Incest K A N D H

[Ashok mahi]

agge ji ?????

Agge ki bs ehni hi c story 
new story shuru krugi w8 kro

[kavitakhullar]

Rasoyi andr anda  jeetu buhey tey e ruk bina akh jhapkey aata gundi bulln ch kuj gungunadi lovleen wal vekhn lga.. 

Uchi lambi gundwey shareer di mutiyaar   da atta gundi da dolda  gadryaya  lak.. kameej dey palley haithan ubri  gundazz holi holi hildi bund.. . churdey di khankhat   ney usdey kan dey naal naal lun nu b sarur ch dubo dita ..  ghutwey suit ch  shareer da utaar chardaav kataav vekh lun tan jiven hichkia lain lga 

Umeed e nyi yakeen c lovleen nu jeetu usdey pichey pichey rasoyi ch ayouga... jad usney buhey utey jeetu nu vekhea boli kuch naa bul tuk hasdi hoyi aata gunn lgi..

"Uff lovi.. "lovleen dey pichey aa khad jeetu usdey modey fad sar chumda bolea ..." kini sohni a tun"
Kuch na boli lovleen apni pith naal aa judi jeetu di chauri hik da sek.. kanna kol aa bjdey gram sah .. ek baar b naa rokya jad jeetu da hath usdi hik wal wadheya...

bull tukdi kam krdi lovleen ney jad ek baar b nakhra naa kitta  lak hila apna lun usdi bund nal ragrda kameej upro mumma hath ch fd putda bolea" sabr nyi hunda hun lovi .."
"Sbr tan mere ton b nyi hunda " kehn tan lgi c lovleen pr bull ghut aah bhardi apni bund naal ragad hundey gram lun da swad lendi kuch naa boli .. pr jiven e jeetu ney lak hila lun di takr maar lun chuboya ek dum uchldi machldi siskdi boli "ki krdey o.. hto .. kam kr lain  deo menu" 
" Pehley mera kam kr jehra tun  adh vichaley chad rasoyi wal bhaj ayi ..." lovleen nu apnia wahan ch bhrda jeetu aah bhrda bolea 
" Tuhanu e cha chadeya c hath ch fda .."hsdi hoyi  lovleen sidi ho jeetu wal vekhdi boli"  krwa lendey udon kam pura .."
"Ohi tan galti ho gyi "bulln tey jeb fer da jeetu lovleen dey mummeya wal vekh besabra ho  bolea ...
" Koi naa raat nu theek kr layeo apni galti "tedi akh naal pajamey ch khadey jeetu dey lun wal vekhdi lovleen chehkdi hoyi aatey ali praat ek passey rakhdi boli ..
"Huney e theek krni .."agey ho lovleen nu jaffi paa us naal chimbda jeetu siskda  bolea... jiven lovleen ney usdey lun wal vekh bull tukey ehaaas jeha hoyea k shyad mn javey ..
"Ahh ki krdey o "jeetu dean wahan ch machldi lovleen nakhra krdi boli "hato b kam krn deo .."
"Pehla apna kam krwa baki kam baad ch" apna lun loveen dey lak naal ragarda jeetu besbra ho bolea 
"Nyi nyi rasoyi ch nyi .."jeetu dean wahan ch machldi lovleen mukrdi hoyi boli .. jina besabra ho jeetu usnu chimdeya lga usnu kitey rasoyi ch e us da kam khich  devey..
"Koi na kamrey ch shi .." samj gya mn skdi a lovleen utbla ho usnu godi chuk kamrey wal lijanda jeetu msti ch jhumda bolea " pehlan menu dey feri kri koi kam" 
"Tusi b naa .. "jeetu dey gall ch wahan paa jhuldi lovleen boli.. dil tan usda b kr riha c jeetu usni apni hik thalley dba msl devey ..

Plang tey lmi paa apna kurta lahnda jeetu plang tey pichey nu hundi lovleen wal vekhda bolea .." hun tan deni paini " 
"Mein kehri mukrdi ji.. bs Lattu buja deo "nangi majboot chauri jeetu di hik wal vekhdti lovleen plang tey pichey nu hundi boli
"Nyi ji "lattu wal vekh chehkda hoyea bolea jeetu "aaj tan teri lattu jga k laini "
"Lay layeo ji latto jga k ..kr lo jehra cha pura krna aj .. "buhey wal vekhdi lovleen hasdi hoyi boli "pr  pehlan buhey di kundi taan laa layo"
"Hye mn gyi" msti ch nachda  kahli kahli  buha band kr kundi landa jeetu chehkda bolea 
" Mein tan kdo di mni pyi c tusi e " pjamey ch akad k funkardey lun wal vekh bull chbadi boli lovleen 
" Ki main  "  plag tey aa beithda bolea jeetu...
"Tusi e hath ch fda fda swaad laindey rhey.." bina akh jhapkey jeetu wal vekhdi bull dand haith dba usdi jaan kd di boli lovleen 
" .koi naa .. hun nyi der .. " besabra hoyea jeetu plang tey lmi pyi lovleen wal vekhda bolea " chal ho nangi .." 
" Nyi ji mein nyi hundi nangi " sarhaney tey ar tikka jeetu dey lun wal vekhdi boli lovleen 


" Sangdi kyoun a .."  sahan naal upr thalley hundey lovleen dey gol gol mammeya tey akh tikayi bolea jeetu 
" Sangdi sungdi  koi nyi ji hun ... tusi laini tusi krlo nangi .. tuhanu e cha a lattu baal k meri lain da .." hth agey kr jeetu da lun fd palosdi boli " naley kado apna  bahr .. jehra vahla e aukha hoyea pya kr dewan usnu saukha ...
" Kadna nyi hun tan teri fudi ch pana a .."  pajamey da nala khol pajama tey kacha goddeya tak kr apna lun kad lovleen dey hath ch fdanda besabra ho bolea jeetu
" Hye kinney besarm o tusi .. " jeetu da lun ungln naal fd bull tuk lun dey funkardey topey tey akhn tikandi boli lovleen 

" Tun b bn ja besarm " lovleen di kameej da palla chuk  usdey gorey nangey dhid wal vekh besabra hunda  jeetu apna pajama kacha laah ek passey sutda bolea 
" Bni tan pyi haan..  aj tak hanerey ch e vekhya c " lun nu hath ch ghutdi lovleen jeetu dey nangey majboot tagdey  jism nu tk tki vekhdi  hichki lay  boli " aj hath ch fda hilandi.. " 
" Hye tere sadkey jaa waan   jatt da lun fdn waliea jattie.."  lovleen dey gorey hath ch fdey apney bechain funkardey jhatkey laindey lun wal vekhda jeetu us di salwaar da nala khichda bolea .. sarur e aa gya jad ek baar b  lovleen ney usnu nala khichn ton naa rokea.. aag niri aag lgdi c aag .. msti shram naal surkh lal hunda lovleen da gora chitta munh   nashlean kallia akhn , lun fd hilandi da wahan ch pya khankda churra...
" Ki vekhdey o"  bina akh jhapkey apney wal vekhdey jeetu nu vekh sangdi hoyi boli lovleen 
" Hye kinni sohni a tun lovleen .." hauka lay aah bhrda bolea jeetu 
" Tusi kehrey ghat sohney o " wahan faila jeetu wal vekhdi boli lovleen  "  kr lo hun jo krna .. mein uth k roti tuk da b dang sarna .."
"Hye  pehlna jatt nu tan apna dang saar lain dey"  lak tey dhili hoyi salwar nu fd thalley krda jeetu bina akh jhapkey lovleen dey sudaul mottey masal gundazz nangey hundey pattan wal vekhda bolea ..
" Mein kehra rokdi haan jatt nu dang sarn ton .. " lak chuk apni salwaar lahn ch jeetu di madad krdi lovleen jeetu dey funkardey lun wal vekhdi boli " bs jatt jaldi apna dang sar lwey..."

Lattu di roshni ch nangey liskdey pattan nu vekhdey jeetu dey saah ukhdn lgey salwaar pairn toh kad dey ney jad patta vichaley kalley walan ch luki fudi di lakeer nu vekhya hauka lay kamb utheya..
" Ki hoyea changi nyi lgi" lat tey lat rakh apni nangi fudi nu lukondi lovleen sar chuk bechain ho machldey hoye jeetu wal vekhdi boli
"Vohat vohat .. "pehli baat nangi fudi ....." shabd galley ch atak gye jubaan ladkhadn lgi .. hichki lay loveeln dean lattan kholn di kosis krda bolea "chnagi trah vekh lain dey .."
"Nyi mein nyi "jeetu da hath fd usnu apney wal khichdi lovleen sangi sharmandi boli "Fer vekh layeo hun payo .. jeetu nu apney naal ghutdi siskdi boli "kyoun tatsandey o"
"Tera b dil krda lain nu .." lovleen da munh chumda jeetu sarur ch dubda mst ho bolea
"Kyoun gharwaley da e dil kr sakda.. "sr chuk jeetu dey bull chumdi boli lovleen "vohti da nyi .."
" Nyi nyi mera matlab aj tak kdi tun aap nyi keha  mintan krwa k bs thodi jehi salwaar thaley krdi c .." lovleen dey nagey pattan tey hath ferda bolea jeetu..
" Aj ho tan gyi nangi .."  jeetu dean akahn ch vekhdi khind khinda k hsdi hoyi boli  ..."o b kamrey ch lattu waal k ."
"Ajay kithey "lovleen di kameej dean kannia fad upr nu chukda  jeetu chekda bolea" aj tan puri nangi vekhni apni vohti mein .."
Kuch na boli naa e koi nakhra kitta wahan chuk jeetu nu kameej lahan ch madad krdi lovleen  apni lak kol chubdey jeetu dey lun wal vekhn lgi lattan usdean apney aap vakh hon lagea bechain hundi dean  sarur ch akhn band hon lagea ...


"Hye dudh wargi chitti .." aah bharda jeetu bina akh jhapkey plang tey alaf nangi lmi pyi lovleen wal vekh sah niglda siskar uthea.. lambi surahidar gardan.. hik tey tanney hoye tikehy mummey kaley gherey ch akad k khaddia dono doddia sahan nal  hildia jeetu lyi sah laina aukha ho gya.. mulaym gora makhmli dhid.. dhuni da nikka jeha ghera usdi jaan kadn lga .. patla ptang jatti da lak tey lat utey lat rakh lukyoudi fudi da ubhaar tey kalley wallan ch luki fudi di lakeer vekh sabr krna aukha ho gya..Suadaul gundaaz lattu di roshni ch liskha mardey patt..

" Hun karungey kuch k bs vekhi jayoungey " jeetu nu bina akh jhapkey apney nangey jism wal vekhda vekh besabri hundi boli lovleen
"Aj pta lga meri vohti niri aag a agg sulfey di laat.. hye.." apni hik tey hath rakhda jeetu hauka lay bolea" menu pta e nyi meri vohti nangi eni sohni .."
"Acha ji "jeetu ton apni tarif sun bull tukdi sangdi  garur ch aa tedi akh naal us dey funkardey lun wal vekhdi boli "menu b aj pta lga tuhada eda lamba tey motta."
"Uff lovi hun sabr nyi hunda " lovleen dey goddey fad patt kholda jeetu besabra ho bolea 
" Sabr krn nu kehndi b nyi ji "apnia lattan kholdi lovleen da b sabr mukda jaa riha  c.. wahan faila apney upr aye jeetu nu ghutdi boli "bs holi payeo aj pt nyi kyoun dr lgda."
"Kyoun "lovleen naal chimbda jeetu apna lun usdey pattan vichaley lya ragarda bolea" eney mahiney ho gye sadey viah nu ..roz tan andr lendi.."
"Vekhya pehli baar a naa" hath thalley kr jeetu da lun fd apni fudi di mori tey tikandi lovleen bull ghutdi boli " minnat ali gal a holi payeao"
"Haaan .."lovleen dey lal surkh hoye munh nu chumda jeetu grm bhij k gili hoyi fudi tey lun da topa ragarda bolea " holi payounga .."
" Aj pta nyi kyoun dr . " sah rok fudi ch bjn aley gassey di udeek ch dri hoyi boli " Jyada e chamblea lagda  a eh" 
" Uff lovi " apney lun da topa lovleen  di fudi tey ragarda khumari ch kabmda bolea ." aj tan teri fudi b mst ho khind pyi a"
"Fer paa deo andr..  kyoun bechari nu tarsandey o " lak chuk lun andr lain lyi bechain hoyi siskdi hoyi lovleen  cheek pyi jad pehley gassey ch jeetu da topa usdi fudi da munh kholda andr ja atakeya..." Ahhh aieee mummy  holi ji .." munh khula reh gya lovleen da dil dhadk k galley ch aa atakya..

