[hfmwife]

Absolutely wonderful ❤️, incredibly fantastic writing

[Farjana Mim]

Jabardast update, bahut bahut shandar aur mast writing

[Vampire]

Outstanding and stunning update ❤️

[Threesome]

Such a fantastic update! Bahut badhiya, bahut hi shandar, bahut accha likha

[THE EVIL]

Awesome update hai ye boss just awesome.

Aur ek lajavab update...

Nice update

aur ek lajawab update! bahut bahut acha tharika se likha isn kahaani ko aapne yaar. clp); clp); clp);

Ekdom jabardast update! bahut bahut shandaar build up.

Absolutely wonderful update! Super excellent narrations! Slow and steady seduction is really very much erotic and exciting.

superb! mast aur bahut bahut shandar update

bahut bahut shandar aur jabardast update!

ekdom super excellent update dala aapne Evil yaar,bahut bahut shandar writing

Fantastic update! ekdom mind blowing writing

Wonderful update! bahut hi mast,bahut hi jabardast likha

Great going! bahut bahut mast likhte hain aapne bhai yr):

superb! jabardast aur mast update

Absolutely extraordinary and superb update! clp); clp); clp);

Thanks!

[THE EVIL]

Excellent update!

super exciting update! ekdom kamaal ka kahaani

Another fantastic and excellent update! Thanks a lot for writing such kind of excellent story.

itni thoughtful update kaisa likha aapne yaar? bahut bahut shandar update dala aapne.

Ekdom lajawab aur jabardast update

What a mind blowing and excellent update!

ekdom super exciting update

बिल्कुल अद्भुत और रोमांचक अपडेट!

Absolutely blockbuster and rocking update

lajawab aur jabardast update

ops! kia likhte hain aapne yaar,ekdom lajawab aur jackass yr): yr): yr):

Thanks!

[pinkbaby]

Evil bhai its a good start with a good theme.

Please carry on with your special style of writing dear.

Thanks for entertaining us all.

[THE EVIL]

ekdom fataka update!

just superb! You are really great!

Absolutely wonderful and exciting update! Mind blowing writing and fantastic description.

wah!wah!wah! bahut badhiya update! lajawab aur mast

Absolutely wonderful update! Your great writing is full of excitement and eroticism

bahut khoob yaar,bahut acha likha aapne yaar,

What a mind blowing and sensational update it is! Just awesome and amazing story.

Absolutely terrific story! What a fantastic writer you are dear!

Kyaaaaa faadu update deya h evil bhai
Legendary stuff!!!!!  clp);

super excellent ek lajawab kahaani hain ye! bahut khoob!

bahut bahut lajawab aur mast update

jabardast aur mast update,bahut hi shandaar writings!

kia ek dashu update hai ye! bahut bahut mast likha

vah!vah!vah! yaar, bahut bahut maja agaya is kahaani padhke,
superb, wonderful, excxellent kahaani,

bahut bahut mast, zabardsast aur damaka kahaani clp); clp); clp);

ekdom jackass aur lajawab story! bahut bahut acha update! agla update ki liye intizar

What a classic  writer you are dear! Your writing is extraordinary and outstanding!

WONDERFUL UPDATE

lajawab aur awesome update

bahut bahut mast aur jabardast update! eisa hi likhte raho yaar

outstanding and outclass update

ekdom gajab aur lajawab update

super hot and also super sensational update

Dashing update, lajawab story writing, awesome build up

Absolutely fantastic update, very nice story, marvelous writing

Bahut badhiya update, lajawab story, fantastic theme

Absolutely well thought writing! Super excellent descriptions

Absolutely wonderful and stunning update ❤️  Your every update increases curiosity for the next update

chamatkar update! lajawab likha,ekdom mast build up

Thanks!

[THE EVIL]

bahut bahut mast update,ekdom super hot writings!

superb! bahut hi shandar aur behad hi mast update! clp);

What a great update! Your great writing is really very much pleasurable and interesting! yr):

What a fantastic and mind blowing update! You are really an outclass writer friend. clp); clp); clp);

Thanks!

