[Nabonita Saha]

waiting

[THE EVIL]

Brilliant update. Amazing buildup.
Kaisay raghu muskaan se aur ghul milna aam kaarega, amazing.

bahut bahut shandaar update! bahut bahut nice build up,bahut khoob

ekdom rocking update! bahut hi mast story

Great update.

such mein ekdom super hit aur lajawab update!

chamatkar update! outstanding and top class writings! bahut acha,bahut khoob,hats off! yr):

bahut badhiya update!
bahut hi shandaar lilkha aapne,

wah!wah!bahut badhiya update,bahut hi jabardast kahaani,bahut bahut mast lajawab writings! bahot khoob

ekdum kamaal ka update

Awesome,amazing and outclass update!

Absolutely mind blowing update! You are really a classic writer. Hats off to you brother. clp); clp); clp);

superb! lajawab update! bahut hi shandaar kahaani hain ye,

Thanks guys, really appreciate it!

[THE EVIL]

बिल्कुल शानदार कहानी। बहुत ही रोचक और रोमांचक लेखन। कहानी सही दिशा में जा रही है।

behad hi shandaar update

ekdom mast aur lajawab story! bahut hi jabardast writing! lajawab narrations!

wah! mast aur lajawab update

To hot

kya ek lajawab aur mast kahaani shuro kia aapne yaar,bahut bahut shandaar aur jabardast

bahut bahut shandaar aur mast story starting.

Wonderful update

What a great story! Just thrilling writings!

woow! superb! awesome story

Absolutely wonderful and mind blowing story. Very much sexy,interesting and exciting writing. The build up of the story is just excellent.

Wonderful.....
Amazing.....

Jabardast aur lajawab kahaani

Fantastic update, very nice writing, wonderful story line. ❤️

Awesome update! Faddu aur jackass writings

What a fantastic update! Just mind blowing and marvelous writings! clp); clp); clp);

Awesome,amazing and beautiful update!

super excellent update

chamatkar update!bahut acha likha aapne bhai

bahut badhiya ek mast update

jabardast update

ekdom damadar update! bahut bahut shandaar aur dashu story!

Super excellent update, just awesome and stunning story ❤️

Thanks guys! much appreciated.

[THE EVIL]

bahut bahut mast aur lajawab update!

superb! lajawab aur dashing update

vah! mast aur bahut badhiya update!

ekdom super duper hit update! bahut khoob! yr):

Absolutely fantastic and marvelous update! Amazing writing style.

bahut bahut mast update! aap ka writings bahut bahut exciting aur interesting hota hain yaar.

Just awesome,top class and outstanding update!

ekdom faddu aur fataka update

Amazing story dear..
One of the best story in forum to look out for..
Waiting for another update..
Hopefully it will be big and with more pictures..

Great update

Amazing update

jabardast update dala aapne yaar

Fantastic update! Very very nice going!

Not only Raghu and Janki.....Sexy Muskan ke sath sabhi ko sex karwana ....Ramesh, Harish 5 o ke sath, koyi Khali hath na laute...tab jake  story fathaka interesting hoga.

Jabarast Update

ekdom lajawab aur faddu update! agla update ki liye intizar

ekdom kamaal ka kahaani shuro kia aapne yaar,bahut bahut mast aur acha likha aapne.

Thanks guys! Really appreciate it.

[THE EVIL]

bahut bahut shandaar aur mast kahaani,awesome and amazing writings! clp); clp); clp);

Ekdom mast aur lajawab start! bahut bahut acha theme.

ekdom lajawab uar chamatkar shuruaat

Just outclass story! Ashadaran,lajawab,mast aur bahut bahut shandar writing style.

ekdom mind blowing aur amazing story! lajawab,jabardast aur bahut acha likha aapne yaar,bahot khoob.

bahut hi mast aur lajawab story!

Fantastic story! Wonderful writing! Amazing build up!

Thanks guys! Really appreciate it.

[THE EVIL]

Part 05

Wahan se niklne ke bad raghu apne laude par mehsus huwe muskan ki gand ke ahsas ka soch raha tha. Jis ghar ka kam krne o aya tha o wahin ke malik ki jawan biwi ke sath flirt krne men laga huwa tha. Lekin use ye bhi pata tha bhale hi o thodi der pehle muskan ke paas double meaning batien krke aya tha lekin muskan hai badi tikhi mirchi agar use zara si bhi bhanak padi to anjam bura hoga.

Raghu ab wapas kam krne chala jata hai. Udr muskan apne bedroom men bed par leti huwi kuch soch rahi thi.