" Bs bs gya " lovlenn di cheek sun msti ch kamba jeetu agla gassa tika k marda bolea
" Aieee mummy mr gyi .. uieeee holi pawo" cheek e nikl gyi lovleen dey munh vichon... purey da pura lun us andr aa wadeya
" paa taa " josh ch aa lovleen dey bull chumda bolea jeetu  enj lga jiven jung jit lyi usney 

" Tuhanu keha c holi tusi eko baar ch .. hun holi holi" jeetu thalley machaldi kasmasandi lovleen hichkia lendi siskn lgi
Lovleen upr chadeya jeetu hor e duniya ch pujea hoyea c  ...bhij k mst hoyi fudi ch jidan tilak k lun andr gya ek baar tan usnu lga chutt gya usda.. bechain utabli fudi ney jiven usda lun aap andr khichya hovey..
" Vohat khrab o tusi " jeetu nu apney naal ghutdi lovleen usdey modey chumdi boli" kr e lya apna cha pura vohti nu lattu jga k .."
"Pehli baar mauka milia ." Lovleen nu apney naal ghutda jeetu holi holi lun andr bahr krda   siskda bolea " aj pta lga kinna gadaraya gundaaz jism a tera ..:
"Menu b aj e pta lga kidda motta tey lumba a tuhada.." lak hila fudi upr nu chukdi lovleen swaad laindi boli ..
" Ki ..." sr chuk lovleen dean akhn ch vekhda jeetu bechain ho gassey marda bolea
" Tuhada lulla " chatkara lay bull tukdi boli lovleen .." voht kharab o tusi" 
" Hye swaad e lya tan jattia ds k "  lun bahar kad andr dhakda bolea jeetu .."  nyi tan chup chup e thalley pyi rehndi c.
" Ghr ch sarey hundey c " jeetu naal chimbdi lovleen fudi ch bjdey gasseya da swaad lendi nihal hoyi boli " dr lagda c kitey awaaz bahar naa chli javey.. "
"Tey aj.."  bekabu bechain lovleen dey kuley kuley jism dey sek naal piglda bolea jeetu
" Ajj ... aj lattu jgwa k marwandi pyi haan tuhadey ton .. " laatn chuk jeetu dey lak naal lapetdi lovleen msti hoyi boli .. "thoda tez tez kro naa ..bda swaad anda .." 
" Hye pehln kdi nyi edan keha  .." lovleen nu mst ho sath dindi vekh sarur ch dubda bolea jeetu "  jad b mein ..bs chup chap pyi rehndi c  .."
"Swaad tan udon b anda c .." sar chuk jeetu dey bull chumdi boli lovleen " pr  boldi nu sang lagdi c " 
" Tey hun.." gaur naal lovleen dean akhn ch vekhdey puchea jeetu ney 
" Aj tusi hath ch fda k sang bhn diti.."lak chuk lun tey gassa mardi lovleen msti ch khindi hoyi boli .. 
" Uff lovleen aj pta lga aag a agg niri tun .." gram bhiji hoyi teri fudi ch tilak tilak janda ..
"Josh ch aa tika tika gassey marda bolea jeetu.. "aj sachi teri fudi wadhu e swaad dindi pyi a .."
"Layo ji jinna b swaad laina .. "hr gassey naal nihal hundi boli lovleen "aj naa tan jatti pichey hatdi naa e jatti di ..:
"Ki jatti di.." gassey marda marda ruk lovleen wal vekhn lga
" Menu nyi pta " hasdi chehkdi bull tukdi boli lovleen  : fer tusi kehna meri vohti kini  besharm a .."
"Nyi kehnda "besabra hoyea jeetu sah roki us wal vekhda bolea " bs ek bar ds ki jatti di.." 
" Fudi .. " jeetu naal chimbdi lak chuk apni fudi ch bjdey gasseya da swaad lendi boli lovleen " sari raat ruh naal chudwani tuhadey ton .. voht e khush haan mein aj.. " shyad sahi e keh rhi c ek wada boz aaj usdey dil dimag ton utreya c.. nyi tan kiney dina di drdi drdi nu kuj b changa nyi lgda c ..tey aj ..jeetu thalley lattan khol k pyi  hwa ch ud di firdi c ...









"Hanji bhabhi kahli kahli ch banerey kol puj dujey passey khadi lovleen wal vekhda bolea deepu " koi kam c "

"Mein saag banaya c  " apney vehrdey wal vekh hath ch fdi saag di kauli ton chunni prey kr kauli deepu wal krdi boli lovleen "menu pta.. tenu saag bda psand a.."
"Haan ji  "kauli ch saag vekhdey e deepu dey munh ch pani aa gya .. saag di kauli fad kuch sochda hoyea  lovleen wal vekhn lga...
"Ki hoyea"  deepu nu apney wal vekhdey vekh thori hairaan ho  puchea "tenu saag psand nyi .. jaa fer sadey ghar da saag khana nyi..."
"Nyi o gal nyi ... pr j aaag thalley lay k gya mummy ney puchna .. mein kidan...roti..." sag wal vekh apni majboori dasda bolea deepu
"Ohhh haan... Hun fer .."nirash jehi ho  deepu dey hath ch fdi saag di kauli  wal vekhn lgi
"J tusi..." bolda bolda chup kr kuch sochda bolea deepu "j tusi saag naal makki di  roti .. mein chaubarey tey beh  kha.."
"Haan haan kyoun nyi .."cha e chrd gya lovleen nu kahli kahli paudiean wal jandi boli "tun ruk mein huney e bna lay k ayi....."









" Aaja bhabhi .. "chat tey kapdey sukney pandi lovleen wal vekhdi arshi boli "dhup sek lay" 
"Nyi bs..." halka jeha muskurandi lovleen arshi wal vekh taar tey kapdey sukney paa balti chukdi  boli " kam boht ney .." 
"Kam boht ney k chachi ton dr lagda" manjey tey beithi mungfli chabdi arshi mehna mardi boli
"Haan eh b.. j unha ney menu tere naal gl krdi vekh liya awen syapa paa beh jayo " banerey kol aa sar tey chunni swardi hsdi hoyi boli
" Ena kyoun drdi bhabhi tun " manjey ton uth banerey kol aa mungfli di thalli lovleen wal krdi boli arshi"  lay mungfli chab .. naley chachi kehdi ghr a"
"Koi pta nyi nee  kad aa jawey "  mungfli chuk chabdi  lovleen boli  "pta nyi ki bair a teri bibi tey mummy ji .. awen us da gussa mere tey kadugi.." 
"Acha bhabhi deepu nu tera suneha dey ditta c  "gaur naal lovleen nu vekhdi mungfli chabdi arshi boli "krta c tuhada kam .."
" Haan krta c"  ek lmba sakoon bharea sah laindi  lovleen apney vehrdey wal vekhdi boli
"Bdi tez nikli bhabhi .. "nimi nimi hasdi hoyi arshi  gaur naal lovleen wal vekhdi boli
"Deor ton kam b krwa liya .. kisi nu pta b nyi lagn ditta "
"Tenu tan pta e a mummy ji da " apney ghr dey gate wal vekhdi lovleen boli "j unha nu pta lg janda syapa khad jana c .."
"Eh tan hai ..."   kuch der chup reh  akhn matkandi bulln ch hasdi hoyi boli arshi " waisey bhabhi kithey karwaya deor ton kam ..."
" Kithey ... " arshi da swaal sun  kuch sochdi hoyi ek dum boli lovleen " ki matlab nee tera.."
" Ohi .." bharwatey chuk khil khilandi hasdi hoyi  chachi dey chaubarey  tey charo passey vekhdi boli arshi "das naa bhabhi kithey kitta deor ney tuhada kam..."
"Ruk tenu mein dasdi haan kutti ..."jad lovleen nu samj ayi ki puchdi pyi a arshi ek dum agey nu ho arshi fadn di kosis krdi boli " kuch b bhaunkdi "
"Tusi aap e keha c deepu ney kr taa tuhada kam "pichey nu hundi arshi hsdi hoyi boli " mein tan ehi puchea kithey kitta deepu ney tuhada kam .. j nyi dasna tan naa daso gussey kyoun hundey o .."
"J sadey vich eh banera naa hunda "chat utey  dono ghara nu vakh krdey banerey wal vekh boli lovleen " teri gutt fad putt deni. "
"Gussey kyoun hundi a  mein tan  majak krdi ..."lovleen nu ghuri wat akhn kad gussey hundi vekh arshi banerey kol aa kan fard di boli "sorry "
"Ja mein nyi boldi tere naal aj ton baad"  arshi wal vekh lovleen  kapdeya aali khali balti chuk paudeya wal jandi boli "menu na bulawin aaj ton baad ..:
Bhabhi gal tan suno gussey ch paudean utr di  lovleen ney jad us wal mud k b  naa vekhea  munh e utr gya arshi da aapney aap tey gussa aaya kyoun mjak mjak ch puthi sidi gal puch bhabhi nu naraj kr ditta.. kuch der khadi sochdi rhi .. mn udas tey dukhi ho uthea .. edr udr vekhdi  banerey tey latt rakh bhabhi aley passey chal maar kahli kahli paudean utrn lgi...



"Tun ethey.."   buhey tey aa khadi arshi nu vekh drdi  ghabrayi hairaan hoyi  lovleen ek dum plang tey uth beithi 
"Maafi mangn ayi .. " kan fd lovleen kol aandi arshi masoom jeha munh bna boli" mein tan majak kitta c tusi gussey ho gye.."

"Tun jaa etho j mummy ji ney vekh lya menu jhirdkan pai jania.. "ghabrai hoyi arshi addea chuk bahar apney gate wal vekhdi boli
"Menu pta Chahchi  ghr nyi "  lovleen  dey samney aa khadi hundi kahli kahli ch boli" mein tan bs mjak.."

"Tun ja etho "arshi da modda fd usnu apney kamrey ton bahr wal bhjedi lovleen apni ghabraht lukondi boli
"Hye bhabhi dhakkey kyoun mardi a ..pehli baar tenu ghar milan ayi.." lovleen dey kamrey ch edr udr vekhdi boli arshi "hye bhabhi apna kamra kinna sohna sajaya hoyea tun .."
"Dhakey nyi mardi" arshi dey modey ton hath chukdi boli lovleen" tun jaa etho ..j mummy ji ney.."
"Ena kyoun drdi o bhabhi apni sass ton.. kuch nyi kehndi .. " hwa ch hath lehrandi boli arshi "j kuch kahugi menu daseyo mein puchungi usnu.."
"Acha baba nyi drdi" kahli kahli hath jordi lovleen gate wal vekh arshi wal vekh minat krdi boli "  tun jaa hun.."
"Pehlan menu maaf kro menu " kann fad lovleen wal vekhdi boli arshi
" aho baba Kr taa maaf jaa hun .." apni ghabrahat lukondi boli lovleen " minnat ali gal a ja tun .."
"Edan nyi pyar naal keh maaf kr ta tenu.." plang tey jaa beith arshi lattan lmka hilandi hoyi boli "sukh naal meri eko ek bhabhi a j o b naraj ho gyi mein kithey jayoungi .." 
" Mein nyi naraj" juakn wang jid kr beithi  arshi samney aa khadi hundi boli lovleen" .. tun jaa hun.."
"Hye bhabhi pehli baar tere ghr ayi cha tan puch lendi  ..."plang ton utr bahr nu andi arshi mehna mrdi boli " kini kanjoos a "
"Mummy aan wali a .. cha  fer kdi pila dayoungi tun jaa hun .. "kahli c lovleen nu..jini jaldi ho skeu  arshi waps javey... mummy kdi b aaa..
"Pakka "agey nu ho lovleen nu jaffi paa chehkdi hoyi boli " tusi menu maaf kr ditta naa " 
"Aho baba kr ditta maaf "arshi nu jaffi pa vakh hundi hsdi hoyi lovleen gate wal vekhdi boli " dhiyan naal jaawin.. gali ch koi tenu sadey gharo nikldi naa vekh lwey..."


"Tusi fikar na kro " gate wal vekh paudiean wal vekhdi boli " mein kotha tap  chli jana.. "

" Bda tajurba a kothey tapn da .." paudean wal jandi arshi nu tedi akh naal upr ton lay haithan tak vekhdi hs pyi lovleen 
" Bhabhi.." ek dum akhn kd paudean kol ja ruki  arshi " j mein kuch kehdi haan tan apni baar tusi gussa kr jadey o..." 
" Lay mein ki jooth bolea nee.. hik vekh apni" bina chunni ton  arshi di hik wal vekhdi akhn matkandi boli lovleen "  saaf pta lgda yaar ton ruh naal putwandi a mummey.."
" Hoow bhabhi kiney  besarm o tusi " apni hik tey dono hath rakh kameej dey galley vichon bahar nu nikl jhattia mardey mummeya dhakdi hairain ho hdbadandi hoyi boli arshi 

 " Kyoun galat keha mein ...."arshi kol aa gaur naal us dean akhn ch vekh usda chehra pardi boli lovleen 
" Hanji bilkul galat..:  " apni hik taan.. bahr nu kd di boli arshi " hath lana tan door kisi mundey di eni himmat nyi jatti di hik wal vekh b lwey" 
" Chal joothi.." arshi nu garur ch boldi sun cherdi hoyi boli " kidan bahr nu udaria mardey ney tere kabootr .. ho e nyi sakda teri kisi mundey naal gal naa hovey.."
"Sachi baba ji di sonh .. "  kandh tey lgi baba ji di photo wal vekhdi kahli kahli ch  boli arshi " meri kisi b mundey naal gal nyi.."
" Pta menu.." arshi nu sonh kha gal krdi vekh lovleen  b gal bdl di  hsdi hoyi boli "  mein tan mjak krdi c tun awen ..." 
"Acha ji jad mein chaubarey tey tuhadey naal mjak kita..." mehna jeha mardi arshi lak tey hath rakh lovleen wal vekhdi boki "udon tan gussey ch bina gal kitey paudean utr aye c "

" Tun gal e ajehi kiti c... arshi wal vekhdi boli lovleen "  sida e puch lya bhabhi teri deepu ney kithey lyi .."
"Hye hye bhabhi mein kad eh keha..."  hik tey hath rakh apney walo safayi dey behas krdi boli  arshi " mein tan bs puchea c deepu ney kithey kita tuhada kam.."
" Matlab tan tere puchn da  ohi c " samaj gyi lovleen galt bol beithi .. gl bdldi  boli 6 mahiney nyi hoye mere viah nu tey tenu lga mein deepu thalley lmi .." boldi boldi chup kr gyi lovleen 
" Hye bhabhi kinia chakmia gal krdey o tusi .." lovleen da jwaab sun chehkdi uchldi hoyi boli arshi ..
"Ja yaar hun   "  jhepdi sharmandi hoyi boli lovleen " es ton pehln ki mummy ji aa jaan tey tenu ethey vekh koi syapa..."
" jo hukam meri bhabhi da "paudiean chardi ek dum ruk lovleen wal vekh   akh maar hsdi hoyi   boli ...:"menu waps bhejn di eni kahli ..kitey jeetey veerey ney tan nyi aana.."
"Aho usi ney aana"  boldi hoyi hs pyi lovleen.." tun jaa hun baba.."








