ke upar se masal kar bola,"Yaqeen nahin howat hai ki itna khabsurat aurat eehan rahat hai. Zarur uu bada company mein kaam karne wala kauno saahab ka biwi hogi tabhi to ee company ka ghar mein rahat hai. Kitna khabsurat hai magar ghamand nahin hai. Kitna achha se muskura kar achhe se baat karat hai".

Paani puri wala yeh sochkar wahan se chala gaya wahin Anita ghar jaakar apni haath achhe se dhoyi aur phir tv dekhne lagi.

Shaam ko woh dinner banana shuru ki aur raat ko 8 baje tak woh khaana bana li aur uske thode der baad Raj bhi aa gaya.Dono Pati patni saath khaana khane ke baad apne bedroom mein jaakar routine sex ke baad so gaye.
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#23
very much well written and described.
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Zabrdst, shandar outstanding....can't wait for jeetu's entry and first encounter....
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UPDATE 7

Do din ke baad Raj nashta karne ke baad office jaane ke liye tayyar ho raha tha ki abhi Anita bedroom mein chai lekar aayee. Woh chai bed ke baju wale table par rakhkar bed par baithkar apne pati ko tayyar hota hua dekhne lagi.

Ek pal ke liye dekhne ke baad woh Raj se poochhi,''Raj wo ghar ki saaf safai jhadoo ponchha ke liye tum naukar rakhne wale the uska kya hua?Mujhse yeh sab nahin hoga. Ek do din ki alag baat hai magar main hamesha yeh sab nahin kar sakti''.

Raj chai ka cup uthaya aur muskurate hue bola,''Haan jaan dekh raha hoon. Koi mile tab to,yahaan ghar par kaam karne ke liye koi milna thoda mushqil hai. Zyadatar ghareeb log bade sheher mein kaam ke chakkar mein chale jaate hain. Aese mein iss tarah ke chhote sheher mein naukar milna thoda mushqil hai. Phir bhi thoda sabra rakho main jald hi intezaam kar lunga. Agar tumhe koi mile to rakh lena.''.

Raj jaanta tha ki agar naukar nahin mila jaldi to Anita bahot naraaz ho jayegi. Aesa nahin tha ki use kaam karna utna pasand nahin tha. Kaam karne mein Anita kabhi peechhe nahin rehti thi isliye khud bazaar bhi jaati thi aur khana khud banati thi. Magar saaf safai karne ki baat alag thi. Zaroorat parne par wo thoda bahot karti thi,magar itne bade ghar ki regularly saaf safai karna uske bas ki baaat nahin thi,khaskar jab woh khud paise wale ghar ki eklauti beti thi aur bade laar pyaar se pali gayi thi.

Anita jaldi koi baat ka bura nahin maanti thi aur apni biwi ki yeh baat Raj ko achha lagta tha,magar kabhi kabhi baat bigadne par wo gussa bhi karti thi isliye Raj bhi jald se jald ek naukar ka intezaam karna chahta tha. Anita uska baat sunnkar use dekhi aur chup chap chai peene lagi.

2 din baad Anita ko phir bazaar jaana tha. Aaj wo apne pati ke jaane ke baad naha kar tayyar huyee. Humesha ki tarah woh ek low back blouse pehni jisme uski gori chikni peeth teen lagbhag puri nangi thi. Saree ko nabhi ke do inch neeche bandhkar halka make up karke wo tayyar ho gayee. Delhi mein wo aur neeche saree bandhti thi magar peechhle din bazaar jane se pehle apne pati ke bolne par woh yahan saree nabhi ke sirf do inch neeche hi bandhne ka sochi.

Aesa nahin tha ki use aur neeche bandhne mein koi pareshani ya sharam aane lagi thi. Anita kapde ke mamle mein wahi karti thi jo use achha lagta tha magar phir bhi woh sochi ki thoda upar hi bandh le. Anita khud ko aaine mein dekhi aur phir kuchh sochkar saree ko aadha inch aur neeche sadak di aur boli,"Now its somewhat better".

Anita pichhli baar ki tarah auto stand par paidal pahunchi aur use dekhkar ek do auto driver khush ho gaye aur muskurane lage. Jawaab mein Anita bhi unko dekhkar halke se muskura di. Wo phir jo driver use pehle din market le gaya tha uss auto driver ko khojne lagi.

Anita abhi idhar udhar dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi uske paas ek driver aakar bola,''memsaahab uss auto mein baithiye. Abhi wahi auto jayega''.

Anita use dekhi to paayi ki wo wahi driver hai jo use dekhkar khush ho gaya tha.Anita use dekhkar "haan" mein sir hilayi aur uske auto ke taraf badh gayee.

Woh jaise hi auto wale ke saamne se guzri uski badan ki madak khushboo uss driver ki sanso mein sama gayee. Ab Anita ki peeth us driver ke samne thi jiski upari bhaag sirf uske baalo aur blouse ke do inch ki patti se hi dhanki huyee thi,baal bhi uske blouse ke patti ke upari bhaag ko poori tarah se nahin dhank paa rahi thi aur kuchh hissa nange hi the,peeth par baal latke hone ke bawjood bhi koi bhi aadmi dekhkar yeh samajh jaata ki Anita ek low cut blouse pehni thi aur baal hatane par uski poori peeth lagbhag nangi dikhegi.

