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Adultery Bahurani
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(22-03-2023, 05:53 PM)Avishek Wrote: Kya line tha yeh ufffff  clps

Uffff Baban da shandar update!
Kanta jis tarah se apni malkin ke jism ke liye lalchi ho rahi aur Rebecca ke under ka change.... Aap hamesha acchey se show karte ho is mental change ko... Pervert me bahu ka transformation kaise bhul saktey hai? Tongue clps

Thank you Avishek ji❤
Yahi parivartan toh sabse uttejak moment hota hai Tongue
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ᴜᴩᴅᴀᴛᴇ 6 (ᴠᴀꜱɴᴀ 2 ) ᴀᴀ ɢᴀyᴀ ʜᴀɪ. ᴀʙʜɪᴛᴀᴋ ᴊɪɴʜᴏɴᴇ ᴩᴀᴅᴀ ɴᴀʜɪ ʜᴏ ᴩᴀᴅʜ ʟᴇɴᴀ.
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Shaadi ke aaj itne din ho gaye.... Par abhitak tumney mujjey apna gaon ghumke nahi dikahaya.

Chai peete huye Rebecca apne pati se boli. Dono balcony me baithkey thei. Kanta thodi der pehley hi akar chai rakhke gayi thi. Lagbhag 5 baj rahe thei. Bahaar ka nature ab aur bhi khoobsurat lag raha tha. Dur woh nadee aur aaspaas bus hariyaali.........

ᴋᴀʟ ᴇᴋ ᴜᴩᴅᴀᴛᴇ ᴀyᴇɢᴀ- ɴᴀᴛᴜʀᴇ ʟᴏᴠᴇ

Doston apna feedback dijiye. Aap sabkey comments like reps ek writer ko bahut inspiration deta hai ♥️
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Ahhhhh... Waiting....
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Pervert was my favorite, hope it was more longer. Missing it
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I can't wait for a scene of a Desi tharki old Buddha sucking and manhandling those massive soft pillowy white milkers of Rebecca. Please put a scene like that on the story.
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Part -7
Nature Love 1


Shaadi ke aaj itne din ho gaye.... Par abhitak tumney Mujhey apna gaon ghumake nahi dikahaya.

Chai peete huye Rebecca apne pati se boli. Dono balcony me baithkey thei. Kanta thodi der pehley hi akar chai rakhke gayi thi. Lagbhag 5 baj rahe thei. Bahaar ka nature ab aur bhi khoobsurat lag raha tha. Dur woh nadee aur aaspaas bus hariyaali. Saher ki or videsh ki ghutan bhari zindagi se kayi gunah accha lag raha tha Rebecca ko aisi jagah me. Bus dukh is baat ka tha ke uske karan Tarun ko apna asli ghar chorkey yahan alag rehna par raha tha. Waise toh bhi apney sasural me sabke sath khusi se rehna chahti thi. Par sasur ji ka kathor adesh ke karaan aisa na ho paya. Apna ek gown peheni hui pati ke baju me baithkey dono baatein kar rahe thei. Tabhi usne yeh bataya apne pati ko.

Tarun apni patni ke or dekhkar musukuraake bola- bus itni si baat? Abhi chaltey hai.... Main vola ko bolta hoon tangey ka intezam karey yaa fir pitaaji ke gaadi pe chalogi?

- No No.... Not... Waise nahi jana humko..... I mean mujjey....

- matlab? Kaise nahi jana?

Rebecca pati ke taraf dekhkar boli - i mean aisi walking karte huye ghoomna hai mujjko...... U know.... A evening walk or something....

- zamundar Rudranath ki bahu hokar aise khuley me bahaar niklogi? Yeh kya shobha dega tumko? (Tarun muskurakey poocha)

- oh come on..... Dont act like that...... Tum toh bikul apne father jaise baat karne lage........

- arey mai toh bus mazaak kar raha tha sweetheart.... Theek hai..... Get ready...... Main tumko aaspaas ghumakey lata hoon

- really! Main abhi change karke atti hai...