"Ja vekh  ki kehndi a teri chachi" deepu kol aa khadi hundi preeto kandh wal vekh boli " kdo di  awaazan mrdi pyi a
Kuch na bolea... drda b c chachi kyoun.. kitey chachi nu lovleen tey us mundey aali gal tan nyi pta lg gyi...waisey b  mummy samney chachi kol jaan lyi jijhak c
"Ja b " jad dobara manjot ney awaaz mari deepu  da modda fd uthandi boli " pta nyi ki kehna " 


" Hanj chachi " kandh kol khda ho deepu drda hoyea  gardan ghuma apni mummy wal vekhda bolea " koi kam c " 
"Deepu ...lovleen nu usdey pekey pind chad aa" deepu wal vekhdi manjot boli " usdi maa bimar a .. suneha aya c.. ..."
"Mein .."hairan hunda manjot wal vekhda burburaya deepu  " mein..: 
"Jeeta  bahrley sehar  gya a... doh tin din tak mudna .. eh bechari maa nu miln lyi pareshaan " deepu di gal katdi ek dum hukam jeha dindi boli manjot " jaa lay jaa" 
" Pr mein kidan .." kuch sochda bolea deepu
" jeetey da scotor" deepu wal vekhdi faisla suna di boli  manjot" mein lovleen nu kehndi ... tyar ho jawey ..tun b tyar  ho k aa jaa.." 


"Ki kehndi.. " kuch sochdey  waps andey  deepu  wal vekhdi preeto ney puchea " kyoun awwazan mardi c " 
"O bhabhi nu unha dey pind lay k jana " bolda bolda chup kr bolea deepu " unha di mummy theek nyi "
" haa chadd aa.." kandh wal vekhdi preeto deepu wal vekh boli " scoter chla lainda a naa." 
"Haan " Hairain e reh gya deepu usney tan sochea c mummy kahugi " koi lod ny"

[Momlover]

Nice writing .. but duje writers di tarha gaib naa ho jaiyo .. waiting for young+mature incest ?

[kavitakhullar]

" Ja vekh  ki kehndi a teri chachi" deepu kol aa khadi hundi preeto kandh wal vekh boli " kdo di  awaazan mrdi pyi a
Kuch na bolea... drda b c chachi kyoun.. kitey chachi nu lovleen tey us mundey aali gal tan nyi pta lg gyi...waisey b  mummy samney chachi kol jaan lyi jijhak c
"Ja b " jad dobara manjot ney awaaz mari deepu  da modda fd uthandi boli " pta nyi ki kehna " 


" Hanj chachi " kandh kol khda ho deepu drda hoyea  gardan ghuma apni mummy wal vekhda bolea " koi kam c " 
"Deepu ...lovleen nu usdey pekey pind chad aa" deepu wal vekhdi manjot boli " usdi maa bimar a .. suneha aya c.. ..."
"Mein .."hairan hunda manjot wal vekhda burburaya deepu  " mein..: 
"Jeeta  bahrley sehar  gya a... doh tin din tak mudna .. eh bechari maa nu miln lyi pareshaan " deepu di gal katdi ek dum hukam jeha dindi boli manjot " jaa lay jaa" 
" Pr mein kidan .." kuch sochda bolea deepu
" jeetey da scotor" deepu wal vekhdi faisla suna di boli  manjot" mein lovleen nu kehndi ... tyar ho jawey ..tun b tyar  ho k aa jaa.." 




"Ki kehndi.. " kuch sochdey  waps andey  deepu  wal vekhdi preeto ney puchea " kyoun awwazan mardi c " 
"O bhabhi nu unha dey pind lay k jana " bolda bolda chup kr bolea deepu " unha di mummy theek nyi "
" haa chadd aa.." kandh wal vekhdi preeto deepu wal vekh boli " scoter chla lainda a naa." 
"Haan " Hairain e reh gya deepu usney tan sochea c mummy kahugi " koi lod nyi ..."









"O agli sadak ton firni wal mod lay ..agla pind sada a .." scoter pichey beithi lovleen sadak wal vekhdi boli..
Mod mudn ton pehln e sadak wal vekh scooter bnd kr  deepu chehkda hoyea bolea "agley pind tan mere nankey a ..mein uthey e mama ji ko rehnda c.."
"Sachi .." chehak uthi lovleen b  .. sadak wal vekhdi boli "jana uthey.."
"Nayi nayi.. "scooter  firni wal morda bolea .." tuhanu thadey pind chad ghrey waps mudna..hanera ho chalea.. kal aa k lay jayounga.."
"Kitey nyi waps jana" hak naal deepu dey modey tey hath rakhdi boli lovleen " eney hanerey ch nyi waps mudn dena tenu ..
"Tusi samjdey nyi bhabhi " ajeev jeha lg riha c deepu nu  jijhak b jeha riha c raat bhabhi huna dey ghr rukn da soch ..
"Bs bs us kaley gate kol rok " deepu nu rokdi boli lovleen " ohi sada ghar a .." 
"Ohh.." gate kol scooter rok  kuh sochda lovleen nu jholla franda bolea " aah layo apna jhola ..mein chalda hun .." 
"Awen chalda " hwa ch hath lehrandi lovleen apni chuni hik tey swardi boli " mein gate kholdi haan tun scoter andr kr .. kal ekethey e waps chlangey.."
"Pr bhabhi .. "jhepda jijhkda deepu bhabhi nu bhaj k gate kholdi vekh samj naa sakeya ki krey... scoter andr lya khada krda hor b jijhak gya jad usney bhabhi nu kahli khali ek kamrey wal jandi vekhya.. ekela vehrdey ch khada  sochi pay gya ki krey hun ..
"Oye deepu tun .. "ek passeyo ayi awaaz sun hairaan e reh gya pr agley e pal dudh di balti chuki andi kudi nu vekh chehkda hoyea bolea "preeti tun ..tun ethey"
"Haan mein .. sada ghr a .."deepu samney aa khadi hundi preeti b chehkdi hoyi boli" tun ethey kidan .."
"O o mein bhabhi naal ayea.." ghar ch edr udr vekhda bolea deepu
" Bhabhi naal.. ...  kehri bhabhi .." hairaan ho kuch sochdi preeti ek dum boli "tera matlab didi naal aya ..kithey a didi"
"Haan haan lovleen bhabhi nu lay k.." kamrey wal vekhda bolea  "udr nu gye.."
"Ohhhh.. "gaur naal deepu nu vekhdi preeti hsdi hoyi boli.. "mein sochea tun menu miln aya.."
"Tenu kyoun.. " bolda bolda hs pya deepu
"Kuch nyi kuch nyi .."gl bdldi boli preeti.. "ethey kyoun khada aa ja andr .. mein rasoyi ch dudh rakh k ayi."
"Nyi bs.." samj naa ayi ki jwaab devey .. tey kidar nu javey..
"Tun ruk "kahli kahli ch rasoyi wal jandi preet chehkdi hoyi boli.."mein huneu  ayi.."

"Didi nu naa dsi asin ek dujey nu jandey haan .." apney pichey andey deepu wal gardn ghuma vekhdi boli preeti
"Kyoun.." ek dum bolea deepu
"Samjeya kr .. "turdi turdi ruk deepu nu samjandi boli" didi nu nyi pta lagna chahida sadey barey.."
"Sadey barey ki.." burburanda hoyea ena  bol sakeya jad usney lovleen bhabhi nu kamrey ton bahr andi vekhya..ek dum chup kr gya..
"Tun kithey reh gya c .. "deepu kol aa khadi hundi lovleen ek dum boli "mein tenu andr udeekdi ..."
Es ton pehln ki deepu kuch bolda preeti agey nu ho lovleen nu jaffi pandi boli "Hye didi asin tuhanu saver dey udeekdey c ..tey tusi hun aye.."
"O tera jeeja sehr gya .. "preeti nu jaffi pandi lovleen deepu wal vekhdi boli "deepu eh meri nikki bhain preeti a .."
"Oh ssa ji .. " dil nu pta nyi kyoun ajeev jehi khushi hoyi jad bhabhi ney keha "deepu eh meri nikki bhain preeti a .. "mtlab preeti lovleen bhabhi di bhain a sundey e cha jeha chard gya
"Ssa ji "anjan jehi bn preeti lovleen wal vekh boli "didi eh munda kon .."
"Eh mera deor deepu ..: preeti wal vekh fer deepu wal vekhdi lovleen  us di wanh fd  boli "aa andr chal deepu tenu mummy bulandey..."
"Ji ji .. "jhatka b lga jidan purey hak tey maan naal lovleen bhabhi ney usdi wanh fad usnu andr aan lyi keha .. edr udr vekhda bhabhi dey pichey pichey turdey nu samj naa ayi kyoun preeti ney apney munh tey ungl rakh usnu chup rehn lyi keha..











" Didi eh  tuhadey viah ch  tan aya nyi c " roti banadi lovleen kol aa beithdi preeti bdey gaur naal us wal vekhdi boli " tusi kehndey o tuhada deor lagda" 
" Udon apney mammey kol rehnda c " roti baildi lovleen gardan ghuma mehar wal vekhdi boli hun ki dasdi k aps ch bol chaal nyi sadi enha naal ...

" bda sau lgda.." lovleen wal vekhdi preeti tokri ton rottia chuk thalli ch rakhdi boli " hai b sohna sunakha  jeeju wang ucha lamba ghaint.." 
"Haan oh tan hai .. " preeti di gal sun roti sekdi sekdi ek dum ruk us wal vekhdi boli"  waisey j psand a tan gal toran tere lyi " 
" Ki didi tusi b " boldi boldi sharma k dujey passey munh kr hs pyi preeti ..





"Akal tan tenu hai e nyi ... edi wadi ho gyi .." plang tey aa preeti kol beith akhn kd di boli lovleen 
" Kyoun ki hoyea " kitab ek passey rakh hairan hoyi preeti lovleen wal vekhn lgi
" Chunni  kithey a teri  hik bahr kad turi firdi." Preeti nu jhirkdi  boli lovleen " ghr ch  jwaan munda aya hoyea tey tun..."
" Fir ki hoyea ..." apni hik wal vekh laaparwah jehi ho boli preeti
" Wadey ho gye ney " chunni chuk preeti nu dindi boli lovleen "chunni lay k rakheya kr ..ki sochda hoyu deepu.." 
" Naley kehdey bda sau tey shareef munda a deepu " modeya tey chunni lay apni hik dhakdi hoyi boli preeti
" Sau shareef a tan matlab tun ... " boldi boldi preeti nu ghurdi .."jad bina chunni ton beithi gallan krdi c pta kinna bhaida  lg riha c ...ki sochda hoyu akal e nyi kudi nu .."
" Lay mundey tan khush hundey ney kudi di hik vekh vekh " hik tey chunni swaar hik bahar nu kad chehkdi hoyi boli preeti..
" Hundey hongey pr deepu edan da nyi.." hwa ch hath lehrandi lovleen preeti nu samjandi boli 
" Oye hoye bda pta  tuhanu" akhan mtka chehkdi boli preeti
"Aho pta " boldi boldi hss pyi lovleen 
" Rehn deo didi " hwa ch hath lehra lovleen di hik wal vekhdi boli preeti " mein aap vekheya akhan tikayi tuhadey mummey naap riha c " 
" Hye hye kado nee"  apni hik tey hath rakh chunni naal mummey dhakdi lovleen kahli kahli ch boli
" thori der pehlan Jad  roti khan ton baad asin beith gallan krdey c " lovleen wal vekhdi hsdi muskrandi hoyi boli preeti " udon .."