Saree nabhi ke dhai inches neeche bandhe hone ke kaaran,blouse ke patti ke neeche ka hissa (uski patli kamar) poori tarah se nangi thi. Anita ki saari aur blouse ke patti ke beech ka pura hissa nangi hone ke kaaran Anita ki achhi khasi jism nangi thi aur dhoop mein chamak rahi thi. Uski khoobsurat jawaan badan itni nangi hone ke kaaran mardon ka nazar uski jism par hi chala jaa raha tha aur aese mein unke lund mein hulchul hona hi tha aur wahi ho raha tha.

Woh auto driver Anita ki nangi kamar ko dekhne ke baad apna nazar neeche karke Anita ki badi gaand par le gaya aur uski gaand ki matak aur thirkan ko dekhne laga.Anita apni gaand par saree ko tight se bandhti thi jiske kaaran uski gaand ki thirkan saree ke upar se bhi dikhti thi.

Abhi woh driver Anita ki gaand ko dekh hi raha tha ki use Anita ki gaand ghoomte hue dikhai diya aur phir uski awaaz sunai di,''bhaiyya seat ganda hai,ise saaf kijiye''.

Anita ghoomte hi samajh gayee ki wo driver ki nazar kahan thi,magar wo normal reh kar use jo bolna tha woh bol di.Driver uski awaaz sunnkar hadbada kar apne auto ke paas gaya aur ek kapda se peechhe ki poori seat ko saaf kar diya.

Anita bagal mein khadi intezaar kar rahi thi.Uski jism par paseene ke kuchh boond aa gaye the. Driver seat ponchh kar Anita ki aankho mein dekhkar bola,''baithiye memsaahab, seat saaf ho gayee hai. Achha hua aap baithne se pehle seat ko dekh li,warna meri laparwahi ke kaaran aapki keemti saree gandi ho jati.Maaf kijiyega''.

Anita apni baal ke ek hisse ko kaan ke peechhe karti hui use dekhkar halke se muskura kar boli,"Koi baat nahin. Magar aage se dhyaan rakhiyega. Passenger ke liye seat saaf honi chahiye "

Itna bolkar woh auto mein baith gayi aur isi beech woh driver bola,"Jee memsaahab ". Itni der se dhoop mein khadi thi to use auto mein baithkar thodi raahat mehsus huyee,aur wo''uff bahot garmi hai'' bolti hui apni bag se rumal nikalne lagi.

Auto driver use dekhte hue bola,''jee memsaahab bahot garmi hai'' aur itna bolkar woh apna nazar Anita ki gori,chikni aur sapaat pet par tika diya aur uske pet par paseene ki kuchh bundon ko neeche ki taraf fisalte hue dekhne laga.

Anita apni bag se rumaal nikalne ke baad,uski baaton ko sunkar uski taraf dekhi aur uss driver ko apne pet par ghurte hue paayi. Wo saree ko apni naabhi ke dayee taraf se apne kandhe par le jaakar pin ki thi jiske kaaran uski naabhi saaf saaf dikh rahi thi. Uski naabhi aur uske bayi taraf ke pet ka hissa poori nangi thi aur chalte aur baithte hue uski saree uski dayee kamar ki or thoda aur sadak gayi thi jiske kaaran uski naabhi ki dayee taraf ka pet ka hissa bhi thoda dikhne lagi thi.

Kul milakar saree mein Anita ki gori cheekni peeth ki tarah uski gori chikni aur sapaat pet bhi humesha lagbhag teen chouthai nangi hi rehti thi.Kabhi kabhi hawa behne par uski saree uski dayee kamar ki taraf poori sarak jaati aur uski poori ki poori pet nangi ho jaati thi.

Anita use apni pet par ghurte hue dekhkar koi pratikriya nahin di aur chup chap apni maathe par aaye kuchh boondh paseeno ko ponchhne lagi.Use apni pet dhankne ki bhi zaroorat mehsus nahin huyee aur wo waise hi baithi huyee apna paseena ponchh kar apna rumaal haath mein hi rakhi hui waapas uss driver ki taraf dekhne lagi.

Woh driver ko mehsus hua ki Anita use hi dekh rahi hai to woh apna nazar upar karke Anita ko dekha aur muskurate hue uski aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,''Memsaahab aapko AC mein rehne ki aadat hai jiske kaaran aapko aur bhi garmi lag rahi hai''.

Anita use dekhti huyi uski baaton par halke se muskura di ki tabhi teen log aakar uss auto mein baith gaye aur auto chalne lagi.

Anita baahar dekhte hue chali jaa rahi thi ki tabhi woh saamne wale aaine mein driver ki nazro ko dekhi jo ki aaine ke zariye Anita ki pet ko hi dekh raha tha.Driver apna nazar upar kiya to Anita ko aaine mein dekhte hue paaya. Anita se nazar milte hi woh turant saamne nazar kar diya.

