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Woowww. Nice update BrO. Jaya's adventures reloaded. . . Waiting for more Kuttoosan’s writing magic. Waiting madly BrO.
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Nice more updates pls im big fan of u
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Awesome update please continue
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Fantastic Update.. After a Long Time.. Kuttooson Bro.. Please Don't Stop and continue it
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(20-08-2019, 09:07 AM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: :D :D :D You find it......... :s
You are an excellent writer, very wisely wrote.
Salute to your sense of writing.
I like the way you wrote, unbeatable.
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(20-08-2019, 11:17 AM)vishuvanathan Wrote: I love to see Kiara Advani as "Jaya". She would be a perfect fit.
Her masturbation in "Lust Stories" is just superb. She is also teacher in that.
:D
You mentioned accurate things in last post about Rahim n Jaya, like a perfect reader.
Kiara Advani is best choice, everybody will agree for this, if it become a movie.... Wow..
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(24-08-2019, 03:57 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Thanks for all your comments and suggestions. From your suggestions I got idea and try to narrates my own way or includes in my idea. Sorry I can't replay on each comments.
My Limitations:
1. I am not good in English. Sometimes I don't get proper English words. May be repeat the same words in a paragraph. That time I was translate from my local language by using googl translator. May be grammar mistake also b there. But I believe; for sex everywhere in the world only one language :D :D :D
2. I am a working person. Don't get proper time to think or make proper situations for the story. If overtime duty is there, I dont get proper sleep also. So may be the update will delay. (actually before writing this story, I never think that, this much followers will come)
3. I am writing this story by typing on my android mobile. So it's little bit difficult to type and to add proper images etc. (writing on a paper is not possible)
Thank you.........
"ln this story all characters are not real. Don't cheat your partner for sex. Sex is not the last word of life. Love each other. If you love your family; you will never cheat them for sex. Before you do any wrong; think about your family, parents, children, relatives. It's my small advice." But above all you have done a great job, No words to admire exactly. Hats off
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Amazing restart...
Waiting for entry of new old character..
And seductive scenes like never before..
Must appreciate excellent writing skills..
Amazing...
Waiting for Next..
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(12-10-2020, 01:38 PM)Herbiee Wrote: Where is Jaya??? What happened to her??
Mani is still waiting for his beautiful teacher and He wants to slap on her round ass again.!! Plzz update.
Million dollars post
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(12-08-2019, 05:07 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Introduction :
Here I am trying to write a new story of a young wife named Jaya Mahesh.
Name : Jaya Mahesh
Age : 28
Height : 5'6" (168cm)
Weight : 54 kg
Measurement : 34C-26-36
Color hair : long black
Skin : fair
Shoe size : 8
Hairless body and keep her private part also without hair.
Using light shade nail polish and don't use makeup. Her lips are hard rose without lipsticks.
Loyal to her husband Mahesh Sharma and her in laws. She was the favorite teacher to her students.
Special nature : helping to anybody as she can. Love everybody.
She is a high college teacher were teaching Computer science. She normally wear saree without showing her navel and stomach area. Also hide the boob side by using safety pin. Without showing anything she was very beautiful. Her body structure increases her beauty when she wear saree.
[Image]
Images are not uploaded from my side, only paste the link here.
Story font : Times New Roman. Size : 6 (bold)
Great writing
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Brother Kuttoosan009
Plse continue this story continues
We are dying for this,
Critical condition, eagerly waiting
Hope you will give it like life saving drug.
Thanks
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Welcome back with super come back updates take time but give update like this and rocks it man
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Helping mind of Jaya.!! The Albert-Jaya adventure has begun. eagerly awaiting for ur updates Bro.
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You are inspiration to many other writers and you made all of us so well connect to Jaya character.
I would say you gifted with writing skills.
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29-04-2023, 06:59 PM
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Helping Hand. Will Albert continue this journey with Jaya. Will Jaya help him again if he create a situation again?? Waiting Jaya.!!
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