[THE EVIL]

Absolutely amazing!!!
The setup is done.... .muskaan ko kaise patayega raghu!!

jabardast update! bahut mast kahaani,bahut hi lajawab aur faddu writings!

ekdom kamaal ka story! bahut hi shandar aur chamatkar theme,bahut acha laga padhke,

Amazing update! ekdom kamaal ka writing style!

What a magnificent update! Just marvelous and outstanding story! clp); clp); clp);

jabardast aur lajawab update! ekdom full masti aya is kahaani padhke!

wah!wah! superb!! mast aur faddu update

wow! super  excellent update!! ekdom lajawab tharika se is kahaani likha aapne yaar, bahut khoob

Amazing and excellent update!

kamaal ka update

Good! Nice! Lajawab aur mast update!

Good! Nice! Lajawab aur mast update!

Thanks!

[THE EVIL]

ekdom sensational update! bahut khoob,bahut bahut acha kahaani clp); 

wah! kya likhte hai aapne yaar! ekdom superb aur mast update! bahut hi jabardast kahaani,bahut bahut acha likha clp); clp); clp);

mast update!outstanding story writing

Super excellent and fantastic update

chamatkar update

shandaar,kamaal aur lajawab update

Awesome update

My super star writer!

Thanks!

[THE EVIL]

Stunning and outclass update!

Great going brother, awesome and amazing update

Waiting

Superb! Awesome update!

Ekdum lajawab aur dashing update

Fantastic update! Absolutely stunning

Kia gajab aur garam kahaani hai ye! Bahut badhiya kahaani! Bahut khoob!bahut accha likha yaar

Super excellent story! Bahut khoob, ekdum fatafati aur fataka writing!

Absolutely wonderful ❤️, incredibly fantastic writing

Jabardast update, bahut bahut shandar aur mast writing

Outstanding and stunning update ❤️

Such a fantastic update! Bahut badhiya, bahut hi shandar, bahut accha likha

Thanks!

[THE EVIL]

Evil bhai its a good start with a good theme.

Please carry on with your special style of writing dear.

Thanks for entertaining us all.

Thank you sir! It's an honour, being appreciated by a legend! Have always closely followed & inspired by your stories.

[THE EVIL]

Part 08

Soch men dubi huwi muskan anjane aur bekhayli men bol padti hai...

Muskan..chiii huh!!

Muskan jo apni soch men kuch zyada hi kho gayi thi apne shohar ki pukarne se hosh men ati hai. O dekhti hai uska shohar uske sath foreplay shuru kar chuka tha aur apna lund pakde dalne ke liye ready tha. Muskan apne shohar ko dekhti hai jo use pyar se dekh raha tha na koi ganda word use kiye aur na koi use zabardsti krte huwe bas puri tarha ek pyare shohar ki tarha nazukta se use treat kr raha tha. Dono ke bich age ek romantic sex hota hai aur fir dono gehri nind men sojate hain.

Agli subha azam tayar hokar breakfast krneke bad office chala jata hai aur muskan apne usual routine ke sath fresh hokar bahar hall men tv dekhne baithti hai. Dopehr tak kuch khas nahi hota. Sab workers khana khane chale jate hain. Wahin muskan jo apna lunch krke apne bedroom men baithi huwi thi use kal ka scene yad ata hai jab o upar gayi thi to usne kya dekha tha.

Muskan ke liye utna asan nahi tha ke o aise incident ko yun hi bhul jaye akhir kar o ek simple si shareef hayadar housewife thi. Muskan lakh koshish kar rahi thi ke uske zehan o chiz dubara na aye lekin filhaal uski koshish nakaam horhi thi.

O jhat se uthti hai aur hall se hote huwe o main door se bahar ati hai aur seediyon ki taraf dekhte huwe sochti hai kya aaj bhi o aise hi batien kar raha hoga. Utni gandi batien apni biwi se bhala kon karta hai. Pata nahi kyun lekin muskan ke pair seediyon se hote huwe upar chal padte hain. Upar pohnchne ke bad use aaj kal jaisi awazen nahi arhi thi fir bhi o usi room tak chali jati hai aur dhire se andr dekhti hai lekin aaj wahan koi nahi tha.

Muskan..chalo acha hai kal ki tarha gandi batien to nahi sunni pad rahi aaj...