Anita bhi waapas baahar dekhne lagi. Sadak thoda khaali tha to auto tez chal rahi thi jiske kaaran tez hawaa auto mein aa rahi thi.Anita ko isse raahat mehsus ho rahi thi.

Anita thodi der baad aaine mein waapas dekhi to driver ko apni taraf dekhte hue paayi,magar iss baar driver apna nazar turant waapas sadak par nahin kiya aur ek pal ke liye Anita ki aankhon mein dekha. Dono kuchh seconds ek dusre ki aankhon mein hi dekh rahe the ki tabhi driver wapas apna nazar sadak par kar diya. Driver hone ki wajah se wo apna nazar sadak se zyada der ke liye hata nahin sakta tha. Anita bhi waapas baahar dekhne lagi.

Kuchh seconds baad Anita dubara aaine mein dekhi to driver ko phir apni taraf aaine ke zariye dekhte paayi.Anita samajh gayee ki wo ab kya dekh raha tha. Woh Anita ki blouse mein kaid dayeen chunchi dekh raha tha jo ki saree ke anchal se baahar thi aur uski tight blouse mein pahad jaisi tann kar khadi thi.

Anita use dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi driver phir sadak par dekhne laga aur Anita bhi wapas baahar dekhne lagi. Kuchh seconds baad auto ruki aur baaki passengers utar gaye.

Anita un passengers ko utarte hue dekhi aur wapaas dusri taraf dekhne lagi. Passengers ke utarne ke baad auto driver bhada lekar phir se auto chalane laga.Anita dubara aaine mein dekhi to uss driver ko apni chunchi dekhte hue paayi. Driver phir nazar neeche karke uski gori nangi pet ko dekha aur jaise hi upar nazar kiya to Anita ko aaine mein dekhte hue paakar thoda ghabra gaya magar apne aapko sambhal kar Anita ko dekhte hue muskura diya.

Anita bhi halka muskura di aur boli,''Aaj sadak par jam nahin hai,sadak bahot khaali khaali hai''.Driver sadak par dekh kar sunischit kiya ki auto ka accident na ho aur phir aaine mein dekha.Anita abhi bhi aaine mein hi dekh rahi thi.Driver uski aankhon mein dekha aur phir chunchi aur pet ko dekhne kr baad uski aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,''Ji memsaahab sadak kabhi kabhi khaali rehti hai aur kabhi kabhi jam''.

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Achha hai ki abhi jam nahin hai warna garmi se haalat kharab ho jaati meri. Khaali sadak hone se theek hai"

Driver ek nazar sadak par daala aur phir aaine mein Anita ko dekhte hue bola,''. Haan memsaahab. Sadak khali rehne par auto tez chalti hai jiske kaaran hawa achaa behta hai aur passenger ko raahat mehsus hoti hai. Dekhiye na tez hawa ke kaaran aapko bhi kitni raahat mehsus huyee,aapka paseena bhi sukh gaya'' aur yeh kehte hue driver dubara Anita ki chikni gori pet ko dekha aur phir Anita ko dekhte hue muskura diya.

Anita use apni pet ko aankho se chhedte hue dekhi aur phir jab woh Anita ko dekhkar muskuraya to Anita bhi muskurakar jawaab di,''Haan bahot garmi hai,auto mein baithkar thodi raahat mehsus huyee''. Tabhi driver muskurate hue bola,''Yeh lijiye memsaahab hum market pahunch gaye. Ab aapko phir garmi lagegi''.

Anita iss baar kuchh nahin boli, bas muskurati hui auto se utar gayee aur use paisa dekar market ki taraf chal padi. Anita gaand matkati huyi chali jaa rahi thi. Woh driver uski matakti gaand aur uske upar uski gori chamakti huyee kamar ko dekhte hue apne lund ko pant mein adjust kiya aur phir auto ko line mein laga diya. Itni khoobsurat aurat ko woh bhi saamne se kabhi dekha nahin tha aese mein Anita ki adhnangi jism aur matakti gaand ko woh tab tak dekhta raha jab tak woh bazaar mein ghusi nahin.

Anita apni gaand matkati huyi bazaar mein ghoos gayee. Jis jagah par Anita ko pichhli baar wo gutkha khata hua aadmi dikha tha,jisne baad mein usse baat karte hue uski gaand ko achha se naap aur masal kar mazaa liya tha,uss jagah se aage badhne ke baad Anita achanak ruk gayee aur mud kar woh uss jagah ko dekhne lagi. Phir woh apni nazre idhar udhar karke dekhi aur kuchh seconds aese dekhne ke baad ghum kar aage badh gayee.

Woh wahi sabji wale ke paas gayee jisse woh pichhli baar sabji li thi. Sabjiwala Anita ko dekhkar muskura diya.Anita bhi use dekhkar muskura di.Bazaar mein bheed thi magar uss sabji wale ki dukan par sirf ek hi grahak tha jise wo sabji wala chhutta pakra raha tha aur wo grahak chhutta lekar chala gaya.