" Nyi nyi kadi b nyi .." naah ch sr hila buhey wal vekhdi burburayi lovleen 

" Majak krdi c" lovleen nu cherdi hsdi hoyi boli preeti"  us becharey ney  tuhadey wal tan ki mere wal b akh chuk k nyi vekhea .. " 
" Ohi tan ..." kuch sochdi hoyi boli lovleen  ..." mummy ji dey kehn tey  menu lay tan aya ethey ..pr pta nyi usnu sada ghr chnaga lga k nyi ..  ethey  usnu need  ayou k nyi sochdi haan ek baar jaa vekh aawaan  naley puchaan kisi cheez di lord tan nyi .." 
" Awen fikr na kro .. so gya hona .. " lovleen wal vekhdi hsdi hoyi kambl chuk apney pairan tey lay boli preeti " waisey b tusi aap keha bda sau a tuhada deor " 
" Aho haiga  .." lovleen b lmi paindi us wal vekhdi boli " kyoun " 
" Bs fer fikr na kro .." hsdi chehkdi lovleen nu cherdi boli preeti "   sau deor so jandey ney...  lucha deor hunda jis nu neend nyi andi .." 
" Eh tan hai " lamba sah lay chatt wal vekhdi kuch sochdi boli lovleen "  sadi apas ch bol chal nyi pr jad pta lga mein jaruri aana pekey ek baar b naa nhi kiti .." 
" Hye tuhadey wargi bhabhi nu kehra deor naa karu.." akhn matka sharart ch muskura boli preeti" waisey rastey ch kitey rukey b ki sida ghar .." 
"Rukna kyoun nee..."  preeti di gal sun thori hairaan hundi boli lovleen " sidey e aaye " 

"Jwaan deor nwi nwi viahi churrey ali bhabhi pichey  scoter tey beithi. " lovleen di wanh ch paye churdey nu ungln naal chankandi preeti boldi boldi chup kr gyi..
"Menu tan aap thora thora ajeev  lga " passa wat preeti wal vekhdi boli " pehli baar kisi mundey naal scootr tey beith ." 
" Dr b lga hona .. apni hik tey hath rakh lovleen wal vekhdi boli preeti " j kitey esney scooter kisi motar tey rok liya

"Motar tey kyoun  .."ek dum boli lovleen  pr jad samj ayi ki keha preeti ney ..modey tey hath mrdi  hsn lgi "kuch jyada e nyi bhokn lg pyi tun aaj kal ."
"Mein ki glt keha ehi puchea khetan wal nyi chaley gye c deor bhabhi .. " boldi boldi apna hassa rok boli preeti " mera mtlb khet dekhn .."
"Menu sab pta tun ki puchea tey kyoun puchea..." boldi boldi hs pyi  lovleen 
"Acha didi j tuhada deor sau naa ho k lucha hunda " gaur naal lovleen wal vekhdi preeti hsdi hoyi boli 
"Fer mein aana e nyi c usnaal " uchi uchi hsdi hoyi plang ton utr buhey wal jandi boli lovleen
"Kithey chaley didi .." plang tey uth beith thori hairaan hundi boli preeti.
"Kitey nyi.. "buha band kr kundi laa  mud waps andi boli lovleen " buha laan gyi .."
"Pehlan tan kdi kudi layi nyi .. "apney kol aa lmi  paindi lovleen wal vekh usnu cherdi boli preeti " ki gal dr lgda kitey deor rat nu.."
"Chup krdi k nyi "preeti nu jhirkdi lovleen akhn kad di boli .." lattu bnd kr tey so hun .. menu b bdi neend ayi a ."








"Doh minute ruk mein gram pani lay k ayi...."deepu nu nalka ged pani bharda vekh lovleen kol pyi balti  chukdi boli
"Nyi nyi ..koi nyi.." lovleen wal vekhda deepu hsn di kosis krda bolea "Mein tazey pani naal e nha "
"Nyi nyi thand a... "kahli kahli balti chuk chuleh wal jandi boli lovleen "awen thnd lg jayo ..pani grm a mein huney lay k ayi..." 


" o tollia dewin  " balti chuk preeti wal vekhdi lovleen boli"  gram pani de awaan deepu nu ...thandey pani naal e nahan lga c ..
"O bda fikar a deor da  .."akhn matkandi preeti tollia frandi boli 
"Aho haiga..tenu ki " balti chuk gussal khaney wal jandi hsdi hoyi boli lovleen 
" J kahuga pith try sabn b .." lovleen wal vekh usnu cherdi preeti hasdi chehkdi boli " awen mukerio naa.."
"Koi naa laa dayoungi... hor kuch "gardan ghuma gusalkhaney wal turi jandi lovleen boldi boldi hs pyi
"Hor kuch  " lovleen wal vekhdi akhan matkandi kuch sochdi boli preeti ".. o tuhadi mrji.."









" Hanji daso " staff room ch beithi arshi apney samney aa khadey ek bachey tey usdey naal aye mundey wal vekhdi boli
" Ji tusi rishu dey mummy pappa nu bulaya c " munda gaur naal arshi wal vekhda bolea 
"Oh haan "gaur naal rishu nu vekhdi boli arshi "beitho... esdi mummy  nyi ayi .."
"Nyi miss  mummy daddy nyi aye eh mere chahcu ney enha daa naam Inder a tusi enha naal gal kr layo" arshi wal vekhda bolea rishu 
" Ohh...."  gaur naal samney kursi tey beithey mundey wal vekhdi boli arshi " vekho ji gal eh hai  ek tan eh college ch chuttia voht krda ,tey  sharartan uston b wadh...es baar test ch b es da result kafi kharab c " 
" Ji ji .. " arshi wal vekhda ena e bol sakeya samney beitha munda hor kehnda b ki..
" Vohat e laparwah a .. " rishu wal vekhdi boli arshi "kehna tan bilkul b nyi mnda.."
"Koi na bhainji mein dasda esdi mummy nu " himmat kr bolea munda ... "agey ton koi shikyat..."
"O chachu a miss   ney.. bhainji nyi "ek dum mundey wal vekh tokda bolea rishu" miss kaho enha nu ...theek hai naa miss.."

thori jehi jhep tan gyi arshi us mundey dey munh toh bhainji sun pr jad rishu ney tokeya mundey nu hass bdi muskil rokea usney ..hairain b c ukg ch padan wala juak  kiven apney chachey nu tok riha c ..
"Ji hor koi shikyat.." samj naa ayi us mundey nu ki boley
" eni shikyatan tan laa ditia miss ney ..hun kut pwani mummy ton chachu." Us mundey wal vekhda bolea rishu..
"Ji thodi care kro es di .." gal mukandi boli arshi dr c kitey hassa e naa nikal aawey usda rishu dean galln sun ...








" Ki kehdey esdey college aley "   rishu wal vekhdi boli jaspreet 
"Kehna ki a bhabhi   bs shikaytan e shikaytan esdean .. sharartan puria, parda bilkul b nyi, tey chuttia enia..menu tan bdi shrm ayi uthey" hasda hoyea bolea inder 
" Niyana a ajay " jaspreet rishu dey sr utey hth ferdi boli " esi lyi tenu bhejea  ..j esdey peo nu bhejdi usney tan uthey e jutti lah laini c "
" Mein tan kehnda chahcu tun us miss nu apni saheli bna lay fer nyi meri koi shikyat andi.." inder wal vekh bda e masoom munh bna bolea rishu 
"Sun lay bhabhi ... tun kehndi niayana a .. gallan vekh kehriea krda .." jaspreet wal vekh bolea inder "uthey b bol bol meri beizti krwayi.."
"Theek e tan kehnda tika lay es di madam esnu b mauj ..tey tenu b mauj" chehkdi khilkhila k hsdi hoyi boli jaspreet 
"Hor ki chachu" hwa ch hath lehranda bolea rishu "hay b kinni sohni "
" Bhabi sun lay.." hsda hoyea bolea inder "  huney e esda eh haal a wada ho ki karu... nit nwi saheli lay k firaya karu.." 
"Hun chachey ton bndi nyi bhatiza e banayo" inder nu cherdi tedi akh naal vekhdi boli jaspreet
" Sachi mummy chachu sharmanda e bda c collegeey ch..." jaspreet wal vekh bolea rishu.." gal e nyi krda c "
"Meinu ki dasda .. mere ton wadh kis nu pta hona ..  "gaur naal inder wal vekhdi jaspreet akhan matka hsdi hoyi boli " 7 saal ho gye mere viah nu es ton mera ghund tan chuk nyi hoyea. Jehra bhabhi ton e sangi jayou o bahr kisi hor da ki ghund chuko.." 
" Rishu ja college di  dress bdl  lay " jaspreet bhabhi nu enj besarmi ch boldi vekh rishu nu kamrey wal bhejda bolea inder " Bhabhi tuhanu kini baar keha mere naal ajehia  gallan naa karea karo" 
" Deor naal naa kraan tan hor kis naal kraan vey" inder dean akhn ch vekhdi akhn matkandi boli " chal hun tan riahab b  nyi ethey ...hun kr lawan" 
" Bhabhi tusi b naa .. " aukha ho gya inder lyi bhabhi samney khada hona .. kahli kahli ch uthon turda bolea "  mein khetan wal gedi maar k aya"
" Bhajda kyoun a " inder nu gate wal janda vekh hsdi hoyi boli jaspreet " budhu e a munda.. " 
" Jo mrji samj layo .." bina us wal vekhey gate bahro bnd krda bolea inder 






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[kavitakhullar]

"J menu pta hunda hasptaal rukna paina mein naal chalea janda .." kuch sochda manjey di wahi tey beithda deepu lovleen wal vekhda bolea..
"Bapu ji tan saverey ehi kehndey c plastr lga k mud aana..."kuch sochdi hoyi boli lovleen.. hun kehndey"  bibi nu ek dinn rakhna hasptaal.."
"Hun fer .. kuch sochda hoye puchea deepu ney
"Aj rukna paina menu ethey.." deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen ..mummy ji ney gussey hona..ek din da keh k ayi c .."
"Nyi hundi chachi gussey .. "lovleen wal vekhda bolea deepu" keha c unha ney shyad teri bhabhi nu ek doh din rukna pwey uthey..naal e waps lay k aawin.."
"Sachi .. "ena sundey e lovleen dey dimag da boz e utr gya ..nyi tan ehi sochdi pareshaan c ek din da keh k ayi c j naa waps gyi mummy ji gussey hongey..
"Eni madi b nyi meri chachi " lovleen wal vekh hsda hoyea bolea deepu
"Bharawa dr lgda ..jad unha nu gussa anda.." deepu nu hsda vekh lovleen b hs pyi"tenu nyi pta"
"Fikr naa kro.. mein haiga naa... apey smja dayounga.." lovleen nu hausla dinda bolea deepu..
"Aho didi tusi awen fikr krdey o jad tuhada deor haiga.." deepu wal vekh hsdi hoyi boli preeti"  kyoun deepu sahi keha naa.."
"Sadey kr k tenu b.." fikr jeha krdi boli lovleen .. 
"Bhabhi edan krda mein.." kuch sochda hoyea bolea deepu.." mein.."
"Nyi nyi deepu " deepu di gal katdi boli lovleen" j  tun waps chla gya mummy ney pkka gussey ho kehna tun nyi aa sakdi c deepu naal.."
"Nyi nyi mein kehnda c .. " lovleen wal vekh bolea deepu "ethey j mera koi kam nyi... mein apney nankey gedi maar anda ..sham tak waps mud ayounga fer kal asin ekethey waps" 
"Haan haan "khush ho chehkdi boli lovleen" eh theek a... mein roti bna dindi kha k jawin..."
"Huney tan khadi a.. "manjey ton uthda bolea deepu " mein chalda fer..  sham tak waps mud ayounga.."



"Kithey reh gya tera deor didi ... "kapdey dhondi lovleen kol aa khdi ho usnu cherdi boli preeti 
"Aa jayouga sham tak ..keh k tan gya c "gate wal vekhdi boli lovleen.." koi kam c us naal"
"Nyi nyi waisey e pucheya.. " lovleen ton akhn churandi  preeti dhotey hoye kapdeya wal vekhdi boli " deo o kapdey mein chaubrey sukney paa aawaan.. tusi uni der koi hor kam.."


"Aa gya didi aa gya tera deor.. "chaubarey ton haithan utrdi preeti chehkdi hoyi boli 
"Kithey a nee " gardan ghuma gate wal vekhdi lovleen nu b jiven chaa e chard gya
"Chaubarey ton vekhya scoter tey anda pya" chehkdi gate wal vekhdi boli preeti..
"Chal tun chaa dhr lay meun b kam muka k ayi.." preeti wal vekhdi boli lovleen 
"Pehln puch tan lay cha peeni b hai k nyi" gate tey akhn tikayi preeti boli "agla nankeyo aa riha ki pta dudh malayi kha k aya hovey.. "
"Tenu jyada pta .. hsdi hoyi  lovleen apni hik tey chunni swardi boli ..