Muskan...anjane men huwa hoga zarur nahi to uski itni himmat kahan. Aur o hai bhi gawar pata nahi kaisi kaisi batien kar raha tha. Bolta hai ache achon ka pani nikal deta hun? Uske paas koi hatiyar hai aisa! Aur kya bol raha tha? haan, bolta hai jo o kar sakta hai o mere shohar nahi kar sakte! Kahan mere shohar aur kahan o! Hahaha zarur pagla gya hoga o.



Uske 7 bache hain!!! Bapree itne saree!!! Pata nahi uski biwi ne kaise ye sab...sochkar hi ajeeb lag raha hai...

Muskan bed par baithe baithe hi thodi der men wahin sojati hai. Dopehr men uski nind khulti hai fir o khana khakr bahar hall men baith jati hai. Lekin use wahan bore horha tha isliye o bahar ati hai to dekhte hi sab workers khana khane gaye huwe hain. Fir o kam ka progress dekhne ke liye upar jati hai. Muskan udr hi tehal rahi thi kam ko dekte huwe. Use takriban wahan 10 mint hochuke the ke. O tehlte huwe ek kamre men jati hai...

Tabhi wahan koi mazdur ata hai jo khane ke bad thoda rest krneke liye apna shirt nikalta hai. Muskan is bat se anjan thi ke wahan koi aya huwa hai. O mazdur wahin khada hokr bidi funkne lagta hai. Muskan tabhi us room se niklti hai to bahar use o shaks dikhta hai. Aur koi nahi raghu tha. Raghu ki pith muskan ke aur thi aur upr shirt nikalne ki waja se uske kale sharir par piche muskan ko uski pith par baal hi baal nazar ate hain. Aur uski pith par dhup men chalkr aneki waja se paseena aya huwa tha.

Muskan ko thodi ghin si ati hai use dekhkar. Baal aur pith par paseena. Muskan wahan se jane lagti hi hai ke raghu idr ghum jata hai aur o khud b surprise hota hai muskan ko dekhkar.

Raghu...arey memsabb aap!!

Muskan bhi ekdum ruk jati hai. Situation awkward thi kyunke o ek mazdur ke samne khadi thi jo bina shirt ke tha. Muskan ki nazar raghu par jati hai. Jaise uski pith par baal the waise hi uski chati par bhi balon ka gucha tha paseene men latpat o pura mazdur lag raha tha. Muskan ko aisa sab dekhne ki adat nahi thi. Uska shohar tehra decent sa office janewala admi o rehta tha saaf sutra.

Muskan..haa o main aise hi tehal rhi thi..

Raghu...oohhh achaa...

Muskan jane ke liye kadam badha hi rahi thi ke...

Raghu..memsabb o apnee mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya tabb...matlab maine bas yun hi pucha tha memsabbb...

Muskan...2 saall...

Raghu...oohh..waise memsab pata hai main to aur 4-5 bache paida kar leta lekin meri patni ne mana kar diya...

Muskan thodi hairani se sochti hai..."ye admi pagal hai kya 7 bache honeke bad bhi bol raha hai aur 5 bachon ke liye ready tha. Iski patni ko pata nahi kya kya jhelna pdta hoga..

Muskan...kyun 7 bache kafi nahi the...



Raghu...kafi to hain memsab lekin bache jab hosakte hain to kyun nahi...

Muskan...aur unko kaise palte??

Raghu...kar leta guzara memsab...

Muskan...hmm sahi hai...

Raghu...waise memsab aap mujheee...choro jane doo...

Muskan...main tumko kyaa???

Raghu...choriye memsabb rehne dijyee...

Muskan...batate ho ya...

Raghu...choriye memsab aap bura man jayingi...

Muskan...nahi bologe to zarur manungi...

Muskan curious thi ke akhir ye nata sa mazdur kya bolna chah raha hai. Raghu bhi muskan ko thoda frustrate kar raha tha. Lekin ab o dur se hi muskan ke ird gird ghum kar..

Raghu...memsab mujhe aap 'item' lagti ho...

Muskan...kya bak rahe ho!! Tumara dimag khrab hai main tumari complaint karungi azam ko...



Raghu..maine bola tha memsab aap bura man jawogi...

Muskan...haa tumne bat hi aisi ki hai..

Raghu...choriye memsab maine to bola bhi tha main nahi batana chahta lekin fir bhi apne mujse bulawaya...

Muskan...to tu muje is nazar se dekhte huwe sharm nahi ati tumko...maine agar apne shohar ko bata diya na to tumari khair nahi...