Saabji wala Anita ko dekhkar bola,''Aiye memsaheb. Kaisi hain aap,kya kya sabji doon?''.

Anita muskurati hui jawaab di,''haan achhi hoon'' aur phir woh sabjiyon ke naam aur matra use bata diya.Sabji wala sabji ko chunkar taulne laga ki tabhi koi Anita ki kamar ko chhute hue aage badh gaya.Anita gardan ghumakar chehre par bina koi bhao ke udhar dekhi magar bheed ki wajah se use samajh nahin aaya ki kisne uski gori chikni kamar ko chhua.Anita wapas sabji wale ko sabji taulta hua dekhne lagi.

2 minute baad Anita ko apni gaand par ek haath mehsus hua to Anita phir ghoomkar dekhi magar use phir samajh nahin aaya ki uski gaand ko kaun chhukar wahan se ghayab ho gaya.Kuchh seconds baad phir koi uski gaand chhute hue badh gaya magar Anita chup chap sabjiwale ko sabji taulte hue dekhti rahi. Woh peechhe ghoomkar dekhna zaroori nahin samjhi. Woh haath bhi uski gaand par kewal 2-3 second ke liye hi thi jisse Anita ko bina ghoome andaza lag gaya ki koi chalte hue uski gaand ko mehsus karke aage badh gaya aur woh iss bare mein sochna zaroori nahin samjhi.

Jab tak wo sabji dukaan par khadi thi use apni kamar par ek baar aur gaand par do baar aur haath mehsus huyee,sabhi baar 2-3 seconds ke liye magar woh teeno baar peechhe ghoom kar dekhna zaroori nahin samajhi.Aakhir mein wo sabji lekar bazaar se nikal gayee.

Woh auto stand jaakar ek auto mein baith gayee.Baithkar woh dekhi ki paas hi khada auto driver use dekh raha tha aur Anita ke dekhte hi woh apna nazar pher liya. Anita chup chap apna bag se rumal nikalkar apna sir ponchne lagi.

Usse pehle peechhe ki seat par do aurte baithi huyee thi aur ek mard ke aate hi auto chal padi.Anita baju wali aurat ko dekhi to use ajeeb tareeqe se khud ko ghurte hue payi. Woh ek budhi aurat thi.Anita ko usne apne taraf dekhte paakar uski chehre par dekhne lagi.

Anita us budhi aurat ko dekhkar muskura di,magar woh budhi aurat bina muskuraye ek baar use upar se neeche dekhkar usse sawaal ki,''Yahaan nayee ho?''.

Anita halki muskan ke saath jawaab di,''jee''.

Woh aurat phir sawaal ki,''Yahan ki to lag nahin rahi ho. Kahan se aayee ho?''.

Anita jawaab mein boli,''jee main Delhi se aayee hoon. Aap yehi ki ho?''.

Woh aurat bina kuchh bole ek nazar uske badan par dali aur waapas saamne ki taraf dekhne lagee.

Anita uss aurat ko ek pal ke liye dekhne ke baad ghoomkar bahar dekhne lagi aur kuchh der mein auto stand pahunch gayee.

Anita auto driver ko paise dekar gaand matkate hue apne ghar ki taraf chal di. Auto stand par teen char driver baithe the aur sabka nazar Anita ki adhnangi peeth aur matakti gaand par hi tha.

Anita ghar pahunchkar apne routine mutabik lunch banakar nahane chali gayee aur nahakar lunch karke so gayee. Shaam mein uthkar woh bageeche mein pani daali aur phir nahakar tv dekhne lagi. Raat mein apne pati Raj ke aane se pehle woh dinner bhi bana li.Raj ke aane ke baad dono dinner karke routine sex ke baad so gaye.2 din baad Sunday tha aur Raj ghar par hi tha. Dono pati patni ghar par hi pyaar se ek dusre ke saath din beeta diye.
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Nicely going. Keep it up.
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Bhai Shukaar Hai Vapaas Aa gaye Yaar ...
Meri Fantasy Yeh hai ki Agar Anita Milti Real Main Toh
Uski Gang Zarur Marta Main Aur Aache Se Spanking Karta Aur Usko Alag Alag Tarike Se Besharam karta
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Nice n fantastic update
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UPDATE 8

Agle din Anita ko phir bazaar jaana tha.Anita Raj ke jaane ke baad saree pehen kar tayaar ho gayee aur apne aap ko aaine mein dekhkar muskura di.Phir ghoomkar aaine mein apne peechhe ka jayeza li aur jab use yakeen ho gaya ki wo achhe tareeke se tayyar ho gayee hai to wo baahar chali gayee.

Auto stand par pahunchne par phir do auto driver Anita ko dekhkar muskurane lage aur Anita ki nangi pet ko dekhne lage. Jab woh log apna nazar waapas uthaye to Anita bhi halki muskaan de di.

Anita ko muskurata dekh usme se ek Anita ko dekhkar bola,''Memsaheb aap uss auto mein baith jaiye''.