"Aini der laa tee.. "sctore khada kr apney wal deepu nu anda vekh preeti chehkdi hoyi boli bhabhi teri.. tenu kado di udeek di .."
"tun es dean gallan naa sun deepu.."hsdi hoyi modey tey chunni swardi lovleen  deepu kol andi boli " eh ds roti bnawa .."
"Nhi bhabhi roti kha k aya "manjey tey aa beithda bolea deepu..
"Keha c naa didi .. "hasdi chehkdi deepu kol e pye  dujey manjey tey beithdi preeti boli" munda nankey gya dudh malayi kha k ayou.."
"Sab theek ney nankey .." preet kol majey di wahi tey aa  beithdi puchea lovleen ney
"Haan sab theek ney .. "koi suneha aya sehro.." kuch sochda bolea deepu
"Haan kehndey sham nu plastr lgna ..saverey chutti mil jani .." lovleen ton pehln e preeti deepu wal vekhdi boli 


"Mein b chachi nu suneha bhej ditta " lovleen wal vekhda bolea deepu" bhabhi di mummy nu kal chutti milni haspatolo   hun  kal e aa hona waps "
"Eh tun bda changa kitta " ek lamba sah lay lovleen   khush hundi boli "menu fikr lgi hoyi  c kis hath suneha bhejann  ..udeekdey hony sanu.."
"Lay didi deepu dey hundey tuhanu fikr krn di ki lord .. "deepu wal vekh lovleen wal vekhdi boli preet "ena ku khiyal tan deor nu bhabhi da rakhna e painda .."
Kuch naa bolea deepu naa e lovleen pr  ek alag e alhad pn chehak vekhi lovleen ney preeti dey munh tey aj .. chaubarey chrd chrd baar utr andi   enj lga jiven deepu nu e udeekdi  c .. tey jad da deepu waps aya  cha e chard gya hoyea c preeti nu..
"Aj collegeey nyi gyi "preeti wal vekh gal bdldey hoye  puchea deepu ney..
"Nyi dil nyi kitta .. sadey ghr parhauney aye hoye ney ..eslyi aj di chutti" khilkhila k hasdi hoyi boli preeti

ajeev jehi khushi b hoyi lovleen  nu  jad usney  deepu tey preeti  nu ek dujey naal enj ghul mil gallan krdey vekhya 
"Tusi beith gallan kro dhup seko mein cha bna k " manjey ton uth khadi hundi lovleen boli " tenu e udeekdi c k aawen tey asin cha.."
"Nyi cha nyi .. peeni .. dil tan chehak uthea deepu da  bhabhi nu uth k rasoyi wal jandi vekh fer b cha lyi mukrda bolea..













"Deepu tun college ana kyoun chad ditta .." jiven e lovleen rasoyi andr gyi ek dum deepu wal vekhdi boli preeti..
"Dswi kr lyi.. ethey nankey kol rehnda c  .. ghr apney pind waps jana c .. uthey b aukha c ." Kuch sochda bolea .. "teri study kiven chal rhi ..
"Chal rhi a .  "Aukha jeha sah laindi boli preeti "pr tere jaan ton baad college ch dil nyi lagda hun .."
" Oh acha ji .. o kyoun .. "preeti wal vekh hsda hoyea bolea deepu ..". koi munda tang krda .".
"Nyi kisi mundey ney tan ki tang krna .. "hsdi hoyi boli preet" bs pta nyi kyoun..chal chad eh .. tera vohat dhanbaad college ch meri help krn lyi .."
"Lay eni ku tan .. "hsda hoyea bolea deepu. "nalley tun tan meri tor bna diti c ...."
"Ki krdi kiney e mundey mgr pye c .. kdi koi purpose marda kdi koi .. "hsdi hoyi boli preeti  "jad daseya meri deepu naal gal a .. uton tun b keh taa teri mere naal gal a fer nyi kisi ney tang kitta..nyi tan nit roz koi na koi purpose maar chithi hath ch fda dinda .."
"Fer hun tan aukha ho gya hona.."hsda hoyea bolea deepu 
"Nhi ena b nyi ek doh ney jehdey traayean mardey ney .."hsdi hoyi boli preeti "pr pta unha nu j deepu nu pta lg gya.."
"Koi na j kdi lod pyi ds dewin collegeey gedi maar jayounga.. "hik jehi fulla bolea deepu..
"Tenu meri yaad ayi kdi.." bina akh jhapkey deepu dean akhn ch vekhdi boli preet
Nyi mukrda bolea .. " dil dhardk uthea deepu da jidan bina akh jhapkey preeti ney usdean akhn ch vekhdi puchea "pind aa kam kaar e eney c .."
"Sachintun bilkul b nyi badlya.. " mayous jehi ho hsdi hoyi boli preeti
"Lay tun aap e keha c .. "preeti wal vekhda bolea deepu " sadi koi galbaat nyi bs enha mundeya nu magro lahna..drama krna."
Kuch naa boli preeti boldi b ki sahi tan keh riha c deepu
" Tenu ayi kdi meri yaad .." preeti nu chup vekh himmat kr puch e liya deepu ney
" Aho ..pr sochdi c pta nyi kadi tenu milungi b k nyi pr kal tenu apney vehrdey vekh cha chard gya .. " boldi boldi hs pyi preeti " menu lga  tun kitey menu miln aya.."

"Mein tan aap tenu dekh hairaan" preeti nu hsdi vekh deepu b hsda hoyea bolea " preeti ethey kithey .."
"Lagda ek dujey nu pehln ton jandey o .. "thalli ch chah dey gilas rakhi unha kol aa khdi unha dean gallan sundi akhir puch e liya lovleen ney
"Nyi nyi "ek dum ghabra k apney kol khadi lovleen nu vekh dono eko sah boley ..
"Gallan tan edan krdey pye c ..jiven ek dujey nu pehln ton jandey howo" manjey di wahi tey deepu kol beithdi lovleen gaur naal us wal vekhdi boli .. " tun ds deepu .. menu pta tun mere naal jooth nyi bolda" 
" Koi gal nyi sadi didi " deepu ton pehln e preeti bol pyi..
"Mein deepu nu pucheya "tun awen boldi boldi hs pyi lovleen ..
"O bhabhi asin duswi ch ekethey e pardey c .." akhir ds e ditta deepu ney..
"Sachi "chehak uthi lovleen .. 
"Pr sadi apas h koi gal nyi didi.." unha nu tokdi fer boli preeti
"Mein kad keha tuhadi koi gal" gaur naal preeti wal vekhdi boli lovleen.. " mein tan ehi puchea tusi ek dujey nu pehln ton jandey o..pr.."
"Pr ki .."ghabra k hdbdandi hoyi boli preeti
"Jiven tun ghabrayi hoyi.. dri hoyi pakka lagda tuhadi gal.." gaur naal preeti dean akhn ch vekhdi hoyi boli lovleen 
" Nyi bhabhi ajehi koi gal nyi ..bs ekethey pardey c asin..." akhir bol e pya deepu
"J tun kehnda deepu ... tan mn laindi haan" deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen " ena ku bharosa a tere tey "
Sah ch sah ayea preeti nu nhi tan didi samney   dr naal lattan e kambn lagea c usdean ..
"ah layo cha peo mein tan gallan gallan ch cha dena e bhul gyi.." deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen .." jaa nee preeti rasoyi vichon laddu chuk lya .. cha naal khandey haan "
Preeti lyi tan aap es velley didi samney behna aukha c .. kahli kahli ch uth rasoyi wal tur pyi..
"Kidan di lgi meri nikki bhain j psand a tan gal agey ..,"Kuch naa bolea deepu  sangda hoyea chah da ghut bhr  munh dujey passey kr hass pya..
"Ds b mere ton ki luko bhabhi haan teri ..j psand .." rasoyin wal vekh deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen 
"Preeti nu puch layo" pta nyi kiven deepu dey munh ton nikl gya
"Mtlab tere walo haan a .."khush ho chehak uthi lovleen ..
" Nyi bhabhi ajay viah nhi .. "lovleen ton akhn churanda bolea deepu
"Pta menu ajay viah di kon .. mein tan tuhadi gal baat..
"Ki slahan krdey ney deor bhabhi ladduan di tahlli chuki unha kol aa khadi hundi preeti hsdi hoyi boli.
"Kuch nyi deepu wal vekh preeti wal vekhdi lovleen hsdi hoyi boli "deepu kehnda bhabhi meri preeti naal gal krwa dey .."
"Mein kad" ek dum hdbda k bolea deepu 
"Mein nyi krdi es naal gal "hwa ch hath lehrandi preeti" tuhanu nyi pta didi bda akdu jeha a .."
"Koi naa samja dayoungi nyi akad daa. " preeti nu cherdi lovleen boli "Tun ds teri haan a .."
"Vehli nyi mein .." unha kol manjey tey aa beithdi preeti ladu deepu wal krdi boli.."tun awen naa didi dean gallan sun .. ladu kha.."
"Vehli nu ki.. deepu ney kehrda tere ton .." boldi boldi chup kr thalli vicho laddu chuk khandi boli lovleen.." kr dey nee haan.. bda e sau a mera deor deepu.."
"Ki didi tusi b .. "nakhra kar lovleen wal vekhdi preeti cha da ghut bhrdi boli "jis ney gal krni o tan kuch bolda nyi tusi awen sifarsha.."
"Lay b deepu teri bn gyi gal.." chehkdi hasdi lovleen deepu wal vekhdi boli .." kudi mni pyi .. bs nakhra krdi a .."
Aukha jeha ho gya deepu lyi unha kol behna pr lovleen bhabhi tey preeti dean gallan sun ..dil chehak jeha uthea.. ehi haal preeti da .. tedi akh naal deepu wal vekhdi ney akhn e jhuka layean jad usney deepu nu apney wal vekhdey vekhya..
"Tusi beith gallan kro mein roti tuk da.." manjey ton uth khadi hundi lovleen hik tey chunni swardi boli


"Tun ki daseya didi nu .. "lovleen nu rasoyi wal jandi vekh preeti deepu dey modey utey hath mardi boli..
"Mein mein ki dasna .. "thoda hairaan hunda bolea deepu "bhabhi ney puchea c ..tenu preeti psand a tan .."
"Fer tun ki keha .." bina akh jhapkey deepu wal vekhdi dharkdey dil naal  puchea preeti ney 
"Mein mein kuch nyi .." hdbda k preeti tin akhn churanda bolea deepu "bhabhi ney aap e gal bna lyi.."
"Tenu mein psand nyi.. " akhir puch e lya preeti ney "mera matlab mein sohni nyi.."
"Nyi nyi tun voht e sohni  college ch kiney mundey tere naal gal krn nu .. "preeti wal vekhda bolea deepu "mein bhabhi nu kuch nyi keha... bhabhi ney aap e gal banayi .."
"Matlab tun nyi .." deepu dean akhn ch vekhdi boli preet
" Nyi .. " preeti naal akh milan di himmat na hoyi deepu di ...Dil  tut gya preeti da deepu di naa sun pr agley e pal ek aas jehi lgi jad deepu ney gal puri kiti "nyi mein kuch nyi daseya sadey barey bhabhi nu .. oh  bs awen e .."
"Sachi sachi ds tenu kdi meri yaad nyi ayi.." bina akh jhapkey deepu wal ek aaas nal vekh puchea preeti ney..
"Nyi ."preeti dean akhn ch  vekhda bolea deepu "pr hun ayougi.."
"Kyoun.." chehak uthi preeti deepu da jwaab sun
"Pta nyi kyoun .. pr hun lgda" bolda bolda hs pya .."tenu andi c meri yaad "
"Haan kdi kdi ... pr hun lagda roz aya karugi.." chehkdi nimi nimi hsdi hoyi boli preeti
"Kyoun .." dil dhardk uthea deepu da 
"Pta nyi ..pr lagda.." deepu dean akhn ch vekhdi hsdi hoyi boli 
"Aa jaya krin miln .. " chehkda hsda hoyea bolea deepu " didi nu miln dey bahaney aa e sakdi a .."
"Nyi ji .  "Nah ch sr hila mukrdi boli preeti .. "mein kyoun aawan tun kehda menu purpose kitta.."
"Fer ayoungi .. "dil dhadak uthea deepu da ..
"Shyad ..."bull tuk akhn churnada edr udr vekhn lgi..
"Sachi .." khus hunda kilkar e utheya deepu.. hichki lay bolea "preeti tun meinu shuru ton e voht e sohni lgdi c .. aj eney dina bad mili hun tan  hor b sohni lagdi a"
" Tun b menu .. "boldi boldi shrma gyi "pr j mein purpose krdi tun sochna c ota nyi kidan di kudi aap e purpose.."

"Preeti apna ghr e dikha dey deepu nu .. "hath ch smaan fdi  lovleen  unha kolon lngdi boli..
"Nyi rehn deo mein .." samaj naa ayi deepu nu ki jwaab devey pr dil dhardk uthea usda pta nyi kyoun..

"Rehn kyoun deo sadey pind aya  .. ghato ghat bhabhi da ghr e dekh lay .. hsdi hoyi nalkey wal jandi boli lovleen "jaa nee preeti deepu nu wadey wal ghuma liya ..mein b kam muka k udr e ayi "
Kuch naa bolea wadey wal vekh nimma nimma hsda manjey ton uth khadeya deepu..
"Na ji naa mein nyi jandi tere naal .. tera ki pta meinu ekeli vekh fd lwey.." hwa ch hath lehrandi preeti akhn matkandi apney samney khadey deepu wal vekhdi boli 

"Ena b bharosa nyi mere tey.." bolda bolda hs pya deepu
"Smajya kr yaar ekeli nu tere naal jandi nu dr lagda .. "mukrdi hoyi boli preeti "apni bhabhi nu keh o dikha dindi tenu ghar.."
"Teri mrji chal rehn dey" hsda preeti wal vekh manjeybwal vekhda bolea deepu .. "mein lga aram krn ."
"Aa ja mein tan mjak krdi c .."manjey ton uth khadi hundi boli preeti
"Nyi rehn dey tun.." nakhra kr manjey tey beithda bolea deepu 
" Chal b hun "  deepu da hath fd usnu wadey wal lijandi boli chehkdi hsdi hoyi boli preeti"aa tenu apna ghr  dikhawaan..."


