Misc. Erotica More than a walk - By dingdong66
#21
all time great story but should be continued
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#22
waiting for update
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#23
Story not complete. I remember lot more happening after this. Please complete the story.
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#24
Someone please continue this story.
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#25
Continue bro
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#26
pllease update
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#27
hot story
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#28
Please update this story
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#29
good one
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#30
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooooooooooooooooooottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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#31
please update
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#32
This story is so good...but it feels like it's not complete.
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#33
It was a great story..(didn't like the turnover that Colonel directly doing tricks with Sanjeev though tbh, but still was going great after that)
Thinking of continuing this story with the way I wished it had moved further.
Also, I ask you guys if anyone have read the remaining of the original story, please give some ideas how it actually went after that. Can develop a great continuation with that thread and inputs by you.
Lets see where it leads..
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#34
(05-05-2019, 06:47 PM)bigdonger71 Wrote: Story not complete. I remember lot more happening after this. Please complete the story.

If you remember what all happened after that, please help me in continuing this thread in great detail.
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#35
This story is soo good....please someone update it's next part...
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#36
Someone have the remaining story.
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#37
This story was great but I think all the kink was over with the introduction of Pankaj..
The colonel should have tamed her..


I will try to re-write this later....

I am already writing one... & unlike many people I like to write one at a time.
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#38
(06-04-2023, 12:37 PM)EvilStone Wrote: This story was great but I think all the kink was over with the introduction of Pankaj..
The colonel should have tamed her..


I will try to re-write this later....

I am already writing one... & unlike many people I like to write one at a time.

That would be awesome! This was my all time favorite story till they introduced Pankaj. Maybe author didn't knew how to proceed.
Keep us posted if you re-write this one. Thanks.
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#39
(25-03-2023, 01:34 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: It was a great story..(didn't like the turnover that Colonel directly doing tricks with Sanjeev though tbh, but still was going great after that)
Thinking of continuing this story with the way I wished it had moved further.
Also, I ask you guys if anyone have read the remaining of the original story, please give some ideas how it actually went after that. Can develop a great continuation with that thread and inputs by you.
Lets see where it leads..

I vaguely remember but tbh nothing interesting happens. As I remember colonel tries to put crack in their marriage by convincing Payal that Sanjeev is cheating on her. Sanjeev gets kidnap and Payal tries to save Sanjeev by allowing Colonel to have her body but then security officer arrives etc etc. I really didn't like the ending (FYI I don't even care about Pankaj part).

My recommendation would be to pick up from the end of the walk with colonel part.
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#40
(09-04-2023, 05:07 AM)bigdonger1971 Wrote: I vaguely remember but tbh nothing interesting happens. As I remember colonel tries to put crack in their marriage by convincing Payal that Sanjeev is cheating on her. Sanjeev gets kidnap and Payal tries to save Sanjeev by allowing Colonel to have her body but then security officer arrives etc etc. I really didn't like the ending (FYI I don't even care about Pankaj part).

My recommendation would be to pick up from the end of the walk with colonel part.

Sure. That ending won't be interesting at all. Its pure forced story if that happens..
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