Anita muskurakar use dekhi aur "haan" mein sir hila kar apni gaand matkati hui aage wale auto ki taraf badh gayi. Dono auto driver ka lund Anita ki matakti gaand aur gore chikne kamar aur adhnangi peeth ko dekhkar fadfada gaya.

Anita jis auto mein baithi uska driver ek budha tha. Uss driver ne Anita se baat karne ki koshish nahin kiya aur Anita bhi chup chap rahi aur chup chap baithi huyi market pahunch gayee.

Market pahunch kar Anita phir uss jagah ek nazar daudayee jahan pehli baar jab woh aayi thi to woh gutkha khata aadmi khade hokar use dekh raha tha magar wo aadmi aaj bhi nahin tha wahan.

Anita chup chap sabji wale ke paas chali gayee. Bazaar mein bheed kam thi magar phir bhi Anita ki gaand ko do baar chhute hue log nikal gaye.Anita ek baar bhi ghoom kar nahin dekhi ki uski gaand ke maze lete hue kaun jaa raha tha. Woh chup chap sabjiwale ko sabji taulte hue dekh rahi thi aur sabji lekar waapas ghar aa gayee. Jaate waqt ki tarah aate waqt bhi auto mein kuchh khaas nahin hua.

3 din baad Anita phir bazaar gayee. Roz ki tarah saree ko woh nabhi ke dhai inch neeche baandhi thi. Auto stand par woh gayi to teen hi auto laga tha. Ek driver Anita ko dekhkar muskura diya to Anita bhi muskura di. Woh driver usko ek auto ke taraf ishara kiya aur Anita uss mein baithne chali gayee.

Humesha ki tarah aaj bhi auto stand par baithe auto drivers uske shareer ko aankhon se chheda magar wo bina bura maane muskura di jaise ki unlogo ne kuchh bura nahin kiya.

Anita auto mein baithne gayee to dekhi ki ek lagbhag 45 saal ka ek aadmi seat ke beech mein dhoti aur patla kurta pehne baitha hua paan kha raha tha. Uske kapde thode gande the aur uske dayeen taraf ke seat par ek mota budha baitha tha.Anita aam taur par peeche kam jagah rehne par dusra auto mein baith jaati ya reserve kar leti magar pata nahin kyun woh usi auto mein baith gayi.

Woh auto mein uss aadmi ke bayeen taraf baith gayee magar mota aadmi ke baithne ke kaaran jagah thodi kam thi. Woh usi jagah mein uss aadmi se chipak kar baith gayee..Anita ki baaju aur uss aadmi ka baaju sate hue the

Anita ko apni baju par uss aadmi ke baaju ka chip chipapan mehsus ho rahi thi to woh use dekhi to woh aadmi bhi ghoomkar paan chabate hue use dekha. Dono ki nazre mili aur wo aadmi uske badan ko ek baar dekhkar phir saamne dekhne laga.

Anita ek nazar use dekhi,phir apni baju ko dekhi jisse uss aadmi ka kaala baju sata hua tha phir wo baahar dekhne lagi. Woh do driver ka mann aese hi kharab ho gaya tha yeh dekhkar ki Anita un logo ke auto ke line ke time nahin aayi aur ab ek aadmi ko aese usse chipak kat baithe dekh apne kismat par gussa aa raha tha.

Woh aadmi ke badan se halki halki paseene aur sharan ki badbu aa rahi thi aur Anita baithne ke kuchh der baad ek baar jaise hi gehri saans li to uski naak mein uske badan ki durgandh sama gayee aur woh ek pal ke liye apni naak ke neeche apni bayi haath ki index finger rakh di taaki badbu uski naak mein na jaaye.

Phir woh waise hi naake ke neeche ungli rakhi huyi gardan ghoomakar ek nazar uss aadmi par daali aur phir uske kapde ko dhyaan se dekhne lagi. Jo dhoti pehna tha woh purana ho chuka tha aur kurta bhi purana hone ke saath saath ganda bhi tha. Uske daaye kandhe par ek gamchha latka hua tha jo Anita baithte waqt nahin dekh payi thi.

Anita uske chehre ko dekhi aur na jaane kyun apni naak ke neeche se ungli hata kar ek gehri saans li ki tabhi saamne wale seat par ek aadmi aakar baith gaya aur Anita ka dhyaan udhar chala gaya.

Anita saamne wale seat par baithte hue aadmi ko dekhi aur phir bahar dekhne lagi. Gehri saans lene ki wajah se uske naak mein uss aadmi ke badan ka durgandh phir sama gayee.

Auto chalne lagi. Thode der baad mobile bajne ki awaaz sunkar Anita uss aadmi ke taraf dekhi jo ki apne kurte ke side pocket se mobile nikal raha tha. Aesa karne se usk baaya haath Anita ki kamar par ragad raha tha.

Mobile nikalkar woh aadmi apna sir Anita ke saamne se le jakar bahar ki taraf kiya aur paan ko thook diya. Yeh dekhte hi Anita ki chehre par pareshani ka bhai aa gaya thoda.