Nalka ged di lovleen ney jad  preeti nu deepu di wanh fd wadey wal lijandi..   tey pichey pichey hdbda k   turey jandey deepu nu vekhya hassa e nikla aya ..kinna sau a deepu apni hik tey hath  rakh pta nyi kyoun usnu deepu tey preeti nu  enj alhadpn ch turey jandey vekh sakoon jeha milia..


"Aaja drda kyoun a .. nyi kuj kehndi "wadey kol aa preeti deepu wal vekhdi boli..
"Nyi o gl nyi .." preeti kol aa khad deepu us wal  vekh  bolea "kdi sochea nyi c edan tere kol tenu miln tere ghr .."
"Pta jad da tun college chad k gya teri kini yaad ayi.. lgda nyi  c mud tenu kdi tenu mil hona..boldi boldi preeti da hichki bhareya hauka nikl aya "tere nankey pind ton pta b kitta .. pta lga tun apney ghr waps .. agey nyi padna hun ..teri sonh tere jaan ton baad ek din b dil nyi lga college ch.."
"Meinu b jad teri yaad andi .. ajeev jeha lgda  ."bina akh jhapkey preeti dean akhn ch vekhda bolea deepu "fer sochda c ..tun kehda menu chetey krdi honi .."
"Tey tey jad kal tenu apney ghr vekhya enj lgayea koi sufna vekhdi howan ... "chehkdi khush ho boli preeti " hye baba ji ney meri sun lyi.."
Mein aap.. dil dhardk uthea c tenu apney samney vekh.." preeti dean akhn ch vekhda bolea deepu

" tenu nyi lagda rabb ney sanu dubara milaya " bhawuk hundi preeti apney aap nu naa rok ski  agey wadh jaffi paa chimdb gyi  deepu naal
Yakeen nyi hoyea deepu nu preeti ney usnu jaffi paa apney wahan ch ghut liya... drdey hoye edr vekhdey  usney b preeti nu apnia wahan ch ghut liya.. enj lga jiven ruh nu sakoon mil gya hovey preeti nu apnia wahan ch ghut k ..
Ehi haal preeti da c deepu naal chimbdi apnia wahan ch ghutdi enj mehsoos krn lg pyi jiven usnu rabb mil gya hovey...

"Preeti preeti koi sanu edn vekh .. "akhir drdey dharkdey dil naal deepu edr udr vekhda bolea..
"Haan .." deepu ton vakh hundi preeti deepu da hath apney sr tey rakhdi boli "kha meri sonh mere ton dur nyi jayounga..
"Nyi janda .." dharkdey dil naal bolea deepu" oh tan aap ehi preeti nu kehn wala c .."
"Meri sonh kha k keh " aas bharea akhn naal deepubwal vekhdi boli preeti 
"Teri sonh .."preeti dey sar tey hath rakhda deepu kamb e gya .. preeti dean mottia wargia kalia kalia akhn hanjuan naal bharea..
"Ki hoyea" hauke e nikl aya deepu da preeti dey hanju vekh
"Kuj nyi khushi dey hanju a .. "apnia akhn punjdi preet mud jaffi paa deepu naal chimbdi boli.. "tenu nyi pta deepu aj mein kini khush haan.."
"Mein b" preeti nu ghut k jaffi deepu apnia akhan merchda bolea  "menu nyi pta c tun menu ena pyaar"
"Apni jaan  ton b wadh "deepu ton vakh hundi preeti khushi ch chehkdi boli .." tun mil gya hun kuj nyi chahida.."


"Wada tan bda wadda "wadey di chardwari wal vekhda bolea deepu ..
"Haan .. "pehln kafi dangr rakhey c hun bapuji ton jyada kam nyi . " deepu wal vekhdi boli preeti " asin e keha rehn deo hun jyada dangr rakhney"
"O o.. udr ki.." ek passey bney kamreya wal vekhdey puchea deepu ney..
"O tudi ala .. kamra.. "deepu di wanh fad udr nu lijandi boli preeti "pehln asin edr e rehndey c fer udr bna lya .." dujey kamrey ch oye khilarey wal vekh hsdi hoyi  boli preeti " eh naal da kamra store bna ditta jo nik suk kabad ethey.."
" Wadhiya.. " chehkda hsda hoyea bolea deepu.. " viah ton baad mauj ho jayo.. jad tun pekey ayi hoyi .. tenu jaffi juffi paan nu dil kitta .. eh kamra kam ayou.."
"Tun viah tan karwa mere naal .."chehkdi kilkardi boli preeti " tun jithey kahunga jad kahunga jaffi pa liya karungi.."
"Chalea fer andr .."kamrey andr jhatti marda deepu preeti nu cherda bolea...
"Chal.. "deepu wal vekhdi boli preeti " mein nyi mukrdi.."
"Mjak krda c .. bhabhi kdi b .. "preeti wal vekh vehrdey wal vekhda bolea deepu..
"Ek tan tun drda bda apni bhabhi ton .." deepu da hath fd kamrey andr lijandi boli   preeti  "hun da ki kehnda c .."
"Kuch nyi "apney samney khadi chehkdi akhn matkandi preeti wal vekhda bolea deepu.. dil di dhardkn wadhn lgi preeti nu enj apney kol khadi vekh ..
"Pr mein kuch kehna .. "addea chuk panjaeya bhar khadi ho  uchi hundi preeti apney bull deepu dey bulln koll lyandi boli 
"Ki.. "apney bulln dey kol aye preeti dey patley patley kambdey gulabi bulln vichon nikldey  sek ..msti ch kambdey .. besabrey hoye deepu  nu khud pta nyi lga kad usney preeti nu jaffi pa apney bull usdey bulln naal jod ditey.. ..








"Hye deepu jaa lain dey hun .."jiven e sah lain lyi dona dey bull vakh hoye deepu dean wahan h machldi preeti kasmasandi hoyi boli..
"Haan .. "keha eh pr apney bull preeti dey bull naal jod us naal chimbd e gya deepu .. jinna o preeti dey bull chumda chusda uni e usdi sarur bhri pyas wadh di jandi .. hik naal aa judey preeti dey tikhey tikhey mummey usdey ang ang nu bechain krn lgey..
"Uff deepu tun tan .. "jhatka dey deepu ton vakh ho preeti apney bulln tey hath rakh sah kabu krdi boli .. "tun tan lagda mere bull kha e janey.."
"Bs ek baar hor "bechain hoyea deepu mud preeti nu jaffi paan lyi agey nu hunda bolea .. 
"Nyi hun nyi "pichey nu hundi preeti  bahr wal vekhdi boli "gal sadi jaffi paan di hoyi c tun tan mere bull e chus lye.."
"Pta nyi ki khumari ki swaad "apney bull preeti dey bulln kol krda bolea deepu " jinna chumda uni e pyas hor.."
"Bs bs hun nyi "deepu dey bulln tey hath rakh usnu rok bahr wal jandi boli preeti "aa ja hun  .. es ton pehln k didi ethey aa sanu..."
"Ufff preeti .. "bechain hoyea deepu da bilkul b dil nyi c bahr jaan nu..
"Aa b .."buhey kol aa khad andr khadey deepu wal vekhdi boli preeti " samjeya kr awen jid nyi "
"Aa jaa naa.. "bechain besabra jeha hoyea deepu wahan failanda bolea " bs thodi der"
"Nyi hun nyi " kuch sochdi bull tukdi boli preeti " tun aaj sadey kol e rukna .. rat nu ayoungi miln .."
"Pakka.." chehkda hoyea deepu preeti kol anda bolea..."ayoungi miln"
"Haan pkka pr hun jaa lain dey .. "dil tan preeti da b nyi kr riha c jaan nu.. pr majburi c.. j didi unha nu labhdi edr aa gyi..








"Dikha taa deepu nu ghr.. "apney kol aa khadey deepu tey preeti wal vekhdi boli lovleen "kidr chaley gye c.. mein tuhanu wadey wal labhdi.."
"Wadey wal e c .. deepu nu apna purana ghar.." hik tey chunni chngi trh swaar hik lukondi preeti apney bull ghutdi boli...
"Oh mein b sochdi c wadey wal taa dikhdey nyi kidr gye .." gaur naal preeti wal vekh deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen "kidan da lga sada ghr.."
"Voht wadhiya tey wadda.. "deepu b apni ghabraat luko himmat kr loveen wal vekhda bolea.." kafi khulli jagah a .."
"Didi mein ayi ..tusi kro gallan" aukha jeha lg riha c preeti lyi didi naal akh mila gl krna  .. apney kamrey wal jandi ney ek baar b mud k naa vekhya
"Es nu ki hoyea "kahli kahli turdi apney kamrey wal jandi preeti wal vekh deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen " tun kuch keha.."
"nyi nyi mein kyoun kuch kehna " ek dum bolea deepu..
" Bni gal .." chehkdi hasdi gaur naal deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen..
" Kehri gal  bhabhi " samj tan gya c ki puchdi a bhabhi fer b anjaan bn bolea "  kehri gal.." 
" Preeti naal.." akhan mtka deepu dean akhn ch vekhdi boli lovleen
"Nyi bhabhi "sangda sharmanda vehrdey ch edr udr vekhda nimma nimma hassn lga deepu
"Chal jootha" mein aap vekhya tun preeti da hath fadeya hoyea c .."gaur naal deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen "mere ton kyoun drda mein kehrda kisi nu dasna .."
"Haan .." haan ch sr hilanda deepu muskuranda sangda edr udr vekhn lga..
"Oye sachi.. "chehkdi hoyi boli lovleen" hye kinna tez niklya  ek din ch e meri nikki bhain tika lyi .." 
" Nyi bhabhi mein tan preeti nu college time ton e psand krda c " apney wallon safayi dinda sach dsda bolea deepu " aj usney b daseya o b menu .."
"Hye sachi.. " khush ho chekdi kilkardi boli lovleen " tuhadi dona di jodi b bdi sohni lagni .." 
" Bhabhi kisi nu daseyo naa.. " apna dr dasdey bolea deepu " mera matlab pind ja k.." 
" Lay mein kyoun dasungi .. " hwa ch hath lehra hsdi chehkdi boli lovleen " ena ku bharosa rakh apni bhabhi tey.." 
" Oh tan hai ..." bhabhi nu khush ho gall krdi vekh bolea deepu " bs tusi pind ja kisi naal es barey gal nyi krni ..jad tak mein nyi kehnda..."
"Haan haan jad tun kahunga udon.." kuch sohdi chehkdi deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen "acha ds sabzi kehdri bna nii   preeti nu kehndi haan aj o banayougi tere lyi "
"Nyi nyi koi nyi .. " sangda sharmanda bolea deepu "ajay bhukh nyi "
" mein rat lyi pucheya .. ki khana " deepu wal vekh hsdi hoyi boli lovleen  "ds dewin ohi bna  "

"Kambl nyi ditta deepu nu .. "kamrey ch pye kambl nu vekh preeti wal vekhdi boli lovleen" jaa nee kambl dey aa deepu nu. thand ho gyi.. awen rat nu thand ch "
"Nyi mein nyi jana "apna kambl modeya tak lay lmi pyi preeti kol pye kambl wal vekhdi boli " menu neend ayi a .. gussa b aya usnu apney aap tey kyoun mukri oh .. ena sohna mauka c deepu nu miln da..
"Jaa dey aa bhain bn k" preeti wal vekhdi boli" lovleen " bechara raat nu thand ch.."
"Aap nyi lija sakda c .." lovleen wal vekh mukrdi hoyi boli preeti " j eni fikr a .. tusi dey ayo..tuhada b tan deor lagda." 
"Tun b naa  ... "kambl chuk burburandi bahr jandi  lovleen  preeti nu ghurdi boli "kdi koi kam .."
"Jaldi waps aa jayeo .. "plang tey uth beith preeti hsdi chehkdi  hoyi boli "awen beh deor bhabhi gallan naa marn lag payeo.. adi raat ho chli ...sona b a ..
Boli tan kuch nyi lovleen gardan ghuma us wal vekh gutt nu jhatka dey nimi nimi hsdi bhr nu nikl ayi..
Lagda so gya lattu tan bujheya hoyea ..deepu dey kamrey da hanera vekh  hath ch fdey kambl wal vekhdi lovleen buhey kol aa khada burburayi..chal koi naal kambl kol rakh dindi j thand lgi lay layouga..sochdi kamrey andr pair rakhn e lgi c k wanh bahr  kad deepu ney usnu andr khich lya.. es ton pehln kuj samjdi jaffi paa usnaal chimbd besabrey hoye deepu apney bull usdey bulln tey rakh dittey..
Kamdi drdi ghabrayi lovleen di cheek e nikl gyi.. betab bechain deepu dey bulln dey sek ney usnu andr  tak hilla k rakh  ditta.. modey fd dhaka dey usnu prey krdi cheek e pyi lovleen "ki krda deepu.."
"Bhabhi tusi.. kanna ch pyi bhabhi di awaz sun hdbanda  lovleen nu pehchanan di kosis krda hklanda hoyea bolea. "bhabhi tusi.. meinu lga.."
"Kambl den ayi c.." haklandi ghabrayi drdi kambdi hanerey ch e deepu nu kambl fda kamrey ton  enj bhaji  jiven usdey pichey koi  bhoot pay gya hovey..