- ati hai nahi... Aati hoon

- ohhh my bad... Hihihi.. Aati hoon

Rebecca haskey chali gayi. Tarun chai peetey huye bahaar dekhne laga. Kitne dino baad lautkar aya hai woh. Lekin jaise chorkey gaya tha, aaj bhi jaise waisa hai hai sabkuch. Wahi choti choti dukaan wahi rasta wahi talab... Sabkuch..... Videsh me rehte huye bhi woh barbar yahi sab sochta tha ke kaise yahan gaon me log mehnat karke din gujartey hai aur kam paiso me bhi sukh se jeetee hai. Ab usko mauka mila hai apne logo ke liye kuch karne ka.... Apni education ko sahi kaam me lagane ka.

-I am ready!!

Apney khayaalo me kho gaya tha Tarun. Lekin peechey se awaz atey hi woh ghoom ke dekhta hai uski pyari patni puri tarah se Bengali roop me sajkey taiyaar ho gayi hai. Ek green colour ki saree aur upar se haat me kangan, galey pe mangalsutra aur kuch halkey jewellery, mathey pe sindoor aur bindi, naak me nose ring ufffffffff videsi ladki ko aise Desi Bengali roop me dekhkey pata nahi gaon ke mardo ka kya haal hone wala hai sochkey hi Tarun ke pairo ke beech kuch mehsoos hua. Lekin apne aapko samhal ke biwi ko ghurtey huye muskuraakr bola- uffffff meri akeli ki jaan lekar nahi rukna... Purey gaon ke logon ka jaan lena hai kya aapko.... Heheheyyy

- dhaat!! Tum bhi na..... Aisi bhi kuch zyada nahi hai... Bus zara sa.....

- agar tumhara yeh zara sa sajney se hi mera haal behaal ho raha... Toh puri sajney se kya hota mera? Lagta hai aaj ghar ka purana palang tut jayega....

- uffffff so naughtyyyyyyyyy u are!! Come on lets go......

Pati ka haat pakar ke Rebecca bahaar ke taraf chali gayi. Kanta se aur vola se bol gayi ke kuch hi der mein woh laut ayenge. Volaa ne bola ke woh bail gaadi ka intezam kardega par Rebecca ne manaa kar diya. Aur dono chaal padey.

Sach mein..... Gaon ka abohawa bahut hi khoobsurat hai. Charotaraf jaise hariyaali hai waise hi chotey chotey ghar jaise shova aur badaa rahe hai. Rastey me chaltey huye jinse bhi milaqaat ho jaati thi woh jhukkey pranam karte huye samney se hat jate the. Rebecca samajh gayi ke zamindar ke bahu hone ka samman hai yeh... Upar se ek videshi aurat. Gaon ke kayi aurte jo apne baccho ko lekar matki me paani lene jaa rahi thi ya wapas aa rahi thi woh bhi hairaan nazron se dekh rahe thei Gaon ki nayi bahurani bina koi gaadi bina koi pehredaar bus chaltey huye jaa rahi hai. Aajtak kabhibhi zamindar ka koibhi aise khuley me bahaar nahi nikla tha. Upar se ek aisi vilaeti lambi aurat ko pehlibaar itne samney se dekhne ka mauka mila tha unko. Unme se kayi toh turant jhukkar namastey malkin bol rahi thi. Kuch bacchey toh akar Rebecca ke pair ko bhi chukey pranam kiya. Rebecca turant unko uthakey sar pe chum leti hai.

Yeh bhi gaon ke logo ke liye ek naya manjar tha. Jis zamindar ghar mein ek samay atyachaari log rehte thei... Jahaan ke logo mein aaj bhi ahankaar kut kut ke bhara hua hai wahan ek aisi nayi sadasya aayi hai jo gaon ke baccho se itne pyaar se chum leti hai? Unsey vidaa lekar pati patni aur agey nikal jaate hai gaon ke dusrey hissey ke taraf. Peechey se Gaon ke log apni malik aur nayi malkin ko tabhibhi ghurte rehtey hai. Unme se kuch abhitak biswas nahi kar paa rahe thei... Aur kuch ke chehere pe ek mskaan thi. Aur shayad kisi kisi ka lungi ya dhoti apne aap ful gaye hongey.