Auto chalne se hawa ki rukh peechhe ki taraf thi aur isi hawa ki wajah se uske paan ka chhinta Anita ki kamar par pad gayee. Uss position mein hone se us aadmi ka baaya baju Anita ko apni dayee chunchi par mehsus huyee jo ki saree ke aanchal ke baahar thi, magar yeh sab kuchh seconds ke liye hi hua aur Anita react nahin ki.

Paan thukne ke baad woh aadmi Anita ko dekha jo ki khud bhi usko dekhne lagi aur phir woh aadmi ek nazar Anita ki chunchi par nazar daalkar phone par baat karne laga. Anita use khud ki chunchi ko aese dekhte hue dekh li thi magar kuchh react nahin ki aur phir uske hothon par paan se huye geelepan ko dekhne lagi.

Woh aadmi agle pal apne gamchhe se paan ko ponchh liya to Anita baahar dekhne lagi.Agle pal Anita ke kaan mein uska baat parne lagi.

''Haan maalik hum aa raha hoon. Raasta mein hi hoon hum''..

Anita baahar dekhti huyi uska baat sunnti rahi. Woh aadmi apna baat jaari rakhte hue bola,''Are maalik aa to raha hoon hum. Woh subah mein jaruri kaam tha to ka karte. Aakar jaldi se pahuncha dunga hum, aap chinta mat kijiye"

Woh aadmi ke bolne par dusri taraf se kuchh bolne ke baad udhar se phone kaat diya gaya.

Woh aadmi thoda gussa se apne kam daam ke screentouch mobile ko dekha aur badbadane laga,"Ee sasura customer log bhi bahot bada harami hot hai. Thoda deri ho jaye bas malik ke paas phone karne lagega sasura log".

Yeh badabane ke baad woh phir Anita ke saamne se sir baahar ki taraf karke paan thook diya.

Anita use hi dekh rahi thi aur jab wo sir ko uske saamne se baahar ki taraf le jaakar paan thook raha tha to Anita ko uska baaya baaju phir apni daayee chuchi par mehsoos hua aur uske badan ki durgandh uske naak mein phir sama gayee. Anita ko apni baayee kamar par phir paan ke kuchh chheente mehsus huyee.

Woh aadmi jaise hi seedha hua to woh aadmi Anita ko khud ki taraf dekhta hua paaya. Woh aadmi Anita ki aankhon mein dekhte hue apne hothon ko apne gamchhe se pochha aur phir uski chunchi ko dekhkar puchha,"Humra paan thukne se aapko kauno pareshani to nahin hua. Uu baat karna tha to isliye phenka pada".

Anita yeh sunnkar "na" mein sir hilayi aur phir baahar dekhne lagi.

Woh aadmi ek nazar Anita ki cleavage, chunchi ki ubhar aur nangi kamar ko dekha aur phir samne dekhne laga.

Anita ghoomkar apnee bayee kamar par dekhi to paan ke kuchh chhote chhote tukre aur thoda lal ras chipke huye paayi.Woh apni kamar ko dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi auto ruk gayee aur saamne wala passenger utar gaya.Anita ka dhyaan apni gori kamar se hatkar saamne ki taraf chala gaya.

Kuchh der mein wo market pahunch gayee aur paise dene ke baad woh uss aadmi ko ek taraf jaata hua dekhne lagi aur jab wo bheed mein sama gaya to Anita market ki taraf badh gayee.

Wo market mein ghusne hi wali thi ki use pehle din wala auto driver dusri taraf se aata dikhayee diya. Woh auto driver bhi Anita ko dekh liya aur uske samne aa gaya,''are memsaahab aap?''.

Anita muskurakar boli,''haan main. Tum to pehle din ke baad ghayab hi ho gaye,dikhai hi nahin dete ho''.

Jawaab mein driver muskurakar bola,''Wo memsaahab line se auto chalana parta hai to jab aap aati jaati hain to main raste mein nahin to dusri stand par rehta hoon isliye nahin dikhta''

Anita muskurakar boli,''Haan sahi kaha tumne'' aur jab Anita yeh keh rahi thi to woh dekhi ki driver ki nazar neeche uski nangi kamar par chali gayee.Anita auto driver ko khud ki kamar ko dekhte hue dekh rahi thi ki tabhi woh Anita ko dekhte huye dheere se bola,''Memsaahab woh aapki kamar par kuchh laga hua hai''.

Shor ki wajah se Anita ko driver ki baat sahi se samajh nahi aayee to woh ,''kya?'' bolkar usse dubara poochhi.Auto driver thoda awaaz ko aur tez kiya,itna ki Anita sunn sake aur phir uski kamar ki taraf ungli dikhate hue bola,''Aapki kamar par kuchh laga hua hai''.

Anita uske bolne par apni kamar ko dekhi aur tab use dhyaan aaya ki wo auto mein apni kamar se paan ka chhinta saaf karna hi bhool gayee thi. Woh apni kamar dekhne ke baad driver ki taraf dekhti hui boli,''ohh'' aur apne bag se tissue paper nikalne lagi.