Muskan fir niche chali jati hai aur apne bedroom men jakar aram krti hai. Dopehr se fir sham hojati hai. Raat men khane ke bad bedroom men muskan kal ke incident ke bad se apne shohar ke sath sex romantically enjoy kar rahi thi. Jaise uske andr uske shohar ke liye aur pyar umad aya ho. 2-3 din yun hi guzar jate hain. Isi bich ghar ka kam ache se chal raha tha.

Uske gale din dopehr ke waqt sare mazdur khane jachuke the aur gahrme muskan khane ke bad bahar hi hall men baithi huwi tv dekh rahi thi tabhi use kuch khayal ata hai aur o tv band krke main door open krke bahar ati hai aur seediyan chadne lagti hai. Uski dhadkne tez hojati hain jab o upar pohnchne ke bad usdin ki tarha awazen sunayi deti hain. O apne kadam badhakar usi room ki taraf chali jati hai bilkul bina awaz ke. Nazdik pohchte hi...

Raghu...kamla tu jo mera lauda tere mun lekr chusti haii naa...maza ajata hai...

Kamla...dhatt o to aap zabrdsti karwate hain...

Raghu...lekin sasuri teri burr to main zabardsti nahi pelta na...

Aisi sab batien muskan ko room ke andr se sunayi de rahi thi. Muskan jo itni hayadar shareef khubsurt jawan housewife hai usko kya sujha hai ke o yahan aisi batien sunne ayi thi. Halanki o isbar andr nahi jhank rahi thi bas batien sun rahi thi.

Raghu...kamla mera man kar raha hai main abhi udr aun aur teri burr pel dun...dekh to sahi kaise mera lauda fudak raha hai...

Muskan man men...chiii ganda admi kahin kaa...



Muskan jo sirf sun rahi thi lekin nahi dekh rahi thi ke raghu uski patni ko jo dikha raha hai.

Raghu...dekh kamla mera lauda sujh sa gaya hai teri bur ki yad me...

Kamla...aji to use shant kar lijye na..

Raghu...nahi kamla usko barbad nahi krna use to teri bur men dalkr ek aur bacha paida krna hai...

Muskan ye sunkar apne mun par hath rakhti hai...

Kamla..dhatt 7 bachon se man nahi bhara apka...

Raghu...arey kamla mera bas chale to teri bur se 50 bache paida karwa lun...

Muskan sunkar hairan hojati hai raghu ki bat..

Muskan...bapre ye insaan hai ya haiwan kaisi batien kar raha hai ye jaise biwi nahi bache paida krneki machine ho...

Kamla...hahahah aap bilkul pagal hain...

Raghu...chal kamla main rakhta hun sabke aneka time hogya. 2 din bad phone krunga...

Muskan jaldi si dabe paun wahan se nikal leti hai aur fatafat seediyan utrte huwe gharme jakar sida bedroom chali jati hai aur bed par let jati hai.

Muskan...ganda admi kahin ka. Kitne gande lafz istimal kar raha tha. Chii. Aur uski biwi bhi lagta hai waisi hi hai use bhi uske shohar ke gandi baton ka bura nahi lagta hai shayd. Mujhe wahan nahi jana chahiye itni gandi batien chii main nahi jaungi fir udr...



Muskan fir so jati hai. Agle ek hafta muskan us chiz ko avoid krti hai. Akhir o ek hayadar housewife thi usko ye sab shobha nahi deta tha yahi sab sochkr o pura hafta wahan upr nahi jati. Fir ek hafte baad jab sab kuch normal sa hogya tha uske agle din raat men jab sab workers adha ghnte pehle nikal rahe the to raghu wahin kam krneka bolta hai jise janki ne muskan ko bataya tha jate huwe. Muskan ko shak hota hai raghu kam ke bahane kahin apni biwi ko call krke wahi sari chizen to nahi krneka soch raha.

Sab workers ke janeke bad muskan dabe paun upar chali jati hai aur uska shak sahi niklta hai. Raghu jisko idea nahi tha ke uska karyakarm muskan kitne din se dekh rahi hai. O to yahi sochkr baitha tha ke ye sahab memsab yahan thodi na dopehr ya raat men ayenge.

Muskan jab wahan pohnchti hai to raghu ki wahin gandi batien uski patni ke sath chal rahi thi jisse muskan ko zyada surprise nahi horha tha kyunke o kafi din se o sun rahi thi....