Kuch dur jaane ke baad Rebeca ki naazar ek jagah par gaya aur usko pehlibaar kuch dirty dikhayi diya. Ek ajeeb sa dikhne wala admi apni fati hui lungi ko pura ka pura uthake usko muh se pakar ke peshab kar raha hai ek ped ke paas. Dekhne se pata chalta umar ho gayi uski bahut. Chehra dikh nahi raha par apney gandey harkat ke karan uska private part dikh raha. itne zor se nikal raha tha paani ke moot ki awaz in dono tak pahuch rahe thei.

- eewww... How disgusting!! (Rebecca muh bigar ke boli)

Tarun - kya hua?

Rebecca sirf ishare se Tarun ko us taraf dekhne ko bola jahan woh admi tha. Tarun ek bar dekhke fir apni biwi ko dekhte huye haskar bola - yeh! Yeh toh koi bhikari hoga.....

Rebecca - bhikh... What?

Tarun - bhikari..... I mean koi beggar hoga.....

Rebecca - jo bhi ho... How can he...... Eeew so dirty.... Aise openly

Tarun- ab woh humare tarah koi acche ghar wala koi thodi na hai ke haveli ke shandar bathroom me halka hoga hahahahhaha.... Chalo chalo.... Ignore karo yeh sab......

Tarun aur Rebecca agey bad gaye. Par jate jate ekbar Rebecca kya sochkey peechey mudkey dekhi. Woh admi tabbhi wahi khada tha aur apna kala lund jor jor se hilakey peshab ke aakhri bundey nikal taha tha. Admi ki umar toh kaafi hogi. Dur se jitna pata chal raha tha Rebecca samjhi ganda badsoorat sa chehra, Daari much sab safed hai aur sar se takla tha. Dubla patla toh tha hi upar se height bhi bahut kam. Shayad Tarun ya Rebecca ke pet ke paas hi uska mundi khatam ho jaye itna kam height...... Par body ke hisab se jaise ek part bilkul match nahi kar raha....... Aakhir aise admi ka aisa kaise........Eeewwwwww! Aakhir Rebeca yeh kyu dekh rahi? Turant apna chehra ghuma leti hai woh. Udhar ek kala ganda lund se pishab ke bundey tap tap karkey tapak rahi thi tab bhi. Aur neechey latak rahe thei kala thaili jo ab khaali ho chuka tha.

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Gaon ke is bhaag se nadee behti hai. Woh log main Village ke ekdum aakhri bhaag me aa chukey thei chalte huye. Isse agey jungle shuru hota hai. Jahan bina bandook ke aur peherey ke jana khatra ho sakta hai. Dono pati patni baat kartey huye kab itni dur aa gaye pata bhi nahi chala. Bus gaon ka sundar prakriti dekhte huye chaltey rahe. Beech beech me kuch gaonwalon se mulaqaat hui, kuch baccho ko bina kapro ke kheltey huye dekha, kuch bailgaadi ko lauttey huye dekha. Aisa kartey karte kab suraj ki kiran kam hoti gayi aur shaam badta gaya dono ko khabar bhi nahi hui. Nadee ke paas pahuch kar achanak Tarun ko rukne ko boli uski patni. Tarun thoda agey chal raha tha. Peechey mudkey dekha toh Rebecca thodi helpless look ke sath usey hi dekh rahi hai. Tarun akar apni patni se puchta hai ke kya hua? Ruk kyu gayi? Toh Rebecca aur thoda sharmaa jati hai aur apna muh neeche karkey jhijhaakte huye bolti hai- I...... I....

- kya hua? Bolo sweetheart?

- I need to..... Mujhey woh.....

Patni ko aise baat karte huye Tarun samajh jate hai ke kya problem hua hai. Woh biwi ke aur paas akar whisper karte huye bolta hai- susu karni hai? Haina?

Rebecca apne pati ke taraf dekhkar dheere dheere sir hilake haa bolti hai. Asal me gaon me ghoomne janey ke khusi se woh jaldi jaldi ready toh ho gayi thi par fresh hona bhool gayi. Halaki tab usey feel nahi hua tha. Lekin ab itni der tak ghumney ke baad usko feel hua ke zor ki pressure aayi hai. Upar se woh apney ghar me nahi.... Bahaar Gaon ke nadee ke paas hai. Apni situation se zyada woh is situation se sharmaa rahi hai. Tarun apni biwi ki pareshani ko samajhta hai aur usko normal karne kw liye bolta hai- bus.... Itni si baat? Aur isse tum aise sharma gayi? Come on honey....... U are not like other village women. Yahi kar lo naa... Usme kya hai?