"Hye rabba deepu ney eh mere naal ki" dil di dhardkn kanna ch sunayi den lgi..apney Munh  utey hath ferdi  kandh fd khad gyi.. lattan usdean kambdia soch b nyi sakdi c deepu usnaal edan di harkat.. kinna sau samjdi c usnu .. tey aj usney ... apney aap e usda hath apney bulln  tey jaa pujeya jithey thodi der pehln deepu dey bull aa judey c  .. sinhrndi hoyi kamb e gyi kinni ghut k jaffi paa us naal chimbdya c deepu..
Kdi soch b nyi sakdi c deepu us naal edan di hrkt .. kinna sau tey bholla samjdi c.. assman wal vekhdi nu samj naa ayi kidan apney kamrey ch javey .. usnu ghabrayi nu vekh j preeti ney puchea ki jwaab dayougi..apney sah kabu krdi uthey ruk edr udr vekhn lgi.. gardan ghuma usney deepu dey kamrey wal vekhya dr b c kitey bahr aa usnu fer naa fd lwey..kahli kahli apney kamrey wal jandi jandi ruk gyi.. jad usnu deepu dey kehey shabd chetey aye.. "bhabhi tusi.. mein samjheya"
Haan haan usney keha b  c bhabhi tusi... ohhh matlab o menu nyi kisi hor nu udeek...ek dum samj gyi  oh ohhh matlab deepu preeti nu udeek riha esi bhulekhey usney menu preeti samj jaffi paa bull chum 
Haan ehi gal a apney aap nu samjandi nu yakeen ho gya deepu ney preeti dey bhulekhey usnu jaffi....haan ehi hoyea..sochdi da sara e dr muk gya...  ek baar usney deepu dey kamrey wal vekhya pta nyi kyoun usdey bulln tey muskaan aa gyi..


Shukr a preeti suti pyi.. kamrey andr andi lovleen ney buha bnd kr plang tey pyi preeti wal vekh lattu bujha sukh da sah jeha lya..
Kambl lay lmi paindi dean lattan ajay b kambdia payean c .. hye kinni ghut k jaffi payi c luchey ney ..ehi sochdi ney munh b kambl naal dhak liya.. " dey ayi deepu nu" kanna ch pyi preeti di awaaz sun dil e dhadak uthea lovleen da bdi muskil naal  " haan " e niklya usdey munh vicho.. enj lga jiven preeti ney keha hivey dey ayi chummi deepu nu..
"Ki kehnda "apney munh uton kambl prey kr preeti ney kambl lay lmi pyi lovleen nu puchea..
"Kuch nhi sutta pya c mein kambl rakh waps mud ayi.." ek lamba sah laindi boli lovleen ..hun ki dsdi kini aukhi bhaj k ayi oh..
"Jga dena c.. " jad mud preeti ney puchea thodi kadakdi awaaz ch boli lovleen" so ja hun menu b son dey.."









Ekethi jehi ho  kambl ch pyi lovleen  da dil ajay b dhadak  riha c . Hye kidan wanh fd khich lya c usnu deepu ney.. chimbd e gya c lucha.. tey bull chuss.. chetey andey e bull ghut akhn meech layean lovleen ney..

"Eh kithey chli es velley .. "preeti nu hanerey ch plang ton utr buhey wal jandi vekh lovleen puchnn e  lgi c "kithey chli nee .. "pta nyi ki soch ruk gyi..pakka deepu nu miln chli .. haan haan usi nu miln chli sochdi da dil dhardk uthea .esi dey bhulekhey tan deepu ney usnu wanh fd andr khuch lya c ..
Plag tey uth beith ek baar usney buhey wal vekhya.. eni raat nu preeti deepu kol.. jwaan munda tey kudi ..nyi nyi mein bula k waps lay k andi.. j  enha ney kuj glt.. hye rabba ki krnn.. j bulan gyi .. o b changa nyi .. samj na ayi ki krey.. j tan mil k jaldi mud ayi tan theek .. nyi tan 2/4 minute baad mein aap awaaz mar laini ehi sochdi beithi preeti di udeek krn lgi..


"So gya deepu.. "poley poley pairan nal turdi preeti deepu dey manjey kol puj holi jehi boli..
"Nyi "manjey tey  uth beith hanerey ch e preeti nu pehchanan di kosis krda holi jehi bolea..
"Sorry late ho gyi .. "manjey di wahi tey beith deepu wal vekhdi boli "didi dey son ton baad e aa hona c.."
"Haan aye c bhabhi kambl den.. "hausla kr preeti wal vekhda bolea deepu sah b ayea bhabhi ney lagda preeti nu kuch nyi daseya . Nyi tan jad di bhabhi gyi dareya sah roki lma pya c ..
"Menu udeekda c "hath agey kr deepu dey hath utey rakhdi preeti usdean akhn ch vekhdi boli..
"Haan" sah niglda deepu apney eney kol beithi preeti dean akhn ch vekhda bolea 
"Mein jaldi waps jana" bull tuk deepu wal vekhdi holi jehi boli preeti "j didi uth gyi ...menu apney kol naa vekhya..."
" Haan "dharkdey dil nal preeti da hath apney hath ch fd deepu preeti di haan ch haan milanda bolea 
"Ki haan" deepu nu koi hrkat na krda.. agey naa wadh da vekh kahli kahli ch boli preeti " mein waps b jana"
"Tenu nyi pta  es velley tenu  apney kol vekh.." preeti da hath chumda buhey wal vekhda bolea .." menu yakeen c tun ayougi..:
"Aana e paina c .. "agey nu hundi preeti apney bull usdey bulln kol lyandi boli.. "keha jo c tenu..rat nu . Hun laara laa mukr tan nyi sakdi c .."
"Buha khulla a "bechain hoyea deepu apney bulln kol aye preeti dey bulln wal vekhda bolea "buha band "
Khulley buhey wal vekh preeti akhn matkandi chehkdi hoyi boli .. "chummi den ayi haan.. hor kuch nyi  jehrda buha bnd krna.." kehndi hoyi ney apney bull deepu dey bulln  jod dittey 
Ang ang ch msti bhri lehr daud gyi preeti dey bull naal bull judey e.. dona dey sah ek dujey dey munh ch ghuln lgey..
Preeti dey patley patley msti ch kambdey bulln di bechaini ney deepu da ang ang sarur ch dubo ditta.. enj lga jiven o preeti dey bull nyi sehad cht riha hovey..
Deepu dey bulln nalo apney bull vakh kr 
 sah kabu krdi hik tey hath rakh preeti khumari ch dubi deepu wal vekh khadi hundi  hoyi boli " fer pta nyi kad..chaldi hun .."

"Enj na keh" preeti da hath fd apney wal khichda hauka lay  bolea deepu
Sambhal naal ski preeti apney aap nu lehrandi hoyi deepu kol manjey tey aa digi.. akhn tarer di deepu di hik tey hath mardi boli "tun tan menu sutt e dena c j satt lg jandi.."
"Edan kidan sutt dena c .. apney kol aa lmi pyi preeti nu apnia wahan ch ghutda bolea deepu.".tenu dign dinda mein.."
"Hye sadkey jawan mein  apney deepu dey" deepu naal chumdi preeti us da matha chumdi boli.. hun tan  jaan a tun meri .."
Jhatka dey preeti nu apney thalley lmi panda deepu us upr aa usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea "voht e sohni a tun"
"Hye deepu ki krn lga tun" sar chuk khulley buhey wal vekhdi preet haklandi hichki lendi deepu da hath apney dil tey rakhdi  boli.."menu jaa lain dey vekh mera dil kinni jor di dharkda.."
Msti sarur jhatka kha ch kamb e gya deepu preeti dey dil utey hath rakh..hatheli tey saaf mehsoos ho rhi c preeti dey dil di dhardkn..
Ek baar tan msti tey dr naal khind uthi  jwaan jim kabni lay thirk uthea jad usnu ehsaas hiyea k unney deepu da hayh apney mummey  rakh lya..
Deepu tan betab ho mchl e uthea usdey dil di dhardkn preeti dey dil di ndhardkn nalo b tez ho gyi.. tikha sakth gol chotta jeha mumma us dey hath ch .. sah rok usney ek baar preeti wal vekhya adkhulia akhan naal us wal vekhdi   ney jad sangdi hoyi uston akhan churayean...msti sarur ch dubdey dey ney hath ch fd ghut lya..
"Ahhh "mchldi hoyi sisak pyi preeti jad usdey mummey nu palosdey deepu ney hath ch fd masleya.. akhn band hon lagea.. msti di ek lehar purey shareer ch daud gyi ..pr na tan usney deepu da hath prey kitta na e usnu rokeya.. 
Pola pola mumma ghutdey deepu da ang ang khumari ch dubn lga adhkhulia akhan .. bull ghut siskia kabu krdi machldi preeti nu nakhra naa krdi vekh deepu apna duja hath hik wal lijanda gardn ghuma khulley buhey wal vekhn lga
"Uffff hahh deepu holi put.. "siskardi sarhaney tey sr patkdi preeti boli "naa kr deepu jaa lain dey hun ..j didi uth gyi "
"Haan " pta nyi ki hoyea deepu nu jiven neend ton jayega hovey hath hik ton prey kr us uton utr brabr lna painda apney hath wal vekhn ..
"Kinna changa a tun deepu "passa wat deepu wal vekhdi preeti boli.. "mein ek baar keha tun koi jid nyi kiti "
"Tun b tan eni raat nu menu miln ayi.." preeti di sahan naal upr thalley hundi hikd ubaar vekh bechain ho  bolea 
" Tenu keha c rat nu ayoungi .. tan aana e paina c " deepu dey wallan ch ungln ferdi boli preeti .".tenu laara lah kidan mukr jandi.."
"Hye preeti " wahan faila preeti nu jaffi panda usnu apnia whana ch ghutda bolea deepu" ji krda tenu wahan ch ghut lwaan.."
"Ghut lay.. "chehkdi deepu naal chimbdi preeti b deepu nu apnia wahan ch ghutdi boli "..pr..
Ekeli jaffi.. pehln wang nyi.."
"Nyi nyi ..pta nyi kidan mere ton" preeti di hik wal vekhda bolea .. "hun nyi.."
"Koi naa .. "deepu da hath fd apni hik tey rakh usda munh chumdi boli preeti .." meri tan jaan b teri a.. jithey mrji hath laa lay pr upron upron e .."
Jiven preeti ney deepu da hath fd apney mummey utey rakheya ang ang deepu da fdak uthea.. pola pola mumma palosda usdey bull chumn lga.. jwaan kudi di chardi jwaani da sek gundaaz angn da nigh hr pl usnu bekabu krn lga..mummey nu palosdey usney jad apna hath preeti di kameej dey galley vichon andr paa mumma fdn di kosis kiti tbrak k deepu dey modey fd usnu apney ton vakh kr dur krdi preeti akhn trarer di boli "tenu keha c upron upron jinna mrji pr tun .."
"Haan haan "preeti nu jaffi paan lyi agey nu hunda bolea  deepu..
"Nyi ji hun nyi .." manjey ton chal maar utr usdey samney aa lak tey hath rakh boli preeti "tenu keha c .. hun mein chali"
"Ruk naa "majey tey uth beithda deepu hauka lay bolea "thodi der hor  ruk jaa naa"
"Nyi ji "buhey wal jandi preeti deepu nu tarsandi boli "jaana paina  j didi nu pta lg gya mein tere kol eni rat nu.."
"Gussey a .. "preeti dey pichey pichey anda deepu bolea..

 "tere ton gussey ho marna mein .. "buhey tey aa khad di boli preeti .."yaar eni der ho gyi tere kol ayi nu .. hun waps jana paina .."
"Teri mrji "mayous jeha ho bolea deepu..
"Hanji meri mrji "moddey uchka chehkdi hoyi boli preeti.."mera pind mera ghar meri marji..."
"Ohh acha ji "  nimma nimma hsda deepu preeti di sahan naal upr thalley hundi hik wal vekh edr udr vekhn lga 
"Jad tenu miln tere pind ayoungi .."bull tuk hasdi chehkdi boli preeti..."fer tera pind tera ghr teri marji..jo mrji krin .. mein nyi mukrdi.."
"Pakka "chehkda deepu preeti dean akahn ch vekhda bolea .. "fer tan sarey cha purey karunga.."
"Kr lawin. Jo dil krey.. "deepu wal vekh boli preeti  pr hun mein chli.. ena keh kahli kahli ch apney kamrey wal tur pyi pta c usnu j hun ruki fer deepu ney jid kr andr bula laina tey j didi uth..nyi nyi hun nyi.. naah ch hilandi preeti holi jehi buha khol poley poley kadam putt palng kol aa gyi.. sah ch sah aya shukr a didi sutti pyi..

Usnu ki pta c kambl ch jagdi lovleen usdey aan di udeek kr rhi.. uth k gyi b c usnu bulaan pr jad usney deepu tey preeti nu buhey tey khad gallan krdey vekhya.. waps mud ayi.. sakoon jeha miliya gallan e krdey ney .. kuj hor nyi..