Raghu...kamla mujhe teri burr dekhni haii..

Kamla...pagal hain ye to earphone dalkr bat kr rahi hun ye nahi hoga pata hai kahan akr bar kr rahi hun...

Raghu...sasuri dikha de mera lauda fudak raha hai...

Kamla ab apni saree aur peticot uthakar baith jati hai aur camera apni chut ki taraf krti hai. Dono ke mobile hi chinawale the camera ki quality se hi pata chal raha tha.

Raghu...ye huwi na bat sasura ka nati...kamla terii burrrr....

Muskan jo tabse deewar ke piche khadi sun rahi thi pata nahi use kya sujhta hai aur o andr dhire se jhankti hai to o dekhti hai raghu ne jo mobile pakda tha usme uski biwi bilkul camera ke samne apni chut dikha rahi thi. O dekhti hai ke raghu ki tarha hi o bhi kali thi chut to uski bilkul kisi gufa ki tarha lag rahi thi. Raghu ke lambe kale laude ne drilling aisi ki thi uski patni ki ke puri ki puri gufa bani huwi thi wahan.

Muskan ki nazar sukhe gale ke sath raghu ke laude par jati hai jo o bhi uski patni ko dikhanr ke liye mobile ke samne kiye huwe tha. Andhere ki waja se aur mobile ki light ki waja se muskan ko raghu ka lauda aur kala dikh raha tha jo is waqt kisi straight dande ki tarha khada tha.



Raghu...kamlaaa ab ek kakdi le aur mujhe dikha main teri burr kaise pelta hun mere laude se..

Kamla...nahi nahi ye kaisi batien kar rahe hain aap...bachon ko awaz chali jayegi...

Raghu...dikha de kamla o nahi sunenge...

Muskan ka ye sab dekh aur sunkar gala sukh gaya tha. Usne kabhi nahi socha tha ke usko ye sab bhi apni shadishuda zindagi men dekhna padega. Fir o dekhti hai ke kamla ek kakdi leti hai aur apni gufa jaisi chut men ghusati hai jo asani se chali bhi jati hai...

Raghu...kamlaa dekh teri bur makhan jaise us kakdi ko kaise kha gayi hahaha...

Kamla ab us kakdi ko apni chut men andr bahar krne lagti hai aur muskan ki nazar wahin thi. Uske samne aisa scene chal raha tha jo usne apni zindagi men kabhi nahi dekha tha. Kamla us kakdi ko andr bahar krne men lagi huwi thi.

Raghu...kya main tujhe aise pelta hun sasuri...

Kamla..nahiii..

Raghu...to fir?? Kamla mujhe pata hai mere hatiyar aur us kakdi ka koi muakable nahi lekin tu ye samjh ke main tujhe is waqt pel raha hun fir dekh hahaha...

Hathiyar shabd sunkar muskan jaise flashback men chali jati hai jab raghu ne usi hathiyar ki bat uske sath ki thi..

"memsab main na ache achon ko behaal kar deta hun apne hathiyar se..."

Muskan sochne lagti hai ke mazdur apne konse hathiyar ki bat usdin kar raha tha!!!

"o aisa hatiyar hai us jaisa apke pati ke pas hona namumkin hai..."

Raghu ne kaise uske itni gandi double meaning bat kr lin aur usko pata bhi nahi chala tha. Raghu ne use apne kale lambe laude jaisa muskan ke shohar ke pas na honeki ki bhi bat ki thi jo muskan ko ab samjh arhi thi. Usko yakeen nahi horha tha ke ganda sa adhedu umar ka mazdur uske sath itni gandi double meaning bat kr chuka hai aur use pata bhi nahi chala...

"Ahhhh aji bass ab"

Muskan apne khayalon se bahar ate huwe andr dekhti hai jahan raghu ki patni mobile apni chut men tezi se kakdi andr bahar kar rahi thi wahin raghu bhi apna kala lauda hilaye jarha tha.

Raghu...kar kar kamla mat ruk ab aur tezi se chod us kakdi se apni burr ko...