- what? Here? Kya bol rahe ho?!!

- arey! Kya hua? Yahan kya problem hai..... Dekho charo taraf kitna khoobsurat environment hai..... Khula asmaan aur charo taraf hariyaali...... Shaant jagah....... Aise me halka hone ka maza hi alag hai...(Tarun muskuraakr bolta hai)

- are you mad or what? What if.... What if some one........?

- koi dekhle? Toh kya hua? Agar koi aurat hui toh alag baat hai... Aur agair gaon ka koi mard dekhe ke zamindar ki nayi bahurani aise Nature ke beech nadee ke paar baithkey apna garam paani nikal rahi toh socho becharey ka kya haal hoga heheheyyy!! Uska toh iman dagmaga jayega hahahaha (Firse hastey huye bolta hai Tarun)

- uffffff idhar meri yeh halat hai aur inko majaak karna hai.... Bolo na kya karu? Ummmmmm......

Tarun idhar udhar dekhta hai aur bolta hai - chalo merey sath... Aao

Bolkar woh apni vilayti biwi ko lekar aur thoda agey jakar ek uchi jagah pe char jata hai... Yahan aur bhi ghana jhaar hai aur charo taraf bus ped paudhey hai. Tarun Rebecca ko wahin pe le jakar aur thoda agey jakar neechey behti nadee ke paar sunsaan sa ek jagah le ata hai. Ab wahan kisike nazar me aane ka chance bahut hi kam tha. Ek toh charo taraf jhaar aur aju baju pedh(tree) aur neechey behti nadee ka paani.

- lo..... Ab araam se karlo..... Koi nahi dekhega.......(Tarun aju baju dekhkar bola)

- in here? But... But...

- ab kya hua?

- but what if snakes......!!

- arey dont worry...... Itna socho mat... Bus kuch hi time ki toh baat hai... I know this place is dirty but ab jo hai yahi hai...... Karlo... Main yahi hoon.... Jao thoda agey jakar karlo.....ab jao zyada der tak rokna sahi nahi hota.... Go

Shayad koi aur samay hota toh Rebecca aisi jagah pair rakhna bhi pasand nahi karti..... Lekin nature ka call sabkuch karne me majboor kar deta hai. Vilaeti memsaahab ko bhi majboor kar diya Gaon ke ek sunsaan jhaari wali gandi jagah jakar halka hone ko. Rebecca kuch durbaur aagey jakar thora aur neechey wali jagah ek jagah dekhkar jaldi se baith gayi. Ab jo hoga hone do..... Saap aye ya ussey bhi kahatrnak kuch...... Ab roka nahi jata.

Tarun wahan wait karte huye natura ka khoonsurti ka lupt utha raha tha ke tabhi uske kaan me sshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jaisi awaz ane lagi. Tarun ne socha toh tha ke wahan ruk kar intezar karega par biwi ke liye ek chinta bhi ho rahi thi..... Aisi jagah me sachmey saap hotey hai..... Kahin koi ek baahar akar uske paas!! Yeh sochkar aur pareshan ho gaya patidev. Tarun chaltey huye thoda agey jane laga jaahan se awaz aa rahi thi. Kuch hi samay me woh wahan pahuch bhi gaya. Tarun ne socha tha ekbar aaspaas check karkey wapas laut ayega par jo advut undescribable drisshya uske aankhon ke samney tha woh Tarun ko majboor kar diya wahin khadey rehne ko.

EK VIDESHI KHOOBSURAT LADKI APNI PEHNI HUI SAREE KO KAMAR TAK UTHAKEY BAITHI HAI. USKE GOREY NITAMBH (GAND) SAAF SAAF DIKH RAHA HAI AUR NITAMBH KE NEECHE SE ASHAANT  AUR TEZ JHARNE KI DHARA NIKALTEY HUYE ZAMEEN KO PURA BHEEGA RAHA HAI! AURAT KE YONI GUFA SE JHARNE KA NIKALNE KA SSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AWAZ SE JAISE PURA JAGAH GUNZ RAHA HAI!