Jab Anita driver ki taraf dekhti hui,''ohh'' boli to usko khud ki kamar ko abhi bhi dekhte huye paayi magar Anita chup chap apne bag se tissue paper nikalne lagi aur phir apni kamar ko saaf karne lagi.

Driver Anita ko apni kamar saaf karte hue dekh nazar uski kamar se hata liya. Use darr tha ki kahin woh bura na maan jaye.

Magar kuchh second baad uska nazar Anita ki pet ki taraf chala gaya aur phir uski nabhi par. Itni gori, chikni aur sapaat pet iss tarah se pradarshit dekhkar uske lund mein hulchul hone laga. Woh aaj tak sirf tv par hi aurat ko aese tareeqe se saree pehente hue dekha tha jisme zyadatar upari jism nangi hi rehti ho, magar aaj wo apne saamne dekh raha tha.

Pichhli baar woh Anita ko sahi se nahin dekha tha kyunki use bura lag raha tha magar aaj wo khud ko rok nahin paa raha tha. Uski gori aur sapaat pet par halka halka paseena aa gaya tha jo ki uski chamak badha raha tha aur uske jism ko aur bhi maadak bana raha tha.

Auto driver uski kamar ko dekhte hue apna thook nigla aur phir hothon par zabaan pher kar usko gila kiya magar Anita ko apne taraf dekhte hi wo thoda ghabra kar use dekhne laga.Anita use khud ki kamar ko dekhte hue apne honth par zabaan phirate hue dekh li thi aur phir muskurati huyi driver se poochhi,''ab theek hai kahin aur to nahin lagi hai?''.

Driver uski gori kamar ko dekha aur phir muskurate hue bola,''Haan memsaahab ab saaf ho gaya''.

Anita use tissue dikhate hue poochhi,''ise kahan phenku?''.

Driver uski haath se wo tissue paper lekar side mein ek kachre ka dabba mein phenk diya. Anita use dekhkar muskurati huyi boli,''Achha hua tumne bata diya nahin to main aese hi ghoomti rehti. Kitna kharab lagta na meri kamar par isss tarah se gandgi chipki huyee.''.

Yeh kehte huye Anita phir se apni kamar ko hathon se thoda saaf karne lagi,halanki uski kamar ab saaf ho gayee thi magar phir bhi woh santushti ke liye waisa ki.

Driver Anita ko kamar saaf karte hue dekhkar bola,''koi baat nahin memsaahab, yeh paan ka chhinta tha. Zarur auto mein samne baitha koi aadmi thuka hoga jo peeche aapke upar pad gaya. Yahan sab aese hi karte hain. Jahan yahan bina dekhe samjhe thuk dete hain''.

Anita kamar saaf karke uske taraf dubara dekhi to use apni kamar ko dekhte hue paayi aur muskurate hui boli,"Haan aesa hi hua hoga

Kya kar sakte hain. Sabko samajh nahin hoti hai. Har insaan alag tarah ka hota hai"

Woh driver muskurate hue bola,"Haan memsaahab".

Anita yeh sunnkar poochhi,''Achha tumne apna naam nahi bataya''.

Anita ki baat sunkar auto wale ne uski kamar par se dhyaan hatakar uski taraf dekha aur use muskurate hue paaya.Uske dil ki dhadkan thodi badh gayee iss tarah se Anita dwara apna naam poochhe jane par. Ek itni khoobsurat, jawaan aur padhi likhi aurat jo bade shaher ki ameer ghar ki thi usse uska naam poochh rahi thi.

Usne apne aapko thoda sambhala aur phir jawaab diya,''jee memsaahab mera naam Tipu hai''.

Anita muskurati hui boli,''Tipu''. Tabhi Anita ki gaand ko koi chhute hue nikal gaya. Aaj pehli baar uski gaand ko bazaar ke baahar kisi ne chhua tha warna uski gaand aur kamar ko bazaar ke ander hi log chhute the. Jab Anita yeh mehsus ki ki uski gaand ko chhute hue koi aage badh gaya tab use dhyaan aaya ki use bazaar jaana hai.

Woh yeh bhi dekhne ki koshish nahin ki ki uski gaand ko kaun chhukar nikal gaya aur muskurati hui Tipu se boli,''Are tumse baat karne ke chakkar mein main yeh bhool hi gayee ki mujhe sabjiyaaan leni hai,theek hai main chalti hoon".

Tipu bhi muskurakar Anita ko dekha,phir uski nangi pet aur nabhi ko dekhkar waapas uski or dekhte hue bola,''jee memsaahab''.

Anita bhi muskurati hui uska aakhri baat suni aur bazaar mein kamar lachkati aur gaand matkati hui ghoos gayee.

Anita sabjiwale ke taraf jaa hi rahi thi ki achanak rukkar woh peechhe ghoomkar ek kone mein dekhi. Wahan wahi aadmi khada tha jo pehle din uski gaand ko masal kar maze le raha tha.

Anita dekhi ki wo dusri taraf dekhkar phone par kisi se baat kar raha tha aur Anita ko abhi tak nahin dekha tha.Anita wahan lagbhag 10 seconds khadi hokar use dekhi magar phir ghoomkar sabjiwale ke paas chali gayee.