Kamla apni raftar badhati hai jise dekh muskan ka dil zoron se dhadakne lagta hai aur uske paseene chootne lagte hain. Camera quality halanki bekar thi fir bhi muskan saaf dekh sakti thi ke o awrat kis raftar se o kakdi apni chut men andr bahar kar rahi thi. Muskan ke hath anjane men kampte huwe ab niche chale jate hain aisi chiz krne jo muskan ne apni puri zindagi men nahi kiya tha.

Itna intensity ke sath agar ye call par bat krte huwe kar rahe hain to asal men kaise krte honge!!! Andaza bhi lagana mushkil hai. Muskan ke gore hath ab niche chale jate hain andr ka hot scene dekhte huwe halanki usko is baat ka andaza nahi tha o to bas andr dekhe jarhi thi bina khud par dhayan diye.

Muskan apna ek gora hath usne pehne huwe dress ke upar se hi uski shadishuda chut par le jati hai.



Uske liye ye pehli baar tha ke o aisa kuch kar rahi thi. Andr raghu apni patni kamla ke is raftar se kakdi apni chut men andr bahar krne se o bhi apna kala lauda thoda tezi se hilane lagta hai. Uska yun hilana aur uska lauda bade hi khumkhar lag rahe the.

Ab situation yahan ye thi ke raghu jo muskan ke nazdik jane ke ek bahana nahi chorta tha use khud ahsas nahi tha ke is waqt jab apna lauda bahar nikal kar baithkr hilaye jarha hai use live khud muskan dekh rahi hai aur muskan jise raghu se ghin si ati thi use hi o is waqt apna lauda hilate huwe dekhkar anjane men hi sahi apni chut sehla rahi thi. Dono hi ekdusre ke kartuton se anjan the is waqt.

Tabhi phone men raghu ki patni kamla itni der kakdi se chudte huwe jhad jati hai jise dekh raghu bhi ekdum se jhadne lagte hai. Uske kale lambe laude se gadha safed mani andha dhun niklne lagta hai jise dekh muskan ko ghin si ati hai lekin o notice krti hai ke kitna sara mani nikal kar raha tha ab tak. Jhadne ke bad raghu wahin mobile side men rakhkr let sa jata hai. Muskan thoda hosh men ate huwe khud ke hath ko niche pati hai jise dekh usko khud yakeen nahi horha tha ke kya o sochme ye dekh kar turn on huwi thi!!! Kya ye shobha deta hai ek shareef khandan ke shadishuda jawan awrat ko??

Muskan fir dabe paun jaldi se niche bhag jati hai. O gharka door open kar rahi thi ke tabhi azam apni gadi lekr ghar ata hai muskan ko bhar pakar...

Azam...arey muskan kya huwa bahar kya kar rahi ho??

Ab muskan kya batati ke o is waqt kya dekhkar arhi hai. Usne kya kya dekh liya hai. Muskan ko upar se paseena bhi aya huwa tha upar utni der rukne ki waja se.

Muskan...umm oo aaa main naa idr hi tehal rahii thi...



Muskan kisi na kisi tarha jhut bol deti hai lekin kyun? Akhir kyun o jhut bol rahi thi apne hi shohar se!? Kyun o bata nahi deti azam ko ke o pichle 2-3 hafton se kya dekh rahi hai. Kya itni gambhir baat apne shohar se chupana sahi rahega? Ye sab sawal filhaal muskan ke dimag men nahi aye the o to situation ko tackle krte huwe jhut bol chuke thi azam se...

Azam..haha kya muskan ye konsa waqt hai tehlne ke liye aur idr andhera bhi to dekho kitna hai. Agar tehlna hi hai to khana khakr chalte hain kuch der tehlne ke liye. Main to bolta hun hum dono ye roz ka rakh leta hain, kya bolti ho?

Muskan...haa ji ji ye bhi thik hai...

Azam...hmm thik hai ab chalo andr bhuk bhi lag rahi hai...

Muskan...ha chaliye...

Jab dono miya biwi ghar ke andr chale jate hain to seediyon ke bilkul upar raghu khada tha jo deewar ke sahare chupa huwa th.

Raghu...ye tehal rahi thi?? Kahin isne mujhe dekh to nahi liya o sab krte huwe!!! Nahi nahi agar dekha hota to ab tak main jail men hota. Waisi tikhi mirchi hai o...