Tarun koi badtameez insaan nahi hai. Ek acchey swavab ka purush hai. Lekin pehlibaar zindagi me aisa ek pal ka sakshi hokar shayad aaj pehlibaar uske under ka zamindar wala khoon khaul utha. Isse pehle na jane kitnibaar Apni premika aur bartaman biwi ke sath sambhog kar chuka hoga usne... Par aaj aise ek drisshya ne jaise sabkuch bhoola diya. Jaise aaj pehlibaar is aurat ko dekha hai usne. Khaas kar key khuley mein aisa kuch apni biwi ko karta hua dekh key pata nahi uske under ajeeb sa parivartaan aaney laga. Apni modern mem biwi ko hariyali ke beech halka hota hua dekh jaise uske pairo ke beech ek toofan uthne laga. Barbar uske under ka atyachari daku zamindar ka khoon bolney laga- kya dekh raha hai? Bus dekhta hi rehega kya? Bhool mat tu kaun hai? Kis vansh ki aulaad hai! Jaa! Agey jakar us aurat ke sath jo Karna hai kar ley... Agar mard hai toh yahan khada mat rehe... Yahi mauka hai...... Dikha de us Anrez mem ko ke Bangali khoon ki garmi kya hota hai!

Uffffff  idhar Aaj ki bahurani ko yeh sab yaad aa raha hai. Usdin jungle me jo bhi hua toh kitna charam uttejak tha. Upar se kanta ki ungli usi gulabi yoni aaspas ghum rahi.... Aur Rebecca bahurani firse kho gayi usdin ke yaadon mein.


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Ufffff Baban da gazab! Kya scene socha hai! Ab aur maza ayega agey
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Dude the best writers are the ones that have a meticulous attention to detail and can seamlessly integrate those details into the flow of the story without breaking the pace. You have all of those qualities! The way you describe Rebecca's beauty is unparalleled. Specially the sexy mix of her western genes with Bengali Desi jeweleries and sarees. Made me instantly hard just by visualizing that. My favorite part of the update was the one with the short old dirty ugly beggar. Nothing happened but a subtle sexual tension mixed in with disgust from Rebecca did wonders for me. Just fantasizing a white six feet tall Nordic goddess with humongous lactating tits, breastfeeding an ugly short dirty old beggar by sitting him on her lap and stroking his black thick cock while he sucks her milk filled soft milkers like a vaccum and mercilessly squeezes and plays with the other milky cantaloupe spraying milk everywhere; the wet dream of a kinky interracial lactation lover! I don't know if this story could have a scene like this. But the foundation of the story is unparalleled in terms of indian interracial. So much could be done with this premise and setting. I'm so excited! Finally the story is going somewhere!!!!
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(26-03-2023, 03:28 PM)Papai Wrote: Ufffff Baban da gazab! Kya scene socha hai! Ab aur maza ayega agey

Thank you very much ♥️♥️ Namaskar

(26-03-2023, 05:34 PM)Wtf99 Wrote: Dude the best writers are the ones that have a meticulous attention to detail and can seamlessly integrate those details into the flow of the story without breaking the pace. You have all of those qualities! The way you describe Rebecca's beauty is unparalleled. Specially the sexy mix of her western genes with Bengali Desi jeweleries and sarees. Made me instantly hard just by visualizing that. My favorite part of the update was the one with the short old dirty ugly beggar. Nothing happened but a subtle sexual tension mixed in with disgust from Rebecca did wonders for me. Just fantasizing a white six feet tall Nordic goddess with humongous lactating tits, breastfeeding an ugly short dirty old beggar by sitting him on her lap and stroking his black thick cock while he sucks her milk filled soft milkers like a vaccum and mercilessly squeezes and plays with the other milky cantaloupe spraying milk everywhere; the wet dream of a kinky interracial lactation lover! I don't know if this story could have a scene like this. But the foundation of the story is unparalleled in terms of indian interracial. So much could be done with this premise and setting. I'm so excited! Finally the story is going somewhere!!!!