Raghu...memsab main ek bihari hun aur meri zuban aisi hi hai...humare men o kya bolte h khu khubbb khubsurt ko aise bolte hain...

Muskan...haa to item kya hota hai sida bolo...sida bhi kyun bolo tum yahan kam krne aye ho na ke tarif ya sher o shayri krne...

Raghu...haan memsab kam krne hi aya hun...mujhe shayri to nahi lekin aisi boht si chizen ati hai jisse koi bhi behaal hojaye...

Ye baat o muskan ko upar se niche tak dekhte huwe bolta hai...

Muskan...dekho tumn jo bhi tumara naam hai duabara o lafz mere samne nahi bologe...

Raghu...jaise apki marzi memsab waise mera naam raghu hai...

Muskan..haa haan thik hai...

Itna bolkr o jane lagti hai seediya utar kar. Raghu muskan ki gand utrne ki waja se idr udr swing hote huwe dekh apna lauda pant ke upr se maslte huwe dhire se "item to tu hai, tere jism ki har chiz lutne layak hai. Chehre se lekr paun tak."



Ankhon so ojhal honeke bad raghu rest krne baith jata hai udr muskan apne ghar ati hai aur sida bedroom chali jati hai.

Muskan...pagal kahin ka awara hi hai o jo mujhe item bol raha tha.

Muskan jo is waqt mirror ke samne khadi thi aise bolte huwe khud ko hi nihare jarhi thi anjane men. Usko aajtak kisi ne aise item word se nahi pukara tha. O ek shareef khandan se belong krti thi aur jab padhayi bhi kar rahi thi tab bhi aisa koi incident nahi huwa tha.

Muskan fir jakar bed par rest krti hai. Uske baad pura din usual kam chalta hai. Mazdur rat men kam krke chale jate hain. Muskan rat men apne shohar se bat krti hai lekin raghu wali bat nahi batati for some reason. Ya fir hosakta hai zehan se nikal gaya ho. Agla din bhi yun hi guzar jata hai. Uske agle din azam anewala tha.

Subha mazdur kam krne ajate hain. Muskan nashta sab krke shower sab lekr hall men baithi tv dekh rahi thi tabhi bell bajti hai. Jakr door kholne par samne janki khadi thi.

Muskan..arey awo janki kuch chahiye tha..

Janki...ha o memsab main kal to pata hai apko chutti hai kam ki to aaj socha thoda pehle hi kam kar lun...

Muskan...areg koi bat nahi janki bad men ajawo kal ke din ke bhi paise mil jayenge tumko...

Janki...dhanyawad memsab apka..main badme ati hun...

Muskan...thik hai...

Sham men muskan apni scooty nikal kar janeka sochti hai kahin bore dur krne ke liye o scooty nikal hi rahi thi ke use gate ke bahar car ke horn ki awaz ati hai. Muskan wahan jati hai to car se uska shohar azam niklta hai jise dekh o khush hojati hai.

Muskan..aagye aap...

Azam...haa meri jaan agya & guess what mere sath koi hai...

Muskan...kon???

Tabhi o dekhti hai ke car ke pichli seat se ek admi utrta hai jise dekh..

Muskan....asif jiju!!!

Asif car se smile krta huwa niklta hai. Aur tabhi dusre door se koi niklta hai jise dekh muskan ki khushi dugni hojati hai.

Muskan..shama!!!



Muskan aur shama gale lagte hain tightly. Dono boht khush lag rahe the ekdusre ko dekh kar. Asif aur azam ek sath khade the.

Muskan..shama kaisi hai tu?? shadi ke bad aaj dekh rahi hun tujhe...na koi call na koi msg...tujhe pata hai maine kitna try kiya tumse rabta krneki...

Shama....bilkuk thik hun tu bata aur mujhe pata hai yaar...main asal men city men thi bhi nahi na...wahan se hum log gaun men move hochuke hain uske bad to time hi nahi mila...

Muskan...main bhi thik hun aur gaun men!! Kya bt hai...shama jaisi city girl wahan kaise adjust hogyi hahaha??

Shama...hahaha hona pada lekin sachme jo maza gaun ki zindagi men hai na city men nahi hai...

Muskan...hmm chal andr chalte hain...jiju thik ho naa..

Asif...haa main bhi thik hun...

Sab andr jane lagte hain. Tab car ke andr baithe huwe driver ke pas asif jata hai...

Asif...ganesh chacha car udr park krdo road ke side aur andr ajawo..

Ganesh...thik hai sahab...