Raghu fir chala jata hai wahan se. Idr muskan aur raghu thodi der baad dinner krke hall men tv dekhne baith jate hain sath men idr udr ki batien krte huwe....kuch adhe ghnte baad...

Azam...hmm to chalen tehlne??

Muskan...aap itna utsah men kyun hain tehlne janeke liye??

Azam...kyunke meri biwi ko tehlneka naya naya shauk chada hai isliye hahahaha...

Muskan...aisa kuch nahi hai main to bas aise hi...

Azam..arey main to mazak kar raha tha. Asal men usdin main aur asif jab gaye the na jogging ke liye kya fresh feel huwa tha. Khaneke bad rat men tehlneka maza hi alag hai.

Muskan...lekin itni raat men jana sahi rahega.??

Azam..arey to tum konsa akeli jarhi ho..main bhi to hun na sath aur to aur idr ki locality ka pata hai na tumhen lights sab taraf hain uska bhi problem nahi. Baki stores sab chalu hi rehti hain. Bas takriban adha ghnta walking krenge fir wapas ajaya krenge. Dekhna tum kitna fresh feel krogi aur nind bhi kitni achi ayegi tumhen..

Muskan..thik hai ab aap bol rahe hain to...

Azam..chalo fir chalte hain aaj se hi shurwat krte hain..

Muskan...aaj se???



Azam..haan ha kyun nahi?

Muskan...hmm thik hai...

Fir dono shohar biwi door lock krke nikal padte hain tehlneke liye. Batien krte huwe tehlne men muskan bhi ab acha lag raha tha kyunke o usually zyadatar gharmen rehti hai to uske liye ye thoda refreshing tha. Dono batien krte huwe hansi mazak krte huwe chale jarhe the. Kuch 1 km chalneke bad...

Muskan...ab chalen wapas kafi dur agye hain hum..

Azam..dur hahaha? Usdin pata hai main aur asif isse dugna age nikal gaye the...

Muskan...nahi nahi main utna nahi chal sakti...

Azam..haha chalo koi bat nahi bas thodi dur hi ek chai ka thela hai wahan se chai pikar fir wapas chalte hain..

Muskan...chai is waqt?? Na baba na..

Azam...chalo bhi mujhe pata hai tum zyada chai nahi piti bas ek bar try krne men kya harz hai. Agar pasand ayi to pi lena warna mat pina..

Muskan...hmm thik hai...



Fir o dono thodi der chalte huwe usi chai wale thele ke pas pohnchte huwe...wahan ek chota sa hotel type bana huwa tha naryal ke ped ke sukhe branches se bana huwa. Aas paas andhera tha sirf us chai ki thele ki light thi wahan aur 1-2 ghr aas paas the. Azam aur muskan wahan ponhchte hain. Us thele par ek do admi the. Azam jakar thele wale se do chai ka bol deta hai.

Thodi der baad o unko chai banakr de deta hai. Azam muskan ke hath chai thama deta hai pehle to muskan mana krti hai lekin azam ke kehne par fir o thodi pi leti hai aur surprisingly usko taste acha lagta hai.

Azam...maine bola tha na muskan...usdin bhi humne pi thi chai idr ki. Badi achi chai banata hai ye...

Muskan...thik hai baba aap jite bas haha...

Azam..hahaha...

Chai khatam krke dono fir wapas jane lagte hain. O dono ja hi rahe the koi unko chai ke thele se jate huwe dekh leta hai aur fir o thele wale se....

"Ek bidi dena"



To be continued...

[THE EVIL]

Part 08 posted!

[Fuckstar]

Bhai jese Hume dheere dheere seduce kar rahe ho na wese hi muskaan ko bhi dheere dheere seduce krna

[Raghu]

just awesome update! bahut bahut seductive writings!

[Afruza Sumi]

बिल्कुल दिमाग उड़ाने वाला अपडेट!आपका लेखन उत्कृष्ट और रोमांचक है। कहानी सही दिशा में जा रही है।

[Explorer@life]

Amazing update..
Waiting for new old man character to introduce..
Hope this story will reach amazing hights of popularity and love...
Amazing writing..
Very sensual and Erotic... waiting for another update...

[Sneha Sharma]

वाकई शानदार और रोमांचक अपडेट! बिल्कुल शानदार लिखा है।