Waah!! Aise comment padkey toh writer ka bhi halat kharab ho jaye Tongue Big Grin aise sexy hott comments padkey sachme accha lagta hai  Namaskar

Apki fantasy bahut hi kinky hai. Aapko agar lactating fantasy pasand hai toh aap meri story Bhookh padh sakte hai. Usme koi old man nahi hai par asha karta hoon aapko pasand aa sakta hai. And ya.... Meri 1st story Hawas ki Aag ke page 16 & 17 mein aisa kuch scene hai. Agar aapko wahi part parke maza lena ho toh le sakte hai. Aur accha lagey toh comment like reps dena ♥️
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ᴅᴏꜱᴛᴏɴ ɴᴀyᴀ ᴜᴩᴅᴀᴛᴇ ᴀᴀ ɢᴀyᴀ ʜᴀɪ. ᴩᴀᴅʜᴋᴇy ᴍᴀᴢᴀ ʟɪᴊɪyᴇ ᴀᴜʀ ᴄᴏᴍᴍᴇᴛ ᴋᴀʀɴᴀ♥️
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Ahhhhhhh fuck!! Wahi puraney wale Baban laut aya hai. Slowly jo build up de rahe ho uffffff awesome dada! yourock clps
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Uffff yeh past aur present ke scenes ko eksath mix karke present karna koi aap se seekhey. Uffff bhookh ho ya Bengali stories!!
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hot update bro...
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(26-03-2023, 09:53 PM)Baban Wrote: ᴅᴏꜱᴛᴏɴ ɴᴀyᴀ ᴜᴩᴅᴀᴛᴇ ᴀᴀ ɢᴀyᴀ ʜᴀɪ. ᴩᴀᴅʜᴋᴇy ᴍᴀᴢᴀ ʟɪᴊɪyᴇ ᴀᴜʀ ᴄᴏᴍᴍᴇᴛ ᴋᴀʀɴᴀ♥️

Next update jaldi lana dada. Waiting eagerly.
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Great bro!! In one word Awesome....the build up, the sequence of event, depiction of thoughts, mixing logical rational along with fantasy...i guess i can keep on writing or using adjectives....great build-up you are doing....distributing the erotic capsules in a very controlled manner which helps reader glued to the story.....DARUN....thank you taking out time and entertaining us....
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(27-03-2023, 01:14 AM)Avishek Wrote: Ahhhhhhh fuck!! Wahi puraney wale Baban laut aya hai. Slowly jo build up de rahe ho uffffff awesome dada! yourock clps

Thank you Avishek♥️♥️ Namaskar


(27-03-2023, 07:28 AM)exbiixossip2 Wrote: hot update bro...

Thanks♥️

(27-03-2023, 12:16 PM)Papai Wrote: Next update jaldi lana dada. Waiting eagerly.

Will try

(27-03-2023, 12:40 PM)Mande Wrote: Great bro!! In one word Awesome....the build up, the sequence of event, depiction of thoughts, mixing logical rational along with fantasy...i guess i can keep on writing or using adjectives....great build-up you are doing....distributing the erotic capsules in a very controlled manner which helps reader glued to the story.....DARUN....thank you taking out time and entertaining us....

Thank you very much Mande♥️♥️
Its my pleasure  Namaskar

Aise comment pakar sachme accha lagta hai. 
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Baban dada main kareeb kareeb 15 saalon se stories ka fan raha hun jab net pe sites aur forms change hote rahe, itne saalon mein mushkil se koi writer raha jisne itne sarre behetarin stories leekhe aur most importantly COMPLETE ke, jawab nahi dada aapka
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(29-03-2023, 12:40 PM)Teebone1985 Wrote: Baban dada main kareeb kareeb 15 saalon se stories ka fan raha hun jab net pe sites aur forms change hote rahe, itne saalon mein mushkil se koi writer raha jisne itne sarre behetarin stories leekhe aur most importantly COMPLETE ke, jawab nahi dada aapka

Dil se dhanyabad aapko ❤ Namaskar

Aap jaise pathak sath me hote hai tab hi yeh likhne ka josh ata hai. But don't know isbar is story se zyada reader kyu nahi jud rahe? Zyada comments nahi aa rahe..... Bus aap kuch pyare pathak sath hai.

Main baaki readers ko bolunga jo bhi padh rahe hai woh bhi comments karey. ❤❤
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