Woh sabjiwale ko sabji ke naam aur maatra bata kar khadi hi thi ki use apni gaand par ek haath mehsus huyee aur phir ek awaaz sunayee di,''kaisi hain aap memsaahab?''.

Anita baayeen taraf gardan ghoomakar dekhi to wahi aadmi tha aur wo use dekhkar muskura raha tha.
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(19-04-2023, 09:32 PM)Bansalboy Wrote: Bhai Shukaar Hai Vapaas Aa gaye Yaar ...
Meri Fantasy Yeh hai ki Agar Anita Milti Real Main Toh
Uski Gang Zarur Marta Main Aur Aache Se Spanking Karta Aur Usko Alag Alag Tarike Se Besharam karta

Thanks a lot.
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Baahhh... Bahut khub..
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Thanks a TON .....
for considering fan request....
This is golden time of this forum legendary writers are active simultaneously.....
Hope to see this long enough.....
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Absolutely wonderful and stunning story ❤️
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Hi Sean,

It's great to see Anita back..... I kinda lost hope that you would ever bring Anita back.....
You said that you would be introducing some new minor changes in the original story..... Whenever I used to read the older version I always hoped that Tipu would also get into some action with Anita but we never reached there to see that happen but now with you introducing new horizons I just hope that Tipu gets something..... also in your older version there used to be times when I thought now Hariya should get to fuck Anita but Hariya would do something so seductive which cannot be imagined, I hope Hariya continues to tease Anita and the readers in the very same way that we beg in our minds for him to fuck Anita...... In the previous version that servant sex happened way too many times and frankly speaking I always wanted Anita to have her first encounter with either Hariya or Tipu..... Golgappe wala adds an originality to the story to the next level.....

All the best for this new version..... Hope it's sexier and raunchier than the previous version....
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Great writing skills...time for action..

Would like to see Anita with those older men...
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(20-04-2023, 11:25 AM)Fuckstar Wrote: Hi Sean,

It's great to see Anita back..... I kinda lost hope that you would ever bring Anita back.....
You said that you would be introducing some new minor changes in the original story..... Whenever I used to read the older version I always hoped that Tipu would also get into some action with Anita but we never reached there to see that happen but now with you introducing new horizons I just hope that Tipu gets something..... also in your older version there used to be times when I thought now Hariya should get to fuck Anita but Hariya would do something so seductive which cannot be imagined, I hope Hariya continues to tease Anita and the readers in the very same way that we beg in our minds for him to fuck Anita...... In the previous version that servant sex happened way too many times and frankly speaking I always wanted Anita to have her first encounter with either Hariya or Tipu..... Golgappe wala adds an originality to the story to the next level.....

All the best for this new version..... Hope it's sexier and raunchier than the previous version....

I think jeetu part is more sexy than any other bcz he is very simple and normal servant who got the chance, so the encounters that he had are according to his role, though he still not got the anal and blowjob but his role will always be more frequent than others bcz of his homely servant status....and less characters the good the plot.
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(20-04-2023, 11:25 AM)Fuckstar Wrote: Hi Sean,

It's great to see Anita back..... I kinda lost hope that you would ever bring Anita back.....
You said that you would be introducing some new minor changes in the original story..... Whenever I used to read the older version I always hoped that Tipu would also get into some action with Anita but we never reached there to see that happen but now with you introducing new horizons I just hope that Tipu gets something..... also in your older version there used to be times when I thought now Hariya should get to fuck Anita but Hariya would do something so seductive which cannot be imagined, I hope Hariya continues to tease Anita and the readers in the very same way that we beg in our minds for him to fuck Anita...... In the previous version that servant sex happened way too many times and frankly speaking I always wanted Anita to have her first encounter with either Hariya or Tipu..... Golgappe wala adds an originality to the story to the next level.....

All the best for this new version..... Hope it's sexier and raunchier than the previous version....

Thanks a lot for expressing your thoughts. I always like it when readers engage themselves in the story. So thanks again. I do intend to make the story sexier and raunchier than the original version without making too many changes. The narration and description will be better and the changes will be made keeping in mind the overall storyline and how I want the central character to evolve. 

Some readers may not like the changes but they should focus on the overall quality of the story, the central characters personality and the fact whether the story is creating the same excitement which the original version did. 

Thanks again.
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Jeetu part is monotonous and was already there in the previous story version..
Can we introduce that old auto passenger instead.
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This is so so great of u to come back and write it a huge fan and i believe one of the top 3 stories i have read ever. The way the seduction she portrays its unmatched aith any other story here in the forum. All good things and vibes from my end sean. Just dont leave this one in between and it shouldnot end. :D
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(20-04-2023, 05:48 PM)Samit_bhai Wrote: Jeetu part is monotonous and was already there in the previous story version..
Can we introduce that old auto passenger instead.

Anita Singh is way different than other adultery stories...that's why it's uniquely famous....we should let the writer write the way he likes it....
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