Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter
Please give update sir. This is so good
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(30-03-2023, 12:57 AM)Bookkeeper Wrote: Send your comments , thoughts, ideas please....Thats the only source of me getting entertainment....

You are such a good writer
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Great update, narrated very good
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Once completed First night scene , They both becomes Husband and Wife Because devika Beleive god and our tradition
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Super Narration
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Instead of getting fucked in open and become a whore, she can silently sleep with Rahim like a slut till he get bored with her without others knowing it and go back to her useless husband.
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Fucking her by blackmailing or forcefully doesn't justify her character built by story rather than than convincing her to have sex will give reader more pleasure so slow and steady seductive situation in the story will help
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Wonderful..
Amazing writing skills...
Thanks for writing...
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Today, My boss yelled at my like hell. My mood was off and then I found the update.
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Please continue
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Vishnu is breaking the trust. Deception is unevitable when a teacher does not know how to behave with the teenage boys.
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Pls update .....what a story good narration ...many twists ..
And finay she reposnded for vishnu touches ....pls update ASAP
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Please update
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waiting for massive update
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read till 17th page...
Successfully ruined the story...

Actually web series plot is so idiotic.

How much do they earn for a webseries on YouTube!!

How can Teacher be so dumb.
She should have visited this child who needs surgery in person.

Waited fo betterment in story ..
But it only got worse.

Whata wasted oppurtunity
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Character justification is very bad...

Made her so dumb...

I'm just so pissed.
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(06-01-2020, 09:59 PM)Bookkeeper Wrote: I lost interest in writing this story. I can write if anyone else joins me in writing..someone write one chapter i will write the next one. Likewise alternatively we can write.....otherwise anyone else can take over and continue it from here.......

nice wonderful story..
it helped a lot to release many times..
it is helping even in 2023...

Thanks..
but sad to see that you planned to stop
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
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(17-02-2021, 03:59 AM)Bookkeeper Wrote: Chapter - 51

Rahim - did you say that there is a camera in the room
Ganapati -  Yes, i have a friend who is having cctv company, so he installed it for free as i have a new house
Anand - Thats great ganapati...
Ganapati - so im going to call my friend to see the visuals in camera, so i can see who broke into my house

3 of them looked at each other and smiled

Vishnu - why?..why do you want to call your friend. We can check the camera for you, it so easy
Anand - yeah we can have a look..we will check and tell who stole into your house
Ganapati - oh ok..thats very kind of you guys..if you can check and tell

Rahim- Then we can go now itself..dont have to waste any time
Ganapati - ok..lets go then

Ganapati along with 3 guys went to his house. From there they removed the hard disk for the camera. They told ganapati that they will take the hard disk with them and check the visuals and let him know about it

Rahim, anand and vishnu reached back at their hostel. They are very curious and anxious on what would have happened in the room

Rahim- so here we have the hard disk...r you guys ready?
Anand - yeah..im wondering what would have happened to devika madam?
Vishnu - That fucker chaami would have again might have done something with her
Rahim - anyway lets what would have happened in there

Anand opened his laptop and connected the hard disk. He copied all the files into his laptop and opened the recordings from that date.

They fast forwarded the visuals to the point were devika entered the puja room. There wasnt any audio available and camera quality also was not that good. They saw devika entering the puja room. She entered and gave faint smile to chami, chami was sitting on the floor in a mat infront of the lightened lamp. Chami was wearing a red dhothi,an had long white hair and beard. It seems he hasn't taken a bath for months. Both greeted each other and looked like they were having a conversation.

From the camera angle, they are seeing devika's back and they were able to see chami as he was sitting infront of devika. Devika was wearing yellow sari and matching blouse, and they couldn't stop noticing devika's accentuated round curvy ass in the sari.

The conversation went for almost 10 minutes and it seemed like chami is trying to convince devika about some thing. Most of the talking is done by chami and after almost 10 minutes, they watched chami standing up. Devika is now folding her hands and praying. Chami started chanting something, looks like some mantra. After that he sprinkled some water on her and threw some flower petals on her from the flower bowl.

After that it looked like chami said something to devika, And devika slowly kept her hand purse on the floor and with tensed hand slowly unpinned the sari from the shoulder and removed the pallu from her shoulder and released it to the floor.

And from the back, it looked like she is unhooking the blouse from the front and chami is sitting there chanting some mantras and cleaning a bowl ready. After a moment devika finished unhooking the blouse and looked at chami.

Again chami said something and devika slowly with shivering hands started removing the blouse and in few seconds she completely removed the blouse and dropped it on the floor. And they watched in the computer screen, her hands coming to the back and in one swift motion unhooked the black bra from behind. She looked little hesitant in removing the bra, but again chaami said something and devika started removing the bra strap over her shoulder.

They saw their teacher peeling off the bra infront of the ugly chami anf dropping into the floor near her blouse. With embarrassment, she was looking down on to the floor with her hands folded covering her lactating breasts from chaami. This chaami looked her anf stood up with the small idol of the god. Chaami spoke for a minute and it looked like devika nodding her head to whatever chami is saying. At the end of the conversation, chami handed over the god statue to devika. She held the statue on her right hand and tried to cover her breasts using the left hand. Chami then brought a bowl with flowers in it and asked devika to hold it. Devika now extended her left hand by completely umcovering her protruding breasts and took the bowl from chami.

Again it seemed from the visuals, chaami giving some instructions to devika. And devika kept the statue in the flower bowl and slowly raised the bowl over her head , balancing the statue in the flower bowl.

Chami closed the eyes and started praying something and devika repeated the prayers. After that chami brought a bowl of water, anr used his hands to sprinkle the water onto devika's brfurther

Rahim, vishnu and anand watched their teacher fully standing topless infront of this false godman. They can see devika's naked back until waist and it was a sexy pose. Because she was standing with her arms raised, it further showed the shape of her ass in the sari.

To be continued........
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brother..
you are awesome..
you actually broke me..
but then you made me feel lucky..
Thank you so much brother...
I thought the sexy charcter I imagined is dead now (but to be born again soon...)
Thanks..
I love your story..
Thanks.. Thanks .. Thanks...
please dont stop again bro..
Its hard to bare the feel..
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
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(31-03-2023, 12:04 AM)only4naughty2 Wrote: Fucking her by blackmailing or forcefully doesn't justify her character built by story rather than than convincing her to have sex will give reader more pleasure so slow and steady seductive situation in the story will help

Agreed
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(10-04-2023, 01:35 AM)Strangerstf Wrote: Character justification is very bad...

Made her so dumb...

I'm just so pissed.

Sorry as the story is not as per your interest
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