[fundoca]

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[Pehlwan]

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[Pehlwan]

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[Anmol Sidhu]

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[kavitakhullar]

" Chachu tun ethey .. "apni college van wal janda rishu gate tey khadey inder nu vekh bhajda hoyea us kol aa khada hunda bolea " ki gal" 
"Edr naldey pind khetan ch gedi maarn gya c "  teri mummy kehndi rishu nu b lainda awin.." rishu wal vekhda bolea inder " fda basta" 
" kulfi khani a " inder dey scoter  agey aa khada hunda bolea " khilayounga" 
" Kha lawin yaar " college andr vekhda bolea inder .. akhan ch chamak aa gyi jad usney arshi nu gate wal andi vekhya ..
" Ssa ji .. hun tan nyi rishu sharartan krda " jiven e kolon lgn lgi  arshi ..ek dum kahli kahli ch bolea inder ..
" Ohhhh .."scoter tey khadey rishu wal vekh inder wal vekhdi boli arshi "kuch frk a bs edan e khiyal rakho.."
"Ji ji ..esi lyi aya c .." arshi dean akhn ch vekhda bolea inder .." mera naa inder a... tuhada.."
dil dhadak utheya arshi da jidan usdesn  akhn ch vekhdey hoye inder ney  apna naa daseya..
" Ji " ena e usdey munh ton niklya . boli kuch naa  bina akh jhapkey usdean akhn ch kuj pal vekhdi rhi..
Jaan e kad k lay gyi arshi di takni.. dil chehak uthea.."Daso naa "bdi muskil naal bolea inder..
"Bhainji .. " inder wal vekhdi hs pyi arshi ..
" Vohat sohna naa a .." arshi nu hsdi vekh inder chehkda hoyea bolea 
" Ji .. " bina kuch hor khey arshi sadak wal  nu tur gyi..
"Chal hun chachu.. "inder nu scoter naa start krda vekh kahli panda bolea rishu 
" Khad jaa yaar .."  bechain hoyea inder arshi wal vekh  bolea . Pta nyi kyoun yakeen c usnu arshi mud k jarur dekhugi ..tey jad arshi ney mud k us wal vekhya dil dhadak k munh ch aa gya .. jaan e kad  lay gya arshi dean bullian da hassa ..












Chaubrey utey smaan rakhn aye deepu da dil e dhadak utheya jad usney lovleen bhabhi nu manjey tey beh dhup sekdi  vekhya .. uston akh bacha kamrey ch smaan rakh paudiean utrn e lga c picheo ayi bhabhi di awaaz sun ruk gya.. himmat kr us wal vekhn lga pr kuch bol skey eni himmat nyi c us ch.. usdin bhabhi naal unha dey pekeyo waps aa shyad aj pehli baar usney bhabhi nu vekhya c ..


"Deepu kithey rehnda ajkal" cha e chard gya lovleen nu deepu nu chaubarey tey aya vekh .. banerey kol aa khadi hundi boli " kiney din ho gye dikhya e nyi tun .. kitey gya hoyea c .."
"Nyi nyi ethey e c bhabhi .. "jhijkda sangda akhn churanda banerey kol aa holi jehi bolea " bs khetan ch kam..." 
"Oh ..." gaur nal akhn churandey deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen "mein sochea shyad fer mamey pind  chla gya .. us din ton baad tenu aj vekhya ...."
"Tuhadi sonh bhabhi .. "minnat tarla krda haklandi awaz ch bolea deepu " bhulekhey ch tuhanu jaffi paa ho gyi c us din.."
"Koi naa galti ch bhulekha lg e janda " deepu nu vekhdi chehkdi cherdi hoyi boli lovleen .."pr bhabhi ton drda lukda kyoun .."
"Nyi bhabhi mein bs khetan ch kam..."lovleen wal vekhda bolea deepu.. " pehli baar fsal biji a .." 
" o tan hai " kuch soch nimi nimi hsdi hoyi boli lovleen " Waisey  bda tez niklya .. meri niki  bhain naal e gatti paa lyi .."
"Edan di koi gal nyi .." sangda hoyea edr udr vekhn lga deepu smj naa ayi ki jwaab devey..
"Acha ji .. "deepu wal vekh hsdi hoyi boli" kaka jidan tun jaffi payi c .. gal tan bdi agey tak wadhi hoyi a ..teri tey preeti di .."
" Nyi "bolda bolda shrma gya deepu .." pr bhabhi nu enj apney naal gallan krdi vekh skoon jeha milia usnu.. kuch soch gal bdlda hoyea bolea .."Bhabhi tuhanu gussa nyi aya c ..jad .." 

"Hye meri tan drdi di jaan nikl gyi ..  mrn jogi ho gyi eh kis ney menu fd lya  ..eh kon chimbd gya mere naal.." apni hik tey hath rakh haukey bhreya sah lendi boli lovleen " schi dra e ditta c tun menu .."
"Galti ho gyi bhabhi ...kahli kahli ch hanerey ch "apney walo safai dinda deepu...
"O tan mein samj gyi jad tun meri awaaz sun kambda hoyea  ....kuch der chup reh kuch sochdi hoyi boli lovleen "waisey ek gul puchaan .teri tey preeti di gal kithey tak agey wadhi.."
"Bs bhabhi usdin pehli baar jaffi "sangda sharmanda chaubarey ch edr udr vekhn lga
"Chal jootha.. jidan tun menu jaffi payi tey ..." boldi boldi chup kr gyi...
"Bhabhi galti ho gyi c mein preeti dey bhulekhey..  tusi naraj .. gussey ..."chahey lovleen usnaal sehaj swaa ch gal krdi pyi pr fer b pta nyi ek dr jeha usdey dil andr c usdin hoyi galti barey soch soch
" J koi hor edan di harkat krda jutti lah laini c .. pr deepu jo tun mere lyi kita ..o ehsaan mein kdi .." kuch sochdi deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen 
" Bhabhi edan kyoun kehndey o .."  lovleen wal vekh bolea deepu .. "chahey chachi sadey naal nyi boldi pr tuhanu koi tang krey..."
"Hye tun kinna changa a deepu .. j mera bs chaley .. j tai ji sadey naal boldey hundey.."boldi boldi ruk sah lendi boli lovleen "  mein aap tera rishta apni bhain preeti naal krwana c .."
"Sachi bhabhi .. "akhn ch chamak aa gyi  chehak uthea deepu 
" Haan pr ..." kuch soch nirash hundi boli lovleen "  pr tenu tan pta e a mummy ji tey tai ji di apas ch bndi nyi .. " 
" haan " kuch soch nirash mayous ho gya deepu 
" Chal koi na kosis karungi ... " mayous hoye deepu nu hausla dindi boli lovleen " shyad rabb koi rah" 
"Bhabhi j tusi .. "ek aas bhri nigah naal lovleen wal vekhda bolea deepu " mein tuhada eh ehsaan jindgi bhr .."
"Mein puri kosis karungi..." deepu wal vekh apney vehrdey wal vekhdi boli ..ek gal sachi sachi dasin ..." us raat baad ch preeti tenu miln ayi c "
"Nyi nyi .. "mukrda naah ch sr hilanda lovleen ton akhn churanda bolea deepu
"Chal jootha" uchi uchi hasdi deepu nu gaur naal vekhdi boli " kinna jooth bolda ..mein aap vekhya us raat preeti mere kolon uth k tere kol gyi c..
" Kuch naa bolea  pr dil di dhardkn wadh gyi es soch k bhabhi nu sab pta
Ek gal schi schi ds " chaubarey tey edr udr vekh deepu wal vekhdi holi jehi puchea  lovleen ney " Ghadey ton kauli tan nyi chuki" 
" Ghadey ton kauli " kuch samj nyi ayi deepu nu .. bdey gaur naal lovleen wal vekhda bolea " mein samjeya nyi tusi ki puchea .." 
" Chal rehn dey ... hor suna ki haal a " kahli kahli ch gal bdldi boli lovleen usnu khud nyi pta lga eni chakmi gal deepu nu kiven puch beithi 
" Nyi daso na ...ki puchea tusi.." bhabhi dey swaal tey uljhea deepu usnu tokda bolea 
" Menu nyi pta"  boldi boldi lovleen da hassa e nikla aya .. kahli kahli ch paudean wal jandi boli " mein chali thalley mummy ji aan waley ney....." 










" Bhabhi tusi daseya nyi " lovleen nu chaubrey tey aa dhotey kapdey sukney pandi vekh deepu manjey ton uth banerey kol anda bolea 
"Ki .. "tar tey kapdey sukney paa banrey kol aa khad lovleen deepu wal vekhdi boli .."  ki nyi daseya" 
"O tusi kal puchea c ghadey ton kauli.." gaur naal lovleen wal vekhda bolea deepu " usda matlab 
" Holi bol ..." pagal jeha" kahli kahli ch deepu nu chup karwandi chaubarey ch edr udr vekhdi boli lovleen ..
" Daso naa bhabhi .. " bilkul holi jehi bol deepu lovleen wal vekhda " meinu kal di smj nyi aa rhi...tusi ki puchea c " 
" Naa e smj awey tan changa " deepu wal vekhdi  apni hik tey chunni swardi burburayi lovleen ...
" Edan kyoun krdey o " minat tarla jeha krda bolea deepu " ek niki jehi gal nyi ds sakdey ... "
"Niki jehi gal nyi ... "deepu wal vekhdi lovleen vehrdey wal vekhdi boli  "vohat wadi gal c ..mere ton galti naal puch ho gyi ..."
" Bhabhi hun hor na uljhayo ... " lovleen wal vekhda bolea deepu " mein kal da es gal da matlab soch soch uljhea hoyea samj e nyi aa riha .."
"Tenu sachi nyi samaj ayi " boldi boldi hs pyi lovleen
" Tuhadi sonh bhabhi daso naa.." besabra jeha ho bolea deepu
" Aaj nyi fer kdi dasungi.." gal mukandi boli lovleen 
"Nyi nyi aj e daso .. nyi tan menu aaj b neend nyi aani . " fer minat tarla krda bolea deepu"  daso  b  tuhanu meri sonh.." 
" Mein puchea c .. " boldi boldi hs pyi samj naa ayi ki khey ki dasey kuch sochdi hoyi boli " mein eh puchea c teri tey preeti di gal jaffi tak e a k agey b .." 
" Nyi bs jaffi tak .." ek dum bolea deepu
" Chal jootha" tedi akh naal deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen 
" Ek doh baar bull .." akhir bol e pya deepu
" Oye hoye bda tez nikliya.." bull tuk hsdi hoyi boli lovleenn
" Bhabhi gal kyoyn badldey o " jid jehi krda bolea deepu " daso na ghadey ton kauli chukn da ki matlab"
"Uff hun mein tenu kidan samjaawaan..." kuch sochdi akhir keh e ditta lovleen ney "  jidan us raat  preeti uth k tenu milan tere kol gyi menu lga ... es layi puchea c ..." 
" Ohhh"  kuch kuch samj ayi deepu nu " ek dum bolea " nyi nyi eni agey  asin nyi  .
" Ohhh " . Nyi tan mein tan soch soch dr ..kitey deepu ney meri bhain nu " boldi boldi chup kr gyi lovleen jad samj ayi ki bolan lgi c
" Nyi nyi mein tuhanu edan da lagda" masoom jeha bn bolea deepu 
" Pehln tan nyi lagda c pr us din jidan tun meinu jaffi pa chimbdeya c uston baad thoda thoda"  Deepu nu chup vekh hass pyi  pr deepu nu chup vekh boli " gussey naa howin ena ku hassa makahual tan tere naal kr  e skdi haan "
"Haan haan kyoun nyi .. " hsn di kosis krda ek dum chup ho kuch sochda bolea deepu "ek gal puchni c... tuhanu galti naal  jaffi paa ho gyi c mere ton .. eh gal tusi jeetu verey nu tan nyi.."
" Pagal a edan di gal b koi kisi nu dasda .. naley tun kehrda jaan buz k jaffi payi c ..." deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen " saheli dey bhulekhey bhabhi napp ho gyi c.."
"Kinney changey o tusi" dil ton boz e utr gya deepu dey nyi tan drda c kitey bhabhi jeetu veerey nu naa ds devey
" Tun una e kharab.. " tedi akh naal deepu wal velhdi boli lovleen " aj tak kisi mundey nu apney wal akh chuk nyi vekhn ditta c tey tun jaffi paa  chimbd e gya mere naal tey...: 
"Kyoun mjak krdey o hun tusi " masoom jeha b deepu "Daseya tan hai galti naal.."
"Lucha .." deepu da masoom jeha munh vekh boli lovleen " mein challi hun ..kam bda pya thalley krn ala... "
"Fir kadon agoungey.." bhabhi nu jandi vekh puchea deepu ney 
" Kyoun .." gardan ghuma deepu wal vekhdi boli lovleen 
" Bs tuhadey naal gallan kr  changa lagda.." chekda khush hunda bolea deepu 
" Oh mein sochea kitey fer.." khind khinda k hasdi apni gutt nu jhatka dey pichey nu sutdi boli lovleen 
"Bhabhi tusi b naa... " bolda bolda hasda hoyea shrma gya deepu

"Kal nu jad mummy ji gurdwarey jangey .."deepu nu hsda sangda vekh chehkdi hoyi boli lovleen " changa  mein chli hun ..."

[fundoca]

Wah !!!
Jee karda tusi likhi jao likhi jao.
kamaal hi kar dendey ho.
Waiting for further updates.
Thanks

[Pehlwan]

Update plz ??

[Anmol Sidhu]

agge v likho kavita maan

[Jattt0077]

Update??

[Pehlwan]

Update ni auni hun bas ina k hi hunda ehdi story da start krke gayab

[Jattt0077]

????????????update??????

[Anmol Sidhu]

update

[Hellbond]

Eagerly waiting for update....please update mam

[Navlucha]

Kidar chali gaye Kavita lun khare krke

[Anmol Sidhu]

Update??