Asif fir andr chala jata hai. Andr sab sofe par baithkr batien kar rahe the. Janki ko muskan ne bula liya tha aur o chai bana rahi thi.

Muskan...shama lekin tum jiju inhe kahan mile...

Shama...o kya hai na hum log kuch kam se city men aye the to ek jaga azam jiju khade the taxi ke liye to hum sath chale aye...

Muskan..hmm aur bata kaisi chal rahi hai life...

Shama...life to achi chal rahi hai tu bata...

Muskan...mast...acha ab ayi hai to 1-2 hafte yahin ruk jaa...

Shama...2-3 hafte hahahha....

Muskan...haa kyun nahi...

Shama...nahi baba hum aye bhi the urgent hum aaj hi nikal jayenge...

Muskan...kya aaj hi!!! Jiju samjawo na shama ko...

Asif...muskan sahi bol rahi hai shama hum log aye the kisi zaruri kam se...humen jana hoga...

Muskan...arey aap dono itne jaldbazi men kyun ho...aap boliye na kuch...

Azam...arey baba main yahi dono ko batate arha hun lekin dono man hi nahi rahe...

Muskan...shama ye kya bat huwi kam se kam ek din to ruk...



Shama...hahaha chal thik hai lekin bas aaj raat ok..

Muskan...thik hai...

Aise hi sab batien krte rehte hain. Bahar kam jari tha. Rat men sab khana khate hain. Mazdur kam krke nikal jate hain. Aur kal waise chutti thi unko. Raat men khane ke bad shama aur muskan batien kar rahi thi aur azam, asif bahar tehlne gaye huwe the.

Thodi der baad muskan apne bedroom thodi der ke liye jati hai. Aur takriban 10 minute bad jab o bahar ati hai to shama use hall men nahi milti...tabhi use bathroom ki light on milti hai...

Muskan..shamaaa tu andr hai kya...

Shama...ummm haa hhh haann maainn slurrrpp mmmhh ahh andrrr hunn....

Muskan ko shama ka jawab thoda ajeeb lagta hai. Kyunke uski sans ukhdi ukhdi si lag rahi thi aur kuch ajeeb si awaz arhi thi.

Muskan...shama tu thik to hai naa??

Shama...slluurrpp hhhaaahh haa musskaan mainn slurrpp slurrp thik hun...

Muskan ko ajeeb to lagta hai lekin fir o uspr zyada na sochte huwe jakr sofe par baith jati hai. 5 minute bad shama washroom se niklti hai. Muskan dekhti hai ke shama ki lipstick thodi bhikri huwi hai aur thoda paseena bhi aya tha use.



Muskan..kya huwa shama tabiyat khrab to nahi huwi teri??

Shama...arey yaar aisi koi bat nahi hai...

Muskan bhi us baat ko ignore kar deti hai. Udr azam aur asif tehlne jakar wapas ane lage the. Isi bich muskan aur shama sofe par baithi batien kar rahi thi tabhi washroom ka door khulta hai usme se ganesh niklta hai. Muskan ki nazar wahan jati hai. O dekhti hai ganesh ke shirt ka ek button khula huwa tha aur use bhi thoda paseena aya huwa tha. Lekin usse bhi badi baat muskan ne to is admi ko washroom jate huwe nahi dekha. Shama ke bahar aneke bad akhir kab o andr gaya tha??!

To be continued...

[THE EVIL]

Part 05 posted!

[Nabonita Saha]

aap such mein ek classic writer hain yaar, bahut bahut mast aur lajawab update dala aapne,bahut khoob

[Afruza Sumi]

ekdom jackass update! Like aur repu added yaar.

[Nobita]

What an amazing update.....itna awesome twist mene kbhi ni socha tha.....evil Bhai ka sex story verse h ye toh ?????...shama or ganesh chacha ki entry iss story...gajab....

[Nobita]

After this update.....I'm really excited for next update....Bht maza aane wala h

[Archana Gupta]

chamatkar,lajawab,mast aur bahut bahut acha update!

[Mousumi]

bahut bahut shandaar update!excellent and super exciting writings! clp); clp); clp);

[Blueman]

Just wonderful and absolutely fantastic update

[BIWI NO.1]

superb! mast update! lajawab aur jabardast story

[Bebo.]

lajawab update! ekdom mazadar aur exciitng story writings!

[BhaiyakaLadli]

jabardast update! lajawab aur terrific update

[Black Mamba]

Outstanding and outclass update

[Gangua]

ekdom ashadaran aur blockbuster update

[Purnima Sen]

jabardast update! faddu kahaani,bahut hi